【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Teenage problems 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 3 Teenage problems
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业
伤害眼睛，不利健康
网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生
建议 适度使用智能手机
多花时间与家人、朋友交流
……
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones.
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2．请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions ”的英语短文。
内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定 ”
2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility)
3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。
4.优缺点只能选择一种写。
要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰；
2.不必逐字逐句翻译；
3.词数80词以上。
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3．新学期伊始，九年级的征程已经开启，中考的脚步也日渐临近。我校《校园英语》杂志社特面向全体初三同学征集稿件，可以谈谈你的学习计划、高效方法、心态调整小窍门，或是对这段特殊旅程的期待与准备。期待你的分享能为同龄人带来启发，也让我们在文字中共赴这场青春的挑战。请根据写作要求，以“Preparing for Grade 9”为题写一篇短文。
写作要求：
1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3. 内容完整、语句通顺，可适当发挥。
Preparing for Grade 9
Study Life Mind
make a weekly study plan discuss problems with classmates review key points daily practice with past tests … manage time wisely sleep 7 hours a day exercise twice a week eat fresh food … stay calm when busy encourage myself often learn from mistakes look forward to growth …
Grade 9 has started, and the Senior High School Entrance Examination (中考) is near. I’d like to share how I’ll prepare for this journey.
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4．请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。
Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。
作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点；
（2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词；
（3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Jack,
Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.
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Yours,
Dr. Lin
5．《中国青少年屏幕使用报告》显示：初中生的日均手机使用时间超3小时，68%的学生因此减少了体育运动和书籍阅读时间。我校英语社团因此发起“Less Screen Time, Brighter Future”的征文活动，请你根据自己的生活体验和日常观察，从个人、家庭或社会角度，分析和描述上述现象背后可能的原因，并提出1—2条具体建议。
要求：
1.80—120词;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
personal needs (have fun and relax, too tired to read/exercise, a feeling of satisfaction...)
life pressure (a sense of belonging, pressure from study...)
family environment (kids will follow...)
social environment (many interesting things online, too busy to take care of...)
advice (in my opinion, non-screen activities, join the reading/sports club, set app limits, spend more time with kids...)
A recent survey shows that 68% of students spend too much time on their phones.
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6．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Alex即将面临期末考试，因压力过大给你发来了下面这封邮件。请阅读他的邮件内容，并写一封回信为他提供建议。
TO: LIHUA@
SUBJECT: Exam Stress
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I’m really stressed about my final exams. There’s too much to remember, but I always forget most things right away. I keep worrying about failing, even though I work hard. I can’t sleep well either. What should I do Can you help me Thank you! Alex
请你回复以上邮件，内容包括：
1.make a study plan;
2.relax and get enough sleep;
3. ...
写作要求：
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Alex,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed.
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I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams!
Best wishes.
Li Hua
7．近年来，出国留学越来越普及，并且开始出现留学低龄化现象。不少家庭在孩子的初中阶段就要面临选择。请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的立场、观点和选择。
Advantages ◆learn English in a native environment
◆know about western cultures
◆…
Disadvantages ◆not independent enough
◆miss family so much
◆cost a lot of money
◆…
要求：
（1）短文中必须包括表格中的相应要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数：100词左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Studying Abroad, Yes or No
Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students.
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8．最近，你对学生的健康做了问卷调查，下面是调查中发现的主要问题及成因，请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，并提出一些建议。
问题 成因 建议
心理健康 感到紧张 (75%) 作业太多； 没有足够时间做自己喜欢的事情。 找时间放松
…… …… ……
身体健康 眼睛近视 (65%) 不好的学习习惯； 看电视太多。 ……
变胖 (8%) …… ……
…… …… ……
要求：
(1)文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节；
(2)文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)词数70左右。
参考词汇：mental health心理健康；physical health身体健康；stressed out非常焦虑不安的；get near-sighted眼睛近视
Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health.
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9．假如你是学校的心理咨询老师Miss Yang，你收到一封来自学生张华的来信，请根据信件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
Dear Miss Yang, I’m a student of Grade Nine. Next term, I will have an important exam. My parents really hope I can enter a good senior high school and they often make me study all day long. I feel tired every day. What’s worse, I had a quarrel with my best friend last week because I told him not to spend too much time playing computer games. At the same time, I am so worried about my grade that I eat a lot of junk food and can’t sleep well at night. So I put on a lot of weight and become very fat. What can I do Please help me. Best wishes. Love from Zhang Hua
提示：
要求：
1. 表达清楚，上下文连贯；
2. 要点齐全并适当发挥；
3. 词数：100词左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Zhang Hua,
I got your letter this week. And I know your trouble now.
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Best wishes.
Love from
Miss Yang
10．假设你的网友李华来信对你诉说，她上初三后感到压力很大，导致有时和父母吵架，向你寻求帮助。你回信给李华，提一些建议帮助她处理压力，并和父母好好相处。包括以下要点：
问题 压力 (pressure) 大；和父母争吵；
原因 1. 考试多，压力大；2. 父母期待高；
建议 1.多沟通， 学会尊重； 2. 尝试放松自己， 如…… 3.……
要求：
1. 80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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11．假设你是李平，请对你的笔友 Jim的邮件进行回复。
Hi, Li Ping!
Senior high school entrance examination (高中入学考试) is coming. I have a lot of stress. I don’t want to eat anything. I can’t sleep well at night. I always feel tired. I can’t listen to my teacher carefully. I’m afraid of the exams.
What should I do I am looking forward for your answers. Thank you.
Yours,
Jim
要求：
(1) 你的回信可从饮食、睡眠、运动和学习等方面给出建议；
(2) 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
(3) 词数80—100词，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems now.
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Yours,
Li Ping
12．每个人的成长过程都不可能一帆风顺。请你结合下面的图示信息，以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在初中生活里遇到的问题，并分享你的亲身经历以及解决措施。
要求:
(1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
(2)词数：80左右(短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
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13．岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣，韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着，赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近，你班就 “Our dreams” 展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream
Jimmy 想当侦探，找出真相，防范危险。
Millie 想当舞蹈家，搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I 想当青少年辅导员，帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想，努力学习，…… (自拟一点)
参考词汇：侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
防范危险 guard against any possible danger around us
搭建东西方艺术的桥梁 build a bridge between the East and the West
注意：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 不得出现真实姓名，校名等；省略号处作适当发挥；
3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
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14．假设你是Tom，你的中国朋友刘宇写信向你倾诉。他热爱跑步并且获得过多次比赛的大奖。长大后他想成为一名专业的跑步运动员。但是父母不支持他花大量时间练习，而是觉得他应该把所有时间用于文化学习，获得好的成绩，考上理想的高中学校。请你用英语给他回信，说一说你的看法和建议。
要点：
1. 向刘宇表示理解和支持；
2. 青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
3. 解决与父母矛盾的有效方法。
参考词汇：win big prizes, professional runner, communicate with
要求：
1. 文章须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter.
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Tom
15．《中学生英语报》开展了以“How to be a better teenager”为题的活动，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年。现在该报正在向各校学生征文。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇征文，可适当发挥。
要点如下：
◆在学校：上课认真听讲；按时完成作业；不准打耳洞；不准带手机；
◆在家里：帮助做家务；不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通；
◆在公众场所：应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐。
参考词汇：in public places在公共场所；throw rubbish 扔垃圾。
要求：
1.所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的人名或校名。
3.词数不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school,
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By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!
16．智能手机让生活和学习更加便利，但是过度的使用也会给青少年带来很多问题。你校英文周刊以“Problems and Advice on Smart Phones”为题，向同学们征稿。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇英文短文投稿。
Problems Advice
眼部疲劳，影响视力； ……（请补充至少一个问题） 1.制定使用规则； 2.增加户外运动； 3.……
注意：
1.短文应包括表格中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Problems and Advice on Smart Phones
Nowadays, smart phones make life and learning easier. However, they also bring problems to teenagers.
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17．“谁言年少无烦恼，一时自有一时忧。”成长的烦恼如同影子般伴随着我们，正是有了这些烦恼，我们才成为了现在的自己。感谢这些烦恼，让我们一步步成长。请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇文章。
1．What problem did you meet
2．How did you solve it
3．What have you learned from it
注意：
1．80词左右；
2．不要出现考生本人信息。
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18．知物由学，学习对青少年有着极为重要的意义，学习一项技能可以帮助我们很多。请你结合图示信息，根据下面的写作内容和写作要求用英语写一篇短文，向校报英语专栏投稿。下面所列举的是一些生活中重要的技能，仅供参考！
Life skills: keep healthy/ work with others/ solve problems / manage time…
1.写作内容：
1)介绍一项你认为最为重要的技能；
2)说明这项技能最为重要的原因；
3)就如何提高这项技能给出建议。
2.写作要求：
1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100 左右。
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19．假设你是Diana，你收到了来自你的笔友Helen的一封信，信中描述了令她困扰的问题并向你求助。请你根据这封信的内容写一封回信。
Dear Diana,
I needed some new shoes to wear to a party. But I didn’t have enough money to buy any. So I asked my sister if I could wear her new shoes. She refused to let me wear them because she bought them for her sixteenth birthday party. They were expensive. She saved up a lot of money to buy them. But I took them when she was out and wore them to the party, Then on my way home, I fell, and one of the shoes was broken.
I did not tell her about it because I did not want her to be angry with me. Now I feel terrible. Should I tell her about it Should I pay to buy a new pair for her
Yours,
Helen
内容提示：
1. 你对Helen所提及事情的看法或观点；
2. 提出两点或以上解决问题的建议。
注意：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右，作文的标题和开头已给出。
Dear Helen,
You have made a mistake.
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Best wishes,
Diana
20．假定你是李华，请阅读以下信息卡，写一篇发言稿，在英文课上与同学交流，内容包括介绍手机这项发明，不同人(Jason和Anna)对青少年使用手机的看法，你对青少年用手机的看法和理由。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（2）词数100左右，开头已经给出，不算入总词数，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
The mobile phone 1. invented by Martin Cooper 2. invented in 1973 3. invented in America I think the mobile phone is very useful in our daily lives. —JasonI’m not allowed to use the mobile phone too much because my mom thinks it will get in the way of study. But isn’t it too strict —Anna
I’m glad to make a speech here. I would like to talk about the mobile phone.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people.
Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害；
第二步，提出远离手机的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②as a result结果
③switch off关闭
[高分句型]
①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句)
2．例文：
Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions
In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions.
Allowing teenagers to make decisions can bring many benefits. Firstly, it helps cultivate their independence. When they face choices and solve problems on their own, they gradually learn to rely on themselves. Secondly, it enables them to develop a sense of responsibility. Since they make the decisions, they will be more willing to take responsibility for the consequences.
In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，探讨是否应允许青少年自主做决定；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应围绕是否支持青少年自主做决定，选择阐述优点或缺点，注意突出写作重点，不必逐字逐句翻译。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定”的观点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。若选择支持，则从培养青少年的独立性、责任感等优点方面进行论述；若选择反对，则从青少年缺乏经验易出错、引发家庭矛盾等缺点方面进行论述；
第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点，强调其重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s own独自地
②be willing to愿意
③take responsibility for对……负责
④in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.（动名词短语作主语）
3．例文
Grade 9 has started, and the Senior High School Entrance Examination (中考) is near. I’d like to share how I’ll prepare for this journey.
In study, I’ll make a weekly study plan to organize my learning. When meeting problems, I’ll discuss them with classmates. Also, I’ll review key points daily to keep knowledge fresh. Practicing with past tests is another way to get ready.
In life, managing time wisely is important. I’ll ensure 7 hours of sleep daily and exercise twice a week. Eating fresh food will keep me healthy too.
In mind, I’ll stay calm when I’m busy. I’ll often encourage myself and learn from mistakes. I look forward to growing through this challenging period.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：需包含学习、生活、心态等方面的准备要点，围绕备战九年级和中考展开，内容完整且逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明九年级已开启且中考临近，表明要分享自己的准备方式；
第二步，分别从学习、生活、心态三个方面详细阐述准备举措；
第三步，表达对在这段挑战时期获得成长的期待，总结准备的核心方向。
[亮点词汇]
①organize组织
②ensure确保
③challenging具有挑战性的
[高分句型]
①When meeting problems, I’ll discuss them with classmates. (“when+现在分词”结构作时间状语)
4．例文:
Dear Jack,
Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much. You spend too much time on computer games and phones. Besides, you hardly communicate with your family and friends. I have some advice for you. Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. In addition, more communication also works.
All in all, it is necessary for you to think about your parents’ feelings and try your best to deal with the problems. Try to share the housework with them. I hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Wishing you a happy and successful junior high school life!
Yours,
Dr. Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点需根据思维导图提示，给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己知道对方有一些问题，谈论对方的问题并给出建议；
第二步，表达对对方的期望；
第三步，书写结尾，祝愿对方有一个开心且成功的初中生活。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about对……担忧
②spend time on sth在某事上花时间
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
[高分句型]
①I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much.（that引导宾语从句）
②Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. （so that引导状语从句）
5．例文
A recent survey shows that 68% of students spend too much time on their phones. There are several reasons for this. For personal needs, students use phones to have fun and relax after tiring studies, so they are too tired to read or exercise. Socially, there are many interesting things online, attracting them a lot.
To solve this, we can join reading or sports clubs to replace phone time. Families can also set app limits together and spend more time doing activities like hiking. Less screen time will bring us a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已在题目中给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引用数据点明话题。
第二步，说明这种现象产生的原因。
第三步，提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time on在……上花费时间
②attract吸引
③replace替代
[高分句型]
①To solve this, we can join reading or sports clubs to replace phone time.(不定式表目的)
6．参考范文
Dear Alex,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. Don’t worry. It’s normal to feel this way before exams. Here are some suggestions that might help.
First, make a study plan. Break down your subjects into smaller parts and study them one by one. This way, you will feel less stressed. Second, try to relax. You can listen to some soft music or take a short walk outside to feel calmer. Also, don’t forget to get enough sleep. A good night’s sleep can help your brain work better. Lastly, believe in yourself. You’ve already done a lot of preparation, so you can make it! If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. They may give you some useful advice.
I hope you’ll feel better soon. Good luck with your exams!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据邮件内容进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，给出建议；
第二步，从学习计划、放松、睡眠和相信自己方面给出具体的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①one by one一个接一个地
②believe in oneself相信某人自己
③talk to sb和某人交流
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions that might help. (that引导的定语从句)
②If you are still nervous, talk to your teachers or friends. (if引导的条件状语从句)
7．例文
Studying Abroad, Yes or No
Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students. There are many advantages. Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning. Students can learn English in a native environment. Besides, students can know more about western cultures. What’s more, they can learn more modern technology. But there are also some disadvantages of going abroad. For example, teenagers are not independent enough. They miss their family so much. They can’t take good care of themselves because of lacking of life experience, and they feel lonely. And most importantly, it costs a lot of money for them to study abroad.
In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出国留学的优势；
第二步，描述出国留学的劣势；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more popular 越来越受欢迎
②foreign language learning 外语学习
③native environment 母语环境
④western cultures 西方文化
⑤modern technology 现代技术
[高分句型]
①Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning.（动名词短语作主语）
②In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study.（not...but...连接两个表语从句）
8．例文
Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health.
About mental health, 75 percent of the students feel stressed out. They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax and try to make a balance between work and play.
As for physical health, 65 percent of the students don’t have good study habits and they watch TV too much, so they get near-sighted. They should do homework or read in a correct way. Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. It’s better for them to have more healthy food and do some exercise every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对调查的介绍；
第二步，针对心理和身体两方面介绍调查结果并给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stressed out 紧张的
②make a balance 保持平衡
③in a correct way 用一种正确的方式
[高分句型]
①They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing.（并列结构和宾语从句）
②Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. （原因状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Zhang Hua,
I got your letter this week. And l know your trouble now. According to your letter, I learnt that you are concerned too much about your exams and that results in your worries. To deal with this problem, I suggest you following my ideas below.
First of all, communication is the key to reducing the pressure from your parents. You should tell them your worries and get more support from them. You had better ask them not to put too much pressure on you. Besides, hard work is always necessary and essential since you expect good achievements in exams. On the other hand, health is the same important for a good score. Therefore, you had better do some sports after school to keep you healthy as well as make you relaxed. More importantly, good health and achievements can never go without good sleeping. To sleep well, why not drink a cup of milk before going to bed
That’s all for my advice.
Best wishes.
Love from
Miss Yang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明张华所面临的问题；
第二步，根据问题提出具体的建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①according to根据
②deal with处理
③ask sb. not to do sth.让某人不要做某事
[高分句型]
I learnt that you are concerned too much about your exams and that results in your worries. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文
Dear Li Hua,
In your letter, you mentioned that you had been feeling a lot of pressure since starting Grade 9, and that you often quarrelled with your parents. I am sorry to hear that, but many teenagers share similar trouble with you, so you are not alone.
Your pressure may result from many things, such as too many exams or the high expectation from both your parents and yourself. Realizing the source of pressure, you may find it easier to get rid of it. Here are my suggestions.
To begin with, as a child, you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often, which is very helpful to avoid arguments. What’s more, you had better learn to control yourself better. Don’t spend too much time playing computer games, so that your parents will be more satisfied with you instead of worrying about you. Besides, it’s a good idea for you to do some exercise, such as climbing the Baiyun Mountain at weekend. This will help you relax and forget your pressure for a while.
In my opinion, part of growing up is learning to live with pressure and trying your best to deal with it. I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and lead a happy life.
Yours,
Linda
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步：表明写作意图，分析压力的来源；
第二步：根据具体问题，给出建议；
第三步：书写结语，表达期望。
【亮点词汇】①get rid of去除
②communicate with sb与某人交流
③had better do sth.最好做某事
【高分句型】①To begin with, as a child, you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often, which is very helpful to avoid arguments. （定语从句）
②I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and lead a happy life. （宾语从句）
11．例文
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems now. I know how you feel and I hope you can relax yourself. I’ll give you some advice.
First, you should eat some fresh vegetables and fruits. They are good for your health. Second, you should have enough sleep. Third, if you feel tired, you can go out to do some sports. After some exercise, you will feel better. Last but not least, don’t be afraid to ask your teachers or good friends for help. They will give you help. You should know what you are weak in and solve the problems.
Everything will be e on!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表达对Jim的关心，并表示理解他的困境；
第二步，从饮食、睡眠、运动和学习等方面给出建议；
第三步，结尾给予鼓励，表达积极向上的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……好
②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
③be weak in在……方面薄弱
[高分句型]
①Third, if you feel tired, you can go out to do some sports. (if引导的条件状语从句)
③ You should know what you are weak in and solve the problems. (what引导的宾语从句)
12．One possible version
Growing up
During my middle school life, I have met some problems and I have tried my best to deal with them. Let me share some of my own experiences with you.
I used to have problems in math. I found it difficult to understand some complex problems and my grades were not good. Besides, I don’t get along well with my parents. I often argue with them. I felt very frustrated. Then I decided to change the situation. I went to ask my teacher for help. I also bought some extra exercise books and practiced a lot. Besides, I tried to have a talk with my parents when we had different opinions. Gradually, my math grades improved and I became more confident. I got along well with my parents, too.
In the future, I will continue to work hard and face difficulties bravely. I believe I can grow up better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：题目要求以“成长”为题，结合图表信息，结合自己的经历，谈谈自己在初中生活中遇到的问题，并讲述如何解决这些问题的。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，描述自己的经历，包括学业问题，以及与父母相处的问题，并谈谈自己是如何解决所遇到的问题的；
第三步，最后表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①used to 过去常常
②ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
③get along well with 与……相处得好
[高分句型]
①I found it difficult to understand some complex problems and my grades were not good.（it作形式宾语）
②Gradually, my math grades improved and I became more confident.（形容词的比较级）
13．例文
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
Jimmy wants to be a detective. He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth. In addition, he hopes we can guard against any possible danger around us.
Millie would like to be a dancer. All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet. So she insists that she will build a bridge between the East and the West by dancing.
As for me, I prefer to be a youth worker, especially to help teenagers solve their stress. I’m willing to give them valuable suggestions on how to deal with teenage problems.
In order to realize our dreams, we must study hard to improve ourselves. Moreover, we should be brave enough to take on new challenges any time in our daily life. Then we can succeed in making our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并要求包含为实现梦想所采取的行动。考生需围绕这些要点展开，确保内容全面，并适当发挥以丰富文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，直接点明文章主题，即关于梦想的讨论报告；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先分别介绍Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并简要说明各自梦想背后的意义或动机；
第三步，书写结语。强调梦想的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①solve mysteries解开谜团
②guard against预防，提防
③have a real gift for对……有天赋
[高分句型]
①He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth.（并列句）
②All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet.（宾语从句）
14．例文
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter. I really understand how you feel. It’s also normal for your parents to stop you from being a professional runner. After all, your schoolwork is really important and it is your duty to enter a good university. However, I have nothing against your training.
I think teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. First of all, hobbies will not get in the way of schoolwork. Instead, they can make us full of courage and energy. What’s more, we are serious enough to be responsible for ourselves.
I hope you can communicate with your parents so that they can consider your feelings seriously. Besides, there is no doubt that you are supposed to balance your training and schoolwork. Only then will you solve your problems. Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，向刘宇表示理解和支持；
第二步，阐述观点：青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
第三步，谈谈如何解决与父母矛盾的有效方法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①after all毕竟
②make one’s own decisions自己做决定
③be responsible for为……负责
④communicate with sb与某人交流
[高分句型]
①I think teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions.（宾语从句）
②I hope you can communicate with your parents so that they can consider your feelings seriously.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③Besides, there is no doubt that you are supposed to balance your training and schoolwork.（that引导的同位语从句）
④Only then will you solve your problems.（倒装句）
15．例文
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time. Besides, we are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.
At home, we are supposed to help our parents with housework. Moreover, we are not supposed to talk back to our parents. It’s impolite. We are expected to communicate with them more often. Through communication, we can understand each other better.
In public places, we should offer our seats to the old. We can’t throw rubbish everywhere. What’s more, we’d better not listen to music that’s loud.
By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourselves but also make the world a better place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，因为是在讨论普遍适用的行为准则；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括在学校、家里和公众场所的行为规范。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并可以适当发挥，增加细节或例子来支持论点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头部分，通过提问“But what can we do to be better ”引出主题，即如何成为更好的青少年，并紧接着提出“Here are my suggestions.”来引出下文的具体建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。在学校部分，从“上课认真听讲；按时完成作业”这两个基本的学习要求出发，强调它们对于成为优秀青少年的重要性。接着，提出“不准打耳洞；不准带手机”等校规，说明这些规定有助于青少年专注于学习和保持学生形象；在家里部分，强调“帮助做家务”可以培养青少年的责任感和独立性，同时指出“不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通”是建立和谐家庭关系的关键；在公众场所部分通过“应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐”等行为规范，展现青少年的礼貌、环保意识和对他人的尊重；
第三步，书写结语。在结尾部分，通过“By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!”这句话总结全文，强调遵循这些建议对个人成长和社会进步的积极作用，同时呼应开头，使文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②on time准时
③get one’s ears pierced打耳洞
[高分句型]
①We should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.（and连接两个并列的谓语）
②We are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.（or连接两个并列的不定式短语作宾语补足语）
③It’s impolite for us not to talk back to our parents.（It's+形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型）
16．例文
Problems and Advice on Smart Phones
Nowadays, smart phones make life and learning easier. However, they also bring problems to teenagers. First, looking at the screen for a long time can make our eyes tired and hurt our eyesight. Second, some students spend too much time playing games or watching videos, and they have less time to study or do other useful things.
To solve these problems, we can make some rules. For example, we can only use smart phones for one hour a day. We should also do more outdoor activities, like playing sports or going for a walk. It’s also a good idea to talk to our parents or teachers if we have trouble controlling ourselves.
If we make good use of smart phones, they can be helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍过度使用手机带来的问题；
第二步，介绍自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②go for a walk散步
③have trouble doing sth.做某事有麻烦
④make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
①First, looking at the screen for a long time can make our eyes tired and hurt our eyesight. (动名词作主语)
②It’s also a good idea to talk to our parents or teachers if we have trouble controlling ourselves. (if引导的条件状语从句)
17．例文
I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为一般过去时；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，描述遇到的问题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，总结学到的经验。
[亮点词汇]
additionally 此外
[高分句型]
I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. (不定式作真正的宾语)
18．例文
Among various life skills, problem-solving stands out as one of the most essential abilities for teenagers. It equips us to tackle challenges in studies, relationships, and daily life, shaping us into resilient individuals.
Problem-solving is vital because it fosters critical thinking and adaptability. Whether facing academic pressure or conflicts with friends, analyzing situations calmly and finding solutions helps us grow intellectually and emotionally. Moreover, this skill prepares us for an unpredictable future, where challenges will inevitably arise.
To improve problem-solving skills, start by identifying the root cause of issues instead of focusing only on symptoms. Break complex problems into smaller, manageable steps. Practice brainstorming multiple solutions and evaluating their pros and cons. Additionally, learn from failures—each mistake is a chance to refine strategies. Collaborating with others also broadens perspectives and inspires creative approaches.
By nurturing problem-solving skills early, teenagers can confidently navigate life’s uncertainties and turn obstacles into opportunities for growth.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题。文章开头直接表明解决问题的技能在青少年所需的各种生活技能中十分关键；
第二步，具体分析解决问题技能重要的原因，然后详细说明提升技能的具体做法；
第三步，书写结语。总结培养解决问题技能对青少年的积极影响，呼吁青少年重视并培养这一技能。
［亮点词汇］
①problem-solving skills 解决问题的技能
②stand out 突出；显眼
③essential 至关重要的
④tackle challenges 应对挑战
⑤academic pressure 学业压力
［高分句型］
①Problem-solving is vital because it fosters critical thinking and adaptability.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Moreover, this skill prepares us for an unpredictable future, where challenges will inevitably arise.（where引导的定语从句）
19．例文
Dear Helen，
You have made a mistake. I think you did something wrong. You shouldn’t wear your sister’s shoes without asking her permission. You should tell your sister about it because it is important to be honest. You should tell her what happened and say sorry to her. I think she’ll forgive you. Then you ask her if you should pay to buy a new pair for her. If she needs a new pair of shoes, you should buy her a new pair.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. Good luck.
Best wishes，
Diana
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：需要根据给出的内容提示进行展开，对Helen的问题进行分析并给出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分析Helen的行为错误：明确指出Helen的行为问题，并给出理由；
第二步，提出解决方案：给出具体的建议，包括坦白错误、道歉、以及赔偿损失；
第三步，表达鼓励和祝愿：最后表达对Helen的鼓励和祝愿，希望她能解决问题。
[亮点词汇]
①permission许可
②forgive原谅
③advice建议
[高分句型]
①You should tell your sister about it because it is important to be honest. (原因状语从句)
②If she needs a new pair of shoes, you should buy her a new pair. (条件状语从句)
20．例文
I’m glad to make a speech here. I would like to talk about the mobile phone. The mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in America in 1973. It has become an important part of our daily lives.
Jason thinks the mobile phone is very useful. However, Anna isn’t allowed to use it too much as her mom believes it may affect her study.
In my opinion, mobile phones can be both helpful and harmful to teenagers. On the one hand, they help us communicate with others easily and access a lot of information. We can also use them to study, like looking up words or watching educational videos. On the other hand, if we use them too much, it may indeed have a bad influence on our studies and health. So, as long as we use mobile phones properly, they can be a great tool for us.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意适当发挥，使文章的内容更加完整，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍手机的发明以及手机在人们生活中的重要性；
第二步，简单阐述Jason和Anna对青少年使用手机的看法；
第三步，阐述自己的个人观点，详细阐述使用手机对青少年的生活、学习等方面的利和弊，表明合理使用手机，让它成为有用的工具；
第四步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
②communicate with与……交流、与……沟通
③on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Jason thinks the mobile phone is very useful.（宾语从句）
②So, as long as we use mobile phones properly, they can be a great tool for us.（条件状语从句）
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