Unit 1 主题写作专项素养提优
话题概述
本单元的写作任务是“人物介绍”,要求学生根据所学的单词、短语和句型介绍自己或他人的相关信息,通常涉及的细分话题有:介绍自己或他人的基本信息,如姓名、年龄、职业、爱好、生活习惯、梦想或经历等。该话题常见的体裁有记叙文和应用文,如书信、电子邮件或演讲稿等。
写作实例
假如你是李华,准备参加演讲比赛,请写一篇英文演讲稿介绍自己,内容包括以下几个方面:
1. What are your hobbies and why do you enjoy them
2. What is your dream job and what will you do to make it come true
要求:1.演讲稿必须包括所有提示内容,可以适当发挥;
2.演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.词数80左右(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to introduce myself.
Thanks for your listening!
审题指导
1.体裁:应用文。2.时态:以一般现在时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。
4.必备词句:①introduce oneself介绍自己;②be interested in对······感兴趣;③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事;④keep healthy保持健康;⑤in one’ s opinion在某人看来;⑥dream of doing sth.梦想做某事;⑦come true 成为现实;⑧keep doing sth.持续做某事;⑨try one’ s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事;⑩stick to 坚持; Although it is not easy, I will try my best to stick to my dream.尽管这并不容易,我也会尽我最大的努力来坚持我的梦想。
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
优秀范文
Hello, everyone!①
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to introduce myself.②
I have two hobbies③. My first hobby is playing basketball. I am interested in it because it can help me keep healthy. My second hobby is painting. In my opinion④, painting is an enjoyable and relaxing hobby and it can bring me much pleasure.
My dream job is to be a basketball player. I dream of playing forCBA. To make my dream come true⑤, I will keep practising hard.Although⑤it is not easy, I will try my best to stick to④ my dream.
Thanks for your listening!①
亮点评析
①开头和结尾符合演讲稿的写作格式。
②以亲切的语言点明演讲稿的主题————自我介绍。
③该句是段落主题句,引出本段对两个爱好的介绍。
④in one's opinion 和 stick to属于比较高级的表达,提升了文章的档次。
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
⑤使用了动词不定式作目的状语以及 although 引导的让步状语从句,增加了文章的亮点。
以读促写 以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①be full of;②keep on doing sth.;③dream of;④learn to do sth.;⑤give up;⑥be ready to do sth.;⑦have a special interest in;⑧be satisfied with;⑨deal with;⑩encourage sb. to do sth.; at the beginning of; in order to; make up one's mind; with the help of; His kindness spread throughout the village, encouraging people to follow his example. Peng was born in ShandongProvince in 2004. It was there that Peng found her love for swimming.
写作实战 答案(含基础版范文和进阶版范文)D4
在今天的英语课上,我们学习的话题是“Thisisme”。每个人都是与众不同的,我们要了解自己、喜欢自己、接纳自己。假如你叫李明,请你写一篇短文介绍自己,将自己的独特之处介绍给大家。你可以从以下几个方面来写:
1. What are your strong points and weak points
2. What's your dream job What will you do to make your dream come true
要求:
1.短文必须包括提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Ming. I'm in Grade Eight now.
Unit 1 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Ming. I'm in Grade Eight now. I'd like to introduce myself.
I have my own strong points. I'm good at speakingEnglish. I can also play the piano very well. I also have my weak points. I'm not good at sports. I don't have good grades in PE exams.
My dream job is to be a professional pianist. To make my dream come true, I will spend more time practising playing the piano. I will also catch every chance to take part in more piano competitions. I will try my best to make my dream come true.
That's all about me. I hope we can be friends.
进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Ming. I'm in Grade Eight now. I'd like to tell you more about myself.
Everyone has their strong points and weak points,including me. Speaking good English and playing the piano well are two of my strong points. My weak point has something to do with PE. I'm so weak in PE that Icouldn't pass any PE exams. I'm worried about all my PEexams.
I'm going to be a professional pianist when I grow up. In order to realize my dream, I will spend more time practising playing the piano. I will also keep on taking piano lessons. My piano skills will improve if I practise hard. I will stick to my dream although it's not easy to be a professional pianist.
That's all about me. I hope we can be friends.