译林版高中英语必修第一册Unit 2 Let's talk teens Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一封建议信学案

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Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一封建议信
[文体感知]
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。具体写作结构为:
[写作素材]
1.表达建议信写信目的
①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
②I am writing to express my views concerning ...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
③You have asked for my advice about ...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2.表达建议常用语
①I think the most suitable...for you is ...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……。
②I would like to suggest that...
我想建议……。
③You'd better.../It's better to...
你最好……/最好是……。
④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
⑤For one thing ...;for another...
一方面……,另一方面……。
⑥If I were you,I would ...
如果我是你,我会……。
⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.表达希望常用语
①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
[典题示例]
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom最近因琐事和父母关系紧张而感到很痛苦。请你根据要求给Tom写一封建议信。要点如下:
1.和父母有时有争论在青少年中很常见,不必为此而烦恼;
2.和父母有不同意见时要冷静下来,和父母及时沟通;学会从父母的角度理解问题;
3.无论发生什么,我们都应知道父母是最爱我们的人。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:琐事trifle
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型 建议信
人称时态 第二人称为主,第一人称为辅;一般现在时
写作要点 1.说明了解的现状和写信目的; 2.具体的建议; 3.建议信常用的结束语。
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.听到你为一些琐事经常和你的父母争吵,我很难过。
I'm sorry to hear that you often argue with your parents over/about some trifles.
2.青少年常常和父母意见不一。这是正常的。
Teenagers often have different opinions with our parents.And it is normal.
3.首先,当你和父母意见不一致时,花一分钟冷静下来,试着和他们沟通。
First,when you disagree with your parents,take a minute to calm down and try to communicate with them.
4.第二,学会从他们的角度理解情况。
Second,learn to understand the situation from their point of view.
5.不管如何,我们都应该记住:无论发生什么,父母是最爱我们的人。
Anyway,what we should remember is that whatever happens,it is our parents that love us most.
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
6.将句2合并为it作形式主语的句子
It is normal for teenagers to have different opinions with our parents.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to hear that you often argue with your parents over some trifles.It is normal for teenagers to have different opinions with our parents.
However,we can do take action to improve the situation.First,when you disagree with your parents,take a minute to calm down and try to communicate with them.Second,learn to understand the situation from their point of view.
Anyway,what we should remember is that whatever happens,it is our parents that love us most.I hope my advice is helpful for you.If you have any further questions,do let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
课时精练(七) Section Ⅲ Integrated skills
Ⅰ.完形填空
“You're the worst parents ever.Just leave me alone!” It was another typical 1 between me and my parents.This time I wanted to go out with friends Saturday night but they had plans to go to Aunt Sue's house.So I had to stay at home.It just wasn't 2 .So I hardly felt bad for being unkind to my parents.Sure,they gave me everything,but “everything” 3 unfair standards and so many lectures on my attitude.
That night,I overheard my parents talking.My dad sounded upset and 4 .He was telling my mom about one of his students.The girl had just 5 her father.Now just she and her mother were trying to make the best of everything.For the last few weeks,she had not been in school.It 6 that she had leukemia(白血病),and there was little chance that she could 7 it.
All I could think about 8 was what this girl was going through.Suddenly,I realized how 9 my problems were.So what if I had to 10 one night out with my friends I had so many things to be 11 for;how could I be so selfish My whole attitude to life 12 that night as I realized how many things I took for granted.
After I gathered my 13 I went to the living room and gave both my parents hugs.
“I love you,Mom,and I love you,Dad.I just want to say thanks for being my 14 .” Then,I went back to my room and took the time to think about all the 15 in my life.It's just a shame I didn't realize their value at that time.
语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在一次和父母争吵后认识到自己的任性,感受到了父母对自己的关爱。
1.A.misunderstanding B.difference
C.battle D.challenge
C [根据上文“You're the worst parents ever.Just leave me alone!”可知,作者和父母之间爆发了战争(battle)。]
2.A.right B.fair
C.normal D.lucky
B [根据上文“This time I wanted to go out with friends Saturday night but they had plans to go to Aunt Sue's house.So I had to stay at home.”可知,作者想周六晚上和朋友们一起出去,但父母已计划好去苏阿姨家,所以我得待在家里。因此作者觉得不公平(fair)。]
3.A.added B.caused
C.covered D.included
D [根据上文“Sure,they gave me everything”及“but”可知,他们给了我一切,但一切包括(include)不公平的标准和对我态度的说教。]
4.A.concerned B.surprised
C.amazed D.tired
A [根据空后“she had leukemia(白血病),and there was little chance that she could it.”可知,爸爸的学生患了白血病,几乎没有活下来的几率,因此可推断出,爸爸既不安又担心(concerned)。]
5.A.met B.lost
C.helped D.left
B [根据后文“ Now just she and her mother were trying to make the best of everything.”可知,现在小女孩和她的母亲正尽力使一切都好起来。由此可推断出,一位女孩失去了(lose)她的父亲。]
6.A.got along B.took on
C.brought out D.turned out
D [根据前文“For the last few weeks,she had not been in school.”及后文“ she had leukemia(白血病)”可知,最近几周女孩没有上学,结果证实(turn out)女孩得了白血病。]
7.A.make B.do
C.get D.pass
A [根据“she had leukemia(白血病)”及“ little chance ”可知,女孩子成功(make it)活下来的机率很小。]
8.A.later B.soon
C.before D.then
D [那时(then)我满脑子想的都是这个女孩的经历。]
9.A.serious B.impossible
C.unimportant D.natural
C [作者想和朋友一起出去玩这件小事与女孩患上白血病比起来无关紧要(unimportant)。]
10.A.spend B.miss
C.plan D.need
B [作者在问自己如果错过了(miss)和朋友出去玩的一个晚上,那又能怎么样呢?]
11.A.sorry B.thankful
C.fit D.responsible
B [根据后文“ how could I be so selfish My whole attitude to life that night as I realized how many things I took for granted”可知,作者开始感谢生活。be thankful for...,对……感激。后文的“I just want to say thanks for being my .”也是提示。]
12.A.changed B.stopped
C.disappeared D.improved
A [根据后文“...as I realized how many things I took for granted.”可知,作者的态度发生了转变(change)。]
13.A.worries B.opinions
C.suggestions D.thoughts
D [整理思绪后,我走进客厅,拥抱了我的父母。gather one's thoughts意为“整理思绪”。]
14.A.parents B.teachers
C.friends D.partners
A [根据上文“I love you,Mom,and I love you,Dad.”可知,作者感谢父母(parents)。]
15.A.happy Saturdays B.terrible mistakes
C.good things D.good friends
C [根据后文“It's just a shame I didn't realize their value at that time.”可知,作者后悔没有认识到生活中的好的事情(good things)的价值。]
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Alex发来邮件,提到他总是因为缺乏耐心而和家人争吵,这让他感到非常苦恼。请你根据所给提示,用英语给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Alex,
I understand how upset you must be feeling and I'd like to give you some advice.
When you start to feel impatient,you can take a few deep breaths or leave the room for a while before doing or saying anything.That can help you regain control of yourself and calm down and think clearly.Besides,getting enough sleep at night,eating healthy meals and getting plenty of exercise can also help people feel relaxed and peaceful throughout the day.You can have a try.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.If you have any further questions,do let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny was the only child in her family.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn't help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she gave a sigh and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh,yes,but I don't have money on me,” she replied.
“That's nothing.I'll treat you today,” said the man.“Come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,the smell so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing.Actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears.
“Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”
Hearing the words,the seller smiled,“Girl,do you really think so I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock;she remembered her mother's familiar face and weathered hands.“Why didn't I think of that A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted.Why haven't I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?”
On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.
Paragraph 2:
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
[参考范文]
Paragraph 1:
Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.When she knocked at the door,she found the door was locked and her mother was not in.Tired and sad she sat down in front of the house.“Where could my mother be Was she still angry with me?” she wondered.Again,the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her,she felt rather ashamed,and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
Paragraph 2:
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother.“Here you come! I've been looking for you,” she said,tired and relieved.Jenny couldn't help throwing herself into her mother's arms.“Mum,I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this,her mother smiled,patting her back gently.
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