【学习目标】
1.长难句分析
2.掌握议论文写作
3.六选四技巧点拨
【课前热身】
association armed assemble attached avenue awfully assessed arise alter arouse attempt
1. Damages of the destructive earthquake which occurred in that county were at 10.000.000 dollars.
2. The police rushed to the scene and arrested the robber before he had time to resist.
3. The owners of the coal mines had formed an to protect their own interests.
4. Nothing can the fact that we were defeated by the weak team due to our lack of cooperation.
5. The prisoner made an to escape from the jail on the remote island but failed.
6. After graduation, he began to work in a hospital to a famous university.
7. His marriage to the daughter of the boss led him to an to a fame and wealth.
8. That teacher was popular with the class as she could successfully the students’ interest in learning.
9. It is kind of you to help the aged in your community on weekends.
10. If the fire alarm goes, all the staff should in the square outside the building.
【知识梳理 1】
A.每日长难句理解
If you are part of the group which you are addressing, you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems which are common to all of you and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties.
※句子分析※
基本句型:SVP(主系表) and 形式主语从句句子主干: you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark.
条件状语从句 If you are part of the group
句子脑图:
┇
定语从句 which you are addressing
┇
you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark
┇
定语从句 which are common to all of you
┇
并列短语 about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties
【注释】
本句是复杂句，其主干是一个由 and 连接的并列结构 you will be in a position and it"l be appropriate。由 if引导的从句作假设的条件状语，其中which 引导定语从句修饰 the group;并列句前半部分中 which 引导定语从句修饰先行词 experiences and problems;并列句的后半部分中;it是形式主语，逻辑主语是 to make a passing remark about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties.
【参考翻译】
如果你是听众中的一员，就能设身处地地了解你们大家所共有的经历或问题，你就可以随意的对食堂难以下咽的饭菜或是众所周知的总裁在选择领带方面的差劲品味进行评头论足了。
B.每日核心词
序号 核心词 词义
1. 致力于
2. 预约
3. 称赞
C.选词填空
Exercise
attended articles appointment applaud assumed awkward appreciate approach artificial appropriate atmosphere
1.He is respected by all his colleagues as he always keeps his .
2.In cross-cultural communication, we should learn to talk in an manner.
3.You can't fully it if you only read foreign literature in translation.
4.The scientists determined to apply rain to ensure the proper growth of the crops.
5.I firmly hold the belief that cheap are usually poor in quality.
6.The injured mechanic was so carefully that he soon recovered his health.
7.The academic of that university left a deep impression on all the visitors.
8.He is such a shy boy that he always feels in the presence of the girls.
9.The visitors needn't worry when in trouble as hundreds of the volunteers are for help at the Expo site.
10.Don't lose heart. I suggest you try another to solving this problem.
【知识梳理2】
话题类议论文写作1
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在充斥着各种电子产品的信息时代，有些人很看好科技公司的发展而有些却不。你认为科技公司成功的关键是什么 请谈谈你的看法并举例说明。
话题类议论文写作2
随着互联网及社交网络的发展，关于明星私生活的报道司空见惯。请写一篇文章表达你对这一问题的看
法，你的文章必须包括:
1.你是否赞同在网络上曝光明星的私生活;
2.用理由或具体的事例来支持你的观点。
话题类议论文写作3
某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为;“梦想点亮人生 Dream Lightens Life”。请你用英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投稿。要点如下:
(1)你的梦想是什么
(2) 阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生，是你的生活变得不同;
(3) 你认为实现梦想需要什么。
【例文欣赏】
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese近几年来,随着媒体对几起问题食品的曝光,人们日益关注着食品的安全问题。请以“My View on Food Security为题，谈谈你对食品安全的看法，分析其产生的原因，并谈谈解决这些问题的方法。
My View on Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore.
There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.
As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the future
观点议论型
写作思路：
第一段:根据谚语，总结观点
第二段:2-3个分论点论证自己的观点
第三段:总结全文，憧憬实践
【例文赏析】
俗语说:欲速则不达(The more haste,the less speed.)。请你结合生活实例，谈谈你对这句话的感悟。你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1.一个有关这句话的生活实例
2.你对这句话的理解感悟
审题分析:
一、本题是一篇谚语格言类作文，属于夹叙夹议类作文。根据题目要求，文章必须包括一个相关实例和对此俗语的理解感悟。这个“实例”可以是作者自己的经历，也可以使其他说明这条俗语的事例:理解感悟需要点名对此俗语理解的角度中心，并围绕此中心展开议论。
二、对谚语格言类文章来说，所举例子要说明问题，对例子的描述要精炼到位;二理解感悟部分的语言则要讲透此俗语所要表达的人生道理。
范文点评:
There is a well-known saying which goes that “ The more haste ,the less speed .”[ Evidently, this hold true for a lot of situations in life in which anxiety and thoughtlessness may disrupt a supposedly good prospect.]
[For example,when you take an English test which requires you to complete questions based on an article,it would be advisable for you to read slowly and carefully until you grasp a clear picture of the author's main ideas and implications, ready to answer the questions. On the contrary, if you worry about time running out and thus push yourself to read faster than you can handle, chances are that you might go back and re-read for important information.]
[This saying, which has been handed down from generation to generation, sharply points out how crucial it is to approach life situations calmly.] A level and balanced mindset helps one to maximize one's performance even against the most urgent and difficult circumstances. [Anxiety drives people to irrationality.][Metaphorically speaking, if you rush, you might just crash, and ultimately end up slower than ready walkers, simply because they have better judgment of their capacities than you do.]
Therefore, it is important to avoid haste in life. Eventually, you will save time by not stumbling and falling all the way.
好词好句:
1. Evidently, this hold true for a lot of situations in life in which anxiety and thoughtlessness may disrupt a supposedly good prospect.
evidently 的意思是“很明显“，替代词常用的 obviously,hold true 的意思是“适用、有效“。
2. On the contrary, if you worry about time running out and thus push yourself to read faster than you can handle,chances are that you might go back and re-read for important information.
chances are that 的意思为:很可能，替代常用的 it is likely that..
3. This saying, which has been handed down from generation to generation, sharply points out how crucial it is to approach life situations calmly.
sharply 意为“尖锐地“为语言增加情感色彩，增强说服力度;approach life situations calmly 的意义为:冷静处理生活中的情况，approach 的意义为:处理，代替常用的 deal with.
4. Metaphorically speaking, if you rush, you might just crash, and ultimately end up slower than ready walkers,simply because they have better judgment of their capacities than you do.
Metaphorically speaking 意为:比喻来说，用于引出下面的比喻;ultimately end up 的意义为:最终结局是....; ultimately 的意义为:最终的，代替常用的 finally.
【知识梳理3】
六选四题型简介
上海高考英语阅读句子还原六选四议论文，旨在考査学生对议论性文本的语篇连贯性与逻辑性的把握。此类文章围绕特定观点展开论述，作者运用论据、推理来支持或反驳论点，话题涉猎教育改革、社会现象剖析、道德伦理探讨等领域，行文依靠论点、论据与论证的紧密配合，语言富有逻辑性，结构层次分明，而题型要求学生从六个备选句子里挑出四个恰当的，嵌入文中空缺处，使文章语义通顺、论证连贯。
六选四做题步骤与方法
首先，先读选项
1 圈出每个选项中的代词、名词、副词；
2 注意对比相近选项的表达的区别；
3 猜测选项可能出现的位置。
其次，通读一遍文章，
1 明确语篇题材与主旨内容
2 把可以填进去的选项，写上去，一般可以写出2个；
3 注意与选项的同义复现/反义复现
再者，回读没有填出来的部分
1 如果设空在段首，前一段与下一段的内容要理解清楚，注意逻辑关系
2 如果设空在段中，一是要明确本段的内容，二是要明确上下句表达的语义，注意关键词（名 代 形 副）。
3 如果设空在段尾，重点看和前一句的关系，同时也要注意和下一段的关系。
最后，再通读一遍文章
确认语篇内容、结构的逻辑合理性。
【例题】
A. Gratitude can also make us feel good physically. B. Therefore, it's easy to tell that gratitude is advantageous to us. C. It is the feeling of being grateful and wanting to express our thanks. D. It can help promote stronger relationships with family, friends or even colleagues. E. One reason for this, is that gratitude stops us from reflecting on negative emotions. F. It is a deeper appreciation for someone or something that makes us feel a positive emotion.
Why gratitude is good for you
Gratitude is more than just saying “thank you” to someone who has helped us or given us a gift. 1 And this positive emotion can be good for our health - our emotional and physical health,as well as the health of our relationships.
Let's start by looking at the emotional or mental health benefits of expressing gratitude. There have been many studies, as described in a 2018 paper from the Greater Good Science Center titled“The Science of Gratitude", showing that writing a gratitude letter to another person or writing in a gratitude journal, if done regularly, improves mental health. 2 But even if we don't share our writing with anyone, like in a journal, the act of completing the exercise alone makes us happier and more satisfied with life. And this gets better with time. As we are essentially training our brain to be more in tune with noticing the positive, after several weeks or months, this becomes more intuitive.And so, the more we express gratitude, the more positive we feel.
3 There are studies linking a gratitude practice to better sleep quality, better eating habits, and reduced infection in people who have had heart problems. So gratitude is clearly good for us.but is it also good for the people in our lives
The simple answer is “'yes”. When shared- spoken or written - gratitude is about feeling valued and helping others feel valued too. 4 And that's on top of all the other ways gratitude is clearly good for us. Maybe we should all stop counting sheep or counting calories and start counting our blessings instead
【课后作业】
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.
1.我从他拒绝见我推断，他还没有做出决定。(infer)(汉译英)
2.诺贝尔奖委员会赞扬她的作品直面了历史的创伤和人性的脆弱。(confront)(汉译英)
3.从这首古诗我们可以了解到，尽管诗人身处逆境，却始终保持积极乐观的人生态度。(glimpse n.)(汉译英)
4.人工智能可以通过学习大量的文学作品和语言规则来创作小说、诗歌等作品，但学不会真情实感，也没有创作灵魂，所以绝不能与人类作家相提并论。(in no case)(汉译英)
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.如你是明启中学的李华，学校计划下月举办十八岁成人礼(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，因此组织同学们排练集体节目在成人礼上表演。但是有同学反映，高三课业紧张，无法抽出时间排练。现校方委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你给学生会写封邮件。要求:
1.你认为成人礼活动安排中存在的问题;
2.提出改进的建议和理由。
阅读理解
A
Australia and the rest of Oceania are the last regions free of bird flu that has caused mass mortality in birds across the world and a massive outbreak in dairy cattle in the United States. Why animals in the southern region have so far escaped infection is a mystery, but scientists have several theories.
For one, Australia is geographically isolated and doesn't import live poultry, says Frank Wong, a virologist at the Australian Centre for Disease Preparedness. Many of the countries’ birds are endemic (地方性的)and do not migrate to regions where the virus is spreading.
But the virus's arrival in Australia is “a matter of when, not if’, says Michelle Wille at the University of Melboume, Australia. She thinks that long-distance migratory shorebirds and seabirds that come from Siberia and Alaska through southeast Asia to Australia are most likely to carry the virus into the country.
Another possible route for the virus is through ducks. Scientists think migrating ducks and geese in other parts of the world can spread the disease without dying from it. That's because ducks have a biological sensor, known as RIG-l, that detects an invading flu virus and triggers an immune response that usually fights it oft. Kirsty Short says ducks might have evolved such defences in Asia from repeated infections with many weaker forms of the virus,giving them pre-existing immunity. Although they don't get sick from HN1, they can still pass it on, and ducks gather in lakes and ponds with other birds, increasing the chances of disease spread.
Oceania has isolated ecosystems. This isolation is partly explained by a biogeographical division called the Wallace Line. Many animal species tend to stay on one side of the line or the other, and because of this isolation, the species on each side are distinct.
The sharp division might also mean that the virus is not adapted to animals east of the Wallace Line, says Wong."Bird flu viruses are particularly well-adapted to certain species," he says. Birds in Australia could have a genetic make-up that bypasses the usual infection route for the virus, but no one has yet tested this assumption.
Although many duck species are short-distance migratory birds and tend not to cross the Wallace Line, some species.including Pacific black duck and spotted whistling duck-do, and Wille thinks they could introduce H5N1 to the region.
If the virus is detected, government vets will immediately move in to kill the affected population, which happened when H7N3 and H7N9 strains of the flu were detected in Victoria in May.
Short says that, when it happens, the impact on Australia's birds, mammals and ecosystems is unknown, but many species could probably be affected. “It's a big research gap.” she says.
1.Which viewpoint does Michelle Wille most agree with
A. The virus is unlikely to spread to Australia soon.
B. It is ducks that will bring the virus into Australia.
C.Migration patterns will keep Australia safe from infection.
D. The arrival of the virus in Australia is highly possible.
2. What is suggested about birds in Australia regarding the virus
A. They have been tested and found resistant.
B. They migrate to areas where the virus spreads.
C.They may have genetic traits that prevent infection.
D. They are more susceptible to infection than other birds.
3.Which of the following statements is correct according to the passage
A. There is a lack of research on the virus impact.
B.Government measures will prevent outbreaks in Australia.
C.Birds in Australia have become immune due to past exposure.
D. The Wallace Line guarantees that the virus will not reach Australia.
4. What could be the best title of the passage
A. The Spread of Bird Flu in Australia
B.Is Australia Immune from Bird Flu
C. Why Are Ducks Responsible for Bird Flu
D. Bird Flu: A Global Concern
B
Directions: Read the following passage. Fill in each blank with a proper sentence given in the box. Each sentence can be used only once. Note that there are two more sentences than you need.
Peruvian agriculture: Blue gold
Peru's blueberry harvest is just beginning, and Ivan Jauregui, an agronomist, looks excited. Staff in a newly built packing-plant load the best berries into refrigerated shipping containers, then pack them off to the port of Callao. Mr Jauregui says he once squeezed 35 tonnes of blueberries from a single hectare of land; he is always hoping to beat this record.“Every year we have to grow and improve,” he says.
1 Farmers noticed that their counterparts in Chile were making a lot of money selling the fruit during the off-season in the United States, when prices are high. They sought to do the same and things have worked out better than anyone dared hope. Back in 2013 Peruvians earned about $17m exporting blueberries: by last year receipts had soared to $1.7bn.
2 Historically the fruit has grown well only in places with chilly winters. Peru's blue revolution relies on innovative “low chill” varieties, developed in the United States, which thrive on Peru's coast. The International Blueberry Organisation, an industry group, says that in 2022 the yield of a typical Peruvian blueberry farm was nearly double the global average.
Blueberry farmers have also gained from trends that have boosted all manner of Peruvian produce. 3 Between 2000 and 2023, total annual Peruvian farm exports grew 16-fold to $10.5bn. “it's mind-bending,” said Rafael Zacnich of Comex, Peru's international trade association.
Yet in future growers will also have to avoid a handful of risks. 4 It was not the only country to suffer, but the sticky experience has accelerated efforts to identify and spread varieties that might cope better with climate change. And farmers in lots of other places fancy a slice of Peru's blueberry pie, notes Mr Jauregui. “Colombia, Morocco: everyone is growing blueberries now.”
A. Peru caught blueberry fever a little over a decade ago.
B. It takes other places four years to start turning a profit
C.Last year extreme weather stole a big chunk of Peru's production.
D. The country owes much of its success to novel kinds of blueberry bush
E. These include tax breaks and irrigation megaprojects that have opened up land along Peru's desert coastline.
F. Yet blueberries remain by far the most profitable crop.【学习目标】
1.长难句分析
2.掌握议论文写作
3.六选四技巧点拨
【课前热身】
association armed assemble attached avenue awfully assessed arise alter arouse attempt
1. Damages of the destructive earthquake which occurred in that county were at 10.000.000 dollars.
2. The police rushed to the scene and arrested the robber before he had time to resist.
3. The owners of the coal mines had formed an to protect their own interests.
4. Nothing can the fact that we were defeated by the weak team due to our lack of cooperation.
5. The prisoner made an to escape from the jail on the remote island but failed.
6. After graduation, he began to work in a hospital to a famous university.
7. His marriage to the daughter of the boss led him to an to a fame and wealth.
8. That teacher was popular with the class as she could successfully the students’ interest in learning.
9. It is kind of you to help the aged in your community on weekends.
10. If the fire alarm goes, all the staff should in the square outside the building.
【答案】1.assessed 2. armed 3.association 4. alter 5.attempt
6.attached 7.avenue 8.arouse 9.awfully 10.assemble
【知识梳理 1】
A.每日长难句理解
If you are part of the group which you are addressing, you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems which are common to all of you and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties.
※句子分析※
基本句型:SVP(主系表) and 形式主语从句句子主干: you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark.
条件状语从句 If you are part of the group
句子脑图:
┇
定语从句 which you are addressing
┇
you will be in a position to know the experiences and problems and it'll be appropriate for you to make a passing remark
┇
定语从句 which are common to all of you
┇
并列短语 about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties
【注释】
本句是复杂句，其主干是一个由 and 连接的并列结构 you will be in a position and it"l be appropriate。由 if引导的从句作假设的条件状语，其中which 引导定语从句修饰 the group;并列句前半部分中 which 引导定语从句修饰先行词 experiences and problems;并列句的后半部分中;it是形式主语，逻辑主语是 to make a passing remark about the inedible canteen food or the chairman's notorious bad taste in ties.
【参考翻译】
如果你是听众中的一员，就能设身处地地了解你们大家所共有的经历或问题，你就可以随意的对食堂难以下咽的饭菜或是众所周知的总裁在选择领带方面的差劲品味进行评头论足了。
B.每日核心词
序号 核心词 词义
1. attend to 致力于
2. make an appointment 预约
3. applaud for 称赞
C.选词填空
Exercise
attended articles appointment applaud assumed awkward appreciate approach artificial appropriate atmosphere
1.He is respected by all his colleagues as he always keeps his .
2.In cross-cultural communication, we should learn to talk in an manner.
3.You can't fully it if you only read foreign literature in translation.
4.The scientists determined to apply rain to ensure the proper growth of the crops.
5.I firmly hold the belief that cheap are usually poor in quality.
6.The injured mechanic was so carefully that he soon recovered his health.
7.The academic of that university left a deep impression on all the visitors.
8.He is such a shy boy that he always feels in the presence of the girls.
9.The visitors needn't worry when in trouble as hundreds of the volunteers are for help at the Expo site.
10.Don't lose heart. I suggest you try another to solving this problem.
【答案】1.appointment 2.appropriate 3.appreciate 4. artificial 5. articles
6.attended 7.atmosphere 8. awkward 9. assumed 10. approach
【知识梳理2】
话题类议论文写作1
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
在充斥着各种电子产品的信息时代，有些人很看好科技公司的发展而有些却不。你认为科技公司成功的关键是什么 请谈谈你的看法并举例说明。
【范文】
At the dawn of information age, the rising of electronic appliances has given many tech companies an edge in the global market. However, the tide doesn't necessarily raise all boats. Those companies who cannot cater to the majority's needs will be easily knocked out. As far as I'm concerned, two key qualities matter a lot.
First and foremost, innovation is undeniably of prime significance to the success of a tech company. Apparently,innovative skills exclusive to a company may determine its irreplaceable position in the field. It is also a combination of keeping pace with the times and constantly challenging itself, which helps to grab and retain target customers’ attention.
Apart from innovation, it can be the culture that cultivates its customers’ as well as employees’ loyalty. For instance, Huawei boasts its customer-oriented attitudes and diligence in transforming itself from a local business to a global brand. It's no exaggeration to say that only if a tech company occupies a decent culture can it foster its employees’ sense of belonging, sense of responsibility and sense of honor, thus the ultimate improved customer experience.
In the final analysis, a tech company's success may not depend on its products so much as its innovation and distinctive company culture. Therefore, it's high time that companies should at least remember that once involve done is sure to evolve.
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【赏析】
结构:典型的“三段式”。第一段介绍时代背景和趋势，引出作文的话题，进而表达观点。 第二段和第三段分别围绕观点表达分论点并围绕其阐述理由。最后一段为总结段，总结了第一段的观点和中间两段的分论点，并提出呼吁。
内容:均符合题目要求，且论述合理。
语言:过渡衔接自然。
词语:衔接词“ ”标出;
高频词:
1. cater v. 迎合 5. exclusive a. 独有的,专有的
2. undeniably adv.不可否认地 6. irreplaceable a.不可替代的
3. apparently adv.显然,明显地 7. ultimate a. 最终的,最后的
4. grab v. 抓住 8. distinctive a. 具有特色的
词组或短语:
1. at the dawn of 在...的开始
2. give ... an edge 给..优势
3.be knocked out 被挤出局
4.be of prime significance 最重要的
5.not ... so much as ... 与其说…不如说…
6. keep pace with the times 与时俱进
7.sense of honor 荣誉感
句型:
1.the tide doesn't necessarily raise all boats. ...并不是对所有...都带来好处。
2.It's no exaggeration to say ... 毫不夸张地说，….
3.Those companies who... can easily be... who引导定语从句
4.It can be... that ... 强调句
5.It's high time that ... 是做某事的紧要时候了。
6.Once involved, one is sure to evolve. 一旦加入，一个人(一家公司)一定要成长。
7.only if... can ... only 的部分倒装句
话题类议论文写作2
随着互联网及社交网络的发展，关于明星私生活的报道司空见惯。请写一篇文章表达你对这一问题的看
法，你的文章必须包括:
1.你是否赞同在网络上曝光明星的私生活;
2.用理由或具体的事例来支持你的观点。
The 2lst century has witnessed more remarkable advances in technology and social network than any time before. This, undoubtedly, gives rise to the overwhelming reports on stars’ private life for the mere purpose of seeking laughingstock for our common life. From my point of view, it's not desirable to bring stars’ private life to spotlight with the following reasons.
First and foremost, exposure of others’ privacy goes against what we assume everyone enjoys. Public figures as they are, stars still possess the fundamental right of privacy to keep their potentially inglorious side internalized.Additionally, negative and ill-intentioned reports will take an enormous toll on both their family and career. Once unfavorable comments initiate, needless to say, the disaster caused by Internet will follow in its wake. As a result, all their previous efforts may be wasted overnight and all their hopes will come to nothing.
From what is demonstrated above, we cannot attach too much importance to allowing room for stars' privacy.On no account should we base our delight on others’ reluctance. Keep in mind that it's not what others do and say but your own behavior that really matters.
话题类议论文写作3
某英语杂志社正在举行征稿活动，主题为;“梦想点亮人生 Dream Lightens Life”。请你用英语写一篇小短文，向该杂志社投稿。要点如下:
(1)你的梦想是什么
(2) 阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生，是你的生活变得不同;
(3) 你认为实现梦想需要什么。
Dream Lightens Life
Spotted with ups and downs and twists and turns, our life is therefore twinkling with beams of light. Then what is the reason It is dreams that may partly account for it. What light is to a dark night, dream is to our supposedly plain life. As for me, my dream is nothing but to be happy, happy enough to assure myself that every day spent is rewarding and instructive.
I benefit a lot from my dream. Every time I challenge myself to complete a seemingly impossible task and manage to work it out, I will feel uplifted from the bottom of my heart. As a result, I hardly bear the assumption that there is anything I can never deal with, painstaking though it is. Additionally, dream can favorably better my attitudes toward life. For example, sometimes when I am in low spirits, my dream will pop into my mind to convince not to waste time complaining about what has happened but to fully utilize remaining time to adjust myself to what will happen.
However, on the way of fulfilling my dream, there are sure to be some obstacles. The key factors to get rid of them, personally, are perseverance, flexible ability to regulate the mindset and the sharp observation to look for beauty. In the first place, perseverance is the fuel for your procession. Only by persisting in your dream and keeping on striving for it can you render it become a habit and a daily routine to you. Then the capacity of adjustment is also an indispensable part, which will constantly ensure you the sweetness of escaping from sorrow and balancing your state. Being ready to find beauty, above all, is an addition of pleasure in the event of boredom or trouble. Different as our dream are. chances are that everyone has a burning desire to make it come true. Therefore. everyone should spare no pains, no trouble and no expense to scale his or her new heights and step into a brand new prospect.
【例文欣赏】
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese近几年来,随着媒体对几起问题食品的曝光,人们日益关注着食品的安全问题。请以“My View on Food Security为题，谈谈你对食品安全的看法，分析其产生的原因，并谈谈解决这些问题的方法。
My View on Food Security
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore.
There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.
As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the future
观点议论型
写作思路：
第一段:根据谚语，总结观点
第二段:2-3个分论点论证自己的观点
第三段:总结全文，憧憬实践
【例文赏析】
俗语说:欲速则不达(The more haste,the less speed.)。请你结合生活实例，谈谈你对这句话的感悟。你的文章必须包括以下内容:
1.一个有关这句话的生活实例
2.你对这句话的理解感悟
审题分析:
一、本题是一篇谚语格言类作文，属于夹叙夹议类作文。根据题目要求，文章必须包括一个相关实例和对此俗语的理解感悟。这个“实例”可以是作者自己的经历，也可以使其他说明这条俗语的事例:理解感悟需要点名对此俗语理解的角度中心，并围绕此中心展开议论。
二、对谚语格言类文章来说，所举例子要说明问题，对例子的描述要精炼到位;二理解感悟部分的语言则要讲透此俗语所要表达的人生道理。
范文点评:
There is a well-known saying which goes that “ The more haste ,the less speed .”[ Evidently, this hold true for a lot of situations in life in which anxiety and thoughtlessness may disrupt a supposedly good prospect.]
[For example,when you take an English test which requires you to complete questions based on an article,it would be advisable for you to read slowly and carefully until you grasp a clear picture of the author's main ideas and implications, ready to answer the questions. On the contrary, if you worry about time running out and thus push yourself to read faster than you can handle, chances are that you might go back and re-read for important information.]
[This saying, which has been handed down from generation to generation, sharply points out how crucial it is to approach life situations calmly.] A level and balanced mindset helps one to maximize one's performance even against the most urgent and difficult circumstances. [Anxiety drives people to irrationality.][Metaphorically speaking, if you rush, you might just crash, and ultimately end up slower than ready walkers, simply because they have better judgment of their capacities than you do.]
Therefore, it is important to avoid haste in life. Eventually, you will save time by not stumbling and falling all the way.
好词好句:
1. Evidently, this hold true for a lot of situations in life in which anxiety and thoughtlessness may disrupt a supposedly good prospect.
evidently 的意思是“很明显“，替代词常用的 obviously,hold true 的意思是“适用、有效“。
2. On the contrary, if you worry about time running out and thus push yourself to read faster than you can handle,chances are that you might go back and re-read for important information.
chances are that 的意思为:很可能，替代常用的 it is likely that..
3. This saying, which has been handed down from generation to generation, sharply points out how crucial it is to approach life situations calmly.
sharply 意为“尖锐地“为语言增加情感色彩，增强说服力度;approach life situations calmly 的意义为:冷静处理生活中的情况，approach 的意义为:处理，代替常用的 deal with.
4. Metaphorically speaking, if you rush, you might just crash, and ultimately end up slower than ready walkers,simply because they have better judgment of their capacities than you do.
Metaphorically speaking 意为:比喻来说，用于引出下面的比喻;ultimately end up 的意义为:最终结局是....; ultimately 的意义为:最终的，代替常用的 finally.
【知识梳理3】
六选四题型简介
上海高考英语阅读句子还原六选四议论文，旨在考査学生对议论性文本的语篇连贯性与逻辑性的把握。此类文章围绕特定观点展开论述，作者运用论据、推理来支持或反驳论点，话题涉猎教育改革、社会现象剖析、道德伦理探讨等领域，行文依靠论点、论据与论证的紧密配合，语言富有逻辑性，结构层次分明，而题型要求学生从六个备选句子里挑出四个恰当的，嵌入文中空缺处，使文章语义通顺、论证连贯。
六选四做题步骤与方法
首先，先读选项
1 圈出每个选项中的代词、名词、副词；
2 注意对比相近选项的表达的区别；
3 猜测选项可能出现的位置。
其次，通读一遍文章，
1 明确语篇题材与主旨内容
2 把可以填进去的选项，写上去，一般可以写出2个；
3 注意与选项的同义复现/反义复现
再者，回读没有填出来的部分
1 如果设空在段首，前一段与下一段的内容要理解清楚，注意逻辑关系
2 如果设空在段中，一是要明确本段的内容，二是要明确上下句表达的语义，注意关键词（名 代 形 副）。
3 如果设空在段尾，重点看和前一句的关系，同时也要注意和下一段的关系。
最后，再通读一遍文章
确认语篇内容、结构的逻辑合理性。
【例题】
A. Gratitude can also make us feel good physically. B. Therefore, it's easy to tell that gratitude is advantageous to us. C. It is the feeling of being grateful and wanting to express our thanks. D. It can help promote stronger relationships with family, friends or even colleagues. E. One reason for this, is that gratitude stops us from reflecting on negative emotions. F. It is a deeper appreciation for someone or something that makes us feel a positive emotion.
Why gratitude is good for you
Gratitude is more than just saying “thank you” to someone who has helped us or given us a gift. 1 And this positive emotion can be good for our health - our emotional and physical health,as well as the health of our relationships.
Let's start by looking at the emotional or mental health benefits of expressing gratitude. There have been many studies, as described in a 2018 paper from the Greater Good Science Center titled“The Science of Gratitude", showing that writing a gratitude letter to another person or writing in a gratitude journal, if done regularly, improves mental health. 2 But even if we don't share our writing with anyone, like in a journal, the act of completing the exercise alone makes us happier and more satisfied with life. And this gets better with time. As we are essentially training our brain to be more in tune with noticing the positive, after several weeks or months, this becomes more intuitive.And so, the more we express gratitude, the more positive we feel.
3 There are studies linking a gratitude practice to better sleep quality, better eating habits, and reduced infection in people who have had heart problems. So gratitude is clearly good for us.but is it also good for the people in our lives
The simple answer is “'yes”. When shared- spoken or written - gratitude is about feeling valued and helping others feel valued too. 4 And that's on top of all the other ways gratitude is clearly good for us. Maybe we should all stop counting sheep or counting calories and start counting our blessings instead
【答案】1.F 2.E 3.A 4.D
【课后作业】
Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.
1.我从他拒绝见我推断，他还没有做出决定。(infer)(汉译英)
【答案】I infer from his refusal to see me that he hasn't made a decision yet.
2.诺贝尔奖委员会赞扬她的作品直面了历史的创伤和人性的脆弱。(confront)(汉译英)
【答案】The Nobel Prize Committee praised her work for confronting the traumas of history and the fragility of human nature.
3.从这首古诗我们可以了解到，尽管诗人身处逆境，却始终保持积极乐观的人生态度。(glimpse n.)(汉译英)
【答案】
From this poem, we can get a glimpse that the poet, despite being in adversity, always maintains a positive and optimistic attitude to/towards life.
4.人工智能可以通过学习大量的文学作品和语言规则来创作小说、诗歌等作品，但学不会真情实感，也没有创作灵魂，所以绝不能与人类作家相提并论。(in no case)(汉译英)
【答案】Artificial intelligence can create works such as novels and poems by learning a large number of literary works and language rules, but it cannot learn true feelings and has no creative soul, so in no case can it be compared with human writers.
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.如你是明启中学的李华，学校计划下月举办十八岁成人礼(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，因此组织同学们排练集体节目在成人礼上表演。但是有同学反映，高三课业紧张，无法抽出时间排练。现校方委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你给学生会写封邮件。要求:
1.你认为成人礼活动安排中存在的问题;
2.提出改进的建议和理由。
【例文】
Dear Students’ union,
Our school is planning to hold the Coming-of-age Ceremony next month.It is to celebrate students’ gradual growth into independence,autonomy and maturity.
However,there may be some issues with Coming-of-age Ceremony.Some students may think that due to the intense academic workload in their senior year of high school,they are unable to spare time for rehearsals.And the way of of celebration is too formal and lacks genuine emotions and interaction.Why not provide some genuine emotions and interactions during the celebration,such as inviting parents to participate and share their children’s growth stories and learning experiences During the celebration,we may add celebratory activities such as gratitude,blessing and sharing.It is a time for them to embrace each other and provides a chance to express themselves.
The Coming-of-age ceremony is an important moment to celebrate our growth.I hope that the ceremony will play a real role in reflection,celebration,and looking forward to the future with optimism,and that this moment will be truly meaningful and help participants become better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写封邮件，就成人礼活动安排中存在的问题提出改进的建议，并陈述理由。
【词汇积累】
因为：due to→because of
参加：participate →attend
拥抱：embrace →hug
提供：provide→offer
【句式拓展】
简单句变复合句
原句：During the celebration,we may add celebratory activities such as gratitude,blessing and sharing.
拓展句：While we are celebrating,we may add celebratory activities such as gratitude,blessing and sharing.
【高分句型1】
It is to celebrate students’ gradual growth into independence,autonomy and maturity.（使用了不定式充当表语）
【高分句型2】I hope that the ceremony will play a real role in reflection,celebration,and looking forward to the future with optimism,and that this moment will be truly meaningful and help participants become better.（使用了that引导的宾语从句）
阅读理解
A
Australia and the rest of Oceania are the last regions free of bird flu that has caused mass mortality in birds across the world and a massive outbreak in dairy cattle in the United States. Why animals in the southern region have so far escaped infection is a mystery, but scientists have several theories.
For one, Australia is geographically isolated and doesn't import live poultry, says Frank Wong, a virologist at the Australian Centre for Disease Preparedness. Many of the countries’ birds are endemic (地方性的)and do not migrate to regions where the virus is spreading.
But the virus's arrival in Australia is “a matter of when, not if’, says Michelle Wille at the University of Melboume, Australia. She thinks that long-distance migratory shorebirds and seabirds that come from Siberia and Alaska through southeast Asia to Australia are most likely to carry the virus into the country.
Another possible route for the virus is through ducks. Scientists think migrating ducks and geese in other parts of the world can spread the disease without dying from it. That's because ducks have a biological sensor, known as RIG-l, that detects an invading flu virus and triggers an immune response that usually fights it oft. Kirsty Short says ducks might have evolved such defences in Asia from repeated infections with many weaker forms of the virus,giving them pre-existing immunity. Although they don't get sick from HN1, they can still pass it on, and ducks gather in lakes and ponds with other birds, increasing the chances of disease spread.
Oceania has isolated ecosystems. This isolation is partly explained by a biogeographical division called the Wallace Line. Many animal species tend to stay on one side of the line or the other, and because of this isolation, the species on each side are distinct.
The sharp division might also mean that the virus is not adapted to animals east of the Wallace Line, says Wong."Bird flu viruses are particularly well-adapted to certain species," he says. Birds in Australia could have a genetic make-up that bypasses the usual infection route for the virus, but no one has yet tested this assumption.
Although many duck species are short-distance migratory birds and tend not to cross the Wallace Line, some species.including Pacific black duck and spotted whistling duck-do, and Wille thinks they could introduce H5N1 to the region.
If the virus is detected, government vets will immediately move in to kill the affected population, which happened when H7N3 and H7N9 strains of the flu were detected in Victoria in May.
Short says that, when it happens, the impact on Australia's birds, mammals and ecosystems is unknown, but many species could probably be affected. “It's a big research gap.” she says.
1.Which viewpoint does Michelle Wille most agree with
A. The virus is unlikely to spread to Australia soon.
B. It is ducks that will bring the virus into Australia.
C.Migration patterns will keep Australia safe from infection.
D. The arrival of the virus in Australia is highly possible.
2. What is suggested about birds in Australia regarding the virus
A. They have been tested and found resistant.
B. They migrate to areas where the virus spreads.
C.They may have genetic traits that prevent infection.
D. They are more susceptible to infection than other birds.
3.Which of the following statements is correct according to the passage
A. There is a lack of research on the virus impact.
B.Government measures will prevent outbreaks in Australia.
C.Birds in Australia have become immune due to past exposure.
D. The Wallace Line guarantees that the virus will not reach Australia.
4. What could be the best title of the passage
A. The Spread of Bird Flu in Australia
B.Is Australia Immune from Bird Flu
C. Why Are Ducks Responsible for Bird Flu
D. Bird Flu: A Global Concern
【答案】1.D 2.C 3.A 4.B
B
Directions: Read the following passage. Fill in each blank with a proper sentence given in the box. Each sentence can be used only once. Note that there are two more sentences than you need.
Peruvian agriculture: Blue gold
Peru's blueberry harvest is just beginning, and Ivan Jauregui, an agronomist, looks excited. Staff in a newly built packing-plant load the best berries into refrigerated shipping containers, then pack them off to the port of Callao. Mr Jauregui says he once squeezed 35 tonnes of blueberries from a single hectare of land; he is always hoping to beat this record.“Every year we have to grow and improve,” he says.
1 Farmers noticed that their counterparts in Chile were making a lot of money selling the fruit during the off-season in the United States, when prices are high. They sought to do the same and things have worked out better than anyone dared hope. Back in 2013 Peruvians earned about $17m exporting blueberries: by last year receipts had soared to $1.7bn.
2 Historically the fruit has grown well only in places with chilly winters. Peru's blue revolution relies on innovative “low chill” varieties, developed in the United States, which thrive on Peru's coast. The International Blueberry Organisation, an industry group, says that in 2022 the yield of a typical Peruvian blueberry farm was nearly double the global average.
Blueberry farmers have also gained from trends that have boosted all manner of Peruvian produce. 3 Between 2000 and 2023, total annual Peruvian farm exports grew 16-fold to $10.5bn. “it's mind-bending,” said Rafael Zacnich of Comex, Peru's international trade association.
Yet in future growers will also have to avoid a handful of risks. 4 It was not the only country to suffer, but the sticky experience has accelerated efforts to identify and spread varieties that might cope better with climate change. And farmers in lots of other places fancy a slice of Peru's blueberry pie, notes Mr Jauregui. “Colombia, Morocco: everyone is growing blueberries now.”
A. Peru caught blueberry fever a little over a decade ago.
B. It takes other places four years to start turning a profit
C.Last year extreme weather stole a big chunk of Peru's production.
D. The country owes much of its success to novel kinds of blueberry bush
E. These include tax breaks and irrigation megaprojects that have opened up land along Peru's desert coastline.
F. Yet blueberries remain by far the most profitable crop.
【答案】1.A 2.D 3.E 4.C
