Unit 1 Friendship写作 My friend学案 沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

U1 写作学案
假如你叫Susan, Molly是你最好的朋友。请根据下面表格中有关她的介绍，以 “My Best Friend” 为题，写一篇80词以上的文章，可以适当发挥。
Basic information & Appearance 13, 来自美国 中等身高，圆脸，长卷发
Hobbies 弹吉他, 看书
Characters 聪明、耐心、勤奋、乐于助人
Dream 成为一名教师
首段——引出人物 【引用谚语，再引出人物】
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. As we all know, friends play an important role in our lives. I have many friends, but Molly is my best friend. She is an important person who influences me most.
中间段——详细介绍 ：遣词造句就如化妆,拒绝素颜！How to describe a person
（1）13, 来自美国：She is 13 years old.She is from America.
→She is a 13-year-old girl who comes from America.
（2）中等身高，圆脸，长卷发：She is of medium height. She has round face.She has long and curly hair.
→She is of medium height with long curly hair. She always wears a smile on her round face. 面带笑容
（3）兴趣爱好：弹吉他和看书She likes/enjoys playing the guitar and reading.
sb. + be fond of / be interested in + doing. → She is fond of / is interested in playing the guitar and reading.
sb. like/likes + spending time doing. → She likes spending time playing the guitar and reading.
sb. + not only + like/likes doing A + but also + like/likes doing B. →She not only likes playing the guitar but also likes reading.
或者进一步阐述，补充细节：爱好对她的影响
→She is fond of playing the guitar because she can learn something from it. She loses herself in books. As for her, reading is a good way to broaden her horizon.开拓眼界
性格：她聪明且勤奋。She is clever and hard-working.
→She is a clever person who always tries out new ideas. She is so hard-working that she does well in all the subjects. With her help,I made great progress in study and became more and more confident.
她耐心又乐于助人。 She is patient and kind.
→Molly is patient and caring. When I need her ,she is always there for me. She is my role model. My parents say I am becoming more patient. I think this is all thanks to her.
She is welcomed by us because she is always ready to help others. Whenever my friends have trouble, she will give them a hand without a second thought. What a kind girl she is! 感叹句
（5）心愿、期盼：她希望有一天能成为一名教师。She hopes to become a teacher in the future.
→Her dream is to be a teacher in the future and she will try her best to make it come true.
末段————总结，表达情感
There is no doubt that true friendships are very important to us. My friendship with Molly teaches me that friends count on each other for love, admiration and help. I'm so proud that I have such a good friend. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever.
A life without a friend is a life without the sun. As we all know, friends play an important role in our lives. I have many friends, but Molly is my best friend. She is an important person who influences me most.
Molly is a 13-year-old girl who comes from America.She is of medium height with long curly hair. She always wears a smile on her round face. In her spare time,she is fond of playing the guitar because she can learn something from them. As for her, reading is a good way to broaden her horizon, so she often loses herself in books. She is a clever person who always tries out new ideas. She is so hard-working that she does well in all the subjects. With her help,I made great progress in study and became more and more confident. Molly is patient and caring. When I need her,she is always there for me. She is my role model. My parents say I am becoming more patient. I think this is all thanks to her. She is welcomed by us because she is always ready to help others. Whenever my friends have trouble, she will give them a hand without a second thought. What a kind girl she is! Her dream is to be a teacher in the future and she will try her best to make it come true.
There is no doubt that true friendships are very important to us. My friendship with Molly teaches me that friends count on each other for love, admiration and help. I'm so proud that I have such a good friend. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever.