Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Present an argument about space exploration
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于太空探索的议论文。议论文是就有关问题进行分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的观点和建议的文章。即通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非,从而表达出作者的观点,支持或否定某种主张。议论文常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成,要求观点明确,论据充分,逻辑清晰。正反观点类议论文是其中的一种,通常提出某观点或某话题,并指出对此话题产生的两种对立观点,对正反两方面的论点进行论证,最后给出自己的看法。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据本文围绕太空探索利弊进行的讨论,可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下:
二、学行文逻辑
文章采用了“总—分—总”的论述结构,即先提出论点,而后从几个方面论述,最后总结归纳。作者在第一段提出了自己拥护太空探索的观点,随后从三个方面进行论述。基于太空探索为人类带来的种种好处,文章末段再次重申太空探索对人类短期和长远发展都有益。
三、学亮点表达
1.亮点词汇
第一段第三句中使用形容词immediate修饰名词solutions,突出了找到解决方案的紧迫性。第三段最后一句使用了副词widely 来修饰动词used,生动地描述出太空技术在各行各业的广泛运用。
针对练笔(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①It is __________ (wide) acknowledged that our country is more and more powerful.
②In order to protect our environment, ______________________________ should be taken.
为了保护我们的环境,应该立即采取行动。
2.亮点句式
①High end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration.
赏析:本句中because of advanced technology是原因状语;which引导定语从句,修饰先行词advanced technology。are made .../was first created是被动语态。to meet是不定式作目的状语。本段文字句式结构丰富,表达灵活,表明了太空探索对科技进步的推动作用。
②In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home.
赏析:本句中In order to ...作目的状语。that引导定语从句,修饰先行词planets。本句陈述了目前地球人口快速增长,科学家们正在努力寻找未来能够成为我们新家园的其他星球,表明了太空探索的重要性。
针对练笔/完成句子
①She ____________________ early from teaching ________________________.
她由于健康状况不佳而被迫早早地从教学岗位上退休。
②________________, you should give up the habit of staying up late.(不定式作目的状语)
为了保持健康,你应该停止熬夜的习惯。
③________________________, the professor suggested that we should pay attention to improving people's environmental awareness.
为了保护大自然,教授建议我们应该注意提高人们的环境意识。
④Mars is a planet ________________________.
火星是一个人类未知的星球。
四、学顺承衔接
作者在第一段首先摆出其他人的观点,即反对太空探索,然后通过However一词引出自己的观点,即赞同太空探索,这也是本文的主要论点。文章第二段运用“Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.”介绍了第一个分论点, 并在段中使用了Then, and, As a result等连接词语使句子之间层次清晰,逻辑鲜明,语意连贯。第三段运用了because of, also等衔接词语使句子之间语意连贯。第三段中的第三句和最后一句分别使用了“For example, such as”来用于列举,对前文内容进行了合理解释,使文意更为清晰明了。
写作项目指导
Present an argument about space exploration
——阐述有关太空探索的论点
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1 Introduce the topic.
Part 2 Arguments and reasons for the pros and cons.
Part 3 Express your own opinion.
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 引出讨论的话题
①____________________________________________________ space is worth exploring.
最近,我们班就太空是否值得探索展开了热烈的讨论。
②The opinions about space exploration ____________________________.
关于太空探索的观点因人而异。
③The topic of space exploration __________________________________________.
最近,太空探索的话题变得越来越流行。
第二部分 阐述正反双方观点,并说明理由
1.太空探索的利弊有哪些?
①______________ n. 通信
②a waste of money ______________
③______________ 能源短缺
④______________ 天气预报
⑤huge costs and risks ______________
⑥update products ________________
⑦____________________________离我们的日常生活太遥远
⑧____________________________使我们的生活更方便
⑨provide us with important information ________________
⑩have a better understanding of life and the universe ________________
2.说明理由的表达有哪些?
①Some students object to space exploration.They hold the view that space exploration ______________________________________.
一些学生反对太空探索。他们认为与太空探索有关的很多问题还未解决。
②They say this kind of exploration is ____________________________.
他们说这种探索是浪费时间和金钱。
③Exploring space is ______________ for astronauts that sometimes they ________________________ in finishing the missions.
探索太空对宇航员来说是非常危险的,有时他们冒着生命危险完成任务。
④Some of the new technologies __________________________ and thus ________________ for us.
在太空中使用的一些新技术可以用于我们的日常生活,从而为我们创造一种更好的生活。
⑤With the resources on the earth running out, it is necessary to ____________________________________.
随着地球上的资源逐渐枯竭,有必要在外层空间寻找新的资源。
⑥These explorations make it possible ______________________________________________________________.
这些探索使发现适合人类居住的其他行星成为可能。
第三部分 基于上述分析表达个人观点
①As far as I am concerned, ________________ to explore the space.__________________________________________________but also it can enrich our life.
在我看来,探索太空是值得的。它不仅能促进社会的发展,还能丰富我们的生活。
②In conclusion, I think ______________________________________ of space exploration.
总之,我认为太空探索的优点大于缺点。
③In my opinion, __________________________________________, it is worthwhile carrying on space exploration.
就我而言,尽管存在巨大的风险和困难,但进行太空探索是值得的。
[随堂针对练笔]
最近,你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下面表格提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。
30%的同学认为 不值得探索
离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远
浪费金钱,这些金钱本可用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题
70%的同学认为 值得探索
卫星已用来进行通讯、天气预报,使我们的生活更方便了
有望解决地球能源短缺等问题
你的观点?
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
根据提示完成短文,选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on ①___________________________.
On the one hand, 30% of us think that space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is ②__________________________ and our daily life.And space exploration will waste a lot of money, which can be used to solve the problems, ③____________________________.
On the other hand, 70% think space is worthy to be explored.As we all know, satellites ④______________________________ as well as weather forecast, which makes our life more convenient.Besides, ⑤____________________________________on other planets, the problem of energy shortages on our earth can be solved.
Personally speaking, ⑥__________________________________, which will make a great difference to our life.
A.have been used for communication
B.too far away from us
C.whether space is worth exploring
D.such as starvation and pollution
E.it is worthwhile to explore space
F.if resources are found
写作素材储备
(一)针对“钱是否能带来幸福”话题的正反观点
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn't survive without money. Besides, money can help us solve many problems in life. With enough money we can live a comfortable life. However, others hold the opposite opinion. They don't think money means everything. For example, money cannot buy health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life.
一些学生认为钱很重要,没有钱我们就无法生存。此外,钱可以帮助我们解决生活中的许多问题。有了足够的钱,我们就能过上舒适的生活。然而,其他人持相反的观点。他们不认为钱就是一切。例如,金钱不能买到健康。如果我们太重视金钱,我们就找不到生活的真正意义。
(二)针对“假期宅家还是外出旅游”话题的正反观点
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and may meet some difficulties while traveling.
有些人赞成待在家里。他们认为它既方便又舒适。更重要的是,他们可以节省钱用于其他目的。但是他们会失去了解外面世界的机会。然而,其他人更喜欢出去旅游,因为它可以增加他们的知识,开阔他们的视野。但是他们会花更多的钱,在旅行时可能遇到一些困难。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
三、1.①widely ②immediate action 2.①was forced to retire; because of ill health ②To keep healthy ③In order to protect nature ④that is unknown to humans
写作项目指导
第一部分
①Recently our class has had a heated discussion on whether
②vary from person to person
③is becoming more and more popular recently
第二部分
1.①communication ②浪费钱 ③energy shortage
④weather forecasts ⑤巨大的成本和风险 ⑥更新产品
⑦too far away from our daily life ⑧make our life more convenient ⑨向我们提供重要信息 ⑩对生命和宇宙有了更好的了解 2.①has many unsolved problems connected with it
②a waste of time and money ③so dangerous; are risking their lives ④could be used in our daily life; create a better life
⑤find new resources in outer space ⑥to find other planets which are suitable for humans to live on
第三部分
①it is worthwhile; Not only can it promote the development of society ②the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
③although there are huge risks and difficulties
随堂针对练笔
①~⑥ CBDAFE
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Section Ⅵ
Writing
目 录
写作项目——Present an argument about space exploration
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Present an argument about space exploration
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于太空探索的议论文。议论文是就有关问题进行分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的观点和建议的文章。即通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非,从而表达出作者的观点,支持或否定某种主张。议论文常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成,要求观点明确,论据充分,逻辑清晰。正反观点类议论文是其中的一种,通常提出某观点或某话题,并指出对此话题产生的两种对立观点,对正反两方面的论点进行论证,最后给出自己的看法。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
根据本文围绕太空探索利弊进行的讨论,可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下:
二、学行文逻辑
文章采用了“总—分—总”的论述结构,即先提出论点,而后从几个方面论述,最后总结归纳。作者在第一段提出了自己拥护太空探索的观点,随后从三个方面进行论述。基于太空探索为人类带来的种种好处,文章末段再次重申太空探索对人类短期和长远发展都有益。
三、学亮点表达
1.亮点词汇
第一段第三句中使用形容词immediate修饰名词solutions,突出了找到解决方案的紧迫性。第三段最后一句使用了副词widely 来修饰动词used,生动地描述出太空技术在各行各业的广泛运用。
针对练笔 (单句语法填空/完成句子)
①It is (wide) acknowledged that our country is more and more powerful.
②In order to protect our environment, should be taken.
为了保护我们的环境,应该立即采取行动。
widely
immediate action
2.亮点句式
①High-end products around the world are made to a higher standard now because of advanced technology which was first created to meet the requirements for space exploration.
赏析:本句中because of advanced technology是原因状语;which引导定语从句,修饰先行词advanced technology。are made .../was first created是被动语态。to meet是不定式作目的状语。本段文字句式结构丰富,表达灵活,表明了太空探索对科技进步的推动作用。
②In order to provide for such a rapidly increasing population, scientists are trying to find other planets that could one day be our new home.
赏析:本句中In order to ...作目的状语。that引导定语从句,修饰先行词planets。本句陈述了目前地球人口快速增长,科学家们正在努力寻找未来能够成为我们新家园的其他星球,表明了太空探索的重要性。
针对练笔/完成句子
①She early from teaching ____________________.
她由于健康状况不佳而被迫早早地从教学岗位上退休。
② ,you should give up the habit of staying up late.(不定式作目的状语)
为了保持健康,你应该停止熬夜的习惯。
was forced to retire
because of ill health
To keep healthy
③ ,the professor suggested that we should pay attention to improving people's environmental awareness.
为了保护大自然,教授建议我们应该注意提高人们的环境意识。
④Mars is a planet .
火星是一个人类未知的星球。
In order to protect nature
that is unknown to humans
四、学顺承衔接
作者在第一段首先摆出其他人的观点,即反对太空探索,然后通过However一词引出自己的观点,即赞同太空探索,这也是本文的主要论点。文章第二段运用“Firstly, exploring space has already made a difference in the fight against world hunger.”介绍了第一个分论点, 并在段中使用了Then, and, As a result等连接词语使句子之间层次清晰,逻辑鲜明,语意连贯。第三段运用了because of, also等衔接词语使句子之间语意连贯。第三段中的第三句和最后一句分别使用了“For example, such as”来用于列举,对前文内容进行了合理解释,使文意更为清晰明了。
写作项目指导
Present an argument about space exploration
——阐述有关太空探索的论点
第一步:构思谋篇
Part 1 Introduce the topic.
Part 2 Arguments and reasons for the pros and cons.
Part 3 Express your own opinion.
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 引出讨论的话题
①_________________________________________________ space is worth exploring.
最近,我们班就太空是否值得探索展开了热烈的讨论。
Recently our class has had a heated discussion on whether
②The opinions about space exploration____________________ _______.
关于太空探索的观点因人而异。
③The topic of space exploration___________________________ _______________.
最近,太空探索的话题变得越来越流行。
vary from person to
person
is becoming more and more
popular recently
第二部分 阐述正反双方观点,并说明理由
1.太空探索的利弊有哪些 ?
①______________ n. 通信
②a waste of money _______
③______________ 能源短缺
④_______________ 天气预报
⑤huge costs and risks _________________
communication
浪费钱
energy shortage
weather forecasts
巨大的成本和风险
⑥update products _________
⑦___________________________ 离我们的日常生活太遥远
⑧___________________________ 使我们的生活更方便
⑨provide us with important information
___________________
⑩have a better understanding of life and the universe
___________________________
更新产品
too far away from our daily life
make our life more convenient
向我们提供重要信息
对生命和宇宙有了更好的了解
2.说明理由的表达有哪些?
①Some students object to space exploration.They hold the view that space exploration .
一些学生反对太空探索。他们认为与太空探索有关的很多问题还未解决。
has many unsolved problems connected with it
②They say this kind of exploration is .
他们说这种探索是浪费时间和金钱。
③Exploring space is for astronauts that sometimes they in finishing the missions.
探索太空对宇航员来说是非常危险的,有时他们冒着生命危险完成任务。
a waste of time and money
so dangerous
are risking their lives
④Some of the new technologies and thus for us.
在太空中使用的一些新技术可以用于我们的日常生活,从而为我们创造一种更好的生活。
⑤With the resources on the earth running out, it is necessary to .
随着地球上的资源逐渐枯竭,有必要在外层空间寻找新的资源。
could be used in our daily life
create a better life
find new resources in outer space
⑥These explorations make it possible _______________________ ______________________________.
这些探索使发现适合人类居住的其他行星成为可能。
to find other planets which
are suitable for humans to live on
第三部分 基于上述分析表达个人观点
①As far as I am concerned, to explore the space.____ ________________________________________but also it can enrich our life.
在我看来,探索太空是值得的。它不仅能促进社会的发展,还能丰富我们的生活。
②In conclusion, I think of space exploration.
总之,我认为太空探索的优点大于缺点。
it is worthwhile
only can it promote the development of society
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Not
③In my opinion,________________________________________, it is worthwhile carrying on space exploration.
就我而言,尽管存在巨大的风险和困难,但进行太空探索是值得的。
although there are huge risks and difficulties
[随堂针对练笔]
最近,你班同学就“太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下面表格提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。
30%的同学认为 不值得探索
离我们及我们的日常生活太遥远
浪费金钱,这些金钱本可用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题
70%的同学认为 值得探索
卫星已用来进行通讯、天气预报,使我们的生活更方便了
有望解决地球能源短缺等问题
你的观点? 续表
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
根据提示完成短文,选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on ① .
On the one hand, 30% of us think that space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is ② and our daily life.And space exploration will waste a lot of money, which can be used to solve the problems, ③ .
On the other hand, 70% think space is worthy to be explored.As we all know, satellites ④ as well as weather forecast, which makes our life more convenient.Besides, ⑤ on other planets, the problem of energy shortages on our earth can be solved.
Personally speaking, ⑥ , which will make a great difference to our life.
A.have been used for communication
B.too far away from us
C.whether space is worth exploring
D.such as starvation and pollution
E.it is worthwhile to explore space
F.if resources are found
答案:①~⑥ CBDAFE
写作素材储备
(一)针对“钱是否能带来幸福”话题的正反观点
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn't survive without money. Besides, money can help us solve many problems in life. With enough money we can live a comfortable life. However, others hold the opposite opinion. They don't think money means everything. For example, money cannot buy health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life.
一些学生认为钱很重要,没有钱我们就无法生存。此外,钱可以帮助我们解决生活中的许多问题。有了足够的钱,我们就能过上舒适的生活。然而,其他人持相反的观点。他们不认为钱就是一切。例如,金钱不能买到健康。如果我们太重视金钱,我们就找不到生活的真正意义。
(二)针对“假期宅家还是外出旅游”话题的正反观点
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and may meet some difficulties while traveling.
有些人赞成待在家里。他们认为它既方便又舒适。更重要的是,他们可以节省钱用于其他目的。但是他们会失去了解外面世界的机会。然而,其他人更喜欢出去旅游,因为它可以增加他们的知识,开阔他们的视野。但是他们会花更多的钱,在旅行时可能遇到一些困难。
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.Outer space explorations have been a heated discussion, _______ ________________________________________.
外太空探索一直是一个热议的话题,不同的人对此持不同的态度。
课时跟踪检测
about
which different people have different attitudes
2.They believe that _____________________________________ ______________________________.
他们认为进行这种探索需要花费很多钱,这是不值得的。
3.This might be true, but I think in the long run humans have to turn to other planets when .
这可能是对的,但我认为从长远来看,当所有的资源都被用尽时,人类不得不转向其他星球。
it takes so much money to do this kind of
all the resources are used up
exploration, which is not worth it
4.In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and ____________ _______________________________________________.
在我看来,人们应该有开拓精神,因此这种探索外太空是值得尝试的。
5.In my opinion, space technology development ______________ ________________.
我认为,空间技术的发展必将造福全人类。
therefore such
is sure to benefit
explorations into the outer space are worth trying out
all human beings
Ⅱ.应用文写作
上周日你校组织学生参观了市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请你在博客上用英语写一篇博文,分享此次活动。内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.活动内容(听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步);
3.个人感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:科技馆Science and Technology Museum
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文:
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today's trip to the Science and Technology Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be remembered forever.
All students visited an exhibition themed on “Achievements of China Aerospace”.First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace.Then came the highlight, experiencing thrilling and funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I'll apply myself to my study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day.
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落结尾补写语段,使文章构成一篇完整的短文。
Carlos and Maya dreamed of becoming space explorers.
On their way home, Carlos and Maya saw a spaceship in the window of a toy store. They went inside the store to see how much it cost. They saw the price and it was too expensive. They tried to pool their money together but it still wasn't enough.
They left the store sad and disappointed. Carlos suddenly realized that his birthday was coming up. Maybe he could ask their parents to buy the spaceship as a gift for his birthday.
When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her what he wanted for his birthday.
Their family didn't have much when it came to money. So, when their dad stopped by the store to see the toy that Carlos wanted, he found it was too expensive. They couldn't afford it.
On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. But when he got to the living room, he saw a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box. His dad had made it for him. It had wings on each side and had enough space to ride in. It was a spaceship but it wasn't what he wanted.
Tears flowed (流) from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room. Maya had just woken up and saw their mom knocking on the door and asking Carlos to come out. But he didn't want to.
Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only the cardboard box. She saw their dad beside it, bent down (弯着腰) on one knee with his head down.
Maya didn't want her brother to be sad on his birthday. So she tried to think of a way to cheer her brother up. She looked at the cardboard spaceship and got an idea.
Carlos didn't have breakfast and now he was hungry. He was about to get out of bed when he heard a knock on the door. It was Maya. She said that they had a surprise for him.
(文章以彩蛋为线索展开。主要讲述了梦想成为太空探险家的Carlos和Maya热爱太空,在Carlos生日那天他的爸爸用纸板箱给他做一艘飞船。请根据上下文情节,结合以下线索提示,用80词左右描述一下Carlos在飞船里的见闻。线索:Carlos打开门看到Maya坐在纸板飞船里→Maya邀请Carlos坐在她前面驾驶宇宙飞船→Carlos和家人一起模拟太空宇宙飞船飞行的情景。)
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said“Best Restaurant in Space”. Carlos and Maya got out of the spaceship. As they were walking towards the table, they walked just like those spacemen shown on TV. After they ate, they got back in their spaceship. They spent all day in the spaceship. When it was time for bed, Carlos called out to his dad and said with a smile, “That was the best birthday gift ever. I love you, Dad!”
参考范文:
Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. Maya invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship. He could see the excitement on Maya's face so he got in the spaceship. Then he heard their dad's voice. Their dad stood behind the spaceship and then started making the sound of a spaceship during lift-off and pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly. When they came into the living room, there were stars shining around the walls. He felt like he was in outer space.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
In today's world, technology is a part of daily life.In order to keep civilization hand in hand with technological advances, and to understand the connected future they will have, children in schools have to be taught technical skills.But how can teachers integrate (使……融入) technology into their classrooms Here are a couple of ways.
Teach acceptance of connected learning.In the information age, it's only right to teach kids how to jump at connected learning. 1 For example, a tablet PC could be used in art class to draw pictures or even signs for the school.
Use a video chat system to teleconference.The idea of pen pals can be strengthened by video chat systems. 2 In this situation, children will learn how to share experiences and build new relationships from a distance.Teleconferencing is a great way to teach children about teleconferencing etiquette (礼仪). 3
Develop a class wiki or blog.In order to help get your students active in class lessons, you can use a blog or wiki to make them comment on lessons, topics and current events.Students should also be allowed to create new posts about news or their thoughts. 4
Create a podcast (播客) for your class.Technology is always about being seen. 5 It can also be used to be heard.With a classroom podcast, you can read passages from a textbook or a novel or schedule discussions on a certain topic that's in line with your curriculum.This will teach broadcasting skills, speaking skills and critical thinking skills.
A.This is a great way to improve creative writing.
B.You can also upload videos to a private channel.
C.However, it's wrong to think it's only about being seen.
D.This will show them how to solve complex math problems.
E.This includes using technology as a tool or a way to learn new concepts.
F.For example, you can teach children when it's alright to connect and how to act when on camera.
G.These systems can also be used to connect with students from other classroom that are far away.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何把科技引进课堂。
1.选E 上文提到“在信息时代,教孩子们如何进行联网学习是唯一正确的做法”。下一句具体举例说明信息时代中科技的用途,故E选项“这包括将技术作为学习新概念的工具或方式”符合语境,起到承上启下的作用。
2.选G 上文提到“可以使用视频聊天系统进行电话会议。视频聊天系统能强化笔友的概念”,G选项“这些系统还可用于连接来自距离很远的其他教室的学生”可以承接上文,且该选项中的“These systems”与上文的“video chat systems”相呼应,选项中的“also”也提示了句意与上一句存在承接关系。
3.选F 上文提到“电话会议是教孩子们学习电话会议礼仪的好方法”,F选项“例如,你可以教孩子什么时候可以连接以及在镜头前如何活动”承接上文,符合语境。
4.选A 上文提到“学生们应该也被允许创造关于新闻和他们想法的新帖子”,A选项“这是提高创造性写作的好方法”能够承接上文,符合语境。
5.选C 上文提到“技术总是会被看见”,下文则提到“它也可能被听见”,故C选项“然而,认为它仅仅能被看到是不对的”承上启下,符合语境。UNIT 4 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.Outer space explorations have been a heated discussion, ______________________________________________.
外太空探索一直是一个热议的话题,不同的人对此持不同的态度。
2.They believe that ____________________________________________________, ________________________________.
他们认为进行这种探索需要花费很多钱,这是不值得的。
3.This might be true, but I think in the long run humans have to turn to other planets when ____________________________.
这可能是对的,但我认为从长远来看,当所有的资源都被用尽时,人类不得不转向其他星球。
4.In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and ________________________________.
在我看来,人们应该有开拓精神,因此这种探索外太空是值得尝试的。
5.In my opinion, space technology development __________________________________.
我认为,空间技术的发展必将造福全人类。
Ⅱ.应用文写作
上周日你校组织学生参观了市科技馆举办的“中国航天成就展”。请你在博客上用英语写一篇博文,分享此次活动。内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.活动内容(听讲座、看视频、体验太空漫步);
3.个人感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:科技馆Science and Technology Museum
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落结尾补写语段,使文章构成一篇完整的短文。
Carlos and Maya dreamed of becoming space explorers.
On their way home, Carlos and Maya saw a spaceship in the window of a toy store. They went inside the store to see how much it cost. They saw the price and it was too expensive. They tried to pool their money together but it still wasn't enough.
They left the store sad and disappointed. Carlos suddenly realized that his birthday was coming up. Maybe he could ask their parents to buy the spaceship as a gift for his birthday.
When they got home, Carlos ran straight to their mother and told her what he wanted for his birthday.
Their family didn't have much when it came to money. So, when their dad stopped by the store to see the toy that Carlos wanted, he found it was too expensive. They couldn't afford it.
On the day of his birthday, Carlos got up early, excited to see his gift. But when he got to the living room, he saw a spaceship that was made out of a cardboard box. His dad had made it for him. It had wings on each side and had enough space to ride in. It was a spaceship but it wasn't what he wanted.
Tears flowed (流) from Carlos' eyes and he ran back to his room. Maya had just woken up and saw their mom knocking on the door and asking Carlos to come out. But he didn't want to.
Maya got to the living room but couldn't see the spaceship they had seen, only the cardboard box. She saw their dad beside it, bent down (弯着腰) on one knee with his head down.
Maya didn't want her brother to be sad on his birthday. So she tried to think of a way to cheer her brother up. She looked at the cardboard spaceship and got an idea.
Carlos didn't have breakfast and now he was hungry. He was about to get out of bed when he heard a knock on the door. It was Maya. She said that they had a surprise for him.
(文章以彩蛋为线索展开。主要讲述了梦想成为太空探险家的Carlos和Maya热爱太空,在Carlos生日那天他的爸爸用纸板箱给他做一艘飞船。请根据上下文情节,结合以下线索提示,用80词左右描述一下Carlos在飞船里的见闻。线索:Carlos打开门看到Maya坐在纸板飞船里→Maya邀请Carlos坐在她前面驾驶宇宙飞船→Carlos和家人一起模拟太空宇宙飞船飞行的情景。)
A moment later, they stopped at the dinner table where there was a card that said“Best Restaurant in Space”. Carlos and Maya got out of the spaceship. As they were walking towards the table, they walked just like those spacemen shown on TV. After they ate, they got back in their spaceship. They spent all day in the spaceship. When it was time for bed, Carlos called out to his dad and said with a smile, “That was the best birthday gift ever. I love you, Dad!”
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
In today's world, technology is a part of daily life.In order to keep civilization hand in hand with technological advances, and to understand the connected future they will have, children in schools have to be taught technical skills.But how can teachers integrate (使……融入) technology into their classrooms Here are a couple of ways.
Teach acceptance of connected learning.In the information age, it's only right to teach kids how to jump at connected learning. __1__ For example, a tablet PC could be used in art class to draw pictures or even signs for the school.
Use a video chat system to teleconference.The idea of pen pals can be strengthened by video chat systems. __2__ In this situation, children will learn how to share experiences and build new relationships from a distance.Teleconferencing is a great way to teach children about teleconferencing etiquette (礼仪).__3__
Develop a class wiki or blog.In order to help get your students active in class lessons, you can use a blog or wiki to make them comment on lessons, topics and current events.Students should also be allowed to create new posts about news or their thoughts. __4__
Create a podcast (播客) for your class.Technology is always about being seen. __5__ It can also be used to be heard.With a classroom podcast, you can read passages from a textbook or a novel or schedule discussions on a certain topic that's in line with your curriculum.This will teach broadcasting skills, speaking skills and critical thinking skills.
A.This is a great way to improve creative writing.
B.You can also upload videos to a private channel.
C.However, it's wrong to think it's only about being seen.
D.This will show them how to solve complex math problems.
E.This includes using technology as a tool or a way to learn new concepts.
F.For example, you can teach children when it's alright to connect and how to act when on camera.
G.These systems can also be used to connect with students from other classroom that are far away.
UNIT 4 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.about which different people have different attitudes
2.it takes so much money to do this kind of exploration; which is not worth it 3.all the resources are used up 4.therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out
5.is sure to benefit all human beings
Ⅱ.参考范文:
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today's trip to the Science and Technology Museum is really a memorable experience and this will be remembered forever.
All students visited an exhibition themed on “Achievements of China Aerospace”.First, we attended informative lectures and watched extremely exciting videos about launching rockets which allowed us to get deeper insights into China Aerospace.Then came the highlight, experiencing thrilling and funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of China Aerospace experts, I'll apply myself to my study so that I can make contributions to our country like them one day.
Ⅲ.参考范文:
Carlos opened the door and just saw Maya was sitting in the cardboard spaceship. Maya invited Carlos to sit in front of her and drive the spaceship. He could see the excitement on Maya's face so he got in the spaceship. Then he heard their dad's voice. Their dad stood behind the spaceship and then started making the sound of a spaceship during lift off and pushed the cardboard spaceship slowly. When they came into the living room, there were stars shining around the walls. He felt like he was in outer space.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了如何把科技引进课堂。
1.选E 上文提到“在信息时代,教孩子们如何进行联网学习是唯一正确的做法”。下一句具体举例说明信息时代中科技的用途,故E选项“这包括将技术作为学习新概念的工具或方式”符合语境,起到承上启下的作用。
2.选G 上文提到“可以使用视频聊天系统进行电话会议。视频聊天系统能强化笔友的概念”,G选项“这些系统还可用于连接来自距离很远的其他教室的学生”可以承接上文,且该选项中的“These systems”与上文的“video chat systems”相呼应,选项中的“also”也提示了句意与上一句存在承接关系。
3.选F 上文提到“电话会议是教孩子们学习电话会议礼仪的好方法”,F选项“例如,你可以教孩子什么时候可以连接以及在镜头前如何活动”承接上文,符合语境。
4.选A 上文提到“学生们应该也被允许创造关于新闻和他们想法的新帖子”,A选项“这是提高创造性写作的好方法”能够承接上文,符合语境。
5.选C 上文提到“技术总是会被看见”,下文则提到“它也可能被听见”,故C选项“然而,认为它仅仅能被看到是不对的”承上启下,符合语境。
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