2026年高考英语一轮复习 读后续写（含答案与解析）

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高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 静安区校级期中）Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
For many people，nothing is more enjoyable than spending a whole afternoon reading a good novel.But are novels simply a pleasant way to pass the time，or could it be true that reading fiction actually benefits our lives？
One of the joys of fiction is that it can take us to places that our lives won't.It can transport us to 17th century France，or to war﹣torn Germany.It can take us to a future world in which artificial intelligence takes over and books are banned，or a fantasy world where people battle it out for food.
Fiction can also introduce us to a whole range of people that we haven't yet met.And this，according to Carrie Oates，a novelist and academic，is perhaps the real benefit of stories.In one of her studies，participants were asked to read either a short story by Chekhov，or a version of the story in documentary form.Those who were given the fictionalized version were found to be more likely to sympathize with the characters thus going through greater changes in personality.
In another study，she showed participates photos of eyes of people who were feeling and thinking different things.The people who read fiction were better able to interpret those thoughts and minds of the characters.We think about why，they behave in a certain way，and what they are likely to do next.Just as we might become more knowledgeable about psychology and astronomy if we read about psychology and astronomy，we get better at this kind of social thinking if we read fiction.This improves our understanding of the thoughts and feelings of those around us in real life.
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2．（2025 庐阳区校级三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the quiet town of San Rafael，California，Sean Currey，a man who had faced the struggles of homelessness for years，was searching for food in a trash bin（垃圾箱） behind a coffee shop.On December 9，while he was looking through the trash，his eyes caught sight of a wallet belonging to Evelyn Topper，an 80﹣year﹣old resident.Though Currey，who has been homeless on and off for years，briefly considered using the credit cards inside，he finally decided to return the wallet.
"It's natural for anyone in my situation﹣cold and hungry﹣to think about using found credit cards，"Currey admitted."But knowing I did the right thing outweighed the temptation（诱惑）.I'd rather be hungry with a clear mind."
The story happened when Evelyn picked up two drinks at Kamson Coffee.She paid for them and placed her wallet in her jacket pocket，forgetting to zip（拉拉链） it up.As she left the coffee shop，the wallet fell out unnoticed.It was only when she got home that she realized it was missing.Anxious，she searched her car and house and called the coffee shop，but no luck."My wallet had everything﹣credit cards，debit cards，even my Medicare card.I was beside myself，"she recalled.
Fortunately，Currey found Evelyn's wallet and，against all odds，chose to return it.Evelyn was excited when she received a call from an unknown number.It was Currey，telling her he had found her wallet in a trash bin and wanted to return it."I couldn't believe it.He could have taken everything and disappeared，but he chose honesty，"Evelyn said，tears of gratitude in her eyes.They met at her home，and Currey handed her the wallet with a smile."I just wanted to help someone in need.It made me feel good to do something kind，"he said shyly.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Evelyn was deeply touched and shared the story with her 12﹣year﹣old granddaughter，Mikayla.__________
The community responded with a wave of support.________________
3．（2025 贵阳模拟） It was the third week in her new college but Radha was still struggling.A shy and timid（胆怯的） girl from the small town of Chikmagalur，Radha had moved to Bangalore to pursue her degree in Economics.Although the idea of studying at a famous college excited her，the reality of being away from her family and the lack of confidence to talk to her classmates made her feel lonely and homesick.
She always sat quietly in class，not interacting much with her new classmates.Sometimes，Radha would glance at her classmates laughing together，her fingers nervously tracing the words "Hi，I'm Radha"in her notebook﹣a greeting she never dared to say aloud.On most days，she found herself crying in the classroom，overwhelmed by the newness of it all.
One morning，Radha's classmate，Nisha，arrived at the classroom a little earlier than usual.The whole room was empty with only Radha sitting at her desk，her face buried in her arms，her shoulders shaking.Nisha wondered if she should ask Radha what was wrong.She hesitated for a moment，unsure of what to do.Wanting to respect her privacy，Nisha pretended not to notice and quietly took her seat.
In the next few weeks，Nisha paid a little more attention than usual to Radha.She kept her distance，not wanting to bother.But it always seemed Radha was under stress of some sort.She wondered what could be troubling Radha so much.
One afternoon，after finishing her classes for the day，Nisha was on her way to the gym when she spotted Radha standing at the edge of the road，looking lost and unsure.She seemed nervous about crossing the road.
Nisha quickly walked up to her."Hey，Radha!Need some help？" she asked，her voice friendly.Radha looked up，surprised."Oh，hi，Nisha.I….I'm just trying to figure out how to cross this road，"she said，her voice soft.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150词左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Nisha smiled warmly and stepped forward to offer help.
"Why don't we start with lunch together tomorrow？"，said Nisha.
4．（2025 石家庄三模） Emily and Zoe had been best friends since second grade.They went to the same school，played on the same soccer team，and even wore matching bracelets（手链）.Everyone around them said they were like two sides of the same coin.They believed nothing could come between them.But things started to change when a new girl Daisy came to their class.
One day，their teacher，Mr.Lynn，announced a big group project."Pick a partner，"he said.Emily immediately turned to Zoe，expecting her usual smile and a quick"yes."But to her surprise，Zoe was already talking to Daisy. "I'm going to work with Daisy this time，"Zoe said to Emily，almost too casually.Emily felt like the air had been knocked out of her.She nodded and forced a smile，but inside，she was confused and hurt.That night，she stared at her phone screen，hoping for a message that never came.
Over the next few days，she avoided Zoe.Their texts stopped，they no longer sat together during lunch，and the bracelets they once wore daily were now left at home.Even during class，Emily found it hard to focus，her mind replaying the moment when Zoe chose someone else.
Weeks passed.The school organized a three﹣day camping trip in the mountains.Students were divided into several groups.Emily and Zoe ended up in the same one，along with Daisy and two other classmates.Though they barely spoke，they worked together to put up tents and gather firewood.Their conversations were limited to short，polite exchanges﹣nothing like before.
On the second night，dark clouds rolled in and heavy rain soon followed.Everyone rushed into their own tents.Emily quickly discovered that hers was leaking.Cold and upset，she went outside，seeking for help.The wind howled around her，and each raindrop felt like a tiny needle against her skin.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then，she saw a flashlight approaching.
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With Zoe's help，they soon fixed the tent.
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5．（2025 锦江区校级模拟）An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow （乌鸦） landed on their window.
The father asked his son， "What is this？" The son replied， "It is a crow." After a few minutes，the father asked his son for the second time， "What is this？" The son said， "Father，I told you just now.It's a crow."
After a little while，the father asked his son the same question for the third time， "What is this？"
At this time，some expression of anger was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father. "It's a crow，a crow." A little while later，the father again asked his son for the fourth time， "What is this？"
This time his son shouted at his father， "Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again although I have told you so many times 'IT IS A CROW'？Are you not able to understand this？"
A minute later the father went to his room and came back with a diary，which he had kept since his son was born.On opening a page，he asked his son to read that page：
Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow suddenly landed on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I didn't at all feel angry，but instead felt affection for my innocent son.
Paragraph 1：
After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.______
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Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.______
6．（2025 湖北模拟） Sophia had always hated paintings.Maybe it was the way they just sat there，frozen in time，pretending to hold meaning.To her，paintings were dishonest.People acted as if they were windows into the artist's soul，but to her，they were just meaningless colours.What did a winding mess of blues and oranges really say？A painting didn't breathe.It didn't feel.It was just there.
So when her best friend dragged her to the grand opening of the town's new art gallery，she refused but failed. "This is suffering，" Sophia said，arms crossed as she followed behind her friend.The walls were lined with enormous paintings—some abstract，some detailed，all equally dull in her eyes.Her friend，of course，was fully attracted.That was when Sophia noticed the old woman.She was standing upright before a large painting，her fingers resting lightly on the frame.Next to her was a younger man who was describing the artwork in an attentive voice.
"This one，" he was saying， "is a winter scene.A frozen river，two children playing near the bank.The brushwork is delicate..."
The old woman nodded，a gentle smile on her lips as she listened，But then，suddenly，the man's phone rang. "I have to take this，Eleanor.I'll be back soon." For a moment，the woman stood still，as if waiting for him to return.But in the shifting （不断移动的） crowd，she took a smarm in certain step forward—and ran straight into Sophia，
"OK，I'm so sorry，dear，" the woman said，steadying herself. "Uh，no，it's fine，" She hesitates "Are you blind？" The old woman smiled. "Yes，dear.Since I was twenty." Sophia felt confused. "Then why are you here？" The woman laughed. "Because unitmting aren't just for the eyes.They hold stories and emotions.I come to feel them，even if I can't see them." She tilted （使倾斜） her head slightly，then added， "Would you mind helping me？Just until my friend returns？"
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在否题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：Sophia hesitated，but something about the woman made it difficult to refuse.
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Paragraph 2：The old woman smiled， "If you could paint one thing that shows your heart，what would it be？"
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7．（2025 中原区校级模拟） Mrs.Thompson，a retired teacher，was well﹣known for her insightful advice and genuine willingness to help others.Many high school students often turned to her for guidance and as her neighbor，me included.
One afternoon，feeling troubled and uncertain about my future after a disappointing exam，I decided to knock on Mrs.Thompson's door.
"I don't know what I'm doing with my life，" I admitted，my eyes fixed on the floor."It feels like everyone else has it all figured out，and I'm just stuck." My voice trembled with sadness and a hint of fear.
I had bombed my last math test，and it felt like that failure stayed in every corner of my mind，increasing my anxiety about college examination and what I might want to pursue.While my friends seemed to advance effortlessly through their studies，I was struggling to stay afloat.The feeling that I was falling behind only deepened my sense of hopelessness.
Mrs.Thompson listened carefully，her face a picture of calm and understanding.Without saying much，she handed me a small tomato seedling（苗） in a pot.The tiny plant，with its delicate green leaves，seemed to symbolize a slight sign of hope.
"Let's plant this in the garden，" she said gently. "Water it every day and make sure it gets enough sunlight.But for a whole week，don't focus on its progress.Just trust that it's growing."
Every day，I faithfully watered the little seedling，as if I was putting my own hopes into it.I carefully ensured it got the right amount of sunlight，positioning it just so under the sun's rays.With great self﹣control，I resisted the urge to examine it too closely.As the days went by，I felt a mix of eagerness and impatience，like a child waiting for a long﹣promised gift，longing to see some sign that my efforts were making a difference.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph one：
"Let's go to check on the plant，" Mrs.Thompson said to me a week later.
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Paragraph two：
One day，as I bent down to water it，a tiny yellow flower caught my eye.
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8．（2025 临沂模拟）
A Life﹣Saving Hero
My wife's job took her out of town a lot and I needed some company.So one day，I went to the local animal﹣rescue center.The little cocker spaniel（可卡猎犬） trembling in a cage caught my eye right away.She had scared eyes and I could tell she longed to be picked up and hugged.I gently petted her soft fur，and to my surprise，she stopped shaking.That was that.I filled out the paperwork and took my new dog—Honey home.
I'd had her only a couple of weeks，but Honey and I quickly became close friends.She followed me like a shadow from the very first day.She loved sitting on my lap.We often went to the backyard，where I picked up a ball and threw it.I sat down to watch Honey race after the ball.We had great fun together.
That October morning last year I decided to take Honey with me while I ran some errands（差事）.She jumped in and settled down on the passenger seat.I got behind the wheel and started the car.We lived in a remote area up in the hills outside San Rafael，surrounded by tall redwoods.We had to drive up the mountain at a low speed to get to our driveway，which was barely wide enough for one car and ended at a steep cliff.
I turned around and backed up slowly.Just then，a flash of sunlight blinded me.I put my hand up to protect my eyes.Suddenly，the car slipped in the soft soil and rolled down the valley.I heard a horrible crash.A giant branch plunged （扎进） through the roof and hit my leg.We landed upside down.I was stuck.I looked over to find Honey.She was still in the passenger seat.She seemed scared but was not hurt.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I knew I had to do something to save us.__________
As I watched Honey fade out of my view，my thoughts started to wander off.__________
9．（2025 西宁二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny，an eleven﹣year﹣old girl，had always been shy and quiet.She rarely spoke up in class and often found herself feeling invisible.One day，her teacher announced a school talent show.Jenny loved singing but had never sung in front of anyone except her family.The idea of performing in front of the whole school terrified her.
That evening，Jenny told her mom about the talent show. "I think you should participate，" her mom said gently. "But I'm too scared，" Jenny replied. "What if I make a mistake and everyone laughs at me？"
Her mom thought for a moment and then handed Jenny a small，beautiful necklace. "This belonged to your grandmother，" she said. "She wore it whenever she felt nervous or scared.It gave her the courage to face her fear.Maybe it can do the same for you."
Jenny decided to give it a try.Over the next few weeks，she practiced singing every day，wearing the necklace for courage.She still felt nervous，but the thought of her grandmother's strength helped her push through her fear.
On the day of the talent show，Jenny's heart was pounding as she stood backstage.She could hear the audience talking and laughing，and her legs felt like jelly （果冻）.But then she touched the necklace and took a deep breath.She walked onto the stage，the bright lights making it hard to see the crowd，and began to sing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Jenny sang，she felt her confidence growing.________
After the performance，Jenny felt a rush of emotions.________
10．（2025 沙坪坝区校级模拟） John Blanchard was studying the crowd making their way through the station.He was looking for the girl whose heart he knew，but whose face he didn't，the girl with the rose.
When reading a book in a Florida library a year before，John became interested not in the contents of the book，but in the notes penciled in the margin （空白处）.The handwriting reflected a thoughtful soul and a beautiful mind.He discovered the former owner's name in the front of the book：Miss Hollis Maynell.
He located her address and wrote a letter introducing himself.The next day he was shipped overseas to serve in the army.During the next year，they grew to know each other through the mail and their friendship developed.The topics of their conversation ranged from sports to poetry.Far away from home，John was delighted to have a friend who he could relate to.He once requested a photograph，but she refused，saying if they could truly talk，it wouldn't matter what she looked like.When the day finally came for him to return home，their first meeting was suggested —7：00 p.m.at the Grand Central Station in New York.
She wrote， "You'll recognize me by the red rose I wear on my coat." So now John was in the station to meet the girl with a rose.
As a pretty and slim girl in green came over，John noticed her blue eyes like flowers in spring.He walked directly towards her，entirely forgetting she was not wearing a rose.As John came closer to her，he saw another woman with a red rose standing nearby.Well past 40，this woman had graying hair done under a worn hat.Seeing the girl in green walk quickly away，John felt as if he were split （劈开） in two.He desired to follow that girl，but longed for the woman whose spirit had truly accompanied and supported him.
注意：（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally John approached the woman with the red rose，who was wearing a smile.________
Entering the cafe across the road，he saw the charming girl sitting by the window.________
11．（2025 重庆模拟） Years ago，someone gave me a little cutting，and I grew a beautiful plant from it，with small，tear﹣shaped leaves hanging over the edges of the pot.
However，the leaves turned brown and drooped（垂落） so much in winter.Unwilling to give it up，I brought what was left to my mom and asked if she could bring it to life.She just smiled and took the pot from me.
My mom carefully trimmed （修剪） the stems，watered the few surviving parts，and helped the hidden leaves reach the sunlight.The next year，the plant came back to life with fresh green leaves for a few months but withered（枯萎） in winter again.
As the plant grew over years，my mother's health kept getting worse.There were good times and bad times，just like the plant's seasons.Mom told me everyone has"good seasons"and"hard seasons"，and life always finds a way to begin again.Just be patient and keep trying when things seem hopeless.
One late winter，when both Mom and the plant were struggling，my Aunt Marion visited.Mom gave her the dying plant to care for.She took it home，determined to help it live.Amazingly，that summer，new leaves grew from the bare plant on her kitchen windowsill.As before，each winter it withered，to be renewed again in late spring.This cycle continued for years until one spring when Aunt Marion thought it was truly dead and threw it away.But my cousin Carole saw the dried plant in the trash and decided to try saving it.She took it to her sunny room.Four women in our family have cared for this plant at different times.
Years later，Mom passed away and I moved far away for a fresh start.Three years later，terribly missing all the relatives，I went back to visit and stayed with Carole.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One morning，I noticed a beautiful plant in her window.________
Several days later，I left with some cuttings.________
12．（2025 高新区校级模拟） One day five﹣year﹣old Beth received a piano as a gift from her neighbor Mr.Laurence，which had belonged to his late granddaughter.When Beth saw that piano for the first time，she was playing with her friends.The beautiful sound flowing from the large pink piano immediately caught their attention.Turning around and seeing the charming piano decorated with golden birds，flowers，and trees that shone like stars，Beth was overwhelmed （充溢） with emotion.
After knowing it was from her neighbor Mr.Laurence，who had just lost her little granddaughter，Beth resolved to express her gratitude in spite of her shyness and worry.Mr.Laurence had always been seen as a "scary man" by the children for he is so tall with beard on the face and a deep voice，seemingly unapproachable.
"You'll have to go and thank him，" said her sister Hannah by way of a joke，for the idea of the child's really going never entered her head. "Yes，I mean to.I guess I'll go now，before I get frightened thinking about it."
And，to the amazement of everyone present，Beth walked down the garden，through the fence，and in Laurence's through the door. "Well，it is the strangest thing I ever see!" cried Hannah，staring after her，while the other children were made quite speechless by her unexpected act.
They would have been still more amazed if they had seen what Beth did afterward.She went and knocked at the study door before she gave herself time to think.When a deep voice called out "Come in"，she entered，right up to Mr.Laurence，who looked quite surprised，and held out her hand，saying，with only a small quake in her voice， "I came to thank you，sir，for the piano..." But she didn't finish，for he looked so sad and friendly that she forgot what she intended to say and，only remembering that he had lost the little girl he loved，she put both arms round him and hugged him.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Mr.Laurence was so touched and pleased.
The children were so surprised to see Mr.Laurence walk Beth home.
13．（2025 天心区校级一模） It was a cool Saturday morning when I dragged myself out of bed.The golden sun of early autumn cast warm light across the room.In the kitchen，my older brother，Jake，sat at the table with a serious look reading a newspaper under the headline "The Oak in Maple Park Set for Removal".
I felt my heart sink.That oak tree wasn't just any tree；it was our tree.Jake and I had spent countless childhood afternoons under its wide branches，playing games and reading comic books.To us，it was more than wood and leaves ﹣ it was a living reminder of years of laughter，stories，and brotherly bonding.
"Can they really do that？" I asked，disbelief in my voice. "The community council wants to remove it to make room for a new parking lot.The plan is under discussion and they'll decide whether to do that at the next council meeting，" he said bitterly.Silence wrapped around us until Jake stood up suddenly. "You know everyone in the community has a right to speak at the council meeting.We have to voice our objections then，" Jake said.I nodded，and without another word，we both knew what we had to do first.
An hour later，we stood at the edge of Maple Park with our "supplies".The oak stood tall，but the ground around it was littered with fallen leaves and plastic bottles.I looked at Jake，who gave me a determined smile. "Let's clean this up，" he said.Not long after we started cleaning，a few curious passersby stopped to ask why we were doing it.Knowing our mission，they began to join us.By late afternoon，the oak's base was free of clutter.We took pictures，not just of the tree but of the people who had come together to save it.Cleaning up was only the first step，and we had more to do.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We decided to show how much this tree meant to everyone.________
By the time the meeting came，we'd collected hundreds of signatures.________
14．（2025 乌鲁木齐三模） School was out!I grabbed my backpack and headed to the library for my favorite after﹣school activity：Writing Club.Miss Lisa，our writing club leader asked us to share stories with a critique partner，who was to give helpful feedback so as to make the best story.My critique partner was Penny.We sat at a table and pushed our stories toward each other.I was nervous.I had no problem coming up with great story ideas but did have problems with spelling，grammar and punctuation.Penny was worried，but why？She always got perfect scores on her spelling and grammar tests.
I read her story without stopping.It was about a dog named Sunny who found a home after saving a family from the flooding river.I loved it."Wow，great story，"I told her."I don't have any suggestions.It's perfect!""Yours too，"she mumbled.She didn't even look at me as she passed mine back.When Miss Lisa announced the end of the class，Penny looked relieved.She jumped up and grabbed her backpack.Everything fell out.She put her stuff back in carelessly and hurried out of the library.I noticed a book under the table.It must have fallen out of Penny's bag.The title was Sunny the Brave.That sounded familiar.I read the description on the back.It was just like Penny's story!It was longer，with some different words，but the plot was exactly the same.I couldn't believe it.Penny had copied this idea!
On my way home，I kept thinking about telling it to Miss Lisa.As I got home，I found my Mom and Dad were in the kitchen making dinner.Dad chopped vegetables into perfect shapes.Mom stirred a sauce on the stove.I realized that Mom and Dad had different skills，making them a great creative team.With Dad's attention to detail and Mom's sense of adventure，their dinners turned out delicious.That gave me a better idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At school the next morning，I walked over to Penny，held out the book and said， "You dropped this."_______
Penny and I decided to write a new story together.________
15．（2025 南通模拟）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was born into a very close family.It was just my parents and me.Over the years I've noticed how well my parents manage to look after their health and how healthy they are.I had never bothered to follow their example or been that curious about the secret of their good health.I never realized what a great resource they could be.
I would look at them both，so slim，strong and healthy—much more so than me —and think，how will I ever get to be like them？I'm constantly impressed by their toughness.They have never taken any sick days from work，unless they really need to.They don't need to visit the doctor much.Their habits are deep﹣rooted and it works for them.
Part of their success is how efficiently they control what they eat.Their diet is extremely healthy and they stick to it.For breakfast，it's porridge；lunch is salad or a whole meal sandwich with butter，garlic，raw onion and black pepper.Dinner is boiled vegetables，or beans.Both of them grew up eating fresh，unprocessed food.
My dad is a bus driver，and my mum works part﹣time as a sales assistant.My dad started skipping at the age of six.He's now a mini celebrity and admired by people worldwide with thousands of followers on social media.And my mum has won fitness competitions at the gym.
In this respect，I was the complete opposite.I hated fitness and was lazy and unfit.Last week I had a health scare；I found a lump（肿块） on my neck.After an examination，it turned out to be fatty tissue，which isn't harmful but unless I lose weight，or I have surgery，it could get worse.My parents said to me：don't get surgery，let us train you and you'll feel much better.I wanted to take the easy option and have it removed.But I also thought，maybe this was an eye﹣opener and a wake﹣up call for me to start getting fit.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
We worked out an exercise plan that suited all three of us.________________________
Now I can feel the benefits.___________________________
16．（2025 郫都区校级模拟） As a forest ranger （护林员），I was making an inspection tour as usual on a misty dawn.Boots sank into the damp path，each step breaking the deep quiet of the ancient woodland.As I adjusted the camera trap on a trunk，the camera was still covered with raindrops from last night.Suddenly，a weak crying sound cut through the fog.
Pushing through wet bushes，I stopped instantly.There，in the shallow muddy river，lay an elephant calf （幼崽）.Its reddish﹣brown fur was dirty with mud.The calf's back leg was trapped unnaturally beneath a messy pile of old wire netting —the kind illegal woodcutters used to mark territories.Old metal pieces were cruel marks of humans in this wild nature reserve.His dark brown eyes locked onto mine，and unexpectedly my normal forest check became a fight against time.
The calf struggled with little strength，and its leg got stuck tighter in the sharp metal wires every time he moved.I thought of Professor Liang，an expert in wildlife protection，who once said， "For endangered species，humans are both threat and hope." Therefore，I carefully opened my field work﹣box.The scissors felt tiny as I tried to cut the wires.One wrong move could hurt the calf.Just as I started cutting，a roar came from the fog.
Behind me，the bushes shook violently.Out of the mist came an adult elephant，with ears flapping （拍打） like a storm cloud.She stopped ten steps away，strong muscles tense under gray skin.The morning sunlight cast the mother's shadow over the trapped calf.We formed a tense triangle —human，mother and calf —bound by fear.A sharp cry of a bird cut through the tension.Its black wings broke the quiet，as if nature itself was watching this delicate moment.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The mother elephant took a step forward，her eyes never leaving me.________
Hours later，I watched the mother elephant and her calf from a distance through cameras.________
17．（2025 岳麓区校级二模） Right after I had my first son，I found myself with a surplus of baby formula（奶粉） I couldn't use due to his stomach issues.Not wanting it to go to waste，I turned to a website for giving away items for free.Shortly afterward，a young woman from my small town reached out，expressing her desperate need for the formula.She explained that her husband had just passed away in an accident，leaving her in a difficult situation.Feeling a tug at my heart，I immediately promised to save all the formula for her.
However，three days passed，and I heard nothing.I tried to connect her but failed.My husband suggested it might be a cruel joke or maybe some sort of sick tricks.Unwilling to believe it，I decided to give it one last try.
This time I got through.In the telephone，I could hear the tiredness and strain in her voice as she mentioned she' d just managed to pay her phone bill and had to wait until she could find a way to get closer to town.It was clear she was struggling.Trying to keep my tone neutral，I offered to send the formula to her house.After an awkward silence，she agreed and provided her address.
Once I hung up，I felt compelled to do more than just provide the formula.We checked her address and discovered she lived in a desolate part of the town.Her cottage was situated in the middle of the desert，far removed from any public transportation.Realizing how tough her situation must be，I went through my pantry（食品储藏室），fridge，and freezer，gathering anything we could spare.In total，we filled three bags and a big laundry basket with food and essentials.
When we arrived at her home the next day，she welcomed us inside，her face lacking in emotion.The sight that greeted me was heartbreaking：her living space was almost empty，with only a single couch and a bare kitchen.Even when we unloaded the items，she still seemed almost numb，as if life had drained all the color from her.Without a word，she simply nodded，turned away，and mechanically began making a bottle for her son，her movements slow and detached（抽离的）.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
On the way back home，I couldn't shake her from my mind.________
Several weeks later，the woman came to me，visibly different.________
18．（2025 河南模拟） It was the New Year's Eve of 2025.Lily，a high﹣school senior，was filled with excitement as she prepared for the annual family gathering at her grandparents' old﹣fashioned house in the countryside.The house was always filled with warmth and laughter during the holidays，and this year was no exception.
As Lily arrived，she noticed that her cousin，Tom，seemed a bit down.Tom had been struggling with his studies and was worried about his future.Lily，determined to cheer him up，decided to spend some time with him before the big dinner.
After a while，they found themselves in the attic（阁楼），going through old boxes filled with memories.Among the old stuff，they discovered an old﹣fashioned board game that their parents used to play when they were kids.Just as they were about to start playing，they heard a loud noise coming from outside.They rushed to the window and saw that a heavy snowstorm had suddenly hit.The wind was howling，and the snow was piling up rapidly.
Realizing that the storm might cause some problems，Lily's parents and uncles decided to check on the generators and the heating system.Meanwhile，Lily and Tom continued their exploration in the attic，hoping to find more interesting things to pass the time.
Suddenly，Tom found a small，dusty diary hidden at the bottom of a box.As he opened it，he found that it was written by their great﹣grandfather.The diary was filled with stories about his life，his struggles，and his hopes for the future.
One story in particular caught their attention.It was about how their great﹣grandfather had faced a difficult time during a harsh winter when he was young.But he never gave up，and with the help of his family and friends，he managed to get through it.As they read on，they were deeply inspired by their great﹣grandfather's perseverance.Just then，Lily had an idea.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She suggested that they share the story with the whole family.________
After the dinner，Tom decided to share his own plans for the future.________
19．（2025 金坛区校级二模） One rainy evening，as I was walking home from school，I heard a faint meowing coming from a nearby alley.Curiosity led me to investigate，and there，in a corner，huddled a tiny，soaking wet kitty.Its eyes were filled with fear and helplessness.
I couldn't just leave it there.I scooped up the little creature and wrapped it in my jacket to keep it warm.When I got home，my parents were surprised to see me with a stray kitty，but they understood my concern and allowed me to keep it for the night.
I dried the kitty with a towel and gave it some milk and a small blanket to sleep on.It purred softly，as if thanking me.That night，as I lay in bed，I thought﹣about﹣how the kitty must have been alone and scared in the cold rain.
The next day，I took the kitty to the veterinarian to make sure it was healthy.The vet said it was just a little undernourished and needed some love and care.I decided to name the kitty Luna.
Over the next few weeks，Luna grew stronger and more playful.She would follow me around the house and curl up on my lap when I was reading.I was determined to find her a forever home.
One sunny weekend，I organized a small adoption event in the neighborhood park.Many people came to see the cute kitty，but no one seemed quite the right fit.Just as I was starting to feel disheartened，a little girl approached with her parents.Her eyes lit up when she saw Luna，and she gently stroked the kitty's fur.
I could tell from the look on her face that she would give Luna all the love and attention she needed.With a heavy heart but a smile on my face，I handed Luna over to the little girl.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Amazed and thrilled，the little girl hugged Luna tightly in her arms.
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Two weeks later，I went to see Luna in the little girl's home.
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20．（2025 温州二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I'd always been told to take care of my older brother，Brian，who was born weak and small.I'd often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him.My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel（守护天使） for Brian.However，that was not the case.
One day our school sponsored a pumpkin﹣carving contest.First prize was ＄100，and I knew just how I would spend it.There was a brand﹣new game I was dying to own.So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket.
When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I'd picked out，it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I'd surely screw it up（搞砸）.I thought of Brian's smaller，delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job.I immediately begged Brian.Unexpectedly，he asked for a cut.That was fifty﹣fifty.Quickly doing the math in my head，I figured out even if I split（分摊） the first prize，I'd still have enough cash for the game.So I gave in to Brian's demands.With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face，and now we had the best pumpkin ever.
Then the unexpected happened：We came in second.Unfortunately，second prize was only ＄50，and I needed every penny of that to buy the game.The day of the awards ceremony，the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home，sick with cold.
If he really wanted to win，he would have been here today，I thought to myself，justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian's runny nose.With hardly a thought，I ran to the store and bought my dream game.That night when Brian asked if we had won，I denied，afraid to look into his eyes.
The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college.I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1：I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye.________________________
Paragraph 2："You actually knew and didn't say anything？"I was shocked.___________________
高考英语一轮复习 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025春 静安区校级期中）Directions：Read the following passage.Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words.Use your own words as far as possible.
For many people，nothing is more enjoyable than spending a whole afternoon reading a good novel.But are novels simply a pleasant way to pass the time，or could it be true that reading fiction actually benefits our lives？
One of the joys of fiction is that it can take us to places that our lives won't.It can transport us to 17th century France，or to war﹣torn Germany.It can take us to a future world in which artificial intelligence takes over and books are banned，or a fantasy world where people battle it out for food.
Fiction can also introduce us to a whole range of people that we haven't yet met.And this，according to Carrie Oates，a novelist and academic，is perhaps the real benefit of stories.In one of her studies，participants were asked to read either a short story by Chekhov，or a version of the story in documentary form.Those who were given the fictionalized version were found to be more likely to sympathize with the characters thus going through greater changes in personality.
In another study，she showed participates photos of eyes of people who were feeling and thinking different things.The people who read fiction were better able to interpret those thoughts and minds of the characters.We think about why，they behave in a certain way，and what they are likely to do next.Just as we might become more knowledgeable about psychology and astronomy if we read about psychology and astronomy，we get better at this kind of social thinking if we read fiction.This improves our understanding of the thoughts and feelings of those around us in real life.
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【答案】 Fiction reading is joyful and good for our lives.Fiction can lead us to where we can't go in real life and let us know different people.Carrie Oates finds that fiction reading enables us to better understand the characters and thus change our personality，and that this understanding helps us identify with real people around us.
【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章探讨了阅读小说的益处，指出小说能带我们体验不同生活，接触多样人物，增强共情力，并提升我们对他人想法和感受的理解。
高分句型一：Fiction can lead us to where we can't go in real life and let us know different people.
翻译：小说可以把我们带到现实生活中无法到达的地方，让我们了解不同的人。
分析：本句使用了where引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Carrie Oates finds that fiction reading enables us to better understand the characters and thus change our personality，and that this understanding helps us identify with real people around us.
翻译：Carrie Oates发现，阅读小说使我们能够更好地理解人物，从而改变我们的性格，这种理解有助于我们与周围的真实人物产生共鸣。
分析：本句使用了两个that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 Fiction reading is joyful and good for our lives.Fiction can lead us to where we can't go in real life and let us know different people.【高分句型一】Carrie Oates finds that fiction reading enables us to better understand the characters and thus change our personality，and that this understanding helps us identify with real people around us.【高分句型二】（阅读小说的益处）
【点评】概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也可称之为摘要。写概要时，读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此，概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达，是二者的有机结合体，是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
2．（2025 庐阳区校级三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In the quiet town of San Rafael，California，Sean Currey，a man who had faced the struggles of homelessness for years，was searching for food in a trash bin（垃圾箱） behind a coffee shop.On December 9，while he was looking through the trash，his eyes caught sight of a wallet belonging to Evelyn Topper，an 80﹣year﹣old resident.Though Currey，who has been homeless on and off for years，briefly considered using the credit cards inside，he finally decided to return the wallet.
"It's natural for anyone in my situation﹣cold and hungry﹣to think about using found credit cards，"Currey admitted."But knowing I did the right thing outweighed the temptation（诱惑）.I'd rather be hungry with a clear mind."
The story happened when Evelyn picked up two drinks at Kamson Coffee.She paid for them and placed her wallet in her jacket pocket，forgetting to zip（拉拉链） it up.As she left the coffee shop，the wallet fell out unnoticed.It was only when she got home that she realized it was missing.Anxious，she searched her car and house and called the coffee shop，but no luck."My wallet had everything﹣credit cards，debit cards，even my Medicare card.I was beside myself，"she recalled.
Fortunately，Currey found Evelyn's wallet and，against all odds，chose to return it.Evelyn was excited when she received a call from an unknown number.It was Currey，telling her he had found her wallet in a trash bin and wanted to return it."I couldn't believe it.He could have taken everything and disappeared，but he chose honesty，"Evelyn said，tears of gratitude in her eyes.They met at her home，and Currey handed her the wallet with a smile."I just wanted to help someone in need.It made me feel good to do something kind，"he said shyly.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Evelyn was deeply touched and shared the story with her 12﹣year﹣old granddaughter，Mikayla.__________
The community responded with a wave of support.________________
【答案】 Evelyn was deeply touched and shared the story with her 12﹣year﹣old granddaughter，Mikayla.Mikayla，inspired by Sean's honesty and kindness，decided to do something special for him.She decided to organize a drive﹣by birthday fundraiser for him，eager to showcase the positive impact one good deed can have.She also set up a GoFundMe page. "What began as a lost wallet has progressed into a beautiful friendship with the entire family，" Mikayla wrote on the GoFundMe page. "This isn't about charity；it's about sympathy，the highest form of love.
The community responded with a wave of support.Neighbors，friends，and even strangers came together to help Currey.The drive﹣by birthday fundraiser was a heartwarming event，with people driving by and dropping off donations，each contribution adding to the growing sense of unity.By the end of the day，Mikayla had raised ＄3，000 for Currey.The coffee shop even offered Currey free meals daily.The fundraiser not only improved Currey's life but also brought the community closer together，proving that kindness and love can indeed make a world of difference.
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，在加州圣拉斐尔，流浪多年的肖恩 柯里在垃圾箱发现伊芙琳的钱包，虽曾动摇，最终决定归还，伊芙琳感激不已，柯里也因善举感到快乐。
高分句型一：What began as a lost wallet has progressed into a beautiful friendship with the entire family.
翻译：起初是一个丢失的钱包，现在已经发展成为与全家人的美好友谊。
分析：本句使用了what引导的主语从句。
高分句型二：The fundraiser not only improved Currey's life but also brought the community closer together，proving that kindness and love can indeed make a world of difference.
翻译：筹款活动不仅改善了Currey的生活，还使社区更加紧密，证明善良和爱确实可以改变世界。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语proving that kindness and love can indeed make a world of difference作状语；that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】 Evelyn was deeply touched and shared the story with her 12﹣year﹣old granddaughter，Mikayla.Mikayla，inspired by Sean's honesty and kindness，decided to do something special for him.She decided to organize a drive﹣by birthday fundraiser for him，eager to showcase the positive impact one good deed can have.She also set up a GoFundMe page. "What began as a lost wallet has progressed into a beautiful friendship with the entire family【高分句型一】，" Mikayla wrote on the GoFundMe page. "This isn't about charity；it's about sympathy，the highest form of love.（伊芙琳深受感动，孙女米凯拉受肖恩善举启发，为他组织募捐并建筹款页，强调善举影响与情感联结）
The community responded with a wave of support.Neighbors，friends，and even strangers came together to help Currey.The drive﹣by birthday fundraiser was a heartwarming event，with people driving by and dropping off donations，each contribution adding to the growing sense of unity.By the end of the day，Mikayla had raised ＄3，000 for Currey.The coffee shop even offered Currey free meals daily.The fundraiser not only improved Currey's life but also brought the community closer together，proving that kindness and love can indeed make a world of difference.【高分句型二】（社区积极响应，募捐活动温馨感人，筹得善款改善肖恩生活，还拉近社区距离，彰显善意与爱的力量）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．（2025 贵阳模拟） It was the third week in her new college but Radha was still struggling.A shy and timid（胆怯的） girl from the small town of Chikmagalur，Radha had moved to Bangalore to pursue her degree in Economics.Although the idea of studying at a famous college excited her，the reality of being away from her family and the lack of confidence to talk to her classmates made her feel lonely and homesick.
She always sat quietly in class，not interacting much with her new classmates.Sometimes，Radha would glance at her classmates laughing together，her fingers nervously tracing the words "Hi，I'm Radha"in her notebook﹣a greeting she never dared to say aloud.On most days，she found herself crying in the classroom，overwhelmed by the newness of it all.
One morning，Radha's classmate，Nisha，arrived at the classroom a little earlier than usual.The whole room was empty with only Radha sitting at her desk，her face buried in her arms，her shoulders shaking.Nisha wondered if she should ask Radha what was wrong.She hesitated for a moment，unsure of what to do.Wanting to respect her privacy，Nisha pretended not to notice and quietly took her seat.
In the next few weeks，Nisha paid a little more attention than usual to Radha.She kept her distance，not wanting to bother.But it always seemed Radha was under stress of some sort.She wondered what could be troubling Radha so much.
One afternoon，after finishing her classes for the day，Nisha was on her way to the gym when she spotted Radha standing at the edge of the road，looking lost and unsure.She seemed nervous about crossing the road.
Nisha quickly walked up to her."Hey，Radha!Need some help？" she asked，her voice friendly.Radha looked up，surprised."Oh，hi，Nisha.I….I'm just trying to figure out how to cross this road，"she said，her voice soft.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150词左右；
（2）请按如下格式作答。
Nisha smiled warmly and stepped forward to offer help.
"Why don't we start with lunch together tomorrow？"，said Nisha.
【答案】 Nisha smiled warmly and stepped forward to offer help.She gently took Radha's hand and guided her across the bustling street，explaining how to watch for the right moment to step.Radha，feeling a sense of relief and gratitude，thanked Nisha for her kindness.As they walked，Nisha shared stories of her own initial struggles when she first moved to the city，making Radha feel less alone in her experience.With Nisha's open and understanding nature making Radha feel more at ease，the connection between them began to form.
"Why don't we start with lunch together tomorrow？" said Nisha.Radha hesitated for a moment，then nodded eagerly.It was the first time she had been invited to socialize，and the thought of making a new friend brought a smile to her face.As they were apart，Radha felt a weight lift off her shoulders.She realized she wasn't alone after all，and there were people who cared.This small act of friendship from Nisha marked the beginning of Radha's journey to overcome her shyness and integrate into her new environment.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了性格内向的女生Radha在新城市、新学校中因胆怯和孤独而难以融入集体，后来在同学Nisha主动帮助与关心下，逐渐敞开心扉、建立友谊，并开始适应大学生活的故事。
高分句型一：She gently took Radha's hand and guided her across the bustling street，explaining how to watch for the right moment to step.
分析：本句话使用了现在分词作状语和"疑问词 + 不定式"结构作宾语。
翻译：她轻轻地拉着罗达的手，引导她穿过熙熙攘攘的街道，并向她解释如何寻找合适的时机。
高分句型二：She realized she wasn't alone after all，and there were people who cared.
分析：本句话使用了省略引导词that的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句。
翻译：她意识到她并不孤单，有人关心她。
【解答】 Nisha smiled warmly and stepped forward to offer help.She gently took Radha's hand and guided her across the bustling street，explaining how to watch for the right moment tostep.Radha，feeling a sense of relief and gratitude，thanked Nisha for her kindness.As they walked，Nisha shared stories of her own initial struggles when she first moved to the city，making Radha feel less alone in her experience.With Nisha's open and understanding nature making Radha feel more at ease，the connection between them began to form.（Nisha如何细心引导Radha过马路，并通过分享自身经历拉近彼此距离，展现她的善意与理解）
"Why don't we start with lunch together tomorrow？" said Nisha.Radha hesitated for a moment，then nodded eagerly.It was the first time she had been invited to socialize，and the thought of making a new friend brought a smile to her face.As they were apart，Radha felt a weight lift off her shoulders.She realized she wasn't alone after all，and there were people who cared.This small act of friendship from Nisha marked the beginning of Radha's journey to overcome her shyness and integrate into her new environment.（Radha的反应与内心变化，以及这次邀请对她情绪和心理状态带来的积极影响，从而开启她融入集体的新阶段）
【点评】读后续写是一种结合阅读和写作的考查方式，主要考查考生的理解能力、想象力、创造力和语言表达能力。在英语写作中，读后续写通常提供一段阅读材料，要求考生根据材料的内容和情节，发挥想象力，续写接下来的故事或论述。这类题型在各类英语考试中较为常见，主要考查学生的阅读理解能力、思维能力和语言表达能力。
1．选材特点：
（1）所需阅读的短文在350以内；
（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
2.阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语衔接程度；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性。
4．（2025 石家庄三模） Emily and Zoe had been best friends since second grade.They went to the same school，played on the same soccer team，and even wore matching bracelets（手链）.Everyone around them said they were like two sides of the same coin.They believed nothing could come between them.But things started to change when a new girl Daisy came to their class.
One day，their teacher，Mr.Lynn，announced a big group project."Pick a partner，"he said.Emily immediately turned to Zoe，expecting her usual smile and a quick"yes."But to her surprise，Zoe was already talking to Daisy. "I'm going to work with Daisy this time，"Zoe said to Emily，almost too casually.Emily felt like the air had been knocked out of her.She nodded and forced a smile，but inside，she was confused and hurt.That night，she stared at her phone screen，hoping for a message that never came.
Over the next few days，she avoided Zoe.Their texts stopped，they no longer sat together during lunch，and the bracelets they once wore daily were now left at home.Even during class，Emily found it hard to focus，her mind replaying the moment when Zoe chose someone else.
Weeks passed.The school organized a three﹣day camping trip in the mountains.Students were divided into several groups.Emily and Zoe ended up in the same one，along with Daisy and two other classmates.Though they barely spoke，they worked together to put up tents and gather firewood.Their conversations were limited to short，polite exchanges﹣nothing like before.
On the second night，dark clouds rolled in and heavy rain soon followed.Everyone rushed into their own tents.Emily quickly discovered that hers was leaking.Cold and upset，she went outside，seeking for help.The wind howled around her，and each raindrop felt like a tiny needle against her skin.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then，she saw a flashlight approaching.
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With Zoe's help，they soon fixed the tent.
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【答案】 Just then，she saw a flashlight approaching.In the dim light，Emily recognized it was nobody else but Zoe.Her face was filled with concern when she saw Emily struggling in the cold. "I thought you might need help，" Zoe said softly.Emily's eyes widened with a mix of surprise and relief.Without a word，Zoe stepped forward and examined the tent.She explained that she could fix it with the spare raincoat she had brought.As they worked together，the awkwardness gradually melted away.Emily realized that Zoe still cared and the rain seemed to have washed away the misunderstandings between them.
With Zoe's help，they soon fixed the tent.Back inside the tent，Emily took a deep breath and said， "I was so hurt when you chose Daisy for the project." Zoe looked at her apologetically and replied， "I'm sorry.I just thought it would be better to include the new comer，but I never meant to hurt you." That night，they had an open﹣hearted conversation，clearing up all the confusion.Until then did they realize that friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger.From then on，they wore their matching bracelets again，a symbol of their unbreakable friendship.
【分析】本文以友谊为线索展开，讲述Emily和Zoe原本是好友，新同学Daisy到来后，Zoe与她交好，Emily心灵受伤。学校露营时，她们分到同一个组，Emily帐篷漏水。
高分句型一：Her face was filled with concern when she saw Emily struggling in the cold.
翻译：当她看到Emily在寒冷中挣扎时，脸上充满了担忧。
分析：运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Until then did they realize that friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger.
翻译：直到那时，他们才意识到朋友之间需要开诚布公的交流，他们的关系变得更加紧密。
分析：运用了部分倒装和连词that引导宾语从句。
【解答】 Just then，she saw a flashlight approaching.In the dim light，Emily recognized it was nobody else but Zoe.Her face was filled with concern when she saw Emily struggling in the cold. "I thought you might need help，" Zoe said softly.Emily's eyes widened with a mix of surprise and relief.Without a word，Zoe stepped forward and examined the tent.She explained that she could fix it with the spare raincoat she had brought.As they worked together，the awkwardness gradually melted away. 【高分句型一】Emily realized that Zoe still cared and the rain seemed to have washed away the misunderstandings between them.（描写来的是Zoe，Zoe主动帮忙修理帐篷，两人之间的尴尬逐渐消除）
With Zoe's help，they soon fixed the tent.Back inside the tent，Emily took a deep breath and said， "I was so hurt when you chose Daisy for the project." Zoe looked at her apologetically and replied， "I'm sorry.I just thought it would be better to include the new comer，but I never meant to hurt you." That night，they had an open﹣hearted conversation，clearing up all the confusion. 【高分句型二】Until then did they realize that friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger.From then on，they wore their matching bracelets again，a symbol of their unbreakable friendship.（描写两人在帐篷里敞开心扉交流，消除误会，友谊更加坚固）
【点评】读后续写，首先要阅读文章，理解材料的主旨和重要细节，注意把握材料中的人物、情节、时间和地点等信息，在确定主题和情节时注意与材料中的情节和人物保持连贯性，同时可以加入自己的想象力和创造力来丰富情节。首先写开头部分，与提供的阅读材料进行衔接，确保文章的连贯性；然后写发展部分，根据自己确定的情节发展进行拓展，可以使用适当的语法、词汇和句式来表达自己的观点和分析。同时，注意与前文保持逻辑上的连贯性；最后写结尾部分，总结全文，并为读者留下一定的思考空间。
5．（2025 锦江区校级模拟）An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow （乌鸦） landed on their window.
The father asked his son， "What is this？" The son replied， "It is a crow." After a few minutes，the father asked his son for the second time， "What is this？" The son said， "Father，I told you just now.It's a crow."
After a little while，the father asked his son the same question for the third time， "What is this？"
At this time，some expression of anger was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father. "It's a crow，a crow." A little while later，the father again asked his son for the fourth time， "What is this？"
This time his son shouted at his father， "Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again although I have told you so many times 'IT IS A CROW'？Are you not able to understand this？"
A minute later the father went to his room and came back with a diary，which he had kept since his son was born.On opening a page，he asked his son to read that page：
Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow suddenly landed on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I didn't at all feel angry，but instead felt affection for my innocent son.
Paragraph 1：
After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.______
Paragraph 2：
Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.______
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】文章以人物为线索，讲述了一位80岁的老父亲在向45岁的儿子问了四次同样的问题后，儿子变得很不耐烦，老父亲拿出以前的日记本让儿子看。
高分句型一：He made an apology to his father，begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.
翻译：他向父亲道歉，请求父亲原谅他的不良行为。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior作状语。
高分句型二：It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child，showering me with your selfless affection.
翻译：是您从我很小的时候就开始关心我，给我无私的爱。
分析：本句运用了强调句型"it is+被强调部分+who+其他"。
【解答】After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just 4 times!The son thought to himself：If I attain old age，how will my son look at me？Will he think of me as a burden？Will he shout at me because of my poor sight，poor hearing or poor understanding？（描写儿子回想起过去和父亲在一起的日子）
Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father，begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.【高分句型一】He said aloud， "I promise to make you happy forever，Dad.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child，showering your selfless affection on me.【高分句型二】You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best way."（描写他向父亲道歉，请求父亲的原谅）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6．（2025 湖北模拟） Sophia had always hated paintings.Maybe it was the way they just sat there，frozen in time，pretending to hold meaning.To her，paintings were dishonest.People acted as if they were windows into the artist's soul，but to her，they were just meaningless colours.What did a winding mess of blues and oranges really say？A painting didn't breathe.It didn't feel.It was just there.
So when her best friend dragged her to the grand opening of the town's new art gallery，she refused but failed. "This is suffering，" Sophia said，arms crossed as she followed behind her friend.The walls were lined with enormous paintings—some abstract，some detailed，all equally dull in her eyes.Her friend，of course，was fully attracted.That was when Sophia noticed the old woman.She was standing upright before a large painting，her fingers resting lightly on the frame.Next to her was a younger man who was describing the artwork in an attentiv