Period 5 Writing
写作一 应用文写作——博客
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于语言学习的博客。 写此类博客时，可以就自己学习语言时遇到的困难提出问题，也可以回复他人的博客，提出自己的建议来帮助他人解决问题。
1．首段常用句式
My name is...I’m writing the blog to offer you some practical suggestions.我叫……，我写这个博客来给你提供一些实用的建议。
I’m writing a blog to do you a favour.
我写这个博客来帮助你。
I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty speaking fluent English.
听说你在说流利的英语方面遇到了问题，我非常遗憾。
You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to provide some suggestions.
你曾向我寻求有关……的建议，我将尽力提供一些建议。
Learning that you have some difficulty with...，I am willing to help you out of difficulty.
得知你在……方面有困难，我乐意帮助你摆脱困境。
2．中段常用句式
Firstly/To start with/To begin with，you’d better...首先，你最好……
Besides/Furthermore/What’s more，why not...？另外，何不……？
Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you could...
最后但同样重要的是，如果你能……，这会是个好主意。
I strongly suggest that you (should)．..
我强烈建议你……
Learning a language is a gradual process—it does not happen overnight.
学习一门语言是一个循序渐进的过程，不可能一蹴而就。
If you often practice giving speeches in English，you will get your oral English improved.
如果你经常练习用英语做演讲，你就会提高你的英语口语。
The Internet is the most exciting，unlimited English resource and it is right at your fingertips.网络是最令人兴奋且不受限制的英语学习资源，一切都触手可及。
3．尾段常用句式
I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想让你介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for help.
面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。
In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to...so that...Also，I would like you to...
同时，我恳求你……以便……我也想让你……
I have met with many difficulties in learning English.在学习英语的过程中我遇到了许多困难。
I wonder if/whether you could do me a favour...我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙……
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions.
如果你能给我一些实用的建议，我将不胜感激。
在英语学习的博客上，Li Rui说进入高中后感觉有许多要背的单词，但是不知道怎样记单词。请你写一篇博客，给她提供一些记忆英语单词方面的建议。
要点：1.要学会读单词，而不是只会拼写；要学会背短语、造句子，单词在语境中才会记得更牢；尽量多读英文文章。
2．你的问题，并寻求建议。
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (单元写作词汇运用)
1．给某人提供一些建议 offer sb some advice
2．观点 point of view
3．另外 in addition
4．而不是instead of
5．扩大某人的词汇量 enlarge one’s vocabulary
6．造句 make up sentences
7．语境 context
8．感激 appreciate
9．各种各样的 various/a variety of/varieties of
10．以……为基础 be based on/upon
连词成句 (教材句式仿写)
1．基于我自己的经验，我将为你提供一些有关如何记单词的建议。
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
2．在我看来，你不应该只会拼写英语单词，你必须先学会读单词。
From my point of view，you shouldn’t only be able to spell English words；you must learn to read them first.
3．你最好多记短语、多造句，因为在语境中学单词会更好。
You’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.
4．阅读各种英文文章对扩大你的词汇量也很重要。
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also greatly important for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
5．我的问题是我写不好作文。如果有人能给我一些好的建议，我将感激不尽。
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
第三步 句式升级
1．使用instead of改写句2。
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.
2．用“be＋of＋n.”改写句4。
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.In addition，you’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.Furthermore，reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.Do remember to take notes when you meet with some unknown words.
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
在英语学习的博客上，请你以“How to Improve Oral English”为题写一篇英语博文，谈谈怎样才能提高英语口语，并就自己的问题“如何提高书面英语”寻求帮助。
参考范文
How to Improve Oral English
Learning that many students have difficulty with oral English，I am willing to offer some practical suggestions.
To begin with，you’d better practise speaking English every day.Besides，watching English movies is of great use for improving your spoken English and broadening your horizons.Last but not least，you shouldn’t be afraid of speaking English in front of others or making mistakes.Only in this way can you make great progress in English.
My biggest problem is written English.I would appreciate it if someone could offer me some practical suggestions.
写作二 读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——如何利用“五所”写续写中间过渡句
精巧构思完续写两段的衔接句和主题升华句后，还要有效填充两段的过渡句。过渡句犹如桥梁，连接着续写内容的各个部分，使行文流畅自然、逻辑严谨清晰，使读者毫无违和感地跟随作者的笔触进入新的情境。此处可借助“五所”，即所见(环境描写/人物描写/神态描写)、所闻(语言描写)、所说(语言描写)、所思(心理描写)、所做(动作描写)，让续写内容层次分明、浑然一体，为续写内容增色添彩。以上描写手法在后面的语料积累中将陆续给予讲解。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 appreciate vt.欣赏；感激；领会 description n．描写(文字)；形容→describe vt.描述 beyond description难以描述
动作描写 beg vt.恳求；祈求；哀求 regard vt.把……视为；看待 struggle n．& vi.斗争；奋斗；搏斗 refer to指的是；描述；提到；查阅
句型 1.One language sets you in a corridor for life.Two languages open every door along the way.(主旨升华) 2．I used to get high marks in English，but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening.(对比) 3．My biggest headache is how to be polite in English.(比喻) 4．If I’m talking to a close friend，I can...But if I’m talking to someone...，I must...If I’m talking to someone senior to me，then I should say...(排比)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
Mac正沿着山路骑自行车，这时他看到一只狼张着血盆大口追赶他。他的恐惧无以言表。他乞求路过的司机帮助他，但是徒劳无果。因此，他毫不犹豫地从自行车上下来，抓住自行车，用尽全力把自行车扔向狼，尽力把狼吓走。他正要成为狼的盘中餐时，他的朋友们赶到救下了他。当他提起这件恐怖的事情时，他仍然感到毛骨悚然。
Mac was pedalling along the mountain road when he saw a wolf running after him，which opened its bloody mouth.His fear was 1.beyond description.He 2.begged passing drivers to help him，but in vain.So he got off his bike without hesitation，seized it and threw it at the wolf with all his strength，3.struggling to frighten the wolf away.He was about to become the food of the wolf when his friends arrived and rescued him.When he 4.referred to the frightening thing，he still felt as if his hair had stood on end.(共28张PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Languages around the world
Unit 5
内容索引
写作一 应用文写作——博客
写作二 读后续写微技能
写作一 应用文写作——博客
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于语言学习的博客。写此类博客时，可以就自己学习语言时遇到的困难提出问题，也可以回复他人的博客，提出自己的建议来帮助他人解决问题。
1.首段常用句式
My name is...I’m writing the blog to offer you some practical suggestions.我叫……，我写这个博客来给你提供一些实用的建议。
I’m writing a blog to do you a favour.
我写这个博客来帮助你。
I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty speaking fluent English.
听说你在说流利的英语方面遇到了问题，我非常遗憾。
常用表达
You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to provide some suggestions.
你曾向我寻求有关……的建议，我将尽力提供一些建议。
Learning that you have some difficulty with...，I am willing to help you out of difficulty.
得知你在……方面有困难，我乐意帮助你摆脱困境。
2.中段常用句式
Firstly/To start with/To begin with，you’d better...首先，你最好……
Besides/Furthermore/What’s more，why not...？另外，何不……？
Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you could...
最后但同样重要的是，如果你能……，这会是个好主意。
I strongly suggest that you (should)...
我强烈建议你……
Learning a language is a gradual process—it does not happen overnight.
学习一门语言是一个循序渐进的过程，不可能一蹴而就。
If you often practice giving speeches in English，you will get your oral English improved.
如果你经常练习用英语做演讲，你就会提高你的英语口语。
The Internet is the most exciting，unlimited English resource and it is right at your fingertips.
网络是最令人兴奋且不受限制的英语学习资源，一切都触手可及。
3.尾段常用句式
I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想让你介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for help.
面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。
In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to...so that...Also，I would like you to...同时，我恳求你……以便……我也想让你……
I have met with many difficulties in learning English.
在学习英语的过程中我遇到了许多困难。
I wonder if/whether you could do me a favour...
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙……
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions.
如果你能给我一些实用的建议，我将不胜感激。
在英语学习的博客上，Li Rui说进入高中后感觉有许多要背的单词，但是不知道怎样记单词。请你写一篇博客，给她提供一些记忆英语单词方面的建议。
要点：1.要学会读单词，而不是只会拼写；要学会背短语、造句子，单词在语境中才会记得更牢；尽量多读英文文章。
2.你的问题，并寻求建议。
典例演练
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇(单元写作词汇运用)
1.给某人提供一些建议
2.观点
3.另外
4.而不是
5.扩大某人的词汇量
6.造句
____________________
_____________
___________
___________
________________________
___________________
offer sb some advice
point of view
in addition
instead of
enlarge one’s vocabulary
make up sentences
7.语境
8.感激
9.各种各样的
10.以……为基础
_________
____________
_____________________________
__________________
context
appreciate
various/a variety of/varieties of
be based on/upon
1.基于我自己的经验，我将为你提供一些有关如何记单词的建议。
，I will _________________________
.
2.在我看来，你不应该只会拼写英语单词，你必须先学会读单词。
，you shouldn’t only be able to spell English words；you must learn to read them first.
Based on/upon my own experience
offer you some advice on
连词成句(教材句式仿写)
how to remember words
From my point of view
3.你最好多记短语、多造句，因为在语境中学单词会更好。
You’d better ___________________________________________________
because it’s better to .
4.阅读各种英文文章对扩大你的词汇量也很重要。
is also greatly important for you .
5.我的问题是我写不好作文。如果有人能给我一些好的建议，我将感激不尽。
My problem is ____________________ I ____________________________
.
remember more phrases and make up more sentences
learn words in context
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles
to enlarge your vocabulary
that I can’t write well.
would appreciate it if someone
could provide me with some good tips
1.使用instead of改写句2。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.用“be＋of＋n.”改写句4。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.
第三步 句式升级
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.In addition，you’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.Furthermore，reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.Do remember to take notes when you meet with some unknown words.
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
在英语学习的博客上，请你以“How to Improve Oral English”为题写一篇英语博文，谈谈怎样才能提高英语口语，并就自己的问题“如何提高书面英语”寻求帮助。
达标检测
参考范文
How to Improve Oral English
Learning that many students have difficulty with oral English，I am willing to offer some practical suggestions.
To begin with，you’d better practise speaking English every day.Besides，watching English movies is of great use for improving your spoken English and broadening your horizons.Last but not least，you shouldn’t be afraid of speaking English in front of others or making mistakes.Only in this way can you make great progress in English.
My biggest problem is written English.I would appreciate it if someone could offer me some practical suggestions.
返 回
写作二 读后续写微技能
Ⅰ.续写技法指导——如何利用“五所”写续写中间过渡句
精巧构思完续写两段的衔接句和主题升华句后，还要有效填充两段的过渡句。过渡句犹如桥梁，连接着续写内容的各个部分，使行文流畅自然、逻辑严谨清晰，使读者毫无违和感地跟随作者的笔触进入新的情境。此处可借助“五所”，即所见(环境描写/人物描写/神态描写)、所闻(语言描写)、所说(语言描写)、所思(心理描写)、所做(动作描写)，让续写内容层次分明、浑然一体，为续写内容增色添彩。以上描写手法在后面的语料积累中将陆续给予讲解。
Ⅱ.教材语料积累
词汇 情感描写 appreciate vt.欣赏；感激；领会 description n.描写(文字)；形容→describe vt.描述 beyond description难以描述
动作描写 beg vt.恳求；祈求；哀求 regard vt.把……视为；看待 struggle n.& vi.斗争；奋斗；搏斗 refer to指的是；描述；提到；查阅
句型 1.One language sets you in a corridor for life.Two languages open every door along the way.(主旨升华)
2.I used to get high marks in English，but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening.(对比)
3.My biggest headache is how to be polite in English.(比喻)
4.If I’m talking to a close friend，I can...But if I’m talking to someone...，I must...If I’m talking to someone senior to me，then I should say...(排比)
续写语料运用
请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段。然后核对答案并背诵该语段。
Mac正沿着山路骑自行车，这时他看到一只狼张着血盆大口追赶他。他的恐惧无以言表。他乞求路过的司机帮助他，但是徒劳无果。因此，他毫不犹豫地从自行车上下来，
Mac was pedalling along the mountain road when he saw a wolf running after him，which opened its bloody mouth.His fear was 1._________
.He 2. help him，but in vain.So he got off his bike without hesitation，
beyond
description
begged passing drivers to
抓住自行车，用尽全力把自行车扔向狼，尽力把狼吓走。他正要成为狼的盘中餐时，他的朋友们赶到救下了他。当他提起这件恐怖的事情时，他仍然感到毛骨悚然。
seized it and threw it at the wolf with all his strength，3.______________
.He was about to become the food of the wolf when his friends arrived and rescued him.When he 4._________________
，he still felt as if his hair had stood on end.
struggling to
frighten the wolf away
referred to the
frightening thing
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本课结束
