XB1U1 WRITING
词汇积累:
1. Selfless (无私的) 2. Dedicated (奉献的) 3. Determined (坚定的)
4. Courageous (勇敢的) 5. Wise (智慧的) 6. Compassionate (富有同情心的)
7. Persistent (坚持不懈的) 8. Humble (谦逊的) 9. Responsible (有责任心的)
10. Resilient (坚韧不拔的) 11. Innovative (创新的) 12. Patriotic (爱国的)
13. Inspiring (鼓舞人心的) 14. Noble (高尚的) 15. Visionary (有远见的)
16. Hardworking (勤奋的) 17. Genius (天才的) 18. Kind (善良的)
19. Honest (诚实的) 20. Impactful (有深远影响的) 21.Pioneering (开创性的)
22. Perseverant 锲而不舍的 23. devoted 热衷的 24. dedicated 献身的
25. passionate 热情的 mitted 尽心尽力的 27. make great efforts努力
一、 Introduction开头引入人物
★In the first paragraph, you need to write 2 sentences or 3 short sentences to introduce the people you want to write briefly.
I. ...is widely known / acknowledged / celebrated as... (被广泛誉为...)
例句1 Tu Youyou is widely known as the discoverer of artemisinin.
例句2: Albert Einstein is widely acknowledged as the father of modern physics and one of the greatest minds in human history. 阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦被公认为现代物理学之父和人类历史上最伟大的智者之一。
仿写: 斯蒂芬·霍金被公认为我们时代最伟大的理论物理学家之一,他对黑洞的研究革命了宇宙学。(Stephen Hawking;理论物理学家:theoretical physicists;whose;black holes;革命:revolution)
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2. 居里夫人被广泛认为是放射性研究领域的先驱,也是第一位在两个不同科学领域获得诺贝尔奖的人。(居里夫人: Marie Curie;先驱:pioneering figure/pioneer;放射性:radioactivity)
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II. ...be awarded the Nobel Prize in...for... (因...被授予诺贝尔...奖)
例句1: Tu Youyou has been awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin.
例句2: Albert Einstein was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1921 for his services to Theoretical Physics, and especially for his discovery of the law of the photoelectric effect. 阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦因其对理论物理学的贡献,特别是发现了光电效应定律,于1921年被授予诺贝尔物理学奖。
仿写: 马拉拉·尤萨夫扎伊因其为每个儿童受教育权所进行的勇敢而危险的斗争被授予诺贝尔和平奖。(马拉拉·尤萨夫扎伊Malala Yousafzai;勇敢的:courageous/brave;权利:right)
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III. ...serves as my role model/...has always been my role model/...is a role model for me./ ... is my greatest inspiration/biggest influence./The person I respect/admire most is(...是我的榜样/我钦佩...)
例句1:Zhang Guimei, a selfless and determined educator, is a role model for the entire nation.
例句2:The scientist I respect most is Marie Curie, who discovered radium and polonium and won two Nobel Prizes. 我最尊敬的科学家是居里夫人,她发现了镭和钋,并两次获得诺贝尔奖。
例句3:The person I respect most is the geophysicist Huang Dalian, who helped China to make many technological advances.
仿写:袁隆平是一位敬业创新的农业科学家,是我最大的榜样。
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二、 描述成就与贡献
I. ...commit oneself to... / ...be committed to... /devote oneself to... / ...be devoted to.../ dedicate oneself to.../ ...be dedicated to.../throw oneself into.../strive设法,努力 to do something / strive for something
pour one's energy / heart / soul into...(致力于...)
例句1 She committed herself to her research for decades.
例句2: Einstein committed himself to searching for a unified field theory that could explain all the fundamental forces of the universe. 爱因斯坦致力于寻找一种可以解释宇宙所有基本力的统一场论。
仿写: 简·古道尔六十多年来一直致力于研究和保护坦桑尼亚的野生黑猩猩,从根本上改变了我们对灵长类动物行为的理解。( 简·古道尔Jane Goodall;野生黑猩猩:wild chimpanzees;灵长类动物:primate)
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II. ...lead to/result in/contribute to a breakthrough in... / paved the way for(导致/促成...领域的突破/为...铺平了道路)
例句1 Her efforts eventually led to the discovery of artemisinin.
例句2: Einstein's revolutionary ideas about the interrelation of space and time led to a huge breakthrough in theoretical physics. 爱因斯坦关于时空相互关系的革命性思想导致了理论物理学领域的突破。
例句: Her early research on genetic markers paved the way for a breakthrough in personalized medicine.她早期对遗传标记的研究为个性化医疗领域的突破铺平了道路。
仿写: 她发表了一项开创性的研究,最终为AI技术铺平了道路。(开创性的:groundbreaking )
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三、 描述个人品质与精神
I. ...be born with... / have a natural gift for... (天生具有...)
例句1 She had a natural gift for medicine and science.
例句2: Einstein had a natural gift for conceptualizing complex physical problems in unique and imaginative ways, often through thought experiments rather than complex math. 爱因斯坦天生具有以独特和富有想象力的方式(通常是通过思想实验而非复杂的数学)来概念化复杂物理问题的天赋。
仿写: 莫扎特天生具有非凡的、看似毫不费力的作曲才华,在幼年时就创作出了他的第一部作品。(莫扎特:Mozart;看似adv.:seemingly;作曲:compose;毫不费力的:effortless;作品:work/production/pieces)
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II. ...be passionate/driven by a strong desire to... (热衷于/被强烈的愿望驱使去...)
例句1 She was driven by a strong desire to help those in need.
例句2: He was driven by a profound and insatiable desire to understand the fundamental secrets and harmonious principles governing the universe.他被一种深刻且永不满足的愿望所驱使,想要理解支配宇宙的基本奥秘与和谐法则。
仿写: 他热衷于寻找创新且实用的解决方案来应对气候变化,为子孙后代保护我们的环境。子孙后代: future generations;应对:tackle/deal with
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III. ...value...above all else. (将...置于一切之上)
例句1 She valued her patients above all else.
例句2: Einstein valued intellectual freedom, curiosity, and independent thought above all else, seeing them as the engines of true scientific discovery. 爱因斯坦将智力自由、好奇心和独立思考置于一切之上,视它们为真正科学发现的引擎。
仿写: 这位科学家在研究中最看重的是诚实,从不在数据上做手脚。
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IV. ...regard...as... / ...view...as... (将...视为...)
例句1: She regarded her work as a way to serve the people.
例句2:He views every challenge and setback in life as an invaluable opportunity to learn, grow, and build resilience. 他将生活中的每一个挑战和挫折视为学习、成长和建立韧性的宝贵机会。
other phrases you may need:
change the face of…; work tirelessly; go unnoticed未被注意的;
sacrificed everything for…为……牺牲一切; for the sake of…为了……的利益 make a difference产生影响 ;
in spite of their great achievements尽管他们取得了巨大的成就;
have their contributions recognized让他们的贡献得到认可;
give up his well-paid job and return to China放弃他的高薪工作回到中国;
四、 结尾评价与影响
I. ...be remembered / revered as... (作为...被铭记/崇敬)
例句1 She is remembered as a great doctor and a compassionate有同情心的 person.
仿写: 马丁·路德·金作为英雄和争取民权和社会正义的象征而被人们铭记。
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other expressions:
例句1:To sum up, Huang sacrificed everything for his research and I think more people should honour him.
例句2:I want to thank them, and let the world know about these teachers who work tirelessly every day for the sake of the children.我要感谢他们,让全世界都知道,这些老师每天都在不知疲倦地为孩子们工作。
例句3:Because of her, I have learnt to stay positive even when times are hard.
总结评价类 (最常用):这类结尾直接点明人物的地位、价值或其对你的影响,简单明了,不易出错。
例1:In short/In a word, ... is not only a(n) [身份], but also a true inspiration to me/us.
In a word, Tu Youyou is not only a brilliant scientist, but also a true inspiration to all of us.
例2:All in all, there is no doubt that [Name] is a person of great achievement and integrity.
All in all, there is no doubt that my father is a person of great achievement and integrity.
例3:Without a doubt, [Name] has left a lasting impression on me and my outlook on life.
Without a doubt, Professor Wang has left a lasting impression on me and my outlook on life.
升华感悟类
例1:[Name]'s story teaches us that the power of [品质, e.g. perseverance, love] can truly change the world.
Yuan Longping's story teaches us that the power of perseverance and innovation can truly change the world.
例2:From [Name], I have learned that the most valuable thing in life is not success itself, but [品质, e.g. the courage to try, a kind heart].
From my mother, I have learned that the most valuable thing in life is not success itself, but a kind and resilient heart.
例3:The legacy of [Name] is not just in what he/she achieved, but in the lives he/she touched and inspired. The legacy of a great teacher is not just in the knowledge she imparted, but in the countless lives she touched and inspired.一位伟大老师留下的遗产不仅仅是她传授的知识,更是她触动和激励的无数生命。
展望未来类
例1:Inspired by his/her example, I am determined to [你的目标或行动] in the future.
Inspired by her dedication, I am determined to pursue a career in medical science to help others.
例2:I will always carry the lessons I learned from [Name] with me and strive to be a better person.
I will always carry the lessons I learned from my coach with me and strive to be a person who never gives up. 我会永远铭记从教练身上学到的功课,并努力成为一个永不放弃的人。
假定你是李华,即将参加学校组织的以The Power of a Hero 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1. 英雄人物事迹; 2. 你获得的启发。
注意:1. 写作词数为80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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