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中考英语二轮复习 书面表达—记叙文
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025春 洛阳期末)假如你是李华,你正和家人一起旅行,请以"The ________ Moment"为题,用英语描述你和家人正在进行的活动。
要点:
(1)文中应包含天气、活动等;
(2)你们的感受。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现学生姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数60词左右。
2.(2025春 长安区校级期末)时光如梭,转眼你就是九年级学生了,在过去的两年里你一定经历了许多印象深刻的事情,并有着与众不同的感受,请根据内容提示完成书面表达,可适当发挥。
经历 感受
已经读了大约10部经典作品 书籍就像宝藏……
通过信息技术考试,成绩优异 如果努力的话一切皆有可能……
做了志愿者工作…… 帮助他人能获得满足感……
参考词汇:classic经典作品,IT exam信息技术考试,a feeling of satisfaction满足感
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)包括以上要点,并适当发挥,语句通顺,语意连贯;
(3)不少于80词(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
I have had many unforgettable experiences in the past two years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2025春 市北区期末)Mary was deeply interested in the traditional stories.She wants to hear more meaningful stories.
给Mary讲述一个中国故事,并告诉她这个故事背后的道理。
写作要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
(2)词数80~100。
_______________________________________________________________________________
4.(2025春 市北区期末)生活中总有一些小美好,或是取得进步时获得认可的美好;或是结交朋友后一起相处的美好;或是助人为乐内心充实的美好;或是家乡环境改善后幸福生活的美好.....这些生活中的小美好让我们感动,让我们更加热爱生活。请以"Find Beauty,Enjoy Life",写一篇英文短文,分享你的美好经历,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
(1)词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Find Beauty,Enjoy Life
Beauty is always found in our life.______
5.(2025春 成华区期末)北湖公园是人们休闲运动的好地方。假如你正在北湖公园露营,右图是你此刻看到的美好瞬间,请你写一篇英语短文描述图中的场景和表达你的感受。
注意:
(1)须全面反映图片信息;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)词数70左右。
______
6.(2025春 通州区期末)我们的生活中有很多美好的回忆。本学期你们班召开了一次题为"一个美好回忆"的主题班会。在班会上,你回想起与家人共度的美好时光,回忆起学习中老师的关心以及同学间的友爱,这些美好的回忆让你思绪万千……假设你是李华,请以"A Sweet Memory"为题目,把你的经历和感受写成一篇短文。
提示词语:picnic,birthday party,remember,friends,happy
提示问题:
What was your sweet memory?
How do you feel?
7.(2025春 青羊区期末)有些旅行总是让人难忘。你和家人或朋友的最近一次出游去了哪里?发生了什么有趣或特别的事?请以"A/An ______Trip"为题,根据下图内容提示写一篇英语短文,分享你的旅行。
要求:
(1)包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)60~80词。
注:lesson:收获
A/An ______ Trip
______
8.(2025春 南通期末)户外活动是通往世界的生动课堂,让我们跨越书本的边界,触摸不同地域的文化肌理,丈量多样地形的鬼斧神工,邂逅自然万物的生命韵律。请以"An Unforgettable Experience"为题,围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇英语短文,讲述你经历过的一次户外活动。
要求:
1)词数90词左右,文章开头以给出,不计入总词数;
2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3)文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。
提示词:难忘的:unforgettable
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them.
9.(2025春 苏州期末)分享能将平凡的瞬间变为温暖的记忆。一本好书、一首治愈的歌曲,或是一份自制美食都值得与他人共享。请以"When I shared______ with my friend"为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述你印象最深的一次分享经历,并谈谈你对分享的意义的理解。
注意:
(1)词数:100左右;
(2)请先将标题填写完整,再写文章;
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
When I shared______ with my friend
______
10.(2025春 望城区期末)假如你是李华,在第一节(回答问题)中,Daniel描述了他度过的特别的一天。现在你的英语老师想让你给同学们分享你度过的特别的一天,请你用英语写一则短文,向同学们做具体介绍。内容包括以下部分:
●When was the special day?
●What did you do on the special day?
●How did you feel about the special day?
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
A Special Day
_______
11.(2025春 苏州期末)文明礼仪是交流沟通的重要部分,想想你哪一次的沟通经历让你意识到文明礼仪可以促进有效沟通,进而帮助你解决问题或者增进与他人之间的感情。请以Good Manners Bridge Communication为题写一篇短文。
要点:
(1)礼仪的作用;
(2)你的亲身经历;
(3)行动倡议。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
(2)词数100左右。
Good Manners Bridge Communication
______
12.(2025 黑龙江)图示作文:仔细观察图片,展开合理想象,然后用英语写一篇短文。
(1)词数:80﹣100之间。
(2)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
______
13.(2025春 南昌县期末)国家提出了将劳动教育纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,你校上周末组织初一年级同学作为志愿者去养老院参加了一次特别的劳动之旅。同学们在这次活动中体验了各种劳动,并体会到了助人的快乐。现请你以"A Special School Trip"为题,记录下上周末特殊的学校之旅。
内容要点:
(1)What was the weather like that day?
(2)How did you get there?
(3)What did you do there?
(4)……
要求:
(1)60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A Special School Trip
Last weekend,our school took us to the old people's home.
______
14.(2025春 万州区期末)请根据以下图片内容,写一篇语意连贯的英语短文,描述所有人物正在做的事,可适当增加细节。词数70左右,文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
15.(2025春 姑苏区期末)当我们离开电子屏幕,倾听溪流的呢喃,触摸泥土的温度,嗅闻青草的芬芳,才能真正理解:大自然是最神奇的课堂。请你以A Wonderful Day in Nature为题描述你在大自然中度过的一天,内容包括:
(1)你看到的景色;
(2)你参与的活动;
(3)你的感受和收获。
注意:
1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2)短文须包括所有内容要点,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3)词数80左右。
A Wonderful Day in Nature
______
16.(2025春 徐州期末)你是李华,是阳光中学七年级学生。你校英语社团正举办讲故事比赛活动,你打算参加。你选择了伊索寓言里的一则故事The Lion and the Mouse.请你根据图片和文字提示,写一篇短文讲述这个故事。
注意:
(1)词数70左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
_________
17.(2025春 玄武区期末)Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever.Did you have an experience that you would never forget?Maybe it was a time when you had fun with your pet,had a wonderful outdoor trip or enjoyed a fantastic book.Share ONE story with us.
你的文章需包括以下要点:
注意:
(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)需包含以上要点并适当发挥;
(3)词数100左右。注意:文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
An unforgettable experience
_____
18.(2025春 长清区期末)八年级的学习生活即将结束,这一年来,一定有过许多让你开心的事情,如做一次家务、读一本书或一个故事、一次与父母的交流、一次参观或旅行、发现身边事物的变化……
请以"_________Made Me Happy"为题,用英语写一篇短文,分享这件事或者这次经历,谈谈你的收获或感悟。
要求:
(1)先完善题目,然后写一篇短文,词数不少于100词;
(2)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
_______Made Me Happy
______________________________________________________________________________
19.(2025 天津)请你根据以下内容提示,以"A Special Experience of Li Hua"为题,为校报英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。
(1)去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。
(2)李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。
(3)当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。
(4)李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:天津科学技术馆Tianjin Science and Technology Museum小讲解员little guide
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,________
20.(2025 陕西)同学们,随着你们综合体育运动时间的增加,大家一定会有更多不同的收获和感受。本次的写作任务是以"Sports"为主题,写一篇英语小短文。请你从以下两个方面任选其一,根据写作要求,简单描述在体育活动中对你帮助最大的人,或者你克服困难的经历,认真完成写作任务。
选择1:
●Who helped you most in sports? (teacher/ friend/...)
●How did he/ she help you?(train,show,encourage,have an influence on,......)
●What progress have you made? (......)
选择2:
●What problem(s) did you face while doing sports? (couldn't,be weak in, ......)
●How did you solve it/ them?(ask...for help,learn some skills,practice hard,never give up, ......)
●What changes have you got or how did you feel? (.....)
要求:
(1)短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
(2)语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
(3)短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用:Mr.Liu/Ms.Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang;
(4)词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced more and surely made progress.As for me,_________.
中考英语二轮复习 书面表达—记叙文
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025春 洛阳期末)假如你是李华,你正和家人一起旅行,请以"The ________ Moment"为题,用英语描述你和家人正在进行的活动。
要点:
(1)文中应包含天气、活动等;
(2)你们的感受。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现学生姓名和学校名称;
(2)词数60词左右。
【考点】记叙文;旅游景点.
【答案】
The Happy Moment
It's sunny and warm today.The sun is shining brightly in the sky.My family and I are in the park now.We are all having a good time.
Look!My grandfather is fishing.He goes fishing twice a week.My grandmother is reading a book for me and she always tells me stories in her free time.My mother is riding a bike because it's a good way for her to relax.My father is playing games with my brother.They look excited.
We all feel very happy to play outside.What a wonderful day it is!
【分析】【高分句型一】
My mother is riding a bike because it's a good way for her to relax.
我妈妈正在骑自行车,因为这是她放松的好方法。because因为,引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
What a wonderful day it is!
这是多么美好的一天啊!本句使用了感叹句,其句型结构为:What +a/an+形容词+单数名词+主语+系动词!
【解答】
The Happy Moment
It's sunny and warm today.The sun is shining brightly in the sky.(介绍天气情况)My family and I are in the park now.We are all having a good time.
Look!My grandfather is fishing.He goes fishing twice a week.My grandmother is reading a book for me and she always tells me stories in her free time.My mother is riding a bike because it's a good way for her to relax.【高分句型一】My father is playing games with my brother.They look excited.(介绍一家人正在进行的活动)
We all feel very happy to play outside.What a wonderful day it is!【高分句型二】(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
2.(2025春 长安区校级期末)时光如梭,转眼你就是九年级学生了,在过去的两年里你一定经历了许多印象深刻的事情,并有着与众不同的感受,请根据内容提示完成书面表达,可适当发挥。
经历 感受
已经读了大约10部经典作品 书籍就像宝藏……
通过信息技术考试,成绩优异 如果努力的话一切皆有可能……
做了志愿者工作…… 帮助他人能获得满足感……
参考词汇:classic经典作品,IT exam信息技术考试,a feeling of satisfaction满足感
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)包括以上要点,并适当发挥,语句通顺,语意连贯;
(3)不少于80词(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
I have had many unforgettable experiences in the past two years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文;学校生活.
【答案】 I have had many unforgettable experiences in the past two years.I have read about 10 classics.I often went to the library to read books on weekends.Books were like treasure and I got a lot of knowledge from them.I passed the IT exam with good grades.It made me feel very happy.Form it,I think nothing is impossible if we work hard.So we shouldn't give up our dreams.I also went to the park as a volunteer to clean the park.I got a feeling of satisfaction from helping others.These experiences have taught me something and made me better.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think nothing is impossible if we work hard.我认为只要我们努力,没有什么是不可能的。
if引导条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I also went to the park as a volunteer to clean the park.我也去了公园作为志愿者打扫公园。
as a volunteer作为一名志愿者。
【解答】 I have had many unforgettable experiences in the past two years. (点题)I have read about 10 classics.I often went to the library to read books on weekends.Books were like treasure and I got a lot of knowledge from them.(已经读了大约10部经典作品)I passed the IT exam with good grades.It made me feel very happy.Form it,I think nothing is impossible if we work hard.【高分句型一】So we shouldn't give up our dreams.(通过信息技术考试,成绩优异)I also went to the park as a volunteer to clean the park.【高分句型二】I got a feeling of satisfaction from helping others.(做了志愿者工作)These experiences have taught me something and made me better.(总结全文)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
3.(2025春 市北区期末)Mary was deeply interested in the traditional stories.She wants to hear more meaningful stories.
给Mary讲述一个中国故事,并告诉她这个故事背后的道理。
写作要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
(2)词数80~100。
_______________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文;文学艺术.
【答案】 We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain.The story goes that a very old man named Yu Gong decided to move two large mountains that blocked the way to his home.Despite his age and the enormity of the task,he was determined to remove the mountains.His perseverance and determination eventually moved the gods,who sent divine beings to help him complete the task.
In modern times,we students should learn this spirit.When we meet a problem,we should think of how to solve it.If we try our best,I believe we can do it.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The story goes that a very old man named Yu Gong decided to move two large mountains that blocked the way to his home.故事是这样的,一个名叫愚公的老人决定搬走两座挡住他回家路的大山。that引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If we try our best,I believe we can do it.如果我们尽力,我相信我们能做到。
if如果,引导条件状语从句。
【解答】 We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain.The story goes that a very old man named Yu Gong decided to move two large mountains that blocked the way to his home. 【高分句型一】Despite his age and the enormity of the task,he was determined to remove the mountains.His perseverance and determination eventually moved the gods,who sent divine beings to help him complete the task.(故事)
In modern times,we students should learn this spirit.When we meet a problem,we should think of how to solve it.If we try our best,I believe we can do it.【高分句型二】(道理)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
4.(2025春 市北区期末)生活中总有一些小美好,或是取得进步时获得认可的美好;或是结交朋友后一起相处的美好;或是助人为乐内心充实的美好;或是家乡环境改善后幸福生活的美好.....这些生活中的小美好让我们感动,让我们更加热爱生活。请以"Find Beauty,Enjoy Life",写一篇英文短文,分享你的美好经历,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
(1)词数100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Find Beauty,Enjoy Life
Beauty is always found in our life.______
【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
Find Beauty,Enjoy Life
Beauty is always found in our life.First of all,I have made many friends.We share our feelings with each other.When I am in trouble,they give me a hand.I am not shy any longer and become active and confident.With the help of my parents,I have learned to do some housework,such as cleaning my room,cooking and so on.I can take care of myself well now.Thanks to my kind and patient teachers,I have developed good learning habits,and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I am in trouble,they give me a hand.当我遇到困难时,他们会帮助我。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Thanks to my kind and patient teachers,I have developed good learning habits,and done better in study as well.感谢我的善良和耐心的老师,我养成了良好的学习习惯,在学习上也做得更好。and表并列。
【解答】
Find Beauty,Enjoy Life
Beauty is always found in our life.First of all,I have made many friends.We share our feelings with each other.When I am in trouble,they give me a hand. 【高分句型一】I am not shy any longer and become active and confident.With the help of my parents,I have learned to do some housework,such as cleaning my room,cooking and so on.I can take care of myself well now.Thanks to my kind and patient teachers,I have developed good learning habits,and done better in study as well.【高分句型二】(美好经历)
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
5.(2025春 成华区期末)北湖公园是人们休闲运动的好地方。假如你正在北湖公园露营,右图是你此刻看到的美好瞬间,请你写一篇英语短文描述图中的场景和表达你的感受。
注意:
(1)须全面反映图片信息;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
(3)词数70左右。
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【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】 I'm camping in Beihu Park.It is a beautiful place and there are many people.Someone is running happily.And some people are playing badminton.They run here and there,trying to hit the ball back.It looks like fun.Near them,some are sitting on the grass,talking and laughing.A boy is drawing a beautiful picture on a board.He seems very focused.The trees around are tall and green,and the sky is clear.I feel so happy and relaxed here.It's a wonderful day to be outdoors.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is a beautiful place and there are many people.
翻译:这是一个美丽的地方,有很多人。
分析:句子中应用了there be句型。
【高分句型二】
They run here and there,trying to hit the ball back.
翻译:他们跑来跑去,想把球打回去。
分析:句子中应用了现在分词作伴随状语的用法。
【解答】 I'm camping in Beihu Park.It is a beautiful place and there are many people.【高分句型一】Someone is running happily.And some people are playing badminton.They run here and there,trying to hit the ball back.【高分句型二】It looks like fun.Near them,some are sitting on the grass,talking and laughing.A boy is drawing a beautiful picture on a board.He seems very focused.The trees around are tall and green,and the sky is clear.(描述看到的场景)I feel so happy and relaxed here.It's a wonderful day to be outdoors.(表达感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
6.(2025春 通州区期末)我们的生活中有很多美好的回忆。本学期你们班召开了一次题为"一个美好回忆"的主题班会。在班会上,你回想起与家人共度的美好时光,回忆起学习中老师的关心以及同学间的友爱,这些美好的回忆让你思绪万千……假设你是李华,请以"A Sweet Memory"为题目,把你的经历和感受写成一篇短文。
提示词语:picnic,birthday party,remember,friends,happy
提示问题:
What was your sweet memory?
How do you feel?
【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
A Sweet Memory
Everyone has some sweet memories in their life.For me,one of the sweetest memories is about my birthday party.
On my twelfth birthday,my family and friends held a wonderful party for me at my home.The room was decorated with colorful balloons and beautiful flowers.My best friends came to the party with thoughtful gifts.We played interesting games together and enjoyed delicious food.The highlight of the party was when I blew out the candles on the cake and made a wish.Everyone sang the birthday song for me and their smiling faces made me feel so happy and loved.
Now,whenever I remember that birthday party,I feel warm in my heart.I'm really thankful for my family and friends who brought me so much joy.This sweet memory will always be treasured in my mind.
【分析】【高分句型一】:
The highlight of the party was when I blew out the candles on the cake and made a wish.聚会的亮点是我吹灭了蛋糕上的蜡烛,许了个愿。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】:
Everyone sang the birthday song for me and their smiling faces made me feel so happy and loved.每个人都为我唱生日歌,他们的笑容让我感到如此幸福和被爱。
make sb do sth表示让某人做某事。
【解答】
A Sweet Memory
Everyone has some sweet memories in their life.For me,one of the sweetest memories is about my birthday party.(引出话题)
On my twelfth birthday,my family and friends held a wonderful party for me at my home.The room was decorated with colorful balloons and beautiful flowers.My best friends came to the party with thoughtful gifts.We played interesting games together and enjoyed delicious food.The highlight of the party was when I blew out the candles on the cake and made a wish.【高分句型一】Everyone sang the birthday song for me and their smiling faces made me feel so happy and loved.【高分句型二】(经历)
Now,whenever I remember that birthday party,I feel warm in my heart.I'm really thankful for my family and friends who brought me so much joy.This sweet memory will always be treasured in my mind.(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
7.(2025春 青羊区期末)有些旅行总是让人难忘。你和家人或朋友的最近一次出游去了哪里?发生了什么有趣或特别的事?请以"A/An ______Trip"为题,根据下图内容提示写一篇英语短文,分享你的旅行。
要求:
(1)包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)60~80词。
注:lesson:收获
A/An ______ Trip
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【考点】记叙文;旅游景点.
【答案】
A Happy Trip
Last summer,I had an unforgettable trip to Hainan Island.The moment I arrived,the warm sea breeze and the beautiful beaches took my breath away.It was sunny.I spent my days swimming in the clear blue sea,feeling the sand between my toes,and exploring the local markets.The food was delicious,especially the fresh seafood.During the trip,I also made some local friends who showed me the real Hainan beyond the tourist attractions.
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience that left me with deep memories and a stronger desire to travel more.It taught me that travel is not just about seeing new places,but also about understanding different cultures and people.
【分析】高分句型一】
During the trip,I also made some local friends who showed me the real Hainan beyond the tourist attractions.
翻译:在旅途中,我也结识了一些当地的朋友,他们让我看到了旅游景点之外真正的海南。
分析:句子中应用了who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
It taught me that travel is not just about seeing new places,but also about understanding different cultures and people.
翻译:它教会了我,旅行不仅仅是看到新的地方,也是了解不同的文化和人。
分析:句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
A Happy Trip
Last summer,I had an unforgettable trip to Hainan Island.(介绍去了哪里)The moment I arrived,the warm sea breeze and the beautiful beaches took my breath away.It was sunny.(介绍天气)I spent my days swimming in the clear blue sea,feeling the sand between my toes,and exploring the local markets.The food was delicious,especially the fresh seafood.During the trip,I also made some local friends who showed me the real Hainan beyond the tourist attractions. 【高分句型一】(描述旅行经历和食物)
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience that left me with deep memories and a stronger desire to travel more.It taught me that travel is not just about seeing new places,but also about understanding different cultures and people.【高分句型二】(介绍旅行感触)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
8.(2025春 南通期末)户外活动是通往世界的生动课堂,让我们跨越书本的边界,触摸不同地域的文化肌理,丈量多样地形的鬼斧神工,邂逅自然万物的生命韵律。请以"An Unforgettable Experience"为题,围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇英语短文,讲述你经历过的一次户外活动。
要求:
1)词数90词左右,文章开头以给出,不计入总词数;
2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3)文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。
提示词:难忘的:unforgettable
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them.
【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them.Last summer vacation,we went to the countryside to experience farm life,which became an unforgettable memory.We helped farmers pick fruits and feed chickens.We also learned to plant vegetables.It was interesting to see how the farmers worked hard every day.During the activity,we rode bikes around the village and enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenery.We even tried making traditional snacks with the villagers.
This experience was unforgettable because it made me understand the value of hard work and the beauty of nature.I also learned to appreciate the simple life in the countryside.I hope to have more chances for such meaningful outdoor activities!
【分析】【高分句型一】
Last summer vacation,we went to the countryside to experience farm life,which became an unforgettable memory.
翻译:去年暑假,我们去农村体验了农场生活,这成为了一个难忘的记忆。
分析:句子中应用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
This experience was unforgettable because it made me understand the value of hard work and the beauty of nature.
翻译:这次经历是难忘的,因为它让我明白了努力的价值和自然的美丽。
分析:句子中应用了because引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】
An Unforgettable Experience
I often have outdoor activities with my friends because we can learn a lot from them.Last summer vacation,we went to the countryside to experience farm life,which became an unforgettable memory.【高分句型一】(介绍户外活动)We helped farmers pick fruits and feed chickens.We also learned to plant vegetables.It was interesting to see how the farmers worked hard every day.During the activity,we rode bikes around the village and enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenery.We even tried making traditional snacks with the villagers.(介绍做的事情)
This experience was unforgettable because it made me understand the value of hard work and the beauty of nature.【高分句型二】I also learned to appreciate the simple life in the countryside.I hope to have more chances for such meaningful outdoor activities! (说明原因)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
9.(2025春 苏州期末)分享能将平凡的瞬间变为温暖的记忆。一本好书、一首治愈的歌曲,或是一份自制美食都值得与他人共享。请以"When I shared______ with my friend"为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述你印象最深的一次分享经历,并谈谈你对分享的意义的理解。
注意:
(1)词数:100左右;
(2)请先将标题填写完整,再写文章;
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
When I shared______ with my friend
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【考点】记叙文;人际关系.
【答案】
When I shared a song with my friend
As we all know,sharing can turn ordinary moments into warm memories.I've listened to many songs and I would like to share my favorite one﹣the Lonely Warriors with my friend.
The song is very popular with people.But do you know the story behind the song?The writer of the lyrics is Tang Tian.She was ill at a very young age.Her illness was so serious that she might die soon.But to our surprise,she beat it.Then she wrote down her story and named it the Lonely Warriors.This song is really powerful,we can get strength from it.It also encourages people to solve problems bravely.
By listening to this song,my friend became strong and my relationship became closer.I think the meaning of sharing is to realize the connection between individual growth and emotion.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Her illness was so serious that she might die soon.她的病很严重,可能很快就会死去。
so...that...如此……以致于……,引导结果状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I think the meaning of sharing is to realize the connection between individual growth and emotion.我认为分享的意义在于实现个体成长与情感的连接。
think认为,后接宾语从句。
【解答】
When I shared a song with my friend
As we all know,sharing can turn ordinary moments into warm memories.I've listened to many songs and I would like to share my favorite one﹣the Lonely Warriors the Lonely Warriors with my friend.(点题)
The song is very popular with people.But do you know the story behind the song?The writer of the lyrics is Tang Tian.She was ill at a very young age.Her illness was so serious that she might die soon.【高分句型一】But to our surprise,she beat it.Then she wrote down her story and named it the Lonely Warriors.(歌曲内容)This song is really powerful,we can get strength from it.It also encourages people to solve problems bravely.
By listening to this song,my friend became strong and my relationship became closer.I think the meaning of sharing is to realize the connection between individual growth and emotion.【高分句型二】(分享的意义)
【点评】根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
10.(2025春 望城区期末)假如你是李华,在第一节(回答问题)中,Daniel描述了他度过的特别的一天。现在你的英语老师想让你给同学们分享你度过的特别的一天,请你用英语写一则短文,向同学们做具体介绍。内容包括以下部分:
●When was the special day?
●What did you do on the special day?
●How did you feel about the special day?
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
A Special Day
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【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
A Special Day
Last Sunday was a truly special day for me.In the morning,I got up early and went to the park with my parents.We flew a kite together.The kite danced high in the sky,and we all laughed happily.After that,we had a picnic under a big tree.The food tasted delicious as we shared it with love.In the afternoon,I visited my grandparents.I helped them water the flowers in the garden and listened to their old stories.Their smiles made me feel warm inside.
This special day was full of joy and love.I felt so lucky to spend such wonderful time with my family.I'll always remember this memory.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The kite danced high in the sky,and we all laughed happily.
翻译:风筝在高空飞舞,我们都笑得很开心。
分析:句子中应用了and连接的并列句。
【高分句型二】
The food tasted delicious as we shared it with love.
翻译:当我们带着爱分享食物时,它尝起来很美味。
分析:句子中应用了as引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
A Special Day
Last Sunday was a truly special day for me.(介绍时间)In the morning,I got up early and went to the park with my parents.We flew a kite together.The kite danced high in the sky,and we all laughed happily.【高分句型一】After that,we had a picnic under a big tree.The food tasted delicious as we shared it with love.【高分句型二】In the afternoon,I visited my grandparents.I helped them water the flowers in the garden and listened to their old stories.Their smiles made me feel warm inside.(介绍做的事情)
This special day was full of joy and love.I felt so lucky to spend such wonderful time with my family.I'll always remember this memory.(表达感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
11.(2025春 苏州期末)文明礼仪是交流沟通的重要部分,想想你哪一次的沟通经历让你意识到文明礼仪可以促进有效沟通,进而帮助你解决问题或者增进与他人之间的感情。请以Good Manners Bridge Communication为题写一篇短文。
要点:
(1)礼仪的作用;
(2)你的亲身经历;
(3)行动倡议。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
(2)词数100左右。
Good Manners Bridge Communication
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【考点】记叙文;人际关系.
【答案】
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners play a crucial role in communication.They are like a bridge that connects people's hearts.When we use polite words and show respect,others are more likely to listen to us and understand our feelings.This helps us solve problems and build better relationships.I still remember an experience.Once,I accidentally stepped on my classmate's new shoes.Instead of running away,I said, "I'm really sorry.I didn't mean to do that." My classmate smiled and said it was okay.Because of my good manners,we didn't have a quarrel,and our friendship even became stronger.
So,let's all use good manners in our daily communication.Treat others with respect and kindness.In this way,we can make our world a better place.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we use polite words and show respect,others are more likely to listen to us and understand our feelings.
翻译:当我们使用礼貌的语言并表示尊重时,其他人更有可能倾听我们并理解我们的感受。
分析:句子中应用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Treat others with respect and kindness.
翻译:尊重他人,善待他人。
分析:句子中应用了以动词原形开头的祈使句。
【解答】
Good Manners Bridge Communication
Good manners play a crucial role in communication.They are like a bridge that connects people's hearts.When we use polite words and show respect,others are more likely to listen to us and understand our feelings.【高分句型一】This helps us solve problems and build better relationships.I still remember an experience.(介绍作用)Once,I accidentally stepped on my classmate's new shoes.Instead of running away,I said, "I'm really sorry.I didn't mean to do that." My classmate smiled and said it was okay.Because of my good manners,we didn't have a quarrel,and our friendship even became stronger.(描述经历)
So,let's all use good manners in our daily communication.Treat others with respect and kindness.【高分句型二】In this way,we can make our world a better place.(发出行动倡议)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
12.(2025 黑龙江)图示作文:仔细观察图片,展开合理想象,然后用英语写一篇短文。
(1)词数:80﹣100之间。
(2)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
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【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
A Surprise for Mom
One sunny day,it was Mom's birthday.The girl wanted to give her a big surprise.
She got up early in the morning.She cleaned the room first.Then she came to the kitchen.She took out some eggs and noodles.She made longevity noodles for her mother.When her mother woke up and came to the kitchen,she shouted, "Happy birthday,mom!" Mom was really shocked at first and then a big smile appeared on her face.She was deeply touched by this special gift from her lovely kid.They had a really great time together that day.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When her mother woke up and came to the kitchen,she shouted, "Happy birthday,mom!" 当她妈妈醒来来到厨房时,她喊道:"妈妈,生日快乐!"when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
She was deeply touched by this special gift from her lovely kid.她被她可爱的孩子送给她的特别礼物深深打动了。被动语态。
【解答】
A Surprise for Mom
One sunny day,it was Mom's birthday.The girl wanted to give her a big surprise.
She got up early in the morning.She cleaned the room first.Then she came to the kitchen.She took out some eggs and noodles.She made longevity noodles for her mother.When her mother woke up and came to the kitchen,she shouted, "Happy birthday,mom!"【高分句型一】Mom was really shocked at first and then a big smile appeared on her face.She was deeply touched by this special gift from her lovely kid.【高分句型二】They had a really great time together that day.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
13.(2025春 南昌县期末)国家提出了将劳动教育纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,你校上周末组织初一年级同学作为志愿者去养老院参加了一次特别的劳动之旅。同学们在这次活动中体验了各种劳动,并体会到了助人的快乐。现请你以"A Special School Trip"为题,记录下上周末特殊的学校之旅。
内容要点:
(1)What was the weather like that day?
(2)How did you get there?
(3)What did you do there?
(4)……
要求:
(1)60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A Special School Trip
Last weekend,our school took us to the old people's home.
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【考点】记叙文;旅游景点.
【答案】
A Special School Trip
Last weekend,our school took us to the Old People's Home.It was a sunny day and we had a great time there.We went there by bus.We did a lot of things there.First,we cleaned the room for the old.Then,some students played the guitar for them and some students sang songs with them.l drew a picture for all the old people.In the evening,we cooked food with the old people.We had a big dinner together.This labor trip not only helped the old people,but also made us feel the joy of helping others.Although we were tired,we were happy.
【分析】【高分句型一】
This labor trip not only helped the old people,but also made us feel the joy of helping others.这次劳动旅行不仅帮助了老人们,也让我们感受到了帮助别人的快乐。
not only...but also...不仅……而且……,固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
Although we were tired,we were happy.虽然我们很累,但我们很开心。
although虽然,引导让步状语从句。
【解答】
A Special School Trip
Last weekend,our school took us to the Old People's Home.It was a sunny day and we were all excited.(天气情况)We went there by bus.(如何去的) We did a lot of things there.First,we cleaned the room for the old.Then,some students played the guitar for them and some students sang songs with them.l drew a picture for all the old people.In the evening,we cooked food with the old people.We had a big dinner together.(介绍做的事情)This labor trip not only helped the old people,but also made us feel the joy of helping others.【高分句型一】Although we were tired,we were happy.【高分句型二】(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
14.(2025春 万州区期末)请根据以下图片内容,写一篇语意连贯的英语短文,描述所有人物正在做的事,可适当增加细节。词数70左右,文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】 I'm Li Ping.Here is a picture of my family.We are all at home now.My mother is busy.She is cooking dinner in the kitchen.My grandmother is watering the flowers and my grandfather is playing chess with my father in the living room.My sister is listening to the music in her room.I am walking the dog in the garden.We're having a good time.Can you show me your family pictures?
【分析】【高分句型一】
She is cooking dinner in the kitchen.她正在厨房做晚饭。
现在进行时的运用,其构成形式为:be doing。
【高分句型二】
We're having a good time.我们玩得很开心。
have a good time玩得很开心,固定短语。
【解答】 I'm Li Ping.Here is a picture of my family.We are all at home now.(点题)My mother is busy.She is cooking dinner in the kitchen. 【高分句型一】(妈妈正干的事情)My grandmother is watering the flowers and my grandfather is playing chess with my father in the living room.(奶奶、爷爷和爸爸干的事情)My sister is listening to the music in her room.(妹妹干的事情)I am walking the dog in the garden.(作者干的事情)We're having a good time.【高分句型二】(感受)Can you show me your family pictures?
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
15.(2025春 姑苏区期末)当我们离开电子屏幕,倾听溪流的呢喃,触摸泥土的温度,嗅闻青草的芬芳,才能真正理解:大自然是最神奇的课堂。请你以A Wonderful Day in Nature为题描述你在大自然中度过的一天,内容包括:
(1)你看到的景色;
(2)你参与的活动;
(3)你的感受和收获。
注意:
1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2)短文须包括所有内容要点,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3)词数80左右。
A Wonderful Day in Nature
______
【考点】记叙文;旅游景点.
【答案】
A Wonderful Day in Nature
Last weekend,I spent a day in the forest near my home.The moment I stepped in,I saw green trees everywhere and colorful wildflowers dancing in the breeze.Birds were singing sweetly,and a clear stream flowed quietly beside the path.
I walked along the stream,picking up pretty stones and watching small fish swim.Later,I lay on the soft grass,looking up at the blue sky with white clouds floating by.I also took many photos of the beautiful scenery.
I felt so relaxed and happy.Nature taught me to slow down and enjoy simple things.It was truly a wonderful day that I'll never forget!
【分析】【高分句型一】
Birds were singing sweetly,and a clear stream flowed quietly beside the path.鸟儿在甜美地歌唱,一条清澈的小溪在小路旁静静地流淌。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
It was truly a wonderful day that I'll never forget!这真是美好的一天,我永远不会忘记!that引导的定语从句。
【解答】
A Wonderful Day in Nature
Last weekend,I spent a day in the forest near my home.The moment I stepped in,I saw green trees everywhere and colorful wildflowers dancing in the breeze.Birds were singing sweetly,and a clear stream flowed quietly beside the path.【高分句型一】(看到的景色)
I walked along the stream,picking up pretty stones and watching small fish swim.Later,I lay on the soft grass,looking up at the blue sky with white clouds floating by.I also took many photos of the beautiful scenery.(参与的活动)
I felt so relaxed and happy.Nature taught me to slow down and enjoy simple things.It was truly a wonderful day that I'll never forget!【高分句型二】(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
16.(2025春 徐州期末)你是李华,是阳光中学七年级学生。你校英语社团正举办讲故事比赛活动,你打算参加。你选择了伊索寓言里的一则故事The Lion and the Mouse.请你根据图片和文字提示,写一篇短文讲述这个故事。
注意:
(1)词数70左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
_________
【考点】记叙文;文学艺术.
【答案】 A strong lion was sleeping under a tree when a tiny mouse accidentally walked by his paw.The lion woke up angrily and caught the mouse. "Please spare me!" begged the mouse. "I can help you one day." The lion laughed but let him go.Soon after,the lion was caught in a heavy net.Hearing his roars,the mouse rushed to bite the ropes and helped the lion get out. "Even small friends can be great helpers," said the grateful lion.
【分析】【高分句型一】
A strong lion was sleeping under a tree when a tiny mouse accidentally walked by his paw.一只强壮的狮子正在树下睡觉,一只小老鼠不小心从它的爪子旁走过。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
The lion woke up angrily and caught the mouse.狮子生气地醒来,抓住了老鼠。and表并列。
【解答】 A strong lion was sleeping under a tree when a tiny mouse accidentally walked by his paw. 【高分句型一】The lion woke up angrily and caught the mouse. 【高分句型二】"Please spare me!" begged the mouse. "I can help you one day." The lion laughed but let him go.Soon after,the lion was caught in a heavy net.Hearing his roars,the mouse rushed to bite the ropes and helped the lion get out. "Even small friends can be great helpers," said the grateful lion.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
17.(2025春 玄武区期末)Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever.Did you have an experience that you would never forget?Maybe it was a time when you had fun with your pet,had a wonderful outdoor trip or enjoyed a fantastic book.Share ONE story with us.
你的文章需包括以下要点:
注意:
(1)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)需包含以上要点并适当发挥;
(3)词数100左右。注意:文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
An unforgettable experience
_____
【考点】记叙文;日常生活.
【答案】
An unforgettable experience
Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever.Now let me tell you one of my unforgettable experiences.
Last summer vacation,I went to Qingdao with my family.We went there by train.After we got there,we found a hotel to live in.It was not only clean but also tidy.We were all tired,so we decided to have a rest first.Once we relaxed,we went to the beach.It was wonderful.We walked on the beach and swam in the sea.It was so cool.As we walked along the beach,we picked up many beautiful shells.We also took a lot of photos.Later,we had seafood in a restaurant near the beach.It was fantastic.
This trip to Qingdao is one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.I will go to Qingdao again if I have the chance.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It was not only clean but also tidy.它不仅干净而且整洁。
not only...also...不仅……而且……,固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
This trip to Qingdao is one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.这次青岛之旅是我一生中最难忘的经历之一。
one of the+形容词最高级+复数名词,表示"最……之一",固定用法。
【解答】
An unforgettable experience
Life is full of wonderful moments that we will remember forever.Now let me tell you one of my unforgettable experiences.(点题)
Last summer vacation,I went to Qingdao with my family.(什么时候,和说去的青岛)We went there by train.After we got there,we found a hotel to live in.It was not only clean but also tidy.【高分句型一】We were all tired,so we decided to have a rest first.Once we relaxed,we went to the beach.It was wonderful.We walked on the beach and swam in the sea.It was so cool.As we walked along the beach,we picked up many beautiful shells.We also took a lot of photos.Later,we had seafood in a restaurant near the beach.(活动)It was fantastic.(难忘的经历)
This trip to Qingdao is one of the most unforgettable experiences in my life.【高分句型二】(感受)I will go to Qingdao again if I have the chance.(愿望)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
18.(2025春 长清区期末)八年级的学习生活即将结束,这一年来,一定有过许多让你开心的事情,如做一次家务、读一本书或一个故事、一次与父母的交流、一次参观或旅行、发现身边事物的变化……
请以"_________Made Me Happy"为题,用英语写一篇短文,分享这件事或者这次经历,谈谈你的收获或感悟。
要求:
(1)先完善题目,然后写一篇短文,词数不少于100词;
(2)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
_______Made Me Happy
______________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文;学校生活.
【答案】
Reading Made Me Happy
What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading.
When I was in Grade Seven,I was weak in Chinese.I often got low grades in the Chinese exams.This made me very worried.On a cold winter afternoon,my Chinese teacher Mr.Wang asked me to go to his office after school.He gave me some advice on how to study Chinese well.The best advice was reading every day.From then on,I began reading all kinds of interesting books and magazines.What's more,I wrote down some beautiful sentences from them.
With the help of reading,my Chinese improved a lot and I was so glad about that.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I was in Grade Seven,I was weak in Chinese.当我在七年级的时候,我的中文很差。
when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
With the help of reading,my Chinese improved a lot and I was so glad about that.在阅读的帮助下,我的中文进步了很多,我为此感到高兴。
With the help of在....的帮助下。
【解答】
Reading Made Me Happy
What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading.(说明什么让我开心)
When I was in Grade Seven,I was weak in Chinese.【高分句型一】I often got low grades in the Chinese exams.This made me very worried.On a cold winter afternoon,my Chinese teacher Mr.Wang asked me to go to his office after school.He gave me some advice on how to study Chinese well.The best advice was reading every day.From then on,I began reading all kinds of interesting books and magazines.What's more,I wrote down some beautiful sentences from them.(分享经历)
With the help of reading,my Chinese improved a lot and I was so glad about that.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
19.(2025 天津)请你根据以下内容提示,以"A Special Experience of Li Hua"为题,为校报英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍你班同学李华的一次特殊经历。
(1)去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。
(2)李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。
(3)当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。
(4)李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇:天津科学技术馆Tianjin Science and Technology Museum小讲解员little guide
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,________
【考点】记叙文;旅游景点.
【答案】
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at Tianjin Science and Technology Museum.
First of all,he explained science knowledge to children in simple English,making them become more interested in science.Also,when children asked questions,he answered them patiently with a smile.He even reminded everyone to watch their step and stay safe while visiting.
I think Li Hua really did a great job.This experience not only helped others but also made him more confident.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Also,when children asked questions,he answered them patiently with a smile.此外,当孩子们问问题时,他耐心地微笑着回答。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I think Li Hua really did a great job.我认为李华真的做得很好。I think+宾语从句。
【解答】
A Special Experience of Li Hua
Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at Tianjin Science and Technology Museum.(去年暑假,李华去天津科学技术馆当小讲解员。)
First of all,he explained science knowledge to children in simple English,making them become more interested in science.(李华为孩子们讲解科学知识,让他们对科学更感兴趣。)Also,when children asked questions,he answered them patiently with a smile.(当孩子们提出问题时,李华认真解答。)He even reminded everyone to watch their step and stay safe while visiting.(李华告诉孩子们参观时注意安全。)
I think Li Hua really did a great job.This experience not only helped others but also made him more confident.(看法)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
20.(2025 陕西)同学们,随着你们综合体育运动时间的增加,大家一定会有更多不同的收获和感受。本次的写作任务是以"Sports"为主题,写一篇英语小短文。请你从以下两个方面任选其一,根据写作要求,简单描述在体育活动中对你帮助最大的人,或者你克服困难的经历,认真完成写作任务。
选择1:
●Who helped you most in sports? (teacher/ friend/...)
●How did he/ she help you?(train,show,encourage,have an influence on,......)
●What progress have you made? (......)
选择2:
●What problem(s) did you face while doing sports? (couldn't,be weak in, ......)
●How did you solve it/ them?(ask...for help,learn some skills,practice hard,never give up, ......)
●What changes have you got or how did you feel? (.....)
要求:
(1)短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
(2)语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
(3)短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。若文中出现人名,请选择使用:Mr.Liu/Ms.Wang/Ma Li/Wang Gang;
(4)词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced more and surely made progress.As for me,_________.
【考点】记叙文;文娱体育.
【答案】 These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced more and surely made progress.As for me,my P.E.teacher Mr.Liu helped me most in sports.
Mr.Liu is very patient and warm.He trained me hard every day.He showed me the correct ways of running and jumping.When I was about to give up because of the difficulty,he always encouraged me.His words had a great influence on me.
With his help,I have made great progress.I can run much faster and jump higher than before.I also became more confident and stronger.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I was about to give up because of the difficulty,he always encouraged me.当我因为困难而快要放弃的时候,他总是鼓励我。When引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I can run much faster and jump higher than before.我可以比以前跑得更快,跳得更高。and表并列。
【解答】 These days,we have more time to do sports.We experienced more and surely made progress.As for me,my P.E.teacher Mr.Liu helped me most in sports.(谁)
Mr.Liu is very patient and warm.He trained me hard every day.He showed me the correct ways of running and jumping.When I was about to give up because of the difficulty,he always encouraged me.【高分句型一】His words had a great influence on me.(做了什么)
With his help,I have made great progress.I can run much faster and jump higher than before.【高分句型二】I also became more confident and stronger.(进步)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
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