【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Family life 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培沪教牛津版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教牛津版Unit 3 Family life
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的表姐Amy在美国留学，你正和她在微信聊天，她想知道你的家人正在做什么，天气如何，请你根据以下提示，编辑信息回复她。
时间 晚上八点
天气 有点热
活动 爸爸在研究如何使用DeepSeek来辅助他的工作。 妈妈在厨房洗碗。 哥哥在房间写作业。 我……
要求：
1.短文内容要包含以上提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2.书写工整、规范，70词左右；
3.不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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2．随着绿色生活的理念深入人心，目前深圳很多社区里出现了衣服回收箱(clothes recycling bin)。人们把用过的旧衣服清洁后放入回收箱，一部分衣服捐给有需要的人们，一部分由工厂回收再利用。
假如你是李华，《英语学习报》请你写一份倡议书，号召更多的人加入这个行动中来。
倡议书要包括：(1)衣服回收箱的使用情况；
(2)衣服回收行动的目的以及你的倡议。
注意：(1)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
(2)语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
(3)词数：80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
It has been a lifestyle for people to go green in communities.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．寒假将至，欢乐来袭! 假如你是李华，你在寒假会和家人一起做很多有趣的事，如看春晚 (Spring Festival Gala) 玩游戏等，请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Alex，分享你和家人的假期活动，并谈谈喜爱的原因与感受。
内容提示：
What activities do you often do with your family during winter holiday
Why do you like these activities
How do you feel when doing them
Is there anything special about it
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming!
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你们班级将要举行“健康家，好生活”的英文主题班会。请你根据以下思维导图的内容，写一篇英文发言稿，介绍你家庭的健康生活方式。
注意：
1. 在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
4. 开头与结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my family’s healthy lifestyle with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
5．Teen Life Magazine 杂志向青少年征稿，请你根据以下图式，结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，描述你的家庭生活，并表达你的观点。
要求：（1）短文应包括图中要点，并适当拓展。（2）词数80-120左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总字数，文中不得出现个人信息。
My family life
Family life is important for us. I would like to
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6．俗话说，没有规矩，不成方圆。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展征文活动，题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，文章包括以下内容：
1. 例举两条家规，如工作日不能玩电脑游戏，十一点之前必须睡觉等等；
2. 这些家规对你的影响，如养成良好的生活习惯，保持身体健康等等；
3. 你将如何回报你的家庭，如帮父母做力所能及的家务活，理解并爱父母等等。
要求：
1. 词数80—120；
2. 文中须包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺、逻辑清晰、书写工整；
4. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息；
5. 不能抄袭试卷原文。
参考词汇：play computer games 玩电脑游戏；go to sleep 睡觉；develop a...habit 养成……习惯；keep healthy 保持健康；help do housework 帮忙做家务；understand 理解
Follow and Grow
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7．你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“Family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示，选择不少于四个方面，写一篇短文，介绍你的家庭生活。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My family life
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8．如今，劳动教育在中国得到了广泛的关注和重视。学校和家长都一致赞成学生应当适当的分担家务劳动。假如你们学校报刊正以 “我眼中的家务劳动” 为主题向学生征文。
请你根据下面的提示和要求写一篇英语小短文。
提示：
l. What kind of housework do you often do at home
2. How often do you do housework
3. What’s your opinion about doing housework as students
要求：
1必须包括所有提示内容，要有适当发挥：
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；80词左右。
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9．Jack is your pen-pal. He wants to know about your family rules. Now let’s reply an e-mail to him.
邮件要点：
1. What family rules do you have (What-examples)
2. Do you agree with the rules Why and why not (opinions and reasons)
3. How do you think the rules should be changed (How-advice)
写作要求：
1.80词左右，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3.不得使用真实姓名和校名等；
4.注意邮件格式。
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10．以“（我身边的爱）”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
爱你的人 爱的表现
父母 为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师 传授知识；照顾你……
同学 一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友 在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……
参考词汇：receive love，cook，teach knowledge，get on well with…， chat online，share，thank
要求：
（1）根据提示内容，适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数不得少于80词。
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11．假如你是李华，过去你的父母对你要求十分严格，有许多家规。上周六，你和父母就此进行了一次沟通，你将自己的感受告诉了他们：你感到很累，需要放松。你明白了学习的重要性，也理解父母想让你更好……沟通后你的父母也理解了你，并制定了新的家规。你认识到多和父母沟通的益处。现在你感到放松，变得更快乐。请你根据以上信息并参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英文短文。
In the past Now
Family rules 1. 从不允许你和朋友外出娱乐； 2. 周末让你上很多课； 3. 不允许你使用互联网。 1. 一周被允许和朋友出去玩一次； 2. 周末除了学习还可以做喜欢的事； 3. 每周可以使用互联网一小时。
内容包括：
1. 合理运用题干及表格内给出的所有信息；
2. 体现过去与现在的对比。
要求：
1. 可适当增加细节；
2. 词数80-100词；
3. 文中不得出现考生姓名和学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m Li Hua, a teenager from No. 1 Middle School. In the past, my parents made many rules for me.
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12．俗话说：“无规矩不成方圆。”为了使我们健康成长，父母制定了一些家规。以My Family Rules 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对这些规则的看法，并说说他们是否合理。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
2. 简要说明理由。
3. 词数：不少于80词。
My Family Rules
As a saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without standards.” Every family has rules, so does mine.
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13．假如你是李华，你是一位中学生，你在家里有很多规矩需要遵守。请根据下面内容要求，介绍一下你家里的这些规矩，并且谈一下你是否支持它们并说出原因。短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，约80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要求：
1. 不准在下午六点之后到家；
2. 不准打耳洞及不准11点后睡觉；
3. 不准选择自己的衣服；
参考词汇：打耳洞：get ears pierced；选择：choose；同意：agree with
As a middle school student, I have many rules at home.
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That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
14．假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。
(1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。
(2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。
(3)你向妈妈做了解释。
(4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间……
(5)你认为……
参考词汇：搜索 search for 刷短视频 browse short-form videos 许可 permission
要求：
(1)词数：80~100个。
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Last Saturday evening,
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15．假设你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展“好家规伴我成长”主题演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你家有哪些家规，以及它们对你的影响。
提示词语：be allowed to, honest, deal with, be responsible for（对……有责任）
提示问题： What family rules do you have
How do they influence you
注意：1.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellows,
I am glad to be here, telling you about my family rules.
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Thanks for listening.
16．每个家庭都会用规则来约束孩子们。父母用自己的经历来帮助孩子们健康成长，少走弯路。但有时孩子们不理解父母的要求，就会引发矛盾，甚至争吵。假如你是李华，你对自己的家规也有一些不能理解之处。你打算写一封邮件给你的笔友 Tom，谈谈你家的家规，疏解一下你的心情，并询问他对他自己的家规有什么看法。
参考词汇：
be allowed to, be strict with, care about, future, think of ,...
要求：
1.邮件应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Tom.
How’s everything going I want to share something about my family rules and hear your thoughts on your own family rules.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
17．在初中两年多的英语学习中，同学们从课本中学习了有关“Family”、“Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environment”、“Volunteering”等话题和短语、词组。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和短语、词组，依据以下内容要点，写一篇题为“I’m Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。
内容要点：
1.全家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2.邻里和睦，礼貌待人；
3.爱护环境，从我做起；
4.积极参加志愿活动，帮助贫困儿童。
要求：
1.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。
2.80词左右，语法正确。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I
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18．假如前几天你的父母出差，你独自在家，你是怎样保证自身安全并照顾好自己的？请根据以下提示并发挥合理的想象，写一篇80～100词的英语短文。
提示：
1. 你独自在家时有什么感受？
2. 保证自己安全的好办法有哪些？
3. 你学会了哪些生活技能？
4. 父母回到家时对你有什么评价？
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19．假定你是沈阳市九年级学生李辉，你的新朋友Nathan想了解你家庭生活方面的情况。请根据下面提示给他写一封邮件。
内容包括
1. 家庭成员；
2. 家务分配与家规；
3. 你对家庭的感受。
注意
1. 词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy to make friends with you. You wanted to know about my family life, so let me introduce it to you.
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I hope to receive your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hui
20．家是远行归来时的避风港，家是暗夜道路旁的明灯，家是寒冷冬日中的暖阳。家庭生活对每一个孩子的成长是至关重要的。假如你是李辉，学校以“我爱我家”为主题开展演讲比赛，请你写一份英文发言稿来介绍你的家庭生活。
内容包括：
1. 总体介绍：(成员和家庭财产方面)
2. 具体描述：(家务活、家庭活动和家规方面)
3. 你对家庭的感受。
具体要求：
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Hello, everyone. It’s my pleasure to share my family life here.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Hi, Amy! It’s 8 p.m. here, and the weather is a bit hot. My dad is studying how to use DeepSeek to help with his work. My mom is washing dishes in the kitchen, and my brother is doing homework in his room. As for me, I’m chatting with you and also reviewing my English notes.
How about you What’s the weather like there Hope you’re doing well!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，进行简单的问候，结合所给提示，一一回复相关内容，包括时间、天气以及家庭成员各自正在做的事情；
第二步，以提问的方式来表示关切，询问对方“你呢”以及“那里的天气如何”等，最后表祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① a bit 有一点儿
② help with 帮助解决，帮助
③ as for 关于，至于
④ chat with sb. 与某人聊天
[高分句型]
① My dad is studying how to use DeepSeek to help with his work. (“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
② Hope you’re doing well! (祝福语)
2．例文
Ladies and Gentlemen,
It has been a lifestyle for people to go green in communities. There are a lot of clothes recycling bins appearing in communities in Shenzhen. Many people put their clean, old clothes into clothes recycling bins. By doing this people donate some of their clothes to others in need. And factories make use of these clothes. They are able to recycle them as well.
In my opinion, the use of these clothes recycling bins not only shows our love to others but also helps us save a lot of energy of the world. So I hope you can come and join us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示信息讲述衣服回收箱的使用情况；
第三步，衣服回收行动的目的以及你的倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①put … into …把……放进……
②make use of利用
③as well也
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of clothes recycling bins appearing in communities in Shenzhen. (there be句型)
②In my opinion, the use of these clothes recycling bins not only shows our love to others but also helps us save a lot of energy of the world. (not only … but also …句型)
3．
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming! During the winter holiday, I often do many interesting activities with my family. Watching the Spring Festival Gala is one of our favorite activities. We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger. Besides, we love playing games like card games and board games. It’s a great way to have fun and relax.
I like these activities because they bring our family closer and create lovely memories. They also allow us to spend quality time together, away from the busy routine. I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.
One special thing about celebrating the winter holiday in China is the emphasis on family gatherings. To me, being with family is the most precious part of the holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题，介绍和家人的假期活动；
第二步，介绍喜欢这些活动的原因以及感受；。
第三步，谈论假期特别的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①away from远离
②have fun玩得开心
③the emphasis on强调
[高分句型]
①I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.（原因状语从句）
②We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger.（定语从句）
4．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share my family’s healthy lifestyle with you. It’s important to have a balanced and nutritious diet to stay healthy. We never eat chips or drink coffee. My parents prepare meals that are rich in fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins. Sleep is crucial for overall health. We sleep nine hours every night. And before sleeping, we turn off our electronic devices. I play sports with parents every night. On weekends, we go hiking.
It’s important for us to have a healthy lifestyle. Try to have a healthy lifestyle!
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己家庭在饮食、睡眠和运动上的健康的生活方式；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy保持健康
②be rich in富于
③be crucial for…对……至关重要
④go hiking去远足
[高分句型]
①My parents prepare meals that are rich in fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins.(that引导定语从句)
5．例文
My family life Family life is important for us. I would like to tell you something about my family life. There are three people in my family: my mother, my father and I. In order to help me grow healthily, my parents make some family rules. First, we must honest to others. Second, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. My family members keep the tradition to have the gathering every weekend. These activities help us to keep the close relationship. We communicate with each other and share our opinion. I cherish the close and supportive relationships among my family members, which make me feel loved and valued. To improve my family life, I want to spend quality time together with my family members.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，介绍自己的家庭生活是什么样子的；
第三步、介绍你最喜欢家庭生活的哪一点。
第四步、介绍如何改善家庭生活。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to 想要
②in order to为了
③such as例如
④communicate with sb.与某人沟通
[高分句型]
①I cherish the close and supportive relationships among my family members, which make me feel loved and valued.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．例文
Follow and Grow
Every family has its own rules, and so does mine. My parents have made clear rules for me. For example, I am not allowed to play computer games on weekdays, and I must go to sleep before 11:00 pm. These rules have had a great impact on me. They help me develop good living habits and keep me healthy, both mentally and physically.
To repay my family, I will try to help my parents with the housework, such as washing dishes and cleaning my room. I will also show more understanding and love to them because I know they make these rules for my benefit. I am grateful for their care and guidance, and I hope to make them proud of me as I grow up.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达每个家庭都有自己的家规；
第二步，例举两条家规并介绍这些家规对自己的影响；
第三步，介绍自己将如何回报家庭。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
③help sb. with sth.帮助某人某事
④be grateful for对……感激
[高分句型]
①For example, I am not allowed to play computer games on weekdays, and I must go to sleep before 11:00 pm. (and连接的并列句)
②I will also show more understanding and love to them because I know they make these rules for my benefit. (because引导原因状语从句)
7．例文
My family life
I feel that my family is very happy. I love my family because it gives me a lot of warmth.
There are five people in my family: my parents, my grandparents and me. My mom loves to sing, especially every weekend when she fills our home with beautiful tunes. My dad enjoys telling stories and helping us solve problems using his wisdom and experience. My favorite family activity is climbing. It’s healthy for us, and we also have fun doing sports on the mountain.
Sometimes I feel sad or confused. But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice. Their support makes me feel strong, even when I’m facing difficulties.
I am very proud of my family, and I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍在家中的感受；
第二步，详细介绍自己的家庭成员、最喜欢的家庭活动等；
第三步，介绍自己遇到问题时的解决方法及对家人未来的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②have fun玩得开心
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
④be proud of为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
Every family has lots of housework.
I often help my parents do housework on weekends such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience.
I think doing housework is a kind of exercise. And I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. As students, though we are busy with our study, we should learn to do some of it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出家务活这个主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己做哪些家务，以及做家务的频率；
第三步，表达自己对于学生做家务的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②a kind of一种
③take good care of sb.照顾好某人
[高分句型]
①I think doing housework is also a kind of exercise.（宾语从句和动名词作主语）
②As students, though we are busy with our study, we should learn to do some of it.（让步状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Jack,
How is everything going
As an old saying goes, no rules no standards. So my parents make a number of family rules for me. For example, I have to eat vegetables and fruits and keep away from junk food. Besides, I am not allowed to watch TV at home. Here are my opinions.
I agree with the first rule because developing a good eating habit can help me keep in good health and also make me much stronger. However, I disagree with the second rule that stops me from watching TV. On the one hand, I need some time to relax myself after a week on study. On the other hand, watching TV is also a good way to increase my knowledge and expand my horizon. In order to improve this rule, I suggest that I should be given an hour to watch TV on weekends if I finish my homework on time.
All in all, although the family rules are strict, they can not only make me better but also develop my independence.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。首先问候，引出关于家庭规则的话题；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述你的家庭规则，你的观点和理由以及你的建议等；
③第三步，书写结语。总结感受，并表示期待对方回信。
[亮点词汇]
①keep away from远离
②agree with同意
③In order to为了
④on time按时
⑤On the other hand...On the other hand一方面……另一方面
[高分句型]
①I agree with the first rule because developing a good eating habit can help me keep in good health and also make me much stronger.（原因状语从句）
②In order to improve this rule, I suggest that I should be given an hour to watch TV on weekends if I finish my homework on time.（宾语从句、条件状语从句 ）
②All in all, although the family rules are strict, they can not only make me better but also develop my independence.（让步状语从句 ）
10．例文
Love Around Me There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends.
In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.
I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇明意，点出自己要写的内容。
第二步，介绍父母、老师、同学和朋友的爱。
第三步，表明自己心意，谢谢来自周围的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of 许多
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③look after照看
④chat online with与……在线聊天
⑤make a decision作出决定
[高分句型]
①At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.（not only…but also…不但……而且……引导的并列句）
②I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
11．例文
I’m Li Hua, a teenager from No. 1 Middle School. In the past, my parents made many rules for me.
They never allowed me to go out with my friends for fun. During the weekends, I had to attend many extra classes and was not allowed to use the Internet. I felt tired and needed to relax. Last Saturday, I communicated with my parents and expressed my feelings. I understand the importance of studying and that my parents want the best for me. After our talk, they understood my feelings too and set new rules. Now, I’m allowed to hang out with friends once a week and can pursue hobbies besides studying on weekends. Additionally, I can use the Internet for an hour every week.
I have realized the benefits of communicating with my parents. I feel more relaxed and happier now.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对后文的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍沟通前后的情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
②communicate with 沟通
③the importance of ……的重要性
[高分句型]
①I understand the importance of studying and that my parents want the best for me.（宾语从句）
②Now, I’m allowed to hang out with friends once a week and can pursue hobbies besides studying on weekends.（并列结构）
12．例文
My Family Rules
As a saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without standards.” Every family has rules. So does mine.
Every morning I have to get up at six o’clock and go to school at seven o’clock. I can’t play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. After school I must go back home before nine o’clock in the afternoon and I can’t go out with my friends at school nights. And at night, I have to study hard and do my homework on time. And I must go to bed before ten o’clock in the evening.
Thanks to these rules. I can live healthily. But I think the sleep time is not enough. Students need nine hours sleep! And I think playing some computer games is not bad. So I think the family rules can make some changes and we can make it together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题家规；
第二步，根据思维导图，详细介绍家规；
第三步，表达自己对这些家规的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②by myself独自
③on time准时
④thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
①After school I must go back home before nine o’clock in the afternoon and I can’t go out with my friends at school nights.（并列句）
②And I think playing some computer games is not bad.（省略that的宾语从句，动名词作主语）
13．例文
As a middle school student, I have many rules at home. My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic rules which I must obey. Firstly, I must get home before 6 o’clock in the afternoon. Secondly, I cannot get my ears pierced and must go to bed before 11 o’clock. Thirdly, I can’t choose the clothes I like. If I break one of them, I will be punished. But thanks to these rules, I can live a healthy and regular life. I think the third rule is unfair to me. I hope I can choose my own clothes and keep my own clothes style.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。介绍自己在家有很多规矩；
第二步，具体阐述内容。具体介绍自己要遵守的规矩，包括：不准在下午六点之后到家、不准打耳洞、不准11点后睡觉、不准选择自己的衣服，同时指出自己认为不合理的一条规矩，并指出自己的理由；
第三步，书写结语。感谢大家的关注。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb对某人要求严格
②get ears pierced打耳洞
③go to bed去睡觉
④thanks to幸亏
[高分句型]
①My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic rules which I must obey.（which引导的定语从句）
②If I break one of them, I will be punished.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I hope I can choose my own clothes and keep my own clothes style.（宾语从句）
14．例文
Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。点明事情发生的时间。（开头已给出）
第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，结合参考词汇，描述事情发生的经过。
第三步，书写结语。表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
① see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事
② come in 进来
③ get angry 生气
④ in the future 将来
[高分句型]
① When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry.（when引导时间状语从句）
② She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well.（that引导宾语从句）
15．例文
Dear teachers and fellows,
I am glad to be here, telling you about my family rules. For example, I must get up before six in the morning to do some exercise. And I’m not allowed to waste food or water at home. Also, I should be polite and honest with everyone in my family. What’s more, I have to keep my room clean and deal with all my own things. Although sometimes I feel bad to follow these rules all the time, I have improved a lot because of them. I have a healthier body and I realize the importance of valuing natural resources. I’m more responsible for my family members. Thanks to these good rules, I am becoming better and better.
I will keep following my good family rules in the coming days.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己的家规；
第三步，表达对家规的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②deal with处理
③because of因为
[高分句型]
①For example, I must get up before six in the morning to do some exercise.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Although sometimes I feel bad to follow these rules all the time, I have improved a lot because of them.（although引导让步状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear Tom,
How’s everything going I want to share something about my family rules and hear your thoughts on your own family rules.
At home, I am not allowed to go out with friends on weekdays. My parents are very strict with my studies. They believe that studying hard will promise me a bright future. Also, I have to finish my homework before I can watch TV. Sometimes, I feel these rules are too strict and don’t care about my personal time. However, I know they care about me and want the best for my future. What do you think of your family rules Are there any rules you don’t understand
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据题干中的提示，向Tom介绍你的家规，并询问他对他自己的家规有什么看法，注意不要遗漏要点信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的家规并询问对方对家规的看法；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①go out with friends和朋友外出
②on weekdays在工作日
③be strict with对……要求严格
④promise sb sth承诺某人某事
⑤care about关心
[高分句型]
①At home, I am not allowed to go out with friends on weekdays. (被动语态)
②They believe that studying hard will promise me a bright future.(宾语从句)
③Also, I have to finish my homework before I can watch TV. (时间状语从句)
17．例文
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. We all love each other very much. My parents work hard and my sister and I study diligently. We are polite and friendly to our neighbors, always getting along well with them. In our daily life, we strive to protect the environment. For example, we use reusable bags when shopping and prefer public transport to reduce pollution. Besides, my family actively participates in volunteering. We often help children in poor areas by donating clothes and books. I am truly proud of my family!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍家庭；
第二步，依据要点，细节介绍家庭故事。
[亮点词汇]
①diligently勤奋地
②getting along well with和……和睦相处
③participates in参与
[高分句型]
For example, we use reusable bags when shopping and prefer public transport to reduce pollution.（并列结构）
18．例文
The other day, my parents went on a business trip and left me alone. I was excited because I would not listen to their orders during those days. At the same time, I was a little nervous because I had to look after myself.
Safety comes first. When I was out or in, I always remembered to shut the windows and lock the doors. In my free time, I learned not only how to cook simple meals but also how to tidy up the house. Although I was busy and tired, I was happy to manage my life on my own.
When my parents came back home, they were very surprised to see my independence. I am proud of myself.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍独自在家的原因和感受；
第二步，介绍保证自己安全的好办法；
第三步，介绍自己学会的生活技能，以及父母回到家时的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①look after照顾
②tidy up整理
③be proud of以……为傲
[高分句型]
①I was excited because I would not listen to their orders during those days.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Although I was busy and tired, I was happy to manage my life on my own.（although引导的让步状语从句）
19．例文
Dear Nathan,
I am so happy to make friends with you.You wanted to know about my family life, so let me introduce it to you.
There are five people in my family. They are my mum, dad, grandma, my sister and I. I haven’t got many possessions. I often help with the housework. I wash the dishes and even iron my own shirts. We like doing things together. We eat meals together every day, and my family always come to school events. My parents set some rules for me. For example, unless I finish all my homework, I can’t watch TV, and I can’t go out with my friends either.
I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship, and we always support each other.
I hope to receive your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，不要遗漏题目所给的要点，可适当添加细节，注意突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍家庭成员、家务分配与家规；
第三步，书写自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help with sth 在某方面帮助
②for example比如
③go out with my friends 和朋友外出
[高分句型]
For example, unless I finish all my homework, I can’t watch TV, and I can’t go out with my friends either.（unless引导条件状语从句）
20．例文
Hello, everyone. It’s my pleasure to share my family life here. There are five people in my family. They are my mum, dad, grandma, my sister and I. I haven’t got many possessions.
I often help with the housework. I wash the dishes and even iron my own shirts. We like doing things together. We eat meals together every day, and my family always come to school events. My parents set some rules for me. For example, unless I finish all my homework, I can’t watch TV, and I can’t go out with my friends either.
I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship, and we always support each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍介绍你的家庭生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，并总体介绍（成员和财产）；
第二步，具体阐述家务、家庭活动和家规；
第三步，介绍你对家庭的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help with帮助
②for example例如
③go out出去
[高分句型]
①There are five people in my family. （There be句型）
②For example, unless I finish all my homework, I can’t watch TV, and I can’t go out with my friends either.（unless引导条件状语从句，and连接并列句）
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