Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读文章概要，把握文章的写作框架。
2.运用概括信息的技法，写一篇文章概要。
1．summary n．概要；摘要；总结 adj.总结性的；概括的
|用|法|感|知|
·(“传统文化”主题佳句)In summary, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.总之，现在是我们珍惜和发展我们自己的宝贵文化的时候了。
·Please send a speaker from your group to make a summary of your discussion.请从你的小组中派一位发言者对你们的讨论进行总结。
[归纳点拨]
(1)in summary 总的来说；总之
make a summary of ... 对……进行总结
(2)summarize vt. 总结，概述
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①I can orally ____________ (summary) the information I have read in English.
②________________， the two universities have some similarities.
总之，那两所大学有一些共同之处。
③Below is ________________ what we talked about and learned from one another.下面是对我们所讨论的以及互相学到的知识的一个总结。
2．... she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.
……她对名声不感兴趣，更喜欢继续她的研究。
★prefer vt.宁愿；更喜欢
|用|法|感|知|
·When talking about my son's reading preference, I think he prefers science books. 当谈到我儿子的阅读喜好时，我认为他更喜欢科学书籍。
·(“个人介绍”佳句)As for me, I prefer to smile when communicating with someone, because a smile can narrow the distance between us.
就我而言，我更喜欢微笑着与人交流，因为微笑可以拉近我们之间的距离。
·Nowadays many children prefer surfing the Internet at home to taking exercise outdoors.
如今许多孩子宁可待在家里上网，也不愿意到户外进行锻炼。
[归纳点拨]
(1)prefer doing/to do sth. 更喜欢做某事
prefer A to B 与B相比，更喜欢A
prefer sb.to do sth. 宁愿某人做某事；希望某人做某事
(2)
(3)preference n. 喜爱，偏爱
have a preference for ... 偏爱……
|应|用|融|会|
(1)单句语法填空
①A teacher should not have a ____________ (prefer) for any one of his/her pupils.
②He prefers cycling ____________ driving.
③I prefer ____________ (wear) clothes made of silk.
④Many people prefer living in the country to ____________ (live) in the city.
(2)同义句转换
I would prefer to stay at home rather than go out.
⑤I prefer _____________________________________________________________.
⑥I would ____________________________________________________________.
⑦I would ____________________________________________________________.
■写作项目——Write a summary
本单元的写作任务是写一篇文章概要。概要写作是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述，它用最简洁的语言概括原文的主题，使读者对一篇文章有一个简要概括的了解。概要写作主要包括总结原文的主要观点、主要支撑细节及总体性评价。写作时注意既要用词准确、结构合理、语意连贯、不抄袭原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
本篇课文是“A Medical Pioneer”的概要，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
概要写作要遵循四个基本原则：完整性(complete)、简洁性(concise)、客观性(objective)和原创性(original)。写作时要遵循原文的逻辑顺序，内容应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节，客观地如实反映原文的观点和内容，体现创新性，不能完全照搬原文。
如本文有如下特点：
1．第一段用一句话概述了原有文章第一段的内容，短小精悍，起到了总括作用。尤其是a life saving drug for malaria的使用，作为artemisinin的同位语，而且代替了原有的定语从句，简洁明了。对文章中的词语和句子进行合理转换是概要写作的基本写法。
2．第二段删掉了原有文章第二段中屠呦呦的具体出生日期等信息及生平经历中的时间表述。剔除非重要的信息是概要写作的基本写法。第一句中使用的动词major，意为“主修，专攻”，替代了原有的studied，且用词更为严谨。
3．第三段概述了原有文章第三、四段的内容。使用高级词汇mission高度概括了屠呦呦的实验过程。第一句中的set up代替了原有的establish，属于同义词的转换。第三句中“Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments”高度概括了原文中使用四句话涵盖的内容。
4．最后一段高度概括了原有文章的内容，删去了原文中屠呦呦获得的一些荣誉，仅用了uninterested和prefer 高度概括了她对名誉的态度。
三、学行文逻辑
概要写作要注意要点之间的衔接，使用恰当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。如课文中使用了表示并列关系的and、表示转折关系的despite、表示顺承关系的finally及表示目的的in order to等衔接词，使文章逻辑严谨，行文顺畅。
具体写作指导
Write a summary of the text “The Superhero Behind Superman”——写课文“《超人》背后的超级英雄”的概要
写作时可采用以下步骤对文章进行精准概要：
第一步：读懂原文，明确篇章结构
写概要之前，一定要先通读原文，确定文章的体裁和主题。在正确把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明确原文的篇章结构。 根据意义将文中的自然段划分部分，其数量对应的就是要点的数量(一般为3～4个要点)。
通过阅读原文可判断本文体裁是一篇人物介绍，属于记叙文，主要介绍了主人公克里斯托弗·里夫的生平事迹。根据意义划分文章结构如下：
Part 1 Para. 1 ①
Part 2 Paras. 2～3 life before the incident and after the incident
Part 3 Paras. 4～5 a superhero in real life
Part 4 Para. 6 ②
通过分析，可确定本篇概要需要有1个主旨和4个要点，在写作时需要体现。
第二步：忽略次要信息，提炼关键信息
在分析完文章的结构后，要按照文章的段落找出每一段的主旨句，并圈出一些能体现段落大意的关键词。提取信息时，要忽略冗余信息，也就是与主旨无关的一些细节信息。
原文各段落的主旨句和关键词如下：
段落 主旨句 关键词
第一段 第二句 ①
第二段 第一句 born；acting; Superman film
第三段 第二句 Superman films; real life superman；raising awareness；good causes
第四段 ② disaster; injury; lost all hope; depression; support; will to live; goal
第五段 第一句 new sense; exercise programme; goal; film career; charity work; advocate; positive attitude
第六段 第一句 ③
第三步：归纳要点，合理转换表达
明确每个意义段的关键信息后，接下来应用自己的语言准确地表达各意义段的要点。 为避免和原文的句子重复，可利用同义转述、句式转换等形式归纳要点。各要点的词数应根据文中对应内容的篇幅来定，分清主次。
转换表达注意遵循2个原则：
①不增不减不曲：客观精准地表述原文要点，不增添不属于原材料的信息或删减原材料关键信息或改变原材料所表达的意思。
②不繁：在正确理解原文的前提下，用简洁的语言表达与所给材料一致的信息。
如本篇概要的主旨和各要点可以初步概括为：
主旨句 ①
要点1 Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight. As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987. He became a world famous actor.
要点2 A terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown off a horse and broke his neck.At first, his doctors did not expect him to live.
要点3 “Superman” didn't give up. Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage. Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to film making and devoted himself to helping those in need.
要点4 ②
第四步：润色升级，合理过渡衔接
在拟好概要写作的草稿后，合理使用非谓语、从句和特殊句式等使句式丰富多样，但句子结构不可过长，也不要用太复杂的句子结构。同时选用适当的过渡衔接词衔接上下文，保证概要部分内容的连贯性。
根据以上步骤，课文The Superhero Behind Superman的概要如下：
写作素材储备
一、积累概要写作素材
1．同义替换
①be good to有益于→benefit
②too much过多的→excessive
③the same as与……一样→likewise
④about关于→concerning, regarding, be related to, be relevant to
⑤actually事实上→in fact, as a matter of fact，in reality
⑥aim at旨在→be aimed to, be aimed at, be intended to, be meant to
⑦appear出现→appearance, turn up, show up
⑧approach靠近，临近→come near, draw near, around the corner
⑨besides而且，另外→additionally, in addition, what's more, moreover, furthermore
⑩be proud of为……感到骄傲/自豪→take pride in
energetic精力充沛的→full of energy
have fun玩得开心→enjoy oneself, have a good time
hold举行→take place
honor/honour纪念→in honor/honour of
intelligent聪明的→smart, bright, brilliant
in a word总之→all in all, in conclusion, in short, in brief, to sum up
finally最后→in the end, eventually, at the end of
in the beginning开始→at the start of, to begin with
2．反义转换
①sincere→insincere
②encourage→discourage
③absence→presence
④abundance→lack
⑤admit→deny
⑥accidental→intentional
3．词性转换
①recognize your child→parents' recognition
②strongly against→strong opposition
③have a discussion of→discuss
④have a tendency to→tend to
⑤give an explanation of→explain
⑥make a contribution to→contribute to
4．句式变换
(1)主、被动语态变换
People widely use computers in the world today.
→Computers are widely used in the world today.
(2)简单句合并为复合句
The weather turned out to be very good. This was more than we could expect.
→The weather turned out to be very good, which was more than we could expect.
(3)连词衔接法
He insisted on staying. He was not willing to go.
→He insisted on staying rather than going.
(4)固定结构转换法
We are sure to finish it in time because so many people are helping us.
→With so many people helping us, we are sure to finish it in time.
(5)特殊句式法(倒装句和强调句)
①Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting.
→Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests.
②The beautiful scenery attracts the tourists from all over the world.
→It is the beautiful scenery that attracts the tourists from all over the world.
二、积累人物介绍主题语段
1．Zhang Qian
Zhang Qian, an outstanding figure in Chinese history, was a truly courageous pioneer. He fearlessly ventured into the vast and mysterious Western Regions. With unwavering determination and a spirit of exploration, he overcame numerous difficulties and challenges. His remarkable journey opened up the Silk Road, a vital trade route that connected the East and the West, and his deeds have left an indelible and glorious mark in Chinese history.
张骞，中国历史上一位杰出的人物，是真正勇敢无畏的开拓者。他毫不畏惧地踏入广阔而神秘的西域。带着坚定不移的决心和探索精神，他克服了无数的困难与挑战。他那趟非凡的旅程开辟了丝绸之路——这条连接东西方的重要贸易通道，他的事迹在中国历史上留下了不可磨灭且光辉的印记。
2．Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping, the renowned pioneer of hybrid rice, wholeheartedly dedicated his entire life to agriculture. His weathered and wrinkled face carried the distinct mark of years of unwavering hard work. Each wrinkle seemed to tell the tales of countless days spent in the fields, painstakingly conducting research and experiments under the scorching sun or in the pouring rain, with an unwavering resolve to ensure a bountiful harvest for the people.
袁隆平，这位著名的杂交水稻先驱，全心全意地将自己的一生奉献给了农业。他那饱经风霜且布满皱纹的脸承载着多年来辛苦劳作的鲜明印记。每一道皱纹似乎都在讲述着无数个在田间度过的日子，在烈日下或倾盆大雨中不辞辛劳地进行研究和试验，带着坚定的决心确保为人民带来丰收。
Section 8 Writing Workshop
新知深化学习
1．①summarize ②In summary ③a summary of
2．①preference ②to ③wearing/to wear ④living
⑤staying at home to going out
⑥stay at home rather than go out
⑦rather stay at home than go out
写作专项提能
具体写作指导
第一步
①general introduction ②his death
第二步
①Christopher Reeve's life; superhero ②第一句
③pass away; superhero
第三步
①Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.
②Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004. He will always be regarded as a superhero — in more ways than one.
第四步
Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.
Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight. As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987. From then on, he became a world famous actor. (要点1) Unfortunately, a terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown off a horse and broke his neck.At first, his doctors did not expect him to live. (要点2) However, “Superman” didn't give up. Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage. Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to film making. Over the next few years, he devoted himself to helping those in need.(要点3)
Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004. But he will always be regarded as a superhero — in more ways than one.(要点4)
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Section 8
Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读文章概要，把握文章的写作框架。
2.运用概括信息的技法，写一篇文章概要。
NO 1
新知深化学习
NO 2
写作专项提能
NO 3
课时检测
目 录
No.1 新知深化学习
1．summary n．概要；摘要；总结 adj.总结性的；概括的
|用|法|感|知|
·(“传统文化”主题佳句)In summary, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
总之，现在是我们珍惜和发展我们自己的宝贵文化的时候了。
·Please send a speaker from your group to make a summary of your discussion.
请从你的小组中派一位发言者对你们的讨论进行总结。
[归纳点拨]
(1)in summary 的来说；总之
make a summary of ... ……进行总结
(2)summarize vt. 结，概述
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①I can orally (summary) the information I have read in English.
② , the two universities have some similarities.
总之，那两所大学有一些共同之处。
summarize
In summary
③Below is what we talked about and learned from one another.
下面是对我们所讨论的以及互相学到的知识的一个总结。
a summary of
2．... she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.
……她对名声不感兴趣，更喜欢继续她的研究。
★prefer vt.宁愿；更喜欢
|用|法|感|知|
·When talking about my son's reading preference, I think he prefers science books.
当谈到我儿子的阅读喜好时，我认为他更喜欢科学书籍。
·(“个人介绍”佳句)As for me, I prefer to smile when communicating with someone, because a smile can narrow the distance between us.
就我而言，我更喜欢微笑着与人交流，因为微笑可以拉近我们之间的距离。
·Nowadays many children prefer surfing the Internet at home to taking exercise outdoors.
如今许多孩子宁可待在家里上网，也不愿意到户外进行锻炼。
|应|用|融|会|
(1)单句语法填空
①A teacher should not have a (prefer) for any one of his/her pupils.
②He prefers cycling driving.
③I prefer (wear) clothes made of silk.
④Many people prefer living in the country to (live) in the city.
preference
to
wearing/to wear
living
(2)同义句转换
I would prefer to stay at home rather than go out.
⑤I prefer .
⑥I would .
⑦I would .
staying at home to going out
stay at home rather than go out
rather stay at home than go out
No.2 写作专项提能
写作项目——Write a summary
本单元的写作任务是写一篇文章概要。概要写作是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述，它用最简洁的语言概括原文的主题，使读者对一篇文章有一个简要概括的了解。概要写作主要包括总结原文的主要观点、主要支撑细节及总体性评价。写作时注意既要用词准确、结构合理、语意连贯、不抄袭原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
本篇课文是“A Medical Pioneer”的概要，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
概要写作要遵循四个基本原则：完整性(complete)、简洁性(concise)、客观性(objective)和原创性(original)。写作时要遵循原文的逻辑顺序，内容应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节，客观地如实反映原文的观点和内容，体现创新性，不能完全照搬原文。
如本文有如下特点：
1．第一段用一句话概述了原有文章第一段的内容，短小精悍，起到了总括作用。尤其是a life-saving drug for malaria的使用，作为artemisinin的同位语，而且代替了原有的定语从句，简洁明了。对文章中的词语和句子进行合理转换是概要写作的基本写法。
2．第二段删掉了原有文章第二段中屠呦呦的具体出生日期等信息及生平经历中的时间表述。剔除非重要的信息是概要写作的基本写法。第一句中使用的动词major，意为“主修，专攻”，替代了原有的studied，且用词更为严谨。
3．第三段概述了原有文章第三、四段的内容。使用高级词汇mission高度概括了屠呦呦的实验过程。第一句中的set up代替了原有的establish，属于同义词的转换。第三句中“Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments”高度概括了原文中使用四句话涵盖的内容。
4．最后一段高度概括了原有文章的内容，删去了原文中屠呦呦获得的一些荣誉，仅用了uninterested和prefer 高度概括了她对名誉的态度。
三、学行文逻辑
概要写作要注意要点之间的衔接，使用恰当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。如课文中使用了表示并列关系的and、表示转折关系的despite、表示顺承关系的finally及表示目的的in order to等衔接词，使文章逻辑严谨，行文顺畅。
具体写作指导
Write a summary of the text “The Superhero Behind Superman”——写课文“《超人》背后的超级英雄”的概要
写作时可采用以下步骤对文章进行精准概要：
第一步：读懂原文，明确篇章结构
写概要之前，一定要先通读原文，确定文章的体裁和主题。在正确把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明确原文的篇章结构。 根据意义将文中的自然段划分部分，其数量对应的就是要点的数量(一般为3～4个要点)。
通过阅读原文可判断本文体裁是一篇人物介绍，属于记叙文，主要介绍了主人公克里斯托弗·里夫的生平事迹。根据意义划分文章结构如下：
Part 1 Para. 1 ①____________________
Part 2 Paras. 2～3 life before the incident and after the incident
Part 3 Paras. 4～5 a superhero in real life
Part 4 Para. 6 ②_________
general introduction
his death
通过分析，可确定本篇概要需要有1个主旨和4个要点，在写作时需要体现。
第二步：忽略次要信息，提炼关键信息
在分析完文章的结构后，要按照文章的段落找出每一段的主旨句，并圈出一些能体现段落大意的关键词。提取信息时，要忽略冗余信息，也就是与主旨无关的一些细节信息。
原文各段落的主旨句和关键词如下：
段落 主旨句 关键词
第一段 第二句 ①________________________________
第二段 第一句 born；acting; Superman film
第三段 第二句 Superman films; real-life superman；raising awareness；good causes
Christopher Reeve's life；superhero
续表
第四段 ②________ disaster; injury; lost all hope; depression; support; will to live; goal
第五段 第一句 new sense; exercise programme; goal; film career; charity work; advocate; positive attitude
第六段 第一句 ③____________________
第一句
pass away；superhero
第三步：归纳要点，合理转换表达
明确每个意义段的关键信息后，接下来应用自己的语言准确地表达各意义段的要点。 为避免和原文的句子重复，可利用同义转述、句式转换等形式归纳要点。各要点的词数应根据文中对应内容的篇幅来定，分清主次。
转换表达注意遵循2个原则：
①不增不减不曲：客观精准地表述原文要点，不增添不属于原材料的信息或删减原材料关键信息或改变原材料所表达的意思。
②不繁：在正确理解原文的前提下，用简洁的语言表达与所给材料一致的信息。
如本篇概要的主旨和各要点可以初步概括为：
主旨句 ①_______________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
要点1 Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight. As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987. He became a world-famous actor.
要点2 A terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown off a horse and broke his neck.At first, his doctors did not expect him to live.
Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the
Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.
要点3 “Superman” didn't give up. Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage. Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to film-making and devoted himself to helping those in need.
要点4 ②___________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
续表
Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004. He will always
be regarded as a superhero — in more ways than one.
第四步：润色升级，合理过渡衔接
在拟好概要写作的草稿后，合理使用非谓语、从句和特殊句式等使句式丰富多样，但句子结构不可过长，也不要用太复杂的句子结构。同时选用适当的过渡衔接词衔接上下文，保证概要部分内容的连贯性。
根据以上步骤，课文The Superhero Behind Superman的概要如下：
Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.
Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight. As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987. From then on, he became a world-famous actor. (要点1) Unfortunately, a terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown off a horse and broke his neck.At first, his doctors did not expect him to live. (要点2) However, “Superman” didn't give up. Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage. Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to film-making. Over the next few years, he devoted himself to helping those in need.(要点3)
Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004. But he will always be regarded as a superhero — in more ways than one.(要点4)
写作素材储备
一、积累概要写作素材
1．同义替换
①be good to有益于→benefit
②too much过多的→excessive
③the same as与……一样→likewise
④about关于→concerning, regarding, be related to, be relevant to
⑤actually事实上→in fact, as a matter of fact，in reality
⑥aim at旨在→be aimed to, be aimed at, be intended to, be meant to
⑦appear出现→appearance, turn up, show up
⑧approach靠近，临近→come near, draw near, around the corner
⑨besides而且，另外→additionally, in addition, what's more, moreover, furthermore
⑩be proud of为……感到骄傲/自豪→take pride in
energetic精力充沛的→full of energy
have fun玩得开心→enjoy oneself, have a good time
hold举行→take place
honor/honour纪念→in honor/honour of
intelligent聪明的→smart, bright, brilliant
in a word总之→all in all, in conclusion, in short, in brief, to sum up
finally最后→in the end, eventually, at the end of
in the beginning开始→at the start of, to begin with
2．反义转换
①sincere→insincere
②encourage→discourage
③absence→presence
④abundance→lack
⑤admit→deny
⑥accidental→intentional
3．词性转换
①recognize your child→parents' recognition
②strongly against→strong opposition
③have a discussion of→discuss
④have a tendency to→tend to
⑤give an explanation of→explain
⑥make a contribution to→contribute to
4．句式变换
(1)主、被动语态变换
People widely use computers in the world today.
→Computers are widely used in the world today.
(2)简单句合并为复合句
The weather turned out to be very good. This was more than we could expect.
→The weather turned out to be very good, which was more than we could expect.
(3)连词衔接法
He insisted on staying. He was not willing to go.
→He insisted on staying rather than going.
(4)固定结构转换法
We are sure to finish it in time because so many people are helping us.
→With so many people helping us, we are sure to finish it in time.
(5)特殊句式法(倒装句和强调句)
①Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting.
→Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests.
②The beautiful scenery attracts the tourists from all over the world.
→It is the beautiful scenery that attracts the tourists from all over the world.
二、积累人物介绍主题语段
1．Zhang Qian
Zhang Qian, an outstanding figure in Chinese history, was a truly courageous pioneer. He fearlessly ventured into the vast and mysterious Western Regions. With unwavering determination and a spirit of exploration, he overcame numerous difficulties and challenges. His remarkable journey opened up the Silk Road, a vital trade route that connected the East and the West, and his deeds have left an indelible and glorious mark in Chinese history.
张骞，中国历史上一位杰出的人物，是真正勇敢无畏的开拓者。他毫不畏惧地踏入广阔而神秘的西域。带着坚定不移的决心和探索精神，他克服了无数的困难与挑战。他那趟非凡的旅程开辟了丝绸之路——这条连接东西方的重要贸易通道，他的事迹在中国历史上留下了不可磨灭且光辉的印记。
2．Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping, the renowned pioneer of hybrid rice, wholeheartedly dedicated his entire life to agriculture. His weathered and wrinkled face carried the distinct mark of years of unwavering hard work. Each wrinkle seemed to tell the tales of countless days spent in the fields, painstakingly conducting research and experiments under the scorching sun or in the pouring rain, with an unwavering resolve to ensure a bountiful harvest for the people.
袁隆平，这位著名的杂交水稻先驱，全心全意地将自己的一生奉献给了农业。他那饱经风霜且布满皱纹的脸承载着多年来辛苦劳作的鲜明印记。每一道皱纹似乎都在讲述着无数个在田间度过的日子，在烈日下或倾盆大雨中不辞辛劳地进行研究和试验，带着坚定的决心确保为人民带来丰收。
No.3 课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．As far as I am concerned, her generosity will not only help those in need realize their dreams and rebuild faith in life, but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed.
→As far as I am concerned, help those in need realize their dreams and rebuild faith in life, but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed. (用倒装句升级句子)
not only will her generosity
2．The kindness and consideration that she shows to all students make her highly respected by students.
→_______________________________________________________________make her highly respected by students. (用强调句型升级句子)
3．My mother is a respected and generous woman and she never looks down upon others.
→My mother is a respected and generous woman _______________ ________________. (用定语从句升级句子)
It is the kindness and consideration that she shows to all students
who never looks
that
down upon others
4．Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and graduated from college in 1953.At that time, hunger was a disturbing problem for many people.
→Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and graduated from college in 1953 . (用“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句升级句子)
during which hunger was a disturbing problem for many people
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1． (当谈及) the impressive woman in my life, _______________(我突然间想到) that my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive.As a teacher, she has _______________________________ (一生致力于教学)．She has written many articles, some of which are intended for students poor in English.
When it comes to
it occurs to me
devoted her whole life to teaching
2．She is (相貌平平的女孩), but her kindness and consideration (给我们留下了深刻的印象)．We think that she (理应被授予) “Star Student of the Week”．
3．As a player, Lang Ping is successful.During her career life, she (获得了许多冠军), including 4 Olympic championships.As a coach, she (受……欢迎) her players and (对……做出了巨大贡献) our country.
an ordinary-looking girl
left a deep impression on us
deserves to be awarded as
obtained many championships
was popular with
made a great contribution to
Ⅲ.应用文写作
海南中学建校周年庆典迎来了钱学森塑像的揭幕和“钱学森班”的开设，作为校报英语专刊记者，请你写一篇报道向留学生介绍此事。内容包括：
1．钱学森其人(留学美国，回国效力)；
2．钱学森的贡献(航空航天事业)；3．此活动的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：揭幕unveil
A Great Gift
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
A Great Gift
In memory of the great scientist Qian Xuesen, a statue of him was unveiled and a class named after him was set up in Hainan Middle School during its anniversary celebration.
Qian Xuesen, who was a milestone in China's history of science, came back to work for his motherland after finishing his further study in America. His arrival brought Chinese people hope on the cause of aerospace. As a pioneer in this field, he contributed a lot to the development of rockets and launched the first satellite for the country.
Such a great gift inspires students to learn from his spirit and make contributions to our country.
Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The famous classical pianist, Kong Xiangdong, surprised his fans by giving a concert combining classical music with Chinese folk music.Kong explained that he tried this because he wanted to create something new. “As a musician, playing the same music in different cities of the world is very boring，” says Kong.He also feels that playing Chinese folk music on the piano can help bring it to the rest of the world.
Music has always been part of Kong's world.As his mother was a great music lover, he lived with music from birth.But it wasn't always easy for the young Kong Xiangdong.His mother couldn't buy him a piano until he was seven.She had to draw piano keys on a piece of paper so that he could learn to play as early as possible.The 5-year-old Kong would practice on the paper piano as his mother clapped the rhythm.
He was made to practice the piano so much that, at times, he thought about giving up.However, he didn't quit, and he became a great pianist.In 1986, at the age of 18, he became the youngest prize winner in Moscow's Tchaikovsky International Competition.He went on to win awards in competitions across the world.
Because of Kong's talent and hard work, he became famous worldwide.But after years of performing, he felt that in some ways he had lost his identity.This is why he went back to his roots and rediscovered the beauty in Chinese folk music.He began experimenting with different styles and his Dream Tour Concert is the result.
Kong's new experiment in Chinese folk music is so important to him that he even changed his appearance.When he arrived at his concert last week, he had shaved off all his hair! Since his music style was new, he decided his hairstyle had to be new too!
Whether Kong is changing his appearance or transforming his music, he is a pioneer in music today.The concert last week was such a success that Kong's Dream Tour Concert is expected to run for the next two years in Beijing, Shanghai, and other main cities before going to Paris and New York.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Kong Xiangdong, a classical pianist performed the classical music combined with Chinese folk music in his concert in order to bring Chinese folk music to the whole world.(要点1) Influenced by his mom, Kong Xiangdong learned to play the piano from an early age but his way to success is not an easy one.Due to his talent and great efforts, he became renowned worldwide by winning many great awards in competitions.
(要点2)Years of performing classical music make him lose his own root and identity, so he turned to Chinese folk music.(要点3) Kong Xiangdong is regarded as the pioneer in music for his new experiments with different music styles.(要点4)
[阅读拓展训练]
Brian Greene, a professor of physics and mathematics at Columbia University, has created an online science education platform.He tries to “build a bridge” with things you know about, and then “bring you across that bridge to the strange place of modern physics”．
Recently I had a chance to ask Greene about wormholes (a hole which some scientists think might exist, connecting parts of space and time that are not usually connected), time travel and other mysteries of the universe.I asked him a million-dollar question: What if I went through a wormhole and prevented my parents from meeting？“Most of us believe that the universe makes sense，” Greene said.Although there are several interesting theories about time travel, he added, the laws of physics would probably prevent something so illogical from taking place.The good news is that the time paradox (悖论) is open for future physicists to solve.
When asked how physics could become more exciting for kids, Greene said that books by Stephen Weinberg, Leonard Susskind, and other physicists，“make it a great time for people who want to learn about big ideas but aren't yet ready, perhaps, to learn maths”．
When I pointed out that some students still might find physics boring, Greene said that the key is to teach them about things that are strange.“The basic stuff is important，” Greene said.“But I think it's really important to also describe the more modern ideas, things like black holes and the Big Bang.If kids have those ideas in mind, then at least some of them will be excited to learn all the details.”
Greene has followed Albert Einstein's lead in trying to solve the mysteries of the universe.Now he wants kids to do the same.As Greene said, physics is “not just a matter of solving problems in an exam”．It's about experimenting, showing an interest in strange phenomena — and having fun!
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。物理学家Brian Greene希望更多的孩子能对现代物理学感兴趣。
1．A million-dollar question is probably very .
A．direct B．difficult
C．personal D．long
解析：推理判断题。根据第二段中Greene对这个问题的解释以及他说需要未来的物理学家去解决可知，作者提出的这个问题非常难。
√
2．The books by Weinberg and Susskind .
A．are boring to read
B．are mainly about maths
C．are popular science books
D．are only popular among kids
√
解析：推理判断题。根据第三段中的“ ...make it a great time for people who want to learn about big ideas but aren't yet ready, perhaps, to learn maths.”可知，Greene认为Weinberg和Susskind等物理学家写的书浅显易懂，适合普通大众阅读，故这些书属于科普读物。
3．According to Paragraph 4, which of the following does Greene agree with
A．Modern physics is a boring subject.
B．Interest plays an important role in studying.
C．It is not necessary to learn all about physics.
D．It is easy to describe black holes and the Big Bang.
√
解析：推理判断题。根据第四段可知，当作者指出一些学生觉得物理无聊时，Greene说重要的是向孩子们讲述一些稀奇古怪的事以引起他们的兴趣。因此他认为兴趣在学习过程中起着非常重要的作用。
4．In the last paragraph, Greene hopes that .
A．kids can love science and physics
B．kids can do well in physics exams
C．kids can have fun with experiments
D．kids can find more strange things in life
解析：推理判断题。根据最后一段的前两句可知，Greene希望孩子们可以像他一样对科学和物理感兴趣，去探索宇宙的奥秘。
√UNIT 6 课时检测(八) Writing Workshop
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．As far as I am concerned, her generosity will not only help those in need realize their dreams and rebuild faith in life, but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed.
→As far as I am concerned, __________________________ help those in need realize their dreams and rebuild faith in life, but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed.(用倒装句升级句子)
2．The kindness and consideration that she shows to all students make her highly respected by students.
→____________________________________________________________________ make her highly respected by students.(用强调句型升级句子)
3．My mother is a respected and generous woman and she never looks down upon others.
→My mother is a respected and generous woman __________________________________________.(用定语从句升级句子)
4．Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and graduated from college in 1953.At that time, hunger was a disturbing problem for many people.
→Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and graduated from college in 1953 ________________________________________________________________.(用“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句升级句子)
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．________________ (当谈及) the impressive woman in my life, ________________ (我突然间想到) that my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive.As a teacher, she has ________________________________ (一生致力于教学)．She has written many articles, some of which are intended for students poor in English.
2．She is ____________________________ (相貌平平的女孩), but her kindness and consideration ________________ (给我们留下了深刻的印象)．We think that she ________________________ (理应被授予) “Star Student of the Week”．
3．As a player, Lang Ping is successful.During her career life, she ______________________ (获得了许多冠军), including 4 Olympic championships.As a coach, she __________________ (受……欢迎) her players and ________________________ (对……做出了巨大贡献) our country.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
海南中学建校周年庆典迎来了钱学森塑像的揭幕和“钱学森班”的开设，作为校报英语专刊记者，请你写一篇报道向留学生介绍此事。内容包括：
1．钱学森其人(留学美国，回国效力)；
2．钱学森的贡献(航空航天事业)；
3．此活动的意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：揭幕unveil
A Great Gift
Ⅳ.概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The famous classical pianist, Kong Xiangdong, surprised his fans by giving a concert combining classical music with Chinese folk music.Kong explained that he tried this because he wanted to create something new. “As a musician, playing the same music in different cities of the world is very boring，” says Kong.He also feels that playing Chinese folk music on the piano can help bring it to the rest of the world.
Music has always been part of Kong's world.As his mother was a great music lover, he lived with music from birth.But it wasn't always easy for the young Kong Xiangdong.His mother couldn't buy him a piano until he was seven.She had to draw piano keys on a piece of paper so that he could learn to play as early as possible.The 5 year old Kong would practice on the paper piano as his mother clapped the rhythm.He was made to practice the piano so much that, at times, he thought about giving up.However, he didn't quit, and he became a great pianist.In 1986, at the age of 18, he became the youngest prize winner in Moscow's Tchaikovsky International Competition.He went on to win awards in competitions across the world.
Because of Kong's talent and hard work, he became famous worldwide.But after years of performing, he felt that in some ways he had lost his identity.This is why he went back to his roots and rediscovered the beauty in Chinese folk music.He began experimenting with different styles and his Dream Tour Concert is the result.
Kong's new experiment in Chinese folk music is so important to him that he even changed his appearance.When he arrived at his concert last week, he had shaved off all his hair! Since his music style was new, he decided his hairstyle had to be new too!
Whether Kong is changing his appearance or transforming his music, he is a pioneer in music today.The concert last week was such a success that Kong's Dream Tour Concert is expected to run for the next two years in Beijing, Shanghai, and other main cities before going to Paris and New York.
[阅读拓展训练]
Brian Greene, a professor of physics and mathematics at Columbia University, has created an online science education platform.He tries to “build a bridge” with things you know about, and then “bring you across that bridge to the strange place of modern physics”．
Recently I had a chance to ask Greene about wormholes (a hole which some scientists think might exist, connecting parts of space and time that are not usually connected), time travel and other mysteries of the universe.I asked him a million dollar question: What if I went through a wormhole and prevented my parents from meeting？“Most of us believe that the universe makes sense，” Greene said.Although there are several interesting theories about time travel, he added, the laws of physics would probably prevent something so illogical from taking place.The good news is that the time paradox (悖论) is open for future physicists to solve.
When asked how physics could become more exciting for kids, Greene said that books by Stephen Weinberg, Leonard Susskind, and other physicists，“make it a great time for people who want to learn about big ideas but aren't yet ready, perhaps, to learn maths”．
When I pointed out that some students still might find physics boring, Greene said that the key is to teach them about things that are strange.“The basic stuff is important，” Greene said.“But I think it's really important to also describe the more modern ideas, things like black holes and the Big Bang.If kids have those ideas in mind, then at least some of them will be excited to learn all the details.”
Greene has followed Albert Einstein's lead in trying to solve the mysteries of the universe.Now he wants kids to do the same.As Greene said, physics is “not just a matter of solving problems in an exam”．It's about experimenting, showing an interest in strange phenomena — and having fun!
1．A million dollar question is probably very ________.
A．direct B．difficult
C．personal D．long
2．The books by Weinberg and Susskind ________.
A．are boring to read
B．are mainly about maths
C．are popular science books
D．are only popular among kids
3．According to Paragraph 4, which of the following does Greene agree with
A．Modern physics is a boring subject.
B．Interest plays an important role in studying.
C．It is not necessary to learn all about physics.
D．It is easy to describe black holes and the Big Bang.
4．In the last paragraph, Greene hopes that ________.
A．kids can love science and physics
B．kids can do well in physics exams
C．kids can have fun with experiments
D．kids can find more strange things in life
UNIT 6 课时检测(八)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．not only will her generosity
2．It is the kindness and consideration that she shows to all students that
3．who never looks down upon others
4．during which hunger was a disturbing problem for many people
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．When it comes to; it occurs to me；
devoted her whole life to teaching
2．an ordinary looking girl; left a deep impression on us；
deserves to be awarded as
3．obtained many championships; was popular with；
made a great contribution to
Ⅲ.应用文写作
参考范文：
A Great Gift
In memory of the great scientist Qian Xuesen, a statue of him was unveiled and a class named after him was set up in Hainan Middle School during its anniversary celebration.
Qian Xuesen, who was a milestone in China's history of science, came back to work for his motherland after finishing his further study in America. His arrival brought Chinese people hope on the cause of aerospace. As a pioneer in this field, he contributed a lot to the development of rockets and launched the first satellite for the country.
Such a great gift inspires students to learn from his spirit and make contributions to our country.
Ⅳ.概要写作
参考范文：
Kong Xiangdong, a classical pianist performed the classical music combined with Chinese folk music in his concert in order to bring Chinese folk music to the whole world.(要点1) Influenced by his mom, Kong Xiangdong learned to play the piano from an early age but his way to success is not an easy one.Due to his talent and great efforts, he became renowned worldwide by winning many great awards in competitions.(要点2)Years of performing classical music make him lose his own root and identity, so he turned to Chinese folk music.(要点3) Kong Xiangdong is regarded as the pioneer in music for his new experiments with different music styles.(要点4)
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。物理学家Brian Greene希望更多的孩子能对现代物理学感兴趣。
1．选B 推理判断题。根据第二段中Greene对这个问题的解释以及他说需要未来的物理学家去解决可知，作者提出的这个问题非常难。
2．选C 推理判断题。根据第三段中的“ ...make it a great time for people who want to learn about big ideas but aren't yet ready, perhaps, to learn maths.”可知，Greene认为Weinberg和Susskind等物理学家写的书浅显易懂，适合普通大众阅读，故这些书属于科普读物。
3．选B 推理判断题。根据第四段可知，当作者指出一些学生觉得物理无聊时，Greene说重要的是向孩子们讲述一些稀奇古怪的事以引起他们的兴趣。因此他认为兴趣在学习过程中起着非常重要的作用。
4．选A 推理判断题。根据最后一段的前两句可知，Greene希望孩子们可以像他一样对科学和物理感兴趣，去探索宇宙的奥秘。
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