Section Ⅴ Listening & Writing
教材听力“三关过”
一、过词汇关——词块互译
1．words fail ______________
2．______________ 去滑冰
3．have a continental climate ______________
4．as hot as an oven ______________
5．as far as the eye can see ______________
6．in the dead centre of ______________
7．______________ 消磨时间
8．______________ 路过；经过
9．enter the grasslands with its rolling hills ______________
10．sound incredible ______________
二、过泛听关——听教材录音选最佳答案
1．Where are the speakers now？( )
A．On the lake.
B．On the train.
C．At the cinema.
2．How do people in Winnipeg kill time？( )
A．Go to the movies or restaurants.
B．Go skiing or hiking.
C．Both A and B.
3．What did Daiyu and Liu Qian do last autumn？( )
A．They travelled to Moscow.
B．They visited Canada.
C．They went camping on the mountain.
三、过精听关——依据教材听力完成句子
1．That's certainly ______________ many places.
2．In fact, ________________________ Edmonton, we'll be in the Prairie.
3．There are a few small towns along the way, but ________________________.
听力素养“漫养成”
|掌握规律技法|
理解英语习语
英语习语文字简洁，形象生动，有着丰富的文化内涵。适当掌握一些常见的英语习语，有助于进一步加深对听力材料的理解。如：
1．cat nap 小睡；打瞌睡
2．a piece of cake 小菜一碟
3．couch potato 懒人；电视迷
4．apple of the eye 掌上明珠
5．go bananas 发疯；发狂
6．roll up one's sleeves 卷起袖子(大干或打架)
7．on cloud nine 很高兴
8．ten to one 十有八九
9．Go Dutch AA制；各付各的账
10．break the bank 倾家荡产
[典例]
Q：Why is the woman looking for her raincoat
A．It's raining heavily now.
B．The radio says it is going to rain heavily.
C．She can't find it.
[听力原文]
W：Jack, have you seen my raincoat
M：No, but I don't think it's going to rain.
W：But the radio says it is going to rain cats and dogs.
[分析] 听力材料中的rain cats and dogs的意思是“倾盆大雨”，如果知道这个习语的话，即可快速得出答案。故选B项。
|主题听力训练|
第一节
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
1．Where are the two speakers？( )
A．In Canada. B．In the US. C．In Mexico.
2．Where will the man stay for two days？( )
A．Shanghai. B．Hangzhou. C．Shenzhen.
3．Where are the woman and Mike going during the vacation？( )
A．To London. B．To Boston. C．To Beijing.
4．Where does the man most likely live ( )
A．In Canada.
B．In New York.
C．In California.
5．Who travelled with the man last month？( )
A．Jeff and Richard.
B．The man's dog.
C．The woman.
第二节
听下面2段对话。每段对话后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话读两遍。
听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。
6．Why won't the speakers travel to South Korea？( )
A．The woman likes Japan more.
B．The woman has already been there.
C．The tickets are too expensive.
7. What had the woman kept talking about？( )
A．A city in South Korea.
B．A type of food.
C．A popular clothing brand.
听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。
8．Why did the woman go to Shanghai？( )
A．To visit a friend.
B．To find a job.
C．To go sightseeing.
9．Where does the woman prefer to live？( )
A．In Beijing.
B．In Shanghai.
C．In Guizhou.
10．What does the woman think of men from Shanghai？( )
A．They are generous.
B．They are friendly.
C．They are helpful.
|多积主题表达|
“旅游”场景相关听力表达
1．go on vacation 去度假
2．travel alone 独自旅行
3．hotel reservation 宾馆预订
4．take a road trip 公路旅行
5．helpful and enjoyable 有益且令人愉快的
6．have a lot of fun 玩得非常开心
7．enjoy the beautiful scenery 欣赏美景
8．I went to Yunnan for my holidays. 我去了云南度假。
9．It was my first flight and I was a bit nervous.
这是我的第一次飞行，我有点紧张。
10．The food was good and I visited many beautiful places.
食物很好，我参观了许多美丽的地方。
11．But the weather was a little cold in the north and I didn't like it.
但是北方的天气有点冷，我不喜欢那里。
12．And on the last day we had a barbecue, which was our favourite.
并且最后一天我们吃了烧烤，这是我们最喜欢的。
13．The water is so clear and blue, and the food is delicious.
水那么清澈和碧蓝，食物也很美味。
14．I arrived at the airport just in time at 1：50 pm to catch my plane which would leave ten minutes later.
我在下午1点50分及时到达机场，赶上了10分钟后起飞的飞机。
写作项目——Write an email about a journey
本单元的写作任务是写一封介绍旅行经历的电子邮件，属于游记的另一种形式，主要以旅游路线为线索，描写游览中的所见所闻以及所感。该类主题的写作引导青少年不仅要读万卷书，还要行万里路，鼓励他们走进社会和大自然，在旅途中探求自我价值和人生意义。
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结本课的篇章结构如下：
二、学行文逻辑
游记类文章一般都是以时间和旅游路线为线索。本文的时间及游程是After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto — the CN Tower — around dusk in downtown Chinatown — Montreal early the next morning — along St Paul Street —towards the Gulf of St Lawrence and down to the distant east coast towards the province of Nova Scotia and Halifax，线索非常分明，使得行文层次清晰、逻辑缜密。
三、学亮点表达
游记类文章一般会使用大量的描述性语言，对景色和心理感受进行生动形象的描绘，具有很强的画面感和感染力。
1．准确而生动的形容词，用来描述主体的特征或状态，或表现主观感受：如Reading and Thinking课文中exceptional beauty, spectacular mountain peaks and forests, different creatures, their windows were red, gold, and orange以及本课课文中wonderful sights and sounds, unique Quebec culture and traditions, fantastic restaurants and clubs等。
2．生动的动词，用来描述活动和行动：如Reading and Thinking课文中 took their breath away, thundered on以及本课课文中rolling by, speeding along the St Lawrence River等。
仿写训练/翻译句子并体会其中形容词和动词的使用
①
站在山顶上，我看到云烟从山谷升腾而起，惊叹不已。
②
我惊奇地发现雾气氤氲的温泉和很多外来游客，他们都讲着不同的方言。
③
整个下午，我们穿梭于一家家令人惊叹的商店，欣赏着一件件精美石雕作品。
Write an email to a friend about your travel experience
——给朋友写一封关于你的旅行经历的电子邮件
第一步：构思谋篇
体裁 关于旅行经历的电子邮件
时态 以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人称 以第一人称和第三人称为主
写作 要点 Opening(开篇): greeting＋purpose(称呼＋目的) Body(主体): 具体列出见闻的内容(who, when, where, what, how) Closing(结尾): 对旅游的总结(communicative sentence＋signature)
注意 事项 描述旅行的经历和见闻时，应按照一定的时间、空间或逻辑顺序，这样可以使内容层次清晰。同时还应分清主次，详略得当，要突出最有特色、最感兴趣的事物。
第二步：要点表达
第一部分：点明写信目的
1．I'm __________________________________________ that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
我很高兴与你分享我在上一个暑假期间的一次真正迷人的旅行经历。
2．I can't wait to ______________ you my travel here!
我迫不及待地和你们分享我在这里的旅行！
第二部分：具体介绍旅行见闻
1．所去的地方
On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which ____________________________ the giant stone Buddha.
7月7日，我和父母乘车前往四川乐山，乐山以巨石大佛而闻名。
2．所见所闻
________________________________________________________ make it world-famous and attractive.In addition, you can also __________________________________________ there, including the awesome sea of clouds and hot springs.
正是奇松和怪石使它闻名世界，具有吸引力。此外，你还可以在那里欣赏其他壮观的自然景观，包括令人惊叹的云海和温泉。
3．所感
I observed so many cultural relics there, __________________________________.
我在那里看到了这么多文物，这让我为我的国家和民族感到特别骄傲。
第三部分：总结及期望
1．We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was ______________.If I have time, I ____________________________ Leshan again.
我们都很累，但我们的乐山之旅真的令人难忘。如果我有时间，我一定会再次去乐山。
2．Looking forward to ____________________ next time.
期待着下次和你一起去那里。
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny写邮件询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给她回一封邮件。
(一)游记类写作佳句
1．常用开头句
①Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey!
非常感谢您允许我踏上这段旅程！
②After a tiring day, we finally arrived in the old country.
经过一天的劳累，我们终于到达了这个古老的国家。
2．常用中间句
①The university is located in the eastern suburbs of the city.
这座大学坐落在城市的东郊。
②The village covers an area of 300 hectares, of which 30 hectares are for tea production.
这个村庄占地300公顷，其中30公顷为茶园。
③Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.
坐落在山顶的寺庙见证了这个地区的许多变化。
④It's very convenient to get there by taking buses No.17, 59 or 69 besides Subway Line 2.
乘车到达那里很方便，可乘坐公共汽车17路、59路或69路以及地铁2号线。
⑤Hangzhou has some top tourist attractions, which attract millions of visitors every year.
杭州有一些顶级的旅游景点，每年吸引数百万游客。
⑥As is known to all, Mount Hua is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.众所周知，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。
⑦It is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.这是一个你必须参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你不愿离开。
3．常用结束句
①We were astonished by its beauty.It is well worth visiting.
我们震撼于它的美丽。它很值得参观。
②It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories.这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。
③It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving the city!
到目前为止，这是一次美妙的旅行，我爱这个城市！
(二)自然环境精彩语段
1．林中景色
It was the cool gray dawn, and there was peace deep in the woods.Not a leaf stirred; not a sound disturbed great Nature's meditation.Dewdrops stood upon the leaves and grasses.A white layer of ashes covered the fire, and a thin blue breath of smoke rose straight into the air.
2．自然景色
It was so peaceful and quiet here and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Section Ⅴ
NO.1 练听说
教材听力“三关过”
一、1.难以言表 2.go skating 3.属于大陆性气候
4．热得像火炉 5.目之所及；一望无际 6.在正中央
7．kill time 8.pass through 9.进入丘陵起伏的草原
10．听起来不可思议
二、1～3 BCA
三、1.true of 2.by the time we get to 3.the land is petty empty
听力素养“漫养成”
1～5 ABCCB 6～10 BBBAC
附：听力材料
(Text 1)
M：Where are we now I can't tell what road this is.
W：We're heading for the US, ①but we're still in Canada. And we're quite a long distance from Mexico.
(Text 2)
W：On the first day, ②you will leave Shanghai for Hangzhou on the night flight. And you'll stay there for two days. You will then go to Shenzhen by subway on the third day and stay two nights there.
M：That sounds great. I'm looking forward to it. And can I get back by train
W：Of course.
(Text 3)
M：I'll leave for London next Monday, and then I'll fly to Boston from there. Do you have any vacation plans, Michelle
W：③Mike and I will travel to Beijing to see my parents for the Spring Festival.
(Text 4)
M：④ My wife and I are planning on driving from California to Canada for a few weeks.
W：That's exciting. My husband and I took a car trip from New York to Canada a few years ago. It was a lot of fun.
(Text 5)
W：Did you go on a trip alone or with your friends last month
M：I was planning to go with Jeff and Richard, but they both couldn't spare the time.
W：⑤What did you do with your dog while you were away
M：Oh, ⑤Tom is a good traveler, as long as he gets a chance to play.
(Text 6)
W：Where do you want to go for the summer holiday
M：I'm not sure. But I would like to go to South Korea or maybe Japan.
W：⑥I've been to South Korea before. So, maybe Japan is a better idea for this year.
M：When did you go to South Korea
W：I went during high school with my class. Remember？That's why I missed Chelsea's birthday party that year.
M：Oh yeah! ⑦And you couldn't stop talking about kimchi for weeks.
W：OK. OK.⑦It's delicious! So, shall we go to Japan, then I will look for tickets online. Hopefully, they won't be too expensive.
M：Great, I can't wait!
(Text 7)
W：Hi, George! Welcome back from summer vacation. Did you have a good time in Guizhou
M：Yes, I did.It was everything I expected, and more.How about you Did you go anywhere
W：Yes, as a matter of fact I did.⑧I spent a week in Shanghai trying to get a job there.
M：Shanghai is such a wonderful city! You'll really enjoy living there.
W：I'm not so sure.Shanghai has a lot going for it, but I like Beijing better.
M：What do you like best about Shanghai
W：Shanghai is one of the business centers of China, so there are lots of jobs, and there's always something new.It's more modern than Beijing and generally a convenient place to live.
M：⑨Why would you want to stay in Beijing
W：⑨For one thing, Beijing has a sense of history.You know, there's no Great Wall in Shanghai!
M：That's for sure.There's no Forbidden City or Summer Palace, either.
W：For another thing, I think people are very friendly in Beijing.
M：Yes, I can't agree more.People from Beijing are really friendly!
W：⑩But I've heard that men from Shanghai will help their wives with housework.That's the very quality I admire!
NO.2 促写作
由教材学写作
三、①Standing on the top of the mountain, I was astonished to see misty clouds rising from the valley.
②I was surprised to see that there was misty hot spring and many foreign tourists who spoke different dialects.
③We spent the afternoon in breathtaking shops and enjoying the delicate stone carving works.
写作项目指导
第二步：要点表达
第一部分：
1．glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience
2．share with
第二部分：
1．is famous for 2.It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that; enjoy other spectacular natural scenery 3.making me particularly proud of my country and nation
第三部分：
1．really unforgettable; am bound to pay a visit to
2．going there with you
针对练笔
参考范文：
Dear Jenny，
I'm glad to share an unforgettable travel experience with you. Last summer, I went to the seaside with my family. The blue sky, the vast sea, and the soft sand made me feel extremely relaxed. We played beach volleyball, built sandcastles, and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. It was really a wonderful trip that left a deep mark on my memory.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua(共95张PPT)
Section Ⅴ Listening & Writing
目 录
NO.1 练听说 / 耳熟能详需要“多磨耳”
NO.2 促写作 / 写作增分途径“多仿写”
课时跟踪检测
练听说 / 耳熟能详需要“多磨耳”
NO.1
教材听力“三关过”
一、过词汇关——词块互译
1．words fail __________
2． 去滑冰
3．have a continental climate _______________
4．as hot as an oven ___________
难以言表
go skating
属于大陆性气候
热得像火炉
5．as far as the eye can see ___________________
6．in the dead centre of _________
7． 消磨时间
8． 路过；经过
9．enter the grasslands with its rolling hills ___________________
10．sound incredible _______________
目之所及；一望无际
在正中央
kill time
pass through
进入丘陵起伏的草原
听起来不可思议
二、过泛听关——听教材录音选最佳答案
1．Where are the speakers now
A．On the lake.
B．On the train.
C．At the cinema.
√
√
2．How do people in Winnipeg kill time
A．Go to the movies or restaurants.
B．Go skiing or hiking.
C．Both A and B．
√
3．What did Daiyu and Liu Qian do last autumn
A．They travelled to Moscow.
B．They visited Canada.
C．They went camping on the mountain.
三、过精听关——依据教材听力完成句子
1．That's certainly many places.
2．In fact, Edmonton, we'll be in the Prairie.
3．There are a few small towns along the way, but_________________
.
true of
by the time we get to
the land is petty
empty
听力素养“漫养成”
|掌握规律技法|
理解英语习语
英语习语文字简洁，形象生动，有着丰富的文化内涵。适当掌握一些常见的英语习语，有助于进一步加深对听力材料的理解。如：
1．cat nap 小睡；打瞌睡
2．a piece of cake 小菜一碟
3．couch potato 懒人；电视迷
4．apple of the eye 掌上明珠
5．go bananas 发疯；发狂
6．roll up one's sleeves 卷起袖子(大干或打架)
7．on cloud nine 很高兴
8．ten to one 十有八九
9．Go Dutch AA制；各付各的账
10．break the bank 倾家荡产
[典例]
Q：Why is the woman looking for her raincoat
A．It's raining heavily now.
B．The radio says it is going to rain heavily.
C．She can't find it.
[听力原文]
W：Jack, have you seen my raincoat
M：No, but I don't think it's going to rain.
W：But the radio says it is going to rain cats and dogs.
[分析] 听力材料中的rain cats and dogs的意思是“倾盆大雨”，如果知道这个习语的话，即可快速得出答案。故选B项。
|主题听力训练|
第一节
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
√
√
1．Where are the two speakers
A．In Canada. B．In the US. C．In Mexico.
2．Where will the man stay for two days
A．Shanghai. B．Hangzhou. C．Shenzhen.
3．Where are the woman and Mike going during the vacation
A．To London. B．To Boston. C．To Beijing.
4．Where does the man most likely live
A．In Canada. B．In New York. C．In California.
√
√
5．Who travelled with the man last month
A．Jeff and Richard.
B．The man's dog.
C．The woman.
√
第二节
听下面2段对话。每段对话后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话读两遍。
√
听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。
6．Why won't the speakers travel to South Korea
A．The woman likes Japan more.
B．The woman has already been there.
C．The tickets are too expensive.
√
7. What had the woman kept talking about
A．A city in South Korea.
B．A type of food.
C．A popular clothing brand.
√
听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。
8．Why did the woman go to Shanghai
A．To visit a friend.
B．To find a job.
C．To go sightseeing.
√
9．Where does the woman prefer to live
A．In Beijing.
B．In Shanghai.
C．In Guizhou.
10．What does the woman think of men from Shanghai
A．They are generous.
B．They are friendly.
C．They are helpful.
√
附：听力材料
(Text 1)
M：Where are we now I can't tell what road this is.
W：We're heading for the US, ①but we're still in Canada. And we're quite a long distance from Mexico.
(Text 2)
W：On the first day, ②you will leave Shanghai for Hangzhou on the night flight. And you'll stay there for two days. You will then go to Shenzhen by subway on the third day and stay two nights there.
M：That sounds great. I'm looking forward to it. And can I get back by train
W：Of course.
(Text 3)
M：I'll leave for London next Monday, and then I'll fly to Boston from there. Do you have any vacation plans, Michelle
W：③Mike and I will travel to Beijing to see my parents for the Spring Festival.
(Text 4)
M：④ My wife and I are planning on driving from California to Canada for a few weeks.
W：That's exciting. My husband and I took a car trip from New York to Canada a few years ago. It was a lot of fun.
(Text 5)
W：Did you go on a trip alone or with your friends last month
M：I was planning to go with Jeff and Richard, but they both couldn't spare the time.
W：⑤What did you do with your dog while you were away
M：Oh, ⑤Tom is a good traveler, as long as he gets a chance to play.
(Text 6)
W：Where do you want to go for the summer holiday
M：I'm not sure. But I would like to go to South Korea or maybe Japan.
W：⑥I've been to South Korea before. So, maybe Japan is a better idea for this year.
M：When did you go to South Korea
W：I went during high school with my class. Remember？That's why I missed Chelsea's birthday party that year.
M：Oh yeah! ⑦And you couldn't stop talking about kimchi for weeks.
W：OK. OK.⑦It's delicious! So, shall we go to Japan, then I will look for tickets online. Hopefully, they won't be too expensive.
M：Great, I can't wait!
(Text 7)
W：Hi, George! Welcome back from summer vacation. Did you have a good time in Guizhou
M：Yes, I did.It was everything I expected, and more.How about you Did you go anywhere
W：Yes, as a matter of fact I did.⑧I spent a week in Shanghai trying to get a job there.
M：Shanghai is such a wonderful city! You'll really enjoy living there.
W：I'm not so sure.Shanghai has a lot going for it, but I like Beijing better.
M：What do you like best about Shanghai
W：Shanghai is one of the business centers of China, so there are lots of jobs, and there's always something new.It's more modern than Beijing and generally a convenient place to live.
M：⑨Why would you want to stay in Beijing
W：⑨For one thing, Beijing has a sense of history.You know, there's no Great Wall in Shanghai!
M：That's for sure.There's no Forbidden City or Summer Palace, either.
W：For another thing, I think people are very friendly in Beijing.
M：Yes, I can't agree more.People from Beijing are really friendly!
W：⑩But I've heard that men from Shanghai will help their wives with housework.That's the very quality I admire!
|多积主题表达|
“旅游”场景相关听力表达
1．go on vacation 去度假
2．travel alone 独自旅行
3．hotel reservation 宾馆预订
4．take a road trip 公路旅行
5．helpful and enjoyable 有益且令人愉快的
6．have a lot of fun 玩得非常开心
7．enjoy the beautiful scenery 欣赏美景
8．I went to Yunnan for my holidays. 我去了云南度假。
9．It was my first flight and I was a bit nervous.
这是我的第一次飞行，我有点紧张。
10．The food was good and I visited many beautiful places.
食物很好，我参观了许多美丽的地方。
11．But the weather was a little cold in the north and I didn't like it.
但是北方的天气有点冷，我不喜欢那里。
12．And on the last day we had a barbecue, which was our favourite.
并且最后一天我们吃了烧烤，这是我们最喜欢的。
13．The water is so clear and blue, and the food is delicious.
水那么清澈和碧蓝，食物也很美味。
14．I arrived at the airport just in time at 1：50 pm to catch my plane which would leave ten minutes later.
我在下午1点50分及时到达机场，赶上了10分钟后起飞的飞机。
促写作 / 写作增分途径“多仿写”
NO.2
写作项目——Write an email about a journey
本单元的写作任务是写一封介绍旅行经历的电子邮件，属于游记的另一种形式，主要以旅游路线为线索，描写游览中的所见所闻以及所感。该类主题的写作引导青少年不仅要读万卷书，还要行万里路，鼓励他们走进社会和大自然，在旅途中探求自我价值和人生意义。
|由教材学写作|
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结本课的篇章结构如下：
二、学行文逻辑
游记类文章一般都是以时间和旅游路线为线索。本文的时间及游程是After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto — the CN Tower — around dusk in downtown Chinatown — Montreal early the next morning — along St Paul Street —towards the Gulf of St Lawrence and down to the distant east coast towards the province of Nova Scotia and Halifax，线索非常分明，使得行文层次清晰、逻辑缜密。
三、学亮点表达
游记类文章一般会使用大量的描述性语言，对景色和心理感受进行生动形象的描绘，具有很强的画面感和感染力。
1．准确而生动的形容词，用来描述主体的特征或状态，或表现主观感受：如Reading and Thinking课文中exceptional beauty, spectacular mountain peaks and forests, different creatures, their windows were red, gold, and orange以及本课课文中wonderful sights and sounds, unique Quebec culture and traditions, fantastic restaurants and clubs等。
2．生动的动词，用来描述活动和行动：如Reading and Thinking课文中 took their breath away, thundered on以及本课课文中rolling by, speeding along the St Lawrence River等。
①
站在山顶上，我看到云烟从山谷升腾而起，惊叹不已。
仿写训练/翻译句子并体会其中形容词和动词的使用
Standing on the top of the mountain, I was astonished to see
misty clouds rising from the valley.
②
我惊奇地发现雾气氤氲的温泉和很多外来游客，他们都讲着不同的方言。
③
整个下午，我们穿梭于一家家令人惊叹的商店，欣赏着一件件精美石雕作品。
I was surprised to see that there was misty hot spring and
many foreign tourists who spoke different dialects.
We spent the afternoon in breathtaking shops and enjoying
the delicate stone carving works.
写作项目指导
Write an email to a friend about your travel experience
——给朋友写一封关于你的旅行经历的电子邮件
第一步：构思谋篇
体裁 关于旅行经历的电子邮件
时态 以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
人称 以第一人称和第三人称为主
写作要点 Opening(开篇): greeting＋purpose(称呼＋目的)
Body(主体): 具体列出见闻的内容(who, when, where, what, how)
Closing(结尾): 对旅游的总结(communicative sentence＋signature)
注意事项 描述旅行的经历和见闻时，应按照一定的时间、空间或逻辑顺序，这样可以使内容层次清晰。同时还应分清主次，详略得当，要突出最有特色、最感兴趣的事物。
续表
第二步：要点表达
第一部分：点明写信目的
1．I'm that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
我很高兴与你分享我在上一个暑假期间的一次真正迷人的旅行经历。
2．I can't wait to you my travel here!
我迫不及待地和你们分享我在这里的旅行！
glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience
share with
第二部分：具体介绍旅行见闻
1．所去的地方
On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which the giant stone Buddha.
7月7日，我和父母乘车前往四川乐山，乐山以巨石大佛而闻名。
is famous for
2．所见所闻
make it world-famous and attractive.In addition, you can also ____________
there, including the awesome sea of clouds and hot springs.
正是奇松和怪石使它闻名世界，具有吸引力。此外，你还可以在那里欣赏其他壮观的自然景观，包括令人惊叹的云海和温泉。
It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that
enjoy other
spectacular natural scenery
3．所感
I observed so many cultural relics there,______________________
.
我在那里看到了这么多文物，这让我为我的国家和民族感到特别骄傲。
making me particularly
proud of my country and nation
第三部分：总结及期望
1．We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was_____________________.If I have time, I ______________________
Leshan again.
我们都很累，但我们的乐山之旅真的令人难忘。如果我有时间，我一定会再次去乐山。
Really unforgettable
am bound to pay a visit to
2．Looking forward to next time.
期待着下次和你一起去那里。
going there with you
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny写邮件询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给她回一封邮件。
参考范文：
Dear Jenny，
I'm glad to share an unforgettable travel experience with you. Last summer, I went to the seaside with my family. The blue sky, the vast sea, and the soft sand made me feel extremely relaxed. We played beach volleyball, built sandcastles, and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. It was really a wonderful trip that left a deep mark on my memory.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
|写作素材储备|
(一)游记类写作佳句
1．常用开头句
①Thank you so much for allowing me to go on this journey!
非常感谢您允许我踏上这段旅程！
②After a tiring day, we finally arrived in the old country.
经过一天的劳累，我们终于到达了这个古老的国家。
2．常用中间句
①The university is located in the eastern suburbs of the city.
这座大学坐落在城市的东郊。
②The village covers an area of 300 hectares, of which 30 hectares are for tea production.
这个村庄占地300公顷，其中30公顷为茶园。
③Standing on the top of the mountain, the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.
坐落在山顶的寺庙见证了这个地区的许多变化。
④It's very convenient to get there by taking buses No.17, 59 or 69 besides Subway Line 2.
乘车到达那里很方便，可乘坐公共汽车17路、59路或69路以及地铁2号线。
⑤Hangzhou has some top tourist attractions, which attract millions of visitors every year.
杭州有一些顶级的旅游景点，每年吸引数百万游客。
⑥As is known to all, Mount Hua is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and its unique characteristics.
众所周知，华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名。
⑦It is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
这是一个你必须参观的地方，非凡的景色会让你不愿离开。
3．常用结束句
①We were astonished by its beauty.It is well worth visiting.
我们震撼于它的美丽。它很值得参观。
②It has been a great trip, filling us with so many happy memories.
这是一次很棒的旅行，给我们留下了很多美好的回忆。
③It has been a wonderful trip so far, and I am loving the city!
到目前为止，这是一次美妙的旅行，我爱这个城市！
(二)自然环境精彩语段
1．林中景色
It was the cool gray dawn, and there was peace deep in the woods.Not a leaf stirred; not a sound disturbed great Nature's meditation.Dewdrops stood upon the leaves and grasses.A white layer of ashes covered the fire, and a thin blue breath of smoke rose straight into the air.
2．自然景色
It was so peaceful and quiet here and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1． (怀着非常激动的心情), my family and I visited (最著名的旅游景点之一) in Shanxi — the ancient city of Pingyao.
With much excitement
one of the most famous tourist spots
2．Shanghai is (最大的城市之一) in China and it is also the business and financial center of our country.Millions of tourists and business people come to the city every day and _______
(享受上海的美食、风景和生活)．
3．As a World Cultural Heritage site, it dates back over 2,700 years, in which (许多传统仍被保留下来) by people.
one of the largest cities
enjoy
Shanghai's food, scenery, and life
many traditions are still kept
4．_________________________________________________________
(沿着主街漫步并品尝当地的美食), everyone is amazed to discover how attractive the small city is.
5． (尽管我们很累), our trip to Paris was really unforgettable.
6． (多么难忘的一次旅行) it was and I really had a wonderful time!
Wandering along the main street and tasting delicious local foods
Tired as we were
What an unforgettable trip
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．交通出行；
2．必备衣物。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Jim，
I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I'll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.
Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写文章，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband camped every summer as he was a child.He was feeling homesick for camping, so after we got married, he invited me to join him.Since then, we have had wonderful camping experiences.
With a tent, we set off for California's Big Sur Coast.On the first night, I stayed awake, worrying that a gang of naughty little creature would break into our tent and dive into our snacks.By the second night, my imagination calmed down and I started to get the hang of it.And by the third day, I was hooked.It was refreshing and relaxing to stay close to nature.We've been camping ever since.Of course, later, with our children.
We made wonderful family camping memories for the past years: Songs and talent shows by the campfire under the stars.Meals beneath a canopy of trees.Hikes to lakes and waterfalls.Some of our memories are funny, while some are a little adventurous, especially when our children were little.
Once, when we camped along Chalk Creek, I was fascinated by the stunning beauty that surrounded us.But, I was worried that our 15-month-old boy would fall into the creek (小溪)．Though its maximum depth was about two inches, I wasn't about to take chances.I tied a rope around his waist to keep him near to our spot.That lasted about ten minutes.He was uncomfortable, his crying letting the whole campground know it.So instead of tying him up, I just kept a close eye on him.It worked — he didn't end up in the creek.
Another time, we rented a boat in Vallecito Lake.The sky was clear when we headed off, but storms moved in fast in the mountains, quickly interrupting our peaceful morning trip.The wind picked up and thunder rolled.My husband stopped fishing to start the motor.Nothing.He tried again.No luck.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．续写线索：暴风雨猛烈→被困及被救→对露营的喜爱。
The storm grew at an alarming speed.
参考范文：
The storm grew at an alarming speed. With enormous waves approaching straight for us, we had no choice but to sit there helplessly.We were just about to give ourselves up when a fisherman turned up.Despite the tough situation, he managed to help us back to the harbor.We were relieved, admitting it was a close thing.However, this incident didn't stop us from camping.We just made more
preparations in case of any emergency.For the following years, we weathered more storms while enjoying more blue skies and starry nights.Filled with a sense of excitement and anticipation, we were looking forward to the fun or adventure.We, as a family, love these family-bonding camping moments, embracing the nature in person.
[阅读拓展训练]
Recently, my husband and three kids were playing in Mediterranean (地中海), swimming and floating in the picture-perfect sea. It was ridiculously beautiful in Majorca, Spain. The way the sun danced across the water and how the blue horizon was dotted with storybook sailboats were such beautiful scenes.
My husband and I always dreamed about taking our kids on a trip around the world. It was one of the things we talked at length about. When we imagined our life with the children, we hoped we would have.
Fourteen years later, we had three boys who were growing up faster by the day. It was time to make good on those plans. We renewed our passports, and then packed our bags. We showed our kids
the world. It was about experiencing the dozens of flights and trains and taxis together. We showed them how wonderful, how diverse, and how fascinating the world is. We wanted them to learn all that we had learned ourselves, through our own travels.
But there was something more than that: What we really wanted is to slow down time. We wanted the days to last a bit longer, and the weeks to take their time. The years with our children are going too fast. We wanted to put the brakes on our busy lives for a year, and just be with our kids. We wanted a break from the daily morning routine of making lunches, eating breakfast and going out the door in time for school. We needed family time out.
It was the wonderful two months in Europe, full of incredible moments. When we look back at our lives, I know we'll be glad we did it. I know we'll be happy that this is a chapter of the story of our family.
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。丈夫和“我”很早就梦想着带孩子们一起去旅游，享受美景和家人陪伴的时光。十四年后，“我们”实现了梦想。
1．What did the couple often dream of fourteen years ago
A．Going to Mediterranean.
B．Travelling with their children.
C．Some storybook sailboats.
D．Their children's growing fast.
√
解析：细节理解题。根据第二段第一句“My husband and I always dreamed about taking our kids on a trip around the world.”可知，14年前，“我”和丈夫梦想着带孩子们环游世界，故B项正确。
2．What does the underlined part “make good on” probably mean in paragraph 3
A．Do good to. B．Carry out.
C．Make up. D．Put off.
√
解析：词义猜测题。根据上文可知，“我”和丈夫梦想着带孩子们环游世界；结合第三段内容可推知，是实行那些计划的时候了。由此可推知，画线部分意为“实行”，故B项正确。
3．What is paragraph 3 mainly about
A．The travel. B．The children.
C．The transportation. D．The diverse world.
解析：段落大意题。根据第三段的内容可知，该段主要介绍了作者实行旅游计划，和三个孩子一起去旅游的情况，故A项正确。
√
√
4．What was the most important in the writer's eyes
A．Doing everything slowly.
B．Living a busy life.
C．Sticking to the routine.
D．Slowing down the time.
解析：细节理解题。根据第四段中的“But there was something more than that: What we really wanted is to slow down time.”可知，作者最希望的是时间能慢下来，故D项正确。UNIT 4 课时检测(五) Listening & Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.微语境写作
1．______________ (怀着非常激动的心情), my family and I visited ________________________ (最著名的旅游景点之一) in Shanxi — the ancient city of Pingyao.
2．Shanghai is ________________________ (最大的城市之一) in China and it is also the business and financial center of our country.Millions of tourists and business people come to the city every day and ______________________________ (享受上海的美食、风景和生活)．
3．As a World Cultural Heritage site, it dates back over 2,700 years, in which ____________________________ (许多传统仍被保留下来) by people.
4．________________________________________ (沿着主街漫步并品尝当地的美食), everyone is amazed to discover how attractive the small city is.
5．______________________ (尽管我们很累), our trip to Paris was really unforgettable.
6．__________________________ (多么难忘的一次旅行) it was and I really had a wonderful time!
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是红星中学高二学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．交通出行； 2.必备衣物。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写文章，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband camped every summer as he was a child.He was feeling homesick for camping, so after we got married, he invited me to join him.Since then, we have had wonderful camping experiences.
With a tent, we set off for California's Big Sur Coast.On the first night, I stayed awake, worrying that a gang of naughty little creature would break into our tent and dive into our snacks.By the second night, my imagination calmed down and I started to get the hang of it.And by the third day, I was hooked.It was refreshing and relaxing to stay close to nature.We've been camping ever since.Of course, later, with our children.
We made wonderful family camping memories for the past years: Songs and talent shows by the campfire under the stars.Meals beneath a canopy of trees.Hikes to lakes and waterfalls.Some of our memories are funny, while some are a little adventurous, especially when our children were little.
Once, when we camped along Chalk Creek, I was fascinated by the stunning beauty that surrounded us.But, I was worried that our 15 month old boy would fall into the creek (小溪)．Though its maximum depth was about two inches, I wasn't about to take chances.I tied a rope around his waist to keep him near to our spot.That lasted about ten minutes.He was uncomfortable, his crying letting the whole campground know it.So instead of tying him up, I just kept a close eye on him.It worked — he didn't end up in the creek.
Another time, we rented a boat in Vallecito Lake.The sky was clear when we headed off, but storms moved in fast in the mountains, quickly interrupting our peaceful morning trip.The wind picked up and thunder rolled.My husband stopped fishing to start the motor.Nothing.He tried again.No luck.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．续写线索：暴风雨猛烈→被困及被救→对露营的喜爱。
The storm grew at an alarming speed.
[阅读拓展训练]
Recently, my husband and three kids were playing in Mediterranean (地中海), swimming and floating in the picture perfect sea. It was ridiculously beautiful in Majorca, Spain. The way the sun danced across the water and how the blue horizon was dotted with storybook sailboats were such beautiful scenes.
My husband and I always dreamed about taking our kids on a trip around the world. It was one of the things we talked at length about. When we imagined our life with the children, we hoped we would have.
Fourteen years later, we had three boys who were growing up faster by the day. It was time to make_good_on those plans. We renewed our passports, and then packed our bags. We showed our kids the world. It was about experiencing the dozens of flights and trains and taxis together. We showed them how wonderful, how diverse, and how fascinating the world is. We wanted them to learn all that we had learned ourselves, through our own travels.
But there was something more than that: What we really wanted is to slow down time. We wanted the days to last a bit longer, and the weeks to take their time. The years with our children are going too fast. We wanted to put the brakes on our busy lives for a year, and just be with our kids. We wanted a break from the daily morning routine of making lunches, eating breakfast and going out the door in time for school. We needed family time out.
It was the wonderful two months in Europe, full of incredible moments. When we look back at our lives, I know we'll be glad we did it. I know we'll be happy that this is a chapter of the story of our family.
1．What did the couple often dream of fourteen years ago
A．Going to Mediterranean.
B．Travelling with their children.
C．Some storybook sailboats.
D．Their children's growing fast.
2．What does the underlined part “make good on” probably mean in paragraph 3
A．Do good to. B．Carry out.
C．Make up. D．Put off.
3．What is paragraph 3 mainly about
A．The travel. B．The children.
C．The transportation. D．The diverse world.
4．What was the most important in the writer's eyes
A．Doing everything slowly.
B．Living a busy life.
C．Sticking to the routine.
D．Slowing down the time.
UNIT 4 课时检测(五)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.With much excitement; one of the most famous tourist spots 2.one of the largest cities; enjoy Shanghai's food, scenery, and life 3.many traditions are still kept
4．Wandering along the main street and tasting delicious local foods 5.Tired as we were 6.What an unforgettable trip
Ⅱ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Jim，
I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I'll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high speed trains to both cities.
Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
The storm grew at an alarming speed. With enormous waves approaching straight for us, we had no choice but to sit there helplessly.We were just about to give ourselves up when a fisherman turned up.Despite the tough situation, he managed to help us back to the harbor.We were relieved, admitting it was a close thing.However, this incident didn't stop us from camping.We just made more preparations in case of any emergency.For the following years, we weathered more storms while enjoying more blue skies and starry nights.Filled with a sense of excitement and anticipation, we were looking forward to the fun or adventure.We, as a family, love these family bonding camping moments, embracing the nature in person.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。丈夫和“我”很早就梦想着带孩子们一起去旅游，享受美景和家人陪伴的时光。十四年后，“我们”实现了梦想。
1．选B 细节理解题。根据第二段第一句“My husband and I always dreamed about taking our kids on a trip around the world.”可知，14年前，“我”和丈夫梦想着带孩子们环游世界，故B项正确。
2．选B 词义猜测题。根据上文可知，“我”和丈夫梦想着带孩子们环游世界；结合第三段内容可推知，是实行那些计划的时候了。由此可推知，画线部分意为“实行”，故B项正确。
3．选A 段落大意题。根据第三段的内容可知，该段主要介绍了作者实行旅游计划，和三个孩子一起去旅游的情况，故A项正确。
4．选D 细节理解题。根据第四段中的“But there was something more than that: What we really wanted is to slow down time.”可知，作者最希望的是时间能慢下来，故D项正确。
