【单元考点培优】Unit 4 l used to be afraid of the dark 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优
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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 4 l used to be afraid of the dark
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
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2．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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3．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
I have changed a lot
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4．时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 100 词左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
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5．这些年，随着经济的迅速发展，你的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
2. 你对这些变化的看法。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数100左右。
My Life Has Become Much Better
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6．你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日，你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识，给她回一封email。
要点包含： 要求：
1. 对比过去与现在的情况：日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面（各1条）； 1. 所给信息完整表述；
2. 你认为最大的一个改变； 2. 分段，合理使用过渡词，使文章通顺并有逻辑；
3. 国家发生改变的原因（至少1 条）； 3. 拼写，语法正确，表达流畅，书写干净整齐；
4. 你的感受（至少2条）。 4. 格式正确，120 词左右。
可能用到的短语：经济发展economic development 70周年70th anniversary_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．2022年7月24日，中共中央办公厅、国务院印发了《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》，响应党中央和政府号召，双减政策正式施行，同学们的课外辅导和家庭作业减少了。假如你是一名九年级学生李华，正在接受学校公众号采访，结合自己的亲身经历谈一谈以下几点：
1. What has changed on your study time, hobbies, physical exercises and other activities after the “double reduction” policy
2. What do you think of the “double reduction” policy
3. How will you manage your time for a bright future
要求：1.内容必须包括所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2.语言表达准确，语篇连贯。
3.词数80-100，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot, next let me talk about it.
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I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
8．请根据下列提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的短文。100词左右。
提示：
过去：1. 居住条件差，一家人住在又小又旧的房子里。
2. 主要通过寄信与朋友保持联系。
3. 步行、骑自行车上班。
4. 道路狭窄，车辆少。
现在：1. 居住环境舒适，搬进高楼。
2. 通过手机交流。
3. 环形路宽阔，拥有自己的车辆。
4. 可以做很多事情放松自己。
我很高兴看见这些变化，并为此自豪，相信家乡会变得越来越美丽。
Changes in My Hometown
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9．国家颁布了“双减”政策，即减作业，减培训等，极大的保证了中小学生的身心健康。各学校均采取了一系列的有利于学生健康成长的措施。请以“Changes in my school life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈一下你在这些方面的变化。
1.要点：1）包括睡眠、课外活动（after school activities）、学习、作业、体育锻炼几个方面；
2）它会给你带来怎样的影响和变化；
3）变化后有何感受。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Changes in my school life
Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise, so do I.
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All in all, these are my changes in my school life, What great changes!
10．假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表中的提示，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会及个人生活各方面的变化，展望未来并浅谈如何为之努力。
变化 家乡 老旧房屋→高楼林立
交通 步行；骑车→乘坐公交车；开小汽车
个人 书本学习→网络学习
愿望 更加美好的生活（或自拟内容，说明自己的理想生活）
打算 ……
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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I believe that our life will be better and better.
11．初中三年转瞬即逝，你在学习生活中一定有许多的变化和收获。面对未来的高中生活，你一定也有很多憧憬。请根据下面表格中的信息写一篇演讲稿，分享你的初中成长收获以及打算在高中提升的地方。
Development in middle school Self-improvement in high school
Personality shy→more outgoing... more confident
Schoolwork a bit lazy → more hard-working more creative
Relationship with classmates have more friends get on better with others
… … …
注意：
(1)短文须包括表格中所包含的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Looking back at the past three years’ middle school life, I have so many great changes.
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12．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问中国新农村建设的发展状况。请你根据下面列出的要点，结合自己家乡“美丽乡村”建设，写一封电子邮件介绍中国新农村的一些变化作为答复。
要点如下：
1. 居往环境方面的改善；
2. 文化生活水平的提高；
3. 邀请他来参观体验；
4. ……（不少于一点）
参考词汇：
农村建设（rural reconstruction），文化生活（cultural life）
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you and get to know
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I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
要求:
1.内容包含所提供的信息，并有适当的发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名；
4.词数：70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
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Thanks so much!
Yours,
Li Hua
14．回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
要点：1. 选取至少两个方面；2. 结合自身亲身经历，谈一谈过去与现在的不同；3.如何取得这些进步的。
要求：1. 书写工整，语句连贯，词数80左右；2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
I have made progress
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15．一个人的成功离不开勤奋努力，也离不开良好的习惯。有人每晚睡前读一会书，有人坚持早起锻炼身体……生活与学习习惯对我们的成长很重要。请选择一个你以前做得不好、但现在已养成的好习惯，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程与收获。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数内。
提示：Good habits：Learning habit；eating habit；sleeping habit；exercise habit. . .
I think developing good habits is important in our life. Many years ago, I used to
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The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
16．“双减”新规(The new rule)的提出给学生们的学习、生活带来了很大的变化。“双减”后。你的生活和学习有哪些变化？请给你的朋友Tony写一封信。
1. 要点：
1）从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈你是否满意现在的变化；
2）你还有哪些烦恼；
3）请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
2. 要求：
1）文中不要出现你所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
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17．自从国家实行“双减”(double-lightening the burden)政策以来，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍自己校园生活的变化。
写作要点：
(1)学习压力减轻了，作业减少了；(2)睡眠时间和运动时间增多了；(3)有更多的时间去做自己喜欢的事情，学习效率提高了； (4)有更多的时间与父母在一起；(5)生活更幸福了。
注意：
(1)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)合理增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇：reduce study pressure 减少学习压力，efficiently 高效地
Changes in My School Life
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
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18．变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所收获和进步。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获？
写作要点：
1.What is the change that happened in your life
2.How did you deal with the change
3.What have you learned from the experience
要求：
1. 短文包含提示中所有要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于 80。
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19．转眼间，三年的初中学习生活即将结束。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗 这几年在你身上发生了哪些变化 请你以“My Changes”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文来介绍一下自己的变化吧。
过去 现在
放学后和同学一起做运动。 再也没时间做运动了。
英语薄弱。 在英语老师的帮助下，英语取得了很大的进步。
害怕在人们面前讲话。 更外向，能够在公众场合演讲。
要求：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
My Changes
Great changes have happened to me in the past three years.
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These are my changes. What about yours
20．假如你叫李军，你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象，在政府两年的帮扶下，你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，参加本次活动。
内容要点：
过去 1. 家庭贫困，房屋破旧。 2. 母亲生病，为母担忧，成绩下滑。
现在 3. 住进新房，母亲康复，学习进步。 4. 生活日趋改善。
要求：1. 词数：70词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
2．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
3．例文
I have changed a lot
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident than before. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，过去和现在最重要的改变是什么；
第二步，介绍过去是什么样的；
第三步，介绍如何发生这样的改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①how happy I am!（感叹句）
②Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
4．例文
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by quickly. My life has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin. Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
I hope my life will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总述和之前相比，自己改变了很多；
第二步，再描述你之前是什么样子的，例如可以从之前的外貌、性格等方面来描述；接着描述自己发生了哪些变化，其中最重要的变化是什么，这个变化是如何发生的。
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对未来生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 过去是
② take part in 参加
③ be afraid of 害怕
④ encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing.（that引导的表语从句）
③ I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school.（when引导的时间状语从句和there be句型）
5． My Life Has Become Much Better
With the progress of society, now the family is getting smaller and smaller, generally only one or two children. In this way, children can enjoy a good education. They are also busy working. There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy. We used to live in a very small house, but now we live in a very large house. There are many activities in people’s free time, such as mountain climbing, fishing and so on. There are many high-quality programs on TV, such as Beijing Opera and some old movies.
In a word, our life is better today and we eat better and live longer.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍随着经济的迅速发展，你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
第二步，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way以这种方式
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③such as比如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
① now the family is getting smaller and smaller（比较级+and+比较级的用法）
②There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy.（there be句型，and连接并列结构）
6．例文：
Dear Lucy,
Today is the 70th anniversary of the founding of new China. I feel very happy. There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. In the past, we were more inconvenient in our daily life, and now the traffic is very convenient. We can shop online, more importantly, we can buy things without cash. Our country implements nine-year compulsory education. I think the biggest change is students don’t have to pay any more for their books. I think that’s very good for some poor students. These changes are to make people live a better life. I am happy with these changes. Thanks to our country, thanks to our people. They make our life better and better. I want the motherland to be stronger and stronger, and you
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点包含”中日常生活方面，交通方面，教育方面的介绍，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我们国家有很多变化”来引出重点介绍内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面、作者认为最大变化、发展原因、作者感受等”几个方面介绍国家发展相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。祝福祖国越来越强大并询问Lucy的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① in the past在过去
② shop online 网上购物
③ more importantly更重要的是
④ pay for支付
⑤ make sb do让某人做某事
⑥ Thanks to多亏
⑦ stronger ang stronger越来越强大
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. （there be句型，表示某地有某物）
② I think that’s very convenient for some poor students. （I think+宾语从句）
7．例文：
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot, next let me talk about it.
I used to do my homework till midnight and had no time for my hobbies. On weekends I had to take different kinds of after-school lessons to improve my exam skills so that I could go to a good high school.
However, with the support of “double reduction” policy, though I go home late, I have more interesting activities. I can do what I like, such as playing football and some other ballgames, learning, playing the piano, handwriting, drawing and so on. I feel excited when I take part in these activities. What’s more, I have more time to communicate with my parents. I can spend more time with my family and friends. I can get on well with them. Sometimes I help out with some housework.
Although we feel less stressed than before, self-discipline becomes the key. We should balance the schoolwork and after-school activities, manage the time wisely and improve ourselves to get a brighter future.
I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of “double reduction” policy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求根据三个要点和亲身经历写一篇80-100词左右的短文，内容包括：双减政策实施以来你在学习时间、爱好、体育锻炼和其他活动等的变化、你对双减政策的看法以及你如何为美好的未来管理你的时间。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，时态可用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。写作时应承接开头和结尾，围绕提示要点进行发挥，可适当增加细节以满足字数要求和丰富文章内容；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
8．例文
Changes in My Hometown
China has developed so fast in recent years. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the living conditions were hard. There used to be old houses. A big family had to share small rooms. The roads were narrow and there were not many buses or cars. People went to work on foot or by bike. People kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters.
Now, the living conditions are comfortable. Most families have moved into tall buildings now. The ring roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. People can communicate with each other by cell phone. What’s more, people can do many things to relax themselves, such as going traveling and doing sports.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. I’m proud of the rapid development in my hometown. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Changes in My Hometown”为题进行写作，介绍家乡所发生的变化。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。首先开篇点题，点明家乡发生了变化，紧接着介绍过去家乡的情况；第二段介绍现在家乡发生改变后的情况；最后一段表达自己的感想和希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
Changes in my school life
Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise, so do I. Let me tell you some changes in my school life.
It is very important and necessary for students to have enough time to relax and do sports, because it is beneficial to students’ health. Great changes have taken place in my school since the beginning of last term. On the other hand, I can go to school at 7:30 now, but in the past, I had to arrive at school at 7:00. On the other hand, now I have enough sleep, I don’t have to sleep late at night. I can go to bed early. What’s more, I have less homework, but in the past I had much homework, so I have free time to relax myself and do what I like to do. Finally, I have a lot of time to do sports and do some extra-curricular activities every day. It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also makes my life colorful.
All in all, these are my changes in my school life, What great changes!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Changes in my school life”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段和第三段都已给出；第二段从睡眠，课外活动，学习，作业和体育锻炼等方面介绍生活的变化。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, people used to live in old and broken houses. Now, there are tall and beautiful buildings everywhere. In the past, people had to walk or ride when they went out. But now, they can take buses or drive to wherever they want to go. Several years ago, people could only learn from books. Nowadays, they can also learn through computers.
I hope people from all over the country can live a better life in the near future. And I will study hard and try my best to make it come true.
I believe that our life will be better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于较为常见的描述变化的作文。需要根据表格提示，将信息转化为语句。由于文章开头结尾已给，表格内容即为第二段，主要描述变化。
2.写作指导：本文主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。已经产生的变化，用现在完成时进行总体概述。谈论到具体变化时，过去的状态使用一般过去时，现在的状态使用一般现在时。词语应尽量丰富，体现出变化后的美好。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
11．例文：
Looking back an the past three years’ middle school life, I have so many great changes. Let me share you about them.
Firstly, I used to be shy, but now I have become more outgoing. I decide to be more confident when I go to high school. As for schoolwork, I am getting more hard-working in middle school. Certainly, I need to be more creative. It is a pleasant thing that I had more friends during my middle school life. I plan to get on better with others when I am a high school student. What’s more, I should do some useful things for my family.
I am very happy with my changes. Do you have any development in your middle school
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据表格内容要求分享你的初中成长收获以及打算在高中提升的地方，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
12．例文：
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you and get to know that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. With the promotion of the policy, Rural Reconstruction, great changes have taken place in the countryside.
Old houses have been replaced with new and tall ones full of good facilities. Moreover, the local government has made great efforts to control the environment pollution. What’s more, it’s convenient for the villagers to travel around because many families have bought their private cars. In their spare time, they can enjoy different kinds of activities to relax themselves such as doing sports, singing and dancing.
I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据要点提示写电子邮件介绍中国新农村的一些变化，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，结合具体语境选用合适的时态。电子邮件正文可分为三段式：第一段点题；第二段讲变化；第三段邀请对方来参观体验。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
13．例文
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself.
I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time
Thanks so much!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对“双减”新规提出后的生活的变化进行写作，包括课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面的内容。具体的内容要包含所给的提示和要求。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面进行叙述；第三段叙述自己是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．例文
I have made progress
How time flies! My junior high school life will be over soon. During the past three years, I’ve made great progress in these two ways.
When I entered the middle school, I felt sleepy in math class because I couldn’t understand the teacher. I was very afraid of exams and always failed exams. With the help of my math teacher, I tried my best to study math and spent a lot of time on it. Now, I can get good grades.
I am an outgoing girl and I get on well with people around me. But I used to be shy to talk with others. It was tough for me to join in the group discussions. My classmates encouraged me a lot, I tried to express my own thoughts and I became active and confident.
Just as the saying goes “No pain no gain”. I’m pleased with my progress and extremely thankful to my teachers and classmates’ help.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示要点，结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时；人称以第一人称为主；文章可分为四段式：第一段点题。第二段和第三段阐述自己两次进步的经历。最后一段表达感谢。写作时要保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
15．例文
I think developing good habits is important in our life. One cannot succeed without hard work and good habits. Some people read a book before going to bed every night, and some people insist on getting up early to exercise. Living and studying habits are very important to our growth. Many years ago, I used to do my homework before going to bed. And I had to stay up to finish my homework. The next morning, I felt sleepy in class. As a result, I did badly in my exams. Luckily, my father told me what to do after he learnt my problem. I tried to make a timetable and stuck to it. Little by little, I found it easier to deal with my homework and I made great progress. Now I have enough time to enjoy my life. I am happier and more confident than before.
The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，描述自己以前做的不好的一件事情，而现在已经养成了很好的习惯，并谈论养成好习惯的过程和收获，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
16．例文:
Dear Tony,
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself. I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time I think we should plan our time reasonably and relax appropriately.
Yours,
XXX
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，给你的朋友Tony写一封信，介绍“双减”后。你的生活和学习有的变化，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
17．例文：
Changes in My School Life
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
I used to have a lot of homework every day. I used to have endless homework every day. Now the study pressure is reduced and the homework is reduced. We sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍“双减”政策实施以来，学生们在学习和生活上的变化。题目给出了五个方面，写作时需要包含全部。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分层次叙述，保证文章条理清晰；文章强调现在和过去的变化，注意使用比较级句式。
18．例文
There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know the change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When the change comes, we should face it and take action.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据写作要点，结合自己生活经历，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需包含要点，不要遗漏，细节部分可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
19．[例文]
My Changes
Great changes have happened to me in the past three years.
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to play sports after school, but now I don’t have time to do it anymore. I’m really busy with my studies. Second, I have made much progress in English. I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“My Changes”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下自己的变化，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，作文可以分三段，第一段已经给出；第二段根据表格里的内容阐述过去以及现在的变化；第三段收尾总结。要求语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。
20．例文：
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years.
My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house. What’s more, my mother wasn’t in good health and she often fell ill. I was worried about her all the time, so my grades became worse and worse. However, with the help of the government, we have moved into a new house. To our happiness, my mother has become better. As for me, I have made great progress at school because of my hard work. In a word, our life has improved a lot.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，以“家的变化”为主题，结合文中所给要点完成短文，短文开头已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称来叙述家中的变化，显得情真意切；正确使用一般过去时和现在完成时，过去的情况和现在的变化一目了然，条理清晰；在写作时承接开头，先介绍家中过去的情况，再描述了政府帮扶后家中的变化，最后一句总结文章并升华主题，同时过渡衔接自然，首尾呼应。
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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 4 l used to be afraid of the dark
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
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2．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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3．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
I have changed a lot
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4．时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。
要求：
1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息；
2. 100 词左右。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
I Have Changed a Lot!
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5．这些年，随着经济的迅速发展，你的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
2. 你对这些变化的看法。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数100左右。
My Life Has Become Much Better
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6．你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日，你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识，给她回一封email。
要点包含： 要求：
1. 对比过去与现在的情况：日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面（各1条）； 1. 所给信息完整表述；
2. 你认为最大的一个改变； 2. 分段，合理使用过渡词，使文章通顺并有逻辑；
3. 国家发生改变的原因（至少1 条）； 3. 拼写，语法正确，表达流畅，书写干净整齐；
4. 你的感受（至少2条）。 4. 格式正确，120 词左右。
可能用到的短语：经济发展economic development 70周年70th anniversary_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．2022年7月24日，中共中央办公厅、国务院印发了《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》，响应党中央和政府号召，双减政策正式施行，同学们的课外辅导和家庭作业减少了。假如你是一名九年级学生李华，正在接受学校公众号采访，结合自己的亲身经历谈一谈以下几点：
1. What has changed on your study time, hobbies, physical exercises and other activities after the “double reduction” policy
2. What do you think of the “double reduction” policy
3. How will you manage your time for a bright future
要求：1.内容必须包括所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2.语言表达准确，语篇连贯。
3.词数80-100，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot, next let me talk about it.
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I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
8．请根据下列提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的短文。100词左右。
提示：
过去：1. 居住条件差，一家人住在又小又旧的房子里。
2. 主要通过寄信与朋友保持联系。
3. 步行、骑自行车上班。
4. 道路狭窄，车辆少。
现在：1. 居住环境舒适，搬进高楼。
2. 通过手机交流。
3. 环形路宽阔，拥有自己的车辆。
4. 可以做很多事情放松自己。
我很高兴看见这些变化，并为此自豪，相信家乡会变得越来越美丽。
Changes in My Hometown
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9．国家颁布了“双减”政策，即减作业，减培训等，极大的保证了中小学生的身心健康。各学校均采取了一系列的有利于学生健康成长的措施。请以“Changes in my school life”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈一下你在这些方面的变化。
1.要点：1）包括睡眠、课外活动（after school activities）、学习、作业、体育锻炼几个方面；
2）它会给你带来怎样的影响和变化；
3）变化后有何感受。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Changes in my school life
Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise, so do I.
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All in all, these are my changes in my school life, What great changes!
10．假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表中的提示，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会及个人生活各方面的变化，展望未来并浅谈如何为之努力。
变化 家乡 老旧房屋→高楼林立
交通 步行；骑车→乘坐公交车；开小汽车
个人 书本学习→网络学习
愿望 更加美好的生活（或自拟内容，说明自己的理想生活）
打算 ……
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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I believe that our life will be better and better.
11．初中三年转瞬即逝，你在学习生活中一定有许多的变化和收获。面对未来的高中生活，你一定也有很多憧憬。请根据下面表格中的信息写一篇演讲稿，分享你的初中成长收获以及打算在高中提升的地方。
Development in middle school Self-improvement in high school
Personality shy→more outgoing... more confident
Schoolwork a bit lazy → more hard-working more creative
Relationship with classmates have more friends get on better with others
… … …
注意：
(1)短文须包括表格中所包含的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Looking back at the past three years’ middle school life, I have so many great changes.
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12．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问中国新农村建设的发展状况。请你根据下面列出的要点，结合自己家乡“美丽乡村”建设，写一封电子邮件介绍中国新农村的一些变化作为答复。
要点如下：
1. 居往环境方面的改善；
2. 文化生活水平的提高；
3. 邀请他来参观体验；
4. ……（不少于一点）
参考词汇：
农村建设（rural reconstruction），文化生活（cultural life）
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you and get to know
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I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
要求:
1.内容包含所提供的信息，并有适当的发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名；
4.词数：70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
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Thanks so much!
Yours,
Li Hua
14．回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
要点：1. 选取至少两个方面；2. 结合自身亲身经历，谈一谈过去与现在的不同；3.如何取得这些进步的。
要求：1. 书写工整，语句连贯，词数80左右；2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
I have made progress
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15．一个人的成功离不开勤奋努力，也离不开良好的习惯。有人每晚睡前读一会书，有人坚持早起锻炼身体……生活与学习习惯对我们的成长很重要。请选择一个你以前做得不好、但现在已养成的好习惯，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程与收获。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数内。
提示：Good habits：Learning habit；eating habit；sleeping habit；exercise habit. . .
I think developing good habits is important in our life. Many years ago, I used to
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The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
16．“双减”新规(The new rule)的提出给学生们的学习、生活带来了很大的变化。“双减”后。你的生活和学习有哪些变化？请给你的朋友Tony写一封信。
1. 要点：
1）从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈你是否满意现在的变化；
2）你还有哪些烦恼；
3）请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
2. 要求：
1）文中不要出现你所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右。
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17．自从国家实行“双减”(double-lightening the burden)政策以来，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍自己校园生活的变化。
写作要点：
(1)学习压力减轻了，作业减少了；(2)睡眠时间和运动时间增多了；(3)有更多的时间去做自己喜欢的事情，学习效率提高了； (4)有更多的时间与父母在一起；(5)生活更幸福了。
注意：
(1)词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)合理增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇：reduce study pressure 减少学习压力，efficiently 高效地
Changes in My School Life
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
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18．变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适应，才能有所收获和进步。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获？
写作要点：
1.What is the change that happened in your life
2.How did you deal with the change
3.What have you learned from the experience
要求：
1. 短文包含提示中所有要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于 80。
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19．转眼间，三年的初中学习生活即将结束。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗 这几年在你身上发生了哪些变化 请你以“My Changes”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文来介绍一下自己的变化吧。
过去 现在
放学后和同学一起做运动。 再也没时间做运动了。
英语薄弱。 在英语老师的帮助下，英语取得了很大的进步。
害怕在人们面前讲话。 更外向，能够在公众场合演讲。
要求：
1.字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
My Changes
Great changes have happened to me in the past three years.
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These are my changes. What about yours
20．假如你叫李军，你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象，在政府两年的帮扶下，你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动，请你根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，参加本次活动。
内容要点：
过去 1. 家庭贫困，房屋破旧。 2. 母亲生病，为母担忧，成绩下滑。
现在 3. 住进新房，母亲康复，学习进步。 4. 生活日趋改善。
要求：1. 词数：70词左右。短文开头语已给出，但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点，但不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
2．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
3．例文
I have changed a lot
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident than before. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，过去和现在最重要的改变是什么；
第二步，介绍过去是什么样的；
第三步，介绍如何发生这样的改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①how happy I am!（感叹句）
②Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
4．例文
I Have Changed a Lot!
Time goes by quickly. My life has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me show you my changes.
I used to be really short and thin. Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing.
I hope my life will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总述和之前相比，自己改变了很多；
第二步，再描述你之前是什么样子的，例如可以从之前的外貌、性格等方面来描述；接着描述自己发生了哪些变化，其中最重要的变化是什么，这个变化是如何发生的。
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对未来生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 过去是
② take part in 参加
③ be afraid of 害怕
④ encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing.（that引导的表语从句）
③ I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school.（when引导的时间状语从句和there be句型）
5． My Life Has Become Much Better
With the progress of society, now the family is getting smaller and smaller, generally only one or two children. In this way, children can enjoy a good education. They are also busy working. There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy. We used to live in a very small house, but now we live in a very large house. There are many activities in people’s free time, such as mountain climbing, fishing and so on. There are many high-quality programs on TV, such as Beijing Opera and some old movies.
In a word, our life is better today and we eat better and live longer.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍随着经济的迅速发展，你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化；
第二步，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way以这种方式
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③such as比如
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
① now the family is getting smaller and smaller（比较级+and+比较级的用法）
②There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy.（there be句型，and连接并列结构）
6．例文：
Dear Lucy,
Today is the 70th anniversary of the founding of new China. I feel very happy. There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. In the past, we were more inconvenient in our daily life, and now the traffic is very convenient. We can shop online, more importantly, we can buy things without cash. Our country implements nine-year compulsory education. I think the biggest change is students don’t have to pay any more for their books. I think that’s very good for some poor students. These changes are to make people live a better life. I am happy with these changes. Thanks to our country, thanks to our people. They make our life better and better. I want the motherland to be stronger and stronger, and you
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点包含”中日常生活方面，交通方面，教育方面的介绍，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我们国家有很多变化”来引出重点介绍内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面、作者认为最大变化、发展原因、作者感受等”几个方面介绍国家发展相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。祝福祖国越来越强大并询问Lucy的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① in the past在过去
② shop online 网上购物
③ more importantly更重要的是
④ pay for支付
⑤ make sb do让某人做某事
⑥ Thanks to多亏
⑦ stronger ang stronger越来越强大
[高分句型]
① There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. （there be句型，表示某地有某物）
② I think that’s very convenient for some poor students. （I think+宾语从句）
7．例文：
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, my life has changed a lot, next let me talk about it.
I used to do my homework till midnight and had no time for my hobbies. On weekends I had to take different kinds of after-school lessons to improve my exam skills so that I could go to a good high school.
However, with the support of “double reduction” policy, though I go home late, I have more interesting activities. I can do what I like, such as playing football and some other ballgames, learning, playing the piano, handwriting, drawing and so on. I feel excited when I take part in these activities. What’s more, I have more time to communicate with my parents. I can spend more time with my family and friends. I can get on well with them. Sometimes I help out with some housework.
Although we feel less stressed than before, self-discipline becomes the key. We should balance the schoolwork and after-school activities, manage the time wisely and improve ourselves to get a brighter future.
I believe I can study happily and have fun at school because of “double reduction” policy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求根据三个要点和亲身经历写一篇80-100词左右的短文，内容包括：双减政策实施以来你在学习时间、爱好、体育锻炼和其他活动等的变化、你对双减政策的看法以及你如何为美好的未来管理你的时间。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，时态可用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。写作时应承接开头和结尾，围绕提示要点进行发挥，可适当增加细节以满足字数要求和丰富文章内容；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
8．例文
Changes in My Hometown
China has developed so fast in recent years. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the living conditions were hard. There used to be old houses. A big family had to share small rooms. The roads were narrow and there were not many buses or cars. People went to work on foot or by bike. People kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters.
Now, the living conditions are comfortable. Most families have moved into tall buildings now. The ring roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. People can communicate with each other by cell phone. What’s more, people can do many things to relax themselves, such as going traveling and doing sports.
I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. I’m proud of the rapid development in my hometown. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Changes in My Hometown”为题进行写作，介绍家乡所发生的变化。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。首先开篇点题，点明家乡发生了变化，紧接着介绍过去家乡的情况；第二段介绍现在家乡发生改变后的情况；最后一段表达自己的感想和希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
Changes in my school life
Every school has taken action to give more time to students so that they can have more free time to relax and exercise, so do I. Let me tell you some changes in my school life.
It is very important and necessary for students to have enough time to relax and do sports, because it is beneficial to students’ health. Great changes have taken place in my school since the beginning of last term. On the other hand, I can go to school at 7:30 now, but in the past, I had to arrive at school at 7:00. On the other hand, now I have enough sleep, I don’t have to sleep late at night. I can go to bed early. What’s more, I have less homework, but in the past I had much homework, so I have free time to relax myself and do what I like to do. Finally, I have a lot of time to do sports and do some extra-curricular activities every day. It not only makes me strong and healthy, but also makes my life colorful.
All in all, these are my changes in my school life, What great changes!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Changes in my school life”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段和第三段都已给出；第二段从睡眠，课外活动，学习，作业和体育锻炼等方面介绍生活的变化。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文
Changes in Our Life
Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, people used to live in old and broken houses. Now, there are tall and beautiful buildings everywhere. In the past, people had to walk or ride when they went out. But now, they can take buses or drive to wherever they want to go. Several years ago, people could only learn from books. Nowadays, they can also learn through computers.
I hope people from all over the country can live a better life in the near future. And I will study hard and try my best to make it come true.
I believe that our life will be better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于较为常见的描述变化的作文。需要根据表格提示，将信息转化为语句。由于文章开头结尾已给，表格内容即为第二段，主要描述变化。
2.写作指导：本文主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。已经产生的变化，用现在完成时进行总体概述。谈论到具体变化时，过去的状态使用一般过去时，现在的状态使用一般现在时。词语应尽量丰富，体现出变化后的美好。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
11．例文：
Looking back an the past three years’ middle school life, I have so many great changes. Let me share you about them.
Firstly, I used to be shy, but now I have become more outgoing. I decide to be more confident when I go to high school. As for schoolwork, I am getting more hard-working in middle school. Certainly, I need to be more creative. It is a pleasant thing that I had more friends during my middle school life. I plan to get on better with others when I am a high school student. What’s more, I should do some useful things for my family.
I am very happy with my changes. Do you have any development in your middle school
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据表格内容要求分享你的初中成长收获以及打算在高中提升的地方，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
12．例文：
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear from you and get to know that you are interested in the changes of our countryside. With the promotion of the policy, Rural Reconstruction, great changes have taken place in the countryside.
Old houses have been replaced with new and tall ones full of good facilities. Moreover, the local government has made great efforts to control the environment pollution. What’s more, it’s convenient for the villagers to travel around because many families have bought their private cars. In their spare time, they can enjoy different kinds of activities to relax themselves such as doing sports, singing and dancing.
I sincerely hope you will pay a visit soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据要点提示写电子邮件介绍中国新农村的一些变化，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，结合具体语境选用合适的时态。电子邮件正文可分为三段式：第一段点题；第二段讲变化；第三段邀请对方来参观体验。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
13．例文
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself.
I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time
Thanks so much!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对“双减”新规提出后的生活的变化进行写作，包括课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面的内容。具体的内容要包含所给的提示和要求。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面进行叙述；第三段叙述自己是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．例文
I have made progress
How time flies! My junior high school life will be over soon. During the past three years, I’ve made great progress in these two ways.
When I entered the middle school, I felt sleepy in math class because I couldn’t understand the teacher. I was very afraid of exams and always failed exams. With the help of my math teacher, I tried my best to study math and spent a lot of time on it. Now, I can get good grades.
I am an outgoing girl and I get on well with people around me. But I used to be shy to talk with others. It was tough for me to join in the group discussions. My classmates encouraged me a lot, I tried to express my own thoughts and I became active and confident.
Just as the saying goes “No pain no gain”. I’m pleased with my progress and extremely thankful to my teachers and classmates’ help.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示要点，结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时；人称以第一人称为主；文章可分为四段式：第一段点题。第二段和第三段阐述自己两次进步的经历。最后一段表达感谢。写作时要保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
15．例文
I think developing good habits is important in our life. One cannot succeed without hard work and good habits. Some people read a book before going to bed every night, and some people insist on getting up early to exercise. Living and studying habits are very important to our growth. Many years ago, I used to do my homework before going to bed. And I had to stay up to finish my homework. The next morning, I felt sleepy in class. As a result, I did badly in my exams. Luckily, my father told me what to do after he learnt my problem. I tried to make a timetable and stuck to it. Little by little, I found it easier to deal with my homework and I made great progress. Now I have enough time to enjoy my life. I am happier and more confident than before.
The earlier we get into good habits, the happier life we will have. Let’s take action!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，描述自己以前做的不好的一件事情，而现在已经养成了很好的习惯，并谈论养成好习惯的过程和收获，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
16．例文:
Dear Tony,
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself. I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time I think we should plan our time reasonably and relax appropriately.
Yours,
XXX
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，给你的朋友Tony写一封信，介绍“双减”后。你的生活和学习有的变化，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
17．例文：
Changes in My School Life
It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot.
I used to have a lot of homework every day. I used to have endless homework every day. Now the study pressure is reduced and the homework is reduced. We sleep more and exercise more. We have more time to do what we like. We can learn efficiently. More importantly, we have more time to stay with our parents and live a happier life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍“双减”政策实施以来，学生们在学习和生活上的变化。题目给出了五个方面，写作时需要包含全部。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意按照要点分层次叙述，保证文章条理清晰；文章强调现在和过去的变化，注意使用比较级句式。
18．例文
There are many changes in a person’s life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradually, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.
From this experience, I get to know the change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When the change comes, we should face it and take action.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据写作要点，结合自己生活经历，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需包含要点，不要遗漏，细节部分可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
19．[例文]
My Changes
Great changes have happened to me in the past three years.
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to play sports after school, but now I don’t have time to do it anymore. I’m really busy with my studies. Second, I have made much progress in English. I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“My Changes”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下自己的变化，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，作文可以分三段，第一段已经给出；第二段根据表格里的内容阐述过去以及现在的变化；第三段收尾总结。要求语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。
20．例文：
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years.
My family used to be very poor and we lived in an old and broken house. What’s more, my mother wasn’t in good health and she often fell ill. I was worried about her all the time, so my grades became worse and worse. However, with the help of the government, we have moved into a new house. To our happiness, my mother has become better. As for me, I have made great progress at school because of my hard work. In a word, our life has improved a lot.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，以“家的变化”为主题，结合文中所给要点完成短文，短文开头已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称来叙述家中的变化，显得情真意切；正确使用一般过去时和现在完成时，过去的情况和现在的变化一目了然，条理清晰；在写作时承接开头，先介绍家中过去的情况，再描述了政府帮扶后家中的变化，最后一句总结文章并升华主题，同时过渡衔接自然，首尾呼应。
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同课章节目录
- Unit 1 How can we become good learners.
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restroom
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?
- Section A
- Section B
- Review of Units 1-5
- Unit 6 When was it invented?
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 8 It must belong to Carla.
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands.
- Section A
- Section B
- Review of Units 6-10
- Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 13 We're trying to save the earth!
- Section A
- Section B
- Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
- Section A
- Section B
- Review of Units 11-14