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Reading for Writing
Travel, in the younger sort, is a part of education ; in the elder, a part of experience.
Read| outline| draft| assess
the Shaanxi History Museum
For foreign visitors, which city in China may attract them most
Beijing, Tianjin, Shanghai, Xi'an...
Xi'an is always a popular destination for tourists. What places in Xi’an would a foreigner like to visit
the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda
the Terracotta Army
Richard has found a brochure about Terracotta Army.
一号坑秦兵马俑
Pit no. 1 qin terra-cotta warriors
More than 8,000 statues were made in the third century BCE to guard the tomb of the Chinese Emperor Qinshihuang!
protect
铠甲士兵
ARMOR SOLDIERS
铠甲武士俑,披甲站立,或免冠,或头戴软帽,腿扎行滕,脑后绾六股宽辩行扁髻,个个神情严肃恭谨。
Each statue has a different face ,
leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier.
将军俑
GENERAL FIGURINES
The statues fill only one
part of the emperor’s
huge tomb, which still
has not been completely
unearthed.
Be unearthed: be found
骑兵
鞍马俑
Warriors on horseback
More than 700,000 people worked for nearly 40 years to build this tomb.
战袍武士俑
Terracotta Warriors In Robes
However, no one in modern times knew about the tomb or the terracotta statues until 1974, when some farmers discovered the tomb while they were digging a well.
A travel plan to Xi’an
1. Style of writing
An email of ____________
2. Relationship
3. Formal or informal
A travel plan
friends
Informal
A travel plan to Xi’an
Main purpose for the trip
Other plans for the trip
transport
Final thoughts
1
2
3
4
Match the main idea of each paragraph
Main idea of each paragraph
main purpose for the trip
(when and where)
other plans for the trip (why)
transport (how)
final thoughts
Underline the words and phrases that show Richard's feeling towards the trip.
It is an amazing sight
and I can't wait to go.
it's amazing that...
...is almost unbelievable
I am amazed.
I can’t believe it!
It’s hard to believe…
It’s an unbelievable story.
It is my dream destination.
I've always wanted to visit...
How exciting it is to...
...
...are looking forward to..
I am dying to go
I have been longing for...
more similar expressions
Use them when writing about future plans!
sentence patterns
Travel plan
(when,where and length of the trip)
Main purpose for the trip
accommodation
(weather, passport, credit card and shopping...}
other details
(arrival and departure time)
transport
(where and activity)
Other plans for the trip
(ask for plans and express hope)
final thoughts
Brainstorming
be doing...
amazing/amazed/
unbelievable/longing for...
If you were Xiao Li who is studying in England, reply to Richard's email by using what we have learned in class.
Paragraph Main idea
1 main purpose for the trip
( going to London to see the Tower of Lodon)
2 other plans for the trip
(Big Ben; Westminster Abbey, London Eye; the British Museum )
3 transport (by train; short trip)
4 final thoughts (buy some souvenirs)
Remember to use am/is/are doing to express future plans
Don't forget to use words and phrases like amazing/
unbelievable/longing for...to express feelings
A possible version
Dear Richard,
I’m very glad to know everything goes well in your new school life! My new school life is also amazing. Now, with the National holiday approaching, my parents and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall. It is one of the wonders in the world, famous for its grandiosity(宏伟) as well as historic stories behind. I just can’t wait to see it.
We’re also going to visit other places in Beijing, such as the Forbidden city, and the Summer Palace, both of which are admirable architectures. I believe we will be amazed by its unique culture and extraordinary views. We are taking a flight to go there.
Enjoy yourself and look forward to your beautiful photos.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,计划寒假邀请你的交换生好友Jack来中国旅行,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.旅行的时间;
2.旅行的城市和理由;
3.咨询他的意见。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题五问
1.体裁
2.人称
3.语气
4.时态
5.布局
邀请信
第一、第二人称
朋友,不用太客气
一般现在时、一般将来时
Para 1: 写信背景+写信目的
Para 2: 旅行的时间
旅行的城市和理由
Para 3: 咨询他的意见+期待回信
Go and explore and share!
The world is there waiting for you!