【单元考点培优】Unit 2 Safety 专题13 书面表达-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优北师大版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优北师大版（2024）Unit 2 Safety
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．安全无小事。无论是在上下学的途中，还是在校园里，或者是在其他场所，我们都应注意安全。
假如你是李华，你校英文报刊正在开展“安全大家谈”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你发现了什么安全问题并提出相应的建议。
提示词语：fast, dangerous, pay attention, traffic lights
提示问题： What safety problems do you notice
What’s your advice on keeping safe
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2．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
校园安全，人人有责。每年三月份最后一周的星期一是全国中小学生安全教育日。某英文网站正在开展以“校园安全”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对校园急救课的看法以及你在校园安全防范方面的一些做法。
提示词语：helpful, learn, run, warm up
提示问题： What do you think of the first-aid class in school
How do you keep safe at school
I’m glad to talk about keeping safe in school. We should take it seriously.
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3．如今车辆越来越多，交通事故也频繁发生。我们应该怎样做才能避免交通事故，保证安全呢？请根据下面的写作要点，以“How to prevent traffic accidents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示词语：accident, avoid, safe, prevent, advice
内容提示：
1. What may cause traffic accidents
2. How can we avoid traffic accidents
How to prevent traffic accidents
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4．“读万卷书，行万里路”，研学旅行 (study trips) 现在受到教育部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎。假如你们学校的英文网站就研学活动需要注意的事项发帖子，征集意见。请你根据以下要点，进行跟帖回复。
(1) 健康饮食 (eat healthily and safely)；安全出行 (follow the traffic rules)；遇险报警 (call the police for help)；注意防溺水 (don’t swim in the river alone) ……
(2) 不能出现真实校名和姓名等；
(3) 语言通顺，表达正确；要求包含所有要点提示，可适当增加要点。
要求：
1.包括所有提示的内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.70词左右。
Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip Here’s my advice.
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5．地震是一种自然灾害，学会在不同的地方用不同的方法自救非常重要。请结合下面的表格，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍自救常识。
家 教室 户外 车内
★躲在床或桌子下★用手臂遮住头和脖子 ★躲在课桌下 ★…… ★逃到空地上 ★…… ★停在路边 ★不要停河边
你的建议 ……
An earthquake is a kind of natural disaster. It may lead to serious results and make a lot of people lose their homes or even lives. So it is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．我们都知道电在日常生活中是非常重要的。它帮助我们带动很多电器，但是同时在使用它的过程中还存在一定的危险，请根据下面的提示写一篇安全用电指引。电的重要性及危险性安全用电的注意事项：
我们手湿时，不允许触碰电器；
当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先关掉电源；
自行补充至少两点……
要求：
1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数内）；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：电源power supply；修理repair
Electricity is very important in our daily life,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
1. 词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
8．假期临近，安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增强学生的安全意识，提高学生的自我保护能力，你校开展以“How to Keep Safe in Our Life ”为主题的英语演讲比赛，现面向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。
内容要点：
1. 校园安全：不在走廊奔跑，……
2.交通安全：遵守交通规则，……
4.其他…… (至少补充一点)。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头已给出，请书写至答题卡上，不计入总词数。
2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯，通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
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9．“平安出行，文明骑车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题，特别作为一名中学生，骑自行车时如何保持安全是非常重要的。请以How to Keep Safe When We Ride 为题，并根据要点提示用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. Obey the traffic rules.
2. Wear helmets and have lights on the bicycle.
3….
要求：1.短文包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，结构连贯，并表达个人看法；
3.词数90左右。
How to Keep Safe When We Ride
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10．如今车辆越来越多，交通事故也频繁发生。我们应该怎样做才能避免交通事故，保证安全呢？请根据下面的写作要点，以“How to prevent traffic accidents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. 导致交通事故频发的原因是什么；
2. 如何避免交通事故，说出一些好的建议。
要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范整洁，100词左右；
2. 文中不要出现真实校名和姓名。
How to prevent traffic accidents
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11．骑行是最普遍的交通方式之一，但骑行也存在一些问题。你们班就骑行的好处与安全注意事项展开了讨论。请你结合下图提示，在班上发表一篇演讲。
要求：
1.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.图片中的信息要全部包括，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校名称。
Hello, everyone!
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12．“每天锻炼一小时，健康快乐一辈子”，运动是保持健康的重要方法之一。作为中学生的你每天都会参加体育锻炼，为了更好更安全地参与体育运动，请你以“Sports Safety Rules for Students”为题，根据在学校进行体育锻炼的注意事项制定一些有关运动安全的规则。
写作要求：1.文中须包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右。
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13．假如你是李华，你的学校为了进一步增强中学生的安全防范意识，提高自我保护能力，开展了以“How to keep safe”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，撰写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友；
2. 安全出行、安全饮食；
3. 遇到危险要及时报警。
注意：内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥；
要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数100左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
参考词汇：be careful, online, dangerous, call… for help
How to keep safe
As a student, we should know that keeping safe is important to us. But how do we do that
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14．近期学校开展中学生交通安全宣讲活动，请你结合自身经历或者目击的一次交通事故，向同学们宣传其中一条交规，并呼吁大家遵守交规。(70词左右)
交通规则 (下列词汇仅供选用) too fast to stop ..., run into ..., get hurt, not notice (注意) ..., turn left, fall down, dangerous (危险的), run the red light (闯红灯), nearly hit (几乎撞上) …, unforgettable, decide (not) to ..., from now on
1 骑车不要太快
2 不要在马路上奔跑玩闹
3 遵守交通信号灯
As is known to all, road safety is important to everyone. Today I’d like to emphasize (强调) a traffic rule
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15．近年来，我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你是一名中学生，正参加英语写作大赛，请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文，介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法，同时提出预防措施。
Types of disasters: floods, earthquakes, fires... → Ways to protect ourselves: get to high ground; use a wet towel hide under... → Actions to prevent future disasters: plant more trees; protect wild animals...
注意事项：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意；
2. 词数 80 左右；
3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
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16．李华所在的小区 (neighborhood) 上周发生了一场火灾。幸运的是，消防员 (fireman) 及时赶到扑灭 (put out) 了这场大火，没有伤亡。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格提示，写一篇英语小短文，记录火灾发生时和你家人的活动。
你 看电视 妈妈 清洁厨房
姐姐 和朋友打电话 爸爸 看报
要求：
1.语句通顺、条理清晰；
2.包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右。
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17．请根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇不少于70 词的电器安全使用手册。
提示:
1. 我们手湿时，不允许触碰电器；
2. 电器不能工作时间太长；
3. 不能让小孩触碰一些电器；
4. 当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先关掉电源。
提示: 电源 power supply
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18．雪可以给我们带来快乐，但同时我们也应该懂得如何在暴雪天气保护自己。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How to Protect Ourselves During Heavy Snow”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的英语专栏投稿。
写作要求：1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80 左右。
参考词汇：cleats 防滑鞋
How to Protect Ourselves During Heavy Snow
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19．假如你是李华，你的学校为了进一步增强中学生的安全防范意识，提高自我保护能力，开展了以“How to Keep Safe”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，撰写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1.谨慎交友；
2. 安全出行，安全饮食；
3. 遇到危险要及时报警。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, online, dangerous, call... for help
How to Keep Safe
As a student, we should know that keeping safe is important to us. But how do we do that
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20．假如你是李华，你的学校为了进一步增强中学生的安全防范意识，提高自我保护能力，开展了以“How to Keep Safe”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，撰写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
1. 谨慎交友；
2. 遇到危险要及时报警；
3. 安全饮食，安全出行及活动。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, online, dangerous, call... for help
How to Keep Safe
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参考答案及试题解析
1．One possible version:
Safety is very important in our daily life. However, I notice three safety problems.
On the way to and from school, I notice that some students ride very fast and don’t look at the traffic lights. When riding a bike, we should wear a helmet, and we mustn’t play with others. We should walk on the sidewalk and pay attention to the traffic lights. I also notice that it is dangerous to chase and fight in the corridors at school. If we hit a classmate, it will cause trouble. What’s more, I notice that some students make friends online. We should communicate more with our classmates and make friends. Safety is no small matter.
Whether on the way to and from school, at school or in other places, we should always pay attention to safety.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：不要遗漏题干中的提示，适当添加细节，语句通顺，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明安全的重要性；
第二步，具体说明自己注意到的安全问题并提出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way to…在去……的路上
②pay attention to注意
③What’s more而且
④communicate with sb与某人交流
[高分句型]
①I also notice that it is dangerous to chase and fight in the corridors at school.（宾语从句）
②If we hit a classmate, it will cause trouble.（If引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
I’m glad to talk about keeping safe in school. We should take it seriously. In my opinion, the first-aid class in school is really important and helpful. I learnt a lot from the class. If someone is hurt, I can give him basic medical help. To keep safe at school, I always follow the school safety rules. For example, I never run in my classroom and never enter the classroom with my classmates side by side. In PE class, I listen to the teacher and warm up first carefully. I believe if everybody doesn’t take risks, we can be safe at school.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对急救课程的看法；
第二步，阐述如何在校园里保证安全；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②for example比如
③take risks冒风险
[高分句型]
①If someone is hurt, I can give him basic medical help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe if everybody doesn’t take risks, we can be safe at school.（宾语从句）
3．例文
How to prevent traffic accidents
Now there are more and more vehicles on the road. At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. That’s why many accidents happen every year. As students, how can we keep safe when we’re on the road
First, we mustn’t play on the road. It’s quite dangerous. Second, we must watch the traffic signals and look around when we cross the road. Don’t run across the road. Third, we must wear helmets when we ride bicycles.
I hope everyone can keep safe and never meet with any accident.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍交通事故发生的原因；
第二步，介绍我们应该怎样做才能避免交通事故；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则
②traffic signals交通信号
③look around环顾四周
[高分句型]
①At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②That’s why many accidents happen every year. (why引导的表语从句)
4．One possible version:
Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip Here’s my advice.
First, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. We should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Second, it’s important for us to follow the traffic rules. We mustn’t go across the street when the traffic light is red. Third, if we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. What’s more, we should be careful when we use electricity. The last but not least, it’s dangerous to swim in the river. We mustn’t swim alone.
In short, safety must come first!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点要求明确，考生需注意各项安全建议的表述，可适当补充细节，突出“安全第一”的核心重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出研学旅行流行的背景及本文主题——研学旅行应注意的事项；
第二步，分点阐述具体的注意事项，包括健康饮食、遵守交通规则、危险时及时求助、安全用电以及禁止独自下河游泳等；
第三步，总结强调安全的重要性，点明“安全第一”的主旨。
[亮点词汇]
① pay attention to 注意
② do harm to 对……有害
③ instead of 而不是
④ in time 及时
[高分句型]
① What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip （when引导的时间状语从句）
② It’s important for us to follow the traffic rules.（it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语）
③ If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．参考范文
An earthquake is a kind of natural disaster. It may lead to serious results and make a lot of people lose their homes or even lives. So it is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.
If you are at home, it is safe to hide under the bed or strong tables. Cover your head and neck with your arms. If you are in a classroom, stay under the desk. After the shake stops, you can run outside as soon as possible. When you are outside, you should quickly run to an open space. Stay away from buildings or trees. When you are driving, stop it by the road at once. Don’t stop your car near a river.
Remember to keep calm and try to protect yourself when an earthquake starts.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的所有要求，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“如何在地震中保持安全对我们来说很重要”来展开；
第二步，详细介绍在不同的地方用不同的方法自救；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to导致
②as soon as possible尽可能快
③stay away from远离
④keep calm保持冷静
⑤try to do sth.尽力做某事
[高级句型]
①So it is important for us to know how to keep safe in an earthquake.（句型it is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.）
②When you are outside, you should quickly run to an open space.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．参考范文：
Electricity is very important in our daily life, but sometimes it is also very dangerous. So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.
First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them. Second, when we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must switch off the power supply. Third, we mustn’t let children touch some of the electrical appliances. Last, the electrical appliances can’t work too long and we should make them stop to have a rest.
In a word, we must use electricity safely.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：从手湿不触碰电器、维修清洁时断电、看护儿童、不让电器长时间工作等方面，说明安全用电要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明主旨，说明电重要但有危险性，引出使用电器要小心；
第二步：分点阐述规则，用 First、Second 等连接词，依次说明手湿不碰、维修清洁断电、看护儿童、限制电器工作时长这些安全用电做法（对应文中分条列举的内容）；
第三步：总结强调，总结要安全用电。
[亮点词汇]
① electrical appliances电器
② switch off关闭（电源等）
[高分句型]
① Electricity is very important in our daily life, but sometimes it is also very dangerous.（转折复合句，用连词but连接对比）
② So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.（“when” 引导的时间状语从句）
7．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my ideas about how to keep safe here. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Second, If we are in danger, we can call the police for help in time. We also have to be careful about the friends we make with especially online. What’s more, we should be careful when we use electricity. Last but not least, it’s dangerous to swim in the river alone.
In short, safety must come first!
Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达介绍保持安全的一些建议；
第二步，根据提示要点具体介绍保持安全的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do harm to对……有害
②in danger处在危险之中
[高分句型]
①Second, If we are in danger, we can call the police for help in time. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s more, we should be careful when we use electricity. (when引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
First, school safety is important. We mustn’t run in the hallways. Also, we should be careful not to crowd in front of the stairs to avoid accidents. Second, traffic safety matters a lot. Always follow the traffic rules. For example, look at traffic lights when crossing the street and never play on the road. Finally, remember other safety rules. Don’t eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, be careful when using electricity at home and don’t play with fire.
In a word, safety must come first. Let’s all be careful every day. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从校园安全、交通安全等方面介绍如何保持安全；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面
②for example例如
③play with fire玩火
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①For example, look at traffic lights when crossing the street and never play on the road. (and连接的并列句)
②Don’t eat food that looks or smells bad. (that引导的定语从句)
9．One possible version:
How to Keep Safe When We Ride
As we all know, safety is very important to everyone in our everyday life. How can we keep safe when we ride Here is some advice for you.
First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road. Second, we must wear helmets when riding. At night, we must have lights on our bikes when riding. Third, we shouldn’t ride so fast. Though bicycles are much safer than any other vehicle, sometimes bicycle accidents also happen, so we must be careful.
I know many of us like riding very much, but here I still hope that we must be careful when we ride.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍骑自行车时如何保持安全；
第三步，总结概括，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②be careful小心
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①Here is some advice for you.（倒装句）
②First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road.（when引导的时间状语从句）
10．One possible version:
How to prevent traffic accidents
Now there are more and more vehicles on the road. At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. That’s why many accidents happen every year. As students, how can we keep safe when we’re on the road
First, we mustn’t play on the road. It’s quite dangerous. Second, we must watch the traffic signals and look around when we cross the road. Don’t run across the road. Third, we must wear helmets when we ride bicycles.
I hope everyone can keep safe and never meet with any accident.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明交通事故频发的背景及主要原因；
第二步，提出三种具体预防措施；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则
②traffic signals交通信号
③look around环顾四周
[高分句型]
①At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. (when引导时间状语从句)
②That’s why many accidents happen every year. (why引导的表语从句)
11．例文
Hello, everyone! Here I’d like to share with you some of my views on cycling. Now more and more people like cycling and it brings us a lot of benefits. Firstly, cycling is a good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it’s also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it’s very convenient and helps to avoid traffic jam.
When we go cycling, we should obey some rules to keep safe. We should wear a helmet and we can’t go cycling side by side.
In conclusion, we can benefit a lot from cycling. At the same time, we should also obey the safety rules.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出演讲主题并介绍骑行的好处；
第二步，介绍骑行时的安全规则；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
②keep healthy保持健康
③traffic jam交通堵塞
④side by side肩并肩地
⑤in conclusion总而言之
⑥at the same time与此同时
[高分句型]
①Firstly, cycling is a good exercise because it can help us keep healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When we go cycling, we should obey some rules to keep safe.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12． Sports Safety Rules for Students
To ensure safe and effective exercise, students should follow these rules:
1. Always warm up for 5-10 minutes before sports to prevent injuries.
2. Wear proper sports shoes and comfortable clothing during activities.
3. Follow teachers’ instructions strictly, especially in high-risk sports like basketball or gymnastics.
4. Stay hydrated but avoid drinking too much water immediately after exercise.
5. Report any discomfort or injuries to the teacher right away.
Remember, safety comes first!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：校园安全指南（说明文）
②时态：一般现在时（陈述客观规则）
③提示：需包含热身、装备、听从指导、饮水、及时报告等要点
[写作步骤]
1. 明确主题：开篇点题，强调运动安全的重要性。
2. 分条列举：用序号清晰呈现5条核心规则，覆盖运动全过程。
3. 总结强调：用短句重申安全原则，增强警示效果。
[亮点词汇]
① prevent injuries 预防受伤
② right away 立即
[高分句型]
①Always warm up for 5-10 minutes before sports to prevent injuries.（不定式作目的状语）
13．例文
How to keep safe
As a student, we should know that keeping safe is important to us. But how do we do that Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, we must pay attention to the traffic and traffic signals around us. What’s more, we must obey the traffic rules when riding. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating healthy food is good for our health. Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In a word, safety must come first; the best way to be safe is to be careful!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，涵盖了交友安全、交通规则、饮食安全、遇险求助及夏季防溺水等内容，注意围绕这些要点展开，可适当补充细节以增强实用性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明作为学生，保证安全的重要性，并引出下文关于如何保障安全的建议。
第二步，依次阐述具体的安全建议，包括谨慎交友、遵守交通规则、健康安全饮食、遇险及时报警以及夏季不私自下河游泳。
第三步，总结强调安全第一，保持谨慎是保障安全的最佳方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be careful小心，谨慎
②pay attention to注意
③in danger处于危险中
④in time及时
⑤last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（if引导条件状语从句，so that引导目的状语从句）
14．例文
As is known to all, road safety is important to everyone. Today I’d like to emphasize (强调) a traffic rule—Don’t ride too fast.
Last Thursday, I rode to school very fast because I didn’t want to be late. When I turned left at a crossing, an old man came out of the turning. I was too fast to stop and my bike ran into the old man. We both fell down and got hurt. It was really an unforgettable experience. I decided not to ride so fast from then on.
Safety comes first. Let’s keep traffic rules in mind and make the world a better place.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按材料要求写，需结合自身或目击的一次交通事故，从表格中选择一条交规宣传并呼吁遵守，需包含经历、规则强调、呼吁遵守交规等要点；根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明道路安全重要性，说明自己要宣传的交规为“骑车不要太快”；
第二步，具体讲述自己的一次交通事故经历，体现出违反交规的后果；
第三步，呼吁大家遵守交规，强调安全第一。
[亮点词汇]
① ride too fast 骑车太快
② run into 撞上
③ get hurt 受伤
④ safety comes first 安全第一
⑤ keep traffic rules 遵守交规
[高分句型]
① I rode to school very fast because I didn’t want to be late. (含有原因状语从句的复合句)
② When I turned left at a crossing, an old man came out of the turning. (含有时间状语从句的复合句)
15．参考范文：
In recent years, there have been many disasters, such as floods, earthquakes, fires, sandstorms and so on.
When there is a flood, we should get to high ground and make sure not to walk through the flood water. If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window. If a fire happens, we can use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground.
Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters. We can plant more trees and protect wild animals. We can also share some related information with others.
Hope we can have a better world in the future.
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：材料作文（灾害应对与预防）
②时态：一般现在时为主**（描述常规应对措施） + 祈使句**（给出建议）
③提示：需涵盖灾害类型、**自救方法**、**预防措施**三部分，注意80词限制。 --- ####
【写作步骤】
1. 开头引入：简要说明灾害频发背景和种类。
2. 分述不同灾害的应对方法（洪水→高地；地震→遮挡；火灾→湿毛巾）
3. 提出预防措施（植树/保护动物等环保行为）
【亮点词汇】
① get to high ground 转移到高地
② protect wildlife 保护野生动物）
【高分句型】
① If an earthquake happens, we can hide under a strong desk and stay away from a window.（if条件状语从句）
② Of course, we should take action to prevent future disasters.（不定式作目的状语）
16．例文：
Last week, there was a big fire in my neighborhood. I still remember what my family were doing at that time. I was watching TV while my elder sister was talking to her friend on the phone. My mother was cleaning up the kitchen. She saw the light of fire first and then asked us to get out quickly. My father was reading newspapers in the living room then. Hearing my mom’s words, he called the firemen at once. Luckily, the fire was put out in a short time and nobody got hurt.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“过去进行时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍火灾发生的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍火灾发生时我和家人正在做什么；
第三步，介绍火灾的结果。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清理
②at once立刻
③in a short time在短时间内
[高分句型]
I was watching TV while my elder sister was talking to her friend on the phone. (while引导时间状语从句)
17．例文
As we all know, electricity is important in our life, but sometimes it is also very dangerous. So when we use electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.
First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them. Second, the electrical appliances can’t work too long and we should stop using them to let them have a rest. Third, we mustn’t let children touch some of the electrical appliances. Finally, before we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must switch off the power supply.
If we want to use the electrical appliances safely, we must follow the above rules.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电器安全使用手册；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的电器安全使用注意事项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简要说明电器安全使用的重要性”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“手湿时不触碰电器、电器不能工作时间太长、不能让小孩触碰电器、清洁或修理电器时先关掉电源”几个方面重点介绍电器安全使用的注意事项；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家都能安全使用电器”的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know 众所周知
②be careful with 小心，注意
③switch off 关闭
[高分句型]
①If we want to use the electrical appliances safely, we must follow the above rules.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．One possible version:
How to Protect Ourselves During Heavy Snow
It is quite normal to have heavy snow in winter. However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down.
How should we protect ourselves during heavy snow Here are some suggestions. First, stay away from snow-covered trees and billboards because they may fall and hurt people. Second, it is best to wear cleats to avoid falling down. Third, we had better not go out. If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety. Also, we must be careful of holes under the snow.
Snow can bring us happiness if we learn to protect ourselves.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：根据图示内容分点介绍保护方法，包括远离危险物、穿防滑鞋、减少外出及注意安全，语言简洁明了，突出实用性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出暴雪天气现象及潜在危险，引出话题；
第二步：依照图示条目，逐条说明具体的保护措施；
第三步：总结句点明保护的重要性，引发共鸣。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②fall down摔倒
③stay away from远离
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①However, when there is heavy snow, it is also very dangerous, such as falling down.（when引导时间状语从句）
②If we have to go out, we must pay attention to safety.（if引导条件状语从句）
19．例文
How to Keep Safe As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述安全的重要性，并提起下文；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍中学生应如何保证自己的安全；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends 交友
②in danger 处于危险中
③in time 及时
④do harm to 对……有害
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.（宾语从句）
20．例文：
How to Keep Safe
As a student, we should know that keeping safe is important to us. But how do we do that Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. We should pay attention to protecting our personal information. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we should follow the traffic rules. Road safety is important. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述安全的重要性，并提起下文；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍中学生应如何保证自己的安全；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 重视
②in danger 处于危险中
③in time 及时
④do harm to 对……有害
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. (宾语从句)
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