【单元考点培优】Unit 2 Great minds 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培沪教牛津版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教牛津版Unit 2 Great minds
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．2024年9月29日在北京人民大会堂隆重举行了“中华人民共和国国家勋章和国家荣誉称号”的颁奖仪式。请根据下列表格的信息写一篇演讲稿，在英语课上向同学们介绍“共和国勋章”四位获得者之一、中国载人航天工程和运载火箭系列的总设计师王永志。
出生 1932年11月，中国东北农村
成长与成功 从小学习刻苦 18岁，听说美国的飞机在朝鲜战场上疯狂轰炸，下定决心…… 清华大学，学习航天飞机设计 被派往莫斯科 (Moscow)，学习火箭导弹设计 一辈子研究导弹和航天技术，获得巨大成就
逝世 2024年6月11日
你的看法 ……
农业的agricultural 朝鲜战场Korean battlefield
轰炸bomb 航天飞机设计Space Shuttle Design 导弹missile
注意：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。
Dear classmates,
let me introduce Wang Yongzhi, one of the four honorary recipients of the Medal of the Republic in China, 2024.
In November 1932, Wang Yongzhi was born in the countryside of Northeast China.
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2．请根据下面的提示，以“Mark Twain”为题，写一篇英文短文。
内容提示：（1）美国著名的作家，写了许多著名的小说；
（2）1835年出生于佛罗里达的乡村，4岁时全家搬到城镇，12岁时父亲去世；
（3）从童年就开始工作，做过不同的工作。他最著名的小说之一是《汤姆·索亚历险记》；
（4）他的写作才能并不是从小就有的，而是来自他个人的经历。
要求：（1）语法正确、逻辑合理；
（2）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可根据提示内容适当发挥。
Mark Twain
Mark Twain was an American writer.
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I enjoy his works very much.
3．假如你是李华，是学校英文周刊的一名记者。为了让同学们了解一些国外著名作家，下周英文周刊将刊登有关国外作家的文章。请你根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍美国著名作家欧·亨利，发表在周刊上。
欧·亨利（1862—1910）是一位著名的美国作家，也是美国现代短篇小说的奠基人。
人生经历：1.三岁丧母，由祖母和姑姑养大； 2.从事过歌手、银行职员、记者等工作。
著名作品：《麦琪的礼物》；《最后一片叶子》 作品特点： 1.短小精悍，易于理解，具有幽默性； 2.结局出人意料； 3.善于描写美国各行各业普通人的生活。 作品评价：美国人生活的百科全书。
要求：1.包含提示信息，可以根据自己对该作家的了解，适当增添内容；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯；
3.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A famous American writer—O. Henry
O. Henry was a well-known American writer and the founder of modern American short stories.
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4．老舍是中国著名的作家。请根据下表提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。介绍一下他的情况。
真名 舒庆春
1899 出生于北京
1913 在北京一所学校学习
1924 去伦敦；教汉语
1931 结婚（有四个孩子）
1957 发表《茶馆》
1966 去世
评价 被称为“人民艺术家”；是二十世纪最伟大的中国作家之一
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5．近些年我国的航天技术取得了长足进展，我们感到无比自豪。你班这周英语班会的主题是“向航天英雄学习”。假设神舟十九号的航天员王浩泽是你的偶像，请你以“An astronaut hero—Wang Haoze”为题，根据下面关于王浩泽的提示内容和写作要求用英语写一篇短文介绍她，并谈谈你如何向她学习。
个人信息 出生年月：1990年3月 出生地：河北栾平 爱好：体育运动，她积极参加体育比赛，并获得奖励
性格 对自己要求严格；努力；永不放弃
写作要求：
1. 文中应包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
An astronaut hero—Wang Haoze
I love science and technology, especially space science. Wang Haoze is an astronaut hero. She is my idol.
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6．假如你们学校校报组织题为My role model的英语征文活动，请根据征文要求，写一篇短文投稿。
My role modelIn your life, there must be a role model who influences you deeply. They may be great persons like a scientist, an actor or an athlete. They may also be common people around you such as your parent, your teacher or your classmate. Please write a passage to introduce him or her and your passage should include these following points: 1. Who is your role model Please introduce his/her general information. 2. Why is he/she your role model Please give at least two reasons. 3. What can you learn from him/her We are looking forward to your passages. We hope more readers can share your role models with us.
role model: 榜样
要求：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My role model
Role models have a great influence on our life.
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7．某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的科学家”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一位科学家，并说明原因。
提示词语：invent, develop, useful, helpful
提示问题：● Who is your favourite scientist
● Why do you like him/her
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8．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如： Spud Webb、Tan Dun、Audrey Hepburn、 Jackie Chan等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动， 请结合你的经历，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点：
1. Who is your role model
2. What meaningful things he/ she did influence you most
3. What can you learn from him/ her
注意：
1. 词数不少于100字， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点， 全文连贯通顺， 可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is
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9．自古以来，人们对英雄的定义没有统一的标准。英雄可以是科学家、体育健将，也可以是医生或者见义勇为者。假如你班将要开展一次以“The hero in my heart”为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。
要点：
(1) 你心中的英雄是谁
(2) 你为什么认为他/她是你心中的英雄
(3) 你从他/她那里学到了什么
要求：
(1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名：
(2) 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
10． 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇关于我国著名女科学家屠呦呦的短文并谈谈你的感受。
(1) 屠呦呦1930年出生在宁波，她因发现青蒿素而闻名；
(2) 青蒿素能有效对抗疟疾——种很严重的疾病；
(3) 历经190次失败后，她在中草药中发现了青蒿素，这种药已拯救了数百万人的生命；
(4) 2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖；
(5) 你认为……
参考词汇：草药herb 青蒿素qinghaosu 疟疾malaria 有效地effectively 对抗fight 诺贝尔生理学或医学奖Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
要求：
(1) 词数：80~100个。
(2) 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China.
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11．请根据提示以“Madam Curie” 为题，写一篇80～100词的英语短文。
内容：
1．居里夫人 (1867～1934) 是世界闻名的科学家；
2．她从小就酷爱读书，16岁中学毕业，24岁赴法国巴黎 (Paris) 的大学学习。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力；
3．她一生致力于科学研究，于1903年、1911年分别获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖 (Nobel Prize of Physics/Chemistry)；
4．她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。
提示：一生致力于做某事 devote oneself to doing 科学研究 science research
Madam Curie
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12．请根据下列提示以“Ma Long”为题写一篇介绍著名乒乓球运动员马龙的短文，80词左右。
出生地 辽宁省鞍山市
身高 1.75米
受训经历 1. 1993年，年仅5岁的马龙开始学习打乒乓球； 2. 1999年，师从第34届世界乒乓球锦标赛 (The 34th Table Tennis Championships) 冠军王俊； 3. 2003年，进入国家队。
成绩 1. 2019年4月，在世界乒乓球赛男单比赛 (World Table tennis Men’s Single Competition) 中夺冠，实现三连冠； 2. 2020年10月，在全国乒乓球锦标赛 (China Table Tennis Championships) 获得双打金牌 (doubles gold medal)； 3. 2021年7月，在东京奥运会乒乓球男子单打决赛 (finals) 夺得金牌。
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13．在如今的和平年代，我们依旧崇尚英雄，英雄的定义也变得更加宽泛。那么，谁是你心中的英雄呢？请以“The Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇短文，描述一个你心目中的英雄人物。
提示：
（1）Who do you think is the hero in your heart
（2）Why do you think so
（3）What can you learn from him/her
要求：
（1）内容须涵盖所有要点；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
（4）80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） 。
The Hero in My Heart
Most people see a hero as someone they look up to. If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be
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14．根据提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你心目中的英雄——袁隆平。
内容包括：袁隆平的基本信息，主要成就以及他是你心目中英雄的原因。不少于80词。
要点：
1.基本信息：be born in 1930, graduated from the Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, died in 2021 (3 points)
2. 被誉为“杂交水稻之父 (the Father of Hybrid Rice)” (1 point)
3. 被授予“共和国勋章”。(1 point)
4. 培育出更好的水稻，帮助人们解决饥荒问题。(2 points)
5. 适当发挥。(2 points)
注意：书写工整。
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15．假定你是李华，你校英语节将组织以“我最喜爱的音乐大师”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表信息写一篇短文参加评选，并提出你的推荐理由。
人物 阿炳
生平 ●生活贫苦：住在街上、身患疾病 ●创作丰富：《二泉映月》等600多首乐曲 ●……
理由 …… (至少两点)
注意：(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
(2)词数：100左右；
(3)短文首句已提供，不计入总词数。
短文首句：Abing is honored as one of the leading folk musicians in China.
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16． 心中有榜样，行动有力量。学校英语俱乐部正在组织题为 “My favourite Chinese film star”的征文比赛，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
1.Who is your favourite Chinese film star 2.Why do you like him/her best 3.What can you learn from him/her
要求：
（1）词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite Chinese film star
I am glad to share about my favourite Chinese film star.
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17．假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍为我国赢得首枚奥运网球单打金牌的运动员郑钦文。
简介 郑钦文出生于2002年10月8日，湖北人。
主要经历 1. 幼年时，郑钦文对网球兴趣浓厚。 2. 2010年，她开始接受专业训练，提升技术。 3. 2021年，在国际赛事中取得了巨大成就。 4. 2024年，为中国赢得了第一块奥运会网球单打金牌。
启发与感悟 从她的故事中你得到的启发和感悟，至少两点。
注意：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3.词数80-100之间(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词：国际赛事：international tournament; 奥运网球单打：Olympic tennis singles
Have you heard about Zheng Qinwen Below is some detailed information about her.
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18．榜样(role model) 不仅是一面镜子，还是一面旗帜。好的榜样激发我们对人生道路 和人生理想的思考，给予我们自我完善的力量。假设你是李华，你校英文俱乐部举办题 为“A Role Model in My Life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示写一篇演讲稿，向大家 介绍你心中的榜样。
内容提示：
1. Who is your role model
2. Why is he/she your role model
3. How does your role model influence you in your daily life
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2. 词数80个左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
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19．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。
(1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。
(2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。
(3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。
(4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。
(5)你认为……
要求：
(1)词数：80~100。
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：县 county 辍学 drop out of school 山区 mountain areas 华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School
My hero
It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel.
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Thank you for listening!
20．当代生活的发展与进步离不开科学家的付出与奉献。假如你们的校报正在征稿，主题为“伟大的科学家”，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍著名科学家居里夫人，并谈谈你对她的评价。
人物 Madame Curie
职业 科学家
简历 1867 年11月7日出生于波兰。 她自小对学习表现出浓厚的兴趣，并且刻苦勤奋，以优异成绩从中学毕业。 因当时波兰的女性不允许上大学，居里夫人想方设法去巴黎求学深造。 虽然生活艰苦，但她一直坚持进行科学研究。
主要成就 发现了放射性元素镭； 获得了两次诺贝尔奖。
你的评价 ……
参考词汇：Poland波兰，graduate from从……毕业，the radioactive element radium放射性元素镭，Nobel Prize诺贝尔奖
要求：
1. 80 词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
There are lots of great people in history. Today I want to introduce
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear classmates,
Let me introduce Wang Yongzhi, one of the four honorary recipients of the Medal of the Republic in China, 2024.
In November 1932, Wang Yongzhi was born in the countryside of Northeast China. In spite of poor agricultural conditions, he studied hard. At the age of 18, shocked by US bombs on the Korean battlefield, he vowed to strengthen China through aerospace. He studied Space Shuttle Design at Tsinghua University and later mastered missile technology in Moscow. Devoting his life to rockets and space, he led China’s manned space program to global success. Though he passed away on June 11, 2024, his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. Let’s honor his legacy!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿写作；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“看法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明要为大家介绍王永志；
第二步，具体介绍王永志的生平贡献和伟大精神；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①In spite of尽管
②strengthen China使中国强大
③devote...to专心于
④lead...to...带领...到...
[高分句型]
①Though he passed away on June 11, 2024, his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. (though引导让步状语从句)
②his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. (that引导宾语从句)
2．One possible version
Mark Twain
Mark Twain was an American writer. He wrote many famous novels.
Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old. At the age of 12, his father died. He began working from his childhood and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his talent for writing from an early age. His writing ability came from his personal experiences.
I enjoy his works very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：题目所给提示切勿遗漏，可适当进行内容拓展，使短文内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍马克·吐温的出生地、出生时间；
第二步，介绍马克·吐温的生命事迹；
第三步，介绍马克·吐温的作品和写作才能。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②move to搬到
③begin doing sth开始做某事
[高分句型]
①He moved to the town with his family when he was four years old.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels.（“one of +形容词最高级+名词复数”句型）
3．例文
A famous American writer—O. Henry
O. Henry was a well-known American writer and the founder of modern American short stories. He had a hard life. His mother died when he was three years old, and he was raised by his grandmother and aunt. He worked as a singer, a bank clerk, a journalist and so on.
O. Henry wrote many famous works, such as The Gift of the Magi and The Last Leaf. His works are short and easy to understand, and they are humorous. The endings of his stories are always unexpected. He was good at describing the lives of ordinary people in different jobs in the United States.
O. Henry’s works are regarded as an encyclopedia of American life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍O. Henry的生平经历、作品特点及文学地位，内容简洁明了，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍核心人物O. Henry的人生经历。
第二步，介绍O. Henry的代表作品、创作风格及文学评价。
[亮点词汇]
①well-known著名的
②such as例如
③be regarded as被视为
[高分句型]
His mother died when he was three years old, and he was raised by his grandmother and aunt.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Lao She is a famous Chinese writer and his real name is Shu Qingchun. He was born in 1899 in Beijing. He studied in a school in Beijing in 1913. In 1924, he went to London and taught Chinese there. He got married in 1931 and had four children. In 1957, he published Teahouse, which became one of his masterpieces. He passed away in 1966. He was named “the People’s Artist” and he’s one of the greatest Chinese writers of the twentieth century.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示，介绍老舍的个人信息及生平；
第二步，介绍人物评价。
[亮点词汇]
①real name真名
②get married结婚
③pass away过世
[高分句型]
①In 1957, he published Teahouse, which became one of his masterpieces. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
5．例文
An astronaut hero—Wang Haoze
I love science and technology, especially space science. Wang Haoze is an astronaut hero. She is my idol.
Wang Haoze is an excellent astronaut who was born in Luanping, Hebei Province in March, 1993. Doing sports is her hobby and she exercises every day. She takes an active part in sports competitions and has won many prizes. Wang Haoze is a very hard-working person. And she is also very strict with herself. She pushed herself hard and got the same training as men. To achieve her astronaut dream, she overcomes many difficulties in training and never gives up.
Wang Haoze has set us a good example. In the future, I’ll work hard for my country like her. And I’ll do exercise every day to have a strong body. What’s more, no matter how hard it is, I’ll stick to my dream!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍王浩泽的相关信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容介绍她的个人信息和性格；
第三步，谈谈你如何向她学习。
[亮点词汇]
①take an active part in积极参加
②be strict with sb.对某人严格
③give up放弃
④set a good example树立一个好榜样
⑤stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①Wang Haoze is an excellent astronaut who was born in Luanping, Hebei Province in March, 1993. (who引导定语从句)
②To achieve her astronaut dream, she overcomes many difficulties in training and never gives up. (动词不定式作目的状语)
6．例文：
My Role Model
Role models have a great influence on our life. Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practicing playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍Spud Webb成为自己榜样的原因；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①keep on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up.（but连接的并列句）
7．One possible version:
I’m glad to introduce my favourite scientist. My favourite scientist is Wang Xuan. He invented the technology for printing Chinese characters. I like him because he tried his best to solve problems and was not afraid to try new technology. When he met difficulties, he never gave up. His invention is used all over the world and is extremely helpful to the Chinese newspaper publishing industry. He changed the world with his ideas and hard work, and I look up to him as my favourite scientist.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，借用“我很高兴向大家介绍我最喜欢的科学家”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步：具体介绍最喜欢的科学家是谁以及喜欢的原因等；
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
②be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事
③gave up 放弃
[高分句型]
①I like him because he tried his best to solve problems and was not afraid to try new technology. (Because引导的原因状语从句)
②When he met difficulties, he never gave up. (When引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文：
My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
9．例文
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—Lang Ping.
Lang Ping is an excellent coach as well as a great volleyball player. In 1984, she, as a player, helped the Chinese women’s volleyball team win their first Olympic gold medal. And under her leadership, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many medals since 2013. Whatever she does, she always tries her best. However, Lang is in poor health because of hard exercise and work. But she is always strong and has never thought of giving up. Her spirit encourages me a lot. That’s why I see her as a hero. From her, I’ve learned how to stick to my dream and make it come true.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是郎平；
第二步，介绍为什么她是我心目中的英雄；
第三步，书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②be in poor health健康状态不好
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①Whatever she does, she always tries her best. (whatever引导的让步状语从句)
②That’s why I see her as a hero. (why引导的表语从句)
10．例文：
Tu Youyou is a well-known woman scientist from China. She was born in Ningbo in 1930. She is famous for discovering qinghaosu. It can effectively fight against malaria, a very serious disease. After 190 failures, she succeeded in discovering it in Chinese herbs. The medicine has saved millions of lives. In 2015, she became the first woman to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. I think we should learn from her.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给要点进行写作，适当补充，注意时态，要求语法正确、条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍屠哟哟的个人经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因……而出名
②succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事
③a great contribution to 对……的巨大贡献
[高分句型]
I think she is one of the greatest scientists in China because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to human health. （宾语从句，原因状语从句）
11．例文
Madam Curie
Madam Curie was a well-known woman scientist all over the world. She was born in 1867 and passed away in 1934. She loved reading books when she was a young child. She finished middle school at the age of 16. When she was 24 years old, she left for Paris to study in Paris University. When she was at school, she lived a simple life and studied very hard. Madam Curie devoted all her life to studying science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903 and for Chemistry in 1911.
I think it’s not easy for a woman to get such success. Madam Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍居里夫人是世界闻名的科学家；
第二步，介绍她从小就酷爱读书。在学校时，她学习刻苦努力；
第三步，介绍她一生致力于科学研究，并获得诺贝尔物理和化学奖；
第四步，介绍她作为一名伟大的女性将永远被人们铭记。
[亮点词汇]
①all over the world全世界
②love doing sth.喜欢做某事。
③at the age of在……岁时
④devote oneself to doing一生致力于做某事
[高分句型]
①She loved reading books when she was a young child. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②When she was at school, she lived a simple life and studied very hard. Madam Curie devoted all her life to studying science. (when引导的时间状语从句)
12．例文
Ma Long
There are many excellent national ping-pong players in China, but I like Ma Long best. Now, I’d like to introduce him to you.
Ma Long is a famous table tennis player, who is from Anshan, Liaoning. He is 1.75 meters tall. Ma started playing table tennis at the age of 5 in 1993. In 1999, he was taught by Wang Jun, the champion of the 34th World Table Tennis Championships. Later, in 2003, he joined the national team.
Ma has won many awards. In April 2019, he won the World Table tennis Men’s Single Competition, achieving three consecutive championships. In 2020, he got the doubles gold medal at the China Table Tennis Championships. And in 2021, he won the gold medal in the men’s singles finals at the Tokyo Olympics.
What a great table tennis player Ma Long is! I am proud of him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：最喜欢马龙，引出话题：介绍马龙；
第二步，依据表格提示，逐一介绍马龙的情况，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of 为……感到自豪
②at the age of 在……岁时
[高分句型]
①Ma Long is a famous table tennis player, who is from Anshan, Liaoning. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②What a great table tennis player Ma Long is! (what引导的感叹句)
13．例文
The Hero in My Heart
Most people see a hero as someone they look up to. If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be Li Lianjie. Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He donated much money to help the children in poor villages. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你心目中的英雄人物以及原因；
第二步，介绍你从对方身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①tries his best to尽他努力去
②promises to do许诺
[高分句型]
He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
14．例文：
Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart.
Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and he studied in Southwest Agriculture College from 1950-1953. After graduation, he devoted himself to agricultural research. During his lifetime, he spent about 60 years doing research on hybrid rice and successfully developed the hybrid rice, which benefited the people over the world. His dream was to cultivate better rice and solve people’s hunger problems. For his achievement, he was called “the Father of Hybrid Rice”. In 2019, he was also awarded the Order of the Republic. He passed away in 2021 due to illness.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a famous scientist who is worthy of the praise of the whole world. He will live in our hearts forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：材料所要求内容不得遗漏，写作过程注意时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题——袁隆平是自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，详细介绍袁隆平的基本信息和主要成就；
第三步，表达个人观点，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①devote to致力于
②pass away去世；逝世
③due to由于
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and he studied in Southwest Agriculture College from 1950-1953. （并列复合句）
②In my opinion, Yuan Longping is a famous scientist who is worthy of the praise of the whole world. （定语从句）
15．Possible version 1：
Abing is bonored as one of the leading musicians in China. When he was young, his father taught him to play many musical instruments. Unluckily, his life grew worse after the death of his father. What’s worse, he developed a serious illness and became blind. He had to make a living by playing music on the streets. Although he was poor, he stuck to his music dream and created over 600 pieces of music including Moon Reflected on Second Spring.
Personally speaking, he is so excellent that he has a great influence on the later erbu masters. Besides, some of his works are still popular and have become treasures in the music field.
(100 words)
Possible version 2:
Abing is honored as one of the leading folk musicians in China. Born into a poor family, Abing was still inspired by his father to learn music. However, hit by reality, he even lived on the street, and played music to make a living. In spite of being blind, he still stuck to his music dream to create more than 600 pieces of music, one of which-Erguan Yingyue can recall people’s deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
His achievements in music field have been the greatest treasure in China. In addition, what touches people most is that he was physically disabled but mentally strong.
(97 words)
【解析】以第一篇为例
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇人物传记；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：围绕阿炳的生平经历，包括家庭背景、遭遇困境、街头卖艺以及音乐成就等方面展开，展现了阿炳在音乐领域的重要地位和深远影响。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇介绍阿炳在中国音乐界的地位，为下文叙述其生平做铺垫；
第二步，按照时间顺序讲述阿炳的经历，先提及他年少时父亲教他多种乐器，接着描述父亲去世后他生活变糟，又身患重病致盲，只能街头卖艺，但仍坚持音乐梦想并创作大量作品；
第三步，从个人观点出发，阐述阿炳的优秀以及对后世二胡大师的重大影响，强调其作品至今仍受欢迎且成为音乐领域的瑰宝。
[亮点词汇]
①honored被尊崇的
②musical instruments乐器
③developed患上
④stuck to坚持
⑤influence影响
[高分句型]
①When he was young, his father taught him to play many musical instruments. (时间状语从句)
②Personally speaking, he is so excellent that he has a great influence on the later erbu masters. (结果状语从句)
16．例文
My Favourite Chinese film star
I am glad to share about my favourite Chinese film star. Among all the actors in China, I like Jackie Chan best. I have been a fan of his for many years.
The reason why I admire Jackie Chan is his sense of humor. He is not only a talented actor and martial artist, but also a gifted comedian. His ability to make people laugh while performing breathtaking stunts is a rare talent in the industry. What’s more, he has founded several charities and has been involved in humanitarian efforts.
All in all, Jackie Chan is not only a talented actor, but also a role model to many teenagers.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点，同时注意不要偏题，需要围绕你最喜欢的中国电影明星，注意内容的完整和正确使用词汇和句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，简单介绍最喜欢的中国电影明星；
第二步：介绍你喜欢的原因；
第三步，你从他/她身上学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①a fan of……的粉丝
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①The reason why I admire Jackie Chan is his sense of humor.（定语从句）
17．例文：
Have you heard about Zheng Qinwen Below is some detailed information about her.
Zheng Qinwen, a young and talented Chinese tennis player, was born on October 8th, 2002, in Hubei. From a young age, Zheng showed great interest and passion about tennis. In 2010, she began professional training to improve her skills. During her training, she never gave up when she met some trouble. After that, she achieved great success in international tournament in 2021 when she demonstrated her great potential in tennis. Most surprisingly, by her endless effort and steely determination, she won the first Olympic gold medal in tennis singles for China, which makes us Chinese so proud of her.
From her stories, I learned a lot. As Zheng Qinwen continues to make her mark in the tennis world, she is not only a symbol of China’s growing presence in the sport but also an inspiration to aspiring me to pursue my dream and stick to it!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中郑钦文的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍郑钦文的出生日期和籍贯；
第二步，具体阐述郑钦文主要经历；
第三步，书写启发和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②achieve great success取得巨大的成功
③continue to do sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Most surprisingly, by her endless effort and steely determination, she won the first Olympic gold medal in tennis singles for China, which makes us Chinese so proud of her. (which引导非限制定语从句)
②As Zheng Qinwen continues to make her mark in the tennis world, she is not only a symbol of China’s growing presence in the sport but also an inspiration to aspiring me to pursue my dream and stick to it! (固定结构not only...but also...)
18．例文：
Role models in life set good examples for us. Yao Ming is my role model in my life. He is my favorite basketball player in the world. And he is known for his charity work. He founded his Foundation in 2008. He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas. He has offered lots of money to help the people in trouble. He always asks us to protect the animals on the earth. I think he is very kind and helpful.
I must learn from him and help people in need around us. We’ll try my best to support him and make a contribution to our society.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：本文一般采用一般现在时；
③提示：注意语意连贯，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的榜样，说出具体原因。
第二步，介绍榜样如何影响自己。
[亮点词汇]
①set examples for 树立榜样
②be known for以……被知晓
③in trouble在困境中
④try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas.(现在完成时)
②I think he is very kind and helpful.(宾语从句)
19．例文
My hero
It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei.
Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college.
I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出；
第二步，介绍张桂梅的出生信息、职业生涯和成就；
第三步，最后表达表达出对她的敬佩。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②pass away过世
③dedicated to致力于
[高分句型]
①After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school.（时间状语从句；定语从句）
②I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.（宾语从句）
20．例文
There are lots of great people in history. Today I want to introduce Madame Curie. Born into a teacher’s family on November 7, 1867, in Poland, Madame Curie is one of the greatest physicists.
When she was young, she became interested in physics. At that time women were not admitted into universities in Poland, so she was determined to go to university in Paris. During which time she led a very poor life. However, she worked very hard and succeeded in graduating from high school with honors.
Madame Curie devoted all her life to her research. She was not only the founder of the Radium Institute, but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive elements-polonium and radium. She was regarded as the mother of Ra. In 1903, she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize in Physics. She received the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911. So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.
Madame Curie sets a good example for us, so all the people show great respect for her.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍居里夫人的职业和简历；
第二步，介绍居里夫人的主要成就；
第三步，写出自己对居里夫人的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the+最高级 最……之一
②succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事
③be regarded as 被誉为
[高分句型]
①When she was young, she became interested in physics. (时间状语从句)
②In 1903, she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize in Physics. (被动语态)
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