Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——关于科技的正反对比类议论文
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.精彩词汇
(1)用形容词dangerous、shocking、unnecessary描述新技术的危害。用happily、mainly、advocate a simple life等描述不借用新技术生活幸福的实例。
(2)用动词oppose、cease等词表达人们的反对态度。
(3)用benefits、warnings、easily、easier、larger等词描述新技术的优势。
2.高级句式
(1) On the one hand,there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology.
赏析:这是“There be+n.+定语从句”句式。There be句型表示“存在;有”,应用十分广泛和频繁,同时也是考生在写作中易犯错误的一个句型,因为考生经常会按照汉语的思维习惯写英语句子,从而导致语法错误。
仿写:补全句子
①There are only a small handful of animals in the world that can do that!
世界上只有很少的动物可以那样做!
②There are colorful after-class activities in our school that/which are designed to broaden our horizons.
我们学校有丰富多彩的旨在扩大我们视野的课外活动。
(2)It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large,polluted cities.
赏析:it不仅可以作为简单的代词,还可用来引导高级句型——it作形式主语,后面真正的主语为不定式、动词-ing形式,或从句。
仿写:补全句子
①Further,it is necessary for you to take a good rest,which will provide enough energy for you.
此外,您有必要好好休息,这将为您提供足够的能量。
②It is reported that there will be a Chinese paper-cutting show this Sunday in the art gallery.
据报道,本星期日在美术馆将有一个中国剪纸展。
3.衔接过渡
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology.
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years.
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
赏析:用on the one hand,on the other hand作为两种观点对照的呈现方式,以personally转承表达个人观点。
仿写:完成片段
On the one hand,the government should call on people to plant more plants and bushes.On the other hand, we young people should take the responsibility to promote people’s awareness of the environmental protection.
一方面,政府应该呼吁人们种植更多的植物和灌木。另一方面,我们年轻人应该承担起责任,提高人们的环保意识。
二、学结构
本文采用“总—分—总”结构。
(1)开篇:首段以报刊登载的“乘客死于无人驾驶模式下汽车的撞车事故”为报道开头,然后阐述了人们对这种新技术的质疑态度。
(2)主体:用两个段落分别描述不同观点和实例。
第二段对于是否发展新技术,作者从正反两个方面进行阐述。本段主要是反对者的声音。
第三段主要讲述新技术的好处。
(3)结尾:末段提出个人积极看法。
[积语料]
一、夺人眼球开头句
1.There is a widespread concern over the issue that robots will cause great threat to us.
对机器人将会对我们造成很大的威胁这个问题,人们有一种普遍的担忧。
2.It is universally acknowledged that WeChat is becoming more and more popular.
人们普遍认为,微信越来越受欢迎。
3.The students had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of social media.
同学们就社交媒体的利弊展开了激烈的讨论。
二、亮点出彩篇中句
1.However, people differ in their opinions on this matter.
然而,在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。
2.Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.
一般来说,它的优点如下。
3.As we all know, science and technology has changed our lives in many aspects.
众所周知,科学技术在很多方面改变了我们的生活。
4.The development of science and technology makes our lives more comfortable and convenient.
科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和便利。
5.People use electronic products every day, so people’s bodies have a series of problems.
人们每天使用电子产品,因此身体出现了一系列问题。
三、韵味无穷结尾句
1.As far as I am concerned, what matters most is that we should make good use of science and technology.
依我看来,最重要的是我们应该好好运用科技。
2.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有两面性。消极的方面也是很明显的。
3.Personally, I will always look on the positive side of the advances of new technology.
就个人而言,我总是会看到新技术进步的积极面。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
联系他人便利;获得更多的学习资源。 沉溺手机;浏览不健康网站。 ……
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:引出讨论的主题;
主体:分别陈述正反两方面的观点;
尾段:个人看法。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①最近我们班就手机是否对我们有益进行了讨论。
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
②一些学生偏爱手机。
Some students have a preference for cellphones.
③手机让联系亲戚和朋友更方便。
Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
④他们一打开手机,就能够获得相关的学习资源。
The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones,they can obtain relevant learning resources.
⑤有一些学生反对过多地使用手机。
There are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.
⑥许多学生忙于玩手机以至于他们对身边的人很冷淡。
Many students are so occupied (in) playing cellphones that they keep those around them at a distance.
⑦由于网上有许多不健康的网站,他们的身心会受到很大伤害。
As many unhealthy websites are on the Internet,they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
⑧我提倡所有学生把使用手机和面对面的交流结合起来。
I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)将句⑥改成倒装句。
So occupied (in) playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.
(2)用with复合结构改写句⑦。
With many unhealthy websites on the Internet,they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones.Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones,they can obtain relevant learning resources.Nevertheless,there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.So occupied (in) playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.Besides,with many unhealthy websites on the Internet,they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
Personally,I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作二 续写进阶训练之科技与生活——发明创新
No.1 构建语义场
靓词 [情绪描写] distant;opposed;potential;relevant
[动作描写] cease;switch;leak;persuade;resist;command
词块 advanced technology;think about; respond to;in addition;keep constant track of;prevent...from...
美句 1.However,in the not-too-distant future,we will be living in smart homes that will lock the door for us when we are away and remember to switch off the TV when we forget. 2.Your lights will come on the instant you enter the door along with your favourite music or TV programmes,and you will find your dinner already prepared for you. 3.Nevertheless,it will take some years before most new homes begin to use this new technology.
靓词 [科学发明] innovate v.创新 develop vt.开发 research v.研究 experiment v.实验 discover vt.发现 create vt.创造 design vt.设计 improve v.改进 apply vt.应用 promote vt.促进 analyse v.分析 invent v.发明 modification n.修改;改进;改变
[贡献社会] contribution n.贡献 simplify v.简化 accurate adj.精确的 advantage n.优势 replace v.取代 function n.功能 conclude v.总结 technology n.技术 efficient adj.高效的 eco-friendly adj.环保的 sustainable adj.可持续的 revolutionary adj.革命性的 groundbreaking adj.开创性的
词块 put into use投入使用 encounter challenges遇到挑战 make a positive impact on对……产生积极影响 be optimistic about life对生活积极乐观 make use of利用 come true实现 turn...into...把……变成…… with the development of science and technology随着科学技术的发展 live a happy life过着幸福的生活 be equipped with配备;装备 live in harmony和谐生活 in the long run从长远来看 take on a new look呈现新面貌 appeal to...对……有吸引力
美句 1.It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life. 毫无疑问,现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适。 2.Recently,there is a heated/ fierce debate in our class on whether AI can bring great benefits to us in the future. 最近,我们班就人工智能是否能在未来给我们带来巨大的好处展开了激烈的争论。 3.When it comes to the topic,the opinions concerning it vary from person to person. 当谈到这个话题时,关于它的看法因人而异。 4.AI has the potential to revolutionize the way we perform tasks,automate processes,and make decisions. 人工智能有可能彻底改变我们执行任务、自动化流程和做决策的方式。 5.With the development of science and technology,the robots in the future will be quite different from the traditional ones. 随着科学技术的发展,未来的机器人将与传统的机器人大不相同。
No.2 情景续写(青少年团队发明新设备)
场景导语: 一群青少年热衷于改变他们的社区,他们决定创造一种可以解决一个共同问题的发明,在集思广益之后,他们决定开发一种可以实时检测空气污染水平并向人们发出警报的设备。他们花了数周时间研究和收集材料,然后开始建造原型,但是这个过程并不容易……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:遇到挑战,进行了几次修改→继续努力→他们的发明准备就绪→进行了测试→对结果感到非常兴奋
The process was not easy.
场景续写2:向当地政府介绍了他们的发明,得到了赞扬和支持→设备投入使用→帮助人们了解空气质量,保护自己的健康→这段经历教会了青少年团队合作、毅力和创新的价值→他们可以通过自己的想法和行动对世界产生积极的影响
The team presented their invention to the local authorities and received praise and support.
【参考范文】
The process was not easy.They encountered many challenges and had to make several modifications to their design.But they didn’t give up and kept working hard.Finally,their invention was ready.They tested it in different locations and found that it worked perfectly.They were thrilled with the result.
The team presented their invention to the local authorities and received praise and support.Their device was soon put into use,and it helped people to be more aware of the air quality and take necessary measures to protect their health.This experience taught the teenagers the value of teamwork,perseverance,and innovation.They realized that they could make a positive impact on the world through their ideas and actions.
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是光明中学的学生李萍,昨天你们班就“科技发展给人们带来的利弊”展开了激烈的讨论,大部分同学认为利大于弊,另一部分同学态度相反。请你用英语写一篇短文给校英文社团投稿,陈述同学们的观点以及你自己的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
A class meeting was held in our class yesterday.Different people hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages brought by science and technology.
A majority of the students think that our daily life cannot be separated from science and technology.But some other students believe that the relationship between people becomes not as close as before because of science and technology.And due to using electronic products every day,people’s bodies have a series of problems.
In my opinion,science and technology provides us with many benefits,but only when we make good use of science and technology will it better serve mankind.
Ⅱ.情景续写(描述青少年参与科技创新比赛的经历) (满分25分)
场景导语:去年,我参加了一个科技创新竞赛。这是一次激动人心且富有挑战性的经历……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:我进行研究、实验和改进我的设计→开发一种智能设备,帮助残疾人更轻松地导航→比赛那天我很紧张→摆好展示架,向评委和其他参赛者解释了我的发明→他们印象深刻
I had been working on my project for months,conducting research,experimenting,and refining my design.
场景续写2:从其他学生的想法和创新中学到了很多→我获得了奖项,这是一种莫大的荣誉→这段经历激励我继续追求对科学技术的兴趣,并不断创新
During the competition,I also had the opportunity to see the projects of other students.
【参考范文】
I had been working on my project for months,conducting research,experimenting,and refining my design.I was developing a smart device that could help people with disabilities navigate their environment more easily.When the day of the competition arrived,I was nervous but also eager to show my work.I set up my display and explained my invention to the judges and other participants.They were impressed by my idea and the progress I had made.
During the competition,I also had the opportunity to see the projects of other students.There were some really amazing ideas and innovations,and I learned a lot from them.In the end,I was awarded a prize for my project,which was a great honor.This experience inspired me to continue pursuing my interest in science and technology and to keep innovating. (共51张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——关于科技的正反对比类议论文
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写作二 续写进阶训练之科技与生活——发明创新
课时测评作业
写作一 应用文写作——关于科技
的正反对比类议论文
NO.1 研教材 积语料
NO.2 仿写作 会运用
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.精彩词汇
(1)用形容词dangerous、shocking、unnecessary描述新技术的危害。用happily、mainly、advocate a simple life等描述不借用新技术生活幸福的实例。
(2)用动词oppose、cease等词表达人们的反对态度。
(3)用benefits、warnings、easily、easier、larger等词描述新技术的优势。
2.高级句式
(1) On the one hand,there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology.
赏析:这是“There be+n.+定语从句”句式。There be句型表示“存在;有”,应用十分广泛和频繁,同时也是考生在写作中易犯错误的一个句型,因为考生经常会按照汉语的思维习惯写英语句子,从而导致语法错误。
仿写:补全句子
①There are only a small handful of animals in the world
!
世界上只有很少的动物可以那样做!
②There are colorful after-class activities in our school
.
我们学校有丰富多彩的旨在扩大我们视野的课外活动。
that can do that
that/which are designed to broaden our horizons
(2)It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large,polluted cities.
赏析:it不仅可以作为简单的代词,还可用来引导高级句型——it作形式主语,后面真正的主语为不定式、动词-ing形式,或从句。
仿写:补全句子
①Further, ,which will provide enough energy for you.
此外,您有必要好好休息,这将为您提供足够的能量。
② there will be a Chinese paper-cutting show this Sunday in the art gallery.
据报道,本星期日在美术馆将有一个中国剪纸展。
it is necessary for you to take a good rest
It is reported that
3.衔接过渡
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology.
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years.
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
赏析:用on the one hand,on the other hand作为两种观点对照的呈现方式,以personally转承表达个人观点。
仿写:完成片段
,the government should call on people to plant more plants and bushes. , we young people should take the responsibility to promote people’s awareness of the environmental protection.
一方面,政府应该呼吁人们种植更多的植物和灌木。另一方面,我们年轻人应该承担起责任,提高人们的环保意识。
On the one hand
On the other hand
二、学结构
本文采用“总—分—总”结构。
(1)开篇:首段以报刊登载的“乘客死于无人驾驶模式下汽车的撞车事故”为报道开头,然后阐述了人们对这种新技术的质疑态度。
(2)主体:用两个段落分别描述不同观点和实例。
第二段对于是否发展新技术,作者从正反两个方面进行阐述。本段主要是反对者的声音。
第三段主要讲述新技术的好处。
(3)结尾:末段提出个人积极看法。
[积语料]
一、夺人眼球开头句
1.There is a widespread concern over the issue that robots will cause great threat to us. 对机器人将会对我们造成很大的威胁这个问题,人们有一种普遍的担忧。
2.It is universally acknowledged that WeChat is becoming more and more popular. 人们普遍认为,微信越来越受欢迎。
3.The students had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of social media.
同学们就社交媒体的利弊展开了激烈的讨论。
二、亮点出彩篇中句
1.However, people differ in their opinions on this matter.
然而,在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。
2.Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.
一般来说,它的优点如下。
3.As we all know, science and technology has changed our lives in many aspects.
众所周知,科学技术在很多方面改变了我们的生活。
4.The development of science and technology makes our lives more comfortable and convenient.
科学技术的发展使我们的生活更加舒适和便利。
5.People use electronic products every day, so people’s bodies have a series of problems.
人们每天使用电子产品,因此身体出现了一系列问题。
三、韵味无穷结尾句
1.As far as I am concerned, what matters most is that we should make good use of science and technology.
依我看来,最重要的是我们应该好好运用科技。
2.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.
但凡事都有两面性。消极的方面也是很明显的。
3.Personally, I will always look on the positive side of the advances of new technology.
就个人而言,我总是会看到新技术进步的积极面。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
联系他人便利;获得更多的学习资源。 沉溺手机;浏览不健康网站。 ……
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段: ;
主体: ;
尾段: 。
引出讨论的主题
分别陈述正反两方面的观点
个人看法
2.二仿语言规范美观
①最近我们班就手机是否对我们有益进行了讨论。
②一些学生偏爱手机。
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones.
③手机让联系亲戚和朋友更方便。
Cellphones friends and relatives.
④他们一打开手机,就能够获得相关的学习资源。
,they can obtain relevant learning resources.
make it more convenient to keep in touch with
The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones
⑤有一些学生反对过多地使用手机。
There are some students who
.
⑥许多学生忙于玩手机以至于他们对身边的人很冷淡。
Many students_______________________________________________
_________________________________.
are opposed to/oppose using cellphones
too much
are so occupied (in) playing cellphones that they keep those around them at a distance
⑦由于网上有许多不健康的网站,他们的身心会受到很大伤害。
As many unhealthy websites are on the Internet,
.
⑧我提倡所有学生把使用手机和面对面的交流结合起来。
using
cellphones with face-to-face communication.
they will suffer a
lot physically and mentally
I advocate that all the students (should) combine
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)将句⑥改成倒装句。
(2)用with复合结构改写句⑦。
So occupied (in) playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.
With many unhealthy websites on the Internet,they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones.Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones,they can obtain relevant learning resources.Nevertheless,there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.So occupied (in) playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.Besides,with many unhealthy websites on the Internet,they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
Personally,I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作二 续写进阶训练之科技与生活——发明创新
No.1 构建语义场
No.2 情景续写(青少年团队发明新设备)
No.1 构建语义场
教材语料整合 靓词 [情绪描写] distant;opposed;potential;relevant
[动作描写] cease;switch;leak;persuade;resist;command
词块 advanced technology;think about; respond to;in addition;keep constant track of;prevent...from...
教材语料整合 美句 1.However,in the not-too-distant future,we will be living in smart homes that will lock the door for us when we are away and remember to switch off the TV when we forget.
2.Your lights will come on the instant you enter the door along with your favourite music or TV programmes,and you will find your dinner already prepared for you.
3.Nevertheless,it will take some years before most new homes begin to use this new technology.
拓展语料整合 靓词 [科学发明] innovate v.创新 develop vt.开发
research v.研究 experiment v.实验 discover vt.发现 create vt.创造 design vt.设计 improve v.改进
apply vt.应用 promote vt.促进 analyse v.分析
invent v.发明 modification n.修改;改进;改变
[贡献社会] contribution n.贡献 simplify v.简化 accurate adj.精确的 advantage n.优势 replace v.取代 function n.功能 conclude v.总结 technology n.技术 efficient adj.高效的 eco-friendly adj.环保的 sustainable adj.可持续的 revolutionary adj.革命性的
groundbreaking adj.开创性的
拓展语料整合 词块 put into use投入使用 encounter challenges遇到挑战 make a positive impact on对……产生积极影响 be optimistic about life对生活积极乐观 make use of利用 come true实现 turn...into...把……变成…… with the development of science and technology随着科学技术的发展 live a happy life过着幸福的生活 be equipped with配备;装备 live in harmony和谐生活 in the long run从长远来看 take on a new look呈现新面貌 appeal to...对……有吸引力
拓展语料整合 美句 1.It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.
毫无疑问,现代科技给我们的生活带来方便和舒适。
2.Recently,there is a heated/ fierce debate in our class on whether AI can bring great benefits to us in the future.
最近,我们班就人工智能是否能在未来给我们带来巨大的好处展开了激烈的争论。
拓展语料整合 美句 3.When it comes to the topic,the opinions concerning it vary from person to person.
当谈到这个话题时,关于它的看法因人而异。
4.AI has the potential to revolutionize the way we perform tasks,automate processes,and make decisions.
人工智能有可能彻底改变我们执行任务、自动化流程和做决策的方式。
拓展语料整合 美句 5.With the development of science and technology,the robots in the future will be quite different from the traditional ones.
随着科学技术的发展,未来的机器人将与传统的机器人大不相同。
No.2 情景续写(青少年团队发明新设备)
场景导语: 一群青少年热衷于改变他们的社区,他们决定创造一种可以解决一个共同问题的发明,在集思广益之后,他们决定开发一种可以实时检测空气污染水平并向人们发出警报的设备。他们花了数周时间研究和收集材料,然后开始建造原型,但是这个过程并不容易……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:遇到挑战,进行了几次修改→继续努力→他们的发明准备就绪→进行了测试→对结果感到非常兴奋
The process was not easy.
场景续写2:向当地政府介绍了他们的发明,得到了赞扬和支持→设备投入使用→帮助人们了解空气质量,保护自己的健康→这段经历教会了青少年团队合作、毅力和创新的价值→他们可以通过自己的想法和行动对世界产生积极的影响
The team presented their invention to the local authorities and received praise and support.
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The process was not easy.They encountered many challenges and had to make several modifications to their design.But they didn’t give up and kept working hard.Finally,their invention was ready.They tested it in different locations and found that it worked perfectly.They were thrilled with the result.
The team presented their invention to the local authorities and received praise and support.Their device was soon put into use,and it helped people to be more aware of the air quality and take necessary measures to protect their health.This experience taught the teenagers the value of teamwork,perseverance,and innovation.They realized that they could make a positive impact on the world through their ideas and actions.
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Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是光明中学的学生李萍,昨天你们班就“科技发展给人们带来的利弊”展开了激烈的讨论,大部分同学认为利大于弊,另一部分同学态度相反。请你用英语写一篇短文给校英文社团投稿,陈述同学们的观点以及你自己的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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A class meeting was held in our class yesterday.Different people hold different views on the advantages and disadvantages brought by science and technology.
A majority of the students think that our daily life cannot be separated from science and technology.But some other students believe that the relationship between people becomes not as close as before because of science and technology.And due to using electronic products every day,people’s bodies have a series of problems.
In my opinion,science and technology provides us with many benefits,but only when we make good use of science and technology will it better serve mankind.
Ⅱ.情景续写(描述青少年参与科技创新比赛的经历)
场景导语:去年,我参加了一个科技创新竞赛。这是一次激动人心且富有挑战性的经历……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:我进行研究、实验和改进我的设计→开发一种智能设备,帮助残疾人更轻松地导航→比赛那天我很紧张→摆好展示架,向评委和其他参赛者解释了我的发明→他们印象深刻
I had been working on my project for months,conducting research,experimenting,and refining my design.
场景续写2:从其他学生的想法和创新中学到了很多→我获得了奖项,这是一种莫大的荣誉→这段经历激励我继续追求对科学技术的兴趣,并不断创新
During the competition,I also had the opportunity to see the projects of other students.
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I had been working on my project for months,conducting research,experimenting,and refining my design.I was developing a smart device that could help people with disabilities navigate their environment more easily.When the day of the competition arrived,I was nervous but also eager to show my work.I set up my display and explained my invention to the judges and other participants.They were impressed by my idea and the progress I had made.
During the competition,I also had the opportunity to see the projects of other students.There were some really amazing ideas and innovations,and I learned a lot from them.In the end,I was awarded a prize for my project,which was a great honor.This experience inspired me to continue pursuing my interest in science and technology and to keep innovating.
Thanks!
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