【单元考点培优】Unit 4 Then and now 考点17:书面表达-2025-2026学年牛津译林版六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)

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名称 【单元考点培优】Unit 4 Then and now 考点17:书面表达-2025-2026学年牛津译林版六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练 (含答案解析)
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2025-2026学年牛津译林版六年级英语上册核心考点精练
Unit 4 Then and now
考点17:书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.写作。
请根据所给提示,以“Then and now”为题,介绍你爸爸过去和现在的情况,写一篇不少于5句话的英文短文。
提示:以前爸爸的时代会写信给朋友,用固定电话打电话,获取新闻则是通过看报纸,购物只能去商店;现在爸爸用上了手机,可以随时随地给人打电话。爸爸还可以通过互联网购物、写电子邮件,看球赛等等。
Then and now
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2.书面表达。
令人期待的寒假即将来临!去年的寒假你是不是还记忆犹新?你都做了些什么?今年的寒假即将拉开帷幕,你又将如何度过呢?
请以“My winter holiday”为题,根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文。
要求:(1). 内容必须包含表格中所有要点,可适当发挥;(2). 语句通顺,时态正确;
(3). 不少于8句话,所给提示不计入总词数。
When What How
last winter holiday went to Beijing(具体描述2-3 点) It was...
this winter holiday do housework (具体描述 2-3 点) It is going to be...
My winter holiday
Last winter holiday,
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3.作文。
随着社会的发展,我们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化,请以 “Then and now” 为题,从与他人联系,获取信息,交友和购物方面写一篇短文。
要求:(1). 时态正确;(2). 条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确;(3). 不少于8句话。
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4.书面表达。
谈谈五年前的你和现在的你,要求语句通顺,不少于50词。
(参考句型:…ago, I was… I could …. I couldn’t… I didn’t… Now… I am… I can’t… I…)
要求:(1). 语句通顺,意思连贯,标点正确,书写规范。
(2). 写不少于50个单词。
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5.书面表达
以“Then and now”为主题,介绍一下现在的生活和过去的生活的对比,你可以从这四个方面比较,也可以选择其他的方面进行比较,要求:语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,时态正确,书写规范, 不少于50个词。
提示词:read newspapers, write e-mails, buy things from shops, read e-books, by car, …

Things changed(改变) a lot these years.
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6.书面表达。
同学们,八年前,你还没有进入小学。那时的你是什么样的?会做什么事?现在你是一名六年级的学生,你有什么变化和进步呢
请回顾自身的成长历程,以“Eight years ago”为题,结合自己的实际情况,用英文写一篇短文。
要求: (1).条理清晰,用词恰当,语句通顺,语法正确;
(2).书写工整、规范,正确使用标点符号;
(3).不少于8句话。
Eight years ago
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7.写作。
近几十年来,我们的生活发生了巨大的变化,请你根据表格提示,写一篇短文。
过去 现在
人们走路或者骑自行车去上班 乘地铁或者开车上班
听收音机,看报纸,用电话· 外出度假,写电子邮件,网上购物……
要求:(1).语句连贯,注意时态;
(2).可以适当发挥想象,不少于6句话。
Our life is very different now. Many years ago, we
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I think our life will be better and better.
8.书面表达。
请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇介绍莉莉的短文。不少于5句话。
7 years ago ride a bike (√) swim (×) fly a kite (×) go to the kindergarten by bus
now use the mobile phone (√) walk to school
参考词汇: primary school 小学
Lily was a little child seven years ago.
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9.书面表达。
根据下面的中文提示写出Tim以前和现在会做和不会做的事,不少于35个单词。
六年前,Tim会看书、画画,但不会写字。四年前他步行去学校,他不会骑自行车。
现在他会写字,还会踢足球。他能做很多事。
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10.书面表达。
科技的发展使人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。以前人们的生活(获取信息、出行、购物、联系方式等)是怎样的?如今,人们的生活又有了哪些变化?
请你以“Our life changes (改变) a lot”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:(1). 时态准确,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范。(2). 所写内容需包含上述两个问题,可展开想象和适当拓展。3. 60—70词(不包含已给词)。
Our life changes a lot
There are a lot of changes in our life.
In the past,
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Better changes, better life!
11.书面表达。
时光如梭,转眼间你已经是六年级的学生了。请将现在的你和六年前的自己进行对比,以“My changes”为题,写下自己外貌、爱好、能力等方面的变化。
要求:(1). 所写内容包含过去和现在的对比;
(2). 条理清晰,语句通顺,标点、语法正确;
(3). 词数不少于50个词,不少于6句话(不包括已给的开头和结尾)。
Then I was/wasn’t... I like/didn’t like... I could/couldn’t... Now I am/am not... I like/don’t like... I can/can’t...
My changes
I’m a sixth grade student now. I changed a lot.
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Better changes, better me!
12.书面表达。
乔治今年12岁了,他第一次写电子邮件给他的网友 Nick,他想介绍一下自己的过去和现在的一些情况,你能结合图片中提供提示,展开想象帮他完成这封邮件吗
要求:(1). 信息涵盖全面,句子通顺,语法正确,不少于 50词(不含已给字数);(2). 书写工整,标点正确。
Six years ago Lived with his grandparents Now Live with his parents
could can
couldn’t can’t
To Nick From George
Dear Nick,
I’m George. I’m very glad to be your e-friend.
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How about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
George
13.书面表达。
下面的图片反映了刘涛妈妈二十年的变化。请根据图片内容,并发挥想象,用英文写一篇短文,描述刘涛妈妈的变化,不少于8句话。
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14.书面表达。
同学们,随着社会的飞速发展,我们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化,几年以前,你会做些什么?现在你又会做些什么呢?在过去,你家人的生活是怎么样的,现在又如何呢?请以Then and now为题,介绍一下你和家人的变化。
要求:(1). 不少于6话。
(2). 语句通顺,语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范。
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15.书面表达。
以“Then and now”为题,介绍你爸爸过去和现在的情况,不少于5句话。
单词和短语提示:… ago, write letters, buy things, use the telephone
now, write e-mails, watch news, use a mobile phone
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16.书面表达。
亲爱的同学,回想过去六年,你有什么变化呢?请以“Changes in me(我的变化)”为题做介绍。要求:5句话以上,30词左右,首句已给,不计入词数。
Changes in me
Six years ago, I was a little child. I
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参考答案及试题解析
1.范文:
Then and now
My father wrote letters to his friends before. He used the telephone to call people. He got news from the newspapers and bought things from the shops.
Now he can use the mobile phone to call people anywhere. He can do many things on the Internet, such as making friends, doing shopping, knowing about national and international news, writing an email and watching a ball game.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第三人称描写父亲的生活现在和过去的变化,注意现在和过去的对比,时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时。注意语法正确,结构合理,要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型:
参考单词:before在……之前,write写,use用,telephone电话,read papers看报,mobile phone移动电话,on the Internet在网上,make friends交朋友,write an email写邮件,watch a ball game看球赛,
参考句型:He did...before;He used...;Now he can...
2.示例:
My winter holiday
Last winter holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. I visited the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. We also ate a lot of delicious food. It was really a wonderful city. We all felt very excited.
This winter holiday, I’m going to do housework. I’m going to cook breakfast for my parents. And I’m going to wash the dishes. It is going to be fun for me!
【解析】1.题干分析:该题目要求以My winter holiday为题,根据表格中的提示,写一写去年寒假做了些什么,以及今年寒假打算做什么,如:打乒乓球,上游泳课,看电影等活动。注意文章为一般过去时态和一般将来时态,句子数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:winter holiday寒假;go to去;the Great wall长城;delicious美味的;visit看望; do housework做家务; wash the dishes洗盘子
参考句型:Last winter holiday, I went to...;I visited...;It was...;This year, I’m going to...;I am going to...
3.参考范文:
Then and now
Our lives have changed a lot. In the past, people mainly contacted others by writing letters. But now, we can use mobile phones and the Internet to communicate with others easily and quickly.
People used to read books and newspapers. Now, we can search for information on the Internet. Making friends was not easy in the past. People usually made friends with those around them. Now we can make friends with people from all over the world. We can share our lives and ideas with them.
People had to go to the market or the store in the past. It took a lot of time. Now, we can shop online. We can buy all kinds of things at home.
In short, our lives have become more convenient and colorful. We should make good use of these changes and enjoy our lives better.
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目要求以“Then and now”为题,时态用一般过去时和一般现在时,短文描述之前和现在在与他人联系,获取信息,交友和购物方面的变化,注意条理清晰,表达准确,同时注意句子的时态,句子数量要与题干要求相符。
2.参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:mainly主要地,contact联系,mobile phone手机,communicate with与……交流,information信息,in short总之,colorful丰富多彩的
参考句型:Our lives have…;But now we can use…;We can share/buy…with…;In short, our lives have…;We should make good use of …
4. Five years ago, I was six years old. I had short hair and big eyes. I was short and fat. I could walk and speak. I couldn’t write. I couldn’t read. I didn’t know any English. Now I am tall and thin. I can read stories and draw pictures. I can run fast. I learn English very well.
【解析】题干解读:该题目要求以第一人称写一写自己五年前和现在的变化。可以写一写自己五年前的长相,会做的事情,现在有什么变化和进步。注意文章为一般现在时和一般过去时态,单词数量要符合要求。
参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:short hair 短头发,big eyes 大眼睛,short and fat 又矮又胖,walk 走路,speak 说话,tall and thin 又高又瘦,write 写,read 读,run 跑
参考句型:I was… ;I had … ;I could…;I couldn’t…;I am…;I can…
5.
例文:
Things changed (改变) a lot these years. In the past, people used to read newspapers for news, but now we can read e-books and news online. For communication, people used to write letters, but now we send emails or use instant messaging. When it comes to shopping, people went to stores to buy things, while now we can shop online and get things delivered to our home. Transportation has also improved, Many years ago, people mostly traveled by bicycle or bus, but now many travel by car or even by high-speed train. Life has become faster and more convenient.
【解析】1.题干解读:本题要求以“Then and now”为主题,对比过去和现在的生活。可以选择出行、购物、学习、娱乐等方面进行比较,时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。同时要符合字数要求。
2.参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:transportation 出行,learning 学习,entertainment 娱乐,shopping 购物,read newspapers 读报纸,write e-mails 写电子邮件,buy things from shops 从商店购买物品,read e-books 阅读电子书,by car 乘车,the Internet 互联网
参考句型:People used to... but now they...;Transportation has changed from... to...;Transportation has...; Life has...
6.范文:
Eight years ago Eight years ago, I was four. I had short hair and big eyes. I was short and fat. I could walk and speak. I couldn’t write. I couldn’t read. Now I’m tall and thin. I can read stories and draw pictures. I can run fast.
【解析】题干解读:该题目要求以Eight years ago为题写一篇短文。可以写一写自己八年前的长相,会做的事情,现在有什么变化和进步。注意文章为一般现在时和一般过去时态,句子数量要符合要求。
参考词汇和句型:
参考词汇:short hair 短头发,big eyes 大眼睛,short and fat 又矮又胖,walk 走路,speak 说话,tall and thin 又高又瘦,write 写,read 读,run 跑
参考句型:I was… ;I had … ;I could…;I couldn’t…;I’m…;I can…
7.范文:
Our life is very different now. Many years ago, we lived in small old houses. We went to work on foot or by bike. We listened to the radio. We read newspapers. We called people with a telephone.
But now, we can go to work by metro or car. We go for the holiday when we are free. We can write emails to our friends. We can do shopping on the Internet. We can make friends on the Internet too.
I think our life will be better and better.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第一人称介绍我们的生活发生的巨大变化。阐述过去和现在人们分别怎样去上班以及过去和现在人们分别做的事情。注意文章为一般过去时和一般现在时相结合并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:on foot步行,by bike骑自行车,by metro乘地铁,listened to the radio听收音机,read newspapers看报纸,with a telephone用电话,go for the holiday去度假,write emails写电子邮件,do shopping on the Internet网上购物,make friends on the Internet网上交友
参考句型:We went to work…;we can…
8.范文:
Lily was a little child seven years ago. She could ride a bike. She couldn’t swim. She couldn’t fly a kite either. She went to kindergarten by bus. Now she can use the mobile phone. She goes to primary school. She usually walks to school.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据提示,用英文写一篇介绍莉莉的短文。然后再阐述个人能力及上学的交通方式。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:could会,couldn’t不会,either也,can会,usually通常
参考句型: She couldn’t…;She usually...
9.范文:
Six years ago, Tim could read books. He could draw, but he could not write. Four years ago, he went to school on foot. He couldn’t ride a bike. Now he can write. He can play football too. He can do many things.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据中文提示写出Tim以前和现在会做和不会做的事,注意时态是一般过去时和一般现在时,并满足词数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:read books读书,draw画画,write写,on foot步行,ride a bike骑自行车
参考句型:Six years ago, Tim could…;He could…;Four years ago, he went…;He couldn’t…;Now he can…
10.范文:
Our life changes a lot
There are a lot of changes in our life.
In the past, people listened to the radio and read newspapers for news. People went out by bike. People went shopping in the supermarket. People used the telephone at home and in the office to call others.
Now people can read and watch news on the Internet. People can go out by metro or plane. People like shopping online now. Everyone has a mobile phone and they can call others everywhere.
Better changes, better life!
【解析】1. 题干解读:本题要求以“Our life changes (改变) a lot”为题写一篇短文。所写内容需包含以前人们的生活与现在人们的生活之间的对比变化,可展开想象和拓展。要求语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范。注意时态可用一般过去时和一般现在时并且要符合词数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:listen to the radio听收音机;read newspapers读报纸;by bike骑自行车;go shopping去购物;use the telephone用电话;on the Internet在网上;by metro or plane坐地铁或飞机;shopping online网购;mobile phone手机
参考句型:In the past, people… ;Now people can …;People like …
11.范文:
My Changes
I’m a sixth grade student now. I changed a lot. Six years ago, I was short. But now I am tall. I was a quiet boy before. But now I am active. I didn’t like English before. But now I like English, because I think it’s very interesting. I couldn’t play ping-pong before. But I can play it well. I often play ping-pong with my friends after school.
Better changes, better me!
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求以“My Changes”为题,将现在的你和六年前的自己进行对比,从自己外貌、爱好、能力等方面的写一写自己的变化。时态是一般过去时和一般现在时,并满足词数与句数的要求。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型:
参考词汇:short矮的,quiet文静的,didn't like English不喜欢英语,couldn’t play ping-pong不会打乒乓球,tall高的,active活泼的,like English喜欢英语,play it well玩得好
参考句型:I was/wasn’t…;I like/didn’t like…;I could/couldn’t…;I am/am not…;I like/don’t like…;I can/can’t…
12.例文:
Dear Nick,
I’m George. I’m very glad to be your e-friend.
Six years ago, I lived with my grandparents. I could read and draw pictures. But I couldn’t swim. Now, I’m twelve years old. I live with my parents. I can do many things. I can write. And I can ride a bike very well. But I can’t play basketball or table tennis.
How about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
George
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目要求根据图片提示帮乔治完成一封邮件,这封电子邮件是他向网友Nick介绍自己的过去和现在的一些情况的。注意文章要用第一人称来写,信息要涵盖全面,句子通顺,语法正确,并要符合句子数量要求。注意文章为一般过去时态和一般现在时态。
2.参考词汇和句型:
参考单词:six years ago六年前,could能,draw pictures画画,couldn’t不能,ride a bike骑自行车,play basketball打篮球
参考句型:I could…;But I couldn’t…;I can…;But I can’t…
13. How time flies! Twenty years ago, LiuTao’ mum was tall and thin. She made friends at home. She liked buying things from shops. Now she has many changes. She is a little fat. She has e-friends from all over the world. She likes shopping on the Internet too. That’s great!
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目要求用第三人称写出刘涛妈妈二十年的变化。注意文章为一般过去时态和一般现在时态,并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:ago 以前,now 现在,like shopping 喜欢购物
参考句型:She is…;She was…;She liked…;She likes…
14.范文:
Then and now
Six years ago, I could read and draw, but I could not write. Now I can do many things. Twenty years ago, my father used the telephone at home and in the office to call people. Now he has a mobile phone and he can call people anywhere. Thirty years ago, my grandpa listened to the radio and read newspapers for news. Now he can read and watch news on the Internet.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第一人称以Then and now为题,介绍一下自己和家人的变化。需要阐述几年以前,你会做些什么?现在你又会做些什么呢?在过去,你家人的生活是怎么样的,现在又如何呢?注意文章为一般现在时态和一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:telephone电话,mobile phone手机,listen to the radio听收音机,read newspapers看报纸,news新闻,Internet网络
参考句型: … I could ..., but I could not ...; Now I can …;… my father ...; Now he …;… my grandpa ...;Now he can ...。
15.范文:
Then and now
Twenty years ago, if my father wanted to contact with his friends. He could write letters to them. Now he can write e-mails to them on the Internet. He told me that he could only buy things from the shops on the street. But now he can buy anything on-line at home. Fifteen years ago, he could only use telephone to talk with his clients and friends. But now he can use a mobile phone to chat with his friends and clients at any time. What a big change!
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目要求用“now and then”为题介绍你爸爸过去和现在的状况,用对比法描述过去和现在的不同,如和朋友的联系方式,购物习惯等,时态用一般过去式和一般现在时,注意表达准确,时态正确并符合题干要求的句子数量。
2.参考词汇和句型:
参考单词和短语:contact联系,write letters写信,on the Internet在网上,on the street在街上,buy things on-line网上购物,talk with与……谈话,chat with与……聊天,
参考句型:If…want to contact with…;…could use telephone to talk with…;…could use a mobile phone to talk with…;What a big change!
16.范文:
Changes in me
Six years ago, I was a little child. I was short and thin. I had short hair. I didn’t like playing with my friends. But now I am tall and strong. I have long hair. And I like playing with my friends.
【解析】1. 题干解读:该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的变化情况。注意文章为一般过去时和一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:short and thin又矮又瘦,like doing喜欢做,play with和某人玩,tall and strong又高又壮,
参考句型:I was …;I had …;I didn’t like …;I am …; I have …;
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