Section 8 Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.认真阅读作者对《记忆的秘密》文章的反思,理解篇章结构。
2.利用一些单词、短语和句型,学会写学习反思。
3.学会使用过渡衔接词,使文章层次分明。
Moreover, I must also learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning. 此外,我还必须学会进行“定时复习”,尤其是在学习后的第一天。
★moreover adv.此外,而且
|用|法|感|知|
·(“运动健身”主题佳句)Bicycling is a good exercise; moreover, it doesn't pollute the air.
骑自行车是一项很好的运动;而且也不污染空气。
·Moreover, the competition will supply you with a chance to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you.
此外,这次竞赛将会给你提供一个机会,帮助你发展创造力,与志同道合的同学建立友谊。
[归纳点拨]
(1)moreover意为“此外,而且;更有甚者”,常用作插入语,相当于what's more、 besides、 furthermore、 in addition等,可位于句首或句中。
(2)what's worse=worse still/to make things worse 更糟糕的是
|应|用|融|会|
(完成句子) ①I like shopping online; __________________, I like group purchase.
我喜欢网购,而且我喜欢团购。
②____________, studying for a degree in different cultures is never easy.
此外,在不同的文化中攻读学位从来都不是一件容易的事。
③It's getting dark.______________________, it's raining harder and harder.
天要黑了。更糟糕的是,雨越下越大。
■写作项目——Write a Learning Reflection
本单元的写作项目是写一篇学习反思,主要总结归纳自己学习的收获和感想,属于议论文。一般会用简洁、生动的语言把对所学知识的反思准确、完整地表达出来,以使自己能有所提高。学习反思主要包括对过去知识的反思,反思从中学到了什么、如何提高自己等。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文,总结该文体的框架结构如下:
二、学要点构思
学习反思是议论性较强的读书笔记,用切身体会、实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。因此,文章既要叙述,又要说理。叙述是议论的基础,议论又是叙述的深化,二者相互结合。第一段主要反思自己过去对记忆的认识,引出话题。先点明《记忆的秘密》一文对自己的帮助,并提出自己在读这篇文章之前对记忆的认识不够充分,点题明确,过渡自然。第二段主要叙述了作者从《记忆的秘密》一文中学到的关于记忆的一些信息。在陈述自己的感悟时,引用了原文中的一些句子来进一步表明自己对记忆的理解。最后一段主要讲述为了提高自己的记忆作者要采取的措施,紧密结合自身实际,言之有物。
三、学行文逻辑
此类文章的行文通常按照从对所学文章的理解到自我反思的逻辑顺序推进,分析部分要条理清晰,反思内容要与文章紧密结合且具有一定深度和合理性。对自己过去的认识进行反思时常使用before ...I didn't know...;反思现在的认识时常使用at the moment I understand ...; now I have learnt ...;介绍以后的计划或措施时常使用also; what's more/moreover; not only ...but also ...; in addition等使行文更连贯;在反思时常运用例证法来证明自己的观点,如for example等。
[提能训练] (完成句子)
①________________________, I didn't know so many celebrities would be present.
在参加这个晚会之前,我不知道有那么多的名人会出席。
②Moving out of this city means losing _______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
搬离这座城市意味着你不仅会失去一些朋友,还会失去很多机会。
具体写作指导
A Learning Reflection about “Life Long Learning”
——写一篇关于“终身学习”的学习反思
第一步:构思谋篇
Tense Simple present/future tense
Person First person
Main points Part 1:The past knowledge and the reflection Part 2:The present understanding Part 3:The future plan or ways to improve
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 概括收获及反思过去
①“The Importance of Life Long Learning” has helped me better understand_________________________________________.
《终身学习的重要性》帮助我更好地理解了学习的重要性。
②Before reading the text, I ______________________________ about our learning.
在阅读这篇文章之前,我不知道有这么多关于我们学习的令人兴奋和鼓舞人心的例子。
第二部分 介绍学到的内容及反思
1.学到的内容
①At the moment I understand the significance of life long learning,___________________.
此刻,我明白了终身学习的意义,它可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。
②I also learnt that _________________________________________________________,
you can improve yourself through learning.
我也学到了,无论你多大年纪,你都可以通过学习来提高自己。
2.举例说明
Just as the saying says, “You can't teach an old dog new tricks.” _______________________. For me, it is beneficial to know that________________________.
正如俗话所说,“老年人很难适应新事物”,这在今天被证明是错误的。对我来说,知道学习永远不会太晚是有益的。
第三部分 总结全文,点明将来的学习计划或改进措施
1.回应主题,总结全文
Getting to know the importance of life long learning means learning _________________
________________________________________________________________________, but also the ways to finish it.
要了解终身学习的重要性,意味着不仅要学习有关终身学习的事实,还要学习完成终身学习的方法。
2.介绍将来的计划
①In my opinion, I ________________________ and spare no effort to strengthen my will.
在我看来,我计划效仿榜样,不遗余力地增强我的意志。
②________________________, I'll work hard to keep learning and practicing.
在获得新知识时,我会努力不断学习和实践。
③Moreover, I must also learn to do continuous update for ________________________, especially when we get older and older.
此外,我还必须学会不断更新我已经学过的东西,特别是当我们越来越老的时候。
[针对练笔]
请结合你自己的英语学习情况,写一下学习反思。
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1.常用开头句
(1)“The Secrets of Your Memory” has helped me better understand how my memory works.
《记忆的秘密》帮助我更好地理解我的记忆是如何工作的。
(2)The whole article about learning lets me gain more on how to improve my study.
关于学习的整篇文章让我对如何提高我的学习有了更多的了解。
(3)After reading this article “On Study”, I have a better understanding of the methods of studying.
读了《论学习》这篇文章后,我对学习方法有了更好的了解。
2.常用中间句
(1)We should form the habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.
我们应该养成为学习制订计划的习惯,并在学习和娱乐之间保持良好的平衡。
(2)If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help.
如果有困难,我们可以向老师和同学们寻求帮助。
(3)A wide variety of after class activities will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.
丰富多彩的课外活动能拓宽我们的视野,丰富学校生活并让我们放松。
3.常用结束句
(1)I'm sure these methods will help me improve my learning efficiency.
我确信这些方法会帮助我提高学习效率。
(2)I will try these methods to make great progress in my study.
我将尝试这些方法,以在学习上取得很大的进步。
(3)If I change my attitude to learning and think positively, I will get on well with my study.
如果我改变自己的学习态度,积极思考,我的学习就会进展良好。
(二)主题语段
1.反思学习中的问题
Looking back on my English learning path, I was filled with mixed feelings of joy and sorrow.The key to learning English well is to develop a deep interest.However, I was short of interest.I memorised sufficient words, but I couldn't guess all their meanings from the context.
回首我的英语学习历程,我喜忧参半。学好英语的关键是培养浓厚的兴趣。然而,我缺乏兴趣。我记住了足够多的单词,但我无法从上下文中猜出它们的全部含义。
2.改进的措施
To address these problems, first, I plan to create a quiet study environment. I will study in a room without distractions such as a TV or noisy siblings. Second, I will make a detailed study schedule. By strictly following it, I can make sure that every task has enough time to be completed. Third, I will take regular breaks. For example, after studying for 45 minutes, I will take a 10 minute break to relax my mind and body. I hope these measures will help me improve my study.
为了解决这些问题,首先,我打算营造一个安静的学习环境。我会在一个没有诸如电视或者吵闹的兄弟姐妹之类干扰因素的房间里学习。其次,我将制订一个详细的学习计划。通过严格遵守它,我能确保每项任务都有足够的时间去完成。第三,我会定期休息。例如,学习45分钟后,我会休息10分钟来放松身心。我希望这些措施能帮助我提升学习。
Section 8 Writing Workshop
新知深化学习
①what's more/moreover ②Moreover
③To make things worse/What's worse/Worse still
写作专项提能
由教材学写作
①Before attending the party
②not only some of your friends but also a lot of opportunities
具体写作指导
第一部分
① how our learning counts ②didn't know that there are so many exciting and inspiring examples
第二部分
1.①which can make a great difference to our life
②no matter how old you are
2.which turns out to be wrong nowadays; it's never too late to learn
第三部分
1.not only the facts about it
2.①plan to follow the models ②When acquiring new knowledge
③what I have learnt already
[针对练笔]
参考范文:
There was a time when my thoughts wandered.Though I spent two hours in memorising words of a unit, I didn't really grasp the words.But when I concentrate on the words, I just need 40 minutes or less to grasp the words of a unit.To promote efficiency and address this challenge, I reflected on this matter.Nowadays, if I am going to do some reading, I will ask myself a question, “Are you ready to devote yourself to English now?” If my answer is “no”, I won't start the work as it is no use learning English without attention.In this way, I learn English for greater efficiency and my English has improved a lot.
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Section 8
Writing Workshop
课时目标
1.认真阅读作者对《记忆的秘密》文章的反思,理解篇章结构。
2.利用一些单词、短语和句型,学会写学习反思。
3.学会使用过渡衔接词,使文章层次分明。
新知深化学习
写作专项提能
课时检测
目 录
新知深化学习
Moreover, I must also learn to do “spaced review”, especially during the first day after learning.
此外,我还必须学会进行“定时复习”,尤其是在学习后的第一天。
★moreover adv.此外,而且
|用|法|感|知|
·(“运动健身”主题佳句)Bicycling is a good exercise; moreover, it doesn't pollute the air.
骑自行车是一项很好的运动;而且也不污染空气。
·Moreover, the competition will supply you with a chance to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you.
此外,这次竞赛将会给你提供一个机会,帮助你发展创造力,与志同道合的同学建立友谊。
[归纳点拨]
(1)moreover意为“此外,而且;更有甚者”,常用作插入语,相当于what's more、 besides、 furthermore、 in addition等,可位于句首或句中。
(2)what's worse=worse still/to make things worse更糟糕的是
|应|用|融|会|(完成句子)
①I like shopping online;_______________________, I like group purchase.
我喜欢网购,而且我喜欢团购。
②__________, studying for a degree in different cultures is never easy.
此外,在不同的文化中攻读学位从来都不是一件容易的事。
Moreover
what's more/moreover
③It's getting dark.______________________________________ it's raining harder and harder.
天要黑了。更糟糕的是,雨越下越大
To make things worse/What's worse/Worse still,
写作专项提能
写作项目——Write a Learning Reflection
本单元的写作项目是写一篇学习反思,主要总结归纳自己学习的收获和感想,属于议论文。一般会用简洁、生动的语言把对所学知识的反思准确、完整地表达出来,以使自己能有所提高。学习反思主要包括对过去知识的反思,反思从中学到了什么、如何提高自己等。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
阅读课文,
总结该
文体的
框架结
构如右:
二、学要点构思
学习反思是议论性较强的读书笔记,用切身体会、实践经验和生动的事例来阐明从“读”中悟出的道理。因此,文章既要叙述,又要说理。叙述是议论的基础,议论又是叙述的深化,二者相互结合。第一段主要反思自己过去对记忆的认识,引出话题。先点明《记忆的秘密》一文对自己的帮助,并提出自己在读这篇文章之前对记忆的认识
不够充分,点题明确,过渡自然。第二段主要叙述了作者从《记忆的秘密》一文中学到的关于记忆的一些信息。在陈述自己的感悟时,引用了原文中的一些句子来进一步表明自己对记忆的理解。最后一段主要讲述为了提高自己的记忆作者要采取的措施,紧密结合自身实际,言之有物。
三、学行文逻辑
此类文章的行文通常按照从对所学文章的理解到自我反思的逻辑
顺序推进,分析部分要条理清晰,反思内容要与文章紧密结合且具有一定深度和合理性。对自己过去的认识进行反思时常使用before ...I didn't know...;反思现在的认识时常使用at the moment I understand ...; now I have learnt ...;介绍以后的计划或措施时常使用also; what's more/moreover; not only ...but also ...; in addition等使行文更连贯;在反思时常运用例证法来证明自己的观点,如for example等。
[提能训练] (完成句子)
①________________________, I didn't know so many celebrities would be present.
在参加这个晚会之前,我不知道有那么多的名人会出席。
Before attending the party
②Moving out of this city means losing _______________________
__________________________.
搬离这座城市意味着你不仅会失去一些朋友,还会失去很多机会。
具体写作指导
A Learning Reflection about “Life-Long Learning”
——写一篇关于“终身学习”的学习反思
第一步:构思谋篇
but also a lot of opportunities
not only some of your friends
Tense Simple present/future tense
Person First person
Main points Part 1:The past knowledge and the reflection
Part 2:The present understanding
Part 3:The future plan or ways to improve
第二步:要点表达
第一部分 概括收获及反思过去
①“The Importance of Life-Long Learning” has helped me better understand________________________
《终身学习的重要性》帮助我更好地理解了学习的重要性。
how our learning counts.
②Before reading the text, I _______________________________
_____________________________about our learning.
在阅读这篇文章之前,我不知道有这么多关于我们学习的令人兴奋和鼓舞人心的例子。
didn't know that there are so many
exciting and inspiring examples
第二部分 介绍学到的内容及反思
1.学到的内容
①At the moment I understand the significance of life-long learning,_______________________________________.
此刻,我明白了终身学习的意义,它可以对我们的生活产生很大的影响。
which can make a great difference to our life
②I also learnt that_________________________, you can improve yourself through learning.
我也学到了,无论你多大年纪,你都可以通过学习来提高自己。
2.举例说明
Just as the saying says, “You can't teach an old dog new tricks.”__________________________________.For me, it is beneficial to know that_______________________.
which turns out to be wrong nowadays
no matter how old you are
it's never too late to learn
正如俗话所说,“老年人很难适应新事物”,这在今天被证明是错误的。对我来说,知道学习永远不会太晚是有益的。
第三部分 总结全文,点明将来的学习计划或改进措施
1.回应主题,总结全文
Getting to know the importance of life-long learning means learning__________________________, but also the ways to finish it.
not only the facts about it
要了解终身学习的重要性,意味着不仅要学习有关终身学习的事实,还要学习完成终身学习的方法。
2.介绍将来的计划
①In my opinion, I ______________________and spare no effort to strengthen my will.
在我看来,我计划效仿榜样,不遗余力地增强我的意志。
plan to follow the models
②_____________________________, I'll work hard to keep learning and practicing.
在获得新知识时,我会努力不断学习和实践。
③Moreover, I must also learn to do continuous update for
___________________________, especially when we get older and older.
此外,我还必须学会不断更新我已经学过的东西,特别是当我们越来越老的时候。
When acquiring new knowledge
what I have learnt already
[针对练笔]
请结合你自己的英语学习情况,写一下学习反思。
参考范文:
There was a time when my thoughts wandered.Though I spent two hours in memorising words of a unit, I didn't really grasp the words.But when I concentrate on the words, I just need 40 minutes or less to grasp the words of a unit.To promote efficiency and address
this challenge, I reflected on this matter.Nowadays, if I am going to do some reading, I will ask myself a question, “Are you ready to devote yourself to English now?” If my answer is “no”, I won't start the work as it is no use learning English without attention.In this way, I learn English for greater efficiency and my English has improved a lot.
写作素材储备
(一)写作佳句
1.常用开头句
(1)“The Secrets of Your Memory” has helped me better understand how my memory works.
《记忆的秘密》帮助我更好地理解我的记忆是如何工作的。
(2)The whole article about learning lets me gain more on how to improve my study.
关于学习的整篇文章让我对如何提高我的学习有了更多的了解。
(3)After reading this article “On Study”, I have a better understanding of the methods of studying.
读了《论学习》这篇文章后,我对学习方法有了更好的了解。
2.常用中间句
(1)We should form the habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.
我们应该养成为学习制订计划的习惯,并在学习和娱乐之间保持良好的平衡。
(2)If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help.
如果有困难,我们可以向老师和同学们寻求帮助。
(3)A wide variety of after-class activities will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.
丰富多彩的课外活动能拓宽我们的视野,丰富学校生活并让我们放松。
3.常用结束句
(1)I'm sure these methods will help me improve my learning efficiency.
我确信这些方法会帮助我提高学习效率。
(2)I will try these methods to make great progress in my study.
我将尝试这些方法,以在学习上取得很大的进步。
(3)If I change my attitude to learning and think positively, I will get on well with my study.
如果我改变自己的学习态度,积极思考,我的学习就会进展良好。
(二)主题语段
1.反思学习中的问题
Looking back on my English learning path, I was filled with mixed feelings of joy and sorrow.The key to learning English well is to
develop a deep interest.However, I was short of interest.I memorised sufficient words, but I couldn't guess all their meanings from the context.
回首我的英语学习历程,我喜忧参半。学好英语的关键是培养浓厚的兴趣。然而,我缺乏兴趣。我记住了足够多的单词,但我无法从上下文中猜出它们的全部含义。
2.改进的措施
To address these problems, first, I plan to create a quiet study environment. I will study in a room without distractions such as a TV or noisy siblings. Second, I will make a detailed study schedule. By strictly following it, I can make sure that every task has enough time to be completed. Third, I will take regular breaks. For example, after
studying for 45 minutes, I will take a 10-minute break to relax my mind and body. I hope these measures will help me improve my study.
为了解决这些问题,首先,我打算营造一个安静的学习环境。我会在一个没有诸如电视或者吵闹的兄弟姐妹之类干扰因素的房间里学习。其次,我将制订一个详细的学习计划。通过严格遵守它,我能确保每项任务都有足够的时间去完成。第三,我会定期休息。例如,学习45分钟后,我会休息10分钟来放松身心。我希望这些措施能帮助我提升学习。
课时检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1.Your encouragement and instructions have guided me in the right direction.(强调句)
→________________________________________ have guided me in the right direction.
It is your encouragement and instructions that
2.Most important of all, I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese.(主语从句)
→______________________________ I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese.
3.I find that working in groups enhances our understanding of the material and improves our communication and teamwork skills.
What is the most important is that
①I find that working in groups_________________________________
____________________________________________________________
_____.(not only ...but also ...)
②I find that ________________________________________________
_____________, but also improves our communication and teamwork skills.(倒装句)
not only enhances our understanding
of the material, but also improves our communication and teamwork
skills
not only does working in groups enhance our
understanding
of the material
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1.①_______________________________________________________ (我发现掌握一些习语的意思很有挑战性) while reading English texts.They often confuse me, and ②_______________________________________ (我不确定如何解释它们).I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, so ③___________________________________________ ______ (我将采取措施提高我对它们的理解).
I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms
I'm not sure how to interpret them correctly
I will take measures to improve my understanding
of them
2.①________________________________________ (我在英语学习方面遇到了很多困难).First, I find our texts full of new words that ②________________________________ (对我来说难以记住).Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite.What's more, ③______________ ___________________(语法也很难学).
I have met much difficulty in learning English
are very difficult for me to memorise
grammar is also
very difficult to learn
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,明日你班英语课课前3分钟自由表达的主题是“如何高效学习”。请你以“How to Study Effectively”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你对高效学习的看法。内容包括:
1.你对高效学习的理解;
2.你的建议。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
参考范文:
How to Study Effectively
Efficient learning means using the shortest time to understand
what you do not know and fulfill what you cannot do, constantly
improving
yourself.There are some suggestions we can use for maximum efficiency.
First, a good attitude is an indispensable factor.However smart you
are, as long as you have a bad attitude, there is surely no good
result.What we need to do next is to set a specific goal.Just as
importantly, we should identify everyday work and make a sensible plan.
All in all, only when we have a clear plan and stick to the well-made
plan, can we see our hard work pay off.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eleven-year-old Kristina shouted on the phone.Vera, her mother, packing lunches for her two children, heard the shouting and dashed to Kristina.Kristina gave her the phone.Kristina was talking to her father at his doctor's office in Moscow, Russia.
“Vlad, why is Kristina shouting?” began Vera in Russian.
“Vera, this afternoon I must attend a conference at her school.But I cannot be there.I have an important meeting.Why don't you attend it?” Vlad replied.
“How can I go?”
“You are not going to a forest.You'll be fine!”
“I know, but I can't speak English properly.It's a rule at her school.”
“You can manage.GO!”
Vera turned to Kristina, “Kristina, your father is busy.I will come instead of him.”
Kristina shouted, “Mother, you can't speak English.How can you come to the conference NO!” She plowed through her mother and ran sobbing.But Vera convinced Kristina.As there was no option, she agreed and left for school.
Vera was depressed.She felt that if only she knew English, she could avoid such situations.But “how is it possible for me to learn English while balancing so many tasks?” Suddenly, she realized that Andrei was getting late, so she got him ready and walked him to school.
In the afternoon, Vera attended the conference at the school.All the teachers and staff gave a warm welcome to Vera.Kristina kept quieting her mother.All she said were phrases like, “You are embarrassing!” “Stop talking!” and “You do not know English!” Ignoring her daughter's comments, Vera managed to keep her cool and finished the meeting.
After delivering a cake to a customer, Vera went home to start dinner.At home, she asked her mother-in-law where Kristina was.She said that Kristina had gone to study with her friends.While they were talking, Kristina walked in.
Vera asked, “Why did you go out You can study at home, you know!”
“I have doubts about English Literature.Can YOU clarify them?” Kristina said in an arrogant (傲慢的) tone.
At dinner, Vera complained about Kristina's behavior to Vlad.But he laughed and said, “Well, if you knew English, Kristina would not have to suffer like this.” Then he added, “This food is delicious.At least you are good at something!” That night, Vera was tossing and turning as she thought about her hurt feelings.“Like father, like
daughter.If my husband doesn't respect me, then how can my children respect me I must learn English.No matter how hard it may be, I must master English,” she thought.
注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;
2.重点描写Vera学习英语的过程和取得的进步,以及家人们的反应。
The next day, she saw an advertisement from LCC, The London Language Center, on the TV.
参考范文:
The next day, she saw an advertisement from LCC, The London Language Center, on the TV. They offered English classes to newcomers.Vera called their number and signed up for a four-week course.Every day, she managed to attend the class.She grasped every chance to communicate in English.In the last week, she passed the test and announced the good news to the family in English.Kristina
excitedly hugged her and said, “Congratulations, Mum! I am proud of you and sorry for what I said.” Vera smiled happily and felt, “With determination, anything is possible.”
[阅读拓展训练]
Schools across the world are trying to come up with solutions to keep students active.Some are replacing traditional classroom chairs with exercise balls or standing desks.At Ward Elementary School in
Winston, North Carolina, students have adopted a new program that requires riding fixed bikes while reading.
“Read and Ride” is the creation of school counselor Scott Ertl, who came up with the idea while he was exercising and reading at the gym.Believing it would be a fun way to convince students to become more active, he placed one in the corner of his classroom and encouraged them to use it during independent reading classes.
It was so popular that Ertl decided to add more bikes and offer the Read and Ride program to the entire school.Today Ward Elementary School has a dedicated exercise room filled with bikes that can be used by students while completing their daily reading assignments.
Besides making reading more fun, the program also helps students exercise at a comfortable pace without the pressure that comes with regular sports-related activities.It is also a perfect way to release energy during days when the weather is not helpful to outdoor activities.
Most importantly, however, are the program's academic benefits.A year after Read and Ride was introduced into Ward Elementary School, students actively involved in the program demonstrated an astonishing 83% reading proficiency.Those who had not taken advantage of the exercise bikes tested at a much lower reading proficiency, which was 41%.
Though the substantial improvement in academic achievement cannot all be attributed to programs like Read and Ride, experts believe they are a significant contributor.That's because studies have shown that physical activity stimulates (刺激) brain cells and helps prepare it for learning.As word of the difference made by this easy to execute exercise program spreads, don't be surprised to find schools across the country adopt “Read and Ride” for their students.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了一位学校辅导员想出的“一边骑车,一边读书”活动项目,不仅提高了学生的阅读能力,还让学生更健康、更聪明。
1.What is the new program at Ward Elementary School
A.Kids ride bikes as they read.
B.Kids exercise balls and read at the gym.
C.Kids sit at desks for long while reading.
D.Kids do outdoor activities during lessons.
解析:细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句可知,Ward Elementary School的新项目是让学生一边骑车,一边阅读。
√
2.How do the students at Ward Elementary School benefit from the program
A.They exercise with high pressure.
B.They feel reading fun and learn better.
C.They improve their sense of competition.
D.They are instructed to read at the same pace.
√
解析:推理判断题。根据第四段第一句和第五段内容可知,参与这个项目的学生的阅读能力大幅提高,而且这个项目能让学生感觉到学习的快乐。
3.What can we learn from the last paragraph
A.The program will be more and more popular.
B.Schools doubt whether the program is available.
C.Physical activities prevent kids from learning more.
D.The school achievement depends wholly on the program.
解析:推理判断题。根据最后一段最后一句可知,这个项目将会越来越受欢迎,因为有越来越多的学校加入这个项目。
√
4.What is the main idea of the passage
A.Standing desks help school kids focus on their studies.
B.Traditional teaching methods should be banned in the near future.
C.“Read and Ride” aims to make students healthier and smarter.
D.Kids need to release energy during independent reading classes.
√
解析:主旨大意题。通读全文,尤其根据第二段内容可知,文章主要介绍了“一边骑车,一边读书”的活动项目,其目的是让学生更健康、更聪明。故C项可概括本文主旨。UNIT 9 课时检测(八) Writing Workshop
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1.Your encouragement and instructions have guided me in the right direction.(强调句)
→________________________________________________________________________
have guided me in the right direction.
2.Most important of all, I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese.(主语从句)
→________________________ I will not miss every chance to communicate with others in Chinese.
3.I find that working in groups enhances our understanding of the material and improves our communication and teamwork skills.
①I find that working in groups _________________________________________.(not only ...but also ...)
②I find that ______________________________________________________, but also improves our communication and teamwork skills.(倒装句)
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1.①________________________________ (我发现掌握一些习语的意思很有挑战性) while reading English texts.They often confuse me, and ②__________________ (我不确定如何解释它们).I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, so ③_________________________________________ (我将采取措施提高我对它们的理解).
2.①________________________ (我在英语学习方面遇到了很多困难).First, I find our texts full of new words that ②____________________________________ (对我来说难以记住).Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite.What's more, ③________________________ (语法也很难学).
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,明日你班英语课课前3分钟自由表达的主题是“如何高效学习”。请你以“How to Study Effectively”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你对高效学习的看法。内容包括:
1.你对高效学习的理解;
2.你的建议。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
How to Study Effectively
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eleven year old Kristina shouted on the phone.Vera, her mother, packing lunches for her two children, heard the shouting and dashed to Kristina.Kristina gave her the phone.Kristina was talking to her father at his doctor's office in Moscow, Russia.
“Vlad, why is Kristina shouting?” began Vera in Russian.
“Vera, this afternoon I must attend a conference at her school.But I cannot be there.I have an important meeting.Why don't you attend it?” Vlad replied.
“How can I go?”
“You are not going to a forest.You'll be fine!”
“I know, but I can't speak English properly.It's a rule at her school.”
“You can manage.GO!”
Vera turned to Kristina, “Kristina, your father is busy.I will come instead of him.”
Kristina shouted, “Mother, you can't speak English.How can you come to the conference NO!” She plowed through her mother and ran sobbing.But Vera convinced Kristina.As there was no option, she agreed and left for school.
Vera was depressed.She felt that if only she knew English, she could avoid such situations.But “how is it possible for me to learn English while balancing so many tasks?” Suddenly, she realized that Andrei was getting late, so she got him ready and walked him to school.
In the afternoon, Vera attended the conference at the school.All the teachers and staff gave a warm welcome to Vera.Kristina kept quieting her mother.All she said were phrases like, “You are embarrassing!” “Stop talking!” and “You do not know English!” Ignoring her daughter's comments, Vera managed to keep her cool and finished the meeting.
After delivering a cake to a customer, Vera went home to start dinner.At home, she asked her mother in law where Kristina was.She said that Kristina had gone to study with her friends.While they were talking, Kristina walked in.
Vera asked, “Why did you go out You can study at home, you know!”
“I have doubts about English Literature.Can YOU clarify them?” Kristina said in an arrogant (傲慢的) tone.
At dinner, Vera complained about Kristina's behavior to Vlad.But he laughed and said, “Well, if you knew English, Kristina would not have to suffer like this.” Then he added, “This food is delicious.At least you are good at something!” That night, Vera was tossing and turning as she thought about her hurt feelings.“Like father, like daughter.If my husband doesn't respect me, then how can my children respect me I must learn English.No matter how hard it may be, I must master English,” she thought.
注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;
2.重点描写Vera学习英语的过程和取得的进步,以及家人们的反应。
The next day, she saw an advertisement from LCC, The London Language Center, on the TV.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
[阅读拓展训练]
Schools across the world are trying to come up with solutions to keep students active.Some are replacing traditional classroom chairs with exercise balls or standing desks.At Ward Elementary School in Winston, North Carolina, students have adopted a new program that requires riding fixed bikes while reading.
“Read and Ride” is the creation of school counselor Scott Ertl, who came up with the idea while he was exercising and reading at the gym.Believing it would be a fun way to convince students to become more active, he placed one in the corner of his classroom and encouraged them to use it during independent reading classes.
It was so popular that Ertl decided to add more bikes and offer the Read and Ride program to the entire school.Today Ward Elementary School has a dedicated exercise room filled with bikes that can be used by students while completing their daily reading assignments.
Besides making reading more fun, the program also helps students exercise at a comfortable pace without the pressure that comes with regular sports related activities.It is also a perfect way to release energy during days when the weather is not helpful to outdoor activities.
Most importantly, however, are the program's academic benefits.A year after Read and Ride was introduced into Ward Elementary School, students actively involved in the program demonstrated an astonishing 83% reading proficiency.Those who had not taken advantage of the exercise bikes tested at a much lower reading proficiency, which was 41%.
Though the substantial improvement in academic achievement cannot all be attributed to programs like Read and Ride, experts believe they are a significant contributor.That's because studies have shown that physical activity stimulates (刺激) brain cells and helps prepare it for learning.As word of the difference made by this easy to execute exercise program spreads, don't be surprised to find schools across the country adopt “Read and Ride” for their students.
1.What is the new program at Ward Elementary School
A.Kids ride bikes as they read.
B.Kids exercise balls and read at the gym.
C.Kids sit at desks for long while reading.
D.Kids do outdoor activities during lessons.
2.How do the students at Ward Elementary School benefit from the program
A.They exercise with high pressure.
B.They feel reading fun and learn better.
C.They improve their sense of competition.
D.They are instructed to read at the same pace.
3.What can we learn from the last paragraph
A.The program will be more and more popular.
B.Schools doubt whether the program is available.
C.Physical activities prevent kids from learning more.
D.The school achievement depends wholly on the program.
4.What is the main idea of the passage
A.Standing desks help school kids focus on their studies.
B.Traditional teaching methods should be banned in the near future.
C.“Read and Ride” aims to make students healthier and smarter.
D.Kids need to release energy during independent reading classes.
UNIT 9 课时检测(八)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.It is your encouragement and instructions that
2.What is the most important is that
3.①not only enhances our understanding of the material, but also improves our communication and teamwork skills
②not only does working in groups enhance our understanding of the material
Ⅱ.1.①I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms
②I'm not sure how to interpret them correctly
③I will take measures to improve my understanding of them
2.①I have met much difficulty in learning English
②are very difficult for me to memorise
③grammar is also very difficult to learn
Ⅲ.应用文写作
参考范文:
How to Study Effectively
Efficient learning means using the shortest time to understand what you do not know and fulfill what you cannot do, constantly improving yourself.There are some suggestions we can use for maximum efficiency.
First, a good attitude is an indispensable factor.However smart you are, as long as you have a bad attitude, there is surely no good result.What we need to do next is to set a specific goal.Just as importantly, we should identify everyday work and make a sensible plan.
All in all, only when we have a clear plan and stick to the wellmade plan, can we see our hard work pay off.
Ⅳ.读后续写
参考范文:
The next day, she saw an advertisement from LCC, The London Language Center, on the TV. They offered English classes to newcomers.Vera called their number and signed up for a fourweek course.Every day, she managed to attend the class.She grasped every chance to communicate in English.In the last week, she passed the test and announced the good news to the family in English.Kristina excitedly hugged her and said, “Congratulations, Mum! I am proud of you and sorry for what I said.” Vera smiled happily and felt, “With determination, anything is possible.”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了一位学校辅导员想出的“一边骑车,一边读书”活动项目,不仅提高了学生的阅读能力,还让学生更健康、更聪明。
1.选A 细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句可知,Ward Elementary School的新项目是让学生一边骑车,一边阅读。
2.选B 推理判断题。根据第四段第一句和第五段内容可知,参与这个项目的学生的阅读能力大幅提高,而且这个项目能让学生感觉到学习的快乐。
3.选A 推理判断题。根据最后一段最后一句可知,这个项目将会越来越受欢迎,因为有越来越多的学校加入这个项目。
4.选C 主旨大意题。通读全文,尤其根据第二段内容可知,文章主要介绍了“一边骑车,一边读书”的活动项目,其目的是让学生更健康、更聪明。故C项可概括本文主旨。
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