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Section Ⅵ
Writing
目 录
写作项目——Write a news report
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Write a news report
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于保护文化遗产的新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的客观性、真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词语和过于复杂的句型。此外,新闻报道一般不发表主观评论,常提供背景信息,多用直接引语与被动语态。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学逻辑组材
1.课文的标题使用了动词短语,体现了简明精练的特点。
2.第一段中的前两句是导语,讲该文化遗产保护项目的概况,包括时间、地点、人物、事件等要素,使读者对该新闻报道的要点一目了然。导语之后是一些支撑性细节信息。主体是第二、三段,报道了莫高窟的重要的历史文化价值和制作莫高窟文物数码图像对传承历史文化,增进国际文化理解、交流与合作的重要意义。结语是第三段的结尾部分,点明推广莫高窟文化的影响。
三、学主旨升华
结语部分使用了直接引语,引用一位研究者的原话,增强了文章的真实性和权威性,起到了指明意义、深化主题的作用。
四、学亮点表达
1.第一段第二句中help increase,简洁、概括地表达出此行的目的。第三句中a key stop,意为“关键的一站”,表达简洁,清晰易懂,stop为熟词生义。
2.第二段主要用时间副词long,today和程度副词even串联本段,使表达更加灵活、确切。
3.第三段第三句句首使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句,在句中意为“正如”, 段中promote, educate, safeguard, understand等动词寓意深刻,紧扣主题。连用两次动名词短语作主语Appreciating the cultural heritage,强调了文化遗产在国际交流、增进理解方面的重要作用。同时也总结了全文,升华了主旨。
针对练笔/完成句子
①________________, fish can't live without water.
众所周知,鱼儿离不开水。
②_______________________________________________to avoid being infected by diseases.
经常洗手是避免被疾病传染的有效方法之一。
As is known to all
Washing hands regularly is one of the effective ways
写作项目指导
Write a news report about a person or group who works to protect our cultural heritage
——写一篇个人或团队致力于保护我们文化遗产的新闻报道
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1 ·to write a title to get the reader's attention
·to introduce briefly a person or group
(who, what, when, where, and why)
Part 2 to describe what the person or group does (the facts, details, examples etc.)
Part 3 to end with a short summary
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 导语简述新闻梗概
①The post-95s team participated in the protection and development of ancient villages in Guangxi, using “black technology” to________________________.
“95后”团队参与到广西古村落的保护和开发,利用 “黑科技”让民族文化“活”起来。
bring ethnic culture to life
②Wuhan folk customs expert Liu Qianding __________________
____________to promoting the history and culture of Wuhan, and _____________________________________the historical and cultural buildings of Wuhan.
武汉民俗专家刘谦定长期致力于弘扬武汉历史文化,为保护武汉历史文化建筑做了很多实事。
has long been
committed
has done many practical things to protect
③Dunhuang cultural conservationist Zhang Jianjun and his wife are willing to be lonely and ____________________in the depths of the desert for years, ________________the ancient city ruins of Dafang Pancheng and a section of the Great Wall that is about 2 kilometers long with care and love.
敦煌文保员张建军与妻子甘于寂寞,常年驻守在大漠深处,一起用心用情守护大方盘城古城遗址和一段长约2公里的长城。
have been stationed
guarding together
第二部分 主体阐释个人或团队致力于保护文化遗产
1.描述文化遗产的词汇
①__________n. 文明
②__________ adj. 传统的
③_______adj. 独特的
④___________ 追溯到
⑤___________ 传递
⑥_____________ ……的象征
civilization
traditional
unique
date back to
pass down
the symbol of
2.保护文化遗产所用的技术
①3D laser scanning technology 三维激光扫描技术
②3D digital repair technology 三维数字化修复技术
③Mobile terminal technology 移动终端技术
④Cloud platform and application services 云平台及应用服务
3.致力于保护文化遗产常用词块
①____________________ 采取有效的措施
②____________________ 帮助修理古庙
③___________________ 拍照
④educate the public widely ________________
⑤show cultural relics to the citizens _________________
⑥raise money _________
take effective measures
help repair old temples
take photos/pictures of
广泛教育公众
向市民展示文物
筹集资金
4.细节支撑句
①They travel to ___________________________cultural relics as well as old houses.
他们四处寻找文物和老房子并且拍摄照片。
②Their money and abilities____________.
他们的财力和能力有限。
search for and take pictures of
are limited
③They will also show the public _______________________of cultural relics by showing the pictures to them.他们也会通过向公众展示照片的形式让公众了解令人担忧的文物现状。
④They help in the form of raising money and _______________to take part.他们以筹集资金的形式提供帮助,并号召人们参与进来。
the worrying situation
call on people
第三部分 结语对新闻报道进行小结
①Our cultural heritage, our national treasure. It's everyone's duty and responsibility____________.
文化遗产,我们的国宝。保护国宝,人人有责。
②All in all, we shouldn't ________________________any our cultural heritage site.
总之,我们决不允许任何人破坏任何文化遗址。
to protect it
allow anyone to destroy
③More importantly, we must do all we can to ________________
______protecting our cultural heritage.
更重要的是,我们要竭尽所能,积极投身于保护文化遗产。
take an active part
in
[随堂针对练笔]
文化遗产面临着各种风险,有很多因素影响着文化遗产。请以“主题句+支撑句”的模式写一个60词左右的片段。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文:
There are many factors that affect cultural heritage. First, natural forces threaten cultural heritage. Long-term forces of nature, such as wind, water and temperature, can gradually damage these heritage. Second, another important factor is human activities, which can do a lot of damage to cultural heritage and nature. What's more, the large number of tourists also counts a lot.
写作素材储备
(一)新闻报道常用开头句
①Yesterday afternoon, Mr Liu as well as his team was working to ....
昨天下午,刘先生和他的团队正在工作……
②Last week witnessed our ... project in our city.
上周见证了我们城市……的项目。
③A/An ... exhibition was successfully held in our school today.
今天我校成功举办了……展览。
④Last Sunday, Senior One students from Hongxing High School went to ..., located in the downtown area of our city, to appreciate a/an ... exhibition.上周日,来自红星高中的高一学生去了……,位于我市的市中心,去欣赏……展览。
⑤In order to encourage students to ..., our school organized a/an ... activity on October 30th.
为了鼓励学生……,在10月30日,我们学校组织了一次……的活动。
(二)新闻报道常用结尾句
①Not only did they realize the importance of ..., but they also found the ways to ....
他们不仅意识到……的重要性,而且还找到了……的方法。
②... was a great success. It not only enriched ..., but also helped us learn more about ....
……取得了巨大的成功。它不仅丰富了……,也帮助我们更多地了解……
③With their enthusiastic support and active participation, ... was undoubtedly a success.
在他们的热情支持和积极参与下,……无疑是成功的。
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.Although _______________________around the globe, only Chinese paper-cutting was listed in the UNESCO Intangible Cultural Heritage (ICH) lists, because it _________________more than 1,500 years and it __________
_______________of the people throughout China.
虽然剪纸在世界各地都很流行,但只有中国剪纸被列入联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产(ICH)名录,因为它有1 500多年的历史,代表着整个中国人民的文化价值。
paper-cutting is popular
has a history of
represents
cultural values
2.Chinese calligraphy is ____________________of Chinese ICH.
中国书法是中国非物质文化遗产里一个著名的艺术形式。
3.Having a history of about 160 years, it has _______________
_______ in Chinese folk art.
它有大约160年的历史,在中国民间艺术中创造了许多“第一”。
a well-known art form
created many
“firsts”
4.ICH in China also______________________________, Chinese Acupuncture, Shadow Play, and so on.
在中国,非物质文化遗产还有端午节、中国针灸、皮影戏等等。
5.They should be protected because they are ________________
China's culture.
它们应该受到保护,因为它们是中国文化的一个强有力的象征。
includes the Dragon Boat Festival
a strong symbol of
6.This type of expression has been widely practised in China and _________________________in Chinese culture.
这种表达方式在中国被广泛使用,并且在中国文化中普遍受到高度尊重。
has been highly respected
Ⅱ.完成语段
①_______________________________________ (说到文物保护), I think it's very important for us to protect cultural relics.
When it comes to cultural relics protection
As we all know, cultural relics can help us know a period of history, and ②_________________________________ (有助于文化研究). And cultural relics are precious wealth left by our ancestors, which ③_______________________________ (在历史上起着重要的作用). In addition, they can ④__________________________________ (加深对祖国的爱).
contribute to cultural research
play an important role in history
deepen the love for our motherland
What should we do First, we should make relevant laws and
⑤__________________________________ (加大对违法行为的惩罚力度). Second, we should raise awareness of the protection of cultural relics and ⑥_________________________ (积极保护文物). As students, we should be civilized tourists and ⑦__________________________ (不破坏文物).
increase the punishment for illegal acts
actively protect cultural relics
not destroy cultural relics
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi's 20-member team was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected Areas' International Ranger Awards.
Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our global conservation efforts, helping to stem biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges”.
Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win-win situation.
After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve.
Established in 1963, Wolong is the country's earliest panda reserve. It experienced serious human-animal conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s. In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the country's first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve.
In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with the World Wide Fund for Nature to establish the China Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal.
At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers. With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life-threatening adventure. Plastic woven bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases. For Shi, the real challenges are natural disasters, which cannot be predicted.
He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over a 400-meter-long mountain pass, about 5,500 meters in altitude, which was the most dangerous place for us with snow depth on the ground reaching up to two meters and the wind blowing heavily, ” Shi says. Suddenly Shi heard thundering sounds and a mass of snow came tumbling down the mountain. Quickly throwing himself at the rock and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.
注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;
2.重点描述Shi遇见大熊猫的惊喜,要求逻辑合理。
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job.
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参考范文:
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. Shi has a soft spot for giant pandas. Although he has worked in the reserve for three decades, he has only met the pandas twice. In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in the forest, but didn't spot one. When they were about to give up, there was
a sound from the bamboo forest behind, and they turned around and saw a fat panda about six meters away, hiding in the woods. It ran quickly. It was funny to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild. The scene is just like hide-and-seek, which will never be forgotten.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
International tourism is becoming interestingly popular, and large numbers of people from all over the world come to visit famous places such as the Great Wall of China and the Sistine Chapel in the Vatican. 1 They've thrown rubbish everywhere, brought more traffic and even done serious damage to ancient relics.
As for the damage, there are many different causes. For example, the paintings in the Sistine Chapel are being damaged by people breathing onto them when they visit. 2 That may raise the humidity (湿气) of the air and damage the paintings. Damage in other places such as the Great Wall is because of tourists climbing on delicate (脆弱的) areas. Besides, roads have also been built to help visitors climb the Wall easily. These activities can cause a lot of damage to the area.
3 Firstly, we have to cut down tourist numbers, because fewer visitors will result in less damage. Secondly, we should make strict rules about which areas people can visit and what they can do when they get there. 4 People will not be allowed to walk off the paths. Visitors to indoor places can be asked to wear masks to protect the paintings.
In short, it is necessary to control tourism at famous places. 5 And people who live hundreds of years later will have no chance to see these great places.
A.For example, special paths can be built.
B.What can we do to deal with these problems
C.The Great Wall was built over 2,000 years ago.
D.However, these visitors have caused many problems.
E.Traveling is the best way for us to get to know the world.
F.If we do not do this, these places will disappear from our planet.
G.Their breath contains very small drops of water that are present in the air.
语篇解读:本文是一篇议论文。文章就如何保护旅游胜地提出了几点建议。
1.选D 上文“International tourism ...Vatican.”和下文“They've thrown rubbish ...relics.”说明游客给旅游地点带来了问题。 D项承上启下,与上文形成转折,引出下文。选项中的these visitors和下文中的They指代对象一致,符合题意。
2.选G 上文“For example, ... visit.”和下文“That may raise the ...the paintings.”说明人的呼吸对绘画作品造成破坏。 G项承接上文,引出下文,选项中的breath和上文中的breathing语义一致,符合题意。
3.选B 设空处位于本段段首,应为本段的主题句。由下文可知本段的主题应该与如何保护旅游胜地有关。 B项引出下文,下文中的“Firstly,we have to ...”和 “Secondly,we should ...”是对空处的回答。
4.选A 下文“People will not be allowed to walk off the paths.”说明人们必须走小路。A项引出下文,选项中的paths和下文中的paths描述对象一致。
5.选F 上文“In short, ... places.”和下文“And people ...places.”说明如果不控制名胜旅游,这些名胜可能会消失。F项承接上文,引出下文,选项中的these places will disappear from our planet和下文中的“will have no chance to see these great places”语义一致。Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Write a news report
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于保护文化遗产的新闻报道。新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的客观性、真实性、准确性,语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂,不必追求过分花哨的词语和过于复杂的句型。此外,新闻报道一般不发表主观评论,常提供背景信息,多用直接引语与被动语态。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学逻辑组材
1.课文的标题使用了动词短语,体现了简明精练的特点。
2.第一段中的前两句是导语,讲该文化遗产保护项目的概况,包括时间、地点、人物、事件等要素,使读者对该新闻报道的要点一目了然。导语之后是一些支撑性细节信息。主体是第二、三段,报道了莫高窟的重要的历史文化价值和制作莫高窟文物数码图像对传承历史文化,增进国际文化理解、交流与合作的重要意义。结语是第三段的结尾部分,点明推广莫高窟文化的影响。
三、学主旨升华
结语部分使用了直接引语,引用一位研究者的原话,增强了文章的真实性和权威性,起到了指明意义、深化主题的作用。
四、学亮点表达
1.第一段第二句中help increase,简洁、概括地表达出此行的目的。第三句中a key stop,意为“关键的一站”,表达简洁,清晰易懂,stop为熟词生义。
2.第二段主要用时间副词long,today和程度副词even串联本段,使表达更加灵活、确切。
3.第三段第三句句首使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句,在句中意为“正如”, 段中promote, educate, safeguard, understand等动词寓意深刻,紧扣主题。连用两次动名词短语作主语Appreciating the cultural heritage,强调了文化遗产在国际交流、增进理解方面的重要作用。同时也总结了全文,升华了主旨。
①______________, fish can't live without water.
众所周知,鱼儿离不开水。
②________________________________________ to avoid being infected by diseases.
经常洗手是避免被疾病传染的有效方法之一。
写作项目指导
Write a news report about a person or group who works to protect our cultural heritage
——写一篇个人或团队致力于保护我们文化遗产的新闻报道
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1 ·to write a title to get the reader's attention ·to introduce briefly a person or group (who, what, when, where, and why)
Part 2 to describe what the person or group does (the facts, details, examples etc.)
Part 3 to end with a short summary
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 导语简述新闻梗概
①The post 95s team participated in the protection and development of ancient villages in Guangxi, using “black technology” to ________________________________.
“95后”团队参与到广西古村落的保护和开发,利用 “黑科技”让民族文化“活”起来。
②Wuhan folk customs expert Liu Qianding promoting the history and culture of Wuhan, and ________________________________________________ the historical and cultural buildings of Wuhan.
武汉民俗专家刘谦定长期致力于弘扬武汉历史文化,为保护武汉历史文化建筑做了很多实事。
③Dunhuang cultural conservationist Zhang Jianjun and his wife are willing to be lonely and ________________________ in the depths of the desert for years, ________________________ the ancient city ruins of Dafang Pancheng and a section of the Great Wall that is about 2 kilometers long with care and love.
敦煌文保员张建军与妻子甘于寂寞,常年驻守在大漠深处,一起用心用情守护大方盘城古城遗址和一段长约2公里的长城。
第二部分 主体阐释个人或团队致力于保护文化遗产
1.描述文化遗产的词汇
①__________ n. 文明
②__________ adj. 传统的
③__________ adj. 独特的
④______________ 追溯到
⑤______________ 传递
⑥______________ ……的象征
2.保护文化遗产所用的技术
①3D laser scanning technology三维激光扫描技术
②3D digital repair technology三维数字化修复技术
③Mobile terminal technology 移动终端技术
④Cloud platform and application services
云平台及应用服务
3.致力于保护文化遗产常用词块
①______________ 采取有效的措施
②______________ 帮助修理古庙
③______________ 拍照
④educate the public widely ______________
⑤show cultural relics to the citizens ______________
⑥raise money ______________
4.细节支撑句
①They travel to ________________________ cultural relics as well as old houses.
他们四处寻找文物和老房子并且拍摄照片。
②Their money and abilities __________________________________________________.
他们的财力和能力有限。
③They will also show the public ____________________________ of cultural relics by showing the pictures to them.
他们也会通过向公众展示照片的形式让公众了解令人担忧的文物现状。
④They help in the form of raising money and ______________________ to take part.
他们以筹集资金的形式提供帮助,并号召人们参与进来。
第三部分 结语对新闻报道进行小结
①Our cultural heritage, our national treasure. It's everyone's duty and responsibility ____________________.
文化遗产,我们的国宝。保护国宝,人人有责。
②All in all, we shouldn't ____________________ any our cultural heritage site.
总之,我们决不允许任何人破坏任何文化遗址。
③More importantly, we must do all we can to ________________________ protecting our cultural heritage.
更重要的是,我们要竭尽所能,积极投身于保护文化遗产。
[随堂针对练笔]
文化遗产面临着各种风险,有很多因素影响着文化遗产。请以“主题句+支撑句”的模式写一个60词左右的片段。
写作素材储备
(一)新闻报道常用开头句
①Yesterday afternoon, Mr Liu as well as his team was working to ....
昨天下午,刘先生和他的团队正在工作……
②Last week witnessed our ... project in our city.
上周见证了我们城市……的项目。
③A/An ... exhibition was successfully held in our school today.
今天我校成功举办了……展览。
④Last Sunday, Senior One students from Hongxing High School went to ..., located in the downtown area of our city, to appreciate a/an ... exhibition.
上周日,来自红星高中的高一学生去了……,位于我市的市中心,去欣赏……展览。
⑤In order to encourage students to ..., our school organized a/an ... activity on October 30th.
为了鼓励学生……,在10月30日,我们学校组织了一次……的活动。
(二)新闻报道常用结尾句
①Not only did they realize the importance of ..., but they also found the ways to ....
他们不仅意识到……的重要性,而且还找到了……的方法。
②... was a great success. It not only enriched ..., but also helped us learn more about ....
……取得了巨大的成功。它不仅丰富了……,也帮助我们更多地了解……
③With their enthusiastic support and active participation, ... was undoubtedly a success.
在他们的热情支持和积极参与下,……无疑是成功的。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
四、①As is known to all
②Washing hands regularly is one of the effective ways
写作项目指导
第一部分
①bring ethnic culture to life
②has long been committed to; has done many practical things to protect ③have been stationed; guarding together
第二部分
1.①civilization ②traditional ③unique ④date back to
⑤pass down ⑥the symbol of 3.①take effective measures
②help repair old temples ③take photos/pictures of
④广泛教育公众 ⑤向市民展示文物 ⑥筹集资金
4.①search for and take pictures of ②are limited
③the worrying situation ④call on people
第三部分
①to protect it ②allow anyone to destroy
③take an active part in
随堂针对练笔
参考范文:
There are many factors that affect cultural heritage. First, natural forces threaten cultural heritage. Long term forces of nature, such as wind, water and temperature, can gradually damage these heritage. Second, another important factor is human activities, which can do a lot of damage to cultural heritage and nature. What's more, the large number of tourists also counts a lot.
1UNIT 1 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.Although ________________________ around the globe, only Chinese paper cutting was listed in the UNESCO Intangible Cultural Heritage (ICH) lists, because it __________________ more than 1,500 years and it __________________________of the people throughout China.
虽然剪纸在世界各地都很流行,但只有中国剪纸被列入联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产(ICH)名录,因为它有1 500多年的历史,代表着整个中国人民的文化价值。
2.Chinese calligraphy is _______________________of Chinese ICH.
中国书法是中国非物质文化遗产里一个著名的艺术形式。
3.Having a history of about 160 years, it has ____________________________ in Chinese folk art.
它有大约160年的历史,在中国民间艺术中创造了许多“第一”。
4.ICH in China also ________________________, Chinese Acupuncture, Shadow Play, and so on.
在中国,非物质文化遗产还有端午节、中国针灸、皮影戏等等。
5.They should be protected because they are __________________________ China's culture.
它们应该受到保护,因为它们是中国文化的一个强有力的象征。
6.This type of expression has been widely practised in China and ______________________________ in Chinese culture.
这种表达方式在中国被广泛使用,并且在中国文化中普遍受到高度尊重。
Ⅱ.完成语段
①__________________________________________________ (说到文物保护), I think it's very important for us to protect cultural relics.
As we all know, cultural relics can help us know a period of history, and ②__________________________________ (有助于文化研究). And cultural relics are precious wealth left by our ancestors, which ③__________________________________ (在历史上起着重要的作用). In addition, they can ④________________________________________ (加深对祖国的爱).
What should we do First, we should make relevant laws and ⑤__________________________________ (加大对违法行为的惩罚力度). Second, we should raise awareness of the protection of cultural relics and ⑥__________________________________ (积极保护文物). As students, we should be civilized tourists and ⑦______________________ (不破坏文物).
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi's 20 member team was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected Areas' International Ranger Awards.
Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our global conservation efforts, helping to stem biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges”.
Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win win situation.
After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve.
Established in 1963, Wolong is the country's earliest panda reserve. It experienced serious human animal conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s. In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the country's first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve.
In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with the World Wide Fund for Nature to establish the China Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal.
At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers. With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life threatening adventure. Plastic woven bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases. For Shi, the real challenges are natural disasters, which cannot be predicted.
He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over a 400 meter long mountain pass, about 5,500 meters in altitude, which was the most dangerous place for us with snow depth on the ground reaching up to two meters and the wind blowing heavily, ” Shi says. Suddenly Shi heard thundering sounds and a mass of snow came tumbling down the mountain. Quickly throwing himself at the rock and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.
注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;
2.重点描述Shi遇见大熊猫的惊喜,要求逻辑合理。
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
International tourism is becoming interestingly popular, and large numbers of people from all over the world come to visit famous places such as the Great Wall of China and the Sistine Chapel in the Vatican. __1__ They've thrown rubbish everywhere, brought more traffic and even done serious damage to ancient relics.
As for the damage, there are many different causes. For example, the paintings in the Sistine Chapel are being damaged by people breathing onto them when they visit. __2__ That may raise the humidity (湿气) of the air and damage the paintings. Damage in other places such as the Great Wall is because of tourists climbing on delicate (脆弱的) areas. Besides, roads have also been built to help visitors climb the Wall easily. These activities can cause a lot of damage to the area.
__3__ Firstly, we have to cut down tourist numbers, because fewer visitors will result in less damage. Secondly, we should make strict rules about which areas people can visit and what they can do when they get there. __4__ People will not be allowed to walk off the paths. Visitors to indoor places can be asked to wear masks to protect the paintings.
In short, it is necessary to control tourism at famous places. __5__ And people who live hundreds of years later will have no chance to see these great places.
A.For example, special paths can be built.
B.What can we do to deal with these problems
C.The Great Wall was built over 2,000 years ago.
D.However, these visitors have caused many problems.
E.Traveling is the best way for us to get to know the world.
F.If we do not do this, these places will disappear from our planet.
G.Their breath contains very small drops of water that are present in the air.
UNIT 1 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.paper cutting is popular; has a history of; represents cultural values 2.a well known art form
3.created many “firsts” 4.includes the Dragon Boat Festival
5.a strong symbol of 6.has been highly respected
Ⅱ.①When it comes to cultural relics protection
②contribute to cultural research
③play an important role in history
④deepen the love for our motherland
⑤increase the punishment for illegal acts
⑥actively protect cultural relics ⑦not destroy cultural relics
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. Shi has a soft spot for giant pandas. Although he has worked in the reserve for three decades, he has only met the pandas twice. In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in the forest, but didn't spot one. When they were about to give up, there was a sound from the bamboo forest behind, and they turned around and saw a fat panda about six meters away, hiding in the woods. It ran quickly. It was funny to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild. The scene is just like hide and seek, which will never be forgotten.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读:本文是一篇议论文。文章就如何保护旅游胜地提出了几点建议。
1.选D 上文“International tourism ...Vatican.”和下文“They've thrown rubbish ...relics.”说明游客给旅游地点带来了问题。 D项承上启下,与上文形成转折,引出下文。选项中的these visitors和下文中的They指代对象一致,符合题意。
2.选G 上文“For example, ... visit.”和下文“That may raise the ...the paintings.”说明人的呼吸对绘画作品造成破坏。 G项承接上文,引出下文,选项中的breath和上文中的breathing语义一致,符合题意。
3.选B 设空处位于本段段首,应为本段的主题句。由下文可知本段的主题应该与如何保护旅游胜地有关。 B项引出下文,下文中的“Firstly,we have to ...”和 “Secondly,we should ...”是对空处的回答。
4.选A 下文“People will not be allowed to walk off the paths.”说明人们必须走小路。A项引出下文,选项中的paths和下文中的paths描述对象一致。
5.选F 上文“In short, ... places.”和下文“And people ...places.”说明如果不控制名胜旅游,这些名胜可能会消失。F项承接上文,引出下文,选项中的these places will disappear from our planet和下文中的“will have no chance to see these great places”语义一致。
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