2025--2026年人教版中考英语作文复习分类提高综合练习1:话题作文【含答案 word版】
一、家庭、朋友与周围的人(本大题共1小题)
1.35.[2023河南新乡期末]生活中总会有不期而遇的事带给我们感动或惊喜。请以“An unexpected thing”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:1.这件不期而遇的事是什么;
2.这件事是如何发生的;
3.你的感受。
要求:1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2.词数100左右。
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二、日常活动(本大题共2小题)
2.假如你最好的朋友叫李华,请根据所提供的信息,以“My Friend's Past Life”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍她过去生活的情况。
Name Li Hua
Born in a small village in Guangdong
Born on 18th June, 2010
Primary School Sunny Primary School
First English Teacher Mr Chen (strict)
Character Friendly, good
要求:
(1)不得在文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
(2)语句连贯,词数70左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Friend's Past Life
Li Hua is my best friend.
3.你校英文校刊主编读了第一节 (回答问题) 中英国人的空余生活后,发起了主题为 “How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful” 的征文,号召中学生合理利用空闲时间。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇作文投稿。提示:
◆帮助父母做家务;
◆可以培养兴趣爱好;
◆参与志愿活动,帮助他人。
要求:
1、包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2、词数80左右 (标题已给出,不计入总词数) ;
3、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Word bank: suggestion n. 建议;not only...but also...不但……而且……
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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三、情感与情绪(本大题共1小题)
4.[2023山东济宁一模]我们的周围总是充满着爱:父母的爱,老师的爱,同学的爱,朋友的爱……每天我们都能得到来自他们的爱。请以“Love Around Me”为题,用英语写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
(1)父母每天为我做早餐,送我上学……
(2)老师为我传授知识,照顾我……
(3)和同学在一起学习,大家和睦相处……
(4)空余时间和朋友在网上交流,分享快乐与烦恼……
(5)得到他们的爱,我感到很幸福,我下决心要努力学习并取得进步。
(6)我想对所有爱我的人说“谢谢你们”。
要求:
(1)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
(2)必须包含所给提示,可适当发挥;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
(4)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.
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四、计划与安排(本大题共2小题)
5.2022年10月16日,中国共产党第二十次全国代表大会在北京胜利召开。2022年也是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”的十周年。“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。请你以“My Dream Job”为题,写一篇英语短文,说一说你对自己梦想的所知所感。
要点:
(1)你梦想的工作是什么?
(2)为什么你有这样的梦想?
(3)为了实现梦想你将如何努力?
要求:
(1)语句通顺,书写工整;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
(3)不少于80词。
My Dream Job
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6.我们用汗水和努力走过了2024,这当中有成功,有失败,也有遗憾。现学校举办以“Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year(回顾过去一年,祝福新的一年)”为主题的英语写作比赛。请你根据以下提示及要求,写一篇英语短文参赛。
1、用一个词概括你的2024年(如:growth成长/ hard-working/...)
2、举出具体事例。
3、基于对前一年的回顾,说说2025年你对未来的期许。
要求:
1、紧扣主题,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2、词数80—100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3、文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year
When recalling (回想) 2024, the word “______” comes to my mind. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、人际交往(本大题共1小题)
7.[2023山东泰安一模]某英文报社正就“青少年与父母的关系”这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship (关系) with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:
(1)父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题;
(2)你对这些问题的看法;
(3)你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不要出现真实校名和人名。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
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六、节假日活动(本大题共1小题)
8.每年爸爸妈妈都会为我们庆祝生日,为我们买好吃的,送我们礼物……你的爸爸或妈妈的生日是哪一天呢?他们的生日是怎样过的呢?请你以My Father’s/Mother’s Birthda为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈他们的生日是怎样过的。
要求:1、词数80词左右;2、内容可适当发挥。
参考词汇 delicious food gift party
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七、饮食(本大题共1小题)
9.同学们,请仔细阅读以下两个任务,并根据任务要求写一篇短文(不少于60词)
Task 1: Tell us your daily living habits, such as eating habits, exercise habits and so on. 2 or 3 points.(写一写你的日常生活习惯,像饮食习惯、运动习惯等。2-3点。)
Task 2: Are these habits good for you What can you do to make your life better (你的日常习惯对你帮助大么?你能做什么让你的生活变得更好。)
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八、节日(本大题共2小题)
10.2024年年末,春节正式进入联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产名录,这在全球掀起一股文化潮流。作为新时代的中国青少年,我们应当了解并弘扬中华优秀传统文化。假如你是李华,你校本月将举行以“中国传统节日——春节”为主题的演讲比赛,请你根据以下思维导图提示,以“The ________ Spring Festival”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语演讲稿用于参赛。
要求:
1、先补全题目,并将题目抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;
2、内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3、条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4、文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
The ________ Spring Festival
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I want to talk about the Spring Festival.
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11.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike对中国传统文化很感兴趣,尤其是中国的传统节日。请你向他介绍一个你认为最有意义的中国传统节日并说说你对这个节日的感受。节日介绍至少包括以下要点:
(1)When is it
(2)How do people usually celebrate it
(3)What do people usually do
要求:(1) 语句通顺,时态正确,表达准确,有完整的书信格式;
(2) 100词左右;
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
九、守则与制度(本大题共1小题)
12.俗话说:“不以规矩,不能成方圆。”国有国法,家有家规,请你根据下面表格的提示内容,以“My Family Rules”为题,谈谈你的家规。要求如下:
(1)需要包含所有提示信息;
(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名;
(3)60词左右。
提示:
(1)What are your family rules?
(2)What do you think of the family rules?
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十、方法与哲理(本大题共12小题)
13.“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举是新时代我国对青少年的要求。作为中学生,我们不仅要有健康的身体,还要有良好的生活习惯;同时要遵守校纪校规;更要传承美德,尊敬长辈,帮助同学。请你根据以下图示,以“How to be a good student”为题写一篇短文,在校报英语专栏上发表。
注意:(1)包含以上要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
(3)写作词数为80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. So, what should we do Let me tell you. __________
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In a word, if we do these things, we can be good students.
14.“闲谈”是一种沟通方式,它可以打破沉默,消除尴尬,创造进入正式话题的机会。请根据下面的提示,以“Small Talk”为题写一篇文章。
内容提示:
1、闲谈不是浪费时间,而是为了更好的沟通;
2、选择合适的闲谈话题,避开不恰当的话题;
3、你对“闲谈”的看法…… (至少二点)
写作要求:
1、包含所有内容提示,可适当发挥;
2、不能出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息;
3、词数在80-100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Small Talk
Some people don’t know that making small talk is useful. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.在成长过程中,我们难免会遇到许多问题,希望得到帮助或指引,与他人沟通是解决问题的方法之一。请分享一次你通过与父母、老师或朋友沟通以解决问题的经历,并谈谈你的感悟。
内容包括:
1、沟通的重要性;
2、你的一次沟通经历;
3、你的感悟。
要求:1、词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2、内容完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3、文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。
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16.本周,我们迎来了学校的“安全宣传周”。在我们的日常生活中,安全扮演着至关重要的角色,它涵盖了诸多领域,包括但不限于交通安全、消防安全、食品安全以及网络安全。你被邀请在周一的全校会议上,以“Safety in the Daily Life”为主题进行演讲,旨在唤起全体师生对安全问题的关注,并提出切实可行的自我保护措施。
要求:
(1)字迹工整,书写规范,至少写两个方面的安全;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称;
(3)80—100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety in the Daily Life
Good morning, everyone,
I’m standing here to talk about safety in the daily life.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17.为助力打造“书香校园”,你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动, 请以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇英语短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。
要求:(1)短文应包括两个要点(阅读情况和阅读好处),可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
(2)短文不能出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:90~110。
参考词汇:experience, habit, knowledge, pleasure
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18.中国动画电影《哪吒2》不仅登顶中国影史票房榜单,更跻身全球影史票房榜前列。这部现象级影片通过其震撼人心的故事,向全球观众生动诠释了“我命由我不由天”的深刻含义。这部电影告诉我们,每个人的命运都掌握在自己手中,只要勇敢面对困难,坚持不懈,就能创造属于自己的辉煌未来。请根据以下写作要点,以“My future, my choice: inspired by Ne Zha”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
How do you understand the sentence of “I am the master of my own fate”
What’s your dream
How will you achieve your dream and make your future bright
要求:
1、开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2、内容包括提示中所有的写作要点;
3、条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
4、文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。
My future, my choice: inspired by Ne Zha
The movie Ne Zha 2 has inspired me deeply, especially the line, “I am the master of my own fate.”
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19.某英文网站正在开展以“About Reading”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,想要参加这次征文活动。请根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿:
(1)简述当前初中生的阅读现状(如阅读时间、习惯等);
(2)提出一至两条改进阅读习惯的建议;
(3)推荐一本你最喜欢的书并说明理由。
注意:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名;
(2)写作词数为80左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
The present situation (现状) of reading ● spend little time reading ● read only for exams
Suggestions to improve the situation ● make reading plans ● choose classic books
Books to share ● A Journey to the West ●The Old Man and the Sea
About Reading
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Let’s read more books and open our mind!
20.时光荏苒,转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活,你是否觉得自己改变了许多 请你根据以下提示,以“Some Changes in My Life” 为题写一篇英语短文,谈一谈自从上初中后,你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示:(1)What did you use to be
(2)What are you like now
(3)How do you feel about these changes
要求:(1)包括以上所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
21.为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高他们的自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列要点写一篇题为“How Can We Make Ourselves Safe?”的英语短文。
要点:(1)饮食安全:不吃变质食物,少吃或不吃垃圾食品;
(2)交友安全:在网上慎重交友;
(3)……
要求:(1)80词以上,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;
(3)文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。
How Can We Make Ourselves Safe
As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important.
22.假设你是李辉,某英文网站开展征文活动,倡导学生培养一项爱好或技能。请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。要点如下:
1、你将培养什么;
2、你将如何培养;
3、表达你的希望。
注意:
(1)词数为80-100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful. As for me, I want to develop _______________________________________________________________
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神舟十三号顺利返航,宇航员王亚平再次圆梦天宫,光荣凯旋。你校正组织以“The hero in my heart”为题的征文活动,请根据以下要点介绍王亚平的事迹并分享你对她的钦佩之情。
经历与成就 ●出生于1980年,在学校里热爱学习,擅长体育 ●太空梦始于2003年,十年如一日艰苦训练、从不言弃 ●2013年参与神舟十号航天任务并进行太空授课 ●中国首位在太空行走的女宇航员
你的观点 ……(至少两点)
注意:1.词数:100 左右;
23.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息;
24.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the Shenzhou Ⅹ mission 神舟十号航天任务
The hero in my heart
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space.___________________________
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25.体育是青少年健康成长的重要组成部分,为了让学生增加体育锻炼(physical exercise),学校组织学生们每天在校至少参加2个小时的体育锻炼。校英语广播站邀请同学们以“Sports Make Me______”为题,并结合自己在校参加体育锻炼的一个真实经历,说说校园开展体育活动的意义以及自己通过体育锻炼所取得的收获。
要求:1、补全题目,横线处可填入一个形容词;
2、观点明确,事例具体,结构清晰,语言流畅,书写工整;
3、文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校;
4、不少于 80词。
提示词:15-minute break,30-minute morning/ afternoon exercises(提示词可按需使用。)
Sports Make Me ______
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十一、学习和语言(本大题共1小题)
26.你们班最近开展了本学期英语学习感受分享,有些同学表示英语学习更难了,他们感到有些焦虑和担心,希望大家献计献策,一起应对这个问题。请你综合以下提示写一篇短文,描述困难并提出建议或可能的解决办法,并做适当的补充。
要求:(1) 80词左右(给出的标题和开头内容不计入总词数);
(2) 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulties in learning English.
十二、科普知识与现代技术(本大题共1小题)
27.近年来,越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时,经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付(mobile payment)深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华,学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动,请根据下面的提示,介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 日益流行;改变生活
移动支付 扫码支付;方便快捷(举至少1个生活实例)
消费观念 理智消费;购前三思学会节约;按需购买
要求:
(1)语言表达准确,短文连贯、通顺;
(2)短文应包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;
(3)词数不少于80;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:扫二维码scan QR codes;支付pay;三思think twice;理智地 wisely
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
十三、社会服务(本大题共1小题)
28.某网站的“青少年论坛”近日创建了Share Your Family Weekend Stories主题帖。假设你叫李华,在读了Sam的帖子后,你对他和家人的周末经历很感兴趣并跟帖分享。
What did your family do last weekend Share your story!
Posted: 12 hours ago
Last Saturday, my family went on a trip to a farm. It was great fun. In the morning, we saw many animals, like ducks, rabbits and chickens. They were cute. Then, we helped the farmer feed the animals. After lunch, the farmer taught us how to milk the cows. It seemed easy, but it was tiring. Finally, we filled many bottles. Although I was not good at it, I felt happy. One thing I learned today: Farming isn’t easy. Do you agree
要求:
1、分享经历与反思。
2、词数:不少于60词。
3、开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, Sam,Your weekend sounds special. Farm work isn’t easy. Did you take any photos I’d like to tell you something about my last weekend. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
十四、环境(本大题共3小题)
29.“绿水青山就是金山银山”。请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures.
30.习主席提出“绿水青山就是金山银山”,这是中国生态文明建设的理念。保护环境,人人有责。假设你们学校的英语社团要开展一次以“爱祖国爱家乡,从保护环境做起”为主题的宣讲活动,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求:(1)确定主题,发出倡议;
(2)围绕主题进行叙述或阐述;
(3)100词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Build a ________ China
Ladies and gentlemen,
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To build a ________ China, we must protect our environment.
First…
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Thank you for your listening.
31.绿水青山就是金山银山。请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法,以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇:environment, environmental pollution, reduce, sort the rubbish (垃圾分类)
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. __________________________________
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参考答案
一、家庭、朋友与周围的人
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、家庭、朋友与周围的人
1.【答案】
【参考范文】
An unexpected thing
Unexpected things may happen to everyone—they can make people happy or sad.For me, an unexpected thing about a card makes me feel happy.
Two weeks ago, I went out with my friend Nancy.We made a card by hand.I liked the card very much, but when I saw Nancy didn't move her fingers away from it, I decided to give the card to her.However, yesterday I found the card in my book with the words “I appreciate the friendship you give me more than the card.Keep it as a symbol of our friendship.”
I was really moved and happy because of the card and Nancy.
二、日常活动
【知识点】一般过去时、家庭、朋友与周围的人、日常活动
2.【答案】
【参考范文】She was born in a small village in Guangdong on 18th June, 2010.The name of her primary school was Sunny Primary School.Mr Chen was her first English teacher.At that time, he was strict with his students.Li Hua was friendly and good.She was helpful and was willing to help everyone.All of her teachers and classmates liked her very much.
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、时间管理
3.【答案】
例文:
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
As students, we often have spare time after school or on weekends. To make this time more meaningful, I have some suggestions.
First, we can help our parents with housework. Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. For example, doing the dishes or cleaning the room can be a good start. Second, developing hobbies is a great way to spend our free time. Whether it’s painting, playing a musical instrument, or reading, hobbies can enrich our lives and help us relax. Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. Helping others, such as tutoring younger students or assisting in community events, can bring us a sense of fulfillment and make a positive impact on society.
In conclusion, by helping at home, pursuing hobbies, and volunteering, we can make our spare time both enjoyable and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要说明空闲时间的重要性,并提出使其更有意义的建议。
第二步,分别详细描述如何通过帮助父母做家务、培养兴趣爱好和参与志愿活动来充实空闲时间。
第三步,总结并鼓励大家积极行动。
[亮点词汇]
①lighten one’s burden减轻某人的负担
②responsibility责任
③enrich使丰富
[高分句型]
①Lastly, participating in volunteer activities is another meaningful option. (动名词作主语)
②Not only does this lighten their burden, but also teaches us responsibility and life skills. (就近原则)
三、情感与情绪
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、家庭、朋友与周围的人、情感与情绪
4.【答案】
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends.In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me.Then my father drives me to school.At school, all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.My dear classmates and I study together happily and get on well with each other.I chat online with friends in my spare time.They often share my pleasure and troubles.I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.I make a decision to study hard and make great progress.Here, I want to say thanks to them.
四、计划与安排
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、书面表达、工作与职业、计划与安排
5.【答案】例文
My Dream Job
I want to be a police officer when I grow up because I think becoming a police officer is honorable.
The reason why I want to be a police officer is to serve the people wholeheartedly. In fact, The salaries of the police are not high. And they might be in danger sometimes. However, I still want to be a police officer. I do this not for money, but to protect people and my country.
In order to be a police officer, I must have a strong body. So I run five kilometers every day. I’m also going to study at a police academy after graduating from high school. To make my dream come true, I will try my best to read a number of great books and practice writing from time to time.
I believe that my dream can come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想工作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的梦想工作是什么;
第二步,介绍为什么有这样的梦想;
第三步,介绍为了实现梦想你将如何努力。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact事实上
②come true实现
③try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①The reason why I want to be a police officer is to serve the people wholeheartedly. (why引导的定语从句)
②In order to be a police officer, I must have a strong body. (动词不定式作目的状语)
【知识点】一般将来时、一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、计划与安排
6.【答案】例文
Reflecting on the Past Year and Wish for the New Year
When recalling 2024, the word “growth” comes to my mind. This year, I challenged myself to join the school English speech contest. At first, I felt nervous and made mistakes, but I practiced every day by recording my voice and watching videos. Finally, I won third prize! It taught me that effort brings progress. However, I sometimes procrastinated on homework, which caused stress.
In 2025, I hope to be more organized. I will use a study plan to balance schoolwork and hobbies. I also wish to read more books to broaden my horizons. May the new year be filled with courage and joy for everyone!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,概括2024年,介绍具体事例;
第二步,表达对2025年的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①At first 起初
②made mistakes 犯错
③balance schoolwork and hobbies 平衡学业和爱好
④broaden my horizons 开阔我的视野
[高分句型]
①At first, I felt nervous and made mistakes, but I practiced every day by recording my voice and watching videos.(并列句)
②However, I sometimes procrastinated on homework, which caused stress.(定语从句)
五、人际交往
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、人际交往、家人和亲人
7.【答案】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home.My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night.They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either.And they pay too much attention to my exam results.I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them.Although they give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
六、节假日活动
【知识点】一般现在时、个人庆典、书面表达、家人和亲人
8.【答案】例文
My Father’s Birthday
My father’s birthday is on May 15th. Every year, we celebrate it together as a family. On that day, my mom and I prepare a delicious dinner for him, with his favorite dishes. We also bake a cake and buy him a special gift. In the evening, we have a small party at home. We sing “Happy Birthday,” give him our presents, and enjoy the meal together. It’s always a warm and joyful day that brings our family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍父亲生日这天做了什么;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare...for 准备
②enjoy the meal together 一起享受美食
③brings our family closer 让我们的家庭更亲密
[高分句型]
①We sing “Happy Birthday,” give him our presents, and enjoy the meal together.(并列结构)
②It’s always a warm and joyful day that brings our family closer.(定语从句)
七、饮食
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、饮食
9.【答案】例文:
Let me tell you about my daily habits. For food, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. And I also like chips and sweets. For sports, I exercise for about 90 minutes every week. Besides, I go to bed early every night.
These habits help me stay healthy and happy. However, I think I can do something to make my life better. First, I will choose not to eat chips and sweets too often. Maybe I can eat yogurt or other healthy snacks instead. At the same time, I may try to exercise more every day. One more thing, I think reading books before bed may help me learn something new.
If I keep doing these, I believe my life will be better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题中所给出的要点,适当添加细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表明写作目的,并介绍自己的生活习惯;
第二步,介绍自己的好习惯、这些习惯的益处及对可以做什么让自己生活变得更好;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事
②go to bed early早睡
③at the same time同时
④keep doing sth坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①However, I think I can do something to make my life better.(省略that的宾语从句)
②If I keep doing these, I believe my life will be better!(if引导的条件状语从句)
八、节日
【知识点】一般现在时、中华传统节日、书面表达
10.【答案】例文
The Traditional Spring Festival
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I want to talk about the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, is the most important traditional festival in China. It marks the beginning of a new year on the lunar calendar. During this time, families gather together to celebrate. We clean our houses to sweep away bad luck, decorate them with red lanterns and couplets, and enjoy delicious food like dumplings.
Another highlight is the giving of red envelopes, which symbolize good luck and blessings. We also watch fireworks and lion dances, which are full of joy and excitement.
As a Chinese teenager, I feel proud of our rich culture. Let’s cherish and pass on these wonderful traditions to the world!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿。
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头通过自我介绍,直接点明要谈论春节。
第二步,具体阐述。依次介绍春节的重要性、时间概念,详细描述春节期间各种丰富多样的传统活动。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己对春节文化的自豪感,并发出珍惜和传播传统的呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②pass on 传递
③be known as 被称为
④Chinese New Year 中国新年
⑤lunar calendar 农历
⑥mark 标志
⑦gather together 聚集在一起
⑧sweep away 扫除
[高分句型]
Another highlight is the giving of red envelopes, which symbolize good luck and blessings.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、中华传统节日、中华文化、书面表达
11.【答案】
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to learn that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and I want to introduce my favourite festival to you.
The Mid Autumn Festival usually comes in September or October. On that day, family members usually get together and have a big meal. After that, we always admire the moon and share mooncakes. I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. More importantly, the reunion of family can make us feel love, peace and gratitude. In short, the Mid Autumn Festival is a day of pleasure and happiness. I hope that my email will help you learn about Chinese festivals.
Yours,
Li Hua
九、守则与制度
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、守则与制度、家庭、朋友与周围的人
12.【答案】【参考范文】
My Family Rules
My parents are very strict.So I have so many family rules.For example, I can't play with my friends on school nights.And I must finish my homework first when I come home from school.I can't play computer games.I have to get up at six o'clock every morning and go to bed by ten o'clock.
Thanks to these rules, I can keep healthy.
十、方法与哲理
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、卫生与健康、方法/建议
13.【答案】例文
How to be a good student
Everyone wants to be a good student. So, what should we do Let me tell you.
First, We must do sports every day. We can play football or basketball after school. It makes us strong and healthy. Second, eat healthy food. Fruits and vegetables are good for us. Don’t eat too much junk food. Third, follow the school rules. Don’t be late for school. Also, we should show respect to the teachers. Say “hello” when we meet them. Last, help others. When our classmates have problems, we should give them a hand.
In a word, if we do these things, we can be good students.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】第一步,表明写作意图。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“健康饮食、坚持锻炼、遵守校规、尊敬师长、帮助他人”等几个方面重点介绍如何成为一个好学生;
第三步,书写结语。
【提分词汇】①are good for对……有好处
②too much太多
③be late for迟到
【提分句式】①Don’t eat too much junk food.(祈使句)
②When our classmates have problems, we should give them a hand.(状语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、人际交往、方法/建议
14.【答案】例文
Small Talk
Some people don’t know that making small talk is useful. They only talk about things that they think are important. As a result, they become quiet people. In fact, making small talk isn’t a waste of your time. And it can even help you communicate better.
What’s more, we should choose some right topics to talk about. The weather, the popular TV shows and sports games are all good topics. We should avoid talking about personal privacy. Family income, family problems and classmates’ looks aren’t safe topics.
Making small talk is important. Learning more skills at making small talk can help you to be a good communicator.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇议论文,主题为“闲谈”;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括闲谈的意义、话题选择以及个人看法,考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点,并适当添加细节以丰富内容。
【脉络导引】第一步,引出主题。通过指出有些人不知道闲谈的用处,来引出闲谈的重要性;
第二步,具体阐述。从“闲谈不是浪费时间而是为了更好的沟通”“选择合适的闲谈话题并避开不恰当的话题”两方面阐述,并补充个人对于闲谈的看法;
第三步,总结观点。可再次强调闲谈的重要性或意义。
【提分词汇】①a waste of 浪费
②What’s more 而且
③avoid doing sth. 避免做某事
【提分句式】①Learning more skills at making small talk can help you to be a good communicator.(动名词短语作主语)
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、人际交往、方法/建议
15.【答案】例文
Communication is very important in our daily life. Through communication, I can always find a way to solve my problem.
When I was in Grade 8, I was weak at English and often got low marks in exams. I was worried and didn’t know what to do. Then I communicated with my parents about the problem. They offered me some useful suggestions, such as going over what I’ve learned as often as possible. They also advised me to ask my English for help bravely. Now, my English has improved a lot.
Through this experience, I realize that it’s necessary to communicate with my municating with them makes it easier for me to deal with problems. And parents are always my strongest support.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
【脉络导引】第一步,按题目要求先指出沟通的重要性。
第二步,叙述沟通的经历及感悟。
【提分词汇】①be weak at 不擅长
②communicate with 和某人沟通
③such as 例如
【提分句式】①When I was in Grade 8, I was weak at English and often got low marks in exams.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Through this experience, I realize that it’s necessary to communicate with my parents.(that引导的宾语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、安全与急救、方法/建议
16.【答案】范文:
Safety in the Daily Life
Good morning, everyone,
I’m standing here to talk about safety in the daily life. Safety is very important to us. We should always keep it in our minds.
Firstly, we should follow the traffic rules. When we cross the road, we must wait for the green light. We shouldn’t ride side by side or listen to music while riding. Secondly, we should eat healthily and safely. We shouldn’t eat the food that goes bad. We had better not eat food with too much oil or sugar.
Thirdly, we should remember some fire safety tips. We mustn’t play with fire. When there is a fire, we should call 119 for help as soon as possible and leave the place quickly.
Finally, we should be careful when we are online. We shouldn’t give our personal information to strangers. We mustn’t meet strangers alone.
In a word, safety comes first. We should learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】
【总体分析】①题材:演讲稿,关于日常安全的演讲
②时态:一般现在时(陈述事实、提出建议)、情态动词(should/must 表示建议或规则)
③提示:需结构清晰,语言简洁有力,多用祈使句和建议句型,适当使用连接词使逻辑流畅。
【写作步骤】第一步,确定主题与结构 1. 开场问候; 2. 引入话题(强调安全的重要性) 3. 分点论述(交通安全、饮食安全、消防安全、网络安全) 4. 总结与呼吁(重申安全第一,呼吁听众注意防护)
第二步,展开论述 ,每段围绕一个安全主题展开,使用 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally使结构清晰。每段用We should... / We mustn’t...提出具体建议。
第三步,优化语言,替换简单词汇为更正式的表达。加入复杂句型(如定语从句、条件句)提升语言层次。
【亮点词汇】① ride side by side并排骑行
②personal information个人信息
【高分句型】① Safety, which affects everyone’s daily life, should never be ignored.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句,强调安全的重要性)
② Not only should we follow traffic rules, but we must also avoid distractions while riding.(运用了 not only...but also... 倒装结构,增强语气)
③ If we fail to protect our personal information online, we may face serious risks.(运用了 if 引导的条件状语从句,增强逻辑性)
【知识点】一般现在时、一般过去时、书面表达、方法与哲理、日常活动
17.【答案】Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our life.Bacon said, “Reading makes a full man.” And reading makes our life colorful, too.I've developed a good reading habit since I was a child.Comics are my favorite, like Journey to the West.These funny books gave me great pleasure and accompanied me through a happy childhood.After entering middle school, I had wide reading in different fields.And all these books brought me both valuable knowledge and wonderful experiences.Books are our friends.Love them, and they will reward you better!
〖知识拓展〗
friendship n.友谊
make friends with 与……交朋友
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、书面表达、哲理感悟、电影与戏剧、计划与安排
18.【答案】例文:
My future, my choice: inspired by Ne Zha
The movie Ne Zha 2 has inspired me deeply, especially the line, “I am the master of my own fate.” I think it means our future isn’t decided by others. Even if life is hard, we can change it by working hard. My dream is to become a scientist. I want to invent things that make people’s lives better. To achieve this, I will study hard in science subjects and practice solving problems every day.
When I face difficulties, I’ll try my best instead of giving up. I believe if I keep going like Ne Zha, my future will shine brightly!
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
【脉络导引】第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,诠释自己对“我命由我不由天”的看法,分享自己的梦想;
第三步,介绍自己将如何实现梦想,并收尾。
【提分词汇】①instead of而不是
②give up放弃
【提分句式】①I think it means our future isn’t decided by others. (宾语从句)
②I want to invent things that make people’s lives better.(定语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、方法/建议、阅读
19.【答案】例文
Nowadays, many middle school students spend little time reading due to heavy homework. Some even read only for exams.
To improve this situation, here are my suggestions. First, set a daily reading goal like 20 minutes before bedtime. Second, choose books that match your interests, not just bestsellers. My favorite book is Wonder by R.J. Palacio. It tells the story of a boy with a facial difference, teaching us kindness and courage. Every time I read it, I feel inspired to be a better person.
Let’s read more books and open our minds!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述当前初中生的阅读现状;
第二步,讲述改善阅读习惯的建议;
第三步,推荐自己最爱的书籍以及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①improve this situation改善情况
②set a daily reading goal设定日常阅读目标
[高分句型]
①Every time I read it, I feel inspired to be a better person.(every time引导的时间状语从句)
②It tells the story of a boy with a facial difference, teaching us kindness and courage.(非谓语作状语)
【知识点】个人经历、书面表达、方法与哲理、现在完成时
20.【答案】
〖参考范文〗
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school.I find that there have been two main changes in my life during the past two years.
First of all, I have become better at dealing with others.It used to be difficult for me to make new friends.Then I found out the reasons.Now, I have a lot of friends.
Besides, I have become much more confident.In the past, I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons.However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, now I do well in all the subjects.
I like these changes.They have made my life better than before.
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、安全与急救、方法与哲理
21.【答案】
〖参考范文〗
How Can We Make Ourselves Safe
As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, in order to eat healthily and safely, we'd better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad, for they will do harm to our health. Second, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online. Besides, remember never to go swimming on our own in the river or lake because that will probably put ourselves into dangerous situations. At last, when travelling outside, take care of our personal things and call the police for help in time if we are in danger.
In short, safety must come first!
【知识点】一般将来时、一般现在时、书面表达、方法/建议、爱好、计划与安排
22.【答案】例文
A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful. As for me, I want to develop the skill of playing the piano.
I’ll start by taking weekly piano lessons from a professional teacher to learn basic notes and techniques. Practice is key, so I’ll spend at least an hour daily practicing scales and simple songs. I’ll also join a school music club to play with others and attend concerts to gain inspiration.
I hope this skill will not only help me relax but also become a way to connect with others. Maybe one day I can perform for my family and friends, bringing joy through music.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
【脉络导引】第一步,承接已给的开头,介绍自己将培养什么爱好;
第二步,介绍自己将如何培养;
第三步,表达自己的希望。
【提分词汇】①at least至少
②spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
③not only…but also不仅……而且
【提分句式】①I hope this skill will not only help me relax but also become a way to connect with others. (宾语从句)
【知识点】一般现在时、一般过去时、书面表达、方法与哲理、著名人物
【答案】
【参考范文】
The hero in my heart
Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space.
Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school.Her space dream started in 23.She trained really hard and never gave up.After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou Ⅹ mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space.Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.
As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for devoting herself to her space dream.Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.
【详解】
【知识拓展】lively在此处意为“生动有趣的”,其还可意为“活泼的;鲜艳的;浓郁的”。
【知识点】一般现在时、一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、健身/锻炼、方法/建议
25.【答案】例文:
Sports Make Me Strong Recently, our school has required us to take at least two hours of physical exercise every day. Among all the activities, I’ve realized that sports make me strong both physically and mentally.
Every morning, we do 30-minute morning exercises, and during the 15-minute break, my classmates and I often run together. Last month, I joined the school’s long-distance running team. At first, running 1,000 meters left me breathless. But our coach encouraged us to practice daily. One rainy afternoon, despite the heavy rain in the 30-minute afternoon exercises, I kept running. Step by step, I felt my legs grow stronger.
Now, I can easily finish 1,500 meters and even won a race last week. Sports taught me that strength comes from persistence. The daily exercises not only build my body but also make me fearless in facing challenges. I’m stronger than ever, thanks to these school sports activities.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【脉络导引】
第一步,引入主题,直接提出观点;
第二步,具体讲述自己在校参加体育锻炼的经历;
第三步,总结全文,表达感悟。
【提分词汇】 ①at least至少
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③step by step逐步地
④thanks to由于
【提分句式】①Among all the activities, I’ve realized that sports make me strong both physically and mentally. (宾语从句)
②The daily exercises not only build my body but also make me fearless in facing challenges. (not only…but also…句型)
十一、学习和语言
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、方法/建议、语言与文化
26.【答案】 Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulties in learning English. We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don’t be afraid to make mistakes. We ought to face our weakness bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible. If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening, watching, and speaking English often can help us become more fluent. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities. Remember, persistence is key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
【详解】〖总体分析〗
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:一般现在时;
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
〖写作步骤〗
第一步,表明写作意图,指出学生在学习英语时常见的问题,如语法和口语技能;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,提出确保信心、不怕犯错的重要性、多背并尽可能多使用语法规则、有问题向老师请教等。经常听、看、说英语,并定期与同学练习,可以有效提升英语水平;
第三步,书写结语,坚持是取得进步的关键。只要我们用心去做,没有什么是不可能的;
〖亮点词汇〗
①In addition 此外
②ought to 应该
〖高分句型〗
① Listening, watching, and speaking English often can help us become more fluent. (动名词作主语)
②Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
十二、科普知识与现代技术
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、信息技术、购物
27.【答案】
〖参考范文〗
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people’s daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smartphones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, we need to think twice about what we want to buy. Next, we should learn to save, and buy what we can afford. Last but not least, we must spend money on what we really need. We shouldn’t buy everything we want.
知识拓展:pay的过去式和过去分词均为paid,现在分词为paying。
十三、社会服务
【知识点】一般过去时、个人经历、书面表达、居住环境、志愿服务
28.【答案】例文:
Hello, Sam,
Your weekend sounds special. Farm work isn’t easy. Did you take any photos
I’d like to tell you something about my last weekend. Last Saturday, my family and I cleaned up our neighborhood. In the morning, we picked up the rubbish on the roads and in the park. It was dirty but we felt happy to make the place tidy. After that, we watered the flowers and trees along the street. They looked more beautiful after our care.
Through this experience, I learned that keeping our living environment clean needs everyone’s effort. Small actions can make a big difference.
【详解】【要点分析】
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章要点已给出,围绕话题展开,结合自身经历阐述,适当补充细节突出重点。
【脉络导引】第一步,回应山姆分享,引出自己上周末经历;
第二步,描述上周末和家人打扫社区的具体行动;
第三步,阐述此次经历后的感悟。
【提分词汇】①clean up打扫;清理
②picked up捡起
③make a big difference产生重大影响;带来很大不同
【提分句式】Through this experience, I learned that keeping our living environment clean needs everyone’s effort.(that引导的宾语从句)
十四、环境
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、居住环境、环境保护
29.【答案】范文:
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also use reusable bags when shopping and stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Last but not least, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbins every day.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述作为学生,为保护环境要做的事情;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to 为了……
②turn off 关掉
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
④last but not least 最后但同样重要的是……
[高分句型]
①First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference. (Only if引导的条件状语从句;can we构成部分倒装结构)
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、方法与哲理、环境
30.【答案】
【参考范文】
Build a Beautiful China
Ladies and gentlemen,
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To build a beautiful China, we must protect our environment.
First, to save water and electricity, we should turn off showers, taps and lights in time when we don't use them. Second, we'd better walk or ride a bike rather than drive a car when we go out. If we do so, the air will be fresher and fresher. Third, we should use both sides of paper and stop using throwaway chopsticks or cups. So fewer trees will be cut down. Fourth, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping so that we can reduce pollution.
Let's try our best to protect our environment. As long as we work together, we will build a beautiful China and the Chinese Dream will come true.
Thank you for your listening.
【知识点】一般现在时、书面表达、方法与哲理、环境
31.【答案】But the environmental pollution is a bit serious these days.In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.First, we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room.Second, let's walk or ride a bike to school.It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health.Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping.We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution.Fourth, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbin every day.How important it is for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
【详解】
〖知识拓展〗
turn off意为“关闭”;turn on意为“打开”;turn up意为“调大(音量)”;turn down意为“调小(音量);拒绝”。
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