Period 5 Writing
写作一 应用文写作——健康报告书
本单元的写作任务是写健康报告书，属于记叙文。
1．首段常用句式
In the past，I worried about/was worried about...在过去，我担心……
I used to do/be...
我过去常做/是……
Recently I have been concerned about...
最近我担心……
What bothered me was that...
让我困扰的是……
2．中段常用句式
I read an article that told me that...
我读了一篇文章，告诉我……
I saw a programme that showed...
我看了一个节目，节目里……
A doctor recommended that...(should)．..
医生建议……(应该)……
Instead of doing...，I would do...
而不是做……，我会……
I tried to do the following things.
我试着做以下事情。
I took part in...我参加……
Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.
我不再拒绝我喜欢的食物，而是在我的膳食中加入了健康食品。
3．尾段常用句式
Finally，I stopped comparing myself with...
最后，我不再拿自己和……比较。
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
通过积极地看待自己和自己的身体，我变得比以前更快乐、更自信。
At present，not only am I healthier than before，but I also become happier.
现在，我不仅比以前更健康了，而且变得更快乐了。
Thanks to my effort，I...
由于我的努力，我……
I am more than happy to see the improvements in...
我非常高兴看到……方面的进步。
Being physically and mentally healthy is of great importance to...
身心健康对……非常重要。
假如你叫Linda，过去一直因为身体瘦弱、经常生病而苦恼。后来朋友建议你跟她一起参加健身俱乐部，每天适量锻炼并持之以恒。在俱乐部其他成员的鼓励下，你现在不仅身体健康了，而且更加活泼开朗了。请根据以上信息写一份健康报告书。
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (单元写作词汇运用)
1．瘦的，纤细的slim
2．健壮healthy and strong
3．参加俱乐部join a club
4．与……相比较compared with/to
5．而不是rather than
6．有影响make a difference
7．苦恼的annoyed
8．均衡的饮食a balanced diet
9．适量运动take a proper amount of exercise
10．增强体质build up strength
11．停止做(或使用、食用) cut out
连词成句 (教材句式仿写)
1．我过去很瘦并且经常生病，我对此很苦恼。
I used to be very slim and often fell ill and it made me annoyed.
2．我的一个朋友建议我参加一个健身俱乐部。(recommend sb to do...)
One of my friends recommended me to join a health club.
3．在这个俱乐部里，我每天坚持做适量的锻炼。
In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.
4．与过去相比，我戒掉了曾经喜欢吃的垃圾食品，饮食更加均衡。
Compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.
5．我的汗水起了很大作用。
My sweat made a great difference.
6．现在我经常去健身房而不是去医院。
Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.
7．经常锻炼身体极大地增强了我的体质。
Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
第三步 句式升级
1．用定语从句升级句1。
I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
2．用含虚拟语气的宾语从句升级句2。
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
I am Linda.I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.In addition，compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.My sweat made a great difference.Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
写一篇短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的，内容包括：
1．以前无法平衡学习和休息；
2．现在已经做到二者平衡。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考范文
Two years ago，I couldn’t balance my study and rest.I used to be busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3 weeks.
After I recovered from illness，I began to think about my problems.I got to realise the importance of balancing study and rest.Instead of doing my homework all day，I would go to play basketball for an hour a day.
Finally，by balancing rest and study，I became quite healthy.I didn’t fall behind；instead，I studied better than before.
写作二 读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——如何根据两段首句构建续写情节框架
阅读文本材料之后，以故事的发展逻辑为基础，以“两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”为支架，构建两个段落的情节发展。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 determination n．决心；决定→determine v．测定；决定；确定 fall apart破裂；破碎；崩溃 lose heart丧失信心；泄气 give up放弃；投降 positive adj.积极的；乐观的
动作描写 track vt.& vi.追踪；跟踪 work out锻炼；计算出；解决 sweat vt.使出汗；出汗弄湿 vi.出汗；流汗 n．汗水；出汗 make it获得成功；准时到达
句型 1.As a player，Lang Ping brought honour and glory to her country.As a coach，she led the China women’s volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics.As a person，Lang Ping is loved by fans at home and abroad.(排比) 2．Losing two important players was a big challenge，but Lang Ping did not lose heart.(情感描写) 3．When Michael Jordan’s feet left the ground，time seemed to stand still.(夸张) 4．The player who became known as “Air Jordan” changed basketball with his graceful moves and jumps.(比喻) 5．I almost went bananas，too.(比喻) 6．By being positive about myself and my body，I became both healthier and happier.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
当看到一只兔子的时候，我和爸爸决定追它。它跑得那么快以致它消失在树林中。直到那时，我们才意识到最后一抹霞光正快速消失在树丛中。在陌生的树林里迷路了，我吓得一身冷汗，几乎要崩溃了。我声音颤抖地说道：“爸爸，我们怎样才能解决这个困境呢？”爸爸喃喃地说：“不要灰心！不要放弃！我们会成功到达农舍的！”
When seeing a rabbit，Dad and I 1.determined to track it.So swiftly did it run that it disappeared in the forest.It was not until then that we realized that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the trees.Lost in the unfamiliar forest，I 2.was in cold sweat from extreme horror and I nearly 3.fell apart.I said in a trembling voice，“Dad,4.how can we work out the dilemma？” Dad murmured，“Don’t 5.lose heart！Don’t 6.give up！We will 7.make it to the farmhouse！”(共28张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Sports and fitness
Unit 3
内容索引
写作一 应用文写作——健康报告书
写作二 读后续写微技能
写作一 应用文写作——健康报告书
本单元的写作任务是写健康报告书，属于记叙文。
常用表达
1.首段常用句式
In the past，I worried about/was worried about...在过去，我担心……
I used to do/be...
我过去常做/是……
Recently I have been concerned about...
最近我担心……
What bothered me was that...
让我困扰的是……
2.中段常用句式
I read an article that told me that...
我读了一篇文章，告诉我……
I saw a programme that showed...
我看了一个节目，节目里……
A doctor recommended that...(should)...
医生建议……(应该)……
Instead of doing...，I would do...
而不是做……，我会……
I tried to do the following things.
我试着做以下事情。
I took part in...我参加……
Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.
我不再拒绝我喜欢的食物，而是在我的膳食中加入了健康食品。
3.尾段常用句式
Finally，I stopped comparing myself with...
最后，我不再拿自己和……比较。
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
通过积极地看待自己和自己的身体，我变得比以前更快乐、更自信。
At present，not only am I healthier than before，but I also become happier.
现在，我不仅比以前更健康了，而且变得更快乐了。
Thanks to my effort，I...
由于我的努力，我……
I am more than happy to see the improvements in...
我非常高兴看到……方面的进步。
Being physically and mentally healthy is of great importance to...
身心健康对……非常重要。
假如你叫Linda，过去一直因为身体瘦弱、经常生病而苦恼。后来朋友建议你跟她一起参加健身俱乐部，每天适量锻炼并持之以恒。在俱乐部其他成员的鼓励下，你现在不仅身体健康了，而且更加活泼开朗了。请根据以上信息写一份健康报告书。
典例演练
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇(单元写作词汇运用)
1.瘦的，纤细的
2.健壮
3.参加俱乐部
4.与……相比较
5.而不是
6.有影响
______
__________________
___________
_________________
____________
_________________
slim
healthy and strong
join a club
compared with/to
rather than
make a difference
7.苦恼的
8.均衡的饮食
9.适量运动
10.增强体质
11.停止做(或使用、食用)
__________
_______________
______________________________
_________________
________
annoyed
a balanced diet
take a proper amount of exercise
build up strength
cut out
1.我过去很瘦并且经常生病，我对此很苦恼。
and it made me annoyed.
2.我的一个朋友建议我参加一个健身俱乐部。(recommend sb to do...)
_______________________________________________________________
3.在这个俱乐部里，我每天坚持做适量的锻炼。
_______________________________________________________________
I used to be very slim and often fell ill
One of my friends recommended me to join a health club.
连词成句(教材句式仿写)
In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.
4.与过去相比，我戒掉了曾经喜欢吃的垃圾食品，饮食更加均衡。
，I____________________________________
.
5.我的汗水起了很大作用。
_______________________________________________________________
6.现在我经常去健身房而不是去医院。
，I go to the gym regularly now.
7.经常锻炼身体极大地增强了我的体质。
has built up my strength greatly.
Compared with the past
cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and
have a more balanced diet
My sweat made a great difference.
Rather than going to hospital
Working out regularly
1.用定语从句升级句1。
_______________________________________________________________
2.用含虚拟语气的宾语从句升级句2。
_______________________________________________________________
I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
第三步 句式升级
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
I am Linda.I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.In addition，compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.My sweat made a great difference.Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
写一篇短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的，内容包括：
1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；
2.现在已经做到二者平衡。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
达标检测
参考范文
Two years ago，I couldn’t balance my study and rest.I used to be busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3 weeks.
After I recovered from illness，I began to think about my problems.I got to realise the importance of balancing study and rest.Instead of doing my homework all day，I would go to play basketball for an hour a day.
Finally，by balancing rest and study，I became quite healthy.I didn’t fall behind；instead，I studied better than before.
返 回
写作二 读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——如何根据两段首句构建续写情节框架
阅读文本材料之后，以故事的发展逻辑为基础，以“两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”为支架，构建两个段落的情节发展。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 determination n.决心；决定→determine v.测定；决定；确定 fall apart破裂；破碎；崩溃 lose heart丧失信心；泄气 give up放弃；投降 positive adj.积极的；乐观的
动作描写 track vt.& vi.追踪；跟踪 work out锻炼；计算出；解决 sweat vt.使出汗；出汗弄湿 vi.出汗；流汗 n.汗水；出汗 make it获得成功；准时到达
句型 1.As a player，Lang Ping brought honour and glory to her country.As a coach，she led the China women’s volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics.As a person，Lang Ping is loved by fans at home and abroad.(排比)
2.Losing two important players was a big challenge，but Lang Ping did not lose heart.(情感描写)
3.When Michael Jordan’s feet left the ground，time seemed to stand still.(夸张)
句 型 4.The player who became known as “Air Jordan” changed basketball with his graceful moves and jumps.(比喻)
5.I almost went bananas，too.(比喻)
6.By being positive about myself and my body，I became both healthier and happier.(情感描写)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
当看到一只兔子的时候，我和爸爸决定追它。它跑得那么快以致它消失在树林中。在陌生的树林里迷路了，我吓得一身冷汗，几乎要崩溃了。
When seeing a rabbit，Dad and I 1. it.So swiftly did it run that it disappeared in the forest.It was not until then that we realized that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the trees.
determined to track
在陌生的树林里迷路了，我吓得一身冷汗，几乎要崩溃了。我声音颤抖地说道：“爸爸，我们怎样才能解决这个困境呢？”爸爸喃喃地说：“不要灰心！不要放弃！我们会成功到达农舍的！”
Lost in the unfamiliar forest，I 2. from extreme horror and I nearly 3. .I said in a trembling voice，“Dad,4._________
？” Dad murmured，“Don’t 5. ！Don’t 6. ！We will 7. ！”
was in cold sweat
fell apart
how can
we work out the dilemma
lose heart
give up
make it to the farmhouse
返 回
本课结束
