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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.假如你是张平,你的美国好友Alice 将来中国游玩,她对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。请你根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一个你觉得有特别意义的中国节日。
Alice: I like Chinese traditional culture, especially the spirit behind it. By the way, I also like Chinese food.
Spring Festival ·on the first day of lunar year ·a lot of celebrations ·dumplings Lantern Festival ·on the fifteenth day of lunar year ·lantern show ·tangyuan
注意:
1.邮件需包含节日的相关信息,可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.字数80词左右。
Dear Alice,
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2.假如你叫李丹,你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们,介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出,不计入总词数。
要点:
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3:00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站,沿着广场路走,直到经过兴业街,公园在左边;
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器;
3. 你的照相机坏了,能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照;
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球;
5. 那天天气会很好,大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
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Li Dan
3.假如你叫Tom,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。
提示:1.聚会内容——唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏、看电影;
2.内容要涵盖提示中的信息,词数80左右。
(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
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I think we will have a good time.
Yours,
Tom
4.假如你是张宏,你的一位外国朋友Peter想到你的学校参观,但是他不知道该怎么去。请你根据所给地图,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他去你学校的路。
要求:语言准确,80词左右 (邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
(roundabout 环形交叉路口)
Dear Peter,
I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school.
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Yours,
Zhang Hong
5.行为举止是否文明礼貌体现的不仅仅是个人形象和城市形象,也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动,学校号召同学们做一个文明的中学生,特举办以“How to Behave Well”为题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇90词左右的短文。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
要点:
1. 在学校我们应该怎么做;
2. 在校外我们应该怎么做;
3. 号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
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6.根据中文提示和英文提示,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。词数:60~70左右。
提示:1. 昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步;
2. 在路上我们遇见了一个外国人;
3. 他向我询问如何去温泉酒店(the Hot Spring Hotel);
4. 我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见酒店;
5. 他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语:go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank sb. for sth., be happy that
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7.假如你们班级新来了一位同学,她打算周末步行去中央公园(Central Park),请你为她指路。
提示:出校园沿着Main Street一直走,到第一个路口右转,沿着Oak Street 走大概10分钟,看到一家银行向左转,再经过一家大超市,中央公园就在超市的对面。
要求:字迹工整,信息齐全,40词左右;开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there.
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8.John和你(张斌)是同班同学,他住在你们学校(一中)。请你用英语给他写封邮件,邀请他参加明天下午你的生日聚会,并告诉他去你家的路线。
注意:1. 地点:图中阴影处是你(张斌)家;2. 聚会内容:唱歌、跳舞、吃蛋糕。
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9.请根据下图提示写一篇短文,告诉你的好友安妮去先锋书店的路线。
要求:1.短文须包括图片的主要信息,语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数60左右。
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10.假如你是一名警察,一位名叫布朗的美国人向你问路,他需要到超市购买一个旅行包,但他不知道怎么走。你告诉他沿着你们所在的那条街道一直向前走,在第三个路口向左拐入朝阳路,然后乘坐114路公交车,到崇文街下车,然后向右走就能找到一家超市。它在一家饭店和一个银行之间。请根据以上信息写一篇短文,告诉布朗先生具体的路线。
要求:
1. 短文须包含以上全部信息;
2. 可以适当发挥,使行文流畅;
3. 60词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown.
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11.假设你是Lucy,国庆节期间你将和父母去某城市旅游。你从网上获得了Sunshine Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
1. How far is the hotel from the airport 2. How can you get to the hotel 3. Do they offer free breakfast 4. Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay
要求:
1.覆盖要点,并补充合理的细节;
2.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
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Lucy
12.近几年来,人们的交流方式发生了天翻地覆的变化。几年前我们通过写信、打电话和发邮件与他人联系,现在越来越多的人使用微信(WeChat)交流。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对微信的看法。
写作提示:1.使用微信交流的好处;
2. 微信带来的问题;
3. 你对微信的态度。
写作要求:1.语句通顺,条理清晰,详略得当,书写工整;
2. 100词左右。
13.你的好朋友Meimei应邀将在本周六上午来参加你的生日派对。假如你是Han Lei,请你根据以下提示用英语给Meimei写一封约80词的电子邮件,告诉她如何到你的家。
提示:1. 乘地铁5号线到和平站下车,然后沿着和平路直走;
2.在第三个十字路口向左拐,会看到在右边有一间书店;
3.你们家就在书店对面。
Dear Meimei,
We are very glad that you can come to my birthday party. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Han Lei
14.你校(十四中学)在星期五下午3:30安排了滨海大学的外籍教授Mr.Smith作题为《Task based Learning》的英语讲座。你想邀请你的好友王强来参加,因为他对英语学习很感兴趣。请根据下面的示意图给他发一个E-mail告诉他讲座内容、时间及如何乘车到你校。(开头和结尾都已经给出)词数:100词左右。
Dear Wang Qiang,
I have some good news to tell you. We will invite a professor named Smith from Binhai University to
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I'll be expecting you at 3:10 at our school gate. Don't be late.
15.假如你是Mike,国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
1.How far is the hotel from the airport
2.How can you get to the hotel
3.Do they offer free breakfast
4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay
注意:
1.覆盖要点,请补充合理的细节;
2.词数80-100;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
My family is planning a holiday to your city. I have got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask you.
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Yours,
Mike
16.假设你是Lucy,国庆节期间你将和父母去某城市旅游。你从网上获得了Sunshine Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询相关细节。
要求:80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
My family are planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e mail
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Yours,
Lucy
17.假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生,他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往翠湖公园的路线,并简单介绍一下公园的情况。
要点提示:1.路线(见上图);
2.公园环境优美、凉爽,还可以游泳、野餐等;
3.……
要求:1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight
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18.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Annie 打算暑假来你所在的城市旅游,她想了解一下东方海滩的情况。请你根据以下信息,给她写一封不少于80词的e-mail。
名称 东方海滩
位置 离市中心10千米处
特点 世界上最好的海滩之一,沙细、水净、浪小
最适合的运动 游泳、沙滩排球
公用设施 商店、更衣室
交通条件 有多路去海滩的公交车,出租车随时乘坐
参考词汇:1. East Beach 东方海滩 2. Fine(沙)细的 3. Be suitable for适合……
4. dressing room 更衣室
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19.上周五,你和朋友去参观市博物馆 (City Museum),但不熟悉路线。请根据以下提示写一篇短文,描述你们是如何礼貌地向路人问路并顺利到达目的地的:
1.选择合适的开场白和礼貌用语:
2.描述路人提供的路线(如:直走、左转、过红绿灯等):
3.表达对路人的感谢。
要求:80词左右,可适当发挥:不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
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20.假如你是李想,你和你的同学迈克 (Mike) 相约去当地的博物馆看展览,但他不知道如何去那里。请你根据以下提示告诉他具体路线。
要点提示:
1.路线:从家出发→坐地铁1号线→到公园站下车→换乘96路公交车→在秋天站下车→沿着秋天路走→在第一个十字路口左转→博物馆就在你的右边。
2.总路程17公里,坐地铁和公交共30分钟,走路5分钟。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所有的要点提示,并适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mike,
We plan to enjoy a show in the museum. Now let me show you the way to the museum.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Li Xiang
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参考答案及试题解析
1.例文
Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you, because it is the most traditional festival in China. Spring Festival usually comes on the first day of lunar year. There are a lot of celebrations during Spring Festival. On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. People say happy New Year to each other. Children also receive lucky money. The family get together to have a big meal. Dumplings are the most traditional food.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的春节;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“时间、庆祝活动和美食”3个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①are very interested in 对……感兴趣
②introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
③lunar year 农历年
④get rid of 摆脱
⑤look forward to 期待着……
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. (If引导条件状语从句,遵循“主将从现”)
③On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. (to do作目的状语)
2.例文
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍生日派对的时间和地点,邀请大家参加;
第二步,介绍如何到达派对地点,陈述交通路线;
第三步,介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作,请求朋友提供帮助;
第四步,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
3.One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7 p.m. this Friday. I’d like to invite you to my home. Your house is not far from mine. You can walk here. Let me tell you the way to my home. Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing. And my home is on your right. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. What’s more, we can watch a wonderful movie together.
I think we will have a good time.
Yours,
Tom
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指明生日聚会的时间,并邀请对方来参加生日聚会;
第二步,提供清晰的到你家的路线;
第三步,介绍聚会的活动有哪些;
第四步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①not far from离……不远
②walk along沿着……走
③take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing在第二个路口向左拐
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Walk along Green Street and take the second turning on the left/turn left at the second crossing.(祈使句;含and的并列句)
4.例文
Dear Peter,
I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school. Let me tell you how to get here.
When you get off the train, please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see the roundabout ahead. Go around the roundabout and turn into South Street. Walk straight down the street and soon you will see a hospital on your right. Then walk on till you reach the end of the street, and you’ll find our school on your left.
Welcome to our school!
Yours,
Zhang Hong
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按照地图,写出具体怎么到学校。
第二步,最后表示对Peter的欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①get off 下车
②walk out of 走出
③go along 沿着……走
[高分句型]
①I am excited to hear that you’re coming to our school.(宾语从句)
②When you get off the train, please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see the roundabout ahead.(when引导时间状语从句)
5.例文
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here are what we should do and shouldn’t do.
As a middle school student, it’s very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don’t throw litter everywhere. And we should respect our parents and teachers and help our parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示:文章应围绕题目,根据要点提示进行写作,准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等,注意语句通顺,表述连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接文章开头。
第二步,表述在学校应该怎么举止文明。
第三步,表述在校外我们应该怎么举止文明。
第四步,号召大家为此次活动共同努力。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important to do sth做某事非常重要
②take care of照顾
③respect尊重
④help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
⑤be supposed to do sth应该做某事
⑥keep promises遵守承诺
⑦remember to do sth记得做某事
[高分句型]
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.(If引导的条件状语从句)
6.例文
Last night, my mother and I went out for a walk. On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel. He thanked me a lot. And my mother also praised me that I was a good boy. For me, I felt very happy for helping him. Besides, I realized that helping others was a really good thing. It can not only help others out of emergencies but also make ourselves feel happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表明昨晚外出遇到外国人问路一事;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、如何指路、感受”几个方面重点介绍此次经历的细节;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己从中收到的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① went out for a walk 散步
② on the way 在路上
③ walk along 沿着
[高分句型]
① I told him that he should walk along the street and then turn left at the third corner, and then he will see the hotel.(that引导的宾语从句)
② On the way back we met a foreigner who asked us the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.(who引导的定语从句)
7.例文:
Central Park is not far from here. It is easy to get there. When you get out of school, you just go straight. And then turn right at the first crossing. After that walk along Oak Street for about 10 minutes and turn left when you see a bank. Then pass a big supermarket. Central Park is across from the supermarket.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已部分给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的地点和方位等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍中央公园的大概位置;
第二步,具体描述如何到中央公园的路线;
[亮点词汇]
①far from远离
②at the first crossing在第一个转角
③aross from在……对面
[高分句型]
①When you get out of school, you just go straight.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It is easy to get there.(“it is+adj+to do sth”句型)
8.例文
Dear John,
Tomorrow is my birthday. We will have a birthday party at my home tomorrow afternoon. We will dance, sing and share a big birthday cake. It will be great if you can join us.
My home is not far from our school. If you come, you may go straight along People's Road, then turn right at Guangming Road, and then go across Xiangyang Road. And you will find a cinema on the left. My home is just beside it.
Hope to see you tomorrow at the party.
Yours,
Zhang Bin
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,邀请John参加明天下午你的生日聚会,并告诉他去你家的路线。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要综合使用三个人称来行文,时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段,第一段邀请John参加明天下午你的生日聚会;第二段介绍去你家的路线;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
9.One possible version:
Hello, Anne! This Saturday morning, we can go and buy English—Chinese dictionaries in Xianfeng Bookshop together. First we need to walk along Huayuan Street and turn right at the first crossing. And then we walk on Long Street. After we walk past a post office, we can turn left to Shanghai Road. Then we can see Xianfeng Bookshop. It’s just across from Jiari Hotel and behind the bank. It’s easy for us to find it.
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目要求根据所学知识和地图提示进行写作,要求必须包括图片的主要信息,所以选择路线时候要把图片上的道路和建筑物包含在内;注意字数,适当添加开头和结尾。
2.写作指导:根据图片可知本文主语是“You and Anne”,所以写作时主语应该是“we”。根据地图可知,要去先锋书店,需要沿着“Huanyuan Street”直走,然后在第一个路口右转,再沿着 “Long Street”走,经过邮局后左转,最后可以在“Shanghai Road”上,“Jiari Hotel”对面、银行后面找到先锋书店。写作需要的基本表达有:walk along 沿着……走;turn right/left向右转/左转;at the first crossing在第一个十字路口;across from在……对面;behind在……后面。
10.One possible version:
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown. I am a traffic police. I’m glad to tell you the way to the supermarket. Go along this street and turn left to Chaoyang Street at the third crossing, then take the No. 114 bus there and get off at Chongwen Street. And then you walk to the right. You will find it. It is between a restaurant and a bank. You won’t miss it.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。向路人展示如何到超市。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容,仔细介绍去超市的路线。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
11.例文
Dear Sir,
My family is planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Would you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last but not least, would you mind telling us whether there is a discount for a long stay
Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Lucy
【解析】1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给要点提示,写一封邮件给宾馆的经理,介绍自己的行程并咨询相关细节。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第一人称写作,时态主要为一般现在时。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
12.范文:
WeChat is becoming more and more popular now. A few years ago, people got in touch with each other by sending letters, calling or writing e-mails, but now more people are using WeChat. By using WeChat, making friends is becoming easier. We can also share our life experiences. However, there are also some problems. If we use WeChat too often, we will have less time to study. Sometimes it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat. I think WeChat is helpful in our life, but we should use it carefully.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对微信的看法。要包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;语句要通顺,条理要清晰,详略要得当,书写要工整书,100词左右。
2.写作指导:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
13.例文:
Dear Meimei,
We are very glad that you can come to my birthday party. Now, let me tell you how to get to my home. First, take the underground Line 5 and get off at the Heping Station. It takes about fifteen minutes. Then go along the Heping Road. When you come to the third crossing, turn left and you will see a bookstore on your right. And my home is just opposite the bookstore. I will wait for you at home at 10:00 this Saturday morning.
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Han Lei
【解析】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容写一封电子邮件告诉Meimei到自己家的路线。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第二人称,时态采用一般现在时为主。按照题干给出的信息,讲清楚到自己家的路线,可使用一些指路用语及地点方位介词。
14.Dear Wang Qiang,
I have some good news to tell you. We will invite a professor named Smith from Binhai University to give us an English lecture. The subject of the lecture is Task- based Learning. The lecture will be given at 3:30 on Friday afternoon. Now I'll tell you how to get to our school by bus. You can take a No. 44 bus just on the left side of your home and get off at Ning Jing Road. When you get off, go across the street and take a No. 12 bus and then get off at the terminus. Go forward and turn left at the first crossing to Peace Road. Go along the road and you will see a McDonald's on your right and my school is just next to it.
I'll be expecting you at 3:10 at our school gate. Don't be late.
Yours,
Li Gang
【解析】1、题干解读:题目要求你根据示意图给好友王强发一个E—mail告诉他讲座内容、时间以及如何乘车到你学校。写作时应承接短文开头,详细介绍关于讲座的信息。
2、写作指导:例文采用一段式;时态采用一般将来时为主;可多运用祈使句句型指路;描述讲座内容、时间以及如何乘车到你学校应详细具体;保证条理清晰;逻辑性强。
15.例文:
Dear sir,
My family is planning a holiday to your city. I have got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask you. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e-mail
We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Could you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last not but least, would you mind telling us whether there is a discount for a long stay
Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目是书信类书面表达,根据题目中所给的提示信息完成书面表达,开头和短文已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
2.写作指导:该文应主要使用第一人称来完成,时态以一般现在时为主,要覆盖文中所提及的所有要点,保证内容完整,结构清晰条理。
16.例文
Dear Sir,
My family are planning a holiday to your city. I got some information about your hotel, but I still have some questions to ask. Would you be kind enough to reply to my e mail We are arriving in your city on October 1st. And we plan to stay in your hotel for 5 days. Could you please tell me how far your hotel is from the airport And we’d like to know how we can get to your hotel. Also, we wonder whether you offer free breakfast. Last but not least, would you mind telling us whether there is free Internet
Thanks for your time. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lucy
【解析】1.题干解读:这是一篇书信作文,写一封电子邮件给该Sunshine Hotel宾馆的经理, 介绍你的行程并咨询关于旅馆的一些情况。文章的开头以给出,注意上下文的连接。
2.写作指导:本文用第一人称来介绍;时态采用一般现在时态为主,写作时注意承接开头,本文思路清晰,语言表达准确,用词恰当,意思通俗易懂。写作时可以适当用一些连词,短语或句型;使文章看起来层次分明。
17.例文
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You can also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇给材料作文,要求根据所给出的材料内容,指出去翠湖公园的路以及介绍翠湖公园情况。短文的开头已经给出,写作时考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文;其次考生可从三方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:1.路线;2.公园介绍公园环境优美、凉爽,还可游泳、野餐等;3.其他。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第三人称和第二人称。文章紧扣主题,连句成篇,层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。而且语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:go straight直走,turn right右转,at the first corner在第一个路口,have fun玩的开心。
句型:Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital.本句是用来指路的祈使句,其中含有when引导的时间状语的应用。
The park is really a good place to have fun. 公园真的是个好玩的好地方。本句中的动词不定式to have fun.作为后置定语,修饰place。
18.Dear Annie,
I am very glad to hear that you'll travel to my city.
Now let me tell you something about the East Beach. The East Beach is 10 kilometres away from the city center. It's one of the best beaches in the world. The sand there is fine, on and clean. The water is clear with small waves. It's suitable for swimming and playing beach volleyball. You can get to the beach easily. Many buses can take you there. You can also take a taxi at any time. There are toilets, dressing rooms and shops. I think you will have a great time there.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是材料作文。所要描述的内容已经给列出了。学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题。首先要注意文章的时态,这是对东方海滩的描述,所以用一般现在时即可,但对于过去发生的一些事情,也会出现一般过去时,注意时态的转换。因为是给友人介绍,所以用第一人称。再者禁止逐句翻译。注意连词的应用,衔接到各个知识点,以提高作文档次和点亮文章亮点。
【点睛】本文出现一些常见的短语,be suitable for适合,take sb. to someplace带某人去某处,take a taxi乘出租车,have a good time玩得愉快。It’s one of the best beaches in the world句子中出现one of+名词复数+in the world ,所以会出现最高级。You can get to the beach easily你很容易到达,easily用来修饰get to。I think you will have a great time there这句话中提到宾语从句。文中还出现一些高级词汇如clean,suitable,fine, wave,提高文章的档次。
19.范文
Last Friday, my friend and I wanted to visit the City Museum but we didn’t know the way. We saw a kind lady passing by. I smiled and said, “Excuse me, could you please tell us how to get to the City Museum ” She smiled back and said, “Sure. Go straight, turn left at the second crossing, and walk past the traffic lights. You’ll see it on your right.” We thanked her warmly and followed the directions. Soon, we arrived there happily.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏 “信息提示” 中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明上周五和朋友去参观市博物馆但不熟悉路线的情况;
第二步,具体描述向路人礼貌问路的过程,包括开场白、礼貌用语以及路人提供的路线;
第三步,表达对路人的感谢以及顺利到达目的地的结果。
[亮点词汇]
① pass by 经过
② go straight 直走
③ turn left 左转
④ traffic lights 红绿灯
⑤ follow the directions 按照指引
[高分句型]
I smiled and said, “Excuse me, could you please tell us how to get to the City Museum ”(直接引语,用于礼貌提问)
20.例文
Dear Mike,
We plan to enjoy a show in the museum. Now let me show you the way to the museum.
First, take the underground Line 1 and get off at Park Station. Then, you should change to the bus No. 96 and get off at Autumn Station. Next, you should walk along Autumn Road and turn left at the first crossing. You can see the museum is on your right. It’s about 17 kilometers. It takes 30 minutes on the underground and the bus, and 5 minutes on foot.
I’m looking forward to seeing you there!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要说明写信目的;
第二步,详细描述路线。
[亮点词汇]
①get off下车
②turn left向左转
③on your right在你的右边
[高分句型]
①First, take the underground Line 1 and get off at Park Station. (祈使句的使用和and连词的使用)
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