应用文之申请信
【题型分析】
申请信种类较多,如求职申请、加人某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。
【写作方法】---- 三段框架范式
【逐句写作】
(2023年天津卷) 假设你是李华,作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫Chinese Workshop的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。
请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动,阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。
注意:
词数不少于 100 ;
可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
【常用句式】
模板:I am Li Hua, _____________(同位语). (非谓语动词) Knowing that/Learning that/Getting the news that/ Having learned that ____________, I am writing _____________________.
同位语(举例):
① I am Li Hua, a student coming from Grade 3. 一名三年级的学生
② I am Li Hua, a senior student in our school. 一名高中生
③ I am Li Hua, a high school graduate. 一名高中毕业生
④ I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. 一名来自中国的交换生
⑤ I am Li Hua, president of the student union in _______High School. _____高中的学生会主席
⑥ I am Li Hua, currently taking courses in......High School. 目前在______高中学习
非谓语动词(举例):
① Learning/Knowing that you are looking for....., I am writing to apply for the job/position.
得知你们正在寻找……,所以我写信来申请这份工作。
② I am writing to recommend myself as a candidate for ......
我写这封信是为了推荐我自己成为……的候选人。
③ In reply to/ With reference to/ In answer to your advertisement in......, I am writing to show my keen interest in the post of …
作为对贵公司在…上广告的答复,我写信是想表达我对…职位的浓厚兴趣。
④ Knowing that your company offers several summer part time jobs, I am writing to apply for one of them. 得知贵公司提供几个暑期兼职工作,我写信申请其中一个。
⑤ I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition, so I'm writing to apply for the position as a volunteer. 我想为展览做一些志愿工作,所以写信申请志愿者的职位。
⑥ Getting the news that you will select five excellent students as exchange students to study abroad, I’m writing to apply to be one of them.
得知贵校将选择五名优秀学生作为交换生出国留学,我写信申请成为其中一员。
⑦ I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain an opportunity to be the one of the volunteers. 我写这封信是希望我能有机会成为其中的一名志愿者。
e.g. 我是李华,一名来自中国的留学生。得知你们正在寻找会教授中国美食的人,我写信来申请这个位置。
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① I believe the following advantages will make me stand out among the numerous applicants.
我相信以下优点将使我在众多申请者中脱颖而出。
② The reasons why I apply for the position are as follows. 我申请本职位的理由如下。
技能/语言优势
① I am expert at ......, enabling me to be equal to being a good ......
我非常擅长……,这使我能够成为一名优秀的……
② Dedicated to / Devoted to learning...…for years, I have a good command/knowledge of...... (and I am familiar with......), which makes me qualified for the job.
致力于学习……多年,我的……水平很好(并且我很熟悉......),这使我能够胜任这份工作。
③ I have a good knowledge of English, enabling me to communicate with others well.
我精通英语,这使我能够很好地与他人交流。
④ I am confident that my professional knowledge in......has prepared me to handle the job.
我相信我对……的专业知识让我做好了处理这项工作的准备。
e.g. 从小我就对剪纸都非常感兴趣,我的剪纸水平很高,这使我能够胜任这份工作。
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经验优势
I have worked as......before, enabling me to know what to expect and how to deal with/handle the possible/ potential problems.
我之前从事过……,这让我知道我会面对什么,以及如何处理可能会发生的问题。
性格优势
① (Being) … and … , not only can I …, but (I can) also …
我是……的、……的,所以我不仅能……, 而且……
② I am … and … , having a strong ability to get along well with people.
我既……又……,可以很好地与他人相处。
e.g. 我乐于助人、富有耐心、考虑周到,可以很好地与他人相处。
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我活泼、随和且独立,所以我不仅能对工作认真负责, 而且能和他人很好地沟通。
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第一:Initially,... First of all,... To begin with,... At first,...
First and foremost,... What should be mentioned first is that…
第二:In addition, Besides, What’s more, Furthermore, Moreover,
最后:Finally Eventually Meanwhile Last but not least…
(可写可不写)
① (定语从句) It will provide me with a platform where I can ….
它将为我提供一个可以……的平台。
② (定语从句) As for me, participating in such an......event/activity is a perfect way to have a deeper insight into....., in which way I can broaden my horizons.
对我来说,参加这样一个……活动是深入了解……的完美方式,这样我可以开阔我的视野。
e.g. 对我来说,参加这样一个文化交流活动是传播中华传统文化的完美方式,这样我可以增强我的实践和交际能力。
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① I promise that I will try my best / spare no effort to live up to your expectation.
我保证我会竭尽全力,并达到您的期望。
② Given the precious chance, I hold the firm belief that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
如果能够得到这个宝贵的机会,我坚信我可以完美地达到您的期望。
③ Should I be chosen/ Were I chosen, I promise that I will offer my best service to whoever takes part in the activity. 如果我被选中,我保证我将为参加活动的人提供最好的服务。
④ Hopefully, my application will meet with approval. 希望我的申请能够通过。
⑤ I am convinced that I am suitable for this job/position/occupation. 我相信我很适合做这份工作。
⑥ I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复,我将不胜感激。
⑦ I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration and give me the chance to win the scholarship. 如果你能好好考虑一下,给我一个机会赢得奖学金,我将不胜感激.
⑧ I shall be much thankful if I am offered a precious opportunity for an interview.
如果能给我一次宝贵的面试机会,我将不胜感激.
e.g. 如果我被选中,我保证我将为参加活动的人提供最好的服务。希望我的申请能够通过。
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【素材积累】
an exchange student 交换生/留学生
during the summer vacation 在暑假期间
Knowing that ... 得知......
an exhibition of Chinese painting 一个中国画的展览
art gallery 美术馆
next month 下个月
the chance to do sth. 做某事的机会
a volunteer 一名志愿者
have a good command of 熟练掌握......;精通......
speak English very fluently 非常流利地说英语
have a deeper insight into … 加深对……的了解
broaden/ widen my horizons 开拓视野
strengthen friendship among students 加强学生之间的友谊
spread Chinese culture 传播中华文化
create a joyous atmosphere 创造愉快的氛围
open a window to traditional Chinese culture 打开一扇通向中国传统文化的窗户
stimulate Chinese and English culture communication 促进中英文文化交流
improve my overall/ practical /communication/ language ability 提高整体/实践/沟通/语言能力
appreciate the vastness and profoundness of Chinese art 欣赏中国艺术的博大精深
strengthen mutual understanding and respect 加强相互理解和尊重
enhance cross-cultural understanding 增进跨文化理解
feast one’s eyes on 让他们大饱眼福
appreciate the treasure of traditional art 欣赏传统艺术的宝藏
be fascinated by/ be enthusiastic about/ be passionate about 热衷于
have a desire to do sth. 有做某事的愿望
be thrilled to do sth. 很高兴做某事
apply for 申请
hold the strong belief that 坚信
with the intention of 目的是
helpful, patient and considerate 乐于助人、耐心和体贴
work with a strong sense of responsibility 具有强烈的责任心
have previous experience in 有相关经验
solve problems independently 独立解决问题
handle/deal with emergencies independently 独立处理突发事件
optimistic and warmhearted 乐观热情
be particularly skilled in 特别擅长
get along well with 和睦相处
have/ possess a good command of 具有/拥有良好的掌握能力
be elected as 被选为
lend a helping hand 伸出援助之手
participate in 参与
live up to one’s expectations 不负所望
surpass your expectation 超越您的期望
【写作模板】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in_______________(报纸/网站名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the right personality for a __________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________(电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
*** 真题精讲 ***
【2019高考英语全国I卷】假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势;3. 能做的事情。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Allen,
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【参考答案】
Dear Allen,
(自我介绍) I am Li Hua, a student from China, who is studying in London during the summer holiday. (写信背景+目的) Knowing an exhibition of Chinese painting will be held at the gallery next month, I am writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages. (优势1) First of all, I speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. (优势2) Second, as a Chinese painting lover, I know a lot about this art form. (表明决心) If accepted, I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors, which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer. Please give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】试题要求考生给中国画展览的组织者写一封申请信,申请做一名志愿者。本篇书面表达可用三段写作:第一段是导语段,包括自我介绍、写信背景和写信目的;第二段是主体段,主要陈述自己具备的优势和自己能做的事情;最后一段是结尾段,表示希望申请被批准。
Dear Allen,
(自我介绍) I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in London now. (写信背景+目的) Learning/Knowing that/Getting the news that volunteers are needed for Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, I’m writing to apply for the position as a volunteer.
(过渡句----可写可不写)The reasons why I apply for the position are as follows. (优势1----语言)Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and Chinese painting, enabling me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers and introduce the art form better. (优势2----经验)Moreover, I’ve participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with related experience. (优势3----性格)Finally, being lively, easygoing and considerate, not only can I work with a strong sense of responsibility, but also getting along well with others.
(表明决心)If accepted, I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently. I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours Sincerely,
Li hua
【浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高一上学期10月月考】
假如你是李华,你校的英语阅读社团(English Reading Club)正在招募新成员,你非常渴望加入,请你用英语写一封申请信,内容包括:
自我介绍;2. 喜欢阅读的书籍类型;3、加入英语阅读社团的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Learning that the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.(自我介绍+写信目的)
(喜欢阅读的书籍类型) As an outgoing and sociable boy, I am a reading enthusiast. I read a wealth of books, among which western literary works are my favorite. The fascinated classics give me a deep insight into foreign history and culture, broaden my horizons, and bring me extraordinary enjoyment and endless thinking as well. (申请原因)The English Reading Club, therefore, becomes what I’m eager to join. For one thing, challenging to read books in the original will definitely improve my English level. For another, I can make more like-minded friends.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your
early reply.
Li Hua
【广东省揭阳市揭东区2023-2024学年高三上学期期中考试】
假设你是李华。你校的新外教Mr. Johnson刚到校就职。想找一名学生助手协助他在中国的工作与生活。据此,请你写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 你的个人优势;3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am Li Hua, a student of Class 1, Senior 3. Learning that you need a student to help you with your work and life in China, I am writing to apply to be your assistant.(自我介绍+写信目的)
(个人优势) In contrast to other students, I have clear significant advantages. On one hand, my proficiency in English makes it easier for me to communicate with you. On the other hand, it has brought me a wealth of experience to get myself involved in various English speech competitions and voluntary work for receiving foreign guests in our school. Equally important is that I am no stranger to the transportation here, so that I can take you to have a good view of the local cultural landscape and taste the specialty food on weekends.
I would appreciate it if you could give priority to my application. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【2024届高三年级三模适应性检测】
假设你是李华,听闻《中国日报》(China Daily)为了宣传中国传统文化,正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点,你很想参加本次宣传活动,请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 自荐理由;3. 申请参与。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a passionate advocate for Chinese traditional culture. Learning that you are recruiting volunteers to introduce China's renowned historical and cultural scenic spots to the world, I am eager to apply for the position.
For one thing, my proficiency in English makes it easier for me to communicate with foreigners and share Chinese stories with them to make China voice better heard. For another, I always serve as the volunteer in the school exchange program, and take the exchange students to visit the attractions with the weight of history, which has gained me a wealth of experience. I am highly confident that I am the very person you are seeking after to promote Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you could give priority to my application. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua