Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读课文，了解咨询信的结构。
2.掌握咨询信的常用词汇和句式表达。
3.掌握写咨询信的步骤，并学以致用。
1．Look at the advertisement on a school website.
看一则学校网站上的广告。
★advertisement n．广告；启事；广告(样)品
|用|法|感|知|
·(“申请”类佳句)I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp in the newspaper.
我在报纸上看到您招聘儿童夏令营助理教师的广告。
·(“推荐”类佳句)As is advertised, there will be all sorts of works of paper cutting，and whoever present will be given a paper cutting as a gift.
正如广告所宣传的那样，将会有各种各样的剪纸作品，在场的人都会得到一幅剪纸作为礼物。
[归纳点拨]
(1)put an advertisement in the newspaper 在报纸上发布一则广告
be an advertisement for 宣扬……的优点
(2)advertise v． (为……)做广告；登广告
advertise for ... 登广告征求……
(3)advertiser n． 广告商；广告人员；广告公司
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①He suggested putting an ____________ (advertise) in the local paper to sell my car.
②It is India's biggest consumer goods company and biggest ____________ (advertise)．
③I would like to apply for the position ________ (advertise) in yesterday's newspaper.
④If you are in search of your missing pet, you'd better ___________________________.
如果你正在寻找丢失的宠物，你最好在报纸上登个广告。
⑤The nursing home ________________ a volunteer to help look after the patients.
疗养院正在登广告招聘一名志愿者来帮助照料病人。
2．Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable
请告诉我这种电影是否会被接受？
★acceptable adj.可接受的；可容忍的
|用|法|感|知|
·(“询问”类佳句)Recently, I drew a painting that is about the environment and I want to know if this kind of painting would be acceptable.
最近我画了一幅关于环境的画，我想知道这种画是否可以接受。
·(“答复”类佳句)I'm glad to accept your invitation to tour the Great Wall this weekend.
我很高兴接受你这个周末去游览长城的邀请。
[归纳点拨]
(1)it is acceptable for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是可以接受的
(2)accept vt. 接受
accept sth. from sb. 接受某人的某物
accept the fact that ... 接受……事实
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①Doing irrelevant things in class is not ____________ (accept) to any teacher.
②I just don't think ________________________ all the time.
我只是认为孩子们总是打岔是不可以接受的。
③The young man kept apologizing to his friend for his being late, but she refused to ________________________.
那个年轻人不停地为他的迟到向朋友道歉，但她拒绝接受他的道歉。
3．I appreciate your help and look forward to hearing from you.
我很感激你的帮助，并期待收到你的来信。
★appreciate vt.感激；欣赏，赏识；理解；意识到，领会
|用|法|感|知|
·(“求助”类佳句)I would greatly appreciate it if you could assist me with the experiment.
如果你能帮助我完成这个实验，我将不胜感激。
·(“感激”类佳句)Words fail to convey my endless appreciation for what you did for my family and I also want to express my sincere gratitude to all the people who donated the money to help us. 对你为我们家所做的一切，言语无法表达我无尽的感激之情，我也想对所有捐款帮助我们的人表示衷心的感谢。
[归纳点拨]
(1)appreciate＋n./pron./v. ing 感激/感谢……；欣赏……
I would appreciate it if ... 如果……，我将不胜感激
(2)appreciation n. 感激；欣赏；理解
show/express one's appreciation to sb.for sth. 因某事表达对某人的感激
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①His talents are not fully ____________ (appreciate) in that company.
②I appreciate your ____________ (make) the effort to come to help me.
③I had no ____________ (appreciate) of the problems they faced.
④________________________ you could give us some advice on how to improve our robots.
关于如何改进我们的机器人，如果你能给我们一些建议，我将不胜感激。
⑤To ________________________ your hard work, we would like to give you a bonus.
为了表示对你辛勤工作的感激，我们想给你额外的奖励。
4．★faithfully adv.忠诚地，忠实地；准确地；如实地
|用|法|感|知|
·Actually, I think one should love his country, work diligently and strive to be a faithful and friendly person.
实际上，我认为一个人应该热爱自己的国家，勤奋工作，努力做一个忠诚和友好的人。
·(名言警句)Faith can move mountains.
精诚所至，金石为开。
[归纳点拨]
(1)faith n． 信心，信念，信任；宗教信仰
have faith in ... 对……有信心
lose faith in ... 对……失去信心
(2)faithful adj. 忠实的；忠诚的；
如实的；丝毫不变的
be faithful to ... 对……忠诚
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①She promised ____________ (faithful) not to tell anyone my secret.
②I have great faith ____________ her; she won't let me down.
③The woman was praised for her years of __________ (faith) service to the company.
④In no case shall we _________________________________________ the future.
在任何情况下，我们都不该对未来失去信心。
■写作项目——Write a Formal Email
本单元的写作任务要求写一份咨询类的正式邮件，属于应用文。咨询信是写信人对某方面信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。咨询信应当明确表达咨询的目的，并提出具体的问题。写作时应注意礼节和句式的选择，切不可使用带有生硬语气或命令口吻的词句。结尾要表达感谢和期待。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学细节拓展
咨询信写作时切记不要只完成询问的内容，否则书信就显得太单薄了，需要增加适当的细节。
如首段点明写信目的之后，作者对自己的情况进行了具体介绍，这样显得逻辑自然，大方得体。中间段主要以问句为主，在某些问题后应及时增加细节，避免问题的简单罗列。如作者提出的第一个问题是电影节是否需要体育纪录片，之后非常自然地叙述了自己对于体育纪录片的热衷，以及目前正在做的工作，衔接自然，对要点进行了适度的拓展。
三、学句式变换
咨询信主体部分是询问具体信息，问句比较多，写作时要避免句式单调，可利用一般疑问句、特殊疑问句、反义疑问句、选择疑问句等使句式更丰富，也可用间接引语提问。课文中采用了一般疑问句，如Do you accept sport documentaries？...Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable ...Can groups as well as individuals enter Can we enter our film into another film festival at the same time ...would it be possible to tell me about the prizes
四、学语言特色
写咨询信时应注意礼貌，切不可命令对方，也不可把别人给予的回答或帮助视为理所当然。参考课文中的委婉的表达方式，如说明写信目的时使用了I am writing to ask ...和I would like to ask ...; 询问具体信息时使用了Could you tell me if ...、 I wonder if ...及Would it be possible to ...；结尾表达感谢时使用了I appreciate your help ...。
[提能训练] (完成句子)
①________________ if there is one fixed referencing style for this course or I can use the one I am familiar with Also, ________________________ for the file format
你能告诉我这门课程是否有一个固定的参考风格或者我可以使用我熟悉的那个吗？另外，对文件格式有任何要求吗？
②________________ if you take my application into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将感激不尽。
具体写作指导
Write an email inquiring about an art exhibition——写一份咨询艺术展的邮件
第一步：构思谋篇
Tense Simple present tense
Person First/second person
Main points Part 1：Self introduction, the purpose of the email. Part 2：The detailed information needed to be told (time, place, cautions and so on)． Part 3：Express personal wishes.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 概述基本信息及写作目的
1．进行自我介绍
①I'm Li Hua, __________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________.(同位语)
我是李华，一个对中国书画感兴趣的中学生。
②I'm Li Hua, ________________________. As a lover of painting, I am very interested in this activity.(定语从句)
我叫李华，是一名中学生。作为一个绘画爱好者，我对这个活动非常感兴趣。
2．表达写信目的
①I am writing this email to ask about the information about the “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition ________________________.(不定式作定语)
我写这封邮件是想咨询一下我校即将举办的“最美中国”现场书画比赛的相关信息。
②I heard ________________________ a “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition.I am writing to ask about the information.(宾语从句)
听说我校将举办“最美中国”现场书画比赛，我写信是想询问有关信息。
③________________________ that a “most beautiful China” calligraphy and painting competition will be organized by our school, I am writing to ask about the information.(非谓语动词作状语)
很高兴得知我校将举办“最美中国”书画比赛，我写信是想询问有关信息。
第二部分 具体介绍所要咨询的相关信息
1．询问时间、地点
①________________________ the exact time and place of this competition
请你告诉我比赛的确切时间和地点好吗？
②______________________ is when and where this competition will be held. (主语从句)
我首先想知道的是比赛于何时何地举行。
2．询问要求或条件
①___________________________________________________ for entries？(疑问句)
对参赛有什么具体的要求吗？
②I want to know ____________________________________ for entries.(宾语从句)
我想知道对参赛有什么具体的要求吗？
3．询问比赛结果
①I want to know ________________________________________. (宾语从句)
我想知道结果什么时候公布。
②______________________ is when I can know the result of the competition.(主语从句)
我还关心比赛结果什么时候公布。
4．询问作品提交方式
________________________ to submit my paintings.Should I submit it by email or just log on to your website and submit it online？(it作形式主语)
知道如何提交我的画作对我来说至关重要。我应该通过电子邮件提交还是登录您的网站并在线提交？
第三部分 总结并表达期望
①_________________________________________________________________________
我期待您及时答复。
②________________________ you could offer me some relevant information.
如果您能提供一些相关信息，我将不胜感激。
③________________________ you could send me a reply as soon as possible.
如果您能尽快给我回复，我将非常感激。
④Thank you for your kindness, and ___________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
感谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时回复，我们将非常感激。
[针对练笔]
你在网上偶然看到下个月你市即将举办青少年摄影比赛的消息。请写一个片段咨询一下具体内容，如比赛时间、地点及作品要求等。
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1．常用开头句
(1)I'm writing to ask for/inquire some information/details about it.
我写信是为了询问关于它的一些细节信息。
(2)I'm very interested in your program of the educational travel posted on the Internet and I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/about it.
我对你们在网上公布的教育旅行计划很感兴趣，我写信是想知道你们是否能向我提供有关这方面的信息。
(3)I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/about/regarding/concerning ...
我写信是想知道您是否能提供向我有关……的信息。
(4)I'd like to acquire all the information relative to the English Speech Contest.
我想获得关于英语演讲比赛的所有信息。
(5)Would you be so kind as to tell me some information about ...
您能告诉我关于……的信息吗？
2．常用中间句
(1)In the first place, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants which will help me know if I fit the bill.Then ...In addition ...
首先，如果您能告诉我对申请者的要求我将不胜感激，这将帮助我知道自己是否符合条件，其次……此外……
(2)To begin with, would you please ... Moreover, we would like to ...Besides, please provide us with ...
首先，请问您可以……？ 此外， 我们还想……还有，请您提供给我们……
(3)In addition, could you be so kind as to tell me what activities we will participate in apart from the visit？
另外，您能告诉我除了参观外我们还将参加哪些活动吗？
(4)Furthermore, what deserves my special attention is the whole cost of this educational travel (including the airplane tickets and accommodation)．
此外，值得我特别注意的是这次教育旅行的全部费用(包括机票和住宿费)。
(5)To start with, I'd like to ...If convenient, could you please ... What's more, I would be obliged if you let me know ...
首先，我想……如果您方便的话，请您……好吗？另外，如果您能告知……我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning ...
如果你能给我提供关于……的信息，我将不胜感激。
(7)I sincerely expect to get informed of details on accommodations and expenses to ensure my preparation in advance.
我真诚希望了解住宿和费用的详细信息，以确保我提前做好准备。
3．常用结束句
(1)Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
感谢您及时关注我的询问。
(2)Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意，如能早日回信，我们将不胜感激。
(3)Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Thank you in advance for your assistance/cooperation.
感谢您的及时回复。提前谢谢您的帮助。
(4)Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
感谢您对此信的关注。
(二)主题语段
1．询问去外国做交换生的相关事宜
First of all, can you tell me something about the weather there？In addition, I like eating hot food in China, so I want to figure out when I arrive in America, what aspects should I pay attention to when eating food？What's more, I don't know how to get along with American students because we have different cultures, which makes me very tense.
首先，你能告诉我那里的天气吗？此外，我喜欢在中国吃辣的食物，所以我想知道当我到达美国时，我在吃食物时应该注意哪些方面？更重要的是，我不知道如何与美国学生相处，因为我们有不同的文化，这让我非常紧张。
2．询问参加比赛的相关事宜
We are excited to learn more information about the match.First of all, can you please give some information about food and accommodations A short list of nearby hotels and restaurants would be greatly appreciated.If you can think of any useful phone apps, please offer a recommendation.Finally, a schedule would help us prepare in advance.Please send one as soon as possible.
我们很兴奋，希望了解更多比赛信息。首先，你能提供一些关于食宿的信息吗？如果能提供附近酒店和餐馆的简短名单，我将不胜感激。如果你能想到任何有用的手机应用程序，请提供推荐。最后，一份时间表将有助于我们提前做准备。请尽快发送一份。
Section 8 Writing Workshop
新知深化学习
1．①advertisement ②advertiser ③advertised
④put an advertisement in the newspaper ⑤is advertising for
2．①acceptable ②it is acceptable for children to interrupt
③accept his apology
3．①appreciated ②making ③appreciation
④I would appreciate it if ⑤show/express our appreciation for
4．①faithfully ②in ③faithful ④lose faith in
写作专项提能
由教材学写作
①Could you tell me; are there any requirements
②I'd appreciate it
具体写作指导
第一部分
1．①a middle school student who is interested in Chinese calligraphy and painting
②who is a middle school student
2．①to be organized by our school
②that our school will organize ③Knowing with delight
第二部分
1．①Would you mind informing me of
②What I want to know first
2．①Is there any specific requirement
②whether there is any specific requirement
3．①when the results will be announced
②What also concerns me
4．It's vital for me to know the way
第三部分
①I am looking forward to your immediate response.
②I would appreciate it if ③I would be very grateful if
④your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated
[针对练笔]
参考范文：
First of all, would you be so kind as to tell me when and where the competition will be held What's more, what is the deadline for the entries' submission In addition, I would be grateful if you could offer me more specific information about the theme.
9 / 9(共77张PPT)
Section 8
Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.阅读课文，了解咨询信的结构。
2.掌握咨询信的常用词汇和句式表达。
3.掌握写咨询信的步骤，并学以致用。
目 录
新知深化学习
写作专项提能
课时检测
新知深化学习
1．Look at the advertisement on a school website.
看一则学校网站上的广告。
★advertisement n．广告；启事；广告(样)品
|用|法|感|知|
·(“申请”类佳句)I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp in the newspaper.
我在报纸上看到您招聘儿童夏令营助理教师的广告。
·(“推荐”类佳句)As is advertised, there will be all sorts of works of paper－cutting，and whoever present will be given a paper－cutting as a gift.
正如广告所宣传的那样，将会有各种各样的剪纸作品，在场的人都会得到一幅剪纸作为礼物。
[归纳点拨]
(1)put an advertisement in the newspaper 在报纸上发布一则广告
be an advertisement for 宣扬……的优点
(2)advertise v． (为……)做广告；登广告
advertise for ... 登广告征求……
(3)advertiser n． 广告商；广告人员；广告公司
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①He suggested putting an ______________ (advertise) in the local paper to sell my car.
②It is India's biggest consumer－goods company and biggest ___________ (advertise)．
advertisement
advertiser
③I would like to apply for the position ______________ (advertise) in yesterday's newspaper.
④If you are in search of your missing pet, you'd better ____________________________________.
如果你正在寻找丢失的宠物，你最好在报纸上登个广告。
⑤The nursing home ___________________ a volunteer to help look after the patients.
疗养院正在登广告招聘一名志愿者来帮助照料病人。
advertised
put an advertisement in the newspaper
is advertising for
2．Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable
请告诉我这种电影是否会被接受？
★acceptable adj.可接受的；可容忍的
|用|法|感|知|
·(“询问”类佳句)Recently, I drew a painting that is about the environment and I want to know if this kind of painting would be acceptable.
最近我画了一幅关于环境的画，我想知道这种画是否可以接受。
·(“答复”类佳句)I'm glad to accept your invitation to tour the Great Wall this weekend.
我很高兴接受你这个周末去游览长城的邀请。
[归纳点拨]
(1)it is acceptable for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是可以接受的
(2)accept vt. 接受
accept sth. from sb. 接受某人的某物
accept the fact that ... 接受……事实
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①Doing irrelevant things in class is not __________ (accept) to any teacher.
②I just don't think _____________________________________ all the time.
我只是认为孩子们总是打岔是不可以接受的。
③The young man kept apologizing to his friend for his being late, but she refused to______________________.
那个年轻人不停地为他的迟到向朋友道歉，但她拒绝接受他的道歉。
acceptable
it is acceptable for children to interrupt
accept his apology
3．I appreciate your help and look forward to hearing from you.
我很感激你的帮助，并期待收到你的来信。
★appreciate vt.感激；欣赏，赏识；理解；意识到，领会
|用|法|感|知|
·(“求助”类佳句)I would greatly appreciate it if you could assist me with the experiment.
如果你能帮助我完成这个实验，我将不胜感激。
·(“感激”类佳句)Words fail to convey my endless appreciation for what you did for my family and I also want to express my sincere gratitude to all the people who donated the money to help us.
对你为我们家所做的一切，言语无法表达我无尽的感激之情，我也想对所有捐款帮助我们的人表示衷心的感谢。
[归纳点拨]
(1)appreciate＋n./pron./v.－ing 感激/感谢……；欣赏……
I would appreciate it if ... 如果……，我将不胜感激
(2)appreciation n. 感激；欣赏；理解
show/express one's appreciation to sb.for sth.
因某事表达对某人的感激
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①His talents are not fully ____________ (appreciate) in that company.
②I appreciate your _________ (make) the effort to come to help me.
③I had no _______________(appreciate) of the problems they faced.
appreciated
making
appreciation
④______________________ you could give us some advice on how to improve our robots.
关于如何改进我们的机器人，如果你能给我们一些建议，我将不胜感激。
⑤To _______________________________ your hard work, we would like to give you a bonus.
为了表示对你辛勤工作的感激，我们想给你额外的奖励。
I would appreciate it if
show/express our appreciation for
4．★faithfully adv.忠诚地，忠实地；准确地；如实地
|用|法|感|知|
·Actually, I think one should love his country, work diligently and strive to be a faithful and friendly person.
实际上，我认为一个人应该热爱自己的国家，勤奋工作，努力做一个忠诚和友好的人。
·(名言警句)Faith can move mountains.
精诚所至，金石为开。
[归纳点拨]
(1)faith n． 信心，信念，信任；宗教信仰
have faith in ... 对……有信心
lose faith in ... 对……失去信心
(2)faithful adj. 忠实的；忠诚的；如实的；丝毫不变的
be faithful to ... 对……忠诚
|应|用|融|会|
(单句语法填空/完成句子)
①She promised ___________ (faithful) not to tell anyone my secret.
②I have great faith _____ her; she won't let me down.
③The woman was praised for her years of _________ (faith) service to the company.
④In no case shall we _______________ the future.
在任何情况下，我们都不该对未来失去信心。
faithfully
in
faithful
lose faith in
写作专项提能
写作项目——Write a Formal Email
本单元的写作任务要求写一份咨询类的正式邮件，属于应用文。咨询信是写信人对某方面信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。咨询信应当明确表达咨询的目的，并提出具体的问题。写作时应注意礼节和句式的选择，切不可使用带有生硬语气或命令口吻的词句。结尾要表达感谢和期待。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文，总结该文体的框架结构如下：
二、学要点构思
咨询信写作时切记不要只完成询问的内容，否则书信就显得太单薄了，需要增加适当的细节。
如首段点明写信目的之后，作者对自己的情况进行了具体介绍，这样显得逻辑自然，大方得体。中间段主要以问句为主，在某些问题后应及时增加细节，避免问题的简单罗列。如作者提出的第一个问题是电影节是否需要体育纪录片，之后非常自然地叙述了自己对于体育纪录片的热衷，以及目前正在做的工作，衔接自然，对要点进行了适度的拓展。
三、学句式变换
咨询信主体部分是询问具体信息，问句比较多，写作时要避免句式单调，可利用一般疑问句、特殊疑问句、反义疑问句、选择疑问句等使句式更丰富，也可用间接引语提问。课文中采用了一般疑问句，如Do you accept sport documentaries？...Could you tell me if this kind of film would be acceptable ...Can groups as well as individuals enter Can we enter our film into another film festival at the same time ...would it be possible to tell me about the prizes
四、学语言特色
写咨询信时应注意礼貌，切不可命令对方，也不可把别人给予的回答或帮助视为理所当然。参考课文中的委婉的表达方式，如说明写信目的时使用了I am writing to ask ...和I would like to ask ...; 询问具体信息时使用了Could you tell me if ...、 I wonder if ...及Would it be possible to ...；结尾表达感谢时使用了I appreciate your help ...。
[提能训练] (完成句子)
①__________________ if there is one fixed referencing style for this course or I can use the one I am familiar with Also, __________________________ for the file format
你能告诉我这门课程是否有一个固定的参考风格或者我可以使用我熟悉的那个吗？另外，对文件格式有任何要求吗？
②________________ if you take my application into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将感激不尽。
Could you tell me
are there any requirements
I'd appreciate it
具体写作指导
Write an email inquiring about an art exhibition——写一份咨询艺术展的邮件
第一步：构思谋篇
Tense Simple present tense
Person First/second person
Main points Part 1：Self－introduction, the purpose of the email.
Part 2：The detailed information needed to be told (time, place, cautions and so on)．
Part 3：Express personal wishes.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分 概述基本信息及写作目的
1．进行自我介绍
①I'm Li Hua, _____________________________________________
________________________.(同位语)
我是李华，一个对中国书画感兴趣的中学生。
a middle school student who is interested in Chinese
calligraphy and painting
②I'm Li Hua,_______________________________. As a lover of painting, I am very interested in this activity.(定语从句)
我叫李华，是一名中学生。作为一个绘画爱好者，我对这个活动非常感兴趣。
who is a middle school student
2．表达写信目的
①I am writing this email to ask about the information about the “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition ______________________________. (不定式作定语)
我写这封邮件是想咨询一下我校即将举办的“最美中国”现场书画比赛的相关信息。
to be organized by our school
②I heard _____________________________a “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition.I am writing to ask about the information.(宾语从句)
听说我校将举办“最美中国”现场书画比赛，我写信是想询问有关信息。
that our school will organize
③____________________ that a “most beautiful China” calligraphy and painting competition will be organized by our school, I am writing to ask about the information.(非谓语动词作状语)
很高兴得知我校将举办“最美中国”书画比赛，我写信是想询问有关信息。
Knowing with delight
第二部分 具体介绍所要咨询的相关信息
1．询问时间、地点
①_______________________________ the exact time and place of this competition
请你告诉我比赛的确切时间和地点好吗？
②________________________ is when and where this competition will be held. (主语从句)
我首先想知道的是比赛于何时何地举行。
Would you mind informing me of
What I want to know first
2．询问要求或条件
①______________________________ for entries？(疑问句)
对参赛有什么具体的要求吗？
②I want to know ______________________________________ for entries.(宾语从句)
我想知道对参赛有什么具体的要求吗？
Is there any specific requirement
whether there is any specific requirement
3．询问比赛结果
①I want to know_________________________________.(宾语从句)
我想知道结果什么时候公布。
②_______________________ is when I can know the result of the competition.(主语从句)
我还关心比赛结果什么时候公布。
when the results will be announced
What also concerns me
4．询问作品提交方式
_____________________________ to submit my paintings.Should I submit it by email or just log on to your website and submit it online？(it作形式主语)
知道如何提交我的画作对我来说至关重要。我应该通过电子邮件提交还是登录您的网站并在线提交？
It's vital for me to know the way
第三部分 总结并表达期望
①______________________________________________
我期待您及时答复。
②______________________ you could offer me some relevant information.
如果您能提供一些相关信息，我将不胜感激。
I am looking forward to your immediate response.
I would appreciate it if
③__________________________ you could send me a reply as soon as possible.
如果您能尽快给我回复，我将非常感激。
④Thank you for your kindness，and __________________________
_____________________________.
感谢你的善意，对于你对这封信的及时回复，我们将非常感激。
I would be very grateful if
your prompt reply to this
letter will be highly appreciated
[针对练笔]
你在网上偶然看到下个月你市即将举办青少年摄影比赛的消息。请写一个片段咨询一下具体内容，如比赛时间、地点及作品要求等。
参考范文：
First of all, would you be so kind as to tell me when and where the competition will be held What's more, what is the deadline for the entries' submission In addition, I would be grateful if you could offer me more specific information about the theme.
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1．常用开头句
(1)I'm writing to ask for/inquire some information/details about it.
我写信是为了询问关于它的一些细节信息。
(2)I'm very interested in your program of the educational travel posted on the Internet and I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/about it.
我对你们在网上公布的教育旅行计划很感兴趣，我写信是想知道你们是否能向我提供有关这方面的信息。
(3)I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/about/regarding/concerning ...
我写信是想知道您是否能提供向我有关……的信息。
(4)I'd like to acquire all the information relative to the English Speech Contest.
我想获得关于英语演讲比赛的所有信息。
(5)Would you be so kind as to tell me some information about ...
您能告诉我关于……的信息吗？
2．常用中间句
(1)In the first place, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants which will help me know if I fit the bill.Then ...In addition ...
首先，如果您能告诉我对申请者的要求我将不胜感激，这将帮助我知道自己是否符合条件，其次……此外……
(2)To begin with, would you please ... Moreover, we would like to ...Besides, please provide us with ...
首先，请问您可以……？ 此外， 我们还想……还有，请您提供给我们……
(3)In addition, could you be so kind as to tell me what activities we will participate in apart from the visit
另外，您能告诉我除了参观外我们还将参加哪些活动吗？
(4)Furthermore, what deserves my special attention is the whole cost of this educational travel (including the airplane tickets and accommodation)．
此外，值得我特别注意的是这次教育旅行的全部费用(包括机票和住宿费)。
(5)To start with, I'd like to ...If convenient, could you please ... What's more, I would be obliged if you let me know ...
首先，我想……如果您方便的话，请您……好吗？另外，如果您能告知……我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning ...
如果你能给我提供关于……的信息，我将不胜感激。
(7)I sincerely expect to get informed of details on accommodations and expenses to ensure my preparation in advance.
我真诚希望了解住宿和费用的详细信息，以确保我提前做好准备。
3．常用结束句
(1)Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
感谢您及时关注我的询问。
(2)Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意，如能早日回信，我们将不胜感激。
(3)Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Thank you in advance for your assistance/cooperation.
感谢您的及时回复。提前谢谢您的帮助。
(4)Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
感谢您对此信的关注。
(二)主题语段
1．询问去外国做交换生的相关事宜
First of all, can you tell me something about the weather there？In addition, I like eating hot food in China, so I want to figure out when I arrive in America, what aspects should I pay attention to when eating food？What's more, I don't know how to get along with American students because we have different cultures, which makes me very tense.
首先，你能告诉我那里的天气吗？此外，我喜欢在中国吃辣的食物，所以我想知道当我到达美国时，我在吃食物时应该注意哪些方面？更重要的是，我不知道如何与美国学生相处，因为我们有不同的文化，这让我非常紧张。
2．询问参加比赛的相关事宜
We are excited to learn more information about the match.First of all, can you please give some information about food and accommodations A short list of nearby hotels and restaurants would be greatly appreciated.If you can think of any useful phone apps, please offer a recommendation.Finally, a schedule would help us prepare in advance.Please send one as soon as possible.
我们很兴奋，希望了解更多比赛信息。首先，你能提供一些关于食宿的信息吗？如果能提供附近酒店和餐馆的简短名单，我将不胜感激。如果你能想到任何有用的手机应用程序，请提供推荐。最后，一份时间表将有助于我们提前做准备。请尽快发送一份。
课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．To know whether I could live in the school dormitory and what expenses I need to account for during my stay would be helpful.(it作形式主语)
→__________________ to know whether I could live in the school dormitory and what expenses I need to account for during my stay.
It would be helpful
2．Since I am new there, I have no idea about what attractions to choose.(非谓语动词作状语)
→________________, I have no idea about what attractions to choose.
3．What's more, what should I pay attention to while I am travelling in Singapore.(省略句)
→What's more, what should I pay attention to ___________________________.
Being new there
while travelling in Singapore
4．Could you tell me when it starts and ends I can plan my trip in advance.(so that结果状语从句)
→Could you tell me when it starts and ends __________________________
_________
5．However, there will be an interview next week, and it makes me worried.(定语从句)
→However, there will be an interview next week,______________________.
so that I can plan my trip in
advance
which makes me worried
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．①_____________________________________________________ __________(随着暑假的临近), I am planning to have a wonderful holiday by touring Singapore for a week.So, ②______________________________ (我写信向你寻求帮助)．
With summer holiday approaching/drawing near/around the
corner
I'm writing to ask you for your help
2．I wonder ①__________________________________ (你是否方便告诉我) of the specific schedule.Additionally, because ②__________________ __________________________________(这是我第一次参加这一活动), I would be grateful if you could offer suggestions on what I need to take.
if it is convenient for you to inform me
this is the first time
for me to participate in such an activity
3．①__________________ (我想知道) where the summer camp will be held.Besides, I am so interested in ②______________________ _______________________(我们将参加什么样的活动) and by the way how much shall I pay for it
I am wondering
what activities we are
going to take part in
4．Although I intend to be self－supporting, _____________________ (最让我感兴趣的是) is whether your school offers any scholarships to international students.Besides, what is the situation as regards accommodation
what interests me most
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示。请你给外国朋友 Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表达感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Chris，
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to traditional Chinese culture.Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries.In order to get more clicks, you'd better tell me which traditional Chinese culture you westerners prefer.What's more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese element, what should I do
Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给情景提示续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Everyone in my drama class saw the paper in my hands shaking when I stood up to try out for a lead role in the yearly school New Year play.I was there because the teacher wanted everyone to try out for a part.
Being shy and not confident, I began nervously reading the part for the main character, Star.She had no parents.Feeling so sorry for her, I finished reading.
Later when reading the name list, the teacher looked at me and announced, “Patty, you play e and get your script (剧本)．”I was shocked.Jim, an excellent boy, was playing the other lead.To learn my lines, I practiced every day and finally memorized them.I became more confident and happier.
Then we started practising acting.Jim played the character, a Scrooge (吝啬鬼), who is unwilling to put a candle in his window so that the light will show passers－by the slippery ice on the path below.On New Year's day, Star comes along, falls on the ice and gets injured.
Finally feeling bad, the Scrooge helps her up.To thank him, Star kisses his hand.
One day, before our drama class started, I saw a terrible drawing of me on the blackboard with words: Falling Star.I was laughed at by someone.
The teacher asked，“Who did this？” Nobody knew.We started rehearsing (排练), but my heart wasn't in it.The teacher told me not to care about the silly trick; it wouldn't happen again.But I was sad and anxious, wanting to quit.Finally I moved on and continually worked hard for the play.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．续写脉络提示：在接下来的新年，我们为戏剧演出做好了准备。在表演过程中，我们时不时地听到从观众中间传来的笑声。表演结束时，他们给予了我们热烈的掌声。之后，同学们经常夸我非常棒。我很高兴自己的努力和决心得到了回报。
参考范文：
The following New Year's day, we were ready for the play.Throughout the performance, we could hear laughter from the audience from time to time.When the performance was over, they gave us a big round of applause.In the following weeks, schoolmates often came up to say, “You were good！” I was glad my hard work and determination as well as many people's support had helped me to perform successfully.
[阅读拓展训练]
Since childhood, London－based artist Josh Gluckstein has been fascinated by the incredible diversity of our planet's wildlife and inspired to make sculptures of animals from found materials.He often uses abandoned or recycled materials like clothing from junk shops or wood from old furniture.An important aspect of his practice is concern for the environment.“I have traveled through Asia, Latin America and East Africa, and have been fortunate enough to have some incredible wildlife encounters，” he says.
“However, on my travels, even in the most remote locations, I was shocked by the huge amounts of plastic waste.”
Much of the garbage that washes up on shorelines around the world is due to an unregulated (未受监管的) system in which richer countries export waste to developing countries because it is often cheaper than developing better infrastructures (基础设施) to handle it.Many of the thousands of shipping containers exported each year are often dumped illegally.
“I remember going to the Galapagos Islands and visiting a beach famous for a large population of sea lions.It was indeed incredible to see them in the wild, but on every inch of sand not covered by sea lions, there were plastic bottles and cans.It was a heartbreaking sight.I knew I wanted to create artworks that didn't create waste or harm our planet，” Gluckstein says.
Gluckstein hopes his works will raise people's awareness about the importance of protecting endangered species.His new series called “Gold” focuses on illegally hunted animals by applying gold leaves to their bodies.He plans to donate some of the sales of his sculptures to the world Wide Fund for Nature.
语篇解读：本文是一篇新闻报道。文章报道了来自伦敦的艺术家Josh Gluckstein，用现成的材料制作动物雕塑，期望他的作品可以帮助保护濒危动物。
1．What do Gluckstein's sculptures focus on
A．Fashion. B．Animals.
C．Sports. D．Travel.
解析：细节理解题。根据第一段中“Since childhood, London－based artist Josh Gluckstein has been fascinated by the incredible diversity of our planet's wildlife and inspired to make sculptures of animals from found materials.”可知，Josh Gluckstein的雕塑关注动物。
√
2．What does the underlined word “dumped” in paragraph 2 probably mean
A．Poured. B．Protected.
C．Sold. D．Used.
解析：词义猜测题。根据第二段画线词上文可知，海岸上的大部分垃圾都是由于不受监管造成的，有许多垃圾经常被非法倾倒在海洋中，画线词的含义是“倾倒”。
√
3．What does Gluckstein mainly want to say in paragraph 3
A．Where he has toured.
B．How sad he was.
C．How he found sea lions.
D．Why he created eco－friendly sculptures.
√
解析：段落大意题。根据第三段“‘It was a heartbreaking sight.I knew I wanted to create artworks that didn't create waste or harm our planet，’ Gluckstein says.”可知，Gluckstein在第三段中主要想说他为什么创作环保雕塑。
4．What does Gluckstein expect of his works
A．They can bring him financial benefits.
B．They can make him famous as an artist.
C．They can help protect endangered animals.
D．They can improve people's ability to appreciate art.
√
解析：推理判断题。根据最后一段中“Gluckstein hopes his works will raise people's awareness about the importance of protecting endangered species.”可知，Gluckstein期望他的作品可以帮助保护濒危动物。UNIT 7 课时检测(八) Writing Workshop
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．To know whether I could live in the school dormitory and what expenses I need to account for during my stay would be helpful.(it作形式主语)
→____________________ to know whether I could live in the school dormitory and what expenses I need to account for during my stay.
2．Since I am new there, I have no idea about what attractions to choose.(非谓语动词作状语)
→__________________， I have no idea about what attractions to choose.
3．What's more, what should I pay attention to while I am travelling in Singapore.(省略句)
→What's more, what should I pay attention to ________________________.
4．Could you tell me when it starts and ends I can plan my trip in advance.(so that结果状语从句)
→Could you tell me when it starts and ends ____________________________________？
5．However, there will be an interview next week, and it makes me worried.(定语从句)
→However, there will be an interview next week, ________________________.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．①___________________________________(随着暑假的临近), I am planning to have a wonderful holiday by touring Singapore for a week.So, ②______________________________ (我写信向你寻求帮助)．
2．I wonder ①________________________________ (你是否方便告诉我) of the specific schedule.Additionally, because ②___________________________________________ (这是我第一次参加这一活动), I would be grateful if you could offer suggestions on what I need to take.
3．①________________________ (我想知道) where the summer camp will be held.Besides, I am so interested in ②______________________________ (我们将参加什么样的活动) and by the way how much shall I pay for it
4．Although I intend to be self supporting, ________________________ (最让我感兴趣的是) is whether your school offers any scholarships to international students.Besides, what is the situation as regards accommodation
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示。请你给外国朋友 Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表达感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给情景提示续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Everyone in my drama class saw the paper in my hands shaking when I stood up to try out for a lead role in the yearly school New Year play.I was there because the teacher wanted everyone to try out for a part.
Being shy and not confident, I began nervously reading the part for the main character, Star.She had no parents.Feeling so sorry for her, I finished reading.
Later when reading the name list, the teacher looked at me and announced, “Patty, you play e and get your script (剧本)．”I was shocked.Jim, an excellent boy, was playing the other lead.To learn my lines, I practiced every day and finally memorized them.I became more confident and happier.
Then we started practising acting.Jim played the character, a Scrooge (吝啬鬼), who is unwilling to put a candle in his window so that the light will show passers by the slippery ice on the path below.On New Year's day, Star comes along, falls on the ice and gets injured.
Finally feeling bad, the Scrooge helps her up.To thank him, Star kisses his hand.
One day, before our drama class started, I saw a terrible drawing of me on the blackboard with words: Falling Star.I was laughed at by someone.
The teacher asked，“Who did this？” Nobody knew.We started rehearsing (排练), but my heart wasn't in it.The teacher told me not to care about the silly trick; it wouldn't happen again.But I was sad and anxious, wanting to quit.Finally I moved on and continually worked hard for the play.
注意：1.续写词数应为80左右；
2．续写脉络提示：在接下来的新年，我们为戏剧演出做好了准备。在表演过程中，我们时不时地听到从观众中间传来的笑声。表演结束时，他们给予了我们热烈的掌声。之后，同学们经常夸我非常棒。我很高兴自己的努力和决心得到了回报。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
[阅读拓展训练]
Since childhood, London based artist Josh Gluckstein has been fascinated by the incredible diversity of our planet's wildlife and inspired to make sculptures of animals from found materials.He often uses abandoned or recycled materials like clothing from junk shops or wood from old furniture.An important aspect of his practice is concern for the environment.“I have traveled through Asia, Latin America and East Africa, and have been fortunate enough to have some incredible wildlife encounters，” he says.“However, on my travels, even in the most remote locations, I was shocked by the huge amounts of plastic waste.”
Much of the garbage that washes up on shorelines around the world is due to an unregulated (未受监管的) system in which richer countries export waste to developing countries because it is often cheaper than developing better infrastructures (基础设施) to handle it.Many of the thousands of shipping containers exported each year are often dumped illegally.
“I remember going to the Galapagos Islands and visiting a beach famous for a large population of sea lions.It was indeed incredible to see them in the wild, but on every inch of sand not covered by sea lions, there were plastic bottles and cans.It was a heartbreaking sight.I knew I wanted to create artworks that didn't create waste or harm our planet，” Gluckstein says.
Gluckstein hopes his works will raise people's awareness about the importance of protecting endangered species.His new series called “Gold” focuses on illegally hunted animals by applying gold leaves to their bodies.He plans to donate some of the sales of his sculptures to the world Wide Fund for Nature.
1．What do Gluckstein's sculptures focus on
A．Fashion. B．Animals.
C．Sports. D．Travel.
2．What does the underlined word “dumped” in paragraph 2 probably mean
A．Poured. B．Protected.
C．Sold. D．Used.
3．What does Gluckstein mainly want to say in paragraph 3
A．Where he has toured.
B．How sad he was.
C．How he found sea lions.
D．Why he created eco friendly sculptures.
4．What does Gluckstein expect of his works
A．They can bring him financial benefits.
B．They can make him famous as an artist.
C．They can help protect endangered animals.
D．They can improve people's ability to appreciate art.
UNIT 7 课时检测(八)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.It would be helpful 2.Being new there
3．while travelling in Singapore
4．so that I can plan my trip in advance 5.which makes me worried
Ⅱ.1.①With summer holiday approaching/drawing near/around the corner ②I'm writing to ask you for your help
2．①if it is convenient for you to inform me
②this is the first time for me to participate in such an activity
3．①I am wondering
②what activities we are going to take part in
4．what interests me most
Ⅲ.应用文写作
参考范文：
Dear Chris，
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to traditional Chinese culture.Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries.In order to get more clicks, you'd better tell me which traditional Chinese culture you westerners prefer.What's more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese element, what should I do
Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
参考范文：
The following New Year's day, we were ready for the play.Throughout the performance, we could hear laughter from the audience from time to time.When the performance was over, they gave us a big round of applause.In the following weeks, schoolmates often came up to say, “You were good！” I was glad my hard work and determination as well as many people's support had helped me to perform successfully.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇新闻报道。文章报道了来自伦敦的艺术家Josh Gluckstein，用现成的材料制作动物雕塑，期望他的作品可以帮助保护濒危动物。
1．选B 细节理解题。根据第一段中“Since childhood, Londonbased artist Josh Gluckstein has been fascinated by the incredible diversity of our planet's wildlife and inspired to make sculptures of animals from found materials.”可知，Josh Gluckstein的雕塑关注动物。
2．选A 词义猜测题。根据第二段画线词上文可知，海岸上的大部分垃圾都是由于不受监管造成的，有许多垃圾经常被非法倾倒在海洋中，画线词的含义是“倾倒”。
3．选D 段落大意题。根据第三段“‘It was a heartbreaking sight.I knew I wanted to create artworks that didn't create waste or harm our planet，’ Gluckstein says.”可知，Gluckstein在第三段中主要想说他为什么创作环保雕塑。
4．选C 推理判断题。根据最后一段中“Gluckstein hopes his works will raise people's awareness about the importance of protecting endangered species.”可知，Gluckstein期望他的作品可以帮助保护濒危动物。
4 / 4
