2026届人教版高考英语写作周周练(1--10周) 课件(共10份)

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(共20张PPT)
喜悦与兴奋&建议信
第1周
短语词块 be delighted by/at对……感到高兴 over the moon欣喜若狂 beam with pleasure笑逐颜开brighten sb’s heart使某人心情愉快 jump/leap/dance with joy高兴地跳起来/跳起舞来 light up露出喜色 in high spirits精神高涨 be wild with joy欣喜若狂 feelings run high情绪很激动 grin from ear to ear笑得合不拢嘴 give sb a smile莞尔一笑 wear a bright smile面带微笑 smile brightly笑得灿烂 roar with laughter哈哈大笑 
续写语料积累1
情感描写 喜悦与兴奋(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
短语词块 burst into hearty laughter尽情欢笑 laugh heartily开怀大笑 burst out laughing 放声大笑 flush with excitement激动得满脸通红 feel a surge of excitement感到一阵激动 twinkle with excitement激动得两眼发亮 feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy 感到很高兴 be overcome with happiness/delight/joy高兴无比 one’s heart beats/pounds wildly某人心脏怦怦直跳 couldn’t contain one’s excitement无法抑制自己的兴奋 a sparkle of excitement in one’s eyes眼里闪耀着激动的光芒
1.His face lit up with pleasure.他面露喜色。
2.She was in cheerful spirits and grinned from ear to ear.她兴高采烈,笑得合不拢嘴。
3.When she got the news of her winning first prize,her heart was pounding with wild joy.
当她得知自己获得一等奖的消息时,她高兴得心怦怦直跳。
4.On the way to the hospital,John burst into laughter suddenly,which made Tom confused.在去医院的路上,约翰突然大笑了起来,这把汤姆弄糊涂了。
5.I slowly pulled my paper out of my drawer and held it up.The entire class exploded with laughter.
我慢慢地把试卷从抽屉中拿出并举起。全班同学哄堂大笑。
6.She felt a surge of excitement run through her.
她感到一阵激动传遍全身。
7.A wide excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.她兴奋得不能自已。
8.A look of excitement crossed/flashed across/spread across her face.她脸上露出激动的表情。
[即时演练]
1.听到这个消息,他兴奋得跳上跳下。
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2.她两眼发亮,激动得心怦怦跳。
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3.我抑制不住喜悦,蹦蹦跳跳地进了房子。
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4.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
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5.看到直升机,简高兴得眉开眼笑。
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Hearing the news,he jumped up and down with excitement.
Her eyes were shining and her heart was pounding with excitement.
I couldn’t contain my joy and jumped into the house.
She wore a shining smile on her face.
At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy.
应用文写作——建议信(30分钟)
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice on/about how to...
我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice on/about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(4)I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
(5)For some further improvement,I’d like to share the following suggestions.
为了进一步改进,我想分享以下建议。
(6)Here are some tips/suggestions to help you.
这里有对你有帮助的一些建议。
(7)I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。
2.中间句
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...;for another...一方面……,另一方面……
(6)If I were you,I would...如果我是你,我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.结尾句
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy/delighted to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
(4)I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your...will become even more...我真的希望我的建议能被采纳,你的……会变得更加……
[典例展示]
(2023·新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to randomly [1]pair up students for oral practice.(自我介绍,表明写信目的)
Personally,though fair,random pairing may not necessarily [2]serve its intended purposes.In particular,when both students lack fluency,they might [3]struggle to find motivation and fail to [4]reach the desired goals.(说明随机分组的问题)Hence,I [5]propose an alternative approach:grouping students with varying levels of fluency.
Pairing more fluent speakers with those who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.Alternatively,[6]if practicable,allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.(提出建议并说明理由)
I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.(希望采纳建议)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1](使两人)结组工作 [2]达到预期目的 [3]费力(做) [4]达到预期目标 [5]提出一种备选方法 [6]是省略句结构,意为“如果可行的话”
[即时演练]
(2025·河南安阳多校联考)
假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见,请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件,内容如下:
1.你对该杂志的看法;
2.提出你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua,your regular reader.Your magazine is truly wonderful,as it provides various valuable learning materials and interesting articles,and helps me a lot with my English study.For some further improvement,I’d like to share the following suggestions.
Personally,it would get better to cover some extended reading related to our textbooks,which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies.What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently.
I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular.
Yours,
Li Hua(共19张PPT)
紧张与焦虑&邀请信
第2周
单词词块 sweat v.流汗,出汗 shake v.摇动,抖动 pound v.连续重击,猛打;(心脏)剧烈地跳动 beat v.(心脏)跳动 stamp vt.跺(脚) grip v.握紧,夹住 pale adj.(脸色)苍白的 frustrated adj.懊恼的,沮丧的 tongue-tied adj.(因害羞或紧张)张口结舌的,说不出话来的 impatiently adv.不耐烦地 nervous adj.神经紧张的→nervously adv.神经质地;焦急地 anxious adj.焦虑的→anxiety n.焦虑,忧虑 tense adj.紧张的,焦虑的→tension n.紧张,焦虑 uneasy adj.担忧的,不安的 tighten one’s face绷紧了脸 stress out过度紧张 rub one’s hands restlessly不安地搓手 with one’s hands shaking手在发抖 on pins and needles如坐针毡 have butterflies in one’s stomach(做某事前)心慌,紧张
续写语料积累2
情感描写 紧张与焦虑(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.His face turned pale and he stood there tongue-tied.他脸色苍白,站在那里张口结舌。
2.He was so nervous that he felt his throat tightened.他紧张得喉咙发紧。
3.The boy rubbed his hands restlessly when he saw his teacher coming towards him.
当看见老师向他走来时,那男孩不安地搓着手。
4.My palms were sweating heavily as I walked into the teacher’s office.
我走进老师办公室的时候,手心都在出汗。
5.His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated.
他的心跳得如此猛烈,他感到几乎要窒息了。
6.I knew he didn’t believe me,and every time he looked my way my heart started pounding.
我知道他不相信我,每次他朝我这边看时,我的心就开始怦怦跳。
7.I always have butterflies in my stomach before exams.考前我总是心里发慌。
[即时演练]
1.她在不耐烦地跺脚。
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2.她又害怕又紧张,僵在原地不动。
______________________________________________________________ 3.他紧张得动也动不了。
______________________________________________________________ 4.我感到很害怕/紧张,嗓子发紧,膝盖发软。
______________________________________________________________ 5.他浑身发抖,如坐针毡。
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She was stamping her feet impatiently.
Scared and nervous,she was frozen to the spot.
He felt so nervous that he couldn’t move an inch.
I felt so scared/nervous that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
He shook all over,feeling on pins and needles.
应用文写作——邀请信(30分钟)
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时,要根据题目的要求,说明活动的内容、时间、地点、意义、注意事项等。要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。措辞要正式,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构如右:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)Learning that you are interested in...,I’m writing to invite you to...得知你对……感兴趣,我写信邀请你……
(2)It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to take part in/participate in...to be held in...on...我很荣幸邀请你参加……在……举行的……
(3)I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to take part in/participate in...我很荣幸代表……邀请你参加……
(4)Would you give the pleasure of doing...at...with us?你能赏光和我们在……做……吗?
(5)The following are some details about it.以下是关于它的一些细节。
2.中间句
(1)To begin with,we will...Besides,there will be a number of/various activities such as...,which will...首先,我们将……此外,将会有许多/各种各样的活动,例如……,这将……
(2)We will hold the activity in...at...lasting...
我们将在……在……举行活动,持续……
(3)Not only can it help broaden your horizons but it can also bring you great fun.它不仅能帮助拓宽你的视野,还能带给你无穷的乐趣。
(4)I’m convinced that you’ll have a better understanding of...我相信你会对……有更好的了解。
(5)It will be a good chance for you to improve...
这将是你提高……的一次好机会。
(6)This is such a golden opportunity to experience...at first hand that it can’t be missed.这是亲身体验……的绝佳机会,不容错过。
3.结尾句
(1)I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我将深感荣幸。
(2)I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account
/consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果你能考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。期待你的早日回复。
(3)I do hope you can accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.如果你方便的话,我真的希望你能接受我的邀请。
(4)Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?能否尽快让我知道你是否能接受我的邀请?
[典例展示]
(2022·新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写一封邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[范文佳作]
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua,head of “Talk and Talk”,an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station and I am writing to invite you to be an interviewee about English study.(自我介绍,发出邀请)
“Talk and Talk” is a face-to-face interview about some hot topics on and off campus.Aiming to [1]promote the relationship between teachers and students,it has [2]enjoyed great popularity,[3]owing to its casual and easy style.Every [4]interviewed teacher will talk freely to share anything interesting with us.Through this interview,
a better relationship is built up and we gain a lot.(节目介绍) If it is convenient for you next Monday,I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 p.m.to 6 p.m.The topic is proper ways to [5]better our English learning.(访谈的时间和话题)
We would be grateful for your presence and get your appropriate instruction before long.(感谢和盼望参加)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]促进 [2]受欢迎 [3]因为 [4]过去分词作定语 [5]改善,改进(形容词转化为动词)
[即时演练]
(2025·浙江名校联考)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,下个月将组织举办一场校园慈善音乐会。请给你校的英国留学生Chris写一封邮件邀请他来参与演出,内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.表演形式建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled to invite you to be part of something truly special! We’re holding a charity concert next month with the goal of raising funds to support students from economically disadvantaged families.
We’ve been fans of your performances,and we’d be absolutely excited to have you share your gift with us.Here are a few ideas that might suit your style.If you fancy taking center stage,how about a solo piano performance of a classical piece It would be a show-stopper!
Or,if you’re up for it,a duet with other student musicians could be a magical collaboration that our audience would love.
I’d like to hear what you think.Just let me know by the end of this week.Looking forward to your reply and hopefully seeing you on stage!
Yours,
Li Hua(共22张PPT)
郁闷与忧伤&申请信
第3周
短语词块 a touch of sadness一丝悲伤 with a heavy heart心情沉重地 be immersed in sorrow沉浸在悲伤中 choke back sobs强忍住啜泣 in low spirits情绪低落 one’s heart aches心痛 a strong sense of loss强烈的失落感 be overwhelmed by grief伤心不已 fight back tears强忍住泪水 fall into despair陷入绝望 be seized by sorrow/
sadness/grief陷入悲伤 one’s heart seems to be torn apart心似乎被撕碎了 be overcome with sadness/grief/sorrow悲痛欲绝
续写语料积累3
情感描写 郁闷与忧伤(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
短语词块 one’s thin shoulders shaken by a sob因抽泣而颤抖的瘦削的肩膀 sadness surges within sb某人心中涌起悲伤 feel a surge of sadness感到一阵悲伤 tears cloud one’s eyes泪眼蒙眬 burst into tears/burst out crying放声大哭,突然哭起来 tears well up in one’s eyes/tears fill one’s eyes泪水夺眶而出/眼里满是泪水 tears roll/run/stream/flow/pour down one’s cheeks/face泪水顺着脸(颊)淌下来
1.As he looked at Catherine,great sorrow clouded his eyes.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
2.Seeing her son’s leaving,the mom fell into a deep sadness.看到儿子的离开,这位母亲陷入深深的悲伤中。
3.He turned off the torch and sobbed quietly in the dark,overwhelmed/overcome by grief.他关掉手电筒,在黑暗中静静地抽泣,感到悲痛欲绝。
4.Upon hearing the bad news,she was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.听到这个坏消息,她就感到一阵悲伤,忍不住痛哭。
5.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着,泪水顺着脸颊淌下来。
6.I stood there with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears.
我站在那里,喉咙哽塞,拼命想忍住眼泪。
7.Sadness surging within her,she burst into tears.
她心中涌起悲伤,突然哭了起来。
8.On hearing the bad news,she lowered her head,tears streaming
/rolling/pouring down her cheeks.
听到这个坏消息,她垂下了头,泪流满面。
[即时演练]
1.他满脸泪水,浑身颤抖。
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2.我觉得自己在悲伤的海洋里漂浮。
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3.听到这个消息,他绝望地借酒消愁。
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His face was wet with tears and he was trembling.
I felt like I had floated in an ocean of sadness.
Hearing/On hearing the news,so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
4.意识到她永远地走了,我沉浸在悲伤的海洋里。
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5.她的心痛苦地剧烈跳动着,撞击着她的肋骨。
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Realizing that she was gone forever,I was surrounded by an ocean of sadness.
Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.
应用文写作——申请信(30分钟)
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便给对方留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,而且要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。
具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)Having learned that your company needs...,I would like to apply for the post.
得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
(2)I’m looking for a job as...and would be grateful if you could consider me for such a post in your firm.我正在找一份……的工作,如果您能考虑让我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
(3)I’m writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to...我写信给您是希望我可以获得一个……的机会。
(4)I have read your advertisement on the Internet/in a newspaper.I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.我在网上/报纸上读了你们的广告。我觉得我完全胜任你们在广告中所招聘的职位。
(5)I saw your advertisement on the Internet/in a newspaper and I show great interest in...
我在网上/报纸上看到你们的广告,而且我对……极感兴趣。
(6)I’m extremely pleased to see your advertisement for...I’m writing to apply for...看到你们需要……的广告,我非常高兴。我写信申请……
2.中间句
(1)I have teamwork spirit and can get on well with other people.我有团队精神,而且善于和别人相处。
(2)Not only am I good at...but I am also experienced in...
我不仅擅长……而且在……方面有经验。
(3)I have been working in...since...,and have therefore gained rich knowledge and experience in this field.自从……,我一直从事……,因此在这个领域获得了丰富的知识和经验。
(4)I feel I am able/competent to meet the requirements you have listed.
我觉得我有能力满足您所列的要求。
(5)With good academic performance and practical working experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.我有优异的学习成绩和实际工作经验,我觉得我就是您要找的人。
3.结尾句
(1)I am sure I will do it well if I’m given the chance to be a member of your company.如果我得到机会成为贵公司的一员的话,我相信自己会做得很好。
(2)If you think I am the perfect person for the job,please contact me at your earliest convenience.
如果您认为我是这份工作的最佳人选,请您在方便时尽早和我联系。
(3)I’m firmly convinced that/I hold a firm belief that by doing this,I can enhance my oral English and communication skills together with opening up a new range of vision.我坚信通过这样做,我可以提高我的英语口语和沟通能力,同时开拓新的视野。
(4)It would be appreciated if you could take my application into account/consideration.Looking forward to your earliest/earnest reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复/诚挚的回复。
[典例展示]
假定你是李华,你得知“大美漳州”推介活动组委会正在招募英语义务讲解员,为来访的外国友人进行讲解,请你给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.介绍相关经验和优势;
2.希望被录用。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua,and I am writing to express my [1]keen interest in applying for the position of English volunteer interpreter for the [2]upcoming “Beautiful Zhangzhou” promotion event.(自我介绍,表明申请意愿)
I [3]consistently achieved high scores in [4]English proficiency tests,which have equipped me with strong communicative skills across linguistic boundaries.[5]Having worked as a part-time tour guide during my university years,I can [6]effectively communicate with people from [7]diverse backgrounds and interests.(详述优势)
I am sure I will do it well if I’m given the chance to contribute to the success of the “Beautiful Zhangzhou” promotion event and look forward to hearing from you soon.(希望和期盼)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]adj.(兴趣或感情)浓厚的,强烈的 [2]adj.即将来临的 [3]adv.一贯地 [4]英语水平测试 [5]现在分词的完成式作状语 [6]adv.有效地 [7]多元背景
[即时演练]
假定你是李华,你在英文校报上看到一则招聘“校园之声”栏目小记者的广告,你对该职位很感兴趣,请你写一封信申请该职位,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.你的优势;3.你的打算。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement for a junior reporter at the “Campus Voice” section in the English school newspaper and I show great interest in it.I feel quite qualified for the position so I am writing to apply for it.
I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English,which enables me to communicate with others fluently.Moreover,not only am I good at researching and presenting information in a compelling and informative way but I am also experienced in interviewing and photographing.Last but not least,I’m outgoing as well as warm-hearted,which makes me get along well with others.
If given the chance,I plan to fully utilize my skills and work diligently to contribute to the “Campus Voice” section.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua(共20张PPT)
害怕与恐惧&感谢信
第4周
短语词块 get frightened/scared感到恐惧 freeze with terror/be numb with fear 吓呆了 in a cold sweat出了一身冷汗 a tremble of fear恐惧引起的颤抖 in fear of害怕…… choke with fear因害怕而哽咽 tremble from head to toe全身颤抖 be full of/filled with fear充满恐惧 a feeling of fear恐惧的感觉 fear creeps over sb恐惧笼罩着某人 have one’s heart in one’s mouth提心吊胆 in panic/terror惊恐地 
续写语料积累4
情感描写 害怕与恐惧(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
短语词块 scare sb to death吓死某人 be scared out of one’s wits吓得魂不附体 make sb’s flesh creep使某人毛骨悚然 a flood of fear wells up in sb一阵恐惧涌上某人心头 face turns pale with fear害怕得脸色苍白 make one’s blood run cold使某人不寒而栗 make sb’s hair stand on end使某人毛骨悚然 be rooted to the spot动弹不得;吓呆了
1.I trembled with fear.我吓得发抖。
2.He turned to me,(with)his eyes full of horror.他转向我,眼里满是恐惧。
3.I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my heart was pounding wildly.我恐惧不已,心脏狂跳。
4.The horrible scene made my hair stand on end.
可怕的场面令我毛骨悚然。
5.I froze with terror,too scared to move an inch.
我吓呆了,不敢动弹。
6.A flood of fear welled up in/flooded over/took hold of/seized/crept upon me.一阵恐惧涌上我的心头。
7.The horrible scene made my blood run cold and struck fear into my heart.
那可怕的场面使我毛骨悚然,胆战心惊。
[即时演练]
1.一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。
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2.那声巨响吓得我魂不附体。
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3.一条蛇从树丛中蹿了出来,把我吓死了。
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4.她一听到尖叫声,就吓呆了。
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A flood of fear welled up in him.
That loud noise scared me out of my wits.
A snake came out of the wood and scared me to death.
On/Upon hearing the sharp scream,she froze with horror.
5.他屏住气,不敢出声。他想跑,却发现自己一动也不能动。
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He held his breath,not daring(to) make a sound.He wanted to run,but found himself rooted to the spot.
应用文写作——感谢信(30分钟)
感谢信主要用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件需要写明感谢他人的理由,信文要感情真挚,措辞得体。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I’m extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during...
我非常感谢你在……期间给予我的无私帮助。
(2)I wish to thank you from the bottom of my heart for...我要从心底感谢你,因为……
(3)I’m writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during...
我写信是为了表达我对你在……期间的好心/慷慨帮助的感激之情。
(4)I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and support.我想借此机会对你及时的帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。
(5)I’d like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you in this letter for your selfless help.
我想在这封信中表达我对你无私帮助的衷心感谢。
(6)On behalf of...,I’d like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.
我代表……想对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢。
2.中间句
(1)You really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of...
你真的大大增加了我的方便和乐趣……
(2)Many thanks for all the things you have done to help us to...
非常感谢你为帮助我们……所做的一切。
(3)Thanks for your generous/selfless/kind help,without which I wouldn’t have...感谢你慷慨/无私/好心的帮助,没有你的帮助,我不可能……
(4)It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of...
是你慷慨的帮助使我对……有了更好的了解。
3.结尾句
(1)It was kind and generous of you to do these for me,and I appreciate it more than I can say.
你为我做这些事真是太好了,太慷慨了,我对你的感激之情无以言表。
(2)I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.
我希望有一个比“谢谢”更好的词来表达我对你慷慨帮助的感激之情。
(3)Thanks again for your kind help./Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.再次感谢你的好心帮助。/我想再次向你表示衷心的感谢。
(4)I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...如果我有机会通过……来回报你的好意,我将非常高兴。
(5)My true gratitude is beyond description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.我由衷的感激之情无法用言语来形容。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。/任何言语都不足以表达我对你的感激之情。
[典例展示]
假如你是李华,在伦敦游玩期间你的英国朋友Anne招待了你。请你给她写封信,表示感谢。要点如下:
1.简述你的伦敦之行;
2.感谢她的招待;
3.邀请她来北京旅游。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
[范文佳作]
Dear Anne,
I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation for your kind help and care during my stay in London,[1]without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.(表达谢意)
During the week,the comfortable room,delicious meals and especially your friendly family members all made me [2]feel at home,leaving me lasting memories.Moreover,guided by you,I was honored to have a chance to visit those tourist attractions in London and [3]be exposed to such an amazing culture as well as beautiful scenery.
[4]It was your generous help that enabled me to [5]have a better understanding of your country and culture.(简述伦敦之行,道谢的原因)
Thanks again for your kind help and I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by [6]showing you around Beijing.(再次感谢,表达回报愿望)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]“介词+关系词”引导的定语从句,含蓄虚拟条件句 [2]感到不拘束 [3]接触,暴露于 [4]强调句结构 [5]更好地了解 [6]带领某人参观
[即时演练]
假定你是李华,是英国某高中的一名交换生,你受校报邀请创建“中国传统文化”专栏。请给校报负责人Mr Smith写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.你的计划;3.你的期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:专栏 column
Dear Mr Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr Smith,
Thank you so much for trusting me to create a column of traditional Chinese culture.Here are some details about my plan.
I’d like to take advantage of this column to introduce the abundance of traditional Chinese culture,including Chinese traditional festivals and customs,Chinese traditional literature and so on.As our school newspaper is a weekly,I’d like to introduce a specific theme each week.Besides,we can regularly hold knowledge contests and display students’ excellent works to motivate more enthusiasts to join us.
I believe this column will greatly benefit students if I help them know more about traditional Chinese culture.
Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.Looking forward to the first publication of this column!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua(共19张PPT)
愤怒与生气&道歉信
第5周
短语词块 feel/get angry/annoyed感到生气 storm out of/into/off 怒气冲冲地跑出/闯进/跑走 be seized by anger/annoyance怒火中烧 be angry/annoyed
/cross with sb生某人的气 blow one’s top暴跳如雷 eyes burning with anger满眼怒火 flush with anger气得脸通红 feel a burst of anger/rage勃然大怒 lose one’s temper发脾气 boil with rage怒火中烧 be filled with fury/anger满腔怒火 explode with anger大发雷霆 face twists in anger气得面目扭曲 fly into a rage勃然大怒 hit the ceiling勃然大怒 mask one’s anger with a smile用微笑来掩饰某人的愤怒 be shaking
/trembling/speechless with rage气愤得发抖/战栗/说不出话来
续写语料积累5
情感描写 愤怒与生气(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.A blaze of anger flashed across his face.
他顿时面露怒色。
2.Boiling with rage,he shook his fist at me.
他怒火中烧,对我挥舞拳头。
3.He ran out of the room in a burst of anger.
他怒气冲冲地跑出了房间。
4.She let out a cry of anger,her eyes glaring at her son.她怒吼了一声,眼睛怒视着儿子。
5.He stormed out of the room,slamming the door furiously.他怒气冲冲地冲出房间,狠狠地摔门而去。
6.Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.她的回答激怒了他,他像火山一样爆发了。
7.His eyes were shining with anger and his voice trembled with anger.他的双眼闪着愤怒的光芒,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
8.He was tongue-tied with anger.His hands trembled and he shouted for half a day.
他气得张口结舌,两手颤抖,大喊大叫了半天。
[即时演练]
1.他气得浑身发抖。
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2.当他听到这个谣言时,他几乎压制不住怒火。
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3.Tom最近的行为总能让Smith老师怒不可遏。
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4.她满腔怒火,一个字也说不出来。(用过去分词短语作状语)
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He trembled with anger from head to toe.
He could hardly restrain/contain his anger when he heard this rumor.
Tom’s recent behavior would always make Mr Smith boil with anger/rage.
Filled with fury/anger,she was unable to utter a single word.
5.得知儿子和另一个男孩打架,他气得直跺脚。(用现在分词短语作状语)
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Knowing (that) his son got into a fight with another boy,he stamped his foot in anger.
应用文写作——道歉信(30分钟)
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下,为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to apologize/say sorry for...
我写这封信是为……向你致歉。
(2)I am really sorry but I have no choice but to...我真的很抱歉,但我别无选择,只能……
(3)I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……
(4)I apologize sincerely for what I said that day.I didn’t mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
(5)I am writing to express/convey my sincere apologies to you.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意。
2.中间句
(1)I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
为此我感到非常抱歉,想让你知道实情。
(2)The reason why I fail to...is that...
我未能……的原因是……
(3)I am not able to...due to the fact that...
我不能……是由于……
(4)It’s because of...that I...
正是因为……我才……
(5)Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning?无论如何,我真诚地希望我们可以为……再定一个时间。请问你这个星期天上午有空吗?
3.结尾句
(1)Once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience I caused.对于我造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by me/my carelessness.I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
再次为我/我的粗心带来的不便或麻烦表示歉意,我承诺这样的事情不会再发生。
(3)I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.
我真心希望你能理解我的处境/站在我的立场考虑,并接受我的道歉。
[典例展示]
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[范文佳作]
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well.I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you this weekend [1]as planned.(表达歉意)
Unfortunately,I’ve encountered an unexpected family matter due to my grandfather falling ill,which requires my immediate presence at home.I hope you can understand the situation.(说明原因,请求谅解) As an [2]alternative,I suggest that we [3]reschedule our outing to the following weekend.This way,I’ll be able to [4]fulfill my commitments and ensure we have a more enjoyable time together without any [5]distractions.(提出建议并给出理由)
I value our friendship and would really appreciate your understanding.Looking forward to your response,and once again,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次道歉,希望得到谅解)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]省略句结构 [2]n.可供选择的事物,替代物 [3]vt.重新安排 [4]履行我的承诺 [5]n.使人分心的事物
[即时演练]
(2025·河北邢台名校联考)
假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给担任评委的外教Mr Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Johnson,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr Johnson,
With utter sincerity,I’m writing to extend my apology for the postponement of the English Drama Performance Competition,which otherwise would be held next Friday.
Out of our expectations,a lecture of vital importance will fall on next Friday,which unavoidably conflicts with our initial arrangement,making many competitors unavailable for the contest.Therefore,the contest has to be put off to next Sunday afternoon.Would it be convenient for you
I apologize again for any inconvenience it may bring to you and your understanding will be highly appreciated.Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours,
Li Hua(共20张PPT)
好奇与吃惊&求助信
第6周
单词词块 stun vt.使惊愕→stunned adj.(因惊讶、震惊而)目瞪口呆的 open-mouthed adj.瞠目结舌的,目瞪口呆的 wide-eyed adj.(因恐惧、惊讶等)睁大眼睛的 gasp in astonishment惊讶得倒吸一口气 blink in surprise吃惊地眨眼 sb’s jaw dropped/fell某人目瞪口呆 give a cry of surprise吃惊地喊出来 take sb aback使某人大吃一惊 raise the eyebrows扬起眉毛 gape at张口结舌地看 be shocked beyond words惊讶得说不出话来 
续写语料积累6
情感描写 好奇与吃惊(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
单词词块 freeze/stand still/stop dead/be numb with shock惊呆了 to one’s amazement/surprise/astonishment令某人吃惊的是 come as a bolt from the blue晴天霹雳 be thrown into astonishment大吃一惊 jump out of one’s skin大吃一惊 in a state of shock震惊不已 knock sb sideways使某人惊讶得不知所措 be astonished with one’s mouth wide open惊讶得张大嘴巴
1.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last bend.汽车转过最后一个弯道时,人人都惊得倒吸了一口气。
2.Hearing the unexpected news,Mary froze with shock,as if rooted to the spot.
听到这个意外的消息,玛丽惊呆了,动弹不得。
3.A spark of surprise flashed across his face.He was stunned there,staring at me with wide eyes.
他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。
4.We froze,our mouths dropping/hanging open in surprise.我们呆住了,惊奇地张大了嘴。
5.My jaw dropped/fell in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience.
看到观众如此之多,我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
6.Tom’s eyes flashed a look of surprise at her,and his face turned pale.汤姆看她时,双眼闪现出一种惊奇的神情,他的脸变得苍白。
7.When Josh heard what Franklin wanted,his mouth opened wide enough to swallow a dentist.(夸张)
当乔希听到富兰克林想要的东西时,他的嘴张得大得足以吞下牙医。
8.When I looked at the grade on my math paper my jaw dropped to the ground.(夸张)看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻,我惊得下巴掉在了地上。
[即时演练]
1.她呆住了,目瞪口呆地看着我。(形容词作状语)
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2.她张大嘴巴,瞪着眼,涨红了脸。
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3.令我非常吃惊的是,我看到他瘦削的脸上灿烂的笑容,简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
_______________________,I saw the bright smile on his thin face,and
_______________________.
She froze,and looked at me,open-mouthed.
She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.
Much to my surprise
I couldn’t believe my eyes
4.两个月后,我们偶然听到老汤姆去世的消息。这犹如晴天霹雳。
Two months later,we overheard that old Tom had died.______________
_________________.
5.他的考试成绩非常好,让我们惊得下巴都掉在了地上。
His exam results were great, .
It came as a
bolt from the blue
which made our jaws drop to the ground
应用文写作——求助信(30分钟)
求助信是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助的信件。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I’m writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favour.我写信是想问你能否帮我一个忙。
(2)I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
我写信是希望你能帮我一个忙。
(3)I have some difficulty in doing...,which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
(4)I’m wondering if you could take the trouble to help me with...
我想知道你是否能费心帮我……
(5)I’m sorry to bother you,but I have some difficulties here and I need your help.
很抱歉打扰你,但我有些困难需要你的帮助。
2.中间句
(1)I am encountering some problems in...,which troubles me a lot.
我在……方面遇到一些问题,这很困扰我。
(2)What bothers me is that...困扰我的事是……
(3)I’ve found that my problem lies mainly in two aspects.For one thing,...; for another,...
我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面,……;另一方面,……
(4)I have some difficulty not only in...but also in...我不仅在……而且在……方面有困难。
3.结尾句
(1)I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信你的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。
(2)I’m sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
(3)I’m eager to get your timely help./I’m eager for your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
(4)I would be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and...如果你能帮助我……我会非常感激。
(5)I’d appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/
account.
如果你能考虑我的请求,我将不胜感激。
(6)I would be grateful if you could give/lend me a hand.如果你能帮助我,我将十分感激。
[典例展示]
(2024·湘豫名校联考)
假定你是李华,准备参加你校举办的以“快乐阅读,健康视力”为主题的书签设计活动。请你给你的留学生朋友Alick写一封邮件,寻求他的建议和帮助。内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.设计要求(包含绿色、阅读、健康视力三个元素)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:快乐阅读,健康视力Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision;书签 bookmark
[范文佳作]
Dear Alick,
I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to [1]do me a favor.Our school is planning a bookmark designing activity this week.[2]Knowing that you’re quite experienced in designing,I wonder if you could give me some help and advice.(表明写信目的)
Since the theme of the activity is Happy Reading and Maintain Good Vision,the bookmark should contain such [3]key elements as greenness,reading and healthy vision,and it should be nice to look at.Besides,the bookmark should carry both Chinese and English messages.(说明具体情况)
I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.I would be very grateful if you are kind enough to lend me a hand.Please let me know [4]as soon as possible.(表达感激和希望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]帮我个忙 [2]现在分词短语作状语 [3]关键要素 [4]尽快
[即时演练]
(2025·浙江宁波名校联合体联考)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题活动,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Chris,
Word comes that our school is going to hold an activity whose topic is related to traditional Chinese culture.Because this activity will be presented on the English website,I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know,there is a huge cultural difference between China and the Western countries.In order to get more clicks,you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you Westerners prefer.What’s more,if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements,what should I do Knowing you are interested in China,I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible,you can reply to me as soon as possible.I will take your advice into consideration.I really appreciate your help.
Yours truly,
Li Hua(共19张PPT)
后悔与内疚&推荐信
第7周
短语词块 be consumed with guilt深感内疚 be/feel ashamed of oneself为自己感到羞愧 guilt is written all over one’s face满脸愧疚 be/feel guilty about sth对某事感到内疚 be filled with guilt充满内疚 be overwhelmed with/by shame羞愧难当 feel too ashamed to show one’s face无地自容 a deep sense of shame深深的羞耻感 be overcome/consumed with shame羞愧极了 blush with shame羞得脸红 feel bitterly regretful感到非常后悔 an expression of shame crosses one’s face脸上掠过羞愧的表情 feel one’s face burning感到脸发烫 feel the blood rush/rushing to one’s face感到脸阵阵发烫
续写语料积累7
情感描写 后悔与内疚(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.An expression of shame crossed his face.
他面露愧色。
2.The lady remembered her rude words with a deep sense of shame.
女士想起自己说过的粗鲁话,感到十分羞愧。
3.I felt embarrassed and guilty about my silly mistake.我为自己愚蠢的错误感到尴尬、内疚。
4.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.她羞愧难当,觉得脸阵阵发烫。
5.How I regretted that I wasn’t careful enough.The coffee spoiled my new dress!我多么后悔自己不够小心。咖啡弄脏了我的新衣服!
6.If only she had not left her mobile phone in Tom’s bag.要是她没有把手机放在汤姆的包里就好了。
7.If I had followed Tom and hadn’t quarreled with him,I wouldn’t have got lost.
=Had I followed Tom and not quarreled with him,I wouldn’t have got lost.如果我跟着汤姆,没和他吵架的话,我就不会迷路了。
8.How I wish I had spent more time with my grandmother while she was alive!
我多么希望祖母在世的时候,我能多花些时间陪陪她!
[即时演练]
1.她的面颊羞得发烫。
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2.她感到愧疚难当。
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3.我有些内疚,偷偷瞟了妈妈一眼,发现她正瞪着我。
______________________________________________________________
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Her cheeks burned with shame.
She was overwhelmed by feelings of guilt.
Feeling rather guilty,I stole a glance at my mother,and found her glaring at me.
4.要是我没有独自离开农场,那该多好!
______________________________________________________________
5.如果我听从了他的建议,我们就会在一起玩得很开心。
______________________________________________________________
If only I had not left the farm alone!
If I had followed his advice,we would have had fun together.
应用文写作——推荐信(30分钟)
推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等。信中应提出推荐的理由并介绍自己推荐内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am both honoured and pleased to recommend...我很荣幸也很高兴推荐……
(2)I am writing to you to recommend...
我给你写信是要推荐……
(3)It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a recommendation.
我很高兴借此机会推荐……
(4)Hearing/Learning that...,I can’t wait to/would like to recommend...
了解到……,我迫不及待地/想推荐……
(5)Delighted to know that you are going to...,I would like to offer my recommendation.
很高兴得知你将……,我很愿意向你推荐。
2.中间句
(1)The reason why I recommend...is that...
我推荐……的原因是……
(2)It makes me delighted that you show great interest in...and that you want to know something about...
我很高兴你对……很感兴趣,并且你想知道有关……的一些情况。
(3)I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
(4)I recommend that you...so that you can...
我建议你……以便你能够……
3.结尾句
(1)If you need further information,don’t hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.如果你需要进一步的信息,请不要犹豫与我联系。期待你的早日/及时回复。
(2)Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
我很感激/期待你能考虑我的建议。
(3)I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial.Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
(4)Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,I would be more than grateful.
如果你能考虑此推荐,我将不胜感激。
(5)Whenever you need help,please don’t hesitate to let me know.
无论你何时需要帮助,请及时让我知道。
[典例展示]
假定你是李华,在美国某校学习交流期间,该校拟举办趣味运动会(fun sports meeting),校学生会向全校师生征集有创意的运动项目。你打算给学生会写一封邮件推荐一项有趣的运动项目,内容包括:
(1)你推荐的创意项目;
(2)你的推荐理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning that the Students’ Association is collecting creative items for the [1]upcoming fun sports meeting,I can’t wait to recommend the [2]three-legged race.(说明推荐的项目)
In a three-legged race,two students form a pair,standing side by side,[3]with one of their legs tied together,thus creating the amusing “two people,three legs” scene.The champion goes to those who reach the finish line first.[4]Easy as it may sound,the race requires effective [5]cooperation and team spirit,which are [6]crucial to everyone [7]in the long term.(推荐的理由)
Hope you will find my recommendation beneficial.Anticipating your [8]prompt reply.(希望和期盼)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]adj.即将来临的 [2]adj.三条腿的 [3]with复合结构 [4]as引导的让步状语从句,部分倒装结构 [5]n.合作 [6]adj.至关重要的 [7]从长远来看 [8]adj.迅速的
[即时演练]
假如你是李华,你校英文报为促进大家对中国传统艺术的了解,特开设了“Art of the Week”专栏。请你用英文给编辑写一封信,推荐一种你喜爱的传统艺术形式,内容包括:
1.艺术形式简介;2.推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Editor,
I am writing to recommend a traditional art form that I love for your “Art of the Week” column.
The art form I would like to recommend is Chinese calligraphy.It is an ancient art form that has been practiced in China for thousands of years.It is a form of visual art that involves the use of brush and ink to create beautiful characters and symbols.I recommend Chinese calligraphy because it has been an engaging form of entertainment as well as a means of passing on Chinese history,culture and values.Therefore,
the introduction to it in your column can not only enhance our cultural confidence but also promote our national pride.
I hope you will consider my recommendation and feature Chinese calligraphy in your “Art of the Week” column.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua(共18张PPT)
尴尬与同情&咨询信
第8周
短语词块 feel sorry/sympathy for...为……感到抱歉/同情 have/feel a huge surge of sympathy for...对……感到非常同情 in an awkward position处境尴尬 make one’s toes curl使人尴尬,使人难为情 blood rushes to one’s face/cheeks血液涌上脸颊 blush with embarrassment尴尬得脸颊绯红 lower/hang/drop one’s head in embarrassment尴尬地低下头 one’s cheeks are hot with embarrassment某人双颊窘得发烫 a wave of embarrassment 一阵尴尬 be struck dead with embarrassment尴尬得要死
续写语料积累8
情感描写 尴尬与同情(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.Suddenly,she leapt up,embarrassment written on her red face.突然,她跳了起来,涨红的脸上写满了窘迫。
2.Smiling awkwardly,I admitted feeling a little bit hungry.我尴尬地笑了笑,承认有点饿。
3.A flush of embarrassment came to my cheeks at the sound of my stomach grumbling.当我的肚子咕噜咕噜的时候,我脸上露出了尴尬的表情。
4.So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily,feeling the blood rushing to her face.
她太尴尬了,笨拙地站在那里,感到脸阵阵发烫。
5.Seeing her condition,I immediately felt a huge surge of sympathy for her.It was coming deep from within my heart.
看到她的情况,我立刻对她产生了一种深深的发自内心的同情。
6.When he was exposed to the truth,so firmly did embarrassment take hold of him that his palms were sweating and his knees got weak.暴露在真相面前,他是如此尴尬以至于手心出汗,膝盖发软。
7.Standing in the classroom,I became increasingly embarrassed and could feel my heart thumping wildly,my face burning badly.
站在教室里,我越来越尴尬,能听见自己心跳加速的声音,脸上火辣辣的。
[即时演练]
1.“请不要把这件事告诉我爸爸,”他说,尴尬得脸红了。
“Please don’t tell my dad about this,” he said,______________________
_______________.
2.当玛丽意识到自己在全班同学面前犯了一个错误时,她尴尬地低下了头。
when she realized she had made a mistake in front of the whole class.
3.一想到要在观众面前做报告,她就很难为情。
having to give her presentation in front of the audience
.
blushing with
embarrassment
Mary lowered/hung/dropped her head in embarrassment
The thought of
made her toes curl
4.当那个男人困惑的目光盯着她时,玛丽的脸颊窘得发烫。
With the man’s confused eyes fixed on her,_________________________
______________.
5.仅仅同情残疾人是不够的,我们应该学会尊敬他们。
.We should learn to respect them.
Mary’s cheeks were hot with
embarrassment
It is not enough to have sympathy for the disabled
应用文写作——咨询信(30分钟)
咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)I am writing to ask you some relevant questions.我写信向你询问一些相关的问题。
(2)I’d like to know whether you can tell me something about...
我想知道你是否能告诉我有关……的情况。
(3)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning...我写信是想知道你能否给我提供有关……的信息。
(4)I am wondering if you could/would let me know something about...
我想知道你能否告知我有关……的情况。
(5)I’m writing to inquire/ask for some information/details about...
我写信是为了咨询有关……的信息/细节。
2.中间句
(1)To begin with,I wonder what...Besides,I’m at a loss what...Last but not least,how should I...
首先,我想知道……此外,我对……感到茫然,最后但同样重要的是,我应该如何……?
(2)I’d like to know something about...I would also like to inquire...我想知道关于……的一些事情。我还想咨询……
(3)Another point I am uncertain/unclear about is...我还不确定的另外一点是……
(4)Could you be so kind to tell me the time arrangement for...
你能告诉我……的时间安排吗?
(5)I’d be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for...如果你能告诉我……是否有任何特殊要求,我将不胜感激。
3.结尾句
(1)I am looking forward to your immediate/prompt response.期待你的及时答复。
(2)I would be very grateful if you can send me a reply as soon as possible.
如果你能尽快给我回复,我将非常感激。
(3)Could you be kind enough to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects
请你给我发送一些跟上述诸方面有关的小册子好吗?
(4)Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的善意,对于你对这封信的及时回复我们将非常感激。
[典例展示]
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校组织的暑假夏令营。你想参加,现在就此事向他咨询该活动的相关事宜。请你根据以下提示给他写一封信。
1.感谢他的邀请;
2.询问夏令营的相关事宜(具体日程安排、需要携带的物品等);
3.希望尽快得到回信。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[范文佳作]
Dear Tim,
Thank you so much for inviting me to take part in the summer camp organized by your school in the approaching summer holiday.[1]Quite interested,I am writing to [2]inquire about further details.(感谢邀请,写信目的)
Above all,I wonder if it is convenient for you to inform me of the specific schedule.Could you tell me when it will begin and how long it will last
Besides,as this is my first experience to participate in such an activity,would you be kind enough to offer any suggestions on what items I specially need to take with me What’s more,what attention should be paid to in the activity?(询问夏令营的相关事宜)
I am really excited and looking forward to it.I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.(希望尽快得到回信)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]形容词作状语 [2]咨询
[即时演练]
假定你是美国纽约的一名高中生Chris,你打算暑假来天津学习汉语,并写信向在天津的笔友李津咨询他们学校的相关课程。内容要点:
1.说明写信目的;
2.咨询课程的情况(班级大小、是否侧重听说、能否与中国学生交流等);
3.询问是否提供食宿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Li Jin,
I’m going to study Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding relevant courses in your school.
First of all,I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses focus on listening and speaking practice.Besides,I wonder whether I’ll have the opportunity to communicate with Chinese students,which will surely be a good chance for me to learn more about China.At last,I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodations are included.
I’m looking forward to your early response.
Yours faithfully,
Chris(共21张PPT)
幸福与感动&告知信
第9周
短语词块 a tender hug一个温柔的拥抱 give...a long loving hug给……一个长久的爱的拥抱 cup one’s face in one’s hands用手捧着某人的脸 never take one’s eyes off the wonderful sight of...目不转睛地看着……的奇妙景象 touched deeply/immensely被深深感动 heartfelt gratitude衷心的感谢 be filled with gratitude and joy充满感激和喜悦 move sb to tears in a flash某人突然感动得热泪盈眶 a warm upsurge in one’s heart一股暖烘烘的热潮涌上心头 from one’s bottom of heart发自内心地
续写语料积累9
情感描写 幸福与感动(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.She was overflowing with happiness.
她觉得幸福满满。
2.Tears of happiness flowed down her cheeks.
幸福的泪水顺着她的面颊流了下来。
3.Tears filling her eyes,she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
4.I express my great thanks for your kindness from my bottom of heart.
我从心底对你的好意表示非常感谢。
5.When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,his eyes danced with joy and sweetness.
当妈妈亲吻宝贝的面颊时,宝贝的眼睛里闪烁着开心与甜蜜的光芒。
6.And the minute they met,they hugged together firmly as if they would never separate again.他们一见面,就紧紧地拥抱在一起,好像永远不会再分开。
7.“Happy Mother’s Day!” the twins greeted her,with their eyes twinkling with excitement.“母亲节快乐!”双胞胎向她致以问候,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
8.Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins,she sobbed,with delightful tears streaming down her face.她沉浸在美味的早餐和她的双胞胎纯洁的爱当中,抽泣着,开心的眼泪从脸上流下来。
9.It was an event that happened in the school last year.But it is now still fresh in my mind and keeps me touched all the time.那是去年发生在学校的一件事,却让我记忆犹新,至今令我感动不已。
[即时演练]
1.小女孩像一只快乐的小鸟一样扑向她爸爸。
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2.金色的阳光在她的长发上飞舞(dance),孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡(float)。
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3.我感到一股暖流流遍全身。(流遍:surge through)
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The little girl threw herself to her dad like a happy bird.
Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children’s laughter floated in the air.
I felt the warmth surging through me.
4.每当他想起去年冬天,他的眼睛就闪烁着喜悦的光芒。(闪烁着:twinkle with)
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5.一天晚上,站在缀满宝石般的天空下,我发现自己对所有的艰辛心存感激。(艰辛:hardships)
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His eyes twinkled with pleasure every time he remembered last winter.
One evening,standing under the jeweled sky,I found myself thankful for all the hardships.
应用文写作——告知信(30分钟)
告知信多是从个人角度出发,将对方想要了解的事情告诉对方,让对方知道。告知信通常分为两类:1.告知某人有某事将要发生;2.回复某人关于某事的询问。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)It’s a pleasure for me to inform you of...
我很高兴地通知你……
(2)I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.我写信是想告诉你一些相关的细节。
(3)I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(4)I am quite willing to inform you of some relevant details.我很愿意告诉你一些相关的细节。
(5)I’m so happy to know that...from your letter,so I’m writing to tell you some relevant details.
我很高兴从你的信中得知……,所以我写信告诉你一些相关的细节。
(6)Having learned that...,I can’t wait to share some relevant details with you.得知……,我迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(7)No sooner had I learned that...than I couldn’t wait to share some relevant details with you.
我刚得知……就迫不及待地想和你分享一些相关的细节。
(8)I’m very glad/delighted/more than pleased to receive your email/letter,in which you expressed great interest in...I’m quite/perfectly willing to share with you some information about it.
我很高兴收到你的电子邮件/信,在电子邮件/信中你表示对……很感兴趣。我很乐意和你分享一些有关它的信息。
2.中间句
(1)Some details regarding/concerning...are as follows.一些关于……的细节如下。
(2)...will take place between...and...,so we’d better...……将在……和……之间进行,所以我们最好……
(3)A wide range of meaningful activities will be held in...,including...,which are bound to appeal to enthusiasts like you.将在……举办多种多样包括……在内的有意义的活动,这些活动一定会吸引像你一样的爱好者。
(4)...is arranged to start from...,which will last...安排……从……开始,为期……
3.结尾句
(1)If you want to know more detailed information/anything else,please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.如果你想知道更多详细信息/其他事情,请尽管联系我/给我写信。
(2)I sincerely hope the information is beneficial to you./I sincerely hope you can benefit from the information.我真诚地希望这些信息对你有益。
(3)Please don’t hesitate to turn to me for help if you have any other questions.如果你还有其他的问题,请尽管向我求助,不要犹豫。
(4)If there is anything I can do for you,I would be more than delighted to offer my help/come to your assistance.如果有什么我能为你做的,我将非常乐意提供帮助/来帮助你。
[典例展示]
(2025·江苏南京六校联考)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom告诉你,他对我国的中秋节特别感兴趣,特写信向你咨询相关习俗,请你回复邮件介绍该节日。内容包括:
1.时间(农历8月15日);
2.习俗活动;
3.意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[范文佳作]
Dear Tom,
Glad to hear from you.Learning that you are interested in our Mid-Autumn Festival,I am writing to share something about it with you.(点明告知内容)
The Mid-Autumn Festival,[1]originating from our ancestors’ [2]worship of the moon,falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month,
[3]when people believe the moon is at its brightest and fullest if the weather is fine.As a tradition,the whole family will usually get together to have a big dinner and then enjoy mooncakes gathering at the table in the beautiful moonlight.Sometimes,the elderly in the family will tell the myth of the moon—Chang’e Flying to the Moon—to the children.(具体介绍中秋节:时间、习俗和意义)
Hoping my introduction to the Mid-Autumn Festival will help you get some [4]insight into it.Looking forward to your reply.(希望和盼望)
Yours,
Li Hua
亮词美句:[1]起源于 [2]n.崇拜 [3]when引导的定语从句 [4]深刻理解
[即时演练]
(2025·湖北名校联盟联考)
假定你是李华,上周五你校组织了校园农场的丰收活动。请你给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.丰收场景;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Leo,
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday.________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Leo,
I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday. It was such a delightful and memorable experience that I couldn’t wait to tell you about it.
At the sight of the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers,tomatoes and grapes,we found it hard to contain our excitement.After receiving some instructions from the teachers,we plunged into the harvesting activity.We bustled around,each with a basket in hand,carefully gathering the fruits of our labor.Personally,
I collected a variety of vegetables such as carrots,tomatoes and peppers.I even cooked them for my families,though,honestly speaking,they were a bit overcooked.
This activity not only brought me the joy of harvest but also taught me the value of labor,making the efforts on the campus farm truly worthwhile.
Yours,
Li Hua(共19张PPT)
头部动作&演讲稿
第10周
短语词块 shake one’s head摇头 nod one’s head点头 raise/lift one’s head抬起头 throw one’s head back后仰 drop/lower/hang/bend/bow one’s head低头 turn one’s head转过头 tilt one’s head to the side把头侧向一边 rest one’s head on one’s shoulder把头靠在某人肩上 scratch one’s head挠头 bury one’s head in...把头埋进…… feel one’s head spinning觉得天旋地转 one’s head droops/droop one’s head 耷拉着脑袋 put/hold one’s head in one’s hands双手抱头 hang one’s head in disappointment/shame垂头丧气/羞愧地垂下头 one’s head shakes like a rattle某人的脑袋像拨浪鼓一样摇晃
续写语料积累10
动作描写 头部动作(15分钟)
[头脑风暴]
1.The moment the audience turned their heads,they saw the fireworks.
观众们一转头就看到了烟花。
2.I stopped my work and raised my head with surprise in my eyes.
我停下了手中的活,满眼诧异地抬起了头。
3.The boy lowered/bent/bowed/hung/dropped his head in shame.这个男孩羞愧地低下了头。
4.Approving of the arrangement,the two parties nodded their heads in agreement.
双方都赞成这一安排,点头表示了同意。
5.He buried his head under the blanket,pretending to be asleep.
他把头埋在毯子下面,假装睡着了。
6.She stuck her head out of the door to see who was there.她从门口探出头来看看是谁。
7.His wife tilted his head to the side and inspected the wound.
他的妻子把他的头侧向一边,然后检查伤口。
[即时演练]
1.令我大吃一惊的是,她点头同意了。
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2.她耷拉着脑袋,几分钟后就睡着了。
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3.孩子们仰着头,兴奋地望着天空中五颜六色的风筝。(运用with复合结构)
,the children excitedly looked at the colorful kites in the sky.
Much to my surprise,she nodded in agreement.
With her head drooping/drooped,she fell asleep a few minutes later.
With their heads thrown back
4.我胆怯地低下头,吓得不敢看父亲那张阴云密布的脸。
,too frightened to look at my father’s cloudy face.
5.她抬起头注视着老师,急切地想知道结果。(用形容词短语作状语)
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I lowered/bent/bowed/hung/dropped my head timidly
She raised her head to gaze at the teacher,anxious to know the result.
应用文写作——演讲稿(30分钟)
演讲稿是参加会议者为了在会议或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。演讲稿分为欢迎辞、欢送辞、毕业致辞等。也可以就某个话题发表自己的感想(保护校园环境、关注青少年的身体健康等);竞选某个岗位如学生会主席等。具体写作结构如下:
[头脑风暴]
1.开头句
(1)It is my great honor to deliver a speech on...on behalf of...我很荣幸代表……就……发表演讲。
(2)It is a great privilege for me to stand here,sharing my opinions about...
我很荣幸能站在这里,分享我对……的看法。
(3)I am honored to have this precious chance to speak here on such a special occasion.
我很荣幸有这个宝贵的机会在这样一个特殊的场合在这里发言。
(4)I’m more than honored to speak here and share my ideas with you.The topic of my speech is...
我非常荣幸在这和大家分享我的想法。我演讲的主题是……
(5)I want to share with you how the...has had an impact/influence on our life.我想和大家分享……是如何影响我们的生活的。
2.中间句
(1)When it comes to (doing) sth...
说到(做)某事……
(2)First and foremost,...Moreover,...Last but not least,...
首先,……此外,……最后但同样重要的是,……
(3)It is+...+that+...正是……才……
(4)Not only...but also...不但……而且……
(5)Never will you regret if you...
如果你……,你永远不会后悔。
3.结尾句
(1)In short,I’m strongly believed that only if we...,can we...Thank you for your listening!
总之,我坚信只有我们……,我们才能……。谢谢大家的聆听!
(2)In short,I’d like to stress the importance of doing...That’s all I want to say about this point.Thank you for your attention!
简而言之,我想强调做……的重要性。关于这一点,我想说的就是这些。谢谢大家的关注!
(3)Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you here today.
今天由衷地感谢大家给我这次机会在这演讲。
(4)I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! Thank you for your listening!
我希望上面提到的对你们有帮助!谢谢聆听!
[典例展示]
假定你是李华,最近你校准备举办以“Exercise an Hour Every Day,Healthy Life for a Lifetime”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.你对这一主题的理解;
2.你喜欢的运动项目及益处;
3.号召同学们积极运动。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[范文佳作]
Good afternoon,everyone! I’m Li Hua,a student in Senior One.It is my great honor to deliver a speech with the theme of Exercise an Hour Every Day,Healthy Life for a Lifetime here.(自我介绍,进入演讲主题)
[1]When it comes to this theme,I’d like to [2]stress the importance of doing exercise as follows.[3]First and foremost,as we all know,a person who keeps on taking exercise regularly will keep fit and live a happy life.In addition,as for me,I prefer playing badminton with my friends after school,which not only benefits both my health and my mood,but also refreshes my mind after a long period of study.Last but not least,
it is exercise that [4]enables us to have a good body and life.(具体事项:主题解读,运动益处)
To sum up,[5]only if we positively do exercise for an hour every day can we gain a healthy life for a lifetime,so let’s take action right now.Thank you for your listening!(发出呼吁,号召大家积极参加运动)
亮词美句:[1]当提到…… [2]强调……的重要性 [3]首要的是;首先 [4]使能够 [5]only置于句首,后接状语,句子部分倒装
[即时演练]
假定你是学生会主席李华,下周学校要接待来自澳大利亚的交换生,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Australian friends,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Australian friends,
On behalf of our school,I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you.We are delighted to have you with us.
To make your stay here memorable,various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different culture.As planned,we will hold a talent show where everyone can show their outstanding performances.Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled,such as paper-cutting,Chinese opera,calligraphy,
etc.,followed by a gift-exchanging activity.Additionally,you will be invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.
I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves and wish you a pleasant journey.Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua