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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 3 Heroes
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．在下周的英语班会课上，老师打算让大家谈论自己心目中的英雄。请你根据所给提示写一篇英语短文，以备班会上发言用。
内容包括：
1.你心目中的英雄是谁；
2.他/她为什么会成为你心目中的英雄（至少两方面）；
3. 你的愿望。
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2．假如你心目中的英雄是世界著名科学家钱学森。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。可适当加入自己的感想和评论。题目自拟。80个词左右。
1.1911年出生于上海，中国著名的物理学家，被称为“中国导弹之父(The Father of Chinese Missile) ”。
2. 1938年在美国得到博士学位(doctor's degree)。1950年争取回国，遭到美国政府的阻挠。1955年终于回到祖国的怀抱。
3. 他把自己的一切都奉献给了祖国的航天事业。
4. 自己的感想是……
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3．请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的文章介绍我国著名的水稻专家袁隆平。内容包括：
1. 1930年9月7日出生在重庆的一个贫困农民家庭；
2. 1953年毕业于西南农学院，之后被分配到湘西农校任教；
3. 1964年开始从事杂交水稻研究，1981年荣获我国第一个国家特等发明奖，被国际上誉为“杂交水稻之父”；
4. 生活简朴，不计名利。
参考词汇：杂交水稻Hybrid Rice； 农学院Agricultural College
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4．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80~100。
习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。
提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。
②记述你印象深刻的一件事。
③对你的影响。
要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。
②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。
A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his heart.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．袁隆平1930年出生于北京，他很聪明，他年轻的时候在西南农学院（Southwest Agricultural College）学习。他对水稻很感兴趣，在1973年他发明了水稻新品种。因此，现在世界上许多国家的水稻比以前更多了。
要求：80词左右。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．2024年9月29日在北京人民大会堂隆重举行了“中华人民共和国国家勋章和国家荣誉称号”的颁奖仪式。请根据下列表格的信息写一篇演讲稿，在英语课上向同学们介绍“共和国勋章”四位获得者之一、中国载人航天工程和运载火箭系列的总设计师王永志。
出生 1932年11月，中国东北农村
成长与成功 从小学习刻苦 18岁，听说美国的飞机在朝鲜战场上疯狂轰炸，下定决心…… 清华大学，学习航天飞机设计 被派往莫斯科 (Moscow)，学习火箭导弹设计 一辈子研究导弹和航天技术，获得巨大成就
逝世 2024年6月11日
你的看法 ……
农业的agricultural 朝鲜战场Korean battlefield
轰炸bomb 航天飞机设计Space Shuttle Design 导弹missile
注意：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。
Dear classmates,
let me introduce Wang Yongzhi, one of the four honorary recipients of the Medal of the Republic in China, 2024.
In November 1932, Wang Yongzhi was born in the countryside of Northeast China.
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7．《二泉映月》 (The Moon over a Fountain) 是中国民间音乐家阿炳的代表作，以下是有关阿炳的简介，请你根据表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文，来简单介绍一下他。
出生时间 1893 去世时间 1950 家乡 江苏无锡
个人经历 4岁时，母亲去世，跟随父亲学习鼓、二胡 (erhu)； 12岁时，可以演奏各种乐器 (instruments)； 34岁时失明 (lose one’s sight)，但并没有放弃演奏； 因《二泉映月》而出名。
成就及评价 其一生创作了270多首民间 (folk) 乐曲； 他的音乐作品至今仍能打动我们的心灵 (touch our hearts)。
要求：（1）词数：70词左右；（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥；（3）开头不计入词数。
Abing was a famous Chinese folk musician. He
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8．假如你是李华，是学校英文周刊的一名记者。为了让同学们了解一些国外著名作家，下周英文周刊将刊登有关国外作家的文章。请你根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍美国著名作家欧·亨利，发表在周刊上。
欧·亨利（1862—1910）是一位著名的美国作家，也是美国现代短篇小说的奠基人。
人生经历：1.三岁丧母，由祖母和姑姑养大； 2.从事过歌手、银行职员、记者等工作。
著名作品：《麦琪的礼物》；《最后一片叶子》 作品特点： 1.短小精悍，易于理解，具有幽默性； 2.结局出人意料； 3.善于描写美国各行各业普通人的生活。 作品评价：美国人生活的百科全书。
要求：1.包含提示信息，可以根据自己对该作家的了解，适当增添内容；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯；
3.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A famous American writer—O. Henry
O. Henry was a well-known American writer and the founder of modern American short stories.
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9．在当今社会，许多学生都有自己的偶像。你的偶像（idol）是谁呢？请以 “My Idol” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的偶像。
要点如下：
1. 简单介绍偶像的身份（如：歌手、演员、运动员等）；
2. 描述偶像的外貌、性格特点；
3. 阐述你喜欢他/她的原因；
4. 你从偶像身上学到了什么。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2. 词数：80~100 词；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
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10．请根据下面的内容提示写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文，不少于80词。
内容包括：
（1）他是一位美国作家，写了许多著名的小说；
（2）他1835年出生于佛罗里达的农村，4岁时和家人搬到城里，12岁时父亲去世；
（3）他从童年就开始工作，曾做过许多不同的工作；
（4）他最著名的小说之一：《汤姆·索亚历险记》；
（5）他的写作才能来源于他个人的经历。
参考词汇：Mark Twain; novel; Florida; The Adventures of Tom Sawyer; personal experience
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11．请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你最喜欢的作家、歌星或演员等。
写作内容：
1．简要介绍你最喜欢的作家、歌星或演员（如出生日期、特长、爱好等）；
2．简单介绍他或她给你印象最深刻的作品；
3．他或她对你有何影响。
写作要求：
1．请补全标题；
2．不得照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
3．条理清晰，意思连贯，词数80个左右。
My favorite ______
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12．写一篇短文，介绍你所熟悉的一位发明家。
1. What is the name of the inventor
2. What did he/ she invent
3. What is his/ her field of interest
4. What can you learn from him/ her
（1）短文应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数60个字左右。
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13．阳光是青年的本色。习近平总书记指出：“青年是社会中最有生气、最有闯劲、最少保守思想的群体，蕴含着改造客观世界、推动社会进步的无穷力量。” 作为新时代的青少年，我们一定不负青春，不负韶华。请你根据下面的提示问题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一谈你的想法。
内容提示：
1. What are your hopes or dreams
2. Which famous person do you admire most and why
3. How can you become a good learner
要求：
1. 书写规范认真，词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 包含所有内容提示，语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
As a teenager in the new era (时代), I am full of energy (能量) and have great potential (潜力).
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14．据以下参考词汇，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，请写一写你心中的最美运动员。
写作要点：1.你心目中最美的运动员是谁；
2.他（她）是哪个项目的运动员；
3.你为什么认为他（她）是最美的运动员；
4.你能从他（她）身上学到什么。
参考词汇：In my opinion, the most beautiful sports player is …
… one of the most famous …
… practise... every day.
… meet a challenge of …
But he or she never gives up …
From him or her, I can learn …
要求：1.70词左右；
2.结构完整、条理清晰、语言通顺。
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15．钱学森是中国“两弹一星”元勋，为中国航天科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍钱学森。
姓名 钱学森
生卒日期 1911年12月11日—2009年10月31日
出生地 中国上海
教育背景 1934年毕业于上海交通大学，后赴美留学，获博士学位
主要成就 1. 参与美国早期火箭研究，1955年回到中国 2. 领导研制中国第一颗人造卫星“东方红一号”，推动导弹和空间探索领域的发展 3. 中国航天事业的奠基人，被誉为“中国航天之父”
要求：
1. 文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右。
参考词汇：aerospace science and technology航天科技
father of China’s aerospace中国航天之父
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16．榜样的力量是无穷的。《论语》中提到“见贤思齐”“择善而从”，这告诉我们要向有才德的人学习，以他们为榜样，学习他们身上的优点。假如英语课上老师要求每个学生谈谈自己的榜样，请你根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你的榜样。
要点提示：
1．Who is your role model Why do you regard him / her as (看做) your role model
2．What experiences did he/ she have
3．What can you learn from him/ her
写作要求：
（1）要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
（3）书写工整；不出现真实姓名及地点：80词左右。
My role model
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17．榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Modol”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。
提示：
Who is your role model
Why is he/she your model
What can you learn from him/her
How can you do to be better
要求：
要点齐全，并适当发挥；
文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model, so do I.
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18．张桂梅老师获“感动中国的人物”称号，颁奖词中评价她“不惧碾作尘，无意苦争春，以怒放的生命，向世界表达倔强。是崖畔的桂，雪中的梅。”请你根据下面表格信息，写一篇英语短文。
人物简介 1957年生于黑龙江省一个普通家庭。年少时努力学习实现梦想。
主要事迹 2008年创建华坪女子高中。她坚信教育是改变命运（destiny）的钥匙，一直坚持自己的教育梦想。她克服种种困难，帮助贫困女学生接受教育，考上大学，改变命运，现在她的学生们从事各种工作，为社会服务，实现了自己的梦想。
你的感悟 至少两点
要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，可适当发挥。不少于100词。
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19．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在进行关于“我敬仰的科学家”系列推送活动。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍你敬仰的科学家，包括他/ 她是谁、他/她的成就及你敬佩他/她的原因。
参考词汇： devote…to, make a great contribution to, look up on, selfless dedication spirit (无私奉献的精神), be eager to, played a key role in
要求：词数不少于80。
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20．学校决定开展向女子轮椅击剑运动员辜海燕学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍辜海燕的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空A篇文章中感受到的她的优秀品质(personality)，你从她的经历中学到了什么，有何感受及看法，最后谈谈今后你打算怎么做。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Personal information ●Age:26●Birthplace: a small village in Sichuan Province ●Hobby: sports, travel
2. Personality 根据完形填空A篇文章概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Your plans ①② ...
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My father is the hero in my heart.
He is friendly and hard-working. Whenever I have trouble, he always gives me some good advice. He often teaches me how to be a good boy. He takes good care of me.What’s more, he looks after my grandparents well. And he is happy to do this. As for his job, he works very hard and he has won many prizes.
That’s my dad——the hero in my mind. I hope to be a person like him when I grow up.
【解析】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要写一篇自己心目中英雄的作文，需要包含以下内容：谁是你心目中的英雄，他/她是你心目中英雄的原因（至少两方面），你的愿望。
写作指导：本文人称上以第三人称为主，第一人称为辅；时态上使用一般现在时。内容上包含谁是你心目中的英雄、原因（至少2点）和愿望。结构上可以采用三段式，第一段撰写谁是你心目中的英雄，第二段撰写原因，第三段撰写愿望。注意在描写心目中的英雄时需要采用第三人称，在描写自己愿望时需采用第一人称。同时，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证行文的逻辑性。
2．例文
Qian Xuesen is a famous scientist in the world. He was named “The Father of Chinese Missile”. He is the hero in my heart. And he is also the hero of all Chinese people.
Qian Xuesen was born in Shanghai in 1911. He completed his doctor's degree in 1938 in America. He tried to come back to China in 1950, but the American government stopped him. He didn't come back until 1955. He gave his life to Chinese space flight technology. I will learn from him, and study hard for our country.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要求按照提示信息第一段介绍钱学森；第二段介绍钱学森取得的成就以及自己的感想。
2.写作指导：本文第一段对人物客观事实的陈述，主要采用一般现在时态；第二段对人物所取得成就进行陈述，主要采用一般过去时，最后写出自己的感想，需要把握好时态，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
3．例文：
Yuan Longping was born on 7th September, 1930 in Chongqing. He was from a poor farmer’s family. He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, and then he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agricultural College in the west of Hunan. He began his research in hybrid rice in 1964 and got the first National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据题干中内容介绍我国的“杂交水稻之父”——袁隆平。内容需包括：出生、学习及任教经历、研究及获奖经历、生活态度。写作过程中注意事件发生的时间和内容相匹配。
2.写作指导：本文主题为“写人”；以第三人称he作主语，介绍袁隆平的经历；以一般过去时叙述袁隆平早年的学习及科研经历，以一般现在时介绍其生活态度及获得的终生成就，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，语句通顺，使读者一目了然。
4．One possible version：
A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his heart. My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.
Once she would have a difficult exam. To pass it, she must read four books. But my mother did not have so much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up suddenly at 2 o’clock, I found her staying up late to read her books. I was shocked by my mother.
My mother always sets a goal and manages to finish it. She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点、跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上。此篇作文需要用一般过去时态进行叙述心目中英雄的事情，人称为第三人称。注意动词过去式的形式要正确。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，可以使用大量的固定句式和短语，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】这篇短文使用的主从复合句比较多，比如“when I woke up suddenly at 2 o'clock, I found her staying up late to read her books”，按照动作发生的先后顺序，使得句子更加有层次感，文章避免单纯的重复，使短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的母亲有了比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。
【高分案例一】My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.（我的英雄是我的母亲，因为她一直努力工作，从不放弃。）because引导的原因状语从句引出我的英雄是我妈妈的原因。【高分案例二】She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.（她是我心中的英雄，鼓励我努力工作。）鼓励某人做某事的结构encourage sb. to do sth.用不定式结构使得句子结构更加清晰，表达更加明了。
5．Yuan Longping is a great scientist. He was born in Beijing in 1930. He is very clever. When he was young, he studied in the Southwest Agricultural College. He was interested in rice. He worked very hard. And he invented a new kind of rice in 1973. After that, there are more rices in many countries than before. So he is called "the Father of Rice." In my opinion Yuan Longping is a hero of China!
【解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a great scientist，was born in Beijing，in the Southwest Agricultural College，be interested in，work hard，a new kind of，after that，in my opinion，a hero of China等。而被动语态So he is called "the Father of Rice."和时间状语从句When he was young, he studied in the Southwest Agricultural College.的运用，既丰富了短文内容，又使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．例文
Dear classmates,
Let me introduce Wang Yongzhi, one of the four honorary recipients of the Medal of the Republic in China, 2024.
In November 1932, Wang Yongzhi was born in the countryside of Northeast China. In spite of poor agricultural conditions, he studied hard. At the age of 18, shocked by US bombs on the Korean battlefield, he vowed to strengthen China through aerospace. He studied Space Shuttle Design at Tsinghua University and later mastered missile technology in Moscow. Devoting his life to rockets and space, he led China’s manned space program to global success. Though he passed away on June 11, 2024, his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. Let’s honor his legacy!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿写作；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“看法”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明要为大家介绍王永志；
第二步，具体介绍王永志的生平贡献和伟大精神；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①In spite of尽管
②strengthen China使中国强大
③devote...to专心于
④lead...to...带领...到...
[高分句型]
①Though he passed away on June 11, 2024, his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. (though引导让步状语从句)
②his spirit teaches us that passion can make any dream possible. (that引导宾语从句)
7．例文
Abing was a famous Chinese folk musician. He was famous for his The Moon over a Fountain. He was born in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province in 1893 and died in 1950. His mother died when he was four years old. And he started to learn to play the drums and erhu from his father. At the age of twelve, he could play all kinds of instruments. When he was thirty-four, he lost his eyesight, but he didn’t give up playing.
During his life, he created over 270 folk music pieces. Even today, his music still touches our hearts deeply.
What a great man!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍阿炳是中国著名的民间音乐家；
第二步，从出生及去世时间、家乡、个人经历等方面具体介绍阿炳；
第三步，介绍阿炳的成就和对他的评价；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②At the age of 在……岁时
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①What a great man!(what引导的感叹句)
8．例文
A famous American writer—O. Henry
O. Henry was a well-known American writer and the founder of modern American short stories. He had a hard life. His mother died when he was three years old, and he was raised by his grandmother and aunt. He worked as a singer, a bank clerk, a journalist and so on.
O. Henry wrote many famous works, such as The Gift of the Magi and The Last Leaf. His works are short and easy to understand, and they are humorous. The endings of his stories are always unexpected. He was good at describing the lives of ordinary people in different jobs in the United States.
O. Henry’s works are regarded as an encyclopedia of American life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍O. Henry的生平经历、作品特点及文学地位，内容简洁明了，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍核心人物O. Henry的人生经历。
第二步，介绍O. Henry的代表作品、创作风格及文学评价。
[亮点词汇]
①well-known著名的
②such as例如
③be regarded as被视为
[高分句型]
His mother died when he was three years old, and he was raised by his grandmother and aunt.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
My Idol
My idol is Li Na, a great Chinese tennis player. She is tall with short hair and always looks energetic. She is brave and never gives up, even when facing difficulties.
I like her because she worked hard to achieve her dreams. She won many international matches and made China proud in tennis.
From her, I learn that success comes from hard work and persistence. I will try my best to overcome challenges in my life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述偶像的身份、外貌、性格等常态特征；当提及偶像过去的成就或经历时，可使用一般过去时。
③提示：需紧扣四个要点，语言简洁明了，避免冗余信息；注意人称一致，以第三人称为主介绍偶像；严格控制词数在80~100词之间，不出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍偶像身份：用一句话点明偶像是谁以及其职业；
第二步，描述外貌与性格：简要描述偶像的外貌特征，如身高、发型等，再说明其性格特点；
第三步，阐述喜欢的原因：结合偶像的成就或行为说明喜欢他的原因；
第四步，说明从偶像身上学到的东西：总结自己从偶像身上获得的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①energetic精力充沛的
②give up放弃
③achieve实现
[高分句型]
①I like her because she worked hard to achieve her dreams.（原因状语从句）
②From her, I learn that success comes from hard work and persistence.（宾语从句）
10．
参考范文：
Mark Twain is an American writer. He wrote many famous novels. Mark Twain was born in the countryside in Florida in 1835. He moved to the city with his family at the age of four. His father died when he was 12 years old. He began working when he was a child and did different jobs. The Adventures of Tom Sawyer is one of his most famous novels. He didn’t show his writing ability from an early age, and it came from his personal experiences.
Mark Twain was hardworking and smart. His works are full of humor and popular in the whole world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的细节，适当补充内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍马克·吐温的作家身份；
第二步，具体叙述马克·吐温的早年生活情况；
第三步，介绍马克·吐温的主要作品，并总结他的精神品质。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁时
②begin doing sth.开始做某事
③come from来自
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①His father died when he was 12 years old. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②The Adventures of Tom sawyer is one of his most famous novels in the world. (one of the+最高级+名词复数)
11．例文
My Favorite Writer
Lu Xun, born in 1881, was good at writing novels and essays. He loved reading and cared about society. His most famous work The True Story of Ah Q shows the social problems of old China. His works encourage me to think about life and fight for truth. They inspire me to care about the world and have the courage to face problems. I admire him for his courage to speak out. His sharp writing style and profound thoughts influence me a lot.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：需补全标题为“My favorite writer”，介绍鲁迅、其作品及对自己影响，注意不得抄袭、出现真实校名和姓名，词数80左右 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，确定标题为“My favorite writer”，开篇点明鲁迅是自己最喜欢的作家，介绍其在文学领域地位；
第二步，选取代表作品（如《阿Q正传》 ），简单介绍作品内容及给自己的印象；
第三步，从思想启发、行动激励等方面阐述作家对自己的影响 。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②care about 关心
③speak out 大声说出，坦率地表达意见
[高分句型]
①His work The True Story of Ah Q leaves a deep impression on me. (leave a deep impression on sb.“给某人留下深刻印象”)
②His works encourage me to think about life and fight for truth. (encourage sb. to so sth.“激励某人做某事”)
12．范文：
Thomas Edison is a great inventor. He invented the light bulb, which changed people’s lives greatly. His field of interest was science, especially exploring how things work. He did thousands of experiments, even when failing many times, but never gave up. From him, I learn that curiosity and perseverance are key to success. We should keep trying no matter how hard things get.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般过去时为主；
③提示：文章涵盖所有要点，包括发明家姓名、发明成果、兴趣领域、可学习的品质，补充了发明的影响、实验细节等内容，内容完整，逻辑连贯，词数符合要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明托马斯 爱迪生是伟大的发明家，介绍其发明的电灯泡及对人们生活的重大影响，引出人物的成就；
第二步，说明其兴趣领域为科学，尤其热衷于探索事物的工作原理，再描述他做过数千次实验，即便多次失败也不放弃的经历，展现其科研态度；
第三步，总结从他身上学到的品质——好奇心和毅力是成功的关键，并强调无论事情多难都应坚持尝试，点明启示意义。
[亮点词汇]
①inventor发明家
②light bulb电灯泡
③field of interest兴趣领域
④perseverance毅力
[高分句型]
①He invented the light bulb, which changed people's lives greatly.（“which”引导非限制性定语从句）
②We should keep trying no matter how hard things get.（“no matter how”引导让步状语从句）
13．例文：
As a teenager in the new era, I am full of energy and have great potential. I hope to continue studying after finishing school and to go to university. My dream is to become a doctor. I’ve always been touched by doctors, especially during the fight against diseases. I hope to be able to help patients and save their lives in the future.
The famous Chinese person I admire most is Yuan Longping. He is one of the greatest agricultural scientists. He was very hard-working and he ensured that people have enough food to eat.
To become a good learner, first, I should set clear goals and make proper study plans. Second, I should create a strong interest in what I learn, because interest is the best teacher. Also, I need to be good at developing my study skills and keep learning from mistakes. By doing so, I can improve myself.
As a new-era teenager, I will try every means to achieve my dream and to be a helpful person to our country.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给问题需完整阐述，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想；
第二步，介绍自己敬佩的名人及原因；
第三步，讲述自己如何成为一名好的学习者。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②be good at擅长
③learn from从中学习
[高分句型]
①The famous Chinese person I admire most is Yuan Longping.（定语从句）
②He was very hard-working and he ensured that people have enough food to eat.（宾语从句）
14．例文
In my opinion, the most beautiful sports player is Fan Zhendong. He is one of the most famous Chinese table tennis players.
He started playing table tennis at a young age. He trains hard every day, even on weekends. In the Olympics, he won many gold medals for China.
His hard work and strong will inspire me a lot. When I feel like giving up, I think of him. I know that as long as I keep trying, I can achieve my goals. He is not only a great athlete but also a role model for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；尽量多使用短语、句型和连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己心中的最美运动员是谁；
第二步，介绍他（她）的基本情况；
第三步，介绍他（她）对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①at a young age在很小的时候
②feel like doing sth想要做某事
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①When I feel like giving up, I think of him. (状语从句)
②I know that as long as I keep trying, I can achieve my goals. (宾语从句和状语从句)
15．例文
Qian Xuesen was one of China’s greatest scientists. Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education. After getting his PhD, he became an important rocket scientist in the USA.
In 1955, Qian returned to China. He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology. Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1. His work laid the foundation for China’s achievements in missiles and space exploration.
Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”. His spirit continues to inspire China’s young generations today. He passed away in 2009, but his contributions will never be forgotten.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍中国伟大科学家钱学森的生平事迹、贡献及影响；
②时态：以一般过去时为主，描述钱学森的出生、求学、回国、工作及逝世等生平事件；使用一般现在时强调其地位、精神的延续性和贡献的不朽性；
③提示：文章围绕钱学森展开，包含其基本生平、回国后的贡献、历史地位及精神影响，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明钱学森是中国最伟大的科学家之一，简述早期经历；
第二步，讲述其为中国导弹和太空探索成就奠定基础，突出核心贡献；
第三步，总结其“中国航天之父”的地位，说明其精神对当代中国青年的激励作用，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
①further education深造
②devote oneself to致力于
③aerospace航天
④lay the foundation for 为……奠定基础
⑤pass away逝世
⑥contributions贡献
[高分句型]
①Born in Shanghai in 1911, he graduated from Shanghai Jiao Tong University and then went to America for further education.（过去分词“Born”作状语）
②He devoted himself to the development of China’s aerospace science and technology.（“devote oneself to” 短语，体现其对航天事业的专注和奉献）
③Under his leadership, Chinese scientists successfully developed the country’s first satellite, Dongfanghong-1.（“Under his leadership”介词短语作状语）
④Qian is known as the “father of China’s aerospace”.（“be known as”结构，明确其历史地位）
16．例文
My role model My role model is Helen Keller. I admire her greatly because she overcame huge difficulties.
Helen Keller became blind and deaf when she was very young. It was almost impossible for her to learn or communicate. However, with the help of her teacher, she worked incredibly hard. She learned to read, write, and even speak. Later, she graduated from college and became a famous writer and speaker.
From Helen Keller, I learn the importance of never giving up.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的榜样是谁以及为什么视其为榜样；
第二步，介绍自己的榜样的主要经历；
第三步，介绍自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下
②graduate from毕业于
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
Helen Keller became blind and deaf when she was very young.(when引导时间状语从句)
17．例文
My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.
I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先根据内容介绍自己的榜样是黄旭华，说明敬佩他的原因，包括他的工作经历、名言及爱国情怀。
第二步，再阐述从他身上学到的品质和对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be known as 被称为
②give up 放弃
③put...first 把……放在首位
[高分句型]
①My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.（过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰 Huang Xuhua）
②What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.”（what 引导的主语从句，that 引导表语从句）
18．例文：
Zhang Guimei was born in 1957 in a poor family in Heilongjiang. She studied hard when she was young to achieve her dreams.
In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. She believes education is the key to changing destiny. Despite many difficulties, she helped poor girls go to school and enter college. Now, her students work in different fields and serve society, realizing their dreams.
I am deeply moved by her story. First, she teaches us never to give up. Second, she shows that one person can make a big difference. She is like a flower blooming in winter, bringing hope to others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括人物简介、主要事迹以及个人感悟，考生需确保这些要点均得到充分阐述，并可适当发挥以丰富文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步：简要介绍张桂梅老师的基本情况，包括出生年份、家庭背景以及年少时的努力。
第二步：详细描述张桂梅老师的主要事迹，特别是她创建华坪女子高中的初衷、过程以及取得的成就。
第三步：分享个人对张桂梅老师事迹的感悟，至少包含两点，如她的坚持精神、对社会的贡献等。
[亮点词汇]
①be deeply moved by被……深深感动
②make a big difference产生重大影响
③bring hope to others为他人带来希望
[高分句型]
①She believes education is the key to changing destiny. (省略引导词的宾语从句)
②Despite many difficulties, she helped poor girls go to school and enter college. (Despite引导让步状语)
19．例文
I’m Li Hua, and I want to share the scientist I admire most—Yuan Longping.
Yuan Longping was a great scientist. He devoted all his life to hybrid rice research. In the past, many people suffered from hunger. But he was eager to change this situation. He worked day and night in the fields. Finally, he developed high-yield hybrid rice. This played a key role in feeding a large number of people not only in China but also around the world. He made a great contribution to global food security.
I really look up to him. His selfless dedication spirit deeply inspires me. Despite facing many difficulties, he never gave up. He just kept working hard to help more people get rid of hunger. Yuan Longping is not only a scientist but also a hero in my heart. I hope more people can learn from his spirit.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己敬仰的科学家是谁，以及他/她的成就；
第三步、介绍敬佩他/她的原因并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①suffer from受折磨
②play a key role in…在……中发挥关键作用
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④get rid of摆脱
[高分句型]
①I hope more people can learn from his spirit.(宾语从句)
20．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce Gu Haiyan. She is 26 years old and from a rural area in Bazhong, Sichuan. She is a Chinese wheelchair fencing athlete and she likes sports very much and often travels around the world.
I was deeply moved by her. No matter what the difficulties are, she can go forward. So, she is an active girl and never gives up her dreams. Difficulties are not the end of her life, but a chance for her growth and progress.
I think we should actively seek ways to deal with the difficulties. Firstly, it’s important to face them. Secondly, we can learn to relax ourselves such as doing sports, listening to music and chatting with friends. Finally, we should have a positive life view. As the old saying goes, action speaks louder than words. When we successfully deal with them, we can truly become stronger, more confident and more successful.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍辜海燕个人信息，包括年龄、出生地及爱好；
第二步，讲述辜海燕的优秀品质，如勇往直前、积极向上等，并阐述自己从她经历中获得的感悟；
第三步，结合辜海燕的品质，说明自己今后在面对困难等情况时的具体打算。
[亮点词汇]
①travel around the world环游世界
②give up放弃
③deal with处理；应对
④a positive life view积极的人生观
[高分句型]
①No matter what the difficulties are, she can go forward.（No matter what引导的让步状语从句）
②When we successfully deal with them, we can truly become stronger, more confident and more successful.（when引导的时间状语从句 ）
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