Section Ⅵ Writing——电子邮件
[语料积累]
1.首段:开门见山,说明写信的目的
①I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit.
很高兴得知你将来中国游览。
②I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在美国时你对我的帮助。
③I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
2.主体:详细介绍邮件内容
①To be honest, the campus of my new school is the most beautiful one that I have ever stayed.
说实话,我的新学校的校园是我待过的最漂亮的一个。
② I recommend this club to you for the following reasons.
我向您推荐这家俱乐部的原因如下。
③First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art.
首先,京剧是中国传统艺术中的一颗明珠。
④Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups.
此外,俱乐部还将定期组织各种活动,比如邀请著名演员表演,以及绘制京剧妆容等。
3.尾段:结尾并祝福
①I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
期待您的回信。
②I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
③I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,刚上高中两周多,请你按照以下内容给你的英国笔友Tom发一封电子邮件,简单介绍你的学校、老师和自己的情况:
1.我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校,有50个班,2 500多名学生;
2.老师对我们很友好,教学方法与初中截然不同,上课方式很有趣;
3.课程比初中更有挑战性,但有信心学好;
4.与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
第一段:点出写信目的:介绍自己学校的情况;
第二段:具体介绍新学校、老师和自己的情况;
第三段:表达希望。
2.要点翻译
①我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校。
My new school is famous and has a long history.
②它是我们的初中学校的三倍大。
It is three times bigger than our junior secondary school.
③我的学校有50个班和2 500多名学生。
There are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.
④我们老师的教学方法很有趣,与我们以前老师的教学方法截然不同。
Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous teachers.
⑤虽然我们学的课程更有挑战性,但我有信心学好它们。
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm sure that I can learn them well.
⑥我与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities.
3.词句升级
(1)用非限制性定语从句升级句①和句②
My new school,which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.
(2)用confident升级句⑤
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm confident that I can learn them well.
(3)用various升级句⑥
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
My new school, which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.Besides,there are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous teachers.Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging, I'm confident that I can learn them well.In addition,I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[随堂演练]
假设你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter十分关心你,写信询问你是否适应了高中生活。请你根据以下提示,用英语回一封电子邮件,内容如下:
1.简述高中校园生活;
2.与同学相处情况;
3.英语学习情况。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
I am quite used to the life here, for it is so colorful.There are various after-class activities and clubs, which can help me learn and relax.Besides, my classmates are so friendly that I can get along well with them.Personally,English in senior high school is more challenging, but I've been making progress with my English teacher's help.I believe I can learn it well if I keep working hard.
In a word, I enjoy my life in my new school.How about you I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
(2025·菏泽市高一上月考)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Bill发来邮件关心你的学校生活。请给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你对新高中学校的印象;
2.你在高中的学习情况;
3.询问他的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,不能出现个人信息;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
My new high school is vast and beautiful with amazing teaching buildings and modern facilities.It's a place that creates a good learning environment.
As for my study, I had trouble catching up with others at first.But I soon overcame my problem with the help of my teachers, who are knowledgeable and patient.And I even join a study group, in which all of us support and learn from each other.
I'm determined to enjoy my academic years here, so I'd love to hear your advice on how to manage time and how to study efficiently.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微续写(满分25分)
(2025·淄博市高一上期中)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights! So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (装饰).Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.
注意:续写词数应为100个左右。
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision.
【前文批注】
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.(全文的主要矛盾,也是暗线,为后面的圣诞树做铺垫)
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”(文章要解决的主要问题,也是明线——放一棵圣诞树)
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.(找圣诞树)
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.(无法将其运回家) Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.(步行将圣诞树扛回家) We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.[一位好心的邻居(我们的第一位朋友)主动帮忙把圣诞树送回家]
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights!(需要解决的另一个问题——圣诞灯) So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.[店主(我们的第二个朋友)好心地告诉我们圣诞树需要彩色的灯]
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (装饰).(圣诞树还缺少装饰物——又一个需要解决的问题) Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.(为下文寻找装饰物以及第三个朋友埋下伏笔)
【原文解读】
New in Chicago,we felt alone.→Our eight-year-old daughter advised me to put up a Christmas tree.→We finally selected our tree but can't deliver it home.→A gentleman offered to help us.(We met out first friend)→We needed Christmas lights!→The kind storekeeper gave us advice.(We met our second friend)→We needed ornaments.→One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree...→(根据原文续写首句,续写中要解决的问题是如何找到装饰物以及第三个朋友。)
【思路形成】
看到女士正在清除人行道上的积雪→前去帮忙→给予装饰物→表达感谢→圣诞树圆满完成→感悟
【单句续写】
1.我走过去,主动提出要帮忙。
I walked over and offered to help.
2.当我们工作时,我提到了我们的圣诞树,以及我多么欣赏她的装饰品。
As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.
3.她热情地微笑着邀请我到她家。
She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.
4.令我惊讶的是,她有一个盒子,里面装满了她不再使用的装饰品。
To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.
5.她微笑着递给我,说:“拿着。我希望它们能让你的树和我的一样漂亮。”
She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these. I hope they'll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.”
6.我眼里含着泪水,非常感谢她。
With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.
7.那天晚上,我们的树终于完成了,那真是一幅值得一看的景象。
That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.
8.我们的第三个朋友帮助我们创造了一个我们永远不会忘记的圣诞节。
Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
【连句成篇】
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. I walked over and offered to help.As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these.I hope they'll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.” With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget. (共44张PPT)
Section Ⅵ Writing——电子邮件
[语料积累]
1.首段:开门见山,说明写信的目的
①I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
很高兴得知你将来中国游览。
②I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在美国时你对我的帮助。
③I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
2.主体:详细介绍邮件内容
①To be honest, the campus of my new school is the most beautiful one that I have ever stayed.
说实话,我的新学校的校园是我待过的最漂亮的一个。
② I recommend this club to you for the following reasons.
我向您推荐这家俱乐部的原因如下。
③First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art.
首先,京剧是中国传统艺术中的一颗明珠。
④Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups.
此外,俱乐部还将定期组织各种活动,比如邀请著名演员表演,以及绘制京剧妆容等。
3.尾段:结尾并祝福
①I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
期待您的回信。
②I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
③I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,刚上高中两周多,请你按照以下内容给你的英国笔友Tom发一封电子邮件,简单介绍你的学校、老师和自己的情况:
1.我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校,有50个班,2 500多名学生;
2.老师对我们很友好,教学方法与初中截然不同,上课方式很有趣;
3.课程比初中更有挑战性,但有信心学好;
4.与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
第一段:点出写信目的:介绍自己学校的情况;第二段:具体介绍新学校、老师和自己的情况;第三段:表达希望。
2.要点翻译
①我的新学校是一所历史悠久的名校。
My new school .
②它是我们的初中学校的三倍大。
It is our junior secondary school.
③我的学校有50个班和2 500多名学生。
There are in my school.
is famous and has a long history
three times bigger than
50 classes and over 2,500 students
④我们老师的教学方法很有趣,与我们以前老师的教学方法截然不同。
Our teachers’ teaching methods
those of our previous teachers.
⑤虽然我们学的课程更有挑战性,但我有信心学好它们。
Although the subjects we are learning ,
I’m sure that .
⑥我与同学相处非常融洽,积极参加各种课外活动。
I’m my classmates and I all kinds of after-school activities.
are interesting and different from
are more challengin
I can learn them well
getting along very well with
take an active part in
3.词句升级
(1)用非限制性定语从句升级句①和句②
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
(2)用confident升级句⑤
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
My new school,which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm confident that I can learn them well.
(3)用various升级句⑥
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
My new school, which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.Besides,there are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous
teachers.Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging, I'm confident that I can learn them well.In addition,I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[随堂演练]
假设你是李华,你的外国朋友Peter十分关心你,写信询问你是否适应了高中生活。请你根据以下提示,用英语回一封电子邮件,内容如下:
1.简述高中校园生活;
2.与同学相处情况;
3.英语学习情况。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
I am quite used to the life here, for it is so colorful.There are various after-class activities and clubs, which can help me learn and relax.Besides, my classmates are so friendly that I can get along well with them.Personally,English in senior high school is more
challenging, but I've been making progress with my English teacher's help.I believe I can learn it well if I keep working hard.
In a word, I enjoy my life in my new school.How about you I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
课 时 精 练
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
(2025·菏泽市高一上月考)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Bill发来邮件关心你的学校生活。请给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你对新高中学校的印象;
2.你在高中的学习情况;
3.询问他的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,不能出现个人信息;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
My new high school is vast and beautiful with amazing teaching buildings and modern facilities.It's a place that creates a good learning environment.
As for my study, I had trouble catching up with others at first. But I soon overcame my problem with the help of my teachers, who are knowledgeable and patient.And I even join a study group, in which all of us support and learn from each other.
I'm determined to enjoy my academic years here, so I'd love to hear your advice on how to manage time and how to study efficiently.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微续写(满分25分)
(2025·淄博市高一上期中)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights! So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (装饰).Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.
注意:续写词数应为100个左右。
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision.
【原文解读】
New in Chicago,we felt alone.→Our eight-year-old daughter advised me to put up a Christmas tree.→We finally selected our tree but can't deliver it home.→A gentleman offered to help us.(We met out first friend)→We needed Christmas lights!→The kind storekeeper gave us advice.(We met our second friend)→We needed ornaments.→One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree...→(根据原文续写首句,续写中要解决的问题是如何找到装饰物以及第三个朋友。)
【思路形成】
看到女士正在清除人行道上的积雪→前去帮忙→给予装饰物→表达感谢→圣诞树圆满完成→感悟
【单句续写】
1.我走过去,主动提出要帮忙。
2.当我们工作时,我提到了我们的圣诞树,以及我多么欣赏她的装饰品。
I walked over and offered to help.
As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.
3.她热情地微笑着邀请我到她家。
4.令我惊讶的是,她有一个盒子,里面装满了她不再使用的装饰品。
She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.
To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.
5.她微笑着递给我,说:“拿着。我希望它们能让你的树和我的一样
漂亮。”
6.我眼里含着泪水,非常感谢她。
She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these. I hope they’ll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.”
With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.
7.那天晚上,我们的树终于完成了,那真是一幅值得一看的景象。
8.我们的第三个朋友帮助我们创造了一个我们永远不会忘记的圣诞节。
That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.
Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
【连句成篇】
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. I walked over and offered to help.As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these.
I hope they’ll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.” With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
Thanks！
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