Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍一个主题公园
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.描述“选择”情景的行文模式
Which theme park would you like to visit ...Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds.Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
赏析:首句使用了特殊疑问句,引起读者兴趣;中间部分使用了Some...,others...举例,最后一句使用了感叹句,以引发读者的关注。
情景迁移:当你饿了的时候你喜欢去哪家餐馆 这条街上有各种各样(饮食风格)的餐馆,不同的餐馆满足几乎所有的口味。有些餐馆以美味中餐而闻名,有些以西餐而闻名,也有些以其当地特色而闻名。不管你喜欢哪一个,不管你喜欢什么,总会有一家很棒的能够吸引你的餐馆。
Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street, with different ones for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western-style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
2.广告收尾方式
(1)If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
(2)If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
赏析:以上两句是典型的旅游广告收尾方式,这种模式也适用于活动类广告或通知的结尾。
仿写:你如果想通过探索迷人的自然以获得乐趣,现在就报名参加夏令营吧!
If you want to have fun exploring the fascinating nature, come to sign up for the summer camp now!
3.连贯衔接
本文连贯衔接主要见于段内对公园的介绍过程,如:通过most familiar、all possible、As、Of course、also等词的运用,使迪士尼乐园的介绍重点突出且层次分明;在介绍长隆海洋公园时使用了Here you can、in addition to、Of course、you can also、Then at night、you can even等表达,既遵循参观时间顺序又兼顾空间层次。
仿写:此外,我的英语很好,尤其是口语。最后,作为一名外向的学生,我不仅能与受访者相处得很好,而且我有责任感和合作意识。
In addition, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Finally, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
二、学结构
本文采用“总——分”结构。
(1)开篇:第一段通过设问引出本文话题,即主题公园介绍。
(2)主体:分段叙述三个有代表性的主题公园,即迪士尼乐园、多莉山公园和长隆海洋王国。
[积语料]
一、介绍功能或特点
1.In my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来,这是一个放松和娱乐的好地方。
2.In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances at the theme park.
此外,你可以在主题公园里欣赏精彩的表演。
二、介绍地理位置
1.The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the high-speed railway station.
该主题公园坐落在我们城市西郊的高铁站附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well known for its beautiful lakes.
该主题公园位于四川省北部,以其美丽的湖泊而闻名。
3.Located in the southeast of Jilin Province,Changbaishan is one of the 10 Most Famous Mountains in China.
长白山位于吉林省东南部,是中国十大名山之一。
三、介绍面积
It will be a world-famous theme park,covering an area of 670,000 square metres.
=It will be a world-famous theme park with an area of 670,000 square metres.
它将成为世界著名的主题公园,占地67万平方米。
四、介绍历史
1.It is a world-famous theme park which has a history of 50 years.
它是一个有着50年历史的世界著名的主题公园。
2.Serving as the capital of 13 dynasties in Chinese history,Xi’an is considered to be one of the birth places of the Chinese civilization.
西安是中国历史上13个朝代的都城,被认为是中华文明的诞生地之一。
五、介绍交通方式
1.You can reach the theme park by subway.
你可以乘地铁到主题公园。
2.You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租车去那里你可能会更快一点儿。
六、介绍收费情况
The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.
公园门票是100元,园内的所有活动都是免费的。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,是北京欢乐谷Happy Valley of Beijing的一名导游。请你根据以下要点,向一个英国中学生旅游团进行简单的景点介绍:
1.北京欢乐谷主题公园占地56万平方米,于2006年7月对外开放;
2.游客可以参与多项活动;
3.可以参观多种精彩表演。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:导入(引入写作目的,说明景点的名称);
主体:对景点进行详细介绍(成立和开放时间、游玩项目、注意事项等);
尾段:表明希望或愿望。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①欢迎来到北京欢乐谷——一个吸引不同年龄段游客的主题公园!(appeal)
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages!
②我很高兴有机会成为你们的导游。(more than)
I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
③北京欢乐谷于2006年7月对外开放。(open)
Happy Valley of Beijing was opened to the public in July, 2006.
④北京欢乐谷占地面积56万平方米。(cover)
Happy Valley of Beijing covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
⑤有多种设施可以满足不同年龄段人群的需要。(meet)
Many kinds of facilities can meet the needs of people of all ages.
⑥你可以观看许多精彩表演,这一定会给你留下深刻的印象。(impress)
You can watch many wonderful performances and they will surely impress you deeply.
⑦请记住,无论你打算参加什么活动,你都必须遵守规则。(让步状语从句)
Just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in, you must obey the rules.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)用过去分词短语作定语连接句③和句④
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
(2)用定语从句改写句⑥
You can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages! I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters. In this park, visitors can take part in various activities. Many kinds of facilities can also meet the needs of people of all ages. Besides, you can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply. Lastly,just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in,you must obey the rules.
I’m convinced that you’ll certainly enjoy yourselves here. Thank you.
写作二 续写进阶训练之自然环境——旅游
No.1 构建语义场
靓词 [环境描写] valley;vast;boundary;bush;fountain;theme park;superb;enormous;splendid
[动作描写] buffet;edge;accompany;adopt;stretch;cycle;pedal;wander;amuse
词块 be wild with joy;dance for/ with joy;in a good mood;set out;appeal to
美句 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(动作描写) 2.Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(环境描写) 3.At the far side of the valley, an ancient Sami cottage is visible. Close by, there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(环境描写) 4.They used the reindeer’s meat for food, their bones for tools, and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辞) 5.Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure.(动作描写)
靓词 [公园与建筑]castle n.城堡 museum n.博物馆 palace n.宫;宫殿 parking lots停车场 gallery n.美术馆 temple n.庙宇 statue n.塑像
[公园活动]exhibition n.展览 admit vt.允许……进入 charge n.费用 hold vt.召开;举办 book v.预订;预购 accessible adj.可进入的 carnival n.狂欢节 arrangement n.安排;布置
[旅游感受]attractive adj.迷人的,有吸引力的 comfortable adj.舒服的;安逸的;舒服自在的 crowded adj.拥挤的 cultural adj.文化的 fantastic adj.(口语)极好的,美妙的,很棒的 historical adj.历史的
词块 in size在面积上 a variety of各种各样的 can’t wait to do...迫不及待做…… cover an area of...占地面积为…… be located/situated in/on...位于/坐落于…… appreciate wonderful performances欣赏精彩的表演 a famous leisure paradise一个著名的休闲乐园 be open to the public对公众开放 combine entertainment with education娱乐与教育相结合 with a height of...高度为…… entertainment facilities娱乐设施 be crazy about adventure热衷于冒险 have fun玩得开心 the blue sky蓝天 the green grass青草 the blooming flowers盛开的花 the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰 a rainy/foggy day多雨/雾的一天 a stormy night暴风雨之夜 the setting/ rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳
美句 1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is a theme park for you! 无论你喜欢哪一个,不管你喜欢什么,都会有一个适合你的主题公园! 2.Parks are to the city as lungs are to the body. 公园之于城市犹如肺之于人的身体。 3.Some theme parks are not only entertaining but also educational, which preserve the local skills and culture for the future. 一些主题公园不仅具有娱乐性而且还有教育意义,它们为未来保存了当地的技艺和文化。 4.The park is full of folk tales and legends,which make those who visit it more excited. 这个公园有许多民间故事和传说,这令那些参观它的游客更加兴奋。 5.Today, the park attracts millions of visitors annually, from winter visitors exploring winter snow scenes to summer visitors observing wildlife. 如今,这个公园每年吸引数百万游客,包括探索冬季雪景的冬季游客和观察野生生物的夏季游客。
No.2 情景续写(旅游历险)
场景导语:“我”家每年都去槟城度假,今年,我们驱车6个小时到达目的地,按老样子入住同一家旅馆,在咖啡店喝茶时,我们无意间听到人们在谈论附近岛屿发生的地震。之后我们回到酒店,又去海滩散步,捡贝壳。突然我们发现太阳光异常刺眼、远方的树在摇晃、一条灰色的线正在向海岸逼近……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:父亲冲我们大喊,让我们跑回旅馆→父亲是如何带领我们跑回旅馆的→为什么要上楼
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
场景续写2:描写下楼之所见→帮助他人脱险→以所感升华文章主题并结束文章
We waited a long time before going downstairs.
【参考范文】
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. We decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华, 你市最近新建了一个大型海洋公园——Ocean Kingdom,请你给留学生朋友David写一封电子邮件, 邀请他周末一起去游玩。
内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.海洋主题公园活动介绍;
3.约定见面时间及地点
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I have a piece of good news that a new theme park, Ocean Kingdom has been open to the public, and I am writing to invite you to visit it this Sunday.
In this park, not only can we see a wide variety of marine creatures, especially some rare marine animals, but also we can enjoy their wonderful performances. Through this visit, we can learn more about oceanic culture and enrich our knowledge about it. Last but not least, please remember we will meet at the school gate at 10:00 am and set off by bus. I am sure we’ll have a good time there. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景续写(旅游)(满分25分)
场景导语:作者和母亲去哥斯达黎加旅行,导游告诉作者和其他旅行者有两条不需要导游就可以探索的路线,一条较短的大约需要四十分钟,另一条较长的需要一小时二十分钟,路非常陡峭,作者和母亲决定沿着较长的路线探索……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:我们沿着小路出发→拍摄美丽的风景,进入了一个大型的开放空间,里面挤满了游客,可以俯瞰火山口→我们设法走到栏杆边,以便欣赏美景→风景很美,路也基本平坦,感觉很好→希望后面的路程也是如此……
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.
场景续写2:路变得陡峭→作者和母亲决定休息一下→在不断的休息和继续出发之后,终于到达了停车场→与导游碰面……
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.
【参考范文】
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes of walking and taking pictures of the beautiful mountainside, we were in a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano’s crater. We managed to move our way to the railing for a good view. So far, the scenery had been wonderful and the road had been mostly flat. My mom and I were both feeling pretty good. I was truly hoping that Mom could feel good enough to go on the longer loop.
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break,” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep trail. After a lot of stops and starts, we finally reached the parking lot. “The long trail wasn’t so bad, eh ” the guide asked with a cheerful smile, “You just have to keep going when it gets a little tough.” (共50张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍一个主题公园
内
容
索
引
写作二 续写进阶训练之自然环境——旅游
课时测评作业
写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍一个主题公园
NO.1 研教材 积语料
NO.2 仿写作 会运用
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.描述“选择”情景的行文模式
Which theme park would you like to visit ...Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds.Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
赏析:首句使用了特殊疑问句,引起读者兴趣;中间部分使用了Some...,others...举例,最后一句使用了感叹句,以引发读者的关注。
情景迁移:当你饿了的时候你喜欢去哪家餐馆 这条街上有各种各样(饮食风格)的餐馆,不同的餐馆满足几乎所有的口味。有些餐馆以美味中餐而闻名,有些以西餐而闻名,也有些以其当地特色而闻名。不管你喜欢哪一个,不管你喜欢什么,总会有一家很棒的能够吸引你的餐馆。
Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street, with different ones for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western－style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
2.广告收尾方式
(1)If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
(2)If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
赏析:以上两句是典型的旅游广告收尾方式,这种模式也适用于活动类广告或通知的结尾。
仿写:你如果想通过探索迷人的自然以获得乐趣,现在就报名参加夏令营吧!
If you want to have fun exploring the fascinating nature, come to sign up for the summer camp now!
3.连贯衔接
本文连贯衔接主要见于段内对公园的介绍过程,如:通过most familiar、all possible、As、Of course、also等词的运用,使迪士尼乐园的介绍重点突出且层次分明;在介绍长隆海洋公园时使用了Here you can、in addition to、Of course、you can also、Then at night、you can even等表达,既遵循参观时间顺序又兼顾空间层次。
仿写:此外,我的英语很好,尤其是口语。最后,作为一名外向的学生,我不仅能与受访者相处得很好,而且我有责任感和合作意识。
In addition, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Finally, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
二、学结构
本文采用“总——分”结构。
(1)开篇:第一段通过设问引出本文话题,即主题公园介绍。
(2)主体:分段叙述三个有代表性的主题公园,即迪士尼乐园、多莉山公园和长隆海洋王国。
[积语料]
一、介绍功能或特点
1.In my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来,这是一个放松和娱乐的好地方。
2.In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances at the theme park.
此外,你可以在主题公园里欣赏精彩的表演。
二、介绍地理位置
1.The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the high－speed railway station.
该主题公园坐落在我们城市西郊的高铁站附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well known for its beautiful lakes.
该主题公园位于四川省北部,以其美丽的湖泊而闻名。
3.Located in the southeast of Jilin Province,Changbaishan is one of the 10 Most Famous Mountains in China.
长白山位于吉林省东南部,是中国十大名山之一。
三、介绍面积
It will be a world－famous theme park,covering an area of 670,000 square metres.
＝It will be a world－famous theme park with an area of 670,000 square metres.
它将成为世界著名的主题公园,占地67万平方米。
四、介绍历史
1.It is a world－famous theme park which has a history of 50 years.
它是一个有着50年历史的世界著名的主题公园。
2.Serving as the capital of 13 dynasties in Chinese history,Xi’an is considered to be one of the birth places of the Chinese civilization.
西安是中国历史上13个朝代的都城,被认为是中华文明的诞生地之一。
五、介绍交通方式
1.You can reach the theme park by subway.
你可以乘地铁到主题公园。
2.You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租车去那里你可能会更快一点儿。
六、介绍收费情况
The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.
公园门票是100元,园内的所有活动都是免费的。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,是北京欢乐谷Happy Valley of Beijing的一名导游。请你根据以下要点,向一个英国中学生旅游团进行简单的景点介绍:
1.北京欢乐谷主题公园占地56万平方米,于2006年7月对外开放;
2.游客可以参与多项活动;
3.可以参观多种精彩表演。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[仿写程序步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段: ;
主体: ;
尾段: 。
导入(引入写作目的,说明景点的名称)
对景点进行详细介绍(成立和开放时间、游玩项目、注意事项等)
表明希望或愿望
2.二仿语言规范美观
①欢迎来到北京欢乐谷——一个吸引不同年龄段游客的主题公园!(appeal)
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that____________________ of different ages!
②我很高兴有机会成为你们的导游。(more than)
I I have
the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
appeals to tourists
am more than happy that
③北京欢乐谷于2006年7月对外开放。(open)
Happy Valley of Beijing___________________________ in July, 2006.
④北京欢乐谷占地面积56万平方米。(cover)
Happy Valley of Beijing 560 thousand square meters.
⑤有多种设施可以满足不同年龄段人群的需要。(meet)
Many kinds of facilities can .
was opened to the public
covers an area of
meet the needs of people of all ages
⑥你可以观看许多精彩表演,这一定会给你留下深刻的印象。(impress)
You can watch many wonderful performances and they
.
⑦请记住,无论你打算参加什么活动,你都必须遵守规则。(让步状语从句)
Just bear in mind that, , you must obey the rules.
will surely
impress you deeply
whatever activity you intend to participate in
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)用过去分词短语作定语连接句③和句④
(2)用定语从句改写句⑥
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
You can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages! I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters. In this park, visitors can take part in various activities. Many kinds of facilities can also meet the needs of people of all ages. Besides, you can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply. Lastly,just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in,you must obey the rules.
I’m convinced that you’ll certainly enjoy yourselves here. Thank you.
写作二 续写进阶训练之自然环境
——旅游
No.1 构建语义场
No.2 情景续写(旅游历险)
No.1 构建语义场
教材语料整合 靓词 [环境描写] valley;vast;boundary;bush;fountain;theme park;superb;enormous;splendid
[动作描写] buffet;edge;accompany;adopt;stretch;cycle;pedal;wander;amuse
词块 be wild with joy;dance for/ with joy;in a good mood;set out;appeal to
教材语料整合 美句 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(动作描写)
2.Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(环境描写)
3.At the far side of the valley, an ancient Sami cottage is visible. Close by, there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(环境描写)
教材语料整合 美句 4.They used the reindeer’s meat for food, their bones for tools, and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辞)
5.Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure.(动作描写)
拓展语粒整合 靓词 [公园与建筑]castle n.城堡 museum n.博物馆 palace n.宫;宫殿 parking lots停车场 gallery n.美术馆 temple n.庙宇 statue n.塑像
[公园活动]exhibition n.展览 admit vt.允许……进入 charge n.费用 hold vt.召开;举办
book v.预订;预购 accessible adj.可进入的 carnival n.狂欢节 arrangement n.安排;布置
[旅游感受]attractive adj.迷人的,有吸引力的 comfortable adj.舒服的;安逸的;舒服自在的 crowded adj.拥挤的 cultural adj.文化的 fantastic adj.(口语)极好的,美妙的,很棒的 historical adj.历史的
拓展语粒整合 词块 in size在面积上 a variety of各种各样的 can’t wait to do...迫不及待做…… cover an area of...占地面积为…… be located/situated in/on...位于/坐落于…… appreciate wonderful performances欣赏精彩的表演 a famous leisure paradise一个著名的休闲乐园 be open to the public对公众开放 combine entertainment with education娱乐与教育相结合 with a height of...高度为…… entertainment facilities娱乐设施 be crazy about adventure热衷于冒险 have fun玩得开心 the blue sky蓝天 the green grass青草 the blooming flowers盛开的花 the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰 a rainy/foggy day多雨/雾的一天 a stormy night暴风雨之夜 the setting/ rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳
拓展语粒整合 美句 1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is a theme park for you! 无论你喜欢哪一个,不管你喜欢什么,都会有一个适合你的主题公园!
2.Parks are to the city as lungs are to the body.
公园之于城市犹如肺之于人的身体。
3.Some theme parks are not only entertaining but also educational, which preserve the local skills and culture for the future. 一些主题公园不仅具有娱乐性而且还有教育意义,它们为未来保存了当地的技艺和文化。
拓展语粒整合 美句 4.The park is full of folk tales and legends,which make those who visit it more excited. 这个公园有许多民间故事和传说,这令那些参观它的游客更加兴奋。
5.Today, the park attracts millions of visitors annually, from winter visitors exploring winter snow scenes to summer visitors observing wildlife.
如今,这个公园每年吸引数百万游客,包括探索冬季雪景的冬季游客和观察野生生物的夏季游客。
No.2 情景续写(旅游历险)
场景导语:“我”家每年都去槟城度假,今年,我们驱车6个小时到达目的地,按老样子入住同一家旅馆,在咖啡店喝茶时,我们无意间听到人们在谈论附近岛屿发生的地震。之后我们回到酒店,又去海滩散步,捡贝壳。突然我们发现太阳光异常刺眼、远方的树在摇晃、一条灰色的线正在向海岸逼近……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:父亲冲我们大喊,让我们跑回旅馆→父亲是如何带领我们跑回旅馆的→为什么要上楼
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.
场景续写2:描写下楼之所见→帮助他人脱险→以所感升华文章主题并结束文章
We waited a long time before going downstairs.
【参考范文】
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. We decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
课 时 测 评 作 业
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华, 你市最近新建了一个大型海洋公园——Ocean Kingdom,请你给留学生朋友David写一封电子邮件, 邀请他周末一起去游玩。内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.海洋主题公园活动介绍;3.约定见面时间及地点
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I have a piece of good news that a new theme park, Ocean Kingdom has been open to the public, and I am writing to invite you to visit it this Sunday.
In this park, not only can we see a wide variety of marine creatures, especially some rare marine animals, but also we can enjoy their wonderful performances. Through this visit, we can learn more
about oceanic culture and enrich our knowledge about it. Last but not least, please remember we will meet at the school gate at 10:00 am and set off by bus. I am sure we’ll have a good time there. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景续写(旅游)(满分25分)
场景导语:作者和母亲去哥斯达黎加旅行,导游告诉作者和其他旅行者有两条不需要导游就可以探索的路线,一条较短的大约需要四十分钟,另一条较长的需要一小时二十分钟,路非常陡峭,作者和母亲决定沿着较长的路线探索……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:我们沿着小路出发→拍摄美丽的风景,进入了一个大型的开放空间,里面挤满了游客,可以俯瞰火山口→我们设法走到栏杆边,以便欣赏美景→风景很美,路也基本平坦,感觉很好→希望后面的路程也是如此……
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.
场景续写2:路变得陡峭→作者和母亲决定休息一下→在不断的休息和继续出发之后,终于到达了停车场→与导游碰面……
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.
【参考范文】
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes of walking and taking pictures of the beautiful mountainside, we were in a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano’s crater. We managed to move our way to the railing for a good view. So far, the scenery had been wonderful and the road had been mostly flat. My mom and I were both feeling pretty good. I was truly hoping that Mom could feel good enough to go on the longer loop.
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break,” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep trail. After a lot of stops and starts, we finally reached the parking lot. “The long trail wasn’t so bad, eh ” the guide asked with a cheerful smile, “You just have to keep going when it gets a little tough.”
Thanks！
本
讲
内
容
结
束
