Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Share opinions about a moral story
本单元的写作任务是写一篇故事评论。故事评论包括对书中的故事内容以及主要人物/角色进行简要的介绍。同时，要对故事进行由表及里的分析，正确理解作者的观点，合理组织语言，表达自己的感悟和看法。
写作项目指导
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 to introduce the basic information about the story
Part 2 to analyze the story
Part 3 to give your opinion about the story
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 介绍故事梗概
①The fable describes a story between an ant and a dove that ________________________________________.这则寓言描述了一只蚂蚁和一只鸽子互相帮助成为好朋友的故事。
②The fable ____________________________ by Schopenhauer, which gives a description of a group of porcupines eventually finding the ideal distance one cold winter night, while ________________________ with their quills.
这则寓言改编自叔本华的一部作品，描述了在一个寒冷的冬夜，一群豪猪最终找到了理想的距离，同时设法不让它们的刺互相伤害。
③Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids, which teaches us that ______________________________________________.
当我们还是小孩子的时候，几乎所有人都听过“狼来了”这个故事，它告诉我们必须诚实，说谎是可怕的。
④“A Little Horse Crosses the River” is one of the most popular fables I have ever read, ____________________________.
《小马过河》是我读过的最受欢迎的寓言之一，当时给我留下了深刻的印象。
第二部分 分析故事主要内容，突出关键角色和情节
①________________________ a brave young man.
这个故事主要是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
②In face of danger, ______________________.
面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢。
③Moving apart, they feel cold while ________________________， they feel a pain ________________________.
分开时，它们会感到寒冷，而靠近在一起，它们会感觉到刺引起的疼痛。
④All his family members praised him for ______________________________________________________.
他的家人也都称赞他的善良、勇敢和慷慨。
第三部分 表达感悟和评价
①We should __________________________ and try to correct them.
我们应该勇敢地承认错误并设法改正。
②______________________ helps us secure numerous victories.
正是团队合作帮助我们取得了无数的胜利。
③We should strive to make our actions corresponding with our words because ________________________________________________________.
我们应该努力做到言行一致，因为只有这样我们才能赢得别人的信任。
④Sometimes, __________________________ enough to make a huge difference.
有时，一个小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的改变。
[随堂针对练笔]
《亡羊补牢》是一则发人深省的寓言故事，请你根据这一故事写一篇80词的英语短文。内容包括：
1．故事梗概； 2.感悟和体会。
写作素材储备
(一)故事评论常用开头句
①The title of the fable is ...
这则寓言的标题是……
②It is a fable about ...
这是一个关于……的寓言。
③The fable shares with readers a story about ...
这则寓言与读者分享了一个关于……的故事。
(二)叙述故事情节常用句式
①One day/Once upon a time, ...
有一天/很久以前，……
②The details of the story are ...
故事的细节是……
③One day ... However ...
有一天……然而……
(三)故事评论常用结束句
①In my opinion, I like/dislike ...
在我看来，我喜欢/不喜欢……
②I like the story because ...
我喜欢这个故事，因为……
③What impresses me most is that ...
给我印象最深的是……
④After reading the fable, I realize that ...
看完这个寓言，我意识到……
Section Ⅵ
写作项目指导
第一部分
①became good friends by helping each other ②is adapted from a work; managing not to hurt each other ③we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible ④which impressed me a lot then
第二部分
①The story is mainly about ②they behave very bravely
③staying closed together; caused by their quills
④his being so kind, brave and generous
第三部分
①bravely admit the mistakes ②It is teamwork that
③only in this way can we win the trust of others
④a small act of kindness may be powerful
随堂针对练笔
参考范文：
A man had a sheep stolen due to a hole of the pen. But he refused his neighbor's advice to fix it, thinking it's no use doing it after losing his sheep. However, the next day witnessed the tragedy again. Only then did he realize it made sense to fix the pen upon his discovery.
Actually, mistakes are unavoidable. No matter how many mistakes we've made, we always have the choice to make it better. It is never too late to turn around and make positive changes.
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Section Ⅵ
Writing
目 录
写作项目——Share opinions about a moral story
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Share opinions about a moral story
本单元的写作任务是写一篇故事评论。故事评论包括对书中的故事内容以及主要人物/角色进行简要的介绍。同时，要对故事进行由表及里的分析，正确理解作者的观点，合理组织语言，表达自己的感悟和看法。
写作项目指导
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 to introduce the basic information about the story
Part 2 to analyze the story
Part 3 to give your opinion about the story
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 介绍故事梗概
①The fable describes a story between an ant and a dove that .
这则寓言描述了一只蚂蚁和一只鸽子互相帮助成为好朋友的故事。
became good friends by helping each other
②The fable by Schopenhauer, which gives a description of a group of porcupines eventually finding the ideal distance one cold winter night, while with their quills.
这则寓言改编自叔本华的一部作品，描述了在一个寒冷的冬夜，一群豪猪最终找到了理想的距离，同时设法不让它们的刺互相伤害。
is adapted from a work
managing not to hurt each other
③Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids, which teaches us that .
当我们还是小孩子的时候，几乎所有人都听过“狼来了”这个故事，它告诉我们必须诚实，说谎是可怕的。
we must be honest and telling a lie is terrible
④“A Little Horse Crosses the River” is one of the most popular fables I have ever read, .
《小马过河》是我读过的最受欢迎的寓言之一，当时给我留下了深刻的印象。
which impressed me a lot then
第二部分 分析故事主要内容，突出关键角色和情节
① a brave young man.
这个故事主要是关于一个勇敢的年轻人的。
②In face of danger, .
面对困难，他们表现得如此勇敢。
The story is mainly about
they behave very bravely
③Moving apart, they feel cold while , they feel a pain .
分开时，它们会感到寒冷，而靠近在一起，它们会感觉到刺引起的疼痛。
④All his family members praised him for ______________________ ____________.
他的家人也都称赞他的善良、勇敢和慷慨。
staying closed together
caused by their quills
his being so kind, brave
and generous
第三部分 表达感悟和评价
①We should and try to correct them.
我们应该勇敢地承认错误并设法改正。
② helps us secure numerous victories.
正是团队合作帮助我们取得了无数的胜利。
bravely admit the mistakes
It is teamwork that
③We should strive to make our actions corresponding with our words because .
我们应该努力做到言行一致，因为只有这样我们才能赢得别人的信任。
④Sometimes, enough to make a huge difference.
有时，一个小小的善行可能足以带来巨大的改变。
only in this way can we win the trust of others
a small act of kindness may be powerful
[随堂针对练笔]
《亡羊补牢》是一则发人深省的寓言故事，请你根据这一故事写一篇80词的英语短文。内容包括：
1．故事梗概； 2.感悟和体会。
参考范文：
A man had a sheep stolen due to a hole of the pen. But he refused his neighbor's advice to fix it, thinking it's no use doing it after losing his sheep. However, the next day witnessed the tragedy again. Only then did he realize it made sense to fix the pen upon his discovery.
Actually, mistakes are unavoidable. No matter how many mistakes we've made, we always have the choice to make it better. It is never too late to turn around and make positive changes.
写作素材储备
(一)故事评论常用开头句
①The title of the fable is ...
这则寓言的标题是……
②It is a fable about ...
这是一个关于……的寓言。
③The fable shares with readers a story about ...
这则寓言与读者分享了一个关于……的故事。
(二)叙述故事情节常用句式
①One day/Once upon a time, ...
有一天/很久以前，……
②The details of the story are ...
故事的细节是……
③One day ... However ...
有一天……然而……
(三)故事评论常用结束句
①In my opinion, I like/dislike ...
在我看来，我喜欢/不喜欢……
②I like the story because ...
我喜欢这个故事，因为……
③What impresses me most is that ...
给我印象最深的是……
④After reading the fable, I realize that ...
看完这个寓言，我意识到……
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．In conclusion, this story tells us that pride and carelessness can ,while humility and hard work can .
总之，这个故事告诉我们骄傲和粗心会导致失败，而谦卑和努力会通向成功。
课时跟踪检测
lead to failure
lead to success
2．What the fable tells us .
这个寓言告诉我们，快并不总是好的。
3． from Aesop's Fables, whose name is The Fox and The Grapes.
最近我读了《伊索寓言》里的一个小故事，名字叫《狐狸与葡萄》。
is that being fast is not always good
Recently I read a small story
4．He didn't even realize that ______________________________ ___________________________.
他甚至没有意识到，所有其他动物真正害怕的是他自己。
5．From my point of view, only we________________________ __________________can we make more friends.
依我之见，只有我们对朋友采取这样的态度，我们才能交到更多的朋友。
it was he himself that all the other
adopt such an attitude
animals were really afraid of
towards our friends
Ⅱ.完成语段
① (寓言与读者分享了关于……的故事)two sheep, both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to have access to the fresh grass of different sides.
The fable shares with readers a story about
② (事实上，这个寓言反映了)different attitudes may bring about different results.③ (正如老话所说), union means power.A chopstick breaks easily, while a bunch of them does not.Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win-win situation.
As a matter of fact, the fable mirrors that
As an old saying goes
④ (在我的日常生活中), I learn a lot from my classmates and friends by following their advice.Meanwhile, I also do my part to help them in return.⑤ (正是团队合作帮助我们取得了无数的胜利)．
In my daily life
It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a perfect day for the beach.My brother and I were meeting our friends on the northeast side of the island, a beach we seldom visited due to the strong currents.
Dad dropped us off an hour before everyone was to arrive.I watched my brother take off into the blue ocean.He was a body surfing enthusiast.I decided not to wait for our friends either because the water began to rise, forming a perfect wave.
I held my breath and dove through the wave.I was under the surf, with my eyes wide open, the water like silk flowing over my body.It was cold, like liquid ice waking up my senses.I pulled my body to the surface, allowing fresh air to fill my lungs, and then went back under.I pretended to be a fish, a dolphin, anything that lived under the sea.
After a while, I thought it might be a good idea to head back and see if our friends had arrived.I looked toward the beach and realized I had gone farther out than I should have.I was the only one this far out.
I was not too worried though.I was a pretty good swimmer.But, as I tried to swim in, I realized I was making no progress.After what felt like a long while, my body began to feel heavy, and my arms grew tired.However hard I tried to swim, I was not moving any closer to the beach.Worn out, terrified and desperate, I cried for help loudly.
I began to think I might drown out there.Just then a stranger appeared in front of me.With the last hope, I gathered all my strength to cry out “Help” but suddenly a huge wave hit me and drowned my cry.I chocked on a big swallow of salty water and felt terrible.Fortunately, my angel was swiftly approaching me and then held me tightly with his strong arm.My basic knowledge reminded me to stay relaxed before I fell into a world of darkness.
(本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友一起去海滩游泳时出现了意外情况。请根据上文情节，结合以下线索提示，给这个故事写一段80词左右的结尾。线索：恢复知觉→对方已经离开→网上发帖表达感谢→作者感悟。)
A moment later, I regained my consciousness.__________________ ____________________________________________________________
参考范文：
A moment later, I regained my consciousness. I wanted to express my sincere gratitude to the man who saved my life.But he was gone.My relatives and friends were so concerned about my safety that they even didn't notice him leave.Feeling regretful, I decided to look for him through the Internet, but in vain.I made a post, adding that “Words are far from enough to convey my heartfelt thanks, my angel.Best wishes for you！”， expecting him to see my heart with an increasing number of likes and shares.Although I have not seen my hero ever since, the gratitude to him will live in my heart forever.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Let's be honest here: random acts of kindness make us feel good.They help benefit society in small ways, and those small benefits can turn into huge benefits.Being an everyday hero means willingly and joyfully choosing random acts of kindness to make the world a bit brighter. 1 Start with these ideas.
Leave a space cleaner than you found it.If you eat out, keep your table clean, making it a little easier for your server.At home, keep your things organized. 2
Be kind to strangers.It's well-known that everyone is fighting separate but equally different battles.Although you might not be able to understand everyone's struggles, you can offer unconditional kindness and patience. 3 Maybe the fast-food worker has two other jobs and children at home.Although you don't know their situations, kindness is always appreciated.
4 The easiest way to determine whether someone needs help is to ask, and respect their answers.When close friends and loved ones are struggling, your support can be a “I love you”．
5 Your local resale shop can provide you with more information on this.By donating the things that you don't need, want, or use, you allow another person to benefit from them.
A．Try to stand up for someone.
B．Help someone who's struggling.
C．Choose to donate your used things.
D．Don't leave a mess for others to clean up.
E．When you've decided to be a hero, be it right now.
F．If you can, take five minutes and be an everyday hero.
G．Maybe the bad-tempered old man suffers from a disease.
语篇解读：作为普通人，也许我们无法成为大英雄，但我们平时的每一个小小的善举都会益于他人和社会。
1．选F 根据前后文语境可知，F项起过渡衔接的作用。空前一句提到平凡的英雄能欣然地、愉悦地做一些善举来点亮这个世界。空后一句提到从一些简单的想法做起就可以了。故F项“如果你能做到，那么就去花五分钟的时间去做一个平凡的英雄吧”符合语境。
2．选D 根据本段的主旨句“Leave a space cleaner than you found it.”及前一句“At home, keep your things organized.”可知，D项“不要留下脏乱的状态让别人收拾”符合语境。
3．选G 根据下一句“Maybe the fast-food worker has two other jobs and children at home.”可知，G项与下文句子结构相似，构成并列，且都表示对别人的体谅。
4．选B 根据该段的内容可知，平凡的英雄要学会帮助那些需要帮助的人，故选B。
5．选C 根据该段的内容可知，学会把自己不需要、不想要或者用不到的东西捐赠给别人，这也是成为平凡的英雄的一种途径，故选C。UNIT 2 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．In conclusion, this story tells us that pride and carelessness can _________________________， while humility and hard work can ____________________________.
总之，这个故事告诉我们骄傲和粗心会导致失败，而谦卑和努力会通向成功。
2．What the fable tells us __________________________________________.
这个寓言告诉我们，快并不总是好的。
3．____________________________ from Aesop's Fables, whose name is The Fox and The Grapes.
最近我读了《伊索寓言》里的一个小故事，名字叫《狐狸与葡萄》。
4．He didn't even realize that _____________________________________________.
他甚至没有意识到，所有其他动物真正害怕的是他自己。
5．From my point of view, only we ______________________________________________ can we make more friends.
依我之见，只有我们对朋友采取这样的态度，我们才能交到更多的朋友。
Ⅱ.完成语段
①______________________________________(寓言与读者分享了关于……的故事)two sheep, both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to have access to the fresh grass of different sides.
②______________________________________(事实上，这个寓言反映了)different attitudes may bring about different results.③____________________________(正如老话所说), union means power.A chopstick breaks easily, while a bunch of them does not.Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win win situation.
④___________________(在我的日常生活中), I learn a lot from my classmates and friends by following their advice.Meanwhile, I also do my part to help them in return.⑤________________________________________________(正是团队合作帮助我们取得了无数的胜利)．
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a perfect day for the beach.My brother and I were meeting our friends on the northeast side of the island, a beach we seldom visited due to the strong currents.
Dad dropped us off an hour before everyone was to arrive.I watched my brother take off into the blue ocean.He was a body surfing enthusiast.I decided not to wait for our friends either because the water began to rise, forming a perfect wave.
I held my breath and dove through the wave.I was under the surf, with my eyes wide open, the water like silk flowing over my body.It was cold, like liquid ice waking up my senses.I pulled my body to the surface, allowing fresh air to fill my lungs, and then went back under.I pretended to be a fish, a dolphin, anything that lived under the sea.
After a while, I thought it might be a good idea to head back and see if our friends had arrived.I looked toward the beach and realized I had gone farther out than I should have.I was the only one this far out.
I was not too worried though.I was a pretty good swimmer.But, as I tried to swim in, I realized I was making no progress.After what felt like a long while, my body began to feel heavy, and my arms grew tired.However hard I tried to swim, I was not moving any closer to the beach.Worn out, terrified and desperate, I cried for help loudly.
I began to think I might drown out there.Just then a stranger appeared in front of me.With the last hope, I gathered all my strength to cry out “Help” but suddenly a huge wave hit me and drowned my cry.I chocked on a big swallow of salty water and felt terrible.Fortunately, my angel was swiftly approaching me and then held me tightly with his strong arm.My basic knowledge reminded me to stay relaxed before I fell into a world of darkness.
(本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友一起去海滩游泳时出现了意外情况。请根据上文情节，结合以下线索提示，给这个故事写一段80词左右的结尾。线索：恢复知觉→对方已经离开→网上发帖表达感谢→作者感悟。)
A moment later, I regained my consciousness.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Let's be honest here: random acts of kindness make us feel good.They help benefit society in small ways, and those small benefits can turn into huge benefits.Being an everyday hero means willingly and joyfully choosing random acts of kindness to make the world a bit brighter.__1__ Start with these ideas.
Leave a space cleaner than you found it.If you eat out, keep your table clean, making it a little easier for your server.At home, keep your things organized.__2__
Be kind to strangers.It's well known that everyone is fighting separate but equally different battles.Although you might not be able to understand everyone's struggles, you can offer unconditional kindness and patience.__3__ Maybe the fast food worker has two other jobs and children at home.Although you don't know their situations, kindness is always appreciated.
__4__ The easiest way to determine whether someone needs help is to ask, and respect their answers.When close friends and loved ones are struggling, your support can be a “I love you”．
__5__ Your local resale shop can provide you with more information on this.By donating the things that you don't need, want, or use, you allow another person to benefit from them.
A．Try to stand up for someone.
B．Help someone who's struggling.
C．Choose to donate your used things.
D．Don't leave a mess for others to clean up.
E．When you've decided to be a hero, be it right now.
F．If you can, take five minutes and be an everyday hero.
G．Maybe the bad tempered old man suffers from a disease.
UNIT 2 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.lead to failure; lead to success 2.is that being fast is not always good 3.Recently I read a small story 4.it was he himself that all the other animals were really afraid of
5．adopt such an attitude towards our friends
Ⅱ.①The fable shares with readers a story about
②As a matter of fact, the fable mirrors that
③As an old saying goes ④In my daily life
⑤It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
A moment later, I regained my consciousness. I wanted to express my sincere gratitude to the man who saved my life.But he was gone.My relatives and friends were so concerned about my safety that they even didn't notice him leave.Feeling regretful, I decided to look for him through the Internet, but in vain.I made a post, adding that “Words are far from enough to convey my heartfelt thanks, my angel.Best wishes for you！”， expecting him to see my heart with an increasing number of likes and shares.Although I have not seen my hero ever since, the gratitude to him will live in my heart forever.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：作为普通人，也许我们无法成为大英雄，但我们平时的每一个小小的善举都会益于他人和社会。
1．选F 根据前后文语境可知，F项起过渡衔接的作用。空前一句提到平凡的英雄能欣然地、愉悦地做一些善举来点亮这个世界。空后一句提到从一些简单的想法做起就可以了。故F项“如果你能做到，那么就去花五分钟的时间去做一个平凡的英雄吧”符合语境。
2．选D 根据本段的主旨句“Leave a space cleaner than you found it.”及前一句“At home, keep your things organized.”可知，D项“不要留下脏乱的状态让别人收拾”符合语境。
3．选G 根据下一句“Maybe the fast food worker has two other jobs and children at home.”可知，G项与下文句子结构相似，构成并列，且都表示对别人的体谅。
4．选B 根据该段的内容可知，平凡的英雄要学会帮助那些需要帮助的人，故选B。
5．选C 根据该段的内容可知，学会把自己不需要、不想要或者用不到的东西捐赠给别人，这也是成为平凡的英雄的一种途径，故选C。
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