中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 北辰区三模) 假设你是天津外国语大学的学生李津,为迎接即将在天津举办的上海合作组织峰会(SCO),你校将承办主题为"Meet at SCO,Explore Tianjin Culture"的国际文化交流活动,届时将有许多国家和地区的外宾来天津参加该活动。请你作为非遗展区的讲解员,用英文写一篇讲解稿。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍本次活动的目的(如促进对多元文化的理解,呈现对天津非物质文化遗产的保护等);
(2)介绍基于科技的非遗体验项目(如邀请外宾扫描二维码,观看和体验杨柳青年画创作及泥人张彩塑工艺等);
(3)简要介绍天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾现场欣赏。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可透当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
天津非物质文化遗产Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage
杨柳青年画Yangliuqing New Year Painting
泥人张彩塑Zhang's Clay Figures
天津曲艺节目Tianjin Quyi Programs
扫描二维码scan the QR code
Ladies and gentlemen,welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
______
Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
2.(2025 重庆模拟)假设你是高三学生李华。你校即将举办创意大赛,主题为"技术赋能中国传统文化"。你准备和学校外国交换生Ted组队参加。请你用英文给Ted发一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)分享你的创意;
(2)询问他的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ted,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2025 天河区校级一模)最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
(1)简要描述图表;
(2)你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;
(3)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为100个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
4.(2025 滨海新区模拟)假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。最近你在网上看到了网友利用AI技术,在仅仅一周时间内制作的动画视频《西游记》的第一集,视觉和听觉效果令人震撼。请你在视频下方留言,内容如下:
(1)看完视频的感受。
(2)给作者提一些意见或建议(如:视频内容、形式等)。
(3)分享AI给生活带来的影响并展望AI的发展前景。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
参考词汇:《西游记》 "Journey to the West"
5.(2025 庐阳区校级三模) 假定你是李华。上周末在你的家乡举办了一场鼓王争霸赛(Drum King Championship),请你给酷爱中国传统文化的英国笔友Pal写一封信,介绍比赛的情况和你的感受。
注意:
(1)词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear Pal,
____________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2025 上虞区模拟)假设你是高三学生李华。你校电视台计划拍摄一部题为《致难忘的高三》的纪录片,旨在记录2025届学生的青春奋斗历程,并作为毕业礼物赠予全体高三师生。目前电视台正在公开征集拍摄意见。请你用英语给校电视台写一封信,内容包括:
(1)发表看法;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
7.(2025 广州模拟) 你是李华。交换生Emily想参加中国日报社主办的"印象中国(My China Moments)"英文作品征集活动,来信向你咨询。请给她写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)作品类型;
(2)作品内容及创意。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Emily,
______
Best regards,
Li Hua
8.(2025 黔南州四模)假定你是李华,你校下周将举办"民族文化体验周"(Ethnic Culture Experience Week)活动,请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
(1)活动时间和地点;
(2)活动目的和内容。
注意:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2025 浦东新区三模)Directions:Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,你校学生会即将进行最美校园毕业照征集活动,拍摄地点不限,个人照或集体照不限。你对此非常感兴趣。请写一封邮件给学生会,除附件照片外,邮件内容需包括:
(1)照片的简单描述;
(2)选择这张照片的理由。
10.(2025 河西区校级模拟)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频,现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐拍摄主题(从校园社团、家庭生活、科技教育任选其一);
(2)说明推荐理由及关于该主题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望通过该视频有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯:
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
It's exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!____________
Yours,
Li Jin
11.(2025 石家庄三模) 假定你是李华,来你校访问的外国师生将结束一周的交流活动。作为中方学生代表,你将在欢送会上发言。请你写一份发言稿,内容包括:
(1)回顾活动;
(2)表示祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
12.(2025 湖北模拟) 假定你是李华,你校开设了一系列免费的线上中国文化公开课。请你给国外某友好学校的学生会主席 John写一封邮件介绍这些课程并邀请参与,内容包括:
(1)邀请参与;
(2)课程简介。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
13.(2025 龙岗区二模) 假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了建校50周年校庆活动。请你用英语写一篇关于该活动的报道并发布在你校英文网站上,内容包括:
(1)活动的时间,地点和目的;
(2)活动的过程;
(3)活动的反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:50th anniversary 50周年纪念日alumni (统称)校友;毕业生
Our School's Anniversary Event
______
14.(2025 南京二模)你校英文报现面向全校征集关于改进校园图书漂流(book﹣drifting)项目的建议。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)主要问题;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Suggestions on the Book﹣drifting Program
________
15.(2025 湖北模拟) 作为即将毕业的高三学生,大学专业选择是追求兴趣还是讲究实际成为你和同学们最关注的话题之一。某英文报社正在开展以此为主题的讨论,请你写一篇投稿,内容包括:
(1)你的观点;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Choosing a Major:Passion or Practicality?
______
16.(2025 昌平区二模) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校正在举办"戏曲进校园(Chinese Opera Enters the Campus)"系列活动,你是活动的负责人,想邀请你校英国交换生Jim来参加,请你用英文给他写一封邮件。内容要点:
(1)活动时间与地点;
(2)活动内容及邀请理由。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2025 青羊区校级模拟)假如你是李华,你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状.请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题并提出建议.信的内容应包括下列要点:
焦虑症状:头晕、乏力、食欲不振等.
建议:1制定计划;2.正常作息;3.保证睡眠.
其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
3.参考词汇:头晕dizzy(adj.)
Dear editor,
I'm a Senior Three student of Xinhua No.1 High School. I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms(症状) of anxiety among us students before exams._________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
18.(2025 温州模拟)假定你是李华,你校计划举办"时光机音乐节(Time Machine Music Festival)",你将与英国交换生Tom共演一个节目。请你写一封邮件与他商讨,内容包括:
(1)节目设想;
(2)设计理由;
(3)征求意见。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
19.(2025 朝阳区二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim所在学校正在开展阅读周系列活动。他打算策划一次"介绍中国文学"的活动,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______
Yours,
Li Hua
20.(2025 岳麓区校级二模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Ray对你们学校的"校园劳动节"(Campus Labor Festival)很感兴趣,想来你们学校参观。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎;
(2)介绍"校园劳动节"的具体内容。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ray,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语一轮复习 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共20小题)
1.(2025 北辰区三模) 假设你是天津外国语大学的学生李津,为迎接即将在天津举办的上海合作组织峰会(SCO),你校将承办主题为"Meet at SCO,Explore Tianjin Culture"的国际文化交流活动,届时将有许多国家和地区的外宾来天津参加该活动。请你作为非遗展区的讲解员,用英文写一篇讲解稿。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍本次活动的目的(如促进对多元文化的理解,呈现对天津非物质文化遗产的保护等);
(2)介绍基于科技的非遗体验项目(如邀请外宾扫描二维码,观看和体验杨柳青年画创作及泥人张彩塑工艺等);
(3)简要介绍天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾现场欣赏。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可透当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
天津非物质文化遗产Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage
杨柳青年画Yangliuqing New Year Painting
泥人张彩塑Zhang's Clay Figures
天津曲艺节目Tianjin Quyi Programs
扫描二维码scan the QR code
Ladies and gentlemen,welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
______
Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
This exhibition,which aims to show Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage achievements and enhance cross﹣cultural understanding,is of great importance.To begin with,you can experience the charm of Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage through cutting﹣edge technology.It is here that you can scan the QR code to be immersed in the digital world of Yangliuqing New Year Painting and Zhang's Clay Figures.
What's more,there stands a performance area where you can enjoy Tianjin Quyi Programs,such as Tianjin Clapper Talk and crosstalk.These programs,reflecting Tianjin's unique cultural style,are a feast for the ears and eyes.
We sincerely hope this activity will enhance your understanding of Tianjin's culture and establish a more culturally inclusive environment for the upcoming SCO summit.Wishing you a pleasant visit today!
【分析】高分句型一:This exhibition,which aims to show Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage achievements and enhance cross﹣cultural understanding,is of great importance.
译文:此次展览旨在展示天津的非物质文化遗产成就,增进跨文化理解,具有重要意义。
分析:这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:What's more,there stands a performance area where you can enjoy Tianjin Quyi Programs,such as Tianjin Clapper Talk and crosstalk.
译文:此外,还有一个表演区,您可以在那里欣赏天津曲艺节目,如天津说唱和相声。
分析:这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Ladies and gentlemen,welcome to the featured exhibition area in Tianjin Foreign Studies University.
This exhibition,which aims to show Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage achievements and enhance cross﹣cultural understanding,is of great importance. 【高分句型一】To begin with,you can experience the charm of Tianjin's intangible cultural heritage through cutting﹣edge technology.It is here that you can scan the QR code to be immersed in the digital world of Yangliuqing New Year Painting and Zhang's Clay Figures.(简要介绍本次活动的目的(如促进对多元文化的理解,呈现对天津非物质文化遗产的保护等)
What's more,there stands a performance area where you can enjoy Tianjin Quyi Programs,such as Tianjin Clapper Talk and crosstalk. 【高分句型二】These programs,reflecting Tianjin's unique cultural style,are a feast for the ears and eyes.(介绍基于科技的非遗体验项目(如邀请外宾扫描二维码,观看和体验杨柳青年画创作及泥人张彩塑工艺等)
We sincerely hope this activity will enhance your understanding of Tianjin's culture and establish a more culturally inclusive environment for the upcoming SCO summit.Wishing you a pleasant visit today!(简要介绍天津传统曲艺并邀请外宾现场欣赏)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
2.(2025 重庆模拟)假设你是高三学生李华。你校即将举办创意大赛,主题为"技术赋能中国传统文化"。你准备和学校外国交换生Ted组队参加。请你用英文给Ted发一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)分享你的创意;
(2)询问他的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ted,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ted,
I'm delighted to team up with you for the creativity contest themed "Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture".My idea is to design an interactive app which combines AR technology with traditional Chinese paper﹣cutting art.Users can scan real paper﹣cuttings with their phones and the app will bring them to life through 3 D animations,telling stories related to the patterns.
I believe not only can it show the beauty of Chinese paper﹣cutting but also make it more interesting for modern audiences.However,I'm sure about the technical feasibility and user experience.What do you think of this idea?Do you have any advice to improve it?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:My idea is to design an interactive app which combines AR technology with traditional Chinese paper﹣cutting art.
译文:我的想法是设计一个将AR技术与中国传统剪纸艺术相结合的交互式应用程序。
分析:这句话使用了which引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Users can scan real paper﹣cuttings with their phones and the app will bring them to life through 3 D animations,telling stories related to the patterns.
译文:用户可以用手机扫描真实的剪纸,该应用程序将通过3 D动画将它们栩栩如生,讲述与图案相关的故事。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语telling stories related to the patterns作状语。
【解答】Dear Ted,
I'm delighted to team up with you for the creativity contest themed "Technology Meets Chinese Traditional Culture".My idea is to design an interactive app which combines AR technology with traditional Chinese paper﹣cutting art. 【高分句型一】Users can scan real paper﹣cuttings with their phones and the app will bring them to life through 3 D animations,telling stories related to the patterns.【高分句型二】(分享自己的创意)
I believe not only can it show the beauty of Chinese paper﹣cutting but also make it more interesting for modern audiences.However,I'm sure about the technical feasibility and user experience.What do you think of this idea?Do you have any advice to improve it?(询问他的建议)
Looking forward to your reply.(盼望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
3.(2025 天河区校级一模)最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华,请就此话题谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
(1)简要描述图表;
(2)你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;
(3)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为100个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】 Recently,our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence.10% of respondents were unsure.34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence,while 56% said no.
Personally speaking,teachers won't be replaced by artificial intelligence.Because in addition to teaching students knowledge,teachers have a more important mission,which is to educate people.Besides,artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers' labor,and cannot replace the role of teachers.This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement,they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings.
【分析】高分句型一:34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence,while 56% said no.
翻译:34%的人表示,他们认为教师会被人工智能取代,而56%的人表示不会。
分析:本句使用了省略了that的宾语从句they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence及while表对比。
高分句型二:Because in addition to teaching students knowledge,teachers have a more important mission,which is to educate people.
翻译:因为除了教学生知识,教师还有一个更重要的使命,那就是教育人民。
分析:本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】 Recently,our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence.10% of respondents were unsure.34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence,while 56% said no.【高分句型一】(简要描述图表)
Personally speaking,teachers won't be replaced by artificial intelligence.Because in addition to teaching students knowledge,teachers have a more important mission,which is to educate people.【高分句型二】Besides,artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers' labor,and cannot replace the role of teachers.This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement,they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings.(个人观点及理由)
【点评】图表作文是一种较为综合的写作形式,主要考查考生对于数据、表格等图形的理解和分析能力,以及将这些信息转化为文字描述的能力。在英语写作中,图表作文通常涉及一些数据的比较、趋势分析等内容,要求考生根据题目所给的图表或图形,以篇章的形式对数据进行描述、分析和比较。在各类英语考试中,图表作文是常考的作文题型之一,主要考查学生的语言表达能力、数据分析和对比能力。
4.(2025 滨海新区模拟)假设你是晨光中学的高三学生李津。最近你在网上看到了网友利用AI技术,在仅仅一周时间内制作的动画视频《西游记》的第一集,视觉和听觉效果令人震撼。请你在视频下方留言,内容如下:
(1)看完视频的感受。
(2)给作者提一些意见或建议(如:视频内容、形式等)。
(3)分享AI给生活带来的影响并展望AI的发展前景。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
参考词汇:《西游记》 "Journey to the West"
【答案】 I recently watched your amazing animation video of Journey to the West Episode 1,which left a deep impression on me.The visual and auditory effects were truly breathtaking.This animation video was a testament to the power of AI in bringing classic literature to modern audiences in a fresh and engaging way.
However,I do have a few suggestions that might further enhance the viewers' experience.First,it would be great if you could include more Chinese﹣style background music.Secondly,more cultural elements and historical references would not only enrich the content but also educate viewers about Chinese traditions.
AI has already begun to revolutionize our lives with its potential.I look forward to a future where AI helps to solve complex problems.
Thank you for sharing your talent and vision with us.
【分析】高分句型一:I recently watched your amazing animation video of Journey to the West Episode 1,which left a deep impression on me.
翻译:我最近看了你那部精彩的西游记第一集动画视频,给我留下了深刻的印象。
分析:句中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Secondly,more cultural elements and historical references would not only enrich the content but also educate viewers about Chinese traditions.
翻译:其次,增加更多的文化元素和历史典故不仅会丰富内容,还能教育观众了解中国的传统文化。
分析:句中使用了固定句型not only ...but also...,意为"不仅……而且……"。
【解答】 I recently watched your amazing animation video of Journey to the West Episode 1,which left a deep impression on me.【高分句型一】The visual and auditory effects were truly breathtaking.This animation video was a testament to the power of AI in bringing classic literature to modern audiences in a fresh and engaging way.(看完视频的感受)
However,I do have a few suggestions that might further enhance the viewers' experience.First,it would be great if you could include more Chinese﹣style background music.Secondly,more cultural elements and historical references would not only enrich the content but also educate viewers about Chinese traditions.【高分句型二】(一些意见或建议)
AI has already begun to revolutionize our lives with its potential.I look forward to a future where AI helps to solve complex problems.(分享AI给生活带来的影响并展望AI的发展前景)
Thank you for sharing your talent and vision with us.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
5.(2025 庐阳区校级三模) 假定你是李华。上周末在你的家乡举办了一场鼓王争霸赛(Drum King Championship),请你给酷爱中国传统文化的英国笔友Pal写一封信,介绍比赛的情况和你的感受。
注意:
(1)词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear Pal,
____________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Pal,
Hope you're doing great!Last weekend,a spectacular Drum King Championship took place in my hometown.Drummers,both local and from afar,gathered.They skillfully played traditional Chinese drums,creating a thunderous symphony.The beats were so powerful that the whole venue was filled with excitement and the audience's cheers.
This event was a vivid display of Chinese traditional culture.It made me realize anew how profound and fascinating our cultural heritage is.I'm eager for you to come and feel this unique charm in person someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:They skillfully played traditional Chinese drums,creating a thunderous symphony.
翻译:他们熟练地敲击着中国传统鼓,营造出一阵如雷般的交响乐效果。
分析:运用了现在分词短语creating a thunderous symphony作状语。
高分句型二:The beats were so powerful that the whole venue was filled with excitement and the audience's cheers.
翻译:鼓声如此有力,以至于整个场地都充满了兴奋的氛围和观众的欢呼声。
分析:运用了运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Pal,
Hope you're doing great!Last weekend,a spectacular Drum King Championship took place in my hometown.Drummers,both local and from afar,gathered.They skillfully played traditional Chinese drums,creating a thunderous symphony.【高分句型一】The beats were so powerful that the whole venue was filled with excitement and the audience's cheers.【高分句型二】(介绍比赛的情况)
This event was a vivid display of Chinese traditional culture.It made me realize anew how profound and fascinating our cultural heritage is.I'm eager for you to come and feel this unique charm in person someday.(自己的感受)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6.(2025 上虞区模拟)假设你是高三学生李华。你校电视台计划拍摄一部题为《致难忘的高三》的纪录片,旨在记录2025届学生的青春奋斗历程,并作为毕业礼物赠予全体高三师生。目前电视台正在公开征集拍摄意见。请你用英语给校电视台写一封信,内容包括:
(1)发表看法;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear TV Station Team,
I'm Li Hua.As a senior grappling with deadlines and exams,I am wholeheartedly in favor of the documentary idea.I believe it will immortalize our collective struggles,laughter,and growth during this pivotal year.Such a film not only functions as a valuable graduation gift but also inspires younger students by showcasing the resilience of our generation.These moments deserve to be preserved,allowing us to reflect on our journey while motivating others.
To make the documentary more interesting,I suggest including diverse perspectives.Classrooms could capture intense study sessions,while interviews with teachers would highlight their unwavering support.Footage of late﹣night study groups and sports meeting would add authenticity.In addition,ending with a heartfelt message from each graduating class member would strengthen the film's unifying power.This would change the documentary into a time capsule,cherished by all.
Hope this film will turn fleeting moments into eternal sparks.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:These moments deserve to be preserved,allowing us to reflect on our journey while motivating others.
译文:这些时刻值得保留,让我们在激励他人的同时反思我们的旅程。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语allowing us to reflect on our journey while motivating others作状语。
高分句型二:Classrooms could capture intense study sessions,while interviews with teachers would highlight their unwavering support.
译文:课堂可以捕捉到紧张的学习过程,而对教师的采访将突出他们坚定不移的支持。
分析:这句话使用了while连接并列成分,表示对比。
【解答】Dear TV Station Team,
I'm Li Hua.As a senior grappling with deadlines and exams,I am wholeheartedly in favor of the documentary idea.I believe it will immortalize our collective struggles,laughter,and growth during this pivotal year.Such a film not only functions as a valuable graduation gift but also inspires younger students by showcasing the resilience of our generation.These moments deserve to be preserved,allowing us to reflect on our journey while motivating others.【高分句型一】(发表看法)
To make the documentary more interesting,I suggest including diverse perspectives.Classrooms could capture intense study sessions,while interviews with teachers would highlight their unwavering support.【高分句型二】Footage of late﹣night study groups and sports meeting would add authenticity.In addition,ending with a heartfelt message from each graduating class member would strengthen the film's unifying power.This would change the documentary into a time capsule,cherished by all.(提出建议)
Hope this film will turn fleeting moments into eternal sparks.(表达希望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
7.(2025 广州模拟) 你是李华。交换生Emily想参加中国日报社主办的"印象中国(My China Moments)"英文作品征集活动,来信向你咨询。请给她写一封回信,内容包括:
(1)作品类型;
(2)作品内容及创意。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Emily,
______
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Emily,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in participating in the "My China Moments" contest organized by China Daily.Here's some information that might help you.
The contest accepts various types of submissions,including photography,short videos,paintings,and articles.The content should revolve around China's culture,landscapes,people,and daily life,showcasing the unique charm and diverse culture of China.For creativity,you could consider capturing a moment that reflects the harmony between tradition and modernity.
If you have any more questions,feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:The content should revolve around China's culture,landscapes,people,and daily life,showcasing the unique charm and diverse culture of China.
译文:内容应围绕中国的文化、风景、人民和日常生活展开,展示中国独特的魅力和多元的文化。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语showcasing the unique charm and diverse culture of China作状语。
高分句型二:For creativity,you could consider capturing a moment that reflects the harmony between tradition and modernity.
译文:对于创造力,你可以考虑捕捉一个反映传统与现代和谐的时刻。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Emily,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in participating in the "My China Moments" contest organized by China Daily.Here's some information that might help you.(写信目的)
The contest accepts various types of submissions,including photography,short videos,paintings,and articles.(作品类型)The content should revolve around China's culture,landscapes,people,and daily life,showcasing the unique charm and diverse culture of China.【高分句型一】For creativity,you could consider capturing a moment that reflects the harmony between tradition and modernity.【高分句型二】(作品内容及创意)
If you have any more questions,feel free to ask.(欢迎对方提问)
Best regards,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
8.(2025 黔南州四模)假定你是李华,你校下周将举办"民族文化体验周"(Ethnic Culture Experience Week)活动,请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件邀请他参加,内容包括:
(1)活动时间和地点;
(2)活动目的和内容。
注意:
(1)词数:80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm writing to warmly invite you to our Ethnic Culture Experience Week,which will be held in the school hall and outdoor square from May 12th to 16th.
This event aims to promote cultural exchange and deepen understanding of China's diverse ethnic traditions.Activities include traditional music and dance performances,hands﹣on workshops like paper﹣cutting and embroidery,and a food fair featuring ethnic delicate characteristics.Your presence would add great value to this cultural celebration.
I sincerely hope you can join us to experience these extraordinary activities firsthand.Please let me know if you're available.Looking forward to your kind reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I'm writing to warmly invite you to our Ethnic Culture Experience Week,which will be held in the school hall and outdoor square from May 12th to 16th.
翻译:我特此诚挚邀请您参加我们的 "民族文化体验周" 活动,活动将于5月12日至16日在学校礼堂及户外广场举行。
分析:本句运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Please let me know if you're available.
翻译:若您有时间参加,请告知我。
分析:本句运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm writing to warmly invite you to our Ethnic Culture Experience Week,which will be held in the school hall and outdoor square from May 12th to 16th.【高分句型一】(活动时间和地点)
This event aims to promote cultural exchange and deepen understanding of China's diverse ethnic traditions.Activities include traditional music and dance performances,hands﹣on workshops like paper﹣cutting and embroidery,and a food fair featuring ethnic delicate characteristics.Your presence would add great value to this cultural celebration.(活动目的和内容)
I sincerely hope you can join us to experience these extraordinary activities firsthand.Please let me know if you're available.【高分句型二】Looking forward to your kind reply!(表达期盼)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇。
9.(2025 浦东新区三模)Directions:Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,你校学生会即将进行最美校园毕业照征集活动,拍摄地点不限,个人照或集体照不限。你对此非常感兴趣。请写一封邮件给学生会,除附件照片外,邮件内容需包括:
(1)照片的简单描述;
(2)选择这张照片的理由。
【答案】Dear Student Union,
Thrilled about the "Most Beautiful Graduation Photo" collection activity,I am attaching my photo for your consideration.
The photo is a group shot of my classmates and me in the school library.We are sitting around a table,books in hand,with bright smiles on our faces.The warm sunlight filters through the windows,casting a soft glow,creating a cozy and harmonious atmosphere.
I chose this photo because the library has been our second home throughout high school.It witnessed our countless hours of hard work,heated discussions,and shared dreams.This picture encapsulates not only our academic journey but also the strong bonds we have forged.It symbolizes the pursuit of knowledge and the precious friendship that has accompanied us along the way.I believe it truly represents the essence of our high school years.
Thank you for organizing this meaningful activity.I hope my photo can convey the beauty and significance of our school days.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:The warm sunlight filters through the windows,casting a soft glow,creating a cozy and harmonious atmosphere.
译文:温暖的阳光透过窗户,洒下柔和的光芒,营造出舒适和谐的氛围。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语casting a soft glow,creating a cozy and harmonious atmosphere作状语。
高分句型二:It symbolizes the pursuit of knowledge and the precious friendship that has accompanied us along the way.
译文:它象征着对知识的追求和一路上陪伴我们的珍贵友谊。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Student Union,
Thrilled about the "Most Beautiful Graduation Photo" collection activity,I am attaching my photo for your consideration.(写信目的)
The photo is a group shot of my classmates and me in the school library.We are sitting around a table,books in hand,with bright smiles on our faces.The warm sunlight filters through the windows,casting a soft glow,creating a cozy and harmonious atmosphere.【高分句型一】(照片的简单描述)
I chose this photo because the library has been our second home throughout high school.It witnessed our countless hours of hard work,heated discussions,and shared dreams.This picture encapsulates not only our academic journey but also the strong bonds we have forged.It symbolizes the pursuit of knowledge and the precious friendship that has accompanied us along the way.【高分句型二】I believe it truly represents the essence of our high school years.(选择这张照片的理由)
Thank you for organizing this meaningful activity.I hope my photo can convey the beauty and significance of our school days.(感谢)
Best regards,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
10.(2025 河西区校级模拟)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你的英国朋友Chris计划制作一期向中国中学生介绍英国生活的短视频,现征求你的建议。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐拍摄主题(从校园社团、家庭生活、科技教育任选其一);
(2)说明推荐理由及关于该主题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望通过该视频有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯:
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
It's exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!____________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
It's exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!I'm more than happy to offer some suggestions.Among the topics you've mentioned—school clubs,family life,and tech education—I'd strongly recommend focusing on school clubs.
The reason behind my recommendation is that school clubs are a vibrant part of British student life,offering a diverse range of activities that cater to various interests.From sports teams like football and rugby to creative clubs such as drama and art,there's something for everyone.I'm particularly interested in learning about how these clubs are organized,how students choose to join them,and how they contribute to students' personal growth and social skills development.
Through your video,I hope to gain a deeper understanding of British school culture and the values it promotes.It would also be fascinating to see how these clubs interact with the local community and how they contribute to the broader society.Additionally,I'm curious about any unique traditions or events associated with these clubs that might differ from Chinese school clubs.
I believe this video will not only broaden our horizons but also foster a greater appreciation for cultural diversity.I'm looking forward to seeing your finished product and learning more about British life through your lens.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】高分句型一:The reason behind my recommendation is that school clubs are a vibrant part of British student life,offering a diverse range of activities that cater to various interests.
翻译:我推荐的原因是,学校俱乐部是英国学生生活中充满活力的一部分,提供各种各样的活动来满足各种兴趣。
分析:本句使用了that引导的表语从句;现在分词短语offering a diverse range of activities that cater to various interests作状语。
高分句型二:It would also be fascinating to see how these clubs interact with the local community and how they contribute to the broader society.
翻译:看看这些俱乐部如何与当地社区互动,以及它们如何为更广泛的社会做出贡献,也会很有趣。
分析:本句使用了两个how引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris,
It's exciting to hear about your video project introducing British life to Chinese students!I'm more than happy to offer some suggestions.Among the topics you've mentioned—school clubs,family life,and tech education—I'd strongly recommend focusing on school clubs.(推荐拍摄主题)
The reason behind my recommendation is that school clubs are a vibrant part of British student life,offering a diverse range of activities that cater to various interests.【高分句型一】From sports teams like football and rugby to creative clubs such as drama and art,there's something for everyone.I'm particularly interested in learning about how these clubs are organized,how students choose to join them,and how they contribute to students' personal growth and social skills development.(说明推荐理由)
Through your video,I hope to gain a deeper understanding of British school culture and the values it promotes.It would also be fascinating to see how these clubs interact with the local community and how they contribute to the broader society.【高分句型二】Additionally,I'm curious about any unique traditions or events associated with these clubs that might differ from Chinese school clubs.(关于该主题自己感兴趣的内容)
I believe this video will not only broaden our horizons but also foster a greater appreciation for cultural diversity.I'm looking forward to seeing your finished product and learning more about British life through your lens.(希望通过该视频有何收获)
Yours,
Li Jin
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11.(2025 石家庄三模) 假定你是李华,来你校访问的外国师生将结束一周的交流活动。作为中方学生代表,你将在欢送会上发言。请你写一份发言稿,内容包括:
(1)回顾活动;
(2)表示祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】Dear foreign teachers and students,
Welcome to our farewell party!During this period of cultural exchange,we've grown closer.We studied together,sharing unique academic insights and breaking language barriers.
Memorable moments like the exciting sports meet and elegant art exhibition will always stay with us.As you're about to leave,we're filled with gratitude.May you have a smooth journey home and cherish our shared memories.Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一:We studied together,sharing unique academic insights and breaking language barriers.
翻译:我们一起学习,分享独特的学术见解,打破语言障碍。
分析:运用了现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二:As you're about to leave,we're filled with gratitude.
翻译:当你们即将离开的时候,我们满怀感激之情。
分析:运用了As引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Dear foreign teachers and students,
Welcome to our farewell party!During this period of cultural exchange,we've grown closer.We studied together,sharing unique academic insights and breaking language barriers.【高分句型一】(回顾活动)
Memorable moments like the exciting sports meet and elegant art exhibition will always stay with us.As you're about to leave,we're filled with gratitude.【高分句型二】May you have a smooth journey home and cherish our shared memories.(表示祝愿) Thank you!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
12.(2025 湖北模拟) 假定你是李华,你校开设了一系列免费的线上中国文化公开课。请你给国外某友好学校的学生会主席 John写一封邮件介绍这些课程并邀请参与,内容包括:
(1)邀请参与;
(2)课程简介。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
Our school is hosting a series of free online Chinese culture courses,and I am writing to cordially invite you and your schoolmates to join us.
These courses cover a wide range of aspects of Chinese culture,which include traditional philosophy,art,literature,and cuisine.For instance,you can learn about Confucianism,explore the beauty of Chinese calligraphy,appreciate classic poems,and discover the secrets of making delicious Chinese dishes.The courses are presented in an engaging way,with vivid explanations and interesting examples.
We believe that these courses will offer you a wonderful opportunity to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:These courses cover a wide range of aspects of Chinese culture,which include traditional philosophy,art,literature,and cuisine.
译文:这些课程涵盖了中国文化的各个方面,包括传统哲学、艺术、文学和烹饪。
分析:这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:We believe that these courses will offer you a wonderful opportunity to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
译文:我们相信,这些课程将为您提供一个加深对中国文化理解的绝佳机会。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear John,
Our school is hosting a series of free online Chinese culture courses,and I am writing to cordially invite you and your schoolmates to join us.(邀请参与)
These courses cover a wide range of aspects of Chinese culture,which include traditional philosophy,art,literature,and cuisine.【高分句型一】For instance,you can learn about Confucianism,explore the beauty of Chinese calligraphy,appreciate classic poems,and discover the secrets of making delicious Chinese dishes.The courses are presented in an engaging way,with vivid explanations and interesting examples.(课程简介)
We believe that these courses will offer you a wonderful opportunity to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. 【高分句型二】Looking forward to your participation!(盼望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
13.(2025 龙岗区二模) 假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了建校50周年校庆活动。请你用英语写一篇关于该活动的报道并发布在你校英文网站上,内容包括:
(1)活动的时间,地点和目的;
(2)活动的过程;
(3)活动的反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:50th anniversary 50周年纪念日alumni (统称)校友;毕业生
Our School's Anniversary Event
______
【答案】
Our School's Anniversary Event
Last Friday,our school proudly celebrated its 50th anniversary with a grand event held on campus.The celebration aimed to honor our school's rich history,achievements,and the contributions of all students and teachers over the past five decades.
The event began with a welcome speech by our principal,followed by performances showcasing the talents of our students,including music,dance and drama.A special exhibition displayed photos and artifacts from the school's history,while alumni shared inspiring stories of their journeys.
The celebration was met with great enthusiasm.We all expressed pride in being part of such a remarkable school.The event inspired us to continue striving for excellence in the years to come.
【分析】高分句型一:Last Friday,our school proudly celebrated its 50th anniversary with a grand event held on campus.
译文:上周五,我们学校在校园里举行了一场盛大的活动,自豪地庆祝了建校50周年。
分析:这句话使用了with复合结构。
高分句型二:The event began with a welcome speech by our principal,followed by performances showcasing the talents of our students,including music,dance and drama.
译文:活动以校长的欢迎辞开始,随后是展示学生才华的表演,包括音乐、舞蹈和戏剧。
分析:这句话使用了过去分词短语followed by performances作状语,现在分词短语showcasing the talents of our students,including music,dance and drama作定语。
【解答】
Our School's Anniversary Event
Last Friday,our school proudly celebrated its 50th anniversary with a grand event held on campus.【高分句型一】The celebration aimed to honor our school's rich history,achievements,and the contributions of all students and teachers over the past five decades.(活动的时间,地点和目的)
The event began with a welcome speech by our principal,followed by performances showcasing the talents of our students,including music,dance and drama.【高分句型二】A special exhibition displayed photos and artifacts from the school's history,while alumni shared inspiring stories of their journeys.(活动的过程)
The celebration was met with great enthusiasm.We all expressed pride in being part of such a remarkable school.The event inspired us to continue striving for excellence in the years to come.(活动的反响)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
14.(2025 南京二模)你校英文报现面向全校征集关于改进校园图书漂流(book﹣drifting)项目的建议。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)主要问题;
(2)你的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Suggestions on the Book﹣drifting Program
________
【答案】
My Suggestions on the Book﹣drifting Program
Our school's book﹣drifting project is meaningful but now it has some problems.
The most serious one is that the selection of books is rather limited.Besides,the location of the book shelves is inconvenient for students to access,and there is a lack of effective supervision.To deal with these problems,I suggest that we should invite students to recommend books that they want to share.We can also open an online platform where students can reserve and borrow books.In addition,we should establish a monitoring system to ensure the smooth running of the project.
With these improvements,the book﹣drifting project will surely become more popular among students.
【分析】高分句型一:The most serious one is that the selection of books is rather limited.
译文:最严重的是,书籍的选择相当有限。
分析:这句话使用了that引导的表语从句。
高分句型二:We can also open an online platform where students can reserve and borrow books.
译文:我们还可以开设一个在线平台,学生可以在那里预订和借阅书籍。
分析:这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
My Suggestions on the Book﹣drifting Program
Our school's book﹣drifting project is meaningful but now it has some problems.(话题)
The most serious one is that the selection of books is rather limited.【高分句型一】Besides,the location of the book shelves is inconvenient for students to access,and there is a lack of effective supervision.(主要问题)To deal with these problems,I suggest that we should invite students to recommend books that they want to share.We can also open an online platform where students can reserve and borrow books.【高分句型二】In addition,we should establish a monitoring system to ensure the smooth running of the project.(建议)
With these improvements,the book﹣drifting project will surely become more popular among students.(总结)
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
15.(2025 湖北模拟) 作为即将毕业的高三学生,大学专业选择是追求兴趣还是讲究实际成为你和同学们最关注的话题之一。某英文报社正在开展以此为主题的讨论,请你写一篇投稿,内容包括:
(1)你的观点;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Choosing a Major:Passion or Practicality?
______
【答案】
Choosing a Major:Passion or Practicality?
As a graduating senior,I often discuss with my classmates whether to choose a college major based on passion or practicality.After much thought,I firmly believe passion should guide our choice of college majors.
Firstly,passion acts as the strongest motivator.When we study what truly interests us,we naturally invest more time and energy,which often leads to better academic performance.Moreover,a major driven by passion can translate into a fulfilling career.Financial rewards may change,but the joy of engaging in meaningful work endures.Finally,the job market is constantly evolving.Those who are passionate about their field are more adaptable,willing to learn new skills,and better equipped to face challenges.In conclusion,following our passion is the path to both personal fulfillment and professional success.
【分析】高分句型一:When we study what truly interests us,we naturally invest more time and energy,which often leads to better academic performance.
翻译:当我们研究真正感兴趣的东西时,我们自然会投入更多的时间和精力,这往往会带来更好的学习成绩。
分析:本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句;what引导的宾语从句;which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Those who are passionate about their field are more adaptable,willing to learn new skills,and better equipped to face challenges.
翻译:那些对自己的领域充满热情的人适应能力更强,愿意学习新技能,更有能力面对挑战。
分析:本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】
Choosing a Major:Passion or Practicality?
As a graduating senior,I often discuss with my classmates whether to choose a college major based on passion or practicality.After much thought,I firmly believe passion should guide our choice of college majors.(自己的观点)
Firstly,passion acts as the strongest motivator.When we study what truly interests us,we naturally invest more time and energy,which often leads to better academic performance.【高分句型一】Moreover,a major driven by passion can translate into a fulfilling career.Financial rewards may change,but the joy of engaging in meaningful work endures.Finally,the job market is constantly evolving.Those who are passionate about their field are more adaptable,willing to learn new skills,and better equipped to face challenges.【高分句型二】In conclusion,following our passion is the path to both personal fulfillment and professional success.(理由)
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
16.(2025 昌平区二模) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校正在举办"戏曲进校园(Chinese Opera Enters the Campus)"系列活动,你是活动的负责人,想邀请你校英国交换生Jim来参加,请你用英文给他写一封邮件。内容要点:
(1)活动时间与地点;
(2)活动内容及邀请理由。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I'm Li Hua,in charge of the "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event at our school.It's scheduled for 3 p.m.this Friday in the school auditorium.
During the event,you'll enjoy wonderful opera performances,learn about the history and culture behind it,and even try some basic makeup and movements.I think it's a great chance for you to experience traditional Chinese art.You're always interested in different cultures,and this event will definitely broaden your horizons.
I sincerely invite you to join us.Let me know if you can make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I think it's a great chance for you to experience traditional Chinese art.
翻译:我认为这是你体验中国传统艺术的好机会。
分析:句子中,it为形式主语;真正的主语为不定式短语to experience traditional Chinese art。
高分句型二:Let me know if you can make it.
翻译:如果你能来,请告诉我。
分析:本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim,
I'm Li Hua,in charge of the "Chinese Opera Enters the Campus" event at our school.It's scheduled for 3 p.m.this Friday in the school auditorium.(活动时间与地点)
During the event,you'll enjoy wonderful opera performances,learn about the history and culture behind it,and even try some basic makeup and movements.I think it's a great chance for you to experience traditional Chinese art. 【高分句型一】You're always interested in different cultures,and this event will definitely broaden your horizons.(活动内容及邀请理由)
I sincerely invite you to join us.Let me know if you can make it.【高分句型二】
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
17.(2025 青羊区校级模拟)假如你是李华,你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状.请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题并提出建议.信的内容应包括下列要点:
焦虑症状:头晕、乏力、食欲不振等.
建议:1制定计划;2.正常作息;3.保证睡眠.
其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
3.参考词汇:头晕dizzy(adj.)
Dear editor,
I'm a Senior Three student of Xinhua No.1 High School. I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms(症状) of anxiety among us students before exams._________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一
When the exam is coming, some of my classmates may feel dizzy and unwilling to do anything for lack of strength.
分析: 句子里,When引导时间状语从句 the exam is coming;固定短语unwilling to 表示"不愿意";for lack of strength表示"因为缺乏力气".
翻译:当考试来临时,我的一些同学可能会感到头晕,因为缺乏力气而不愿意做任何事.
高分句型二
At the same time, regarding the exam as a normal test will help you do better.
分析:句子里,动名词 regarding the exam as a normal test做句子 will help you do better的主语.
翻译:同时,把考试当作一种平时的测试,会帮助你做得更好.
【解答】Dear editor,
I'm a Senior Three student of Xinhua No.1 High School. I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms(症状) of anxiety among us students before exams. When the exam is coming, some of my classmates may feel dizzy and unwilling to do anything for lack of strength. 【高分句型一】 A few of them even lose appetite.(反映部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状的问题)
I have several ways that may help someone who are like my classmates. First of all, we should make a review plan about the exam. What's more , never stay up too late before the exam to ensure sleep time. It is best to work and rest normally. At the same time, regarding the exam as a normal test will help you do better.【高分句型二】(提出建议)
Hope you can give other tips so that my classmates can enjoy exam more freely!(表达希望)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【点评】书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目,旨在考查考生的英语基础,发扬个性、关注环境的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表 达的基本思路. 试题设置均为半开放式,给考生一定提 示的同时,也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维 空间,使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地, 这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织 和书面表达的能力.要写出一篇好的文章, 考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息,更加重要 的是在自由发挥部分,要有自己独到的见解.
18.(2025 温州模拟)假定你是李华,你校计划举办"时光机音乐节(Time Machine Music Festival)",你将与英国交换生Tom共演一个节目。请你写一封邮件与他商讨,内容包括:
(1)节目设想;
(2)设计理由;
(3)征求意见。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Our school's Time Machine Music Festival is approaching,and I'm thrilled that we'll collaborate on a performance.I propose we do a medley combining a traditional Chinese folk song like "Jasmine Flower" and a classic British pop song,such as "Yesterday" by The Beatles.
This fusion not only showcases the charm of both musical heritages but also offers the audience a rich auditory experience.It'll be a great way to bridge cultural gaps through music.
Do you have any other thoughts or song suggestions?I'm eager to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:I propose we do a medley combining a traditional Chinese folk song like "Jasmine Flower" and a classic British pop song,such as "Yesterday" by The Beatles.
翻译:我提议我们表演一个混合曲目,融合像《茉莉花》这样的中国传统民歌和像披头士乐队的《昨日》这样的经典英国流行歌曲。
分析:运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句we do a medley combining a traditional Chinese folk song like "Jasmine Flower" and a classic British pop song,such as "Yesterday" by The Beatles.
高分句型二:This fusion not only showcases the charm of both musical heritages but also offers the audience a rich auditory experience.
翻译:这种融合不仅展现了两种音乐传统的魅力,还为观众提供了丰富的听觉体验。
分析:运用了not only...but also连接两个并列的谓语。
【解答】Dear Tom,
Our school's Time Machine Music Festival is approaching,and I'm thrilled that we'll collaborate on a performance.I propose we do a medley combining a traditional Chinese folk song like "Jasmine Flower" and a classic British pop song,such as "Yesterday" by The Beatles.【高分句型一】(节目设想)
This fusion not only showcases the charm of both musical heritages but also offers the audience a rich auditory experience. 【高分句型二】It'll be a great way to bridge cultural gaps through music.(设计理由)
Do you have any other thoughts or song suggestions?I'm eager to hear from you.(征求意见)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
19.(2025 朝阳区二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim所在学校正在开展阅读周系列活动。他打算策划一次"介绍中国文学"的活动,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Excited to hear you're planning an event to introduce Chinese literature!I'm willing to give you some suggestions.
It might be a good idea to organize a "Chinese Literature Day",where teachers are invited to give lectures on the development of Chinese literature and share their favorite books.To get students more involved,you can add a storytelling session.Each group can pick a captivating chapter to read aloud,discuss and act out.Imagine students dressing up as their favorite characters from the chapter to bring the figures to life.What a golden opportunity for you to immerse yourselves in Chinese literature!
What do you think of my ideas?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:It might be a good idea to organize a "Chinese Literature Day",where teachers are invited to give lectures on the development of Chinese literature and share their favorite books.
译文:组织一个"中国文学日"可能是个好主意,邀请老师们就中国文学的发展发表演讲,分享他们最喜欢的书籍。
分析:这句话使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:To get students more involved,you can add a storytelling session.Each group can pick a captivating chapter to read aloud,discuss and act out.
译文:为了让学生更多地参与进来,你可以添加一个讲故事的环节。每个小组可以选择一个引人入胜的章节大声朗读、讨论和表演。
分析:这句话使用了不定式短语To get students more involved作目的状语。
【解答】Dear Jim,
Excited to hear you're planning an event to introduce Chinese literature!I'm willing to give you some suggestions.(写信目的)
It might be a good idea to organize a "Chinese Literature Day",where teachers are invited to give lectures on the development of Chinese literature and share their favorite books.【高分句型一】(活动形式)To get students more involved,you can add a storytelling session.Each group can pick a captivating chapter to read aloud,discuss and act out. 【高分句型二】Imagine students dressing up as their favorite characters from the chapter to bring the figures to life.What a golden opportunity for you to immerse yourselves in Chinese literature!(活动内容)
What do you think of my ideas?Looking forward to your reply.(盼望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
20.(2025 岳麓区校级二模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Ray对你们学校的"校园劳动节"(Campus Labor Festival)很感兴趣,想来你们学校参观。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示欢迎;
(2)介绍"校园劳动节"的具体内容。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ray,
________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ray,
I'm thrilled to hear of your interest in our Campus Labor Festival!You' re warmly welcome to visit our school during the event next Friday.Let me briefly introduce it.
First of all,students participate in a thorough campus clean﹣up,like tidying classrooms and planting colorful flowers and trees around the school to create an inviting atmosphere.What's more,we organize a handicraft fair where handmade items like recycled art are sold to raise funds for rural schools.In addition,cooking competitions are held in the cafeteria,allowing us to showcase cooking skills using homegrown vegetables from our school garden.Through this festival not only do students cultivate responsibility,teamwork,and creativity through hands﹣on labor,but also build up our connectivity by combining practical work with charitable causes.
Looking forward to your visit for a memorable experience!Feel free to ask whether you need further details!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一:What's more,we organize a handicraft fair where handmade items like recycled art are sold to raise funds for rural schools.
译文:此外,我们还组织了一个手工艺品博览会,出售回收艺术品等手工制品,为农村学校筹集资金。
分析:这句话使用了where引导的限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:In addition,cooking competitions are held in the cafeteria,allowing us to showcase cooking skills using homegrown vegetables from our school garden.
译文:此外,餐厅还举办烹饪比赛,让我们展示使用学校花园自产蔬菜的烹饪技巧。
分析:这句话使用了现在分词短语allowing us to showcase cooking skills using homegrown vegetables from our school garden作状语。
【解答】Dear Ray,
I'm thrilled to hear of your interest in our Campus Labor Festival!You' re warmly welcome to visit our school during the event next Friday.Let me briefly introduce it.(表示欢迎)
First of all,students participate in a thorough campus clean﹣up,like tidying classrooms and planting colorful flowers and trees around the school to create an inviting atmosphere.What's more,we organize a handicraft fair where handmade items like recycled art are sold to raise funds for rural schools.【高分句型一】In addition,cooking competitions are held in the cafeteria,allowing us to showcase cooking skills using homegrown vegetables from our school garden. 【高分句型二】Through this festival not only do students cultivate responsibility,teamwork,and creativity through hands﹣on labor,but also build up our connectivity by combining practical work with charitable causes.(介绍"校园劳动节"的具体内容)
Looking forward to your visit for a memorable experience!Feel free to ask whether you need further details!(盼望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数,不要太多也不要太少。
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