Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读文章，归纳关于宣传手册的写作风格及特点。
2.学会写关于灾难求生的宣传手册。
1．HOLD ON to your shelter until the shaking stops.在晃动停止前，不要离开你的避难所。
★shelter n．避难所；遮蔽物 vt.& vi.保护，掩蔽，躲避(风雨或危险)
|用|法|感|知|
·(“细节描写”佳句)They found a small cave that could serve as a shelter from the heavy rain. 他们找到了一个小山洞，可以当作躲避大雨的庇护所。
·(“动作描写”佳句)The kind woman sheltered the lost child who was shivering with fear in her warm house.这位善良的女士将那个因害怕而瑟瑟发抖的迷路的孩子安置在她温暖的房子里。
[归纳点拨]
(1)take shelter from ... 躲避……
give sb. shelter 庇护某人
(2)shelter sb./sth. from ...保护某人/某物不受……
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①The wall sheltered us ____________ the enemy's gunfire.
②After the big earthquake, the victims had to __________________________________.
大地震之后，灾民们不得不住在临时避难所。
③You are not fragile flowers and ___________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
你不是脆弱的花朵，你不能永远在温室里躲避风雨。
2．Observe carefully before you move away.
移动前要仔细观察。
★observe vt.观察；注意；看到；注视，监视；遵守(规则、法律等)；庆祝，庆贺
|用|法|感|知|
(写出下列句中observe的含义)
①Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed.________________
②Over the next few days, Grandfather was able to observe the kindness, which Matt had not only for animals but for people as well.________________
③Could you tell me how you usually observe New Year's Day in your country？________________
归纳点拨 (1)observe sb.do/doing sth.看到某人做了/正在做某事observe sth.done 看到某事被做observe a rule 遵守规则(2)observer n. 观察者(3)observation n. 观察；观察力；观察结果under observation 在观察中；在监视下
名师点津 observe作“观察；注意”讲时，可用省去to的动词不定式或v. ing形式作宾语补足语；但如果用于被动语态，省去的动词不定式符号to要还原。
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
④I observed her ____________ (walk) away with a smile.
⑤She observed a man ____________ (walk) on the opposite side of the way.
⑥Every ____________ (observe) we make involves the exchange of energy.
⑦The thief was observed ____________ (open) the window and run away.
⑧We ________________ it had turned cloudy.
我们观察到天气转阴了。
⑨The mother _________________________________________________________
and felt cheerful.
母亲看到儿子正在做作业，感到很高兴。
■写作项目——Write a brochure about surviving a disaster
本单元的写作任务是写一个有关灾难逃生的宣传手册，属于介绍要点式说明文。此类文章的写作重心是对事物要点特征的介绍。介绍说明要有顺序层次，让读者清楚明了，对关键核心部分要重点说明，详略得当。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
救生手册写作需要遵循一定的逻辑顺序，可根据灾难发生后采取措施的步骤，按顺序安排好材料，也可按照所处的不同位置或场景，按情况给出不同建议，在相应的建议后说明原因。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时可按照 Things to do before .../Things to do during .../ Things not to do during ...进行叙述，也可按照firstly/secondly/ ...的方式进行叙述。如本文利用小标题的形式，从三个方面(室内、户外以及车内等)描述了地震发生时人们常处的环境，每个方面都分段提出了建议及原因，如“Move to open areas. Buildings, trees, streetlights and power lines can fall down during an earthquake.”逻辑清晰、语言简练，能够使读者快速明确地震求生的一些情况。
三、学语言特色
1．救生手册常使用简单有力的祈使句表达紧急情况下的强烈要求或建议。如课文中“Don't try to run out of the building during an earthquake；Move to open areas; Observe carefully before you move away; Avoid bridges that have been damaged or may be damaged by the aftershocks”等。
2．救生手册中常使用一些关键动词来表示重要的动作，体现动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感。如课文中“DROP down onto your hands and knees；COVER your head and neck; HOLD ON to your shelter”等。
具体写作指导
Write a brochure about surviving a disaster
——写一个关于在灾难中求生的宣传手册
第一步：构思谋篇
Tense Present simple tense
Person Third person
Main points Part 1: Briefly point out some rules to remember when a disaster occursPart 2: Describe the precautions to be taken during the disasterPart 3: Emphasize faith in the face of the disaster
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 开头应点明灾难发生时要记住一些规则
If an earthquake happens, ________________________________.
如果发生地震，请牢记以下规则。
第二部分 详细介绍灾难中需要注意的事项
1．点明不同的场景
①If you are ___________/If you are_________/If you are ____________
如果你在家里/在外面/在车里
②If you are ________________________/If you are ________________________
如果你在农场工作/行走在路上
2．灾难发生时该做什么？
① _________________________________________
找些安全的地方待着。
②You should_____________________________________， such as a desk, a table or even a bed.你应该躲藏在坚硬的物体下面，比如书桌、桌子甚至床。
③If you are in the open air, _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.如果你在户外，找一个空旷的地方。
④We should __________________ when we are in trouble.当遇到困难时，我们应该互相帮助。
3．灾难发生时不该做什么？
①You ____________________ in a hurry.
你不应该匆匆忙忙地跑。
②You __________________________ to go downstairs.你不应该乘电梯下楼。
③You ______________________________________________________________.
你不应该靠近汽车或水。
第三部分 结尾强调面临灾难，要勇于坚持，有战胜危险的信念
No matter how strong the earthquake is, ____________________________________， we can overcome any difficulty in front of us.
无论地震有多强烈，只要我们有战胜它的信念，永不放弃，我们就能克服面前的任何困难。
[针对练笔]
如果家里发生火灾怎么办？如何在大火中逃生？请写一个片段，给出你的建议。
写作素材储备
一、介绍灾难求生措施的常用句式
1．Dos
(1)Cover ... with ... 用……遮住……
(2)Move away from ... 离开……
(3)Find ... to shelter yourself找到……来掩护自己
(4)Open the window to ... 打开窗户以便……
(5)Hold on until ... 坚持直到……
2．Don'ts
(1)Don't run. 不要奔跑。
(2)Don't turn on lights and other electric appliance.不要开灯及其他电器。
(3)Never jump off the building unless ...
除非……否则不要从建筑物上往下跳
(4)You'd better not shout loudly in case ...
不要大声呼救以防……
(5)Don't run back to fetch ...不要跑回去拿……
二、主题语段
1．Flood
When a terrifying flood comes, the roaring water is rushing in all directions. If you are in the house, you should quickly go to the high place. And remember to take necessary supplies, such as food and water.
当一场可怕的洪水来临时，咆哮的洪水向四面八方汹涌奔流。如果你在房子里，你应该迅速去到高处。并且记得带上必要的物资，比如食物和水。
2．Earthquake
An earthquake strikes with a violent force that makes the ground shake and the walls tremble. If you're indoors, quickly hide under a sturdy table that can provide some protection. Hold on tightly to its legs, curling your body up closely, and stay calm until the tremors gradually stop.
地震带着猛烈的力量袭来，使得地面摇晃、墙壁颤抖。如果你在室内，迅速躲在一张坚固的桌子下面，它能够提供一些保护。紧紧抓住桌腿，将身体蜷缩得紧紧的，并保持冷静直到震动逐渐停止。
3．Fire
At last, you successfully make it to the exit unharmed. But do you recall how this all began When a horrifying fire burst out, the thick smoke swiftly spread throughout the room. Hastily, you snatched up a wet cloth and firmly covered your nose and mouth. Next, bending your body extremely low to the ground, you inched forward slowly yet steadily towards the exit.
终于，你毫发无损的成功抵达出口。但你还记得这一切是如何开始的吗？当一场恐怖的大火爆发时，那浓厚的烟雾迅速在房间蔓延。你急忙抓起一块湿布，紧紧地捂住鼻子和嘴巴。接着，将身体极度低弯向地面，你缓慢却坚定地朝着出口一点点前进。
Section 8 Writing Workshop
新知深化学习
1．①from ②live in the temporary shelters
③you can't take shelter from wind and rain in a greenhouse forever
2．①遵守 ②观察 ③庆祝 ④walk ⑤walking
⑥observation ⑦to open ⑧observed that
⑨observed her son doing his homework
写作专项提能
具体写作指导
第一部分
keep the following rules in mind
第二部分
1．①indoors; outdoors; in a car
②working on the farm; walking on the road
2．①Find some safe places to stay in.
②hide yourself under something hard
③find an open place ④help each other
3．①should not run ②should never take a lift
③should never get close to cars or water
第三部分
as long as we have the belief to defeat it and never give up
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
How to survive a house fire I'd tell you that first and foremost, you should stay calm and dial 119 immediately. Second, you'd better cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and manage to leave the house. Last but not least, if you are trapped, it is important to wave something out of the window to attract the attention of the passers by.
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Section 8
Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读文章，归纳关于宣传手册的写作风格及特点。
2.学会写关于灾难求生的宣传手册。
NO 1
新知深化学习
NO 2
写作专项提能
NO 3
课时检测
目 录
No.1 新知深化学习
1．HOLD ON to your shelter until the shaking stops.在晃动停止前，不要离开你的避难所。
★shelter n．避难所；遮蔽物 vt.& vi.保护，掩蔽，躲避(风雨或危险)
|用|法|感|知|
·(“细节描写”佳句)They found a small cave that could serve as a shelter from the heavy rain.
他们找到了一个小山洞，可以当作躲避大雨的庇护所。
·(“动作描写”佳句)The kind woman sheltered the lost child who was shivering with fear in her warm house.
这位善良的女士将那个因害怕而瑟瑟发抖的迷路的孩子安置在她温暖的房子里。
[归纳点拨]
(1)take shelter from ... 躲避……
give sb. shelter 庇护某人
(2)shelter sb./sth. from ... 保护某人/某物不受……
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①The wall sheltered us the enemy's gunfire.
②After the big earthquake, the victims had to ____________ _________________.
大地震之后，灾民们不得不住在临时避难所。
from
live in the
temporary shelters
③You are not fragile flowers and _________________________ __________________________________ .
你不是脆弱的花朵，你不能永远在温室里躲避风雨。
you can't take shelter from
wind and rain in a greenhouse forever
2．Observe carefully before you move away.
移动前要仔细观察。
★observe vt.观察；注意；看到；注视，监视；遵守(规则、法律等)；庆祝，庆贺
|用|法|感|知|
(写出下列句中observe的含义)
①Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed._____
②Over the next few days, Grandfather was able to observe the kindness, which Matt had not only for animals but for people as well._____
③Could you tell me how you usually observe New Year's Day in your country？_____
遵守
观察
庆祝
归纳点拨 (1)observe sb.do/doing sth.看到某人做了/正在做某事
observe sth.done 看到某事被做
observe a rule 遵守规则
(2)observer n. 观察者
(3)observation n. 观察；观察力；观察结果
under observation 在观察中；在监视下
名师点津 observe作“观察；注意”讲时，可用省去to的动词不定式或v.-ing形式作宾语补足语；但如果用于被动语态，省去的动词不定式符号to要还原。
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
④I observed her (walk) away with a smile.
⑤She observed a man (walk) on the opposite side of the way.
⑥Every (observe) we make involves the exchange of energy.
⑦The thief was observed (open) the window and run away.
walk
walking
observation
to open
⑧We it had turned cloudy.
我们观察到天气转阴了。
⑨The mother and felt cheerful.
母亲看到儿子正在做作业，感到很高兴。
observed that
observed her son doing his homework
No.2 写作专项提能
写作项目——Write a brochure about surviving a disaster
本单元的写作任务是写一个有关灾难逃生的宣传手册，属于介绍要点式说明文。此类文章的写作重心是对事物要点特征的介绍。介绍说明要有顺序层次，让读者清楚明了，对关键核心部分要重点说明，详略得当。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
救生手册写作需要遵循一定的逻辑顺序，可根据灾难发生后采取措施的步骤，按顺序安排好材料，也可按照所处的不同位置或场景，按情况给出不同建议，在相应的建议后说明原因。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写作时可按照 Things to do before .../Things to do during .../ Things not to do during ...进行叙述，也可按照firstly/secondly/ ...的方式进行叙述。
如本文利用小标题的形式，从三个方面(室内、户外以及车内等)描述了地震发生时人们常处的环境，每个方面都分段提出了建议及原因，如“Move to open areas. Buildings, trees, streetlights and power lines can fall down during an earthquake.”逻辑清晰、语言简练，能够使读者快速明确地震求生的一些情况。
三、学语言特色
1．救生手册常使用简单有力的祈使句表达紧急情况下的强烈要求或建议。如课文中“Don't try to run out of the building during an earthquake；Move to open areas; Observe carefully before you move away; Avoid bridges that have been damaged or may be damaged by the aftershocks”等。
2．救生手册中常使用一些关键动词来表示重要的动作，体现动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感。如课文中“DROP down onto your hands and knees；COVER your head and neck; HOLD ON to your shelter”等。
具体写作指导
Write a brochure about surviving a disaster
——写一个关于在灾难中求生的宣传手册
Tense Present simple tense
Person Third person
Main points Part 1: Briefly point out some rules to remember when a disaster occurs
Part 2: Describe the precautions to be taken during the disaster
Part 3: Emphasize faith in the face of the disaster
第一步：构思谋篇
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 开头应点明灾难发生时要记住一些规则
If an earthquake happens, .
如果发生地震，请牢记以下规则。
keep the following rules in mind
第二部分 详细介绍灾难中需要注意的事项
1．点明不同的场景
①If you are /If you are /If you are ________
如果你在家里/在外面/在车里
②If you are /If you are __________________
如果你在农场工作/行走在路上
indoors
outdoors
in a car
working on the farm
walking on the road
2．灾难发生时该做什么？
① .
找些安全的地方待着。
②You should , such as a desk, a table or even a bed.
你应该躲藏在坚硬的物体下面，比如书桌、桌子甚至床。
Find some safe places to stay in
hide yourself under something hard
③If you are in the open air, .
如果你在户外，找一个空旷的地方。
④We should when we are in trouble.
当遇到困难时，我们应该互相帮助。
find an open place
help each other
3．灾难发生时不该做什么？
①You in a hurry.
你不应该匆匆忙忙地跑。
②You to go downstairs.
你不应该乘电梯下楼。
③You .
你不应该靠近汽车或水。
should not run
should never take a lift
should never get close to cars or water
第三部分 结尾强调面临灾难，要勇于坚持，有战胜危险的信念
No matter how strong the earthquake is, _____________________ ________________________________we can overcome any difficulty in front of us.
无论地震有多强烈，只要我们有战胜它的信念，永不放弃，我们就能克服面前的任何困难。
as long as we have the
belief to defeat it and never give up
[针对练笔]
如果家里发生火灾怎么办？如何在大火中逃生？请写一个片段，给出你的建议。
参考范文：
How to survive a house fire I'd tell you that first and foremost, you should stay calm and dial 119 immediately. Second, you'd better cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and manage to leave the house. Last but not least, if you are trapped, it is important to wave something out of the window to attract the attention of the passers-by.
写作素材储备
一、介绍灾难求生措施的常用句式
1．Dos
(1)Cover ... with ... 用……遮住……
(2)Move away from ... 离开……
(3)Find ... to shelter yourself 找到……来掩护自己
(4)Open the window to ... 打开窗户以便……
(5)Hold on until ... 坚持直到……
2．Don'ts
(1)Don't run. 不要奔跑。
(2)Don't turn on lights and other electric appliance.
不要开灯及其他电器。
(3)Never jump off the building unless ...
除非……否则不要从建筑物上往下跳
(4)You'd better not shout loudly in case ...
不要大声呼救以防……
(5)Don't run back to fetch ... 不要跑回去拿……
二、主题语段
1．Flood
When a terrifying flood comes, the roaring water is rushing in all directions. If you are in the house, you should quickly go to the high place. And remember to take necessary supplies, such as food and water.
当一场可怕的洪水来临时，咆哮的洪水向四面八方汹涌奔流。如果你在房子里，你应该迅速去到高处。并且记得带上必要的物资，比如食物和水。
2．Earthquake
An earthquake strikes with a violent force that makes the ground shake and the walls tremble. If you're indoors, quickly hide under a sturdy table that can provide some protection. Hold on tightly to its legs, curling your body up closely, and stay calm until the tremors gradually stop.
地震带着猛烈的力量袭来，使得地面摇晃、墙壁颤抖。如果你在室内，迅速躲在一张坚固的桌子下面，它能够提供一些保护。紧紧抓住桌腿，将身体蜷缩得紧紧的，并保持冷静直到震动逐渐停止。
3．Fire
At last, you successfully make it to the exit unharmed. But do you recall how this all began When a horrifying fire burst out, the thick smoke swiftly spread throughout the room. Hastily, you snatched up a wet cloth and firmly covered your nose and mouth. Next, bending your body extremely low to the ground, you inched forward slowly yet steadily towards the exit.
终于，你毫发无损的成功抵达出口。但你还记得这一切是如何开始的吗？当一场恐怖的大火爆发时，那浓厚的烟雾迅速在房间蔓延。你急忙抓起一块湿布，紧紧地捂住鼻子和嘴巴。接着，将身体极度低弯向地面，你缓慢却坚定地朝着出口一点点前进。
No.3 课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything and left badly damaged buildings.
①A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, ____________ _________________. (用现在分词升级)
②A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, ____________ _______________________.(用定语从句升级)
leaving badly
which left
damaged buildings
badly damaged buildings
2．After they realized the great harm that was caused by the haze and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather.(用现在分词和过去分词升级句子)
→ and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather.
Having realized the great harm caused by the haze
3．If they are not dealt with properly, waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water.(用省略句升级句子)
→ , waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water.
If not dealt with properly
4．Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster and this seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears.(用定语从句升级句子)
→Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster, .
which seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The earthquake ① (对……造成巨大损害) most of the buildings in the town.People there are ② (急需帮助). By now, people all over the country have provided food and clothes for the ③ (无家可归的人们) in the disaster-stricken areas.
caused great damage to
in great need of help
homeless people
2．The drought in the southwest of China has lasted for several months, which makes people face ① (水资源缺乏). ② (众所周知) the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe ③ (由于全球变暖). So it is vital that we should ④ (提高人们节约用水的意识)．
water shortage
It is well-known that
due to global warming
raise people's awareness of saving water
3．① (大量的) rubbish and waste water are being poured into the rivers. ② (结果), water sources have ③ (被严重污染)．
4．① (除了) humans' ② (砍伐), fires also ③ (导致) the destruction of the forest nowadays.
Plenty of
As a consequence/result
become badly polluted
In addition to
cutting down
contribute to/result in/lead to
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华。夏季来临，雨水增多，你们学校的学生会委托你写一份宣传手册，介绍洪水来临时的避险建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Before the flood
Flash floods can strike with almost no warning.
A Flood Warning means that floods are already occurring and you should be prepared to leave.
During the flood
1．If you are indoors
As soon as you receive word of a flash flood, make your way to higher ground, which is any ground that's higher than other ground.
If you see flood waters, head in the opposite direction.
Avoid all moving water if possible.
Avoid any electrical equipment like fallen power lines, and if flood waters have reached your home, do not use the electricity.
And grab or climb onto something as soon as you're able.
2．If you are in a car
If you're traveling in a vehicle, never attempt a water crossing.
In the event that water overtakes your vehicle, get out immediately.
Break glasses if you have to.
After the flood
Wherever you find yourself, remember, get to higher ground, wait for the waters to subside, then get to safety.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Mom, where do you suppose they are？” my ten-year-old son Danny asked for the twentieth time as he stared out of the window at the range (牧场). “They” were our horses, Ginger, and her three-year-old son, Charcoal, both of whom had been missing for days.
Our range and woods offered plenty of grass for six horses. However, spring thunderstorms during the past ten days had forced the nearby river out of its banks. The other horses had come to the barn (畜棚) during the downpour, but not Ginger or Charcoal.
When the rain stopped, I took Spot, our dog, to do some first-hand searching. We went through trees and brush in wet lowlands near the river. All my calling and Spot's smelling were in vain.
The next morning, the sun struggled to shine through gray clouds, but dampness filled the air. Suddenly, Danny shouted, “Mom, come quick! There's Ginger！” The horse stood at the range gate crying impatiently and moving back and forth as if to say “Follow me”．
“Hurry, Danny，” I said, “get the pot with some oats (燕麦). I will bring a rope.” Ginger walked in front and we followed. “I see him! I see him！” Danny shouted. Charcoal was lying on his side, not moving. His right back leg was badly injured.
“Oh, Mom. How long do you think he's been lying here with no food and nobody to care for him？” Tears formed in Danny's blue eyes. “Probably several days, but we'll never know. Ginger took care of him, though, protecting him from attacks from hungry wolves or other wild animals，” I said.
“What can we do now？” Danny asked anxiously. “There's no way to drive a vehicle down here in all this mud. We just have to get him up and lead him out，” I said, keeping my voice confident. “Afterwards, we'll have to call the vet (兽医) out.”
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．根据上文内容续写故事的结尾，描述受伤的小马在被找到后如何回到牧场以及被救治。要求逻辑通顺，情节合理。
With our encouragement and the attraction of oats, Charcoal struggled and managed to stand up. ____________________________ ____________________________________________________________
参考范文：
With our encouragement and the attraction of oats, Charcoal struggled and managed to stand up. Danny, with the pot, marched up the rocky slippery path through the woods. The hike which was ordinarily just 30 minutes now took over two hours. Upon arriving at the barn, I hurried to phone the vet to come as soon as possible. After cleaning Charcoal's wounds, the vet told us, “His injury would heal, but you'll need to treat the leg every day for several weeks, maybe longer.”We were all smiled in relief.
[阅读拓展训练]
Because of the “Yunnan Elephant”， many people have developed a strong interest in elephants, and it has also aroused a heated discussion about how man and nature should share the earth and live in harmony. In this issue of “Weekend Cinema”， Yingda has brought four documentaries related to this：
The Secret Life of Elephants
The Secret Life of Elephants is a BBC nature documentary series following the lives of elephants and the work of the conservation charity Save the Elephants in Samburu National Reserve, Kenya. It was first released in the United Kingdom on BBC One in January 2009 to 4.2 million viewers. The team follow the dramatic and emotional stories of 500 plus individually known elephants.
Penguin Town
The series is filmed in Simon's Town, South Africa, where these adorable African penguins wander close by to people, strolling down the sidewalk, passing sunbathers on the beach. The series follows various penguin couples. With great humour, their love stories are told, and you follow the adventures of these penguin couples starting families and having chicks.
Seven Worlds, One Planet
Millions of years ago incredible forces tore apart the Earth's crust (地壳), creating seven extraordinary continents, each with its own distinct climate, its own distinct terrain (地形) and its own unique animal life. Seven Worlds, One Planet explores the natural wonders that give each of our continents its distinct character. Following the animals that have made these environments their home, it discovers amazing wildlife stories that uncover what makes each of these seven worlds unique.
Bears on Top of the World
This moving film reveals the differing fortunes of a mother polar bear, a mother bear and their newborn babies, in a rapidly changing world. This is a remarkable story of how bears, ever intelligent, are adapting to a warming world.
语篇解读：本文是一篇应用文。文章介绍了四部有关人与自然如何共享地球以及和谐共处的纪录片。
1．If you are interested in documentaries with humorous language, which film do you prefer
A．The Secret Life of Elephants.
B．Penguin Town.
C．Seven Worlds, One Planet.
D．Bears on Top of the World.
√
解析：细节理解题。根据Penguin Town部分中的“With great humour, their love stories are told, and you follow the adventures of these penguin couples starting families and having chicks.”可知，这部纪录片用幽默的语言讲述了企鹅夫妇的故事。因此，如果你对有趣语言的纪录片感兴趣可以选择Penguin Town。
2．What do these four documentaries have in common
A．They are all filmed in Africa.
B．They explore the natural wonders with distinct character.
C．They share the stories of wildlife.
D．They focus on animals adapting to the changing world.
解析：细节理解题。通读这四部纪录片的介绍可知，它们的共同之处是都讲述了野生动物的故事。
√
3．Which section on the website can you find this passage
A．Sports and Health.
B．Entertainment and Culture.
C．Finance and Economics.
D．Technology and Science.
√
解析：推理判断题。根据第一段“Because of the ‘Yunnan Elephant’ ...Yingda has brought four documentaries related to this”并结合下文对四部纪录片的介绍可推知，这篇文章最有可能在网站的“娱乐和文化”部分读到。UNIT 5 课时检测(八) Writing Workshop
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything and left badly damaged buildings.
①A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, ____________________________________.(用现在分词升级)
②A severe earthquake destroyed almost everything, ____________________________________.(用定语从句升级)
2．After they realized the great harm that was caused by the haze and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather.(用现在分词和过去分词升级句子)
→________________________________________ and the importance of protecting the environment, people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather.
3．If they are not dealt with properly, waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water.(用省略句升级句子)
→________________________， waste batteries will seriously pollute the underground water.
4．Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster and this seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears.(用定语从句升级句子)
→Due to global warming, the ice in the Arctic is melting faster, ____________________________________________________________.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The earthquake ①________________________ (对……造成巨大损害) most of the buildings in the town.People there are ②__________________ (急需帮助). By now, people all over the country have provided food and clothes for the ③______________________ (无家可归的人们) in the disaster stricken areas.
2．The drought in the southwest of China has lasted for several months, which makes people face ①________________ (水资源缺乏). ②________________________ (众所周知) the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe ③____________________________ (由于全球变暖). So it is vital that we should ④________________________________________________ (提高人们节约用水的意识)．
3．①____________ (大量的) rubbish and waste water are being poured into the rivers. ②____________________ (结果), water sources have ③__________________ (被严重污染)．
4．①__________ (除了) humans' ②______________ (砍伐), fires also ③________________ (导致) the destruction of the forest nowadays.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华。夏季来临，雨水增多，你们学校的学生会委托你写一份宣传手册，介绍洪水来临时的避险建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Mom, where do you suppose they are？” my ten year old son Danny asked for the twentieth time as he stared out of the window at the range (牧场). “They” were our horses, Ginger, and her three year old son, Charcoal, both of whom had been missing for days.
Our range and woods offered plenty of grass for six horses. However, spring thunderstorms during the past ten days had forced the nearby river out of its banks. The other horses had come to the barn (畜棚) during the downpour, but not Ginger or Charcoal.
When the rain stopped, I took Spot, our dog, to do some first hand searching. We went through trees and brush in wet lowlands near the river. All my calling and Spot's smelling were in vain.
The next morning, the sun struggled to shine through gray clouds, but dampness filled the air. Suddenly, Danny shouted, “Mom, come quick! There's Ginger！” The horse stood at the range gate crying impatiently and moving back and forth as if to say “Follow me”．
“Hurry, Danny，” I said, “get the pot with some oats (燕麦). I will bring a rope.” Ginger walked in front and we followed. “I see him! I see him！” Danny shouted. Charcoal was lying on his side, not moving. His right back leg was badly injured.
“Oh, Mom. How long do you think he's been lying here with no food and nobody to care for him？” Tears formed in Danny's blue eyes. “Probably several days, but we'll never know. Ginger took care of him, though, protecting him from attacks from hungry wolves or other wild animals，” I said.
“What can we do now？” Danny asked anxiously. “There's no way to drive a vehicle down here in all this mud. We just have to get him up and lead him out，” I said, keeping my voice confident. “Afterwards, we'll have to call the vet (兽医) out.”
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．根据上文内容续写故事的结尾，描述受伤的小马在被找到后如何回到牧场以及被救治。要求逻辑通顺，情节合理。
With our encouragement and the attraction of oats, Charcoal struggled and managed to stand up.
[阅读拓展训练]
Because of the “Yunnan Elephant”， many people have developed a strong interest in elephants, and it has also aroused a heated discussion about how man and nature should share the earth and live in harmony. In this issue of “Weekend Cinema”， Yingda has brought four documentaries related to this：
The Secret Life of Elephants
The Secret Life of Elephants is a BBC nature documentary series following the lives of elephants and the work of the conservation charity Save the Elephants in Samburu National Reserve, Kenya. It was first released in the United Kingdom on BBC One in January 2009 to 4.2 million viewers. The team follow the dramatic and emotional stories of 500 plus individually known elephants.
Penguin Town
The series is filmed in Simon's Town, South Africa, where these adorable African penguins wander close by to people, strolling down the sidewalk, passing sunbathers on the beach. The series follows various penguin couples. With great humour, their love stories are told, and you follow the adventures of these penguin couples starting families and having chicks.
Seven Worlds, One Planet
Millions of years ago incredible forces tore apart the Earth's crust (地壳), creating seven extraordinary continents, each with its own distinct climate, its own distinct terrain (地形) and its own unique animal life. Seven Worlds, One Planet explores the natural wonders that give each of our continents its distinct character. Following the animals that have made these environments their home, it discovers amazing wildlife stories that uncover what makes each of these seven worlds unique.
Bears on Top of the World
This moving film reveals the differing fortunes of a mother polar bear, a mother bear and their newborn babies, in a rapidly changing world. This is a remarkable story of how bears, ever intelligent, are adapting to a warming world.
1．If you are interested in documentaries with humorous language, which film do you prefer
A．The Secret Life of Elephants.
B．Penguin Town.
C．Seven Worlds, One Planet.
D．Bears on Top of the World.
2．What do these four documentaries have in common
A．They are all filmed in Africa.
B．They explore the natural wonders with distinct character.
C．They share the stories of wildlife.
D．They focus on animals adapting to the changing world.
3．Which section on the website can you find this passage
A．Sports and Health.
B．Entertainment and Culture.
C．Finance and Economics.
D．Technology and Science.
UNIT 5 课时检测(八)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．①leaving badly damaged buildings
②which left badly damaged buildings
2．Having realized the great harm caused by the haze
3．If not dealt with properly
4．which seriously destroys the habitat of North Polar Bears
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．①caused great damage to ②in great need of help
③homeless people
2．①water shortage ②It is well known that
③due to global warming
④raise people's awareness of saving water
3．①Plenty of ②As a consequence/result
③become badly polluted
4．①In addition to ②cutting down
③contribute to/result in/lead to
Ⅲ.应用文写作
参考范文：
Before the flood
Flash floods can strike with almost no warning.
A Flood Warning means that floods are already occurring and you should be prepared to leave.
During the flood
1．If you are indoors
As soon as you receive word of a flash flood, make your way to higher ground, which is any ground that's higher than other ground.
If you see flood waters, head in the opposite direction.
Avoid all moving water if possible.
Avoid any electrical equipment like fallen power lines, and if flood waters have reached your home, do not use the electricity.
And grab or climb onto something as soon as you're able.
2．If you are in a car
If you're traveling in a vehicle, never attempt a water crossing.
In the event that water overtakes your vehicle, get out immediately.
Break glasses if you have to.
After the flood
Wherever you find yourself, remember, get to higher ground, wait for the waters to subside, then get to safety.
Ⅳ.读后续写
参考范文：
With our encouragement and the attraction of oats, Charcoal struggled and managed to stand up. Danny, with the pot, marched up the rocky slippery path through the woods. The hike which was ordinarily just 30 minutes now took over two hours. Upon arriving at the barn, I hurried to phone the vet to come as soon as possible. After cleaning Charcoal's wounds, the vet told us, “His injury would heal, but you'll need to treat the leg every day for several weeks, maybe longer.”We were all smiled in relief.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇应用文。文章介绍了四部有关人与自然如何共享地球以及和谐共处的纪录片。
1．选B 细节理解题。根据Penguin Town部分中的“With great humour, their love stories are told, and you follow the adventures of these penguin couples starting families and having chicks.”可知，这部纪录片用幽默的语言讲述了企鹅夫妇的故事。因此，如果你对有趣语言的纪录片感兴趣可以选择Penguin Town。
2．选C 细节理解题。通读这四部纪录片的介绍可知，它们的共同之处是都讲述了野生动物的故事。
3．选B 推理判断题。根据第一段“Because of the ‘Yunnan Elephant’ ...Yingda has brought four documentaries related to this”并结合下文对四部纪录片的介绍可推知，这篇文章最有可能在网站的“娱乐和文化”部分读到。
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