Period 6 写作(Writing)
写影评
本单元的写作任务是写一篇影评，即根据所给电影或所给相关信息提炼重点，对电影做必要的介绍，并抒发自己的感想。介绍电影情节时要抓住重点，电影评论部分要客观公正，可从故事主题、人物塑造等方面作出评价。介绍剧情时以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，人称多用第三人称。
一、基本框架
1．开头：电影简介(上映日期、类型、导演等)；
2．主体：剧情简介；
3．结尾：发表评论。
二、常用表达
1．The film is set in a remote mountainous village．
这部电影以一个偏远的山村为背景。
2．The film tells us the friendship between a boy and a tiger．
这部影片讲述了一个男孩和一只老虎之间的友谊。
3．The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland．
最令人难忘的一幕是主人公是如何克服困难回到他的祖国的。
4．I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness．
我被人物的勇敢和善良深深打动了。
5．This is a very touching film and a must-see．
这是一部非常感人的电影，一部必看的电影。
6．As far as I'm concerned，the film can be called the best film．
在我看来，这部影片堪称最佳影片。
7．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy．
这是一部老少咸宜的好影片。
8．Even with these small problems，the film is still a great film，and I really enjoy it!
即使有这些小问题，这部电影仍然是一部很棒的电影，我非常喜欢它！
假定你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。
片名 The Wandering Earth《流浪地球》
剧情 影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。
评论 ……
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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[审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文是一篇影评，属于议论文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4．确定内容：
①引入话题；
②情节概述；
③作出评论。
[遣词造句]
1．《流浪地球》是一部科幻影片，改编自一部同名小说。
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，and it _______________ a novel of the same name．
2．影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不再适合人类生存。
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun ____________ and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．
3．面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划。
When they _________________________ of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project．
4．他们试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。
They _____________ the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
5．该影片自上映以来深受观众欢迎。
The film _____________________ audiences since its release．
6．它必定是一部你不容错过的令人惊奇的影片。
It is definitely _______________ you shouldn't miss．
[句式升级]
1．用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句1
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2．用动词-ed形式作状语改写句3，并用动词-ing形式作状语与句4合并
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[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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动作描写 头部动作
[词块积累]
1．nod one's head 点头
2．shake one's head 摇头
3．lower one's head 低下头
4．clear one's head 清醒一下头脑
5．meet sb．'s eyes 接触某人的目光
6．catch one's eye 吸引某人的注意
7．whisper in one's ear 在某人耳边低语
8．put one's head in one's hands 双手抱头
9．one's mouth half opened 某人的嘴半张着
10．put one's hands to one's cheeks 用双手捂住脸
[佳句积累]
1．The smile froze on her lips．
她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．He ducked his head and stepped back to his seat．
他低下头，回到座位上。
3．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily．
那双眼睛慢慢地转过来，目光锐利而坚定地注视着她。
4．I felt all the people present were looking at me with strange eyes．
我感到所有在场的人都用奇怪的眼光看着我。
5．He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning．
当他听到门把手转动的声音时，他向门那边看去。
6．His mother stopped her housework，raising her head with surprise in her eyes．
他的母亲停下了家务活，满眼诧异地抬起头。
7．When he got home，he buried his head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep．
回到家中，他把头埋到被子底下，假装睡着了。
8．When recognizing who the visitor was，John opened his mouth with his eyes widening．
当认出来访客是谁时，约翰张大了嘴巴，眼睛睁得大大的。
9．Steven rose，sat close to his mother and rested his head against his mother's shoulder，weeping．
史蒂文起来坐在母亲身边，将头靠在她的肩膀上，哭泣了起来。
10．At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food．
起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，把嘴里塞满食物。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My story is about my mother's beautiful ball gown(舞裙)．She had carefully wrapped it in paper and placed it in a cardboard box and it was hidden away in a top cupboard．From time to time it would be lifted out of its box and shown to us，and as small girls we would imagine the day when we might be allowed to try it on．That never happened．
The top cupboard where the dress was stored happened to be in my bedroom．One day when I was around the age of nine or ten，I was very anxious to try it on．I quickly pulled the gown over my head．My mother's waist(腰) must have been extremely tiny as it fitted my waist with little room to spare．
Suddenly，I realized that my mother would be home soon，so I hurriedly undressed but I accidentally spilt(洒) a bottle of ink over the bottom of the dress．I was shocked and scared．Carefully，I put it into the box and replaced the box onto the shelf．I lived with the fear throughout my teenage years that it would eventually be discovered．
The years passed and my mother grew old and became ill．I made the decision that she would come to live in a nursing home near me．Before she went there，I decided to arrange an afternoon tea with a group of her closest friends．Mom and her friends talked about their past days．
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．_______________________________________________________________
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Period 6
应用文写作
遣词造句
1．is adapted from 2．is dying out 3．are faced with the danger 4．try to escape 5．has been popular with 6．an amazing film
句式升级
1．The Wandering Earth is a scifi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
2．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
连句成篇
[参考范文]
The Wandering Earth is a scifi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
The film has been popular with audiences since its release．Therefore，it is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss．
读后续写
续写初练笔
[参考范文]
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress． My mother said she could never understand how it got a terrible ink mark on the beautiful dress which was stored so carefully．When she looked at me，I found myself in front of my mother redfaced，shame washing over me．I was not sure whether my mother would forgive me．But I gathered all my courage to tell her the truth and apologized to her．My mother was touched and forgave me．At last，I was released from that awful secret carried deep inside me from my childhood．
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Period 6
Unit 4 Stage and screen
主题语境
人与社会——戏剧与影视
本单元的写作任务是写一篇影评，即根据所给电影或所给相关信息提炼重点，对电影做必要的介绍，并抒发自己的感想。介绍电影情节时要抓住重点，电影评论部分要客观公正，可从故事主题、人物塑造等方面作出评价。介绍剧情时以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，人称多用第三人称。
写影评
课时学案 写作(Writing)
一、基本框架
1．开头：电影简介(上映日期、类型、导演等)；
2．主体：剧情简介；
3．结尾：发表评论。
二、常用表达
1．The film is set in a remote mountainous village．
这部电影以一个偏远的山村为背景。
2．The film tells us the friendship between a boy and a tiger．
这部影片讲述了一个男孩和一只老虎之间的友谊。
3．The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland．
最令人难忘的一幕是主人公是如何克服困难回到他的祖国的。
4．I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness．
我被人物的勇敢和善良深深打动了。
5．This is a very touching film and a must-see．
这是一部非常感人的电影，一部必看的电影。
6．As far as I'm concerned，the film can be called the best film．
在我看来，这部影片堪称最佳影片。
7．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy．
这是一部老少咸宜的好影片。
8．Even with these small problems，the film is still a great film，and I really enjoy it!
即使有这些小问题，这部电影仍然是一部很棒的电影，我非常喜欢它！
假定你是李华，你校英语报开设了一个介绍影视作品的专栏，请根据下面表格中的提示为该栏目写一篇关于电影《流浪地球》的影评。
片名 The Wandering Earth《流浪地球》
剧情 影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不适合人类生存。面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。
评论 ……
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[审题构思]
1．确定体裁：本文是一篇影评，属于议论文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主体时态为一般现在时。
4．确定内容：
①引入话题；
②情节概述；
③作出评论。
[遣词造句]
1．《流浪地球》是一部科幻影片，改编自一部同名小说。
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，and it _______________ a novel of the same name．
2．影片讲述了在不久的未来，太阳即将毁灭，太阳系已经不再适合人类生存。
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun ____________ and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．
is adapted from
is dying out
3．面临灭绝的危险境地，人类将开启“流浪地球”计划。
When they ______________________ of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project．
4．他们试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类的新家园。
They _____________ the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
5．该影片自上映以来深受观众欢迎。
The film _____________________ audiences since its release．
6．它必定是一部你不容错过的令人惊奇的影片。
It is definitely _______________ you shouldn't miss．
are faced with the danger
try to escape
has been popular with
an amazing film
[句式升级]
1．用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句1
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．用动词-ed形式作状语改写句3，并用动词-ing形式作状语与句4合并
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
The film has been popular with audiences since its release．Therefore，it is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss．
[词块积累]
1．nod one's head 点头
2．shake one's head 摇头
3．lower one's head 低下头
4．clear one's head 清醒一下头脑
动作描写 头部动作
5．meet sb．'s eyes 接触某人的目光
6．catch one's eye 吸引某人的注意
7．whisper in one's ear 在某人耳边低语
8．put one's head in one's hands 双手抱头
9．one's mouth half opened 某人的嘴半张着
10．put one's hands to one's cheeks 用双手捂住脸
[佳句积累]
1．The smile froze on her lips．
她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．He ducked his head and stepped back to his seat．
他低下头，回到座位上。
3．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily．
那双眼睛慢慢地转过来，目光锐利而坚定地注视着她。
4．I felt all the people present were looking at me with strange eyes．
我感到所有在场的人都用奇怪的眼光看着我。
5．He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning．
当他听到门把手转动的声音时，他向门那边看去。
6．His mother stopped her housework，raising her head with surprise in her eyes．
他的母亲停下了家务活，满眼诧异地抬起头。
7．When he got home，he buried his head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep．
回到家中，他把头埋到被子底下，假装睡着了。
8．When recognizing who the visitor was，John opened his mouth with his eyes widening．
当认出来访客是谁时，约翰张大了嘴巴，眼睛睁得大大的。
9．Steven rose，sat close to his mother and rested his head against his mother's shoulder，weeping．
史蒂文起来坐在母亲身边，将头靠在她的肩膀上，哭泣了起来。
10．At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food．
起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，把嘴里塞满食物。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My story is about my mother's beautiful ball gown(舞裙)．She had carefully wrapped it in paper and placed it in a cardboard box and it was hidden away in a top cupboard．From time to time it would be lifted out of its box and shown to us，and as small girls we would imagine the day when we might be allowed to try it on．That never happened．
The top cupboard where the dress was stored happened to be in my bedroom．One day when I was around the age of nine or ten，I was very anxious to try it on．I quickly pulled the gown over my head．My mother's waist(腰) must have been extremely tiny as it fitted my waist with little room to spare．
Suddenly，I realized that my mother would be home soon，so I hurriedly undressed but I accidentally spilt(洒) a bottle of ink over the bottom of the dress．I was shocked and scared．Carefully，I put it into the box and replaced the box onto the shelf．I lived with the fear throughout my teenage years that it would eventually be discovered．
The years passed and my mother grew old and became ill．I made the decision that she would come to live in a nursing home near me．Before she went there，I decided to arrange an afternoon tea with a group of her closest friends．Mom and her friends talked about their past days．
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．My mother said she could never understand how it got a terrible ink mark on the beautiful dress which was stored so carefully．When she looked at me，I found myself in front of my mother red-faced，shame washing over me．I was not sure whether my mother would forgive me．But I gathered all my courage to tell her the truth and apologized to her．My mother was touched and forgave me．At last，I was released from that awful secret carried deep inside me from my childhood．
Ⅰ．阅读理解
A
I have a special place in my heart for libraries．I have for as long as I can remember．I was always an enthusiastic reader，sometimes reading up to three books a day as a child．Stories were like air to me and while other kids played ball or went to parties，I lived out adventures through the books I checked out from the library．
课时分层作业(十二)
My first job was working at the Ukiah Library when I was 16 years old．It was a dream job and I did everything from shelving books to reading to the children for story time．
As I grew older and became a mother，the library took on a new place and an added meaning in my life．I had several children and books were our main source(来源) of entertainment．It was a big deal for us to load up and go to the local library，where my kids could pick out books to read or books they wanted me to read to them．
I always read，using different voices，as though I were acting out the stories with my voice and they loved it！It was a special time to bond with my children and it filled them with the wonderment of books．
Now，I see my children taking their children to the library and I love it that the excitement of going to the library lives on from generation to generation．
As a novelist，I've found a new relationship with libraries．I encourage readers to go to their local library when they can't afford to purchase a book．I see libraries as a safe haven(避风港) for readers and writers，a bridge that helps put together a reader with a book．Libraries，in their own way，help fight book piracy(盗版行为) and I think all writers should support libraries in a significant way when they can．Encourage readers to use the library．Share library announcements on your social media．Frequent them and talk about them when you can．
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者对图书馆的热爱。
1．Which word best describes the author's relationship with books as a child
A．Cooperative． B．Uneasy．
C．Inseparable． D．Casual．
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C [推理判断题。根据第一段中的“I was always an enthusiastic reader，sometimes reading up to three books a day as a child...through the books”可推知，小时候，作者与书形影不离。inseparable“不可分割的，不可分离的”。故选C。]
2．What does the underlined phrase“an added meaning” in paragraph 3 refer to
A．Pleasure from working in the library．
B．Joy of reading passed on in the family．
C．Wonderment from acting out the stories．
D．A closer bond developed with the readers．
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B [词义猜测题。根据画线词组前的“As I grew older...the library took on a new place”及下文的“I had several children...to read to them．”可知，随着作者年龄的增长，她成为母亲，图书馆在她心里有了新的“地位”，书成了她和孩子们娱乐的主要来源。对他们来说，去图书馆读书是件令人激动的事情。故“an added meaning”应是指在作者家中传递的读书的乐趣。故选B。]
3．What does the author call on other writers to do
A．Sponsor book fairs．
B．Write for social media．
C．Support libraries．
D．Purchase her novels．
C [细节理解题。根据最后一段中的“I think all writers should support libraries in a significant way when they can．”可知，作者呼吁其他作者支持图书馆。故选C。]
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4．Which can be a suitable title for the text
A．Reading：A Source of Knowledge
B．My Idea About Writing
C．Library：A Haven for the Young
D．My Love of the Library
D [标题归纳题。阅读全文可知，library是本文的线索，作者描述了她从孩童到为人母，以及作为小说家对图书馆的热爱。故D项符合题意。]
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B
Several years ago，I went to see an advanced cartoon 3D movie Frankenweenie at the Walt Disney Studios，in California．A few days later，our chief editor gave me a new task and then I sat down for interviews with the film's director，Tim Burton，and some of the actors．
As for the movie，I had a lot to talk about as an audience．It was one of the most alluring movies I'd ever seen．Even though it was made in black and white，it was so lively that my mind seemed to fill in color in every scene(场景)．Burton talked to me about why he chose to use black and white and 3D technology for Frankenweenie．“I like the depth and shadows(阴影)that you can get with black and white，” he said．“And I just thought the 3D technology would be really fun to see．”
He's right．The whole movie is a lot of fun．A school student Victor Frankenstein lives in a small town，whose dog Sparky is hit by a car one day．Victor is very sad and lonely until he brings the dog back to life inspired by an experiment of his science teacher about the power of electricity．Victor's classmates learn what happens and also try to bring their pets back from the dead．These creatures end up with causing widespread damage throughout the town．Finally，the dog gives up its own life to save Victor．
My favorite part is the moment when Victor brings Sparky back to life，because I have a very strong love for animals．This scene isn't the funniest，but it is really heart-warming to me．
I'd like to recommend this movie to kids because of the unusual and lively characters．And it does attract those who are interested in cartoon techniques to see this film．The effects will blow your mind out of the water．Be sure to check out this exciting movie in theaters．
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了《科学怪狗》这部非常吸引人的科幻动画片，并极力推荐孩子们去观看。
5．What does the author probably do
A．An actor． B．A director．
C．A theater worker． D．A reporter．
D [推理判断题。根据第一段中的“A few days later，our chief editor gave me a new task and then I sat down for interviews with the film's director，Tim Burton，and some of the actors．”可知，作者可能是一名记者。]
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6．What does the underlined word “alluring” in paragraph 2 probably mean
A．Attractive． B．Boring．
C．Cruel． D．Serious．
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A [词义猜测题。根据第二段中的“As for the movie，I had a lot to talk about as an audience．It was one of the most alluring movies I'd ever seen．Even though it was made in black and white，it was so lively that my mind seemed to fill in color in every scene．”可知，尽管电影是黑白的，但它仍旧是如此生动，给作者留下了深刻印象，因此推断此处说的是它是作者看过的最有吸引力的电影之一，画线词的意思是“吸引人的”。与A项“吸引人的”意思相同。]
7．What do we know about the movie Frankenweenie
A．It is especially attractive for the old．
B．It is probably a science fiction movie．
C．It partly uses the color of black and white．
D．It is the funniest one the author has ever seen．
B [推理判断题。根据第三段中的“Victor is very sad and lonely until he brings the dog back to life inspired by an experiment of his science teacher about the power of electricity．”可推断，该电影可能是一部科幻电影。]
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8．What's the main purpose of the text
A．To recommend a movie to people．
B．To introduce how a movie is made．
C．To tell a story about Victor and his dog．
D．To introduce how to bring a dog to life．
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A [写作意图题。根据最后一段“I'd like to recommend this movie to kids because of the unusual and lively characters．And it does attract those who are interested in cartoon techniques to see this film．The effects will blow your mind out of the water．Be sure to check out this exciting movie in theaters．”可知，作者写这篇文章的目的是向人们推荐一部电影。]
Ⅱ．应用文写作
假设你是李华，非常喜欢看英文电影，认为这是一个学英语的好办法。但是你的父母并不赞成和支持，于是你给外教乔伊斯(Joyce)写信，征求她的意见，内容包括：
1．说明你的想法；
2．父母反对的理由(至少两点)；
3．征求老师的意见。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Joyce，
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Sincerely，
Li Hua
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Dear Joyce，
I'm writing to seek your help because my parents and I are unable to agree on how to learn English．
I'm keen on watching English movies，which I consider a good idea to use different media for study．However，my parents are strongly opposed．They think the language is informal，which might affect my English study．Worse still，they think that it is a waste of my study time since it requires a large amount of energy to have a thorough understanding of a movie．
Should I follow my parents' advice or stick to my own idea I'd really appreciate your advice．
Sincerely，
Li Hua
THANKS
