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Section Ⅵ
Writing
目 录
写作项目——Describe a place that you likelike
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Describe a place that you like
本单元的写作项目是“描述一个你喜欢的地方”，属于“景物描写类”说明文。这类文章的写作要求是能比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。为突出“描写”，建议从视觉、听觉、触觉、嗅觉等角度进行描写。好的景物描写不仅能引导读者和作者一起欣赏美丽的风景，使读者产生身临其境的感受，还能启迪人的思想，陶冶人的情操，给人以美的享受。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学逻辑组材
1．开头结尾交相呼应。文章开门见山：爱尔兰美丽的乡村对当地人民和传统有着深远的影响。在结尾处作者讲到亲身体验当地文化和习俗的感受，呼应了开头，也给读者留下了深刻的印象。
2．主体部分描述生动。主体部分作者生动地描述了乡村美景和风土人情，从视觉、嗅觉、味觉、听觉和触觉等多种感官的角度惟妙惟肖地描写了爱尔兰的优美的自然风光以及浓郁的文化气息。
三、学亮点表达
1．Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses.
赏析：本句作者使用了现在分词短语作状语，介绍了爱尔兰美丽的乡村给人以激情和灵感，满足各种感官享受，为下文细节描写做好铺垫。
2．The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
赏析：作者运用了with复合结构，描述了“绿宝石岛”的风光，连绵起伏的山丘上点缀着牛羊，让读者仿佛置身其中，流连忘返。
3．With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining.
赏析：作者使用了it is not surprising that句型，表达了正是有了这些自然美景，爱尔兰具有浓厚的民间传统就顺其自然了。第二个that引导定语从句，补充说明了传统的具体内容，即音乐、舞蹈和餐饮。
4．Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
赏析：Better yet用得非常灵巧，yet 是副词，与比较级连用加强比较程度，意思是“更好的是”，突出了爱尔兰传统特色美食——炖牛肉。
针对练笔/完成句子
①The music moves through technically difficult sections with ease,____________________________.
即使技术难度很高的段落，音乐也都轻松流过，展现了他作为作曲家的天赋。
②____________________, the weather is getting colder and colder.
随着冬天的来临，天气变得越来越冷。
showing his gift as a composer
With the winter coming
③____________, if you don't find any, create them!
更好的是，如果你找不到的话，那就创作出来吧！
Better yet
四、学细节描写
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
赏析：作者从多种感官角度，生动地描写了爱尔兰优美的风景。在海边，海浪的咆哮和海鸟的叫声(听觉)构成了海岸的音乐。在山上一个宁静的早晨(视觉)，感受阳光照射在你的皮肤上(触觉)，呼吸鲜花的芳香(嗅觉)，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天(听觉)。作者运用了拟人的修辞手法，用寥寥数笔勾勒出一幅乡村清晨充满鸟语花香的风景画。
针对练笔/翻译并体会景物描写的句子
The leaves crunched (发出嘎吱声) beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying (摇晃) as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，_______________________。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，____________，慢悠悠地落到地面上。
树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响
轻轻地摇晃
写作项目指导
How to describe an interesting, exciting, or surprising place
——如何描述一个有趣、激动人心或令人赞叹的地方
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Introduce a place
Part 2 Describe the place you like in detail
Part 3 Express personal feelings
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引出要介绍的地方
1．多角度描述一个地方
2．选取某角度引出这个地方(以坐落的位置为例)
①be ________________in 位于……
②lie ______ 位于
③Located _____..., ... is known __... 位于……，……被称为
④in/on/to _______________________of ... 在……的南/北/东/西面
⑤______to/______to 在……旁边/靠近
⑥in the _______________of 在……的附近
located/situated
in
in
as
the south/north/east/west
next
close
neighborhood
第二部分 进行风景等细节描写
1．常用的词汇
①tourist __________ 旅游景点
②_______ of interest 名胜古迹
③at home and ________ 国内外
④be famous/well-known _____ 因……闻名
⑤________the architecture/scenery 欣赏建筑/风景
attractions
places
abroad
for
admire
⑥_________/breathtaking/________/excellent惊奇的/令人惊叹的/独特的/极好的
⑦leave a _______________on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
⑧___________a great reputation as 享有……盛誉
amazing
unique
deep impression
enjoy
2．常用的句子
①On___________________________, we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery here.
一到达山顶，我们就深深地被这里的美丽风景吸引住了。
②Moreover, the scenery_______________________, with many well-known sightseeing spots.
而且，沿江的景色令人惊奇，有很多著名的游览景点。
arriving at the top of the hill
along the river is amazing
③I was______________________, which was kissing my skin.
我沐浴在阳光下，阳光亲吻着我的肌肤。
④Mist-covered mountains were dotted with _________________
_______.
雾蒙蒙的山上点缀着小农场和小村庄。
bathed in the sunlight
small farms and
villages
⑤As a photographer, I love the _____________and amazing colours: red rocks, green plants, blue-green waters and blue skies.
作为一名摄影师，我钟爱那里明亮的光线和绚丽的色彩：红岩绿树，碧水蓝天。
bright light
第三部分 表达个人感受
①By visiting this city, not only can you know more about traditional Chinese culture, but you can also _____________________
__________.
游览这座城市，你不仅能更多地了解中国传统文化，还能欣赏到令人惊奇的风光。
admire the amazing
scenery
②When visiting this excellent city, you can not only have an opportunity to satisfy your appetite, but also_____________________.
当你游览这座优秀的城市时，你不仅有机会满足胃欲，还能拓宽眼界。
③You are sure to enjoy yourself by _________________________
and fascinating traditions of this place.
通过体验这个地方深厚的文化和迷人的传统，你一定会玩得开心。
broaden your horizons
experiencing the deep culture
④I'm fully convinced that this place_________________________.
我深信这个地方最好地满足了我的要求。
meets my requirements best
[随堂针对练笔]
暑假里，妈妈带你去江南旅游。江南美丽的风景至今令你无法忘记。请对江南美景进行描述，让读者跟随你一起去欣赏。
根据提示完成下面习作，选择合适的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Jiangnan Sunrise Scenery
In the summer vacation, my mother took me to travel to Jiangnan, which is really beautiful! I still can't forget the beautiful scenery.
One morning, ① . At that time, the deep blue of the river seemed to be the blue eyes. In a little while, a golden light appeared at the crossing of the sky and the water, and then the sky became very red. ② . In the sky, the sun seemed to be carrying a heavy burden when rising bit by bit, and finally jumped out of the water. At this time, as long as we raised our heads ③ .
The flowers by the river seemed to have been painted by the sun: orange, red, pink. ④ .
Jiangnan sunrise scenery is so beautiful and charming. What a last and unforgettable impression it left on me!
A．we could see the wild geese flying freely in the sky
B．I was watching the sunrise by the river
C．They opened up to us with a big smile
D．The white clouds were also dyed red
答案：①～④ BDAC
写作素材储备
(一)介绍北京
A Beautiful Place in China
As the capital and the economic and political center of China, Beijing is one of the most developed cities in China, with lots of places of interest, such as the Tian'anmen Square and the Forbidden City.
The Forbidden City is where the emperors and their royal family lived during the ancient times, which is of great historical and cultural significance. Also, it reflects the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people. As for the Tian'anmen Square, with the national flag swinging in the wind, once people arrive there, a feeling of respect would rise in their hearts.
As far as I am concerned, Beijing represents the rapid development of China in the past few decades. I'm sure China will become more powerful and beautiful in the future.
(二)介绍四川
A Beautiful Place in China
As we all know, Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China, which enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Besides, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected there. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. Amazingly, it is still playing an important part in local irrigation today.
I'm sure visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou and the construction of Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．There are three places I want to__________________.
我想向你推荐三个地方。
2．You can _________________________Chinese culture from its story.
你可以从中国故事中对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
recommend to you
have a good knowledge of
3．Then you can go to visit the Shaanxi History Museum, which ____________a “Chinese treasure house”！
然后你可以去参观陕西历史博物馆，它被称为“华夏宝库”！
4．You can also go to the Xi'an City Wall and ____________________
________.
你也可以去西安城墙和其他一些著名的景点。
is known as
a few other famous
sights
5．I can _______your guide and I am _________________meeting you.
我可以当你的向导，并期待与你见面。
act as
looking forward to
Ⅱ.完成语段
Last weekend①______________________________________ (见证了我们难忘的经历) of attending the activity ②________________ (以……为主题) promoting traditional Chinese culture. The wonderful performance of Peking Opera, the flexibility of Tai Chi ③__________ (以及) the vivid designs of paper cutting ④_______________________
(给……留下深刻的印象) me. However,
witnessed our unforgettable experience
with the theme of
as well as
left a deep impression on
⑤____________________________ (最吸引我的是) our hands-on experience of paper cutting. I still remember the fish you cut. I think this activity is a great success, which provides us a platform where we can ⑥___________________ (拓宽我们的视野) and appreciate the profound Chinese culture. I hope you can ⑦______________________
______(对……有更好的理解) Chinese culture after this activity.
what appealed to me most was
broaden our horizons
have a better understanding
of
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two Canadian boys, Alder and Greg, both of 13, had their friendship tested on a recent trip to the Rocky Mountains.
On Sunday morning, the two boys decided to climb the mountain near the camp by themselves while their parents prepared lunch at the camp. After two hours, they reached the top and enjoyed the breathtaking view, completely relaxed and feeling like birds.
However, trouble began when they started the climb down. Greg accidentally fell down and twisted his ankle (脚踝). He could move but it hurt. Greg told Alder to leave him and go back to their parents to get help. “But is it safe for you to be alone？” Alder cleaned the dirt from Greg's hands and tried to help him stand up. “Is it OK？” Alder asked. “A bit troublesome, I guess.”
Greg forced a smile. Alder did not want to leave his friend. “What should I do？” he thought to himself. Mountain climbers passed by and Alder was not sure if they would like to be disturbed on the way to their destinations.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．重点描写Alder的心理活动，要求逻辑合理。
Alder thought for a moment and decided he shouldn't wait._____________________________________________________
参考范文：
Alder thought for a moment and decided he shouldn't wait. He lowered himself and asked Greg to climb onto his back. Although Greg refused, Alder insisted on carrying him on his back. Finally, they struggled on their way. The way down the hill was not so easy as they expected and a few minutes later Alder was exhausted. They sat on the ground looking at each other. “Are you OK？”
Greg asked. “Whatever happened, I will not leave you alone！” Alder said firmly. With tears down his cheek, Greg climbed onto Alder's back again and they moved with difficulty down the hill. When the two boys were found by their parents, they held their hands together. Alder smiled to Greg and said, “At least we are together！”
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Travelling is a great way to interact with a culture which might be completely different from your own.
1 Before I moved to Sicily I had travelled around the whole of Italy, the south and the north, and I absolutely fell in love with the culture and the language, so I was inspired to learn the language and also to move here. And here I am now, living in Sicily.
2 When you get back home, you'll have lots of stories to tell your friends and family. Even if something isn't very fun, it will be funny to look back and laugh at those awkward or harsh moments. For example, I was travelling with a group of friends in Pisa and we took the wrong bus to get to the beach area, so we ended up being stuck in the rain and having to walk back.
When you travel, you expose yourself to different people. 3 It's a great learning experience for both you and the other person because you can share and exchange your own ideas and opinions on a range of topics. For example, I met an Iranian philosopher and we talked about the magic of nature. A lot of his ideas were shaped by his Iranian background and Iranian philosophy. 4
Travelling is the realization of home. 5 Since I've been away from London, I've come to appreciate the little things that I used to take for granted, like our amazing transport — everything runs on time; everything runs well. So sometimes it takes being away from home to realize how much you absolutely love your hometown.
A．It was a really interesting discussion.
B．Travelling will make you a really good storyteller.
C．Travelling could enrich your awareness of the world.
D．They may have a completely different outlook on life.
E．We realize how much we miss our hometown when we travel.
F．Travelling might just convince (说服) you to move to another country.
G．Being away from home, we miss our friends and our family very much.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。旅行是与另外一种文化进行交流的好方法。作者通过讲述自己的经历来介绍旅行的好处；旅行可以让你成为一个可以分享故事的人；旅行可以让你遇到不同的人并可以和他们交流观点和看法；旅行让你更爱自己的家乡。
1．选F 根据下文可知，作者在搬去西西里岛之前曾去意大利旅游，并爱上了它的文化和语言，因而受到鼓舞学习了那里的语言，最终搬到西西里岛居住。因此推断此处讲述旅行可以说服你搬到另一国家。故选F。
2．选B 根据空后一句可知，当你结束旅行回家时，你会有许多故事告诉你的朋友和家人，因此推断旅行让你成为可以讲述故事的人。故选B。
3．选D 根据空前一句和空后一句可知，当你旅行时，你会遇到不同的人。这对你和另一个人都是一个很好的学习经历，因为你们可以在一系列的话题上分享和交流自己的想法和观点。因此推断D项“他们或许对生活有完全不同的观点。”符合语境。故选D。
4．选A 根据空前两句可知，作者遇到了一个伊朗哲学家，他们讨论了大自然的神奇，这位伊朗哲学家的许多想法受到了他的伊朗背景和伊朗哲学的影响。因此推断这是一场真正有趣的讨论。故选A。
5．选E 根据下文“So sometimes it takes being away from home to realize how much you absolutely love your hometown.”可知，有时候远离家乡才会意识到你有多么爱你的家乡，因此推断E项“当我们旅行时，我们会意识到我们有多么思念家乡。”符合语境。故选E。Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Describe a place that you like
本单元的写作项目是“描述一个你喜欢的地方”，属于“景物描写类”说明文。这类文章的写作要求是能比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。为突出“描写”，建议从视觉、听觉、触觉、嗅觉等角度进行描写。好的景物描写不仅能引导读者和作者一起欣赏美丽的风景，使读者产生身临其境的感受，还能启迪人的思想，陶冶人的情操，给人以美的享受。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
二、学逻辑组材
1．开头结尾交相呼应。文章开门见山：爱尔兰美丽的乡村对当地人民和传统有着深远的影响。在结尾处作者讲到亲身体验当地文化和习俗的感受，呼应了开头，也给读者留下了深刻的印象。
2．主体部分描述生动。主体部分作者生动地描述了乡村美景和风土人情，从视觉、嗅觉、味觉、听觉和触觉等多种感官的角度惟妙惟肖地描写了爱尔兰的优美的自然风光以及浓郁的文化气息。
三、学亮点表达
1．Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses.
赏析：本句作者使用了现在分词短语作状语，介绍了爱尔兰美丽的乡村给人以激情和灵感，满足各种感官享受，为下文细节描写做好铺垫。
2．The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
赏析：作者运用了with复合结构，描述了“绿宝石岛”的风光，连绵起伏的山丘上点缀着牛羊，让读者仿佛置身其中，流连忘返。
3．With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining.
赏析：作者使用了it is not surprising that句型，表达了正是有了这些自然美景，爱尔兰具有浓厚的民间传统就顺其自然了。第二个that引导定语从句，补充说明了传统的具体内容，即音乐、舞蹈和餐饮。
4．Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.
赏析：Better yet用得非常灵巧，yet 是副词，与比较级连用加强比较程度，意思是“更好的是”，突出了爱尔兰传统特色美食——炖牛肉。
①The music moves through technically difficult sections with ease, ______________________________________________.
即使技术难度很高的段落，音乐也都轻松流过，展现了他作为作曲家的天赋。
②________________________， the weather is getting colder and colder.
随着冬天的来临，天气变得越来越冷。
③______________， if you don't find any, create them!
更好的是，如果你找不到的话，那就创作出来吧！
四、学细节描写
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
赏析：作者从多种感官角度，生动地描写了爱尔兰优美的风景。在海边，海浪的咆哮和海鸟的叫声(听觉)构成了海岸的音乐。在山上一个宁静的早晨(视觉)，感受阳光照射在你的皮肤上(触觉)，呼吸鲜花的芳香(嗅觉)，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天(听觉)。作者运用了拟人的修辞手法，用寥寥数笔勾勒出一幅乡村清晨充满鸟语花香的风景画。
The leaves crunched (发出嘎吱声) beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying (摇晃) as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，______________。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，______________，慢悠悠地落到地面上。
写作项目指导
How to describe an interesting, exciting, or surprising place
——如何描述一个有趣、激动人心或令人赞叹的地方
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Introduce a place
Part 2 Describe the place you like in detail
Part 3 Express personal feelings
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 引出要介绍的地方
1．多角度描述一个地方
2．选取某角度引出这个地方(以坐落的位置为例)
①be __________ in 位于……
②lie __________ 位于
③Located ______ ..., ... is known ______ ... 位于……，……被称为
④in/on/to ________________________ of ... 在……的南/北/东/西面
⑤__________ to/__________ to 在……旁边/靠近
⑥in the ______________ of 在……的附近
第二部分 进行风景等细节描写
1．常用的词汇
①tourist __________ 旅游景点
②__________ of interest 名胜古迹
③at home and __________ 国内外
④be famous/well known __________ 因……闻名
⑤__________ the architecture/scenery 欣赏建筑/风景
⑥________/breathtaking/________/excellent惊奇的/令人惊叹的/独特的/极好的
⑦leave a __________________ on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
⑧__________ a great reputation as 享有……盛誉
2．常用的句子
①On ________________________， we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery here.
一到达山顶，我们就深深地被这里的美丽风景吸引住了。
②Moreover, the scenery __________________， with many well known sightseeing spots.
而且，沿江的景色令人惊奇，有很多著名的游览景点。
③I was ________________________， which was kissing my skin.
我沐浴在阳光下，阳光亲吻着我的肌肤。
④Mist covered mountains were dotted with ____________________________.
雾蒙蒙的山上点缀着小农场和小村庄。
⑤As a photographer, I love the ______________and amazing colours: red rocks, green plants, blue green waters and blue skies.
作为一名摄影师，我钟爱那里明亮的光线和绚丽的色彩：红岩绿树，碧水蓝天。
第三部分 表达个人感受
①By visiting this city, not only can you know more about traditional Chinese culture, but you can also ________________________.
游览这座城市，你不仅能更多地了解中国传统文化，还能欣赏到令人惊奇的风光。
②When visiting this excellent city, you can not only have an opportunity to satisfy your appetite, but also ___________________________________________________________.
当你游览这座优秀的城市时，你不仅有机会满足胃欲，还能拓宽眼界。
③You are sure to enjoy yourself by ____________________________ and fascinating traditions of this place.
通过体验这个地方深厚的文化和迷人的传统，你一定会玩得开心。
④I'm fully convinced that this place ________________________________.
我深信这个地方最好地满足了我的要求。
[随堂针对练笔]
暑假里，妈妈带你去江南旅游。江南美丽的风景至今令你无法忘记。请对江南美景进行描述，让读者跟随你一起去欣赏。
根据提示完成下面习作，选择合适的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Jiangnan Sunrise Scenery
In the summer vacation, my mother took me to travel to Jiangnan, which is really beautiful! I still can't forget the beautiful scenery.
One morning, ①____________________. At that time, the deep blue of the river seemed to be the blue eyes. In a little while, a golden light appeared at the crossing of the sky and the water, and then the sky became very red. ②______________________________. In the sky, the sun seemed to be carrying a heavy burden when rising bit by bit, and finally jumped out of the water. At this time, as long as we raised our heads ③_________________________________________.
The flowers by the river seemed to have been painted by the sun: orange, red, pink. ④__________________________.
Jiangnan sunrise scenery is so beautiful and charming. What a last and unforgettable impression it left on me!
A．we could see the wild geese flying freely in the sky
B．I was watching the sunrise by the river
C．They opened up to us with a big smile
D．The white clouds were also dyed red
写作素材储备
(一)介绍北京
A Beautiful Place in China
As the capital and the economic and political center of China, Beijing is one of the most developed cities in China, with lots of places of interest, such as the Tian'anmen Square and the Forbidden City.
The Forbidden City is where the emperors and their royal family lived during the ancient times, which is of great historical and cultural significance. Also, it reflects the wisdom and hard work of Chinese people. As for the Tian'anmen Square, with the national flag swinging in the wind, once people arrive there, a feeling of respect would rise in their hearts.
As far as I am concerned, Beijing represents the rapid development of China in the past few decades. I'm sure China will become more powerful and beautiful in the future.
(二)介绍四川
A Beautiful Place in China
As we all know, Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China, which enjoys many world famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its multi level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Besides, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected there. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. Amazingly, it is still playing an important part in local irrigation today.
I'm sure visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou and the construction of Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
三、①showing his gift as a composer ②With the winter coming
③Better yet
四、树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响；轻轻地摇晃
写作项目指导
第一部分
2．①located/situated ②in ③in; as
④the south/north/east/west ⑤next; close ⑥neighborhood
第二部分
1．①attractions ②places ③abroad ④for ⑤admire
⑥amazing; unique ⑦deep impression ⑧enjoy
2．①arriving at the top of the hill ②along the river is amazing ③bathed in the sunlight ④small farms and villages
⑤bright light
第三部分
①admire the amazing scenery ②broaden your horizons
③experiencing the deep culture ④meets my requirements best
随堂针对练笔
①～④ BDAC
5UNIT 4 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．There are three places I want to ______________.
我想向你推荐三个地方。
2．You can ________________________ Chinese culture from its story.
你可以从中国故事中对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
3．Then you can go to visit the Shaanxi History Museum, which ____________ a “Chinese treasure house”！
然后你可以去参观陕西历史博物馆，它被称为“华夏宝库”！
4．You can also go to the Xi'an City Wall and ________________________________.
你也可以去西安城墙和其他一些著名的景点。
5．I can ______________ your guide and I am ______________________ meeting you.
我可以当你的向导，并期待与你见面。
Ⅱ.完成语段
Last weekend ①__________________________________ (见证了我们难忘的经历) of attending the activity ②______________ (以……为主题) promoting traditional Chinese culture. The wonderful performance of Peking Opera, the flexibility of Tai Chi ③______________(以及) the vivid designs of paper cutting ④____________________________(给……留下深刻的印象) me. However, ⑤________________________ (最吸引我的是) our hands on experience of paper cutting. I still remember the fish you cut. I think this activity is a great success, which provides us a platform where we can ⑥________________ (拓宽我们的视野) and appreciate the profound Chinese culture. I hope you can ⑦____________________________ (对……有更好的理解) Chinese culture after this activity.
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Two Canadian boys, Alder and Greg, both of 13, had their friendship tested on a recent trip to the Rocky Mountains.
On Sunday morning, the two boys decided to climb the mountain near the camp by themselves while their parents prepared lunch at the camp. After two hours, they reached the top and enjoyed the breathtaking view, completely relaxed and feeling like birds.
However, trouble began when they started the climb down. Greg accidentally fell down and twisted his ankle (脚踝). He could move but it hurt. Greg told Alder to leave him and go back to their parents to get help. “But is it safe for you to be alone？” Alder cleaned the dirt from Greg's hands and tried to help him stand up. “Is it OK？” Alder asked. “A bit troublesome, I guess.” Greg forced a smile. Alder did not want to leave his friend. “What should I do？” he thought to himself. Mountain climbers passed by and Alder was not sure if they would like to be disturbed on the way to their destinations.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．重点描写Alder的心理活动，要求逻辑合理。
Alder thought for a moment and decided he shouldn't wait.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Travelling is a great way to interact with a culture which might be completely different from your own.
__1__ Before I moved to Sicily I had travelled around the whole of Italy, the south and the north, and I absolutely fell in love with the culture and the language, so I was inspired to learn the language and also to move here. And here I am now, living in Sicily.
__2__ When you get back home, you'll have lots of stories to tell your friends and family. Even if something isn't very fun, it will be funny to look back and laugh at those awkward or harsh moments. For example, I was travelling with a group of friends in Pisa and we took the wrong bus to get to the beach area, so we ended up being stuck in the rain and having to walk back.
When you travel, you expose yourself to different people. __3__ It's a great learning experience for both you and the other person because you can share and exchange your own ideas and opinions on a range of topics. For example,
I met an Iranian philosopher and we talked about the magic of nature. A lot of his ideas were shaped by his Iranian background and Iranian philosophy. __4__
Travelling is the realization of home. __5__ Since I've been away from London, I've come to appreciate the little things that I used to take for granted, like our amazing transport — everything runs on time; everything runs well. So sometimes it takes being away from home to realize how much you absolutely love your hometown.
A．It was a really interesting discussion.
B．Travelling will make you a really good storyteller.
C．Travelling could enrich your awareness of the world.
D．They may have a completely different outlook on life.
E．We realize how much we miss our hometown when we travel.
F．Travelling might just convince (说服) you to move to another country.
G．Being away from home, we miss our friends and our family very much.
UNIT 4 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.recommend to you 2.have a good knowledge of
3．is known as 4.a few other famous sights 5.act as
6．looking forward to
Ⅱ.①witnessed our unforgettable experience
②with the theme of ③as well as
④left a deep impression on
⑤what appealed to me most was ⑥broaden our horizons
⑦have a better understanding of
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
Alder thought for a moment and decided he shouldn't wait. He lowered himself and asked Greg to climb onto his back. Although Greg refused, Alder insisted on carrying him on his back. Finally, they struggled on their way. The way down the hill was not so easy as they expected and a few minutes later Alder was exhausted. They sat on the ground looking at each other. “Are you OK？” Greg asked. “Whatever happened, I will not leave you alone！” Alder said firmly. With tears down his cheek, Greg climbed onto Alder's back again and they moved with difficulty down the hill. When the two boys were found by their parents, they held their hands together. Alder smiled to Greg and said, “At least we are together！”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。旅行是与另外一种文化进行交流的好方法。作者通过讲述自己的经历来介绍旅行的好处；旅行可以让你成为一个可以分享故事的人；旅行可以让你遇到不同的人并可以和他们交流观点和看法；旅行让你更爱自己的家乡。
1．选F 根据下文可知，作者在搬去西西里岛之前曾去意大利旅游，并爱上了它的文化和语言，因而受到鼓舞学习了那里的语言，最终搬到西西里岛居住。因此推断此处讲述旅行可以说服你搬到另一国家。故选F。
2．选B 根据空后一句可知，当你结束旅行回家时，你会有许多故事告诉你的朋友和家人，因此推断旅行让你成为可以讲述故事的人。故选B。
3．选D 根据空前一句和空后一句可知，当你旅行时，你会遇到不同的人。这对你和另一个人都是一个很好的学习经历，因为你们可以在一系列的话题上分享和交流自己的想法和观点。因此推断D项“他们或许对生活有完全不同的观点。”符合语境。故选D。
4．选A 根据空前两句可知，作者遇到了一个伊朗哲学家，他们讨论了大自然的神奇，这位伊朗哲学家的许多想法受到了他的伊朗背景和伊朗哲学的影响。因此推断这是一场真正有趣的讨论。故选A。
5．选E 根据下文“So sometimes it takes being away from home to realize how much you absolutely love your hometown.”可知，有时候远离家乡才会意识到你有多么爱你的家乡，因此推断E项“当我们旅行时，我们会意识到我们有多么思念家乡。”符合语境。故选E。
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