Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍科学家的优秀品质
No.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.高级句式
(1)Perhaps no other scientist has had a greater impact on China’s aerospace science than Qian Xuesen.
赏析:本句运用了“否定词+形容词的比较级”结构。此结构表示最高级的意义。本句句意为“也许再没有哪一位科学家比钱学森对中国航天科学的影响更大了。”运用这种结构,来突出说明钱学森做出的巨大贡献。
仿写:John thought nothing was more meaningful than helping others earn a living by themselves.
约翰认为没有什么比帮助别人自力更生更有意义的事情了。
(2)However,what might have made him such an outstanding and creative scientist was probably his strong interest in other things,such as music and drawing.
赏析:本句运用了what引导的名词性从句和make复合结构,介绍了钱学森广泛的爱好,以及这些爱好对他开展科学研究的积极影响。写作中恰当运用what引导的名词性从句不仅显得句式多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意赅。
仿写:What made Tu Youyou awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine is her outstanding achievements in medical research and her contribution to human health over the years.
屠呦呦之所以能够获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖,是因为她多年来在医学研究方面所取得的杰出成就以及对人类健康所做的贡献。
2.人物性格描写
Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.
赏析:文章第三段告诉我们勇敢无畏、意志坚定和敢于承认错误是霍金身上体现出来的科学家的品质。
仿写:She is a determined girl and confident about her future,so we know that once she has made up her mind to do something,she will make her dream come true with great confidence.
她是个意志坚定的女孩,对自己的未来充满信心,所以我们知道,一旦她下定决心做某事,她就会满怀信心地实现梦想。
二、学结构
该部分有两个阅读语篇,标题分别为THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE和A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,它们从不同的角度简要叙述了科学家钱学森和史蒂芬·霍金的经历、重要贡献、性格特点以及他们所具备的科学素养。
第一篇文章THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE,首先用“否定词+比较级”的句式结构介绍钱学森在科学界的地位,然后用过去分词短语作状语及定语从句举例说明他具体的科学家的品质。
第二、三段使用了in 1911、in 1932、in 1935、over the course of the 1930s and 1940s、during the 1930s、in the 1940s等时间状语介绍了钱学森在归国前的成就。
第四段介绍了钱学森回国后克服困难的经历。文中使用了poor、undeveloped和no等词汇突出介绍了当时中国贫穷的现状,然后使用过渡词nevertheless转折到描写钱学森研发导弹的决心。
第五段介绍了钱学森在航天科技领域所做的开创性工作——Dongfeng missiles、the first generation of Long March rockets、first man-made satellite、much of the technology behind the Shenzhou spacecraft等等。因此钱学森赢得了“中国航天之父”的赞誉。
第六段介绍了钱学森广泛的爱好,以及这些爱好对他开展科学研究的积极影响。
第七段介绍了钱学森的去世及其影响。
第二篇文章A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,重点讲述了霍金早期成名的经历,突出了他顽强地与疾病作斗争、敢于质疑、坚持梦想、勇于承认错误等可贵品质。
第一段使用one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics介绍了霍金在科学界的地位。
第二段介绍了霍金的早期成就。文章通过“大爆炸”战胜“稳恒态理论”的过程来介绍霍金理论的正确。
第三段以特殊疑问句开头,告诉我们勇敢无畏、意志坚定和敢于承认错误是霍金身上体现出来的科学家的品质。
总的说来,两篇文章是“总—分—总”结构,由三部分构成:
第一部分:简要介绍人物的卓越贡献和地位
第二部分:人物的经历及其科学精神
第三部分:概括人物的优秀品质
[积语料]
一、开门见山,指出要介绍的科学家的历史地位
1.Born in 1911,he was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.
生于1911年,他是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。
2.As we all know,he is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.
众所周知,他是中国21世纪最著名的医学科学家之一。
二、描写要介绍的科学家的重要事迹
1.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research.
因为在科学研究中发挥了重要作用,他在1998年获奖。
2.He is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him.
他是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人,我们都钦佩/尊敬他。
3.He devoted all his life to scientific research and his scientific findings have benefited people all over the world.
他一生致力于科学研究,他的科学发现使全世界人民受益。
三、总结概括科学家的品质
1.His efforts in protecting people’s health and lives are worth celebrating.Let’s salute him and give him the thumbs up!
他为保护人民健康和生命所做的努力值得庆贺。让我们向他致敬,给他点赞!
2.Due to his great achievements and contributions,he was awarded State Preeminent Science and Technology Award in 2005,which is China’s top science award.
由于他的巨大成就和贡献,他于2005年被授予国家最高科学技术奖,这是中国的最高科学奖。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
牛顿是世界著名的科学家,关于他的故事有很多。请你根据他煮鸡蛋的故事,以A Story of Newton为题写一篇短文,并据此发表一下自己对科学精神的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:总体介绍。
主体:故事梗概。
尾段:概括优秀品质。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①牛顿是最杰出、最有天赋的科学家之一。(outstanding,gifted)
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.
②牛顿是如此投入以至于他经常在日常生活中忘却小事。(so...that...)
Newton was so devoted that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
③一个为牛顿做饭的仆人想要出去。
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out.
④他让牛顿自己煮鸡蛋。
He asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.
⑤当仆人回来时,他发现锅里正在煮的不是鸡蛋而是一个怀表。(过去进行时的被动语态)
When the servant came back,he found that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
⑥我们应该知识渊博并全神贯注于我们正在做的事情。(focus on)
We should be knowledgeable and focus on what we are doing.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)用倒装句升级句②
So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
(2)用动词-ing形式短语作状语合并句③和句④。
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.
(3)用what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句改写句⑤。
When the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
(4)用not only...but also...的倒装句改写句⑥。
Not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
Once,a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.However,when the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist,not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
写作二 续写进阶训练之科技与生活
No.1 构建语义场
靓词 [情感描写] frustrated;determined;willing
[动作描写] suspect;blame;decrease;cast;pour;trace;defend;assist
词块 once and for all;subscribe to;thanks to;be to blame;suspect sb of;have an impact on;break out;in charge of;above all;take on the challenge;be familiar with
美句 1.As a young doctor,John Snow became frustrated because no one knew how to prevent or treat cholera.(情绪描写) 2.Described by the authors of the Story of Qian Xuesen as a man with“great scientific thought and scientific spirit”who was patriotic and served his homeland with effort,achievement,and devotion,Qian was an extremely well-respected man.(人物描写) 3.Qian read a lot and was extremely knowledgeable,especially in the area of frontier science research.(人物描写) 4.During the question and answer period after one of Hoyle’s lectures,Hawking stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake in his maths.(动作描写) 5.Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.(人物描写)
靓词 [科学精神] assume vt.假定;设想 breakthrough n.重大进展,突破 experimental adj.实验的 component n.成分process n.步骤v.加工;处理 remodel vt.重塑;改造 sample n.样品;样本;例子substance n.物质 drawback n.缺点,不利条件
[工作职责] certificate n.证明;证(明)书 qualification n.资格;学历 qualify vt.& vi.(使)具有资格;(使)具备合格条件 invent vt.发明;创造 qualified adj.有资格的responsibility n.责任;负责 undertake vt.承担;从事;负责charge n.负责;主管
词块 become involved in参与…… make a great contribution to对……做出突出贡献 in the field of在……领域get over varieties of difficulties克服各种各样的困难 witness success见证成功play a leading role in起着重要的作用 pursue one’s dream追求梦想have made rapid progress in在某方面取得迅速的进展 devote...to...把……用于……receive one’s doctor’s degree获博士学位 face the challenge面对挑战
美句 1.His modesty and diligence,which I admire most,have a deep impact on me. 我最钦佩他的谦逊和勤奋,这对我有着深刻的影响。 2.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself,but for the happiness of the whole world. 正是从他身上我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己,而是为了全世界的幸福。 3.Thanks to the advanced technology,it is possible for people to have access to a wide range of information. 由于先进的科技,人们能够接触到各类的信息。 4.Technological innovation accelerates the pace of life and enhances work efficiency. 科技创新加快了生活的节奏,提升了工作效率。 5.With science and technology developing rapidly,who can predict what inventions there will be in the future 随着科学技术的迅速发展,谁能预测到将来会有什么样的发明
No.2 情景续写(科技给挪威小镇带来光明)
场景导语:(2019·全国Ⅲ卷完形改编)Rjukan小镇位于挪威的山区,由于地处两条高耸山谷之间,小镇每年里有半年的时间得不到太阳光直射→整个小镇显得暮气沉沉,阴暗寒冷,渴望阳光的居民因此痛苦不堪→艺术家Martin于2002年搬到该镇,他决定采取行动……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:马丁定居的原因——优美的风景及丰富的冬季活动→冬季看不到阳光,他感到非常沮丧→利用高科技镜子照亮小镇广场
He was the one who decided to light the town square.
场景续写2:高科技镜子的投资非常大→大多数人赞成→高科技镜子持续为小镇提供阳光并成为特色旅游景点,吸引很多游客→高科技镜子不仅为小镇居民带来了阳光,也带了经济效益
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.
【参考范文】
He was the one who decided to light the town square.Martin settled down here to enjoy the natural beauty.Rjukan is pretty and is known for its winter activities.However,Martin soon found it depressing to live here without sunshine.He turned to the local government for help and was told he was not the first one to make plans to bring sunshine to Rjukan residents.However,due to a lack of technology,it was impossible to make it a reality.Martin didn’t lose heart,and he finally got access to the system of high-tech mirrors.
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.After initial investigations,the investment was estimated to cost half a million dollars.However,the majority voted for the construction of the new system,which would bring great convenience.Even those who were initially against it came around when the mirrors attracted international attention,causing a new wave of tourism.The local residents were more than delighted not only to enjoy the sunshine but also to enjoy the economic boom.
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是红星中学的学生李华,你校英文报将以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题进行征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一位你最尊敬的中国科学家及其研究成果,内容包括:
1.科学家的姓名;
2.科学家的研究成果;
3.该研究成果的意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Scientist I Admire Most
【参考范文】
The Scientist I Admire Most
As we all know,Tu Youyou is considered to be one of the admired scientists.
Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance—artemisinin,one of the world’s most effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.And she volunteered to be the first human subject.It was safe,so she did successful experiments with human patients.She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine which has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.
What impresses me most is her persistence and strong will,which inspire me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Ⅱ.情景续写(优秀品行)(满分25分)
场景导语:“我”热衷于收集各种东西→有一天,“我”在海边捡到了一条特殊又珍贵的项链→回家途中,“我”看到糖果店的玻璃上贴着一张寻物启事:Chrissy寻找一条项链→“我”努力说服自己海报上的项链并不是“我”捡到的那条……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:“我”迫不及待地想将项链占为己有→“我”进行了一系列心理斗争→拨打了海报上的号码→联系或者约见Chrissy
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.
场景续写2:归还项链→失主表示感谢并解释项链之所以特别的原因→主旨升华
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.
【参考范文】
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.There had been many treasured things like mini cola bottles and shakers.Gazing at the necklace,I was totally attracted by its beauty.Should I keep it a secret Could it be Chrissy’s Was it very special I paced back and forth anxiously,not knowing what to do.Finally,my desire to keep it gave way to my resolve to return it.I called the number on the poster and got in touch with Chrissy.
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.I took the necklace out of my pocket and handed it to Chrissy.No sooner had she seen the necklace than she shed tears of joy.She thanked me and explained the necklace was a gift from her late grandmother and that it meant a lot to her.It dawned on me that nothing is more precious than honesty.I was happy I was “a treasured girl” rather than “a trash girl”. (共45张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍科学家的优秀品质
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写作一 应用文写作——如何介绍科学家的优秀品质
NO.1 研教材 积语料
NO.2 仿写作 会运用
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.高级句式
(1)Perhaps no other scientist has had a greater impact on China’s aerospace science than Qian Xuesen.
赏析:本句运用了“否定词+形容词的比较级”结构。此结构表示最高级的意义。本句句意为“也许再没有哪一位科学家比钱学森对中国航天科学的影响更大了。”运用这种结构,来突出说明钱学森做出的巨大贡献。
仿写:John thought
than helping others earn a living by themselves.
约翰认为没有什么比帮助别人自力更生更有意义的事情了。
nothing was more meaningful
(2)However,what might have made him such an outstanding and creative scientist was probably his strong interest in other things,such as music and drawing.
赏析:本句运用了what引导的名词性从句和make复合结构,介绍了钱学森广泛的爱好,以及这些爱好对他开展科学研究的积极影响。写作中恰当运用what引导的名词性从句不仅显得句式多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑,言简意赅。
仿写:
in Physiology or Medicine is her outstanding achievements in medical research and her contribution to human health over the years.
屠呦呦之所以能够获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖,是因为她多年来在医学研究方面所取得的杰出成就以及对人类健康所做的贡献。
What made Tu Youyou awarded the Nobel Prize
2.人物性格描写
Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about. Furthermore,he was quite determined.
赏析:文章第三段告诉我们勇敢无畏、意志坚定和敢于承认错误是霍金身上体现出来的科学家的品质。
仿写: ,
so we know that once she has made up her mind to do something,she will make her dream come true with great confidence.
她是个意志坚定的女孩,对自己的未来充满信心,所以我们知道,一旦她下定决心做某事,她就会满怀信心地实现梦想。
She is a determined girl and confident about her future
二、学结构
该部分有两个阅读语篇,标题分别为THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE和A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,它们从不同的角度简要叙述了科学家钱学森和史蒂芬·霍金的经历、重要贡献、性格特点以及他们所具备的科学素养。
第一篇文章THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE,首先用“否定词+比较级”的句式结构介绍钱学森在科学界的地位,然后用过去分词短语作状语及定语从句举例说明他具体的科学家的品质。
第二、三段使用了in 1911、in 1932、in 1935、over the course of the 1930s and 1940s、during the 1930s、in the 1940s等时间状语介绍了钱学森在归国前的成就。
第四段介绍了钱学森回国后克服困难的经历。文中使用了poor、undeveloped和no等词汇突出介绍了当时中国贫穷的现状,然后使用过渡词nevertheless转折到描写钱学森研发导弹的决心。
第五段介绍了钱学森在航天科技领域所做的开创性工作——Dongfeng missiles、the first generation of Long March rockets、first man-made satellite、much of the technology behind the Shenzhou spacecraft等等。因此钱学森赢得了“中国航天之父”的赞誉。
第六段介绍了钱学森广泛的爱好,以及这些爱好对他开展科学研究的积极影响。
第七段介绍了钱学森的去世及其影响。
第二篇文章A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,重点讲述了霍金早期成名的经历,突出了他顽强地与疾病作斗争、敢于质疑、坚持梦想、勇于承认错误等可贵品质。
第一段使用one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics介绍了霍金在科学界的地位。
第二段介绍了霍金的早期成就。文章通过“大爆炸”战胜“稳恒态理论”的过程来介绍霍金理论的正确。
第三段以特殊疑问句开头,告诉我们勇敢无畏、意志坚定和敢于承认错误是霍金身上体现出来的科学家的品质。
总的说来,两篇文章是“总—分—总”结构,由三部分构成:
第一部分:简要介绍人物的卓越贡献和地位
第二部分:人物的经历及其科学精神
第三部分:概括人物的优秀品质
[积语料]
一、开门见山,指出要介绍的科学家的历史地位
1.Born in 1911,he was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.
生于1911年,他是20世纪最伟大的科学家之一。
2.As we all know,he is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.
众所周知,他是中国21世纪最著名的医学科学家之一。
二、描写要介绍的科学家的重要事迹
1.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research.
因为在科学研究中发挥了重要作用,他在1998年获奖。
2.He is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him. 他是一个如此博学/意志坚强的人,我们都钦佩/尊敬他。
3.He devoted all his life to scientific research and his scientific findings have benefited people all over the world.
他一生致力于科学研究,他的科学发现使全世界人民受益。
三、总结概括科学家的品质
1.His efforts in protecting people’s health and lives are worth celebrating.Let’s salute him and give him the thumbs up!
他为保护人民健康和生命所做的努力值得庆贺。让我们向他致敬,给他点赞!
2.Due to his great achievements and contributions,he was awarded State Preeminent Science and Technology Award in 2005,which is China’s top science award.由于他的巨大成就和贡献,他于2005年被授予国家最高科学技术奖,这是中国的最高科学奖。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
牛顿是世界著名的科学家,关于他的故事有很多。请你根据他煮鸡蛋的故事,以A Story of Newton为题写一篇短文,并据此发表一下自己对科学精神的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段: 。
主体: 。
尾段: 。
总体介绍
故事梗概
概括优秀品质
2.二仿语言规范美观
①牛顿是最杰出、最有天赋的科学家之一。(outstanding,gifted)
Newton is .
②牛顿是如此投入以至于他经常在日常生活中忘却小事。(so...that...)
Newton was he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
③一个为牛顿做饭的仆人想要出去。
one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists
so devoted that
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out.
④他让牛顿自己煮鸡蛋。
⑤当仆人回来时,他发现锅里正在煮的不是鸡蛋而是一个怀表。
(过去进行时的被动语态)
When the servant came back,he found that not eggs but a pocket watch .
⑥我们应该知识渊博并全神贯注于我们正在做的事情。(focus on)
We should be knowledgeable and .
He asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.
was being cooked in the pot
focus on what we are doing
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)用倒装句升级句②
(2)用动词-ing形式短语作状语合并句③和句④。
So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.
(3)用what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句改写句⑤。
(4)用not only...but also...的倒装句改写句⑥。
When the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
Not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
Once,a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.However,when the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist,not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
写作二 续写进阶训练之科技与生活
No.1 构建语义场
No.2 情景续写(科技给挪威小镇带来光明)
No.1 构建语义场
教 材 语 料 整 合 靓词 [情感描写] frustrated;determined;willing
[动作描写] suspect;blame;decrease;cast;pour;trace;defend;assist
词块 once and for all;subscribe to;thanks to;be to blame;suspect sb of;have an impact on;break out;in charge of;above all;take on the challenge;be familiar with
美句 1.As a young doctor,John Snow became frustrated because no one knew how to prevent or treat cholera.(情绪描写)
2.Described by the authors of the Story of Qian Xuesen as a man with“great scientific thought and scientific spirit”who was patriotic and served his homeland with effort,achievement,and devotion,Qian was an extremely well-respected man.(人物描写)
3.Qian read a lot and was extremely knowledgeable,especially in the area of frontier science research.(人物描写)
4.During the question and answer period after one of Hoyle’s lectures,Hawking stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake in his maths.(动作描写)
5.Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.(人物描写)
拓 展 语 料 整 合 靓词 [科学精神]
assume vt.假定;设想 breakthrough n.重大进展,突破 experimental adj.实验的
component n.成分process n.步骤v.加工;处理 remodel vt.重塑;改造
sample n.样品;样本;例子substance n.物质 drawback n.缺点,不利条件
[工作职责]
certificate n.证明;证(明)书 qualification n.资格;学历
qualify vt.& vi.(使)具有资格;(使)具备合格条件 invent vt.发明;创造
qualified adj.有资格的 responsibility n.责任;负责
undertake vt.承担;从事;负责 charge n.负责;主管
拓 展 语 料 整 合 词块 become involved in参与……
make a great contribution to对……做出突出贡献
in the field of在……领域
get over varieties of difficulties克服各种各样的困难
witness success见证成功
play a leading role in起着重要的作用
pursue one’s dream追求梦想
have made rapid progress in在某方面取得迅速的进展
devote...to...把……用于……
receive one’s doctor’s degree获博士学位
face the challenge面对挑战
拓 展 语 料 整 合 美句 1.His modesty and diligence,which I admire most,have a deep impact on me.
我最钦佩他的谦逊和勤奋,这对我有着深刻的影响。
2.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself,but for the happiness of the whole world.
正是从他身上我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己,而是为了全世界的幸福。
3.Thanks to the advanced technology,it is possible for people to have access to a wide range of information.
由于先进的科技,人们能够接触到各类的信息。
4.Technological innovation accelerates the pace of life and enhances work efficiency.
科技创新加快了生活的节奏,提升了工作效率。
5.With science and technology developing rapidly,who can predict what inventions there will be in the future
随着科学技术的迅速发展,谁能预测到将来会有什么样的发明
No.2 情景续写(科技给挪威小镇带来光明)
场景导语:(2019·全国Ⅲ卷完形改编)Rjukan小镇位于挪威的山区,由于地处两条高耸山谷之间,小镇每年里有半年的时间得不到太阳光直射→整个小镇显得暮气沉沉,阴暗寒冷,渴望阳光的居民因此痛苦不堪→艺术家Martin于2002年搬到该镇,他决定采取行动……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:马丁定居的原因——优美的风景及丰富的冬季活动→冬季看不到阳光,他感到非常沮丧→利用高科技镜子照亮小镇广场
He was the one who decided to light the town square.
场景续写2:高科技镜子的投资非常大→大多数人赞成→高科技镜子持续为小镇提供阳光并成为特色旅游景点,吸引很多游客→高科技镜子不仅为小镇居民带来了阳光,也带了经济效益
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.
【参考范文】
He was the one who decided to light the town square.Martin settled down here to enjoy the natural beauty.Rjukan is pretty and is known for its winter activities.However,Martin soon found it depressing to live here without sunshine.He turned to the local government for help and was told he was not the first one to make plans to bring sunshine to Rjukan residents.However,due to a lack of technology,it was impossible to make it a reality.Martin didn’t lose heart,and he finally got access to the system of high-tech mirrors.
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.After initial investigations,the investment was estimated to cost half a million dollars.However,the majority voted for the construction of the new system,which would bring great convenience.Even those who were initially against it came around when the mirrors attracted international attention,causing a new wave of tourism.The local residents were more than delighted not only to enjoy the sunshine but also to enjoy the economic boom.
课 时 测 评 作 业
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是红星中学的学生李华,你校英文报将以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题进行征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍一位你最尊敬的中国科学家及其研究成果,内容包括:
1.科学家的姓名;2.科学家的研究成果;3.该研究成果的意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Scientist I Admire Most
【参考范文】
The Scientist I Admire Most
As we all know,Tu Youyou is considered to be one of the admired scientists.
Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance—artemisinin,one of the world’s most effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.And she volunteered to be the first human subject.It was safe,so she did successful experiments with human patients.She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine which has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.
What impresses me most is her persistence and strong will,which inspire me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Ⅱ.情景续写(优秀品行)(满分25分)
场景导语:“我”热衷于收集各种东西→有一天,“我”在海边捡到了一条特殊又珍贵的项链→回家途中,“我”看到糖果店的玻璃上贴着一张寻物启事:Chrissy寻找一条项链→“我”努力说服自己海报上的项链并不是“我”捡到的那条……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:“我”迫不及待地想将项链占为己有→“我”进行了一系列心理斗争→拨打了海报上的号码→联系或者约见Chrissy
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.
场景续写2:归还项链→失主表示感谢并解释项链之所以特别的原因→主旨升华
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.
【参考范文】
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.There had been many treasured things like mini cola bottles and shakers.Gazing at the necklace,I was totally attracted by its beauty.Should I keep it a secret Could it be Chrissy’s Was it very special I paced back and forth anxiously,not knowing what to do.Finally,my desire to keep it gave way to my resolve to return it.I called the number on the poster and got in touch with Chrissy.
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.I took the necklace out of my pocket and handed it to Chrissy.No sooner had she seen the necklace than she shed tears of joy.She thanked me and explained the necklace was a gift from her late grandmother and that it meant a lot to her.It dawned on me that nothing is more precious than honesty.I was happy I was “a treasured girl” rather than “a trash girl”.
