【学霸笔记】Unit 9 Section B Writing 教学课件 初中英语五四制鲁教版九年级全一册

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Section B 3a-selfcheck
Unit 9
It’s important to have good habits.
课堂导 入
Before-writing
Questionnaire about habits.Choose and check if you are healthy
1. How often do you eat fast food
a.Almost every day b. A few times a week c. Never
2. How often do you exercise
a.Almost every day b. A few times a week c. Never
3. How often do you listen to very loud music
a.Almost every day b. A few times a week c.Never
4. How often do you talk with parents
a. Never b. A few times a week c. Almost every day
5. How many hours do you play computer games every week
a. None b. One to four c. Five or more
6.How many hours do you usually sleep at night
a. Less than six b. Six to seven c. Eight or more.
What do you think of his habits
What do you think of her habits
I think it’s unhealthy for teenagers to eat too much junk food.
Before-writing
I think it’s bad for teenagers to listen to loud music.
课堂导 入
I don’t think it’s good for teenagers to stay up too late.
What do you think of his habits
Before-writing
课堂导 入
The most important thing for him is to turn down his radio.
01
She should take more exercise and eat fewer snacks.
02
In order to be healthy, he needs to get enough sleep.
03
What's your advice about their habits
Before-writing
What’s your advice for them
课堂导 入
Tom
Bob
I am unhappy with my weight, I also worry about exams.
You should...
Before-writing
Our friend Tom has some problems,so Bob,the doctor writes a letter for him.
课堂导 入
导 入
Before-writing
Dear Tom
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with your weight, but you do not know how to change it. In order to keep healthy, you need to take more exercise and eat fewer snacks. The more you exercise, the healthier you will become.
You also worry about exams. Your parents push you so hard, so you always feel stressed. Why not talk to your parents about it It's important to talk problems over with someone.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Bob
表达问候
针对问题
提出建议
表达祝愿
写作探究
写作探究
Before-writing
Tom's problems
Bob's advice
He's unhappy with his weight.
He worries about exams and feels stressed.
He needs to take more exercise and eat fewer snacks.
He should talk
to his parents.
写作探究
Before-writing
outline
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02
03
表达问候
针对问题
提出建议
表达祝愿
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems./ Of course I want to help you.
You are unhappy with...
It's important for you to do ...
You also worry about...
Why not do...
In order to..., you need to do...
The more...,the better/healthier ....
I hope you think my advice is worth taking./Hope things work out.
Read the letter from Kim and find out his problems.
Before-writing
写作探究
play sports/ read books/talk with friends...
eat more vegetables and fruit/ exercise
1. He wants to be happier
2. He's heavier and he wants to eat more healthily.
写作探究
Before-writing
写作探究
Before-writing
写作探究
、
body
advice
the ending
层次性
连接词
While-writing
写作探究
the beginning
写作评价量表
Standard评价标准 Standard Scores标准分值 Score 得分
是否根据Kim的问题给出针对性建议 6
是否使用了丰富的表示建议的句式 4
是否恰当运用了结束语 2
是否运用了关联词 2
书写 3
语法错误、拼写失误
总分 25
While-writing
写作探究
完成写作后与同伴进行互批。
While-writing
写作探究
Work in groups and finish the writing.
Post-writing
写作探究
Share your writing
Dear Kim,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
You want to be happier.It's important for you totake up a new hobby.Why not play sports Like swimming, running and so on. The more you exercise, the happier you will feel.You also worry about your weight, and you want to eat more healthily. In order to be healthy, you need to eat less food with fat and sugar. Instead, you should eat more vegetables and fresh fruit. You can also try your mother's home cooking, I'm sure you'll love it.
Hope things work out. Best wishes,
Li Ling
Post-writing
sample
THANK YOU