2025年1月浙江首考读后续写（Kevin勇寻真相）课件（共43张PPT）

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读后续写真题
2025年1月浙江卷:Kevin勇寻真相
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试题再现
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试题分析
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写作思路
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范文赏析
目录
CONTENTS
2025
试题再现
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
2025
试题分析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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文 体：记叙文
题 材：道德抉择，个人成长
主题语篇：人与自我、人与社会
Kevin在家无聊时，看到一个男人偷偷闯入邻居家的房子。他赶紧报警，但担心警察来不及，男人会逃跑，于是决定自己行动，拿着树枝冲了进去。男人告诉Kevin自己曾住在这个房子里，他回来取父亲的手表。Kevin虽然感到怀疑，但仍告诉警察发生的一切，最终警察逮捕了那人。虽然事情解决了，Kevin却开始怀疑那个男人的话是否是真的。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs, Hill was asleep, Kevin sighed（叹息）and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
1. 分析结构，读懂大意：
结构：
交代背景，引出故事
段落大意：
凯文因为父母不在家而感到无聊，正在由邻居Mrs. Hill照顾。他虽然是个乖孩子，但也渴望发生一些刺激的事情。突然，他注意到窗外的异常动静，故事的转折由此开始。
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
结构：
引入故事的冲突，增加故事的紧张感，并且为后文做铺垫。
段落大意：
凯文看到有个男人进入了邻居家空无一人的房子，这让他感到十分奇怪。当看到男人跳进窗户后，凯文紧张地拨打了电话报警。
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window, “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
结构：
推动故事情节发展。
段落大意：
凯文担心在警察到来之前，那个男人会逃掉，于是他决定自己行动。他迅速跑出Mrs. Hill的家，拿起一根树枝冲进邻居的窗户，大喊让男人停止这一动作并离开。
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
结构：
提出情节的悬念，增加情节的复杂性，为故事增添了不确定性和紧张感。
段落大意：
男人看到凯文后突然停住，试图解释自己是房子的前主人，告诉凯文这里曾是他父母的家，并且他在寻找父亲的手表。
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed（回响）in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
结构：
作为故事的第一个高潮部分，提到了紧张的局面得到解决。
段落大意：
就在男人试图解释时，警车的声音传来，男人惊慌逃跑。凯文紧随其后，向警察说明了事情经过，警察追捕并逮捕了男人。
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man's words sounded pretty convincing.
结构：
展现内心冲突，为续写的后文做铺垫。
段落大意：
凯文回到Mrs. Hill家后，心里开始怀疑自己是否做了正确的选择。他思考着那名男子的话，觉得对方的解释似乎也很有道理。
梳理文章关键信息：（Who、Where、When、What）
人物(who)
时间(when)
地点(where)
做了何事(what)
文章发生在一个白天，凯文的父母不在家，他由Mrs. Hill照看。
主要发生在Mrs. Hill的家和邻居Mr. 和Mrs. Green的家。
·凯文在无聊的情况下注意到邻居家有可疑的男子。
·他打电话报警，但担心警察来不及，于是决定自己采取行动，冲进邻居家阻止那名男子。
·那名男子解释自己是前主人，凯文有所怀疑，但警察已经到达并逮捕了男子。
·凯文回到Mrs. Hill家后，开始怀疑自己是否做的是对的事情，思考那名男子的话是否真实。
Kevin，Mrs. Hill, The man
2025
写作思路
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
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分析故事重要信息：（What、Why）：
一篇读后续写文章中，会出现重要的关键信息，帮助你写作。
伏笔：文章中出现过、但是未解释清楚、暗含玄机的内容。
冲突：文章中出现的矛盾，比如内容矛盾，前后矛盾。
这两个关键信息可以让我们对后续的内容进行一个预测，比如：
后续可能需要提到的内容：1、解释伏笔内容。2、解决文章中出现的矛盾。
文章主题的最终推测：根据题目文章和以上内容，我们可以基本定下文章主题，这也是一定程度上确定了文章的后续关键走向，避免偏题。
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于主人公Kevin
文章内容：
His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble……
Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
“Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于主人公Kevin
分析：
Kevin是个懂事、乖巧的孩子。在遇到突发情况时，能够表现出勇气和责任感。在遇到陌生人破窗而入时，他迅速选择报警，说明他有自己的判断力和行动力。在事情过后，他也会对事情进行反思，说明他是一个思考细致的孩子。
后续可能需要提到的内容：
在情节阐述过程中，需要尽量体现与原文相符的Kevin的人物特点。
4. 分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于The man所说的话
文章内容：
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
“What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man's words sounded pretty convincing.
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于The man所说的话
分析：
1、男人在被Kevin发现后，他叹了一口气开始对孩子认真的解释。但是原文内没有证实男人所说的话是否是真的。
2、Kevin也对男人的解释，抱着怀疑的态度。
后续可能需要提到的内容：
1、需要讲到真正的情况是否如他所说，是真实存在的，从而与原文呼应。
2、需要讲到Kevin消除了疑虑，即Kevin的怀疑是如何被证实和解决的。
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于所提到的表
文章内容：
Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed（回响）in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out.
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于所提到的表
分析：
男人一边说着父亲的表，一边尝试撬动地板。说明父亲的表在地板下面藏着。
“trying out”这个关键词，结合后面男人听到警察声音逃跑的动作，可得知：男人并未成功拿走父亲的手表。
后续可能需要提到的内容：
这可以作为验证真相的线索。由第二段首句可知，Kevin和Mr. Green拿着手表前往警局，可以推测，他们成功根据男人的指引，在地板下面找到了手表。
结合这两个题目信息，我们已经可以推测，这是一个误会，即男人说的话是真的。
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
伏笔：有关于警察
文章内容：
Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
分析：
警察根据Kevin描述的经过，逮捕了这个男人。
后续可能需要提到的内容：
如果Kevin所做的，单纯是对男人的误会，Kevin需要和警察重新沟通。
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
What can be predicted？
1、误解与真相
既然是一场误会，那么就需要解释清楚真正的情况，解释清楚男人的行为。
2、责任与勇气
Kevin的责任与勇气，以及果断的报警是正确的。即使Kevin当时不确定男子是否无辜，他的勇敢和责任感帮助避免了更多的麻烦。
3、成长与决断
Kevin虽然感到抱歉，但也从中获得了成长，知道了有时做决定需要更多的了解和思考。
分析故事主要伏笔：（What、Why）：
What is the theme of the story
人与社会——道德与社会责任感
在面对社会中不确定和危险情况时，个人如何做出决策和判断。意识到无论结果如何，自己做出的决定是出于社会责任感和对他人安全的关注。
人与自我——成长与自我反思
Kevin从最初的疑虑和困惑，到最终通过实际行动解决问题，体现了他在面对复杂情况时逐渐成熟的过程。
1. 续写第一段：
确定本段关键人物：_______________________________________________________
在已确定框架基础上，使用“六字真经”增加细节：
（看到了什么？听到了什么？想到了什么？说了什么？做了什么？感受到了什么？）
_________________________________________________________________________
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说：Kevin绘声绘色的描述当时的情况，和自己的行为
感：Green一家对Kevin所说的反应——震惊、不可置信
想：Green与Kevin抱有同样的疑虑
做：根据男人所说的话，他们在男人尝试撬开的地板下面，找到了一块手表
感：Kevin的反应是什么？意识到男人说的是真的，自己真的误会了男人
说：Kevin提议和Mr Green一起带着手表去警局解释（与第二段衔接）
Kevin，Mr Green，Mrs Green
2. 续写第二段：
确定本段关键人物：_______________________________________________________
在已确定框架基础上，使用“六字真经”增加细节：
（看到了什么？听到了什么？想到了什么？说了什么？做了什么？感受到了什么？）
_________________________________________________________________________
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做：看到两人进来，警察们的反应
做与说：Kevin将手表给警察，并与警察说明真实情况
说：男人也开始解释真实的情况（作为情节的补充，解释原文行为）
感：Kevin因误会，感觉到愧疚；男人对给大家造成的麻烦，感到抱歉。
说：三人互相道歉，最终迎来圆满结局。
Kevin，The man，police，Mr Green
2025
范文赏析
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
04
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. On arriving, he poured out the whole story without stopping – How a stranger had broken into their house. Hearing Kevin’s words, Mr. and Mrs. Green looked at each other with a mixture of shock and disbelief. But they had the same uncertainty “What if he has told the truth”. After a moment of silence, they decide to dig out the truth. Kevin led to the exact floorboard the man had tried to lift while Mr. Green , grabbing a stick in his hand, carefully lifted the floorboard. To everyone’s surprise, they discovered a watch lying quietly beneath it. Frozen for a second, Kevin let out a sign of regret and said anxiously, “Hurry Let’s go to the police station right now.”
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The police officers looked up as they entered. Mr. Green immediately handed the watch to a policeman. Kevin blushed with embarrassment, admitting that he had mistaken the man for a thief. When the police officer returned the watch to the man, in tears of gratitude, he quickly explained that the watch was actually a cherished keepsake（珍贵的纪念品） for his father who urged him to get it back as soon as possible. Fully convinced this time, Kevin said guiltily, “ Sorry for the trouble I’ve made.” The man shook his head gently. “ No. You did the right thing.” Then he turned to Mr. Green, “ Sorry I made the trouble too.” He apologized. With the truth unveiled, the two men and the 12-year-old boy all felt relieved and beamed in delight.
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
精句评析1：
续写第一段首句：
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
连贯的内容衔接：
On arriving, he poured out the whole story without stopping – How a stranger had broken into their house.
点评：
首句中的关键信息：过去告诉格林夫妇；衔接句：告诉了什么内容。衔接句做到了对首句的解释和延伸拓展，让衔接句与首句衔接自然流畅。
精句评析2：
续写原文：
“What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself.
恰到好处的承上启下句：
But they had the same uncertainty, “What if he has told the truth”.
点评：
承上：与原文使用同样的疑问句，与原文呼应，使续写更加连贯。
启下：为后面格林一家和Kevin一起去找地板下的手表做铺垫，因为有疑问，才会去找手表。这让续写内部的情节发展流畅且自然。
精句评析3：
续写原文：
“Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
合理的情节设计：
Kevin led to the exact floorboard the man had tried to lift while Mr. Green , grabbing a stick in his hand, carefully lifted the floorboard. To everyone’s surprise, they discovered a watch lying quietly beneath it.
精句评析3：
点评：
前面我们提到，续写第一段需要包含找到手表的这一个情节。
在情节设计方面，
首先这句话使用同样的单词，与原文呼应。
其次使用一个完整流畅的形容，将原文分开的两个关键信息“watch”“lift a floorboard”结合在一起，即大家成功的在撬开的地板下面找到了一个手表，完成了原文男人未完成的动作。这个情节设计完整的印证了男人在原文的所作所为。
精句评析4：
续写原文：
Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house.
“Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
合理的情节设计：
When the police officer returned the watch to the man, in tears of gratitude, he quickly explained that the watch was actually a cherished keepsake for his father who urged him to get it back as soon as possible.
精句评析4：
点评：
原文中，男人的所做、所说，一举一动都让人产生怀疑，同时也让Kevin感到疑惑。
因此我们需要一个情节，解释男人的所作所为，揭晓事情的真相。
该续写内容中的情节设计，恰到好处。
男人的所作所为：是父亲急着让他尽快取回手表，因此男人选择跨窗而入，尽快取回手表。
事情的真相：男人的确之前住在这里，他父母也确实是这里曾经的主人，手表也的确属于他的父亲，他的行为的确是为了帮父亲取回手表。这是一场误会。
结尾评析：
本文由于故事发展节奏较快，需要与原文呼应的情节内容过多，
因此有两个方向的结尾方式：
1、不需要主题升华句，以一个圆满的故事结局收尾。
比如：
1、With the truth unveiled, the two men and the 12-year-old boy all felt relieved and beamed in delight.（名师范文）
2、Eventually, the police identified the man and returned the watch, and Kevin returned to Mrs. Hill's house, relieved to know that he'd done the right thing, even though it had been a not-so-good misunderstanding.
结尾评析：
2、对主题进行升华，以Kevin的个人成长与感悟结尾。
比如：
1、The incident made Kevin reflect deeply on his choices, and he understood that growing up isn’t just about making decisions, but about learning and improving from them.
2、In the end, Kevin's courage and wisdom lead to a happy ending for everyone, both successfully uncovering the truth and allowing him to grow.
版本二
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened while they were away. Mrs. Green listened with wide eyes, clearly shocked by the ordeal（磨难）. “Thank you so much, Kevin. You were very brave,” she said, her voice trembling. Mr. Green nodded in agreement. “We’re just glad you were there to call the police. It could have been much worse.” Kevin felt a bit relieved hearing their gratitude but still couldn’t shake off the doubt in his mind. He decided to ask Mr. Green about the man’s claim. “Do you know if the man’s parents used to live here ” Mr. Green shook his head. “No, we bought this house years ago. There’s no way that’s true.”
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The watch was old and dusty, but it seemed important to the man who had broken in. At the station, they handed it over to the officer who had arrested the intruder（入侵者）. The officer examined the watch carefully and then turned to Kevin and Mr. Green. “This watch is actually stolen property. We’ve been looking for it for months. It’s worth a lot of money.” Kevin’s eyes widened in surprise. “So he was lying about it being his father’s watch ” The officer nodded. “Yes, he was trying to steal it and sell it. Thanks to you, Kevin, we’ve solved a big case.” Kevin felt a wave of relief and pride wash over him. He realized that he had done the right thing after all.
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
范文点评
1.情节合理且紧凑
续写内容紧密围绕原文情节展开，逻辑连贯。第一段中，Kevin与Mr. and Mrs. Green的对话自然流畅，Green夫妇的反应符合常理，既表达了对Kevin的感激，又为后续情节发展埋下伏笔。
第二段中，Kevin和Mr. Green将手表交给警察并得知真相，情节合理推进，揭示了小偷的谎言，圆满解决了Kevin的内心疑惑。
2.人物形象鲜明
Kevin的性格特点得到了进一步展现。他在第一段中表现出的犹豫和责任感，以及在第二段中得知真相后的释然和自豪，使他的人物形象更加立体。
其他人物如Mr. and Mrs. Green、警察等的言行也符合各自的身份和情境，增强了故事的真实感。
范文点评
3.语言表达自然流畅
使用了合适的词汇和语法结构，如“wide eyes”“voice trembling”“nodded in agreement”等，生动地描绘了人物的情绪和动作。
对话部分自然，符合英语表达习惯，如“Thank you so much, Kevin. You were very brave”“No, we bought this house years ago. There’s no way that’s true”等，使故事更具感染力。
4.情感线索清晰
Kevin从最初的犹豫（“What if he has told the truth ”）到与Green夫妇交流后的释然（“Kevin felt a bit relieved”），再到得知真相后的自豪（“Kevin felt a wave of relief and pride wash over him”），情感变化合理且有层次，使故事更具深度。
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