【单元考点培优】Unit 1 Could you please clean your room？专题14 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版
（五四学制）Unit 1 Could you please clean your room？
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．目前中学生学习任务重，压力大，而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率。请以“My Spare Time”为题，写一篇作文谈谈你的业余生活，如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等。（80个词左右）
My Spare Time
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2．Cathy的妈妈觉得做家务能教会Cathy如何照顾自己，所以她让Cathy做家务，但是Cathy很不开心，她觉得做家务很浪费时间，而且没有足够的时间做自己喜欢做的事情。于是她决定给妈妈写一封邮件告诉妈妈她的想法。词数:80词左右。邮件开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mom,
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Yours，
Cathy
3．学生做家务不仅可以培养劳动意识，而且有利于掌握一些生活技能。假设学校正在开展“珍爱亲情，我爱做家务”的征文活动，请你针对该话题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范。
2.词数100左右，文意开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.
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4．寒假即将到来，假如你是郑钧，请根据表格提示信息，给你的美国笔友John写一封信，谈谈你寒假生活（至少三个方面）计划及理由，可适当拓展，60词以上。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Winter vacation plans
Studies do more reading, watch more English movies
Exercise basketball, swim
Housework cook, clean the room
Others …
Dear John,
The winter vacation is coming.
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How about your winter vacation plans I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zheng Jun
5．本学期就要结束了，让我们一起来对自己进行一次总结吧！请参考以下提示，盘点你完成的两个计划，并简述你完成的过程及感受。
提示∶
(1) Have you read interesting books
(2) Have you been to somewhere interesting
(3) Have you ever been a volunteer
(4) Have you cleaned your room
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2. 可结合实际情况进行适当发挥。
3. 词数100词左右。
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6．老师想了解你们班全体同学做家务的情况，作为班长，你为此进行了一次调查。请根据下面的调查结果，写一份80词左右的调查报告。
Students Chores Likes or dislikes Reasons Your opinions
19 clean the living room interesting develop our Independence; …
12 make the bed boring
6 wash clothes, fold the clothes relaxing
4 … … …
要求：1. 语句通顺，行文流畅；
2. 必须包含表格中所给内容，可适当发挥。
There are 41 students in our class. Most of us do chores at home.
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7．假如你是张华，你的英国好友Alice想了解你校的“学雷锋月”活动。请根据以下相关信息，选择其中的一项活动，给她回一封邮件并说说你的感受。
I hear that March is the month of “Learning from Lei Feng” in your school.Can you tell me what you did in the month
At the nursing home★ clean up the rooms ★ talk with the old ★ put on a show ★ … In the community★ do some cleaning ★ take care of the kids ★ sort the rubbish ★ …
注意：
1.邮件需包含所选活动的至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
8．在你校“劳动教育月”期间校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动。请结合自身情况用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你周末做的家务和你对做家务的看法及收获。内容要点提示如下：
The things that you often do at home Your opinions (观点) about doing housework and what you have learned (学到的)
◆clean the rooms ◆cook meals ◆wash the dishes ◆take out the rubbish ◆… ◆life skills ◆responsibility (责任) ◆…
注意：
1. 表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息。
3. 词数：不少于80字。
A Helper at Home
I have always been a good helper at home.
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9．近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。
have labor classes (劳动课) learn living skills
take part in after-class activities plant trees, grow vegetables...
do housework clean up rooms, wash clothes...
your suggestions 1...; 2...; ...
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；
2. 80词左右；
3. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit
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10．做家务是家庭成员的义务, 作为家庭一员, 你一定做过许多力所能及的家务。请根据提示写一篇短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历故事。词数 80 左 右, 包括以下要点:
1.你是否喜欢做家务, 你常做哪些家务；
2.重点讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历（包括起因、过程、结果）；
3.你父母对你所做家务的评价及你的收获、感受。
提示词：do the dishes, take out the rubbish, fold your clothes, sweep the floor, make the bed, clean the living room
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11．你校将在英语节期间举办演讲比赛，演讲比赛题目是“A Meaningful Holiday”。你班英语老师要求每位同学写一篇演讲稿。假定下表是你假期参加志愿者活动的记录，请结合表格内容写一篇演讲稿。词数80-100.
VOLUNTEER WORK RECORD
time every Wednesday in July and August
place Red Star Old People’s Home
work clean the public rooms, read newspapers and books to the old people.
feeling …
Ladies and gentleman,
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Thanks for your listening!
12．学期即将结束，Li Lei收到一封来自英国笔友Jerry的e-mail，Jerry想邀请他参加北京五日游的活动，可是Li Lei已制定了自己的寒假计划，不能前往。请根据Li Lei的寒假计划帮他写一封回信。
写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰，包含表格中所有黑体信息，内容可适当发挥；2. 词数约80词，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；3.书写规范，卷面整洁；4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Study Practice English, take guitar lessons...
Sports Exercise more...
Housework Cook meals,clean the room...
Travel Hangzhou, parents, car, seven days
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Hi Jerry,
Thanks a lot for your invitation. I’m sorry I can’t go to Beijing with you. I’m really busy in the coming winter holiday.
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Yours,
Li lei
13．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony来信想了解你的家庭周末生活。现在是星期六晚上七点，你正在电脑上给Tony写一封回信介绍你们一家人现在进行的活动。内容包括：
1.时间；
2.你和家人正在做的事情(至少三项)；
3.你的感受。
注意：1.词数为60左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： watch TV看电视； kitchen厨房； clean the room打扫房间
Dear Tony,
How are you going these days
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．英语报English Learning正在举行以“经历”为主题的征文活动。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，记叙你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历，并谈谈你的感受。
What happened cleaned the rooms put away the things ......
Your feelings ......
注意：
(1)短文必须包括上述内容，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的感受：
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息：
(3)词数：80~100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.
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15．没有劳动就谈不上真正的幸福。幸福来源于劳动，学校教育的重要使命之一就是要使学生理解和领悟到一个人获得的生活和文化的财富是与他参加的劳动有直接联系的。教育部日前印发《义务教育课程方案和课程标准（2022年版）》，从2022年秋季开学起，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程，劳动课程平均每周不少于1课时。
请你根据以上观点，结合表格的内容提示写一篇短文，说一说你平时的劳动情况，谈一谈你对学生养成良好劳动习惯的理解。
劳动的形式 at home do the dishes, clean the living room, wash clothes, …
at school clean your classroom, water plants, …
at community clean up the city parks, visit sick kids, …
劳动的意义 1.improve physical health 2.develop one’s independence …
要求：
1.词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2.请阐述图表中的信息，并根据实际情况作适当拓展。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
I think students should develop good hard-working habits from an early age.Let me tell you something about it.
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16．Tina 度过了忙碌的一天，感到有点累但很开心。假如你是Tina，请给你的好朋友Sally写一封信，告诉她你是如何度过周日的。
提示：上午做作业、打扫屋子；中午因父母不在家，自己做了一大碗西红柿面吃；下午去看了奶奶，并帮奶奶洗了衣服；晚上陪奶奶一起看电视。
要求：1.包括所有内容要点、可适当发挥。
2.词数60词左右，语句连贯（信的开头已给出，但不计入词数）。
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名。
参考词汇：do homework; clean the room; tomato noodles; wash clothes
Dear Sally,
How is it going
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Yours,
Tina
17．假如你是李华，你即将代表学校参加海淀区举办的“Rules Make Our Lives Better”英语演讲大赛。请你谈谈你的生活（学校/家庭……）中有哪些规则，以及规则的重要性。
提示词语：eat in class, be late for, clean the room, help, learn
提示问题： What are the rules in your life (school/family…)
Why are rules important
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to give a speech about rules.
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18．假设你叫鲍伯,下面是你的笔友托比的来信,请你仔细阅读并给托比写一封回信。
要求：1. 针对信中涉及的几个问题,提出合理化建议。 2.词数80左右。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
How time flies！I've been a middle school student now！My teachers and classmates are friendly to me,but I'm not feeling well.
I'm stressed out because I can't understand my English teacher. She speaks too fast. And my mother pushes me so hard. I used to watch TV on school nights, but now I can only study. Also I have to clean my room every day. I feel tired. What should I do？Can you help me？
Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have some problems
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Yours,
Bob
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参考答案及试题解析
1．My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I ’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me to open up my eyes to the outside world. On weekends, I often help my parents with the housework. I sweep the floor,wash the clothes and learn to cook. I enjoy myself in my spare time
【详解】这是一篇命题作文，My Spare Time，目前中学生学习任务重，压力大，而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率。通过分析可知，这篇短文使用一般现在时态，用第一人称，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，首先这篇短文的内容非常完整，有头有尾，要点全面；其次短文结构清晰，层次分明；而且这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合英语的表达规范。作者写作时，还使用了较为丰富的句型，I like basketball and football very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.；I often do some reading in the evening.I think books are our best friends.They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school.
2．例文
Dear Mom，
You think that doing chores could teach me how to look after myself，and you ask me to sweep the floor and do the dishes every day and wash my clothes on weekends. Doing chores may be good for me， but I feel unhappy. It takes most of my free time to do these chores. I don’t have enough time to do what I like. In my opinion， I should do fewer chores. Do you think so
Yours，
Cathy
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时要注意邮件格式。这是Cathy想写信给她妈妈谈谈自己关于做家务的想法。结合材料可知，本文时态是一般现在时。行文时，可先阐述妈妈的想法，然后再表达Cathy的想法。写作时可适当发挥。写作中注意条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，字数要到80词左右。写完之后注意检查，看看有无拼写、语法错误等。
2.例文点评：例文主要从三方面来组织写作：介绍了妈妈的想法；阐述了Cathy对于家务的看法；征求妈妈建议。时态运用恰当，逻辑合理，语篇连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：do chores；look after；ask sb to do；sweep the floor；do the dishes；be good for；have enough time；in my opinion。
句型：that 引导的宾语从句；It takes sb some time to do sth；Do you think so
【点睛】这篇文章语言规范，叙述清楚条理，时态运用规范，还运用了不少好的短语和句型。此类写作要注意书信的格式。另外，在学习中要注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时可适当引用。写作时要注意书写规范，比如大小写以及标点的使用。写完之后进行复查，避免出现拼写、语法等错误。
3．例文
As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.
First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent. After all, I can’t depend on others all my life.
Second, doing housework can help share my parents’work. It can also improve the relationship between my parents and me.
Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.
In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求对学生做家务这一话题，发表自己的看法，讲述学生做家务的一些好处。这是一个话题作文，题目中只给出了写作的话题，而具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行详细地阐述。短文应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。
例文点评：例文写得非常优秀，文章是总分总的结构，层次清晰。第一段点明文章主旨，下面从三个方面叙述了做家务的好处，使用了First, Second和Finally，叙述详细、清晰。最后用一句话作总结。句式结构文章，符合英语的表达需要。语法规范、语言准确。
高分亮点：
短语：As a middle school student；is good for；look after；After all；depend on；all my life；keep my room tidy；have a comfortable place to live and study；In short。
句型：I think doing housework is good for me.；First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent；Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.；In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home
4．例文
Dear John,
The winter vacation is coming. It’s time for everyone to make plans. Let me share mine with you.
First of all, I am going to do more reading during the vacation because I want to get more knowledge from books. You know English is always my favorite, but I am not good at listening, so I plan to watch more English movies. In order to keep healthy, I have decided to keep swimming and playing basketball with my friends. Besides, I want to help my parents do more housework, such as cooking and cleaning the room. They work really hard and take good care of me. What’s more, I will spend time playing with my friends to relax myself.
How about your winter vacation plans I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zheng Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍自己的寒假计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示要介绍自己的计划；
第二步，根据表格内容从学习、锻炼、家务以及其他方面介绍自己的计划；
第三步，书写结语，表示也想知道对方的寒假计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②in order to为了
[高分句型]
①I am going to do more reading during the vacation because I want to get more knowledge from books. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I will spend time playing with my friends to relax myself.(动名词作宾语以及动词不定式作目的状语)
5．One possible version:
How time flies! This is the end of the term.
At the beginning of the year, I made a lot of plans. Some were completed, but some were not completed. For example, I spent some time cleaning the room every day. I have also read a lot of books so far and I learned a lot. I usually go to the community or street to help people in need. But because of the epidemic, I had planned to visit some interesting places, but I didn’t go. Although I didn’t go, I was very happy. Because I think staying at home now is also to make a contribution to epidemic prevention.
I look forward to continuing to work on the unfinished plan in the second half of the year.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括自己制定的计划的情况以及完成情况等
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述这学期即将结束，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己的计划的制定以及完成情况；
第三步，最后是对以后的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
① at the beginning of在……的开始
② for example例如
③ because of因为，由于
[高分句型]
① Although I didn’t go, I was very happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②But because of the epidemic, I had planned to visit some interesting places, but I didn’t go.（but连接的并列句）
6．参考范文：
There are 41 students in our class. Most of us do chores at home. Nineteen students clean their living rooms every day. They think it’s very interesting. Twelve students make their beds after they get up in the morning. They hate doing it. They say it’s boring. Six students enjoy washing clothes and folding clothes. They think they’re relaxing. Only four students don’t do any chores at home. I think it’s bad for them. They should spend some time on chores and learn some useful life skills.
In my opinion, doing chores not only helps to develop our independence but also teaches us how to look after ourselves. The earlier we learn to be independent, the better it is for our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍班级总人数及大多数学生做家务的背景；
第二步，分述不同家务的具体人数及学生态度；
第三步，补充少数不做家务的学生情况，并提出作者的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①do chores 做家务
②life skills 生活技能
③develop independence 培养独立性
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, doing chores not only helps to develop our independence but also teaches us how to look after ourselves.（not only...but also...句型）
②The earlier we learn to be independent, the better it is for our future. （“the+比较级...the+比较级...”句型）
7．Possible version 1:
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities. In March, we visited a nursing home to help the elderly.
As soon as we got there, we started cleaning. We swept the floor, wiped the windows and cleaned up the rooms. Then, we talked with the old people there. We listened to their stories about the past, and they were really happy to share. We even put on a show and sang some old songs for them.
The visit made me understand that helping others can bring so much joy. It is a great way to show respect to Lei Feng and show our love as well.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Alice,
I’m glad you’re interested in our “Learning from Lei Feng” activities. In March, we did a lot of things in the community.
First, we did some cleaning. We picked up the trash in the park and on the streets, making the places tidy and clean. Then, we took care of the kids. We played games with them and helped them with their homework. Also, we taught people how to sort rubbish and told them why it was important.
Doing community service made me feel good. I’ve learned that even small actions can make a difference. It is a wonderful experience of following Lei Feng’s spirit.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；回忆过去的活动时，要写得全面。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和意图。说明去了哪里；
第二步，回顾细节，写出做过的事情；
第三步，总结并表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②put on a show演剧
③as well也，还
[高分句型]
①As soon as we got there, we started cleaning.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
②The visit made me understand that helping others can bring so much joy.（that引导的宾语从句）
8．例文
A Helper at Home
I have always been a good helper at home. As everyone knows, it’s important for teenagers to do some housework. I often help my parents do housework when I am free. I think parents are very tired after a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest. I often help clean the rooms, cook meals, wash the dishes, take out the rubbish, water the flowers and so on.
In my opinion, doing housework is our responsibilities. It can not only develop our life skills, but also it is a good way to develop our independence. Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本题是一篇主题征文，为材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用，可适当发挥，文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息，不少于80字。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点出写作主题。通过自己对在家里作为一个好帮手的态度；
第二步，阐述具体家务。可按时间顺序列举周末所做的具体家务；
第二步，表达看法及收获。从生活技能提升（如做饭锻炼规划能力）、责任感增强（意识到自己是家庭一员应做贡献）、独立性培养（不再过度依赖父母）等方面展开。
[亮点词汇]
①As everyone knows众所周知
②it’s important for sb. to do sth. 对于某人做某事很重要
③have a good rest有一个良好的休息
④take action行动
[高分句型]
①I often help my parents do housework when I am free.（when当……时候，引导时间状语从句；help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事。）
②It can not only develop our life skills, but also it is a good way to develop our independence. （not only...but also不但……而且）
9．例文
A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get a hard-working spirit.
As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in after-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need to try to do some housework at home, like cleaning up rooms, washing clothes. We can also go to the park to clean up and do volunteer activities to protect the environment.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何培养劳动精神，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对最近出台的指导方针的认同；
第二步，从上劳动课、参加课后活动、家务等方面具体介绍如何培养劳动精神；
第三步，书写结语，表达劳动精神教育的必要性。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②do volunteer activities做志愿者活动
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some living skills at school every week. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. (and连接的并列句)
10．例文
Do you like doing housework I like doing housework. I will help my mother do housework when I am free. Because I think parents are very tired after a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest. I often help clean the living room, do the dishes, take out the rubbish and so on.
Last Sunday, my mother was on duty. She must go home late. So I wanted to try to make dinner. I boiled some noodles first. Then I cut up some tomatoes, broke two eggs and put them into the noodles. When my mother came back home, I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomatoes and eggs. My mother was surprised and happy. She praised me. I was happy, too.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章内容是自己做家务的经历，做家务的感受。
2.例文点评：例文采用二段式，第一大段介绍自己喜欢哪些家务；第二大段具体叙述这次经历，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般过去时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be free，do the dishes，take out the rubbish，on duty，cut up。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句。
11．例文
Ladies and gentleman,
I am honored to share my meaningful holiday. During July and August, I volunteered at the Red Star Old People’s Home every Wednesday. My work included cleaning public rooms and reading newspapers and books to the old people. At first, I felt nervous, but their smiles encouraged me. Through conversations, I learned valuable life stories and realized how important it is to care for others. This experience taught me kindness and responsibility. I will continue helping people because true happiness comes from giving.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸分享我有意义的假期。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——参加志愿活动的时间、地方、所做的工作和感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起先
②care for关心
③kindness and responsibility善良和责任
[高分句型]
①I will continue helping people because true happiness comes from giving. (Because引导的原因状语从句)
12．例文：
Hi Jerry,
Thanks a lot for your invitation. I’m sorry I can’t go to Beijing with you. I’m really busy in the coming winter holiday.
In the morning, I’ll practice my English so that I can prepare well for the the next semester. Then I’ll run or play basketball in the park because I’ll exercise more than before.
In the afternoon, I’ll take guitar lessons because my parents want me to do well in music. I’ll help my parents with housework, such as cooking meals, cleaning the room and watering the flowers.
My parents and I are going to Hangzhou by car for seven days. I think we’ll have a good time there.
Yours,
Li lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习、运动、家务以及旅行”等方面具体介绍自己的寒假计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对于寒假的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为某事做准备
②take guitar lessons上吉他课
[高分句型]
①Then I’ll run or play basketball in the park because I’ll exercise more than before.（原因状语从句；副词比较级）
13．范文：
Dear Tony,
How are you going these days It’s seven o’clock on Saturday evening. At this moment, my family are all at home. We are doing different things.
My brother is doing his homework in his room. My sister is watching TV in the living room. My mother is cooking in the kitchen. She is good at cooking. My father is helping her. My grandma is cleaning the room and my grandpa is reading a book. They are having fun. What am I doing Yes! I’m writing to you.
I feel very happy because we are all together. What are you and your family doing now I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要使用“现在进行时”；
③提示：根据提示内容展开描述，注意人物安排和活动细节，语言要自然、亲切。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候+说明时间和写信背景；
第二步：依次描述家人各自正在做的事情；
第三步：表达自己的感受，并提出问题引导对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
① at this moment 此刻
② do homework 写作业
③ be good at 擅长
④ have fun 玩得开心
⑤ look forward to 盼望
[高分句型]
I feel very happy because we are all together.（because 引导原因状语从句）
14．例文
I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. However, I began to help parents with some housework last weekend. Firstly, I cleaned the room. I swept the floor, made my bed and took out the rubbish. Then I put away the things. All the things were in place and the house looked really tidy. More importantly, I even began to learn cooking by surfing the Internet. Although I failed several times, I still managed to cook some delicious dishes.
After doing a day’s housework, I felt kind of tired but happy. I realized that I should be responsible for the housework as a family member and showed love and respect to my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助父母作家务的这次经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文首句，具体介绍都帮助父母做了哪些家务；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①begin to do开始做某事
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③kind of有点
④be responsible for对……负责
[高分句型]
①Although I failed several times, I still managed to cook some delicious dishes. (although引导的让步状语从句)
② I realized that I should be responsible for the housework as a family member and showed love and respect to my parents.(that引导的宾语从句)
15．例文
I think students should develop good hard-working habits from an early age. Let me tell you something about it. Labor is really important for us. Without labor, we can’t get happiness. Without labor, we can’t relax from the hard study. It is said that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools.
As a student, I often clean the classroom and water flowers with my classmates at school. At home, I often do housework, such as washing clothes, doing the dishes and cleaning the living room. At community, I collect the garbage in the park and visit sick kids. I also help to look after the old. These are good life skills for me.
Labor is very meaningful. It not only improves our physical health, but also develops our independence. Labor can help us a lot in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应该注意不要遗漏劳动形式，适当增加细节描写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。突出劳动的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体写出平时的劳动情况；
第三步，书写结语。写出劳动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①labor education 劳动教育
②collect the garbage 捡垃圾
③develop one’s independence 培养某人的独立性
④ in the future 在将来
[高分句型]
①It is said that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools.（“It is said that…”句型）
②At home, I often do housework, such as washing clothes, doing the dishes and cleaning the living room.（“such as + doing”句型）
16．例文：
Dear Sally,
How is it going I had a very busy Sunday. In the morning, I did my homework. After that, I started to clean my room. My parents were not at home. So I cooked tomato noodles for lunch. I had a large bowl. In the afternoon, I went to visit my grandmother. I helped her wash her clothes and watched TV with her at night. I was a little tired but I was happy.
Yours,
Tina
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信，题目要求以Tina的身份写出自己是如何度过周日的，写作时要按照书信的格式写。
2.写作指导：本文应该采用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述自己经历时要叙述完整，条理清晰。做到无标点和语法错误。
17．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to give a speech about rules. Rules are important.
There are many rules in my school. We should wear our school uniform at school and we should go to school on time. We are required to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We can’t eat, drink or sleep in class.
Rules are made to help us. We can have a better learning environment if we follow them. And they help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
Thank you.
【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，作文要求谈谈生活中的一些规则，考生可以从学校和家庭等方面谈，还要介绍规则的重要性。主语可以是第一人称也可以是第三人称，时态时一般现在时。
例文点评：本文分成四段，第一段开头简单介绍，第二段介绍学校的规则，第三段介绍规则的重要性，最后表示感谢。要点齐全，写作中注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
高分亮点：
短语：on time；be required to；a better learning environment；focus on。
句型：固定句型There are many rules in my school.；被动语态Rules are made to help us.；if引导的条件状语从句We can have a better learning environment if we follow them.
18．例文
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have some problems. Problems and worries are normal in life. First,if you can't understand your English teacher, you can communicate with her after class. You are halfway of solving a problem by talking to her. Second,parents often worry about our study and future. Why not talk to your mom and tell her about your feelings？Also, we spend more time studying instead of relaxing. You'd better make a good plan to study well and have fun. What's more,I think doing housework and chores helps us to become more independent and responsible. I hope you can solve your problems and enjoy life.
Yours,
Bob
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，要求学生以鲍伯的身份给笔友托尼回信，并针对其信件内提出的问题给合理建议。所以要先读信，明确以下问题需要在回信中给出建议：托尼学习英语感到有压力，因为老师语速太快，导致他听不懂；妈妈也逼托尼很紧，现在他晚上只能学习，没有休闲时光；托尼现在每天要打扫房间，他感到很累。
例文点评：例文以信件的格式进行，主要用第二人称进行建议与劝慰，时态以一般现在时为主。内容上针对托尼信中的三个问题给出了中肯的建议，并进行了详细描述。文章逻辑清晰，层次分明。
高分亮点：
短语：be sorry to do；communicate with；worry about；instead of；had better do；what’s more。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句；Why not do sth.；省略引导词的宾语从句。
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