Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop——人物传记
[语料积累]
首段:介绍背景并点明人物
1.There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher,who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
我们周围有许多可敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的物理老师,她对每个学生都很有耐心,我们都喜欢她。
2.Madam Curie,a great scientist,was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
居里夫人,一位伟大的科学家,于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。
3.Old as Zhong Nanshan is,he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.(全国Ⅰ卷)
尽管钟南山年事已高,但他仍在医学领域作出了巨大贡献。
主体:人物的基本情况、性格及事迹等
1.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
她不仅教我们如何获得知识,也教我们如何成为一个好人。
2.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她凭借她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。
3.She works long hours every day for the sake of our family,and she still finds time to help with household chores and spend time with me.
为了我们的家庭,她每天工作很长时间,但她仍然抽出时间帮助做家务以及陪伴我。
4.Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator,known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
袁隆平是中国农业科学家和教育家,因在20世纪70年代开发出第一批杂交水稻品种而闻名。
尾段:整体评价及其影响等
1.Having set a great example to us students,she fully deserves my respect.
她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样,完全值得我尊敬。
2.It goes without saying that he has a great effect on the values of later generations.
不用说,他对后人的价值观有很大的影响。
3.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激励着我和千百万女孩过独立的生活,并为我们自己的决定负责。
[典题示例]
你校英文报Youth新增“名人长廊”栏目。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平,1960年生于天津。13岁时开始练习打排球;
2.1978年,因在全国排球比赛中表现突出,进入国家队;
3.退役后,成为排球教练。在2016年奥运会上,带领中国女子排球队获得金牌;
4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的人。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
第一段:总体介绍郎平的情况;
第二段:按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历;
第三段:简短总结全文。
2.要点翻译
①郎平1960年出生于天津,是著名的排球教练。(be born in,coach)
Lang Ping was born in 1960 in Tianjin,and she is a famous volleyball coach.
②她在13岁时开始练习打排球。
She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.
③由于在全国排球比赛中出色的表现,她于1978年加入了国家队。(because of)
She joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.
④她刻苦努力,获得了很多国际奖项。(award)
She was hard working,so she won lots of international awards.
⑤从排球队退役之后,她成为排球教练。(retire)
After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.
⑥在2016年奥运会上,在她的带领下,中国女排获得了金牌。(leadership)
In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.
⑦她是第一个作为运动员和教练均获得奥运会冠军的中国人。(the first...to do...)
She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.
⑧她受到我们所有人的爱戴和尊敬,我们将永远铭记她是一位伟大的女性。(respect)
She is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
3.词句升级
(1)用定语从句升级句①
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.
(2)用when引导的状语从句升级句②
She began to play volleyball when she was 13.
(3)用so...that...升级句④
She was so hard working that she won lots of international awards.
4.连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.Then,she joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard working that she won lots of international awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.Therefore,she is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
[随堂演练]
你校的英语角正在征集“年度最佳人物”稿件,请以“Person of the Year”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.该人物的简介;
2.该人物对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.短文题目已写好,不计入总词数。
Person of the Year
【参考范文】
Person of the Year
As to the “Person of the Year”,I would like to nominate my English teacher for this glorious title.
Ms.Zhang is a teacher who boasts a good reputation.With her warm smile and kind nature,she has become a beloved figure among students.Moreover,it is her belief in my abilities that has encouraged me to make progress toward excellence.Motivating me to participate in public speaking,she has helped me build up self confidence and better skills.
There is no doubt that Ms.Zhang deserves this title.Truly,not only is she a qualified teacher,but also she is a valuable guide in my life.(共21张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop——人物传记
[语料积累]
首段:介绍背景并点明人物
1.There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher,who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
我们周围有许多可敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的物理老师,她对每个学生都很有耐心,我们都喜欢她。
2.Madam Curie,a great scientist,was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
居里夫人,一位伟大的科学家,于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。
3.Old as Zhong Nanshan is,he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.(全国Ⅰ卷)
尽管钟南山年事已高,但他仍在医学领域作出了巨大贡献。
主体:人物的基本情况、性格及事迹等
1.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
她不仅教我们如何获得知识,也教我们如何成为一个好人。
2.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她凭借她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。
3.She works long hours every day for the sake of our family,and she still finds time to help with household chores and spend time with me.
为了我们的家庭,她每天工作很长时间,但她仍然抽出时间帮助做家务以及陪伴我。
4.Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator, known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
袁隆平是中国农业科学家和教育家,因在20世纪70年代开发出第一批杂交水稻品种而闻名。
尾段:整体评价及其影响等
1.Having set a great example to us students,she fully deserves my respect.
她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样,完全值得我尊敬。
2.It goes without saying that he has a great effect on the values of later generations.
不用说,他对后人的价值观有很大的影响。
3.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激励着我和千百万女孩过独立的生活,并为我们自己的决定负责。
[典题示例]
你校英文报Youth新增“名人长廊”栏目。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平,1960年生于天津。13岁时开始练习打排球;
2.1978年,因在全国排球比赛中表现突出,进入国家队;
3.退役后,成为排球教练。在2016年奥运会上,带领中国女子排球队获得金牌;
4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的人。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
第一段:总体介绍郎平的情况;
第二段:按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历;
第三段:简短总结全文。
2.要点翻译
①郎平1960年出生于天津,是著名的排球教练。(be born in,coach)
Lang Ping in Tianjin,
and she .
②她在13岁时开始练习打排球。
She at the age of 13.
was born in 1960
is a famous volleyball coach
began to play volleyball
③由于在全国排球比赛中出色的表现,她于1978年加入了国家队。
(because of)
She joined the national team in 1978
.
④她刻苦努力,获得了很多国际奖项。(award)
She was hard-working,so .
because of her outstanding
performance in the national volleyball competition
she won lots of international awards
⑤从排球队退役之后,她成为排球教练。(retire)
After ,
she became a volleyball coach.
⑥在2016年奥运会上,在她的带领下,中国女排获得了金牌。
(leadership)
In the 2016 Olympics, ,
the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.
she retired from the volleyball team
under her leadership
⑦她是第一个作为运动员和教练均获得奥运会冠军的中国人。
(the first...to do...)
She is as both a player and coach.
⑧她受到我们所有人的爱戴和尊敬,我们将永远铭记她是一位伟大的女性。(respect)
She and will always be remembered as a great woman.
the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship
is loved and respected by us all
3.词句升级
(1)用定语从句升级句①
Lang Ping, in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.
(2)用when引导的状语从句升级句②
She began to play volleyball .
(3)用so...that...升级句④
She was she won lots of international awards.
who was born in 1960
when she was 13
so hard-working that
4.连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.Then,she joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard-working that she
won lots of international awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.Therefore,she is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
[随堂演练]
你校的英语角正在征集“年度最佳人物”稿件,请以“Person of the Year”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.该人物的简介;
2.该人物对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.短文题目已写好,不计入总词数。
Person of the Year
【参考范文】
Person of the Year
As to the “Person of the Year”,I would like to nominate my English teacher for this glorious title.
Ms.Zhang is a teacher who boasts a good reputation.With her warm smile and kind nature,she has become a beloved figure among students.Moreover,it is her belief in my abilities that has encouraged me to make progress toward excellence.Motivating me to participate in public speaking,she has helped me build up self-confidence and better skills.
There is no doubt that Ms.Zhang deserves this title.Truly,not only is she a qualified teacher,but also she is a valuable guide in my life.
Thanks！
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