Period Four Writing
【单元主题表达】
【主题词汇】
1.for the first time 2.the vast sea 3.at first 4.instructor
5.take it easy 6.gradually 7.adjust/adapt to 8.all of a sudden 9.turn around 10.be astonished to find 11.harmless 12.relieved 13.reach out 14.an impressive experience 15.succeed in
【高级句式】
1.when I went to dive for the first time
2.Facing the vast sea
3.adjusted/adapted to swimming
4.Turning around
5.was relieved
6.succeeded in diving; that I swam with seals for 10 minutes
【活学活用】
One possible version:
Sunday, October 8th Fine
I just had an amazing adventure hiking trip with 20 students held by Adventure Hiking last week.
First, we hiked through a huge desert to test our strength and endurance. It was tough, but we felt it rewarding. Then, we went white-water rafting, which was so thrilling! We paddled through rapids and laughed together. After that, we climbed a 3,000-metre mountain and saw wild animals like eagles and mountain goats. Exhausted as we were, it’s worthwhile to see the breathtaking view from the top of the mountain.
It is really an incredible experience that not only allows me to appreciate nature, but also challenges my limit to achieve goals. I can’t wait to join another adventure trip next time!Period Four Writing
Ⅰ.1.unaware of the danger
2.A drunk driver knocked me down
3.what had happened;with their mouths wide open
4.had learned about first aid
5.played a positive role/part in
6.to become a doctor
Ⅱ.【文章大意】 本文是一篇新闻报道,主要报道了中国考察队成功登上珠穆朗玛峰进行科学研究。
1.carried 考查动词时态。根据and前的reached可知,这里应用一般过去时。故填carried。
2.extremely 考查副词。空处应用副词修饰空后的dangerous。extremely意为“极其,非常”,作状语。故填extremely。
3.to complete 考查非谓语动词。“Sth takes/took…to do…”为固定句型,意为“做某事需要有……”,空处用不定式作主语the journey的补语。故填to complete。
4.their 考查代词。空处应用形容词性物主代词作定语。故填their。
5.be seen 考查动词语态。see…as…意为“将……看作……”。根据句意可知,it和see之间为被动关系,应用被动语态。空前有can,be动词应用原形。故填be seen。
6.a 考查冠词。a wide range of…意为“各种各样的……,广泛的……”。故填a。
7.where 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,空处引导非限制性定语从句,先行词为the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau,从句中缺少地点状语,应用关系副词where。故填where。
8.leader 考查名词。team…of the expedition是Yao Tandong的同位语,表示身份,应用名词单数。leader意为“领导者”,符合语境。故填leader。
9.collecting 考查非谓语动词。空前有介词beyond,这里应用动名词作宾语。故填collecting。
10.in 考查介词。根据空前的resulted可知,这里应用介词in,result in意为“导致,引起,造成”,符合语境。故填in。
Ⅲ.第一节
One possible version:
Last summer holiday, I took part in the Man vs Wild organized by China International Travel Service.
During the activity, I, together with a boy from Beijing, was in the same group.It went well in the beginning.However, on the third day, we ran out of our food, which made us worried.To go through the hunger, we had to look for anything that could be eaten along the way.What’s worse, we got lost and couldn’t find our way back to the campsite.We had taken our mobile phones but there was no signal.To save ourselves, we made a large SOS sign using tree branches.Luckily, we were rescued by helicopter at last.It was a valuable experience for me and I have learned a lot of survival skills from it.
第二节
One possible version:
We were scared and worried. We had no way of contacting anyone, and we had no idea how long the storm would last. We decided to wait it out and hoped for the best. Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, the rain stopped. The sun came out, and we could see the blue sky. We quickly packed up our things and started our way back. The road was slippery and muddy, but we made it back to our campsite safely.
That night, as we sat around the fire, we reflected on our adventure. We realized that we had been through a lot, but we had also learned a valuable lesson. We had learned to be prepared for anything and to always expect the unexpected. Our camping trip turned out to be an unforgettable adventure. We had hiked to see a magnificent waterfall, taken shelter in a cave during a thunderstorm, and made it back to our campsite safely. We had faced our fears, which made us stronger and wiser. It was an experience that we will never forget.
【思路点拨】 本文讲述了作者和朋友们去山里野营,到达营地后计划第二天的活动,决定第二天去看附近的瀑布,最后作者他们欣赏到了美丽的瀑布,在他们要离开的时候,他们遇到了大雨,而且情况越来越糟糕。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们既害怕又担心。”可知,第一段可描写作者与朋友们害怕担心的原因,结合第二段提示的内容可知,该部分要提及作者与朋友们最后到达营地,所以要描写天气转好,作者他们安全返回营地。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上,我们围坐在炉火旁,回想着我们的冒险经历。”可知,第二段可描写作者在这次经历中学到了什么。
2.续写线索:担心害怕—等待时机—回到营地—回忆经历—感悟Period Four Writing
描写自己的一次潜水或冒险经历
【写作点拨】
对自己的潜水或冒险经历的描写属于记叙文的一种, 所以在写作中需要写明这次经历的时间、地点、人物、自己所做的事情、看到了什么以及有什么样的感受等。
【典题示例】
假定你是李华, 英语课上老师要求你们根据提示, 以“My first experience of diving”为题写一篇80词左右的文章, 描述第一次潜水的经历。
提示:1.时间、地点;
2.所见和所感。
【构思与布局】
明确体裁话题——记叙文,第一次潜水的经历
↓
确定人称时态——第一人称,以过去时为主
布局文章结构——
【主题词汇】
1. 第一次
2. 浩瀚的海洋
3. 起初,一开始
4. n.教练,教师
5. 别着急,别慌,放轻松
6. adv.逐渐地
7. 适应
8. 突然
9. 转过身
10. 惊讶地发现
11. adj.无害的,无恶意的
12. adj.感到宽慰的,放心的
13. 伸出手
14. 一次令人印象深刻的体验
15. 在……方面成功
【高级句式】
1.我永远不会忘记我5月4日在青岛第一次去潜水的那一天。
I will never forget the day on May 4th, in Qingdao.
2.面对浩瀚的大海, 我一开始有点害怕。
, I was a bit scared at first.
3.逐渐地, 我适应了在黑暗的海里游泳。
Gradually, I in the dark sea.
4.一转身, 我惊讶地发现了一些灰色的海豹。
, I was astonished to find some grey seals.
5.我放心了, 甚至伸出手去触摸其中一只海豹。
I and even reached out to touch one of them.
6.我无法相信我成功地潜了水, 还和海豹一起游了10分钟。
I couldn’t believe I and .
【连句成文】
One possible version:
My first experience of diving
I will never forget the day when I went to dive for the first time on May 4th, in Qingdao.
Facing the vast sea, I was a bit scared at first. But my instructor told me to take it easy and just follow him. Gradually, I adjusted to swimming in the dark sea. All of a sudden, something big appeared on my right. Turning around, I was astonished to find some grey seals. I got scared but the instructor told me they were harmless. I was relieved and even reached out to touch one of them. We also saw some schools of unusual fish.
What an impressive experience I had! I couldn’t believe I succeeded in diving and that I swam with seals for 10 minutes.
【活学活用】
假定你是李华,上周你参加了一家冒险远足营地 (Adventure Hiking) 组织的一次冒险远足旅行,请你写一篇日记描述这次活动并谈谈自己的感受。主要内容应包括:
1.活动的时间和人员;
2.活动过程;
3.你的感受。
注意:词数80个左右。
参考词汇:乘竹筏漂流 white-water rafting
Period Four Writing
●Ⅰ 补全句子
1.One day, I was walking on the street, fascinated by the vibrant sounds and colours of the local market, approaching from behind.(形容词短语作状语)
有一天,我走在街上,被当地市场充满活力的声音和色彩迷住了,没有意识到危险从后面逼近。
2. and I was seriously injured .
一个醉酒的司机把我撞倒,我受了重伤。
3.A group of passers-by gathered around us to see and stared in surprise . (宾语从句;with复合结构)
一群路人围住我们想看看发生了什么事情;他们都惊讶地张大了嘴注视着。
4.Mary witnessed the accident.She before, so she quickly bandaged the wound for me.
玛丽目睹了这个事故。她以前学过急救,所以迅速用绷带帮我包扎伤口。
5.Her timely help has my later recovery.
她及时的帮助对我后期的康复起到了积极作用。
6.This incident strengthened my determination in the future.
这一事件使我坚定了将来成为医生的决心。
●Ⅱ 语法填空
[2024·福建永春第一中学高一月考]
Humans successfully reached the top of the world, Mount Qomolangma, for the first time in 1953. On May 23, 70 years later, a Chinese expedition team reached its peak and 1. (carry) out scientific research, which celebrated the historical adventure. The journey to the top is 2. (extreme) dangerous and takes both bravery and good physical health 3. (complete). Climbers fight against the harsh (恶劣的) environment and go beyond 4. (they) limits.
The main reason why scientists fearlessly continue this climb to the top can be the rich information that Mt Qomolangma provides. Due to its biodiversity, it can 5. (see) as a “micro Earth”. The drop in altitude (海拔) from the top is huge, forming 6. wide range of climates and creating its own ecosystem. Also, the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau (青藏高原), 7. Mt Qomolangma is located, is an important ecological resource.
“The expedition has transformed from ‘I want to conquer you’ to ‘I want to understand you’,” said Yao Tandong, team 8. (lead) of the expedition. The scientists’ work was beyond 9. (collect) samples. Advanced equipment like drones (无人机) and 3D laser scanning was used to better monitor pollutants and changes in glaciers. With those new technologies, the expedition resulted 10. important international influence.
●Ⅲ 写作
第一节 应用文写作
你在暑假期间参加了某旅行社组织的“荒野求生”(Man vs Wild)活动。请写一篇短文, 记录此次经历并向学校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1.活动过程;
2.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Last summer holiday, I took part in the Man vs Wild organized by China International Travel Service.
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, my friends and I went on a camping trip in the mountains. We were all excited about the adventure ahead, but little did we know what was in store for us.
We arrived at the campsite in the late afternoon. The sun was setting, and the sky was painted with hues of orange and pink. We set up our tents and started a fire to cook our dinner. As we sat around the fire, we planned our activities for the next day. We decided to go on a hike to see the nearby waterfall.
The next morning, we woke up early and set out on our hike. The trail was steep and narrow, but the scenery was breathtaking. We passed through the forests and crossed the streams. As we got higher, the air became colder and thinner. We had to stop frequently to catch our breath.
After a few hours of hiking, we finally reached the waterfall. It was amazing. The water fell down from a great height, and the mist created a rainbow. We sat down to catch our breath and take in the beauty of the waterfall.
But our adventure was far from over. As we were about to leave, we noticed dark clouds gathering overhead. It started raining heavily, and we realized that we had not brought any rain gear. We were completely soaked(湿透)and trembling in the cold. We decided to take shelter in a nearby cave until the rain stopped.
The cave was dark and damp, but it gave us a brief relief from the rain. We sat there for what seemed like hours, waiting for the rain to stop. But it only got worse. The thunder was so loud that it echoed through the cave, and the lightning was so bright that it lit up the cave like daylight.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
We were scared and worried.
Paragraph 2:
That night, as we sat around the fire, we reflected on our adventure.
(共40张PPT)
Period Four
Writing
单元主题表达
练习册
描写自己的一次潜水或冒险经历
【写作点拨】
对自己的潜水或冒险经历的描写属于记叙文的一种, 所以在写作
中需要写明这次经历的时间、地点、人物、自己所做的事情、看到
了什么以及有什么样的感受等。
【典题示例】
假定你是李华, 英语课上老师要求你们根据提示, 以“My first
experience of diving”为题写一篇80词左右的文章, 描述第一次潜水
的经历。
提示:1.时间、地点;
2.所见和所感。
【构思与布局】
【主题词汇】
1._________________ 第一次
2._____________ 浩瀚的海洋
3.________ 起初,一开始
4.__________ n.教练,教师
5.____________ 别着急,别慌,放轻松
6.__________ adv.逐渐地
7._______________ 适应
8.________________ 突然
for the first time
the vast sea
at first
instructor
take it easy
gradually
adjust/adapt to
all of a sudden
9.____________ 转过身
10._____________________ 惊讶地发现
11._________ adj.无害的,无恶意的
12.________ adj.感到宽慰的,放心的
13.__________ 伸出手
14.________________________ 一次令人印象深刻的体验
15.___________ 在……方面成功
turn around
be astonished to find
harmless
relieved
reach out
an impressive experience
succeed in
【高级句式】
1.我永远不会忘记我5月4日在青岛第一次去潜水的那一天。
I will never forget the day __________________________________
____ on May 4th, in Qingdao.
when I went to dive for the first time
2.面对浩瀚的大海, 我一开始有点害怕。
___________________, I was a bit scared at first.
Facing the vast sea
3.逐渐地, 我适应了在黑暗的海里游泳。
Gradually, I _____________________________ in the dark sea.
adjusted/adapted to swimming
4.一转身, 我惊讶地发现了一些灰色的海豹。
_______________, I was astonished to find some grey seals.
Turning around
5.我放心了, 甚至伸出手去触摸其中一只海豹。
I _____________ and even reached out to touch one of them.
was relieved
6.我无法相信我成功地潜了水, 还和海豹一起游了10分钟。
I couldn't believe I ____________________ and ________________
_______________________.
succeeded in diving
that I swam with seals for 10 minutes
【连句成文】
One possible version:
My first experience of diving
I will never forget the day when I went to dive for the
first time on May 4th, in Qingdao.
Facing the vast sea, I was a bit scared at first. But my
instructor told me to take it easy and just follow him. Gradually,
I adjusted to swimming in the dark sea. All of a sudden,
something big appeared on my right. Turning around,
I was astonished to find some grey seals. I got scared but the instructor told me they were harmless. I was relieved and even reached out to touch one of them. We also saw some schools of unusual fish.
What an impressive experience I had! I couldn't believe I
succeeded in diving and that I swam with seals for 10
minutes.
【活学活用】
假定你是李华，上周你参加了一家冒险远足营地 (Adventure
Hiking) 组织的一次冒险远足旅行，请你写一篇日记描述这次活动并
谈谈自己的感受。主要内容应包括：
1.活动的时间和人员；
2.活动过程；
3.你的感受。
注意：词数80个左右。
参考词汇：乘竹筏漂流 white-water rafting
_________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Sunday, October 8th Fine
I just had an amazing adventure hiking trip with 20
students held by Adventure Hiking last week.
First, we hiked through a huge desert to test our strength
and endurance. It was tough, but we felt it rewarding. Then, we
went white-water rafting, which was so thrilling! We paddled
through rapids and laughed together. After that, we climbed a
3,000-metre mountain and saw wild animals like eagles and
mountain goats. Exhausted as we were, it's worthwhile to see
the breathtaking view from the top of the mountain.
It is really an incredible experience that not only allows
me to appreciate nature, but also challenges my limit to
achieve goals. I can't wait to join another adventure trip next
time!
练 习 册
Ⅰ 补全句子
1.One day, I was walking on the street, fascinated by the
vibrant sounds and colours of the local market, _______________
__________ approaching from behind.(形容词短语作状语)
有一天，我走在街上，被当地市场充满活力的声音和色彩迷住了，
没有意识到危险从后面逼近。
unaware of the danger
2._________________________________ and I was seriously
injured. 一个醉酒的司机把我撞倒,我受了重伤。
A drunk driver knocked me down
1
2
3
4
5
6
3.A group of passers-by gathered around us to see
____________________ and stared in surprise _________________
___________. (宾语从句；with复合结构)
一群路人围住我们想看看发生了什么事情;他们都惊讶地张大了嘴注
视着。
what had happened
with their mouths wide open
4.Mary witnessed the accident. She __________________________
before, so she quickly bandaged the wound for me.
玛丽目睹了这个事故。她以前学过急救,所以迅速用绷带帮我包扎伤口。
had learned about first aid
1
2
3
4
5
6
5.Her timely help has ____________________________ my later
recovery.
她及时的帮助对我后期的康复起到了积极作用。
played a positive role/part in
6.This incident strengthened my determination ________________
______ in the future.
这一事件使我坚定了将来成为医生的决心。
to become a doctor
1
2
3
4
5
6
Ⅱ 语法填空
[2024·福建永春第一中学高一月考]
Humans successfully reached the top of the world, Mount
Qomolangma, for the first time in 1953. On May 23, 70 years
later, a Chinese expedition team reached its peak and
1.________ (carry) out scientific research, which celebrated the
historical adventure. The journey to the top is 2.__________
(extreme) dangerous and takes both bravery and good physical health 3._____________ (complete). Climbers fight against the
carried
extremely
to complete
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
harsh (恶劣的) environment and go beyond 4._____(they) limits.
The main reason why scientists fearlessly continue this climb
to the top can be the rich information that Mt Qomolangma
provides. Due to its biodiversity, it can 5._________ (see) as a
“micro Earth”. The drop in altitude (海拔) from the top is huge,
forming 6.___ wide range of climates and creating its own
ecosystem. Also, the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau (青藏高原), 7._______
Mt Qomolangma is located, is an important ecological resource.
their
be seen
a
where
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
“The expedition has transformed from ‘I want to conquer
you’ to ‘I want to understand you’,” said Yao Tandong, team
8._______ (lead) of the expedition. The scientists' work was
beyond 9.__________ (collect) samples. Advanced equipment like
drones (无人机) and 3D laser scanning was used to better
monitor pollutants and changes in glaciers. With those new
technologies, the expedition resulted 10.___ important
international influence.
leader
collecting
in
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
【文章大意】本文是一篇新闻报道，主要报道了中国考察队成功登
上珠穆朗玛峰进行科学研究。
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
1.________
carried
[解析] 考查动词时态。根据and前的reached可知，这里应用一般过
去时。故填carried。
2.__________
extremely
[解析] 考查副词。空处应用副词修饰空后的dangerous。extremely
意为“极其，非常”，作状语。故填extremely。
3._____________
to complete
[解析] 考查非谓语动词。“Sth takes/took…to do…”为固定句型，意
为“做某事需要有……”，空处用不定式作主语the journey的补语。
故填to complete。
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
4.______
their
[解析] 考查代词。空处应用形容词性物主代词作定语。故填their。
5._________
be seen
[解析] 考查动词语态。see…as…意为“将……看作……”。根据句意可
知，it和see之间为被动关系，应用被动语态。空前有can，be动词应
用原形。故填be seen。
6.___
a
[解析] 考查冠词。a wide range of…意为“各种各样的……，广泛
的……”。故填a。
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
7._______
where
[解析] 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，空处引导非限制性定语
从句，先行词为the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau，从句中缺少地点状语，
应用关系副词where。故填where。
8._______
leader
[解析] 考查名词。team…of the expedition是Yao Tandong的同位语，
表示身份，应用名词单数。leader意为“领导者”，符合语境。故填
leader。
9.__________
collecting
[解析] 考查非谓语动词。空前有介词beyond，这里应用动名词作宾
语。故填collecting。
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
10.___
in
[解析] 考查介词。根据空前的resulted可知，这里应用介词in，result
in意为“导致，引起，造成”，符合语境。故填in。
1
2
3
4
5
6
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Ⅲ 写作
第一节 应用文写作
你在暑假期间参加了某旅行社组织的“荒野求生”(Man vs Wild)
活动。请写一篇短文, 记录此次经历并向学校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1.活动过程;
2.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Last summer holiday, I took part in the Man vs Wild
organized by China International Travel Service.
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Last summer holiday, I took part in the Man vs Wild organized by China International Travel Service.
During the activity, I, together with a boy from Beijing, was
in the same group. It went well in the beginning. However, on
the third day, we ran out of our food, which made us worried.
To go through the hunger, we had to look for anything that
could be eaten along the way. What's worse, we got lost and
couldn't find our way back to the campsite. We had taken our
mobile phones but there was no signal. To save ourselves, we
made a large SOS sign using tree branches. Luckily, we were
rescued by helicopter at last. It was a valuable experience for
me and I have learned a lot of survival skills from it.
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, my friends and I went on a camping trip in
the mountains. We were all excited about the adventure ahead,
but little did we know what was in store for us.
We arrived at the campsite in the late afternoon. The sun
was setting, and the sky was painted with hues of orange and
pink. We set up our tents and started a fire to cook our dinner.
As we sat around the fire, we planned our activities for the next
day. We decided to go on a hike to see the nearby waterfall.
The next morning, we woke up early and set out on our
hike. The trail was steep and narrow, but the scenery was
breathtaking. We passed through the forests and crossed the
streams. As we got higher, the air became colder and thinner.
We had to stop frequently to catch our breath.
After a few hours of hiking, we finally reached the waterfall.
It was amazing. The water fell down from a great height, and
the mist created a rainbow. We sat down to catch our breath
and take in the beauty of the waterfall.
But our adventure was far from over. As we were about to
leave, we noticed dark clouds gathering overhead. It started
raining heavily, and we realized that we had not brought any
rain gear. We were completely soaked(湿透)and trembling in the
cold. We decided to take shelter in a nearby cave until the rain
stopped.
The cave was dark and damp, but it gave us a brief relief
from the rain. We sat there for what seemed like hours, waiting
for the rain to stop. But it only got worse. The thunder was so
loud that it echoed through the cave, and the lightning was so
bright that it lit up the cave like daylight.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1:
We were scared and worried.__________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
That night, as we sat around the fire, we reflected on our
adventure.____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
We were scared and worried. We had no way of contacting
anyone, and we had no idea how long the storm would last.
We decided to wait it out and hoped for the best. Finally, after
what seemed like an eternity, the rain stopped. The sun came
out, and we could see the blue sky. We quickly packed up our
things and started our way back. The road was slippery and
muddy, but we made it back to our campsite safely.
That night, as we sat around the fire, we reflected on our
adventure. We realized that we had been through a lot, but we
had also learned a valuable lesson. We had learned to be
prepared for anything and to always expect the unexpected. Our
camping trip turned out to be an unforgettable adventure. We
had hiked to see a magnificent waterfall, taken shelter in a cave
during a thunderstorm, and made it back to our campsite safely.
We had faced our fears, which made us stronger and wiser. It
was an experience that we will never forget.
【思路点拨】本文讲述了作者和朋友们去山里野营，到达营地后计
划第二天的活动，决定第二天去看附近的瀑布，最后作者他们欣赏
到了美丽的瀑布，在他们要离开的时候，他们遇到了大雨，而且情
况越来越糟糕。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们既害怕又担心。”可知，第一段可描写作者
与朋友们害怕担心的原因，结合第二段提示的内容可知，该部分要
提及作者与朋友们最后到达营地，所以要描写天气转好，作者他们
安全返回营地。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我们围坐在炉火旁，回想着我们的
冒险经历。”可知，第二段可描写作者在这次经历中学到了什么。
2.续写线索：担心害怕—等待时机—回到营地—回忆经历—感悟
