Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何写健康饮食类文章
No.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.However,there is increasing evidence that the real driver of poor health is not so much fatty food,as it is sugar.
赏析:句式There is increasing evidence that...中,that引导同位语从句。说明导致不良健康的真正原因。
仿写:There is increasing evidence that the rise in temperature has led to an increase in extreme weather and natural disasters worldwide.
越来越多的证据表明,气温上升导致了全球极端天气和自然灾害的增加。
2.It is also better to eat a modest amount of food each time,rather than to eat a lot in one meal,and then a little in the next.
赏析:句式It is better to do...rather than to do...中it作形式主语,两个不定式是并列关系。 it不仅可以作为简单的代词来用,还可作为形式主语或形式宾语,帮助使句子结构更加完整或平衡。后面真正的主语或宾语则由一个从句、不定式或动名词短语来充当。
仿写:It is better to take a modest amount of exercise every day,rather than to exercise a lot in one day and then little for several days.
最好每天都进行适量的运动,而不是某一天练得很多,接着好几天几乎不练。
二、学结构
这是一篇有关健康饮食的科普类说明文,语篇层次分明,结构清晰。作者采用数据分析、下定义、对比等多种手段,阐释了健康饮食的重要原则,条理清晰且有说服力。
作者还多次使用衔接词,使语句和段落衔接连贯,表意清晰,可读性强:
1.语句衔接上,作者除了使用besides、in addition等常见衔接词,还多次使用表示重述(如put more simply)和对比(如rather than)的衔接词。
2.段落衔接上,作者第三段首句用Beyond this巧妙过渡,既承接第二段尾句提出的第一个健康原则,又引出第三段所讲的第二个健康原则。第四段首句用Finally引出最后一个健康原则。
[积语料]
1.首段常用句式
Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attention to...than ever before.
现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更注重……
People come to realize that...is the most valuable thing a person can have.
人们逐渐意识到……是一个人能够拥有的最有价值的东西。
In recent days/Recently/Lately,we have to face the problem that...,which is becoming more and more serious.
最近,我们不得不面临……问题,这个问题变得越来越严重。
2.中段常用句式
When talking about how to solve this problem,different people have different ideas.As far as I know,we should...
当谈到如何解决这个问题时,不同的人有不同的观点。在我看来,我们应该……
Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon.First/Firstly,...Second/Secondly,...
许多原因/因素会导致这个现象。首先……其次……
Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthier and wiser.
早睡早起使一个人更健康,更睿智。
We should keep a balanced diet,which ensures us the necessary nutrition.
我们应该保持均衡的饮食,以保证我们必要的营养。
From my point of view,in order to build healthy eating habits,we should eat more vegetables and less meat and sugar.
在我看来,为了建立健康的饮食习惯,我们应该多吃蔬菜,少吃肉和糖。
3.尾段常用句式
As far as I am concerned,nothing is more important than...
在我看来,没有什么比……更重要。
In conclusion, maintaining a balanced diet is essential for a healthy lifestyle.
总之,保持均衡的饮食对于健康的生活方式至关重要。
So, let’s start making healthier food choices today for a brighter tomorrow.
因此,让我们从今天开始做出更健康的食物选择,迎接更美好的明天。
Remember, what we eat today shapes our health tomorrow.
记住,我们今天吃的食物将塑造我们明天的健康。
To sum up, a nutritious diet can significantly improve our overall well-being.
总而言之,营养丰富的饮食可以显著提升我们的整体健康状况。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假如你是李华,你的朋友Mike目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已,来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给她写一封回信,介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括:
1.列举至少三个自己健康饮食的习惯;
2.给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段:引出文章主题;
主体:陈述自己的饮食习惯,给出建议;
尾段:总结全文,表达希望。
2.二仿语言规范美观
①很遗憾听说你最近体重一直在增长。
I’m sorry to hear that you have been gaining weight recently.
②这使你沮丧。
This makes you depressed.
③你的问题与你的不健康饮食密切相连。
Your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
④我的健康在于均衡饮食。
My health consists in a balanced diet.
⑤我的饮食由大量的水果和绿色蔬菜组成。
My diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.
⑥我的确有始终如一的饮食习惯,不管是假期还是周末。
I do have consistent eating habits,regardless of holidays or weekends.
⑦以上是我健康饮食的诀窍。
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.
⑧你可以通过均衡的饮食来解决你的体重问题。
You can solve your weight problem by having a balanced diet.
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)将句①和句②合并为非限制性定语从句。
I’m sorry to hear that you have been gaining weight recently,which makes you depressed.
(2)将句⑧改成强调句型,强调状语。
It is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you have been gaining weight recently,which makes you depressed.From my point of view,your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
As for me,my health consists in a balanced diet.Firstly,I rarely consume desserts and junk food.Furthermore,my diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.A modest quantity of dairy products also contribute to my health.Most fundamentally,I do have consistent eating habits,regardless of holidays or weekends.
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.In other words,it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作二 续写进阶训练之关注健康饮食
No.1 构建语义场
靓词 [情感描写] bold;modest;temper;ideal
[动作描写] chew;stuff;consume;trick
词块 regardless of,slice...off,make dumplings,at a minimum,put more simply,experience wonderful local dishes,cut down on,rather than,fatty food,one trick to healthy eating
美句 1.Tired,hungry,and not knowing a word of Chinese,we had no idea how to order,so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten. 2.At a minimum,the kinds of food local people consume tell us what they grow in their region,what kinds of lives they lead,and what they like and do not like.(排比) 3.What we can say,however,is that culture and cuisine go hand in hand...(拟人) 4.And in America,people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day...(比较)
靓词 [心理描写]excited adj.激动的 proud adj.自豪的 modest adj.谦虚的 gratitude n.感激
[动作描写]found/establish v.建立;创立 arrange v.安排 donate v.捐赠 express v.表达 stress/emphasize v.强调 conclude v.得出结论 witness vt.见证 innovate v.改革;创新 manufacture/produce vt.生产 present vt.展现;提出 consume vt.消耗
词块 with the support of在……的支持下 come up with提出(计划、想法等) depend on依赖;依靠;取决于 stress the importance of强调……的重要性 take immediate action立刻采取行动 play an important role扮演重要角色 be listed as被列为 behave respectfully towards others尊重他人 in a polite/friendly manner以礼貌/友好的方式 behave/conduct oneself举止得体 mind table manners注意餐桌礼仪 take sth seriously认真对待某事 follow formal table manners遵循正式的餐桌礼仪
美句 1.The key to healthy eating is diversity.Trying different ingredients and cooking methods every day can satisfy the taste buds while ensuring the body gets comprehensive nutrition. 健康饮食的关键在于多样化。每天尝试不同的食材和烹饪方式,既能满足味蕾,又能确保身体获得全面的营养。 2.Healthy eating requires long-term commitment, not short-term dieting.A balanced diet combined with regular exercise is the key to maintaining good health. 健康饮食需要长期坚持,而不是短期的节食。合理的饮食搭配和规律的运动是保持健康的关键。 3.That’s why he was awarded more than one national prize for his spirit of innovation and dedication. 那就是为什么他因其创新和奉献精神而获得了不止一项国家奖。 4.China is a country with a long history,whose culture of food is essential for its development.中国是一个拥有悠久历史的国家,它的饮食文化对其发展非常重要。 5.As far as I’m concerned,we should develop a healthy eating habit to build up our strength.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study. 我认为,我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯来增强体力。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
No.2 情景续写(少年关注健康饮食,创业研发无糖饮料)
场景导语:15岁的发明家兼创业者汤姆注意到学校里很多学生大量饮用含糖饮料,于是想创造一种更健康的便携饮品选择。他的母亲一直苦于找不到一种方便携带水果泡水的工具,这启发他设计了“趣味瓶”(Fun Bottle)。这种瓶子内置了一个过滤器,能让水果和蔬菜的风味以及天然糖分渗入水中,同时避免种子和果皮混入。这是一个简单但巧妙的设计,汤姆引以为傲,接下来汤姆会做什么呢
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:根据第一段的段首句可知,这个设计简单但是非常巧妙,汤姆为之自豪。第一段应描写:汤姆建立公司,开始生产,并将其投入市场进行销售,以及汤姆的感受。
线索:汤姆将新产品投入市场并进行销售→让汤姆最自豪的是,他不仅可以给青少年提供更健康的饮料,而且可以将自己的利润回馈社会→由于其创新精神和奉献社会的精神,汤姆受到了表彰
It’s a simple yet brilliant design,of which Tom is proud.
场景续写2:根据第二段的段首句可知,在颁奖仪式上,汤姆被邀请发表演讲。第二段应描写:尽管受到了表彰,汤姆仍然保持谦虚。在颁奖仪式上发表演讲时,汤姆向支持过他的人们表示感谢,并呼吁青少年多关注健康饮食。
线索:尽管受到了表彰,汤姆仍然保持谦虚→首先,汤姆向支持过他的人们表示感谢;其次,他呼吁青少年多关注健康饮食→汤姆分享自己成功的秘诀
At the award ceremony,Tom was invited to deliver a speech.
【参考范文】
It’s a simple yet brilliant design,of which Tom is proud.Tom put the simple yet brilliant design to practice.With the support of his parents,Tom founded his own company and began production.With everything arranged,Tom is excited to be selling the Fun Bottle on his website and in stores,which turned out to be a success.What Tom feels most proud of is the opportunities that Fun Bottle presents.Not only does it help provide healthy alternatives for the teenagers,but it enables Tom to donate part of his profit to charity.Therefore,his company was listed as the most brilliant company of the year and he was awarded more than one national prize for his spirit of innovation and dedication.
At the award ceremony,Tom was invited to deliver a speech.With so many prizes,Tom,this teenage innovator remained modest.First,he expressed his genuine gratitude to whoever supported him in the past.Then he stressed the importance of teenage health.In a world filled with processed food and drinks,everyone is expected to take immediate action.As for his success,he concluded that careful observation,thorough investigation and creative think play an important role.He ended his speech by offering some advice,“Think of the well-being of all people,observe life carefully and always try to creatively think out of the box.”
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
人们的健康很大程度上受制于饮食习惯。请你写一篇英语作文,就如何养成健康的饮食习惯表明你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Healthy eating habits are very important for our health.But how can we form a healthy eating habit
In my opinion,we should eat fresh vegetables and fruit every day,as they supply vitamins to us.Besides,a glass of milk in the morning or at night is also beneficial.Last but not least,we should focus on a balanced diet,which assures us the necessary nutrients.Of course,junk food is a fatal killer for our health,so we should stay away from it.What’s more,it is a very bad habit to skip breakfast,which does great harm to our health.
All in all,we should eat healthy food to keep ourselves energetic.
Ⅱ.情景续写(为室友做家乡煎饼)(满分25分)
场景导语:三位女生Maya、Sarah和Mary首次相遇并决定共同分享一间公寓,开启大学生活。Maya因思念家人而感到孤独,但在新朋友的陪伴下渐渐找到慰藉。她们一起度过了在Pizza Hut的晚餐时光,展示出了各自的情感和品格。回到公寓后,Sarah提议为Maya做点什么,希望让她开心……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:Sarah提议→Mary赞同→商量决定为Maya做煎饼,让她知道她并不孤单→准备做煎饼
Sarah’s suggestion was met with enthusiasm from Mary.
场景续写2:Maya醒来看到煎饼很惊喜、很感到→一起分享煎饼、聊天→思念家人的心情得到缓解
As Maya woke up,the pancakes were ready on the table.
【参考范文】
Sarah’s suggestion was met with enthusiasm from Mary.They both knew that Maya was struggling with homesickness,and they wanted to make her feel more at home.“Let’s plan a surprise for her tomorrow,” Mary whispered,her eyes sparkling with excitement.They decided to make homemade pancakes for Maya,something that would remind her of home-cooked meals.They wanted to make it clear that they were all in this together and that Maya was not alone.The next morning,Sarah and Mary woke up early and started cooking.
As Maya woke up,the pancakes were ready on the table.Maya walked out,rubbing her eyes,and was greeted by the sight of her new roommates setting the table.“Good morning,Maya!” they cheerfully greeted.Maya’s eyes widened with surprise and gratitude.She couldn’t believe they had gone through all this trouble just for her.As they sat down to eat,the girls chatted more openly than the night before.They shared stories about their families,their dreams,and their fears.The laughter and the warmth of the moment began to ease Maya’s homesickness. (共41张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Writing
写作一 应用文写作——如何写健康饮食类文章
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写作一 应用文写作——如何写健康饮食类文章
NO.1 研教材 积语料
NO.2 仿写作 会运用
NO.1 研教材·积语料
[研教材]
一、学语言
1.However,there is increasing evidence that the real driver of poor health is not so much fatty food,as it is sugar.
赏析:句式There is increasing evidence that...中,that引导同位语从句。说明导致不良健康的真正原因。
仿写:
越来越多的证据表明,气温上升导致了全球极端天气和自然灾害的增加。
There is increasing evidence that the rise in temperature has led to an increase in extreme weather and natural disasters worldwide.
2.It is also better to eat a modest amount of food each time,rather than to eat a lot in one meal,and then a little in the next.
赏析:句式It is better to do...rather than to do...中it作形式主语,两个不定式是并列关系。 it不仅可以作为简单的代词来用,还可作为形式主语或形式宾语,帮助使句子结构更加完整或平衡。后面真正的主语或宾语则由一个从句、不定式或动名词短语来充当。
仿写:
最好每天都进行适量的运动,而不是某一天练得很多,接着好几天几乎不练。
It is better to take a modest amount of exercise every day,rather than to exercise a lot in one day and then little for several days.
二、学结构
这是一篇有关健康饮食的科普类说明文,语篇层次分明,结构清晰。作者采用数据分析、下定义、对比等多种手段,阐释了健康饮食的重要原则,条理清晰且有说服力。
作者还多次使用衔接词,使语句和段落衔接连贯,表意清晰,可读性强:
1.语句衔接上,作者除了使用besides、in addition等常见衔接词,还多次使用表示重述(如put more simply)和对比(如rather than)的衔接词。
2.段落衔接上,作者第三段首句用Beyond this巧妙过渡,既承接第二段尾句提出的第一个健康原则,又引出第三段所讲的第二个健康原则。第四段首句用Finally引出最后一个健康原则。
[积语料]
1.首段常用句式
Nowadays people are beginning to pay more attention to...than ever before.
现在人们开始比以往任何时候都更注重……
People come to realize that...is the most valuable thing a person can have.
人们逐渐意识到……是一个人能够拥有的最有价值的东西。
In recent days/Recently/Lately,we have to face the problem that..., which is becoming more and more serious.
最近,我们不得不面临……问题,这个问题变得越来越严重。
2.中段常用句式
When talking about how to solve this problem,different people have different ideas.As far as I know,we should...
当谈到如何解决这个问题时,不同的人有不同的观点。在我看来,我们应该……
Many reasons/factors will contribute to the phenomenon.First/ Firstly,...Second/Secondly,...
许多原因/因素会导致这个现象。首先……其次……
Early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthier and wiser.
早睡早起使一个人更健康,更睿智。
We should keep a balanced diet,which ensures us the necessary nutrition.
我们应该保持均衡的饮食,以保证我们必要的营养。
From my point of view,in order to build healthy eating habits,we should eat more vegetables and less meat and sugar.
在我看来,为了建立健康的饮食习惯,我们应该多吃蔬菜,少吃肉和糖。
3.尾段常用句式
As far as I am concerned,nothing is more important than...
在我看来,没有什么比……更重要。
In conclusion, maintaining a balanced diet is essential for a healthy lifestyle.总之,保持均衡的饮食对于健康的生活方式至关重要。
So, let’s start making healthier food choices today for a brighter tomorrow.
因此,让我们从今天开始做出更健康的食物选择,迎接更美好的明天。
Remember, what we eat today shapes our health tomorrow.
记住,我们今天吃的食物将塑造我们明天的健康。
To sum up, a nutritious diet can significantly improve our overall well-being.
总而言之,营养丰富的饮食可以显著提升我们的整体健康状况。
NO.2 仿写作·会运用
[典题示例]
假如你是李华,你的朋友Mike目前正因体重暴增而苦恼不已,来信向你咨询关于健康饮食的问题。请你给她写一封回信,介绍一下你的饮食习惯。内容包括:
1.列举至少三个自己健康饮食的习惯;2.给出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
[仿写步骤]
1.一仿结构布局合理
首段: ;
主体: ;
尾段: 。
引出文章主题
陈述自己的饮食习惯,给出建议
总结全文,表达希望
2.二仿语言规范美观
①很遗憾听说你最近体重一直在增长。
I’m sorry to hear that recently.
②这使你沮丧。
③你的问题与你的不健康饮食密切相连。
Your problem your unhealthy diet.
you have been gaining weight
This makes you depressed.
is closely associated with
④我的健康在于均衡饮食。
My health .
⑤我的饮食由大量的水果和绿色蔬菜组成。
My diet fruit and green vegetables.
⑥我的确有始终如一的饮食习惯,不管是假期还是周末。
I do have consistent eating habits, .
consists in a balanced diet
consists of quantities of
regardless of holidays or weekends
⑦以上是我健康饮食的诀窍。
The above are .
⑧你可以通过均衡的饮食来解决你的体重问题。
You by having a balanced diet.
the tricks of my healthy diet
can solve your weight problem
3.三仿句式高级表达
(1)将句①和句②合并为非限制性定语从句。
(2)将句⑧改成强调句型,强调状语。
I’m sorry to hear that you have been gaining weight recently, which makes you depressed.
It is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
4.四仿教材连句成篇
注意使用恰当的过渡衔接词汇。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you have been gaining weight recently,which makes you depressed.From my point of view,your problem is closely associated with your unhealthy diet.
As for me,my health consists in a balanced diet.Firstly,I rarely consume desserts and junk food.Furthermore,my diet consists of quantities of fruit and green vegetables.A modest quantity of dairy products also contribute to my health.Most fundamentally,I do have consistent eating habits,regardless of holidays or weekends.
The above are the tricks of my healthy diet.In other words,it is by having a balanced diet that you can solve your weight problem.
Yours,
Li Hua
showi
写作二 续写进阶训练之关注健康饮食
No.1 构建语义场
No.2 情景续写(少年关注健康饮食,创业研发无糖饮料)
No.1 构建语义场
教 材 语 料 整 合 靓词 [情感描写] bold;modest;temper;ideal
[动作描写] chew;stuff;consume;trick
词块 regardless of,slice...off,make dumplings,at a minimum,put more simply,experience wonderful local dishes,cut down on,rather than,fatty food,one trick to healthy eating
美句 1.Tired,hungry,and not knowing a word of Chinese,we had no idea how to order,so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten.
2.At a minimum,the kinds of food local people consume tell us what they grow in their region,what kinds of lives they lead,and what they like and do not like.(排比)
3.What we can say,however,is that culture and cuisine go hand in hand...(拟人)
4.And in America,people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day...(比较)
拓 展 语 料 整 合 靓词 [心理描写]excited adj.激动的 proud adj.自豪的 modest adj.谦虚的 gratitude n.感激
[动作描写]found/establish v.建立;创立 arrange v.安排 donate v.捐赠 express v.表达 stress/emphasize v.强调 conclude v.得出结论 witness vt.见证 innovate v.改革;创新 manufacture/produce vt.生产 present vt.展现;提出 consume vt.消耗
词块 with the support of在……的支持下 come up with提出(计划、想法等) depend on依赖;依靠;取决于 stress the importance of强调……的重要性 take immediate action立刻采取行动
play an important role扮演重要角色 be listed as被列为 behave respectfully towards others尊重他人 in a polite/friendly manner以礼貌/友好的方式 behave/conduct oneself举止得体
mind table manners注意餐桌礼仪 take sth seriously认真对待某事 follow formal table manners遵循正式的餐桌礼仪
拓 展 语 料 整 合 美句 1.The key to healthy eating is diversity.Trying different ingredients and cooking methods every day can satisfy the taste buds while ensuring the body gets comprehensive nutrition.
健康饮食的关键在于多样化。每天尝试不同的食材和烹饪方式,既能满足味蕾,又能确保身体获得全面的营养。
2.Healthy eating requires long-term commitment, not short-term dieting.A balanced diet combined with regular exercise is the key to maintaining good health.
健康饮食需要长期坚持,而不是短期的节食。合理的饮食搭配和规律的运动是保持健康的关键。
3.That’s why he was awarded more than one national prize for his spirit of innovation and dedication.那就是为什么他因其创新和奉献精神而获得了不止一项国家奖。
4.China is a country with a long history,whose culture of food is essential for its development.中国是一个拥有悠久历史的国家,它的饮食文化对其发展非常重要。
5.As far as I’m concerned,we should develop a healthy eating habit to build up our strength.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study.
我认为,我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯来增强体力。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
No.2 情景续写(少年关注健康饮食,创业研发无糖饮料)
场景导语:15岁的发明家兼创业者汤姆注意到学校里很多学生大量饮用含糖饮料,于是想创造一种更健康的便携饮品选择。他的母亲一直苦于找不到一种方便携带水果泡水的工具,这启发他设计了“趣味瓶”(Fun Bottle)。这种瓶子内置了一个过滤器,能让水果和蔬菜的风味以及天然糖分渗入水中,同时避免种子和果皮混入。这是一个简单但巧妙的设计,汤姆引以为傲,接下来汤姆会做什么呢
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:根据第一段的段首句可知,这个设计简单但是非常巧妙,汤姆为之自豪。第一段应描写:汤姆建立公司,开始生产,并将其投入市场进行销售,以及汤姆的感受。
线索:汤姆将新产品投入市场并进行销售→让汤姆最自豪的是,他不仅可以给青少年提供更健康的饮料,而且可以将自己的利润回馈社会→由于其创新精神和奉献社会的精神,汤姆受到了表彰
It’s a simple yet brilliant design,of which Tom is proud.
场景续写2:根据第二段的段首句可知,在颁奖仪式上,汤姆被邀请发表演讲。第二段应描写:尽管受到了表彰,汤姆仍然保持谦虚。在颁奖仪式上发表演讲时,汤姆向支持过他的人们表示感谢,并呼吁青少年多关注健康饮食。
线索:尽管受到了表彰,汤姆仍然保持谦虚→首先,汤姆向支持过他的人们表示感谢;其次,他呼吁青少年多关注健康饮食→汤姆分享自己成功的秘诀
At the award ceremony,Tom was invited to deliver a speech.
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It’s a simple yet brilliant design,of which Tom is proud.Tom put the simple yet brilliant design to practice.With the support of his parents,Tom founded his own company and began production.With everything arranged,Tom is excited to be selling the Fun Bottle on his website and in stores,which turned out to be a success.What Tom feels most proud of is the opportunities that Fun Bottle presents.Not only does it help provide healthy alternatives for the teenagers,but it enables Tom to donate part of his profit to charity.Therefore,his company was listed as the most brilliant company of the year and he was awarded more than one national prize for his spirit of innovation and dedication.
At the award ceremony,Tom was invited to deliver a speech.With so many prizes,Tom,this teenage innovator remained modest.First,he expressed his genuine gratitude to whoever supported him in the past.Then he stressed the importance of teenage health.In a world filled with processed food and drinks,everyone is expected to take immediate action.As for his success,he concluded that careful observation,thorough investigation and creative think play an important role.He ended his speech by offering some advice,“Think of the well-being of all people,observe life carefully and always try to creatively think out of the box.”
课 时 测 评 作 业
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
人们的健康很大程度上受制于饮食习惯。请你写一篇英语作文,就如何养成健康的饮食习惯表明你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Healthy eating habits are very important for our health.But how can we form a healthy eating habit
In my opinion,we should eat fresh vegetables and fruit every day,as they supply vitamins to us.Besides,a glass of milk in the morning or at night is also beneficial.Last but not least,we should focus on a balanced diet,which assures us the necessary nutrients.Of course,junk food is a fatal killer for our health,so we should stay away from it.What’s more,it is a very bad habit to skip breakfast,which does great harm to our health.
All in all,we should eat healthy food to keep ourselves energetic.
Ⅱ.情景续写(为室友做家乡煎饼)(满分25分)
场景导语:三位女生Maya、Sarah和Mary首次相遇并决定共同分享一间公寓,开启大学生活。Maya因思念家人而感到孤独,但在新朋友的陪伴下渐渐找到慰藉。她们一起度过了在Pizza Hut的晚餐时光,展示出了各自的情感和品格。回到公寓后,Sarah提议为Maya做点什么,希望让她开心……
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
场景续写1:Sarah提议→Mary赞同→商量决定为Maya做煎饼,让她知道她并不孤单→准备做煎饼
Sarah’s suggestion was met with enthusiasm from Mary.
场景续写2:Maya醒来看到煎饼很惊喜、很感到→一起分享煎饼、聊天→思念家人的心情得到缓解
As Maya woke up,the pancakes were ready on the table.
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Sarah’s suggestion was met with enthusiasm from Mary.They both knew that Maya was struggling with homesickness,and they wanted to make her feel more at home.“Let’s plan a surprise for her tomorrow,” Mary whispered,her eyes sparkling with excitement.They decided to make homemade pancakes for Maya,something that would remind her of home-cooked meals.They wanted to make it clear that they were all in this together and that Maya was not alone.The next morning,Sarah and Mary woke up early and started cooking.
As Maya woke up,the pancakes were ready on the table.Maya walked out,rubbing her eyes,and was greeted by the sight of her new roommates setting the table.“Good morning,Maya!” they cheerfully greeted.Maya’s eyes widened with surprise and gratitude.She couldn’t believe they had gone through all this trouble just for her.As they sat down to eat,the girls chatted more openly than the night before.They shared stories about their families,their dreams,and their fears.The laughter and the warmth of the moment began to ease Maya’s homesickness.
