建议信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,写信人向收信人就某个问题提出的自己的想法和主张,以解决有关问题。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、所提建议的理由等。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
布局谋篇
短语背诵
1.As the proverb says,... 正如谚语所说,……
2.It is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/accepted/recognised that... 人们普遍认为……
3.It can be said with certainty that...
可以肯定地说……
4.There's no denying (the fact) that...
不可否认的是……
5.Nothing is more important than...
没有什么比……更重要的了。
6.When it comes to... 当谈及……
7.A case in point is... 一个典型的例子是……
8.As has been mentioned above,... 如上所述,……
9.In spite of the fact that... 尽管……
10.From my point of view, it would be better if...
在我看来,如果……会更好。
11.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 通过(统计)数据我们得到的结论是……
12.To be frank/Frankly speaking ... 坦白地说……
13.In a word/In closing/To sum up ... 总而言之……
14.Because of/Due to/Owing to/On account of...
由于……
短语句子翻译练习
As the proverb says... 正如谚语所说……
句子: 正如谚语所说,“书是人类进步的阶梯”。(ladder; progress)
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It is widely believed that... 人们普遍认为……
句子: 人们普遍认为纸质书对保护视力更好。(protect eyesight)
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It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说……
句子: 可以肯定地说,科技已经永远地改变了我们的阅读方式。(forever; change)
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There's no denying that... 不可否认的是……
句子: 不可否认的是,电子书携带起来非常方便。(convenient; carry)
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Nothing is more important than... 没有什么比……更重要的了。
句子: 对读者而言,没有什么比阅读的乐趣更重要的了。(joy of reading)
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When it comes to... 当谈及……
句子: 当谈及收藏价值,纸质书无疑更胜一筹。(collectible value; undoubtedly)
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A case in point is... 一个典型的例子是……
句子: 电子设备在很多场合都非常有用,一个典型的例子是在长途旅行中。(useful; long journey)
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As has been mentioned above... 如上所述……
句子: 如上所述,两种书籍形式各有千秋。(have their own merits)
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In spite of the fact that... 尽管……
句子: 尽管电子书很流行,许多读者仍然偏爱纸质书。(popular; prefer)
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From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来,如果……会更好。
句子: 在我看来,如果我们能根据不同的情况选择不同的书,会更好。(choose; depending on)
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The data lead us to the conclusion that... 通过数据我们得到的结论是……
句子: 调查数据让我们得出的结论是,年轻人更喜欢读电子书。(survey; young people)
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To be frank... 坦白地说……
句子: 坦白地说,我更喜欢纸质书拿在手里的感觉。(the feeling of holding)
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In closing... 总而言之……
句子: 总而言之,选择哪一种书取决于个人喜好。(personal preference)
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Because of... 因为……
句子: 因为其便携性和大容量,电子书变得越来越流行。(portability; large storage capacity)
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答案参考:
As the proverb says, "Books are the ladder of human progress."
It is widely believed that paper books are better for protecting our eyesight.
It can be said with certainty that technology has forever changed the way we read.
There's no denying that e-books are very convenient to carry.
For readers, nothing is more important than the joy of reading.
When it comes to collectible value, paper books are undoubtedly superior.
E-devices are very useful on many occasions. A case in point is during a long journey.
As has been mentioned above, both forms of books have their own merits.
In spite of the fact that e-books are popular, many readers still prefer paper books.
From my point of view, it would be better if we could choose different books depending on the situation.
The data from the survey lead us to the conclusion that young people prefer e-books.
To be frank, I prefer the feeling of holding a paper book in my hands.
In closing, the choice depends on personal preference.
Because of their portability and large storage capacity, e-books are becoming more and more popular.
句型操练:
一、开篇引人入胜
原句型:
1. Learning that..., I’m more than glad to/I’d like to offer my suggestions to you.
2. Delighted to hear that..., I’m writing to express my support and meanwhile offer some pertinent 相关的 suggestions.
学生仿写练习:
中文:得知您即将参加志愿活动,我非常乐意为您提供一些建议。(volunteer activities)
英文:
用第一个模板:
用第二个模板:
<教师版(供参考)>
题目 1 答案: Learning that you are going to participate in volunteer activities, I’m more than glad to offer my suggestions to you.
题目 2 答案: Delighted to hear that you are about to participate in volunteer activities, I’m writing to express my support and meanwhile offer some pertinent suggestions.
二、主体巧妙构思
建议句型操练:写建议就是写“do sth 做某事”
中文:我建议你分析错误原因(analyze the causes of the mistakes)
基本建议句型:
I suggest you analyze the causes of the mistakes.(直接使用表示建议的动词suggest)
You should analyze the causes of the mistakes.(使用情态动词should)
Why not analyze the causes of the mistakes (使用反问句Why not …… )
Don’t forget to analyze the causes of the mistakes.(使用祈使句)
It is necessary to analyze the causes of the mistakes.(It形式主语句型)
Analyzing the causes of the mistakes is necessary.(使用非谓语动词,动名词作主语)
Analyzing the causes of the mistakes will help you find your weakness.(使用另一个动词短语)
学生仿写练习:
你需要复习考试内容(review the exam content)
1. 我建议你仔细复习考试内容。(建议动词advise)
2. 你应该在考前复习考试内容。(情态动词ought to)
3. 为什么不跟学习小组一起复习考试内容呢?(反问句Why not... )
4. 记得全面复习考试内容。(祈使句)
5. 系统复习考试内容有助于取得更好的成绩。(非谓语动词)
6. 多次复习考试内容是有必要的。(形式主语句型)
7. 复习考试内容能帮助你找出知识漏洞。 (搭配另一个动词短语)
<教师版(供参考)>
1. I advise you to review the exam content carefully. (建议动词advise)
2. You ought to review the exam content before the test. (情态动词ought to)
3. Why not review the exam content with a study group (反问句Why not... )
4. Remember to review the exam content thoroughly. (祈使句)
5. Reviewing the exam content systematically is helpful for better scores. (非谓语动词)
6. It is necessary to review the exam content multiple times. (形式主语句型)
7. Reviewing the exam content will help you identify knowledge gaps. (搭配另一个动词短语)
“建议 + 作用 / 影响”句型操练:
中文:培养良好的学习习惯(develop good study habits)
一、正面影响(按照建议做的好处)
I suggest you develop good study habits, which will help you improve learning efficiency and achieve better grades.
You should develop good study habits so that you can manage your time effectively and reduce exam stress.
Why not develop good study habits It can lay a solid foundation for your long-term academic development
Don’t forget to develop good study habits, as they will benefit you in both school and future career.
Developing good study habits is necessary, for it enables you to stay focused and absorb knowledge more effectively.
二、负面影响(不按建议做的后果)
I advise you to develop good study habits, or you may find it difficult to keep up with the study progress and fall behind others.
Remember to develop good study habits, otherwise you will rely on cramming before exams and fail to master knowledge thoroughly.
It is crucial to develop good study habits, for without them, your academic performance will remain stagnant and fail to meet your expectations.
学生仿写练习:
情景:你的朋友经常熬夜,导致白天精力不足,学习效率低下。
正面影响:
我建议你早睡,这会帮助你恢复精力,提高白天的专注力。 (which will…)
你应该早睡,这样才能在课堂上保持清醒,更高效地吸收知识。 (so that…)
为什么不早睡呢?这能调节生物钟,长期来看减少健康问题的风险。 (It can…)
别忘了早睡,因为充足的睡眠会增强记忆力和学习效率(as…)
早睡很有必要,因为这能让大脑休息,为第二天的任务做好准备。 (for…)
负面影响:
我建议你早睡,否则会在课堂上昏昏欲睡,跟不上老师的节奏。 (or…)
你应该早睡,否则会积累睡眠债,导致健康恶化和成绩下降。 (otherwise…)
为什么不早睡呢?缺乏足够睡眠,你可能会情绪烦躁,难以集中精力学习。 (without…)
<教师版(供参考)>
正面影响:
我建议你早睡,这会帮助你恢复精力,提高白天的专注力。 (which will…)
I suggest you go to bed early, which will help you regain energy and improve your concentration during the day.
你应该早睡,这样才能在课堂上保持清醒,更高效地吸收知识。 (so that…)
You should go to bed early so that you can stay awake in class and absorb knowledge more effectively.
为什么不早睡呢?这能调节生物钟,长期来看减少健康问题的风险。 (It can…)
Why not go to bed early It can regulate your body clock and reduce the risk of health problems in the long run.
别忘了早睡,因为充足的睡眠会增强记忆力和学习效率(as…)
Don’t forget to go to bed early, as sufficient sleep will enhance your memory and learning efficiency.
早睡很有必要,因为这能让大脑休息,为第二天的任务做好准备。 (for…)
Going to bed early is necessary, for it allows your brain to rest and prepares you for the next day’s tasks.
负面影响:
我建议你早睡,否则会在课堂上昏昏欲睡,跟不上老师的节奏。 (or…)
I advise you to go to bed early, or you will feel drowsy in class and fail to keep up with the teacher’s pace.
你应该早睡,否则会积累睡眠债,导致健康恶化和成绩下降。 (otherwise…)
You ought to go to bed early, otherwise you will accumulate sleep debt, leading to poor health and declining academic performance.
为什么不早睡呢?缺乏足够睡眠,你可能会情绪烦躁,难以集中精力学习。 (without…)
Why not go to bed early Without enough sleep, you might struggle with irritability and find it hard to focus on your studies.
三、结尾干净利索
直接背诵:
1.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
2.I will be more than glad if you take my suggestions into consideration. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.
如果你考虑我的建议我会非常高兴。 如果你有任何问题,请随时问我。
3.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help for you.If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚地希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。如果还有什么需要我帮忙的,请告诉我。
题目练习:
(2025·广州模拟)假定你是李华,学校正通过校英文报向同学们征集暑期社会实践活动的建议。请你用英文写一封建议信,内容包括:
(1)活动建议;(2)活动意义;(3)你的期待。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
To make our summer vacation fulfilling, I would like to propose an activity called “Get Your Hands Dirty in Hiking”, in which students should combine hiking with cleanup.
In this eco-friendly hike, students are encouraged to bring recycled bags to pick up trash along the hiking trails, which can not only promote their physical health but also foster their sense of social responsibility. By actively participating in the cleanup process, students recognise themselves as essential members of society and strengthen an awareness of environmental conservation.
I eagerly anticipate this initiative will become a feasible programme. It is through these hands-on experiences that we students can be inspired to make a difference.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua