人教九年级Unit 4 Section B Writing课件

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进入初中后，你发现自己在生活和学可能力上都有了很大的提升,变得越来越独立了，这和父母及老师对你的帮助是分不开的。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文，在下周英语课上分享父母和老师是如何帮助你进步的。
文体：
人称：
时态：
参考句型：
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时，
一般现在时
要求：语句连贯，词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Since I entered middle school, I've become more independent both in study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed.
我的进步
父母
1. 教我做家务
2. ……
3. ……
老师
1. 传授学习方法
2. ……
3. ……
表达感谢
used to be/do
思路点拨：
如何与他人相处
帮助我培养独立性
教我如何明智做决定
……
思路点拨：
教我勇敢面对困难，不放弃
鼓励我大胆发言
鼓励我独立思考
……
范文赏析
Since I entered middle school,I've become more independent both in
study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed.
At home,I was not good at housework. I was often taught to do
chores/housework by my parents. They also taught me how to get on well with
others so that I could make more friends. Now I become more
independent and more confident.More importantly,I can take good care of
myself.
used to be
At school,I was so shy that I was afraid of speaking in front of
others.Thanks to my English teacher,she told me how to be brave in
speaking and encouraged me not to give up.I feel comfortable to make
a speech in front of the class now. She also taught me the effective ways
of learning so that I could learn better than before.
I'm really thankful to my parents and teachers. They make a big
difference to my life.
有效的useful
感到自如的；舒适的
used to be
有很大影响=have a big infuence on
Since I entered middle school,I've become more independent both in study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed. At home,I ①used to be a lazy and untidy girl. My parents taught me to do housework patiently.② Every time I finish it,they always tell me that I've done an excellent job.③The more they encourage me,the more hard-working and confident I become. Also,④I'm allowed to make my own decision. These changes ⑤have a great influence on my life. 点评：
①used to,⑤have a
great influence on,
⑥With their help,
⑨come up with和
⑩work out的使用
使文章的描述更加
生动细致。
②时间状语从句,
At school,English used to be a headache to me. My teachers showed me different useful learning methods.⑥With their help,I ⑦did better than before. Besides,they also encouraged me to be creative and think independently.⑧That's why I can always ⑨come up with new ideas in class and ⑩work out different problems alone. Thanks to my teachers and parents,I've become a better person. I cannot fully express my thanks for their great help! ③⑦比较级,④被动语
态和⑧原因状语从句
的使用使文章的表达
更加高级。
本篇范文条理清晰,句
式丰富,通过对比将进
步表现得更加细致，
同时能够活学活用本
单元的句型used to
be。
续表
1. Li Wen's unhappiness began to influence his schoolwork.
2. He became less interested in studying.
3. Sometimes he was absent from classes and failed his exams.
4. His parents made the decision to send him to a boarding school. 5. She advised them to talk with their son in person.
6. It was exactly what I needed,
7. Now I understand that even though they are busy, they are always thinking of me.
8. They take pride in everything good that I do.
Unit 4
Section B 4a & Self-check & writing
He Studies Harder Than He Used to
Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like What change is the most important one, and why
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about
the changes in your life
Paragraph 2: The most important change
and how it happened
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
单词&短语
根据汉语提示，写出对应的英文表达。
1. 外貌：tall / short, fat / thin, big / little, strong / weak, ___________________( 中等身高), straight / curly / long / short hair, high / big nose, big / bright eyes
2. 性格：funny, friendly / nice / kind, outgoing, serious, ____________( 幽默的), talkative (健谈的), active, brave, helpful, popular, silent, quiet, shy, lazy, be easy / hard to get on / along with, ____________ ___________ (乐于助人)
be of medium height
humorous
be ready to
help others
3. 爱好与习惯：
love / like / enjoy (playing) soccer / ..., be interested in / be good at ..., ___________________(在篮球队), in the school music / ... club, ___________________(发表演讲), dislike / can’t stand ..., read / not read a lot of books, hate P.E. / math ..., be afraid of ...
4. 穿着打扮：
_______________________________(穿黑色衣服), wear jeans / ..., be dressed as a boy, dress beautifully / nicely / poorly / simply / ...
on a basketball team
give / make a speech
dress in black / wear black clothes
5. 学习：
study / work hard, get good scores / grades on one’s exams, ________________( 在学校表现好), be good at English / ..., become less / more interested in studying, be absent from classes, _______________(考试不及格), be bad at / be poor in / be bored with / do badly in ...
fail the exam
do well in school
How I've changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ________________________________________________________________________________________________. Now I'm _________________________________________
___________________________________________________________.
The biggest change in my life is _____________________. This is the most important change because ________________
________________________________________________.
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life.
Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened.
Writing Sample
How I've changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very short. I used to be very quiet and liked staying at home alone. I used to have little communication with my parents and others. Now I'm much taller and more outgoing than before. I often hang out with my friends on weekends. I'm used to spending time with them and I am more popular at school than before.
The biggest change in my life is my personality. This is the most important change because I have more friends than before. I don't feel lonely anymore.
Since I entered middle school, I've become more independent both in study and in life. I'd like to share how I've changed.
At home, I used to be a lazy and untidy girl. My parents taught me to do housework patiently. Every time I finish it, they always tell me that I've done an excellent job. The more they encourage me, the more hard-working and confident I become. Also, they helped me to develop my independence. From them, I’ve learned how to make wise decisions on my own. These changes have a great influence on my life.
At school, English used to be a headache to me. My teachers showed me different useful learning methods. With their help, I did better than before. Besides, they also encouraged me to be creative and think independently. That's why I can always come up with new ideas in class and work out different problems alone.
Thanks to my teachers and parents, I've become a better person. I cannot fully express my thanks for their great help!
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