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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 4 Home alone
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．提示：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲”。父母是我们最亲的人，但有时我们会在与父母相处时遇到困难，请以“Try to Get Along Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一次你妥善处理和父母有争执的经历与感受，或者谈谈怎样才能和父母和谐相处。
要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，如在本试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
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2．良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长至关重要，然而，不少青少年容易与父母产生矛盾。我们应如何与父母和谐相处呢？假如你是李华，请以“How to get on well with our parents”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
（1）谈谈你与父母之间曾经有过的矛盾；
（2）说说你是怎么解决与父母之间的矛盾；
（3）给出与父母和谐相处的建议。（至少两条）
要求：
（1）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；
（2）可增加适当细节使语句连贯，词数 80—100 左右。
How to get on well with our parents
I’m Li Hua. I don’t agree with my parents sometimes.
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3．某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动。
要求：（1）短文必须包含讨论中所提及的要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）80—100词
Topic: How to keep a good relationship with parents
Do you have any problems at home Do you have too many rules at home Do your parents pay too much attention to your schoolwork Are you allowed to make your own decisions Do they understand you … What do you think of these problems What do you do to keep a good relationship with your parents Come and show us your ideas!
How to keep a good relationship with parents
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4．处于青春期阶段的青少年，容易情绪波动，甚至敏感(sensitive)、叛逆(rebellious)，与父母沟通交流产生障碍。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，讲述一个你如何学会与父母化解矛盾、和睦相处的故事。
要求如下：
1. 短文须包含思维导图所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 重点谈谈你们是如何化解矛盾的；
3. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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5．假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的信件，用于投稿。
你的感谢 父母的辛勤付出
父母的关爱呵护
父母的教育启示
你的决心 努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
2. 内容需包含表格中所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，以使行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
4. 词数80左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
参考词汇：raise me up（养育我）；take care of（关心）；receive good education（接受好的教育）；live a happy life（过上快乐的生活）；be grateful to sb（感激某人）；work hard（努力工作）
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
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Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
6．某英文报社现就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文参加此次活动。
提示：1. 你的父母规矩太多，如过于强调学习成绩等，他们不理解你；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，
2.80—100词。
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7．请讲述进入初中后的这两年多里，你与父母之间相处方式的变化。
内容包括：
1. 你和父母过去是如何相处的；
2. 你和父母相处方式有什么变化 举例说明。
3. 你对这种变化的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
As I grow up, the relationship between my parents and me has changed a lot.
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8．作为青少年，在与父母相处的过程中，难免会遇到各种各样的问题。你校英文广播电台“Say You, Say Me”栏目正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. What was the problem between your parents and you
2. How did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from it
参考词汇：spend too much time on..., do bad in, talk with each other, explain the reason, the importance of communication,...
要求：
1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy.
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9．在我们日常的生活和学习中，子女与父母之间、同学之间、师生之间以及朋友之间的互相理解是非常重要的，它能消除误会，增进感情，共同进步。请你结合自己的亲身经历，以“Understanding”为题，写一篇英语小短文，词数不少于80词。
Understanding
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10．在成长过程中，我们常常会遇到许多困惑，希望得到帮助，而父母是我们最信任的家人，与父母沟通具有重要意义。请讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
内容包括：
1. the importance of communicating with your parents
2. an experience you had
3. what you have learned from it
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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11．最近你和父母针对“青少年应不应在周末与朋友外出”这一话题进行了讨论。请根据下面表格中的信息提示，以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends”为题写一篇80至100词左右的英语短文。
Your parents’ ideas Your idea
1. go over lessons 2. have a good sleep 3. help parents do housework 1. … 2. … 3. …
要求：语句通顺，表达连贯，过度自然，开头以给出；你的观点可适当发挥；开头以给出，不计入总词汇。
Should Teenagers Go Out with Friends on Weekends
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.
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12．父母是这个世界上最爱我们的人，他们对孩子的关心和爱不计回报。良好的亲子关系给予孩子成长的力量。但是有时父母与孩子缺乏沟通、不能相互理解，对孩子的成长也会产生不好的影响。请你用三段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.你如何看待孩子与父母的关系？
2.结合自己的经历，谈谈与父母的关系对你产生的影响。
3.你打算如何改善与父母的关系？
要求：词数不少于 80词；文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
3 Ways to Get on with Parents. Do something together. Listen to their ideas. Share each other’s life.
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13．父母像太阳，让孩子沐浴着阳光，但生活中不可能总是晴空万里，各种冲突会在孩子与父母之间发生，而这些在孩子的成长道路上是不可避免的。你校的“校园之声”广播电台英文栏目“Say You, Say Me”正在征稿，鼓励同学们说出自己的成长故事。请你写一篇英语短文，参加征稿。内容包括：
1.你与父母之间发生的一次印象深刻的冲突；
2.你是怎么解决冲突的；
3.你从中学到了什么。
要求：
1.词数100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.须包括所有要点提示，语法正确，语句通顺，内容连贯，可适当发挥。
请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！
Like other teenagers, I love my parents. But something awful happened between us
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14．没有规矩不能成方圆，每个家庭都会给自己的孩子制定一些“rules”。假如你是王伟，请你以“Rules in My Family”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇小短文分享对你家的规则的看法。
提示：
1. What kind of rules are there in your family
2. Do you agree or disagree with them Why
3. How do you think the rules should be changed
要求：1、短文须包含所给提示，并适当发挥。
2、卷面整洁，书写规范，词数80左右。
Rules in My Family
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15．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，跟三年前的自己相比较，你与你的父母在相处过程中发生了很多变化。请根据下面的提示写出一篇80词的短文。
提示：
（1）How did you get along with your parents in the past
（2）What’s the most important change How did it happen
（3）How do you feel about this change
要求：
（1）内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
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16．某中学生英文网站本期论坛发起的讨论话题是“面对一些抉择时，你是听从父母的安排还是自己做决定？”。假设你是李华，请你根据自己做决定的一次经历写一篇英语短文，参与讨论。
内容包括：
1.你自己做决定的一次经历；
2.你父母的态度；
3.你想对父母说的话。
要求：
1.紧扣主题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I was so happy that I was allowed to make my own decision that day.
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17．某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：
1. 父母规矩太多，比如过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的想法或者做法。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，可适当补充，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
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18．步入九年级后，你一定体验到了学习任务的繁重，但有张有弛的生活才会让人感到充实而快乐。你想要的生活是什么样子的呢？下面请你写一篇作文来表达你的想法。内容包括：
1.你觉得父母对你生活中的哪些安排或规定需要改变？为什么？
2.当有了更多的空闲时间，你想做什么呢？是听音乐或歌曲？还是看电影？又或者是读书？还是弹奏乐器？你的爱好带给你的感受是什么呢？
具体要求：
1.内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3.短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest.
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19．假如你是Alice，你家里的规矩很多，你的父母总是对你有很多要求，不理解你的很多做法。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文谈谈你的家规及你对你的家规的看法。
要点：1）父母不允许我晚上出去；
2）不允许我自己选择衣服，只关注我的成绩；
3）不允许我花太长时间在我的爱好上；
4）……
要求：1）参考要点内容；可适当发挥；2）语句通顺，意思连贯；3）词数 80~100。
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20．随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你和父母的相处情况，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
（1）你与父母相处存在的2个问题；
（2）提出你解决问题的办法；
（3）你的想法。
要求：
（1）文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80字；
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．参考范文
Try to Get Along Well with Our Parents
Parents are the people who love us most. They care for us and take care of us. Without doubt we should get on well with them and respect them. Here are some of my ways to get on well with my parents.
Firstly, communicate with our parents. For example, when we are in trouble or meet some sad things, we can ask our parents for help and advice. They will be happy to talk with us and help us. Secondly, spend more time with our parents. Don’t play computer games or watch TV by ourselves. Ask our parents to play with us, such as going outside together, doing some reading and so on. Thirdly, help parents with some housework. Our parents can’t work all day or do housework all evening, that’s too tiring. So we should share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.
It’s not easy to get on with parents and we should learn to understand them first. The more parents and children understand each other, the better we will get on with each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍怎样才能和父母和谐相处的建议；
第二步，书写总结，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②without doubt毫无疑问
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①For example, when we are in trouble or meet some sad things, we can ask our parents for help and advice.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The more parents and children understand each other, the better we will get on with each other.（“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构）
2．例文
How to get on well with our parents I’m Li Hua. I don’t agree with my parents sometimes. Last year, I wanted to go to a concert with my friends, but my parents thought I should focus on my studies. This led to a big argument. However, I realized that communication is key. I sat down with my parents and explained why the concert was important to me. They, in turn, shared their concerns about my studies. We reached a compromise where I could go to the concert but also had to make a study plan. So how can we get on well with our parents Here is some of my advice.
First, we should communicate openly and honestly. Share your thoughts and feelings with them. Second, we should show respect and understanding. Try to see things from their perspective.
By following these tips, we can build a stronger and more harmonious relationship.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，谈谈自己与父母之间曾经有过的矛盾；
第二步、介绍自己是怎么解决与父母之间的矛盾；
第三步、给出与父母和谐相处的建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go to a concert去听音乐会
②in turn反过来
③reach a compromise达成妥协；达成和解
④get on well with…与……相处融洽
⑤show respect表示尊重
[高分句型]
①I sat down with my parents and explained why the concert was important to me.(why引导宾语从句)
3．范文：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
I have too many rules at home. I’m not allowed to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although I am not allowed to make my own decisions and they give me too much pressure, too. I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, talk with them about my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接阐述和父母间存在的矛盾 ；
第二步，表达自己对这些问题的看法；
第三步，提出与父母保持良好关系的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
③make one’s own decision自己做决定
[高分句型]
①I think my parents don’t quite understand me.(宾语从句)
②I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.(宾语从句)
4．例文
I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents
During my adolescence, I had some problems with my parents. I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. This was the problem between us.
To solve this problem, we sat down and talked calmly. I told my parents how much I wanted to go and promised to call them when I arrived at the party and come back home on time. My parents listened to me patiently. They said they were just worried about my safety.
Now, we get on well with each other. We respect each other’s opinions. I always tell them my plans in advance, and they give me reasonable advice. From this experience, I learned that communication is the key to getting along with parents. We should understand and respect each other.
In a word, through proper communication, teenagers can avoid many conflicts with their parents and have a good relationship with them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己青春期和父母之间的一次矛盾；
第二步，介绍自己是如何化解矛盾的；
第三步，介绍现在和父母相处的情况以及自己从这次矛盾中得到的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②on time准时
③be worried about担心
④in advance提前
⑤get along with sb.与某人友好相处
⑥in a word总之
[高分句型]
I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. (省略引导词that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
5．例文
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. You have raised me up and taken good care of me. You have also taught me how to be a good person. I am lucky to receive good education and live a happy life. I am grateful to you for all these things.
I will work hard to make you proud of me. I hope you will always be healthy and happy.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材: 这是一篇感恩父母的书信作文，旨在表达对父母的感谢和自己的决心。
②时态: 使用“现在进行时”表达当前的感激之情，“将来时”表达决心和祝愿。
③提示: 需要根据表格提供的要点，写一封感谢信，表达对父母的感激，并承诺自己的努力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达写信的目的，感谢父母的付出和关爱。
第二步，详细列出父母对自己的贡献，包括养育、关爱和教育。
第三步，表达自己的决心和对父母的祝愿，结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①raise me up 养育我
②take care of 关心
③receive good education 接受好的教育
④live a happy life 过上快乐的生活
⑤be grateful to sb 感激某人
⑥work hard 努力工作
[高分句型]
①I hope you will always be healthy and happy.（宾语从句）
②Thanks again for everything you have done for me.（定语从句）
6．例文
How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents
In my opinion, my parents have too many rules for me at home. They overly emphasize my grades and I often feel misunderstood by them. What’s more, I understand they do so out of love and a desire for my success. To keep a good relationship, I make sure to communicate openly with them about my feelings and challenges. I also show appreciation for their efforts by helping around the house and making an effort to improve my grades. By understanding each other better, our relationship improves over time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍跟父母的问题；
第二步，谈谈对这些问题的看法；
第三步，介绍与父母保持良好关系的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion 在我看来
②make sure 确保
③communicate openly with 开诚布公地沟通
④each other 彼此
[高分句型]
①They overly emphasize my grades and I often feel misunderstood by them.（并列句）
②I also show appreciation for their efforts by helping around the house and making an effort to improve my grades.（动名词作宾语）
7．例文：
As I grow up, the relationship between my parents and me has changed a lot. My parents have changed a lot in the past two years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t have any friends.
The biggest change is that they are much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends. I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades.
Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述你和父母过去是如何相处的；
第二步，具体阐述你和父母相处方式有什么变化并举例说明；
第三步，书写结语，表达你对这种变化的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……严格
②stay at home待在家
③get on well with sb.与某人相处得好
[高分句型]
①The biggest change is that they are much gentler than before. (that引导的表语从句)
8．例文
Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy. For example, I used to spend too much time on my mobile phone and did badly in my studies. My parents were very worried and asked me to limit my phone usage. At first, I was very resistant and didn’t want to listen to them. But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. We reached an agreement that I would only use my phone for a certain amount of time each day.
From this experience, I learned the importance of communication. We should always communicate with our parents and understand each other’s feelings and needs.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍与父母的问题是什么；
第二步，介绍自己是如何处理自己与父母之间的问题的；
第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②reach an agreement达成协议
③do badly in在……方面表现不佳
④communicate with sb和某人沟通
[高分句型]
①But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. (that引导宾语从句)
②So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. (why引导定语从句)
9．例文
Understanding
It is very important to understand each other in our family.
Last year, my mother always pushed me to study hard. Even on weekends, I had to have different kinds of after-school activities. As a result, I felt very stressed out and I even failed my exam. I didn’t want to take so many classes but I didn’t want to let my mother down. So I decided to have a conversation with my mother. I told her that I knew she wanted me to be successful but so many classes made me under too much pressure. My mother understood me and allowed me relax on weekends. After that, I felt happier and made progress. My mother and I were both happy.
So understanding can help us get on well with each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：本文是介绍自己和妈妈之间关于理解的故事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己和妈妈之间关于理解的故事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②as a result结果
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
④get on well with和某人和谐相处
[高分句型]
I told her that I knew she wanted me to be successful but so many classes made me under too much pressure. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文：
Communicating with parents is very important in our daily life. When I face a problem, I will share my thoughts and feelings with my parents, and they will always help me find a solution to the problem. I still remember one experience last year.
When I met my new English teacher, I was upset. She spoke so quickly that I couldn’t follow her well. I was worried and didn’t know what to do. My parents communicated with me about my problem and advised me to ask the teacher for help bravely. My teacher made a careful plan for me with patience. Later, I began to talk with my classmates in English. I also read English books outside class. Now, I have improved a lot.
I like to communicate with my parents and I often learn a lot from them. It’s necessary to communicate with our parents in our daily life. This will help us a lot.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历，考生应注意在叙述自己过去经历时，用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题，吸引读者兴趣；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历；
第三步，书写结语。叙述自己从这次经历中的收获和心得。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.与某人交流
②ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
③talk with sb.与某人交谈
[高分句型]
①When I face a problem, I will share my thoughts and feelings with my parents, and they will always help me find a solution to the problem. (when引导时间状语从句)
②It’s necessary to communicate with our parents in our daily life. (it作形式主语)
11．例文
Should Teenagers Go Out with Friends on Weekends Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. They should go over their lessons. And they could have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on weekends.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, so we can relax more. And we can also share ideas with each other. What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍父母的看法；
第三步，介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home 待在家
②go over 仔细检查
③in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
①My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends.（宾语从句）
②What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.（动词不定式作目的状语）
12．例文
I think the relationship between children and parents is very important. It can affect how we feel and also help form our personalities. My parents and I have a good relationship. They always support me and listen to me. This makes me happy and brave. It helps me a lot in my life.
To make my relationship with my parents better, I will do these things. I’ll do more things with them like taking a walk. I’ll listen to their ideas carefully and share my life with them. I want them to know me more.
In a word, a good relationship with parents is necessary. I hope I can have a better relationship with them and our family will be more happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己对孩子与父母之间的关系的看法；
第二步，谈谈与父母的关系对自己产生的影响以及打算如何改善与父母的关系；
第三步，书写结束语，表达良好的亲子关系是必要的。
[亮点词汇]
①form our personalities 塑造我们的个性
②support 支持
③taking a walk 散步
④share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①To make my relationship with my parents better, I will do these things. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②I hope I can have a better relationship with them and our family will be more happy.（省略that宾语从句）
13．例文
Like other teenagers, I love my parents. But something awful happened between us a month ago. That day, I asked my parents for money to buy a pair of expensive shoes, because some of my classmates wore such shoes. But to my surprise, my parents disagreed. In their opinion, teenagers should not be allowed to spend too much money on clothes or shoes. I felt so mad that I shouted at them. I entered my bedroom angrily and cried out.
After calming down, I realized my mistake. Then I expressed my regret and apologized to my parents. They hugged me and said they loved me. They wanted me not only to pay much attention to my study, but also to hold correct values.
From this experience, I learned that we children should respect our parents. When they disagree with us, we should listen to their explanations patiently instead of losing our temper.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求讲述自己在成长过程中与父母的一次冲突，考生应注意在叙述冲突时，用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，写出冲突是什么；
第二步，具体阐述如何解决冲突的；
第三步，书写结语。叙述自己从这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
②apologize to sb.向某人道歉
③pay attention to关注
④instead of 而不是
[高分句型]
①That day, I asked my parents for money to buy a pair of expensive shoes, because some of my classmates wore such shoes.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I felt so mad that I shouted at them.（结果状语从句）
③When they disagree with us, we should listen to their explanations patiently instead of losing our temper.（when引导时间状语从句）
14．例文：
Rules in My Family
My parents are very strict. And I have so many family rules.
For example, I can’t go out with my friends at school nights. On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It’s strict, but I think it’s necessary. And I must finish my homework on time. I can’t play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. I have to get up at six o’clock every morning. And I have to be in bed by ten o’clock.
Thanks to these rules, I can live healthily. But I think being in bed by ten o’clock is unfair! Students need nine hours’ sleep!
And I think playing some computer games is not bad. So I think the family rules can make some changes.
【解析】 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍自己的家规，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述学习和生活上的家庭规则；
第二步：阐述自己对规则的感受和看法。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②by oneself独自
③get up起床
[高分句型]
①It’s strict, but I think it’s necessary.（but表示转折）
②And I think playing some computer games is not bad.（宾语从句）
15．例文：
My Parents Have Changed Me
I didn’t get along well with my parents in the past. I used to spend much time playing computer games. At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Because of playing computer and staying up late, I was ill in hospital. Under the education of my parents, my life has completely changed in the past three years.
Now, I like sports and study hard. I hope to get into a better high school. They’re proud of me. I deeply feel the love of my parents. I feel very proud and happy, too.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去是怎样和父母相处的；
第二步，介绍现在相处的变化；
第三步，介绍自己对于这个变化的感受
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb. 和某人相处得好
②spend time doing 花费时间做某事
③be interested in 对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it.（and连接并列结构）
16．例文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I was so happy that I was allowed to make my own decision that day.
I still remember when I started junior high school, my parents wanted me to take after-school classes on weekends. But I wanted to play football because I liked it very much. We had different opinions, but in the end, my parents agreed to let me play football. In order to balance my schoolwork and play football, I made plans and followed them strictly. As a result, I got good scores on my exams and I am developing well in P.E.
I’d like to thank my parents for trusting me. And I want to say something to them. As a teenager, I need more chances to learn to manage my own life. Believe in me, and then I will gradually become more and more independent.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，对被允许自己做决定感到高兴；
第二步，介绍自己做决定的经历，以及父母对此的态度；
第三步，谈谈自己想对父母说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事
②in the end 最后
③in order to 为了
④make plans 制定计划
[高分句型]
①But I wanted to play football because I liked it very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Believe in me, and then I will gradually become more and more independent.（祈使句+and+陈述句）
17．例文：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many strict rules at home. I’m neither allowed to go out with my friends at night nor make my own decisions. What’s more, my parents pay too much attention to my exam results. Whenever I fail in my exams, they’ll be angry with me. So I think they don’t understand me at all.
However, although they give me too much pressure, I understand they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends about my problems, because I know “a problem shared is a problem halved”.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家规；
第二步，介绍自己对这些问题的看法；
第三步，介绍与父母保持良好关系的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①However, although they give me too much pressure, I understand they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（although引导让步状语从句）
②In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them.（动词不定式作目的状语）
18．例文
Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest. When I stop to watch TV and listen to music, my mother always says that I should study hard or I won’t go to a good high school. What’s worse, she doesn’t allow me to attend my friends’ parties because she thinks nothing is more important than study. I’m filled with much pressure. I should have my own time to relax so that I can be full of energy to work hard. I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me.
I hope I can have more time to do something I like.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍父母对你生活中的安排或规定需要改变及原因；
第二步，具体介绍自己空闲时间想做的事情；
第三步，表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②be good for有益于……
[高分句型]
①I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. (定语从句)
②Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me. (倒装句)
19．
There are many rules in my family. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my clothes, either. Instead, they only pay attention to my grades. I think they don’t understand me at all.
However, I try my best to understand them. I know behind the family rules lies their love to me. In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I decide to listen to them patiently. Besides, I will share my happiness and problems with them.
In a word, expressing myself and showing my love to them can make us know each other better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的家规的看法，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细阐述你的家规；
第二步，具体阐述你对家规的看法以及你的做法；
第三步，总结全文，向父母表达你对他们的爱可以让你们更理解对方。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②either也
③instead相反，反而
④pay attention to关注
⑤not...at all一点也不
⑥try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I know behind the family rules lies their love to me. （省略that的宾语从句，倒装句）
②In a word, expressing myself and showing my love to them can make us know each other better.（动名词作主语）
20．例文
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to get on well with parents, I think we should study hard and try to talk with them more. Here are my suggestions. First, we and our parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us. Third, try to think about our parents more, therefore we will find that we can understand them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥、突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己与父母存在的问题；
第二步，介绍该如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
② pay attention to 注意
③ too much 太多
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
⑤ get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I think my parents don’t quite understand me.（宾语从句）
② Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us.（祈使句+or+陈述句）
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Module 4 Home alone
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．提示：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲”。父母是我们最亲的人，但有时我们会在与父母相处时遇到困难，请以“Try to Get Along Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一次你妥善处理和父母有争执的经历与感受，或者谈谈怎样才能和父母和谐相处。
要求：1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，如在本试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
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2．良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长至关重要，然而，不少青少年容易与父母产生矛盾。我们应如何与父母和谐相处呢？假如你是李华，请以“How to get on well with our parents”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
（1）谈谈你与父母之间曾经有过的矛盾；
（2）说说你是怎么解决与父母之间的矛盾；
（3）给出与父母和谐相处的建议。（至少两条）
要求：
（1）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名；
（2）可增加适当细节使语句连贯，词数 80—100 左右。
How to get on well with our parents
I’m Li Hua. I don’t agree with my parents sometimes.
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3．某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动。
要求：（1）短文必须包含讨论中所提及的要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）80—100词
Topic: How to keep a good relationship with parents
Do you have any problems at home Do you have too many rules at home Do your parents pay too much attention to your schoolwork Are you allowed to make your own decisions Do they understand you … What do you think of these problems What do you do to keep a good relationship with your parents Come and show us your ideas!
How to keep a good relationship with parents
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4．处于青春期阶段的青少年，容易情绪波动，甚至敏感(sensitive)、叛逆(rebellious)，与父母沟通交流产生障碍。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，讲述一个你如何学会与父母化解矛盾、和睦相处的故事。
要求如下：
1. 短文须包含思维导图所有信息，可适当拓展；
2. 重点谈谈你们是如何化解矛盾的；
3. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
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5．假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的信件，用于投稿。
你的感谢 父母的辛勤付出
父母的关爱呵护
父母的教育启示
你的决心 努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
2. 内容需包含表格中所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，以使行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
4. 词数80左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
参考词汇：raise me up（养育我）；take care of（关心）；receive good education（接受好的教育）；live a happy life（过上快乐的生活）；be grateful to sb（感激某人）；work hard（努力工作）
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
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Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
6．某英文报社现就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents ”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文参加此次活动。
提示：1. 你的父母规矩太多，如过于强调学习成绩等，他们不理解你；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，
2.80—100词。
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7．请讲述进入初中后的这两年多里，你与父母之间相处方式的变化。
内容包括：
1. 你和父母过去是如何相处的；
2. 你和父母相处方式有什么变化 举例说明。
3. 你对这种变化的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
As I grow up, the relationship between my parents and me has changed a lot.
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8．作为青少年，在与父母相处的过程中，难免会遇到各种各样的问题。你校英文广播电台“Say You, Say Me”栏目正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. What was the problem between your parents and you
2. How did you deal with it
3. What have you learned from it
参考词汇：spend too much time on..., do bad in, talk with each other, explain the reason, the importance of communication,...
要求：
1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy.
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9．在我们日常的生活和学习中，子女与父母之间、同学之间、师生之间以及朋友之间的互相理解是非常重要的，它能消除误会，增进感情，共同进步。请你结合自己的亲身经历，以“Understanding”为题，写一篇英语小短文，词数不少于80词。
Understanding
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10．在成长过程中，我们常常会遇到许多困惑，希望得到帮助，而父母是我们最信任的家人，与父母沟通具有重要意义。请讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
内容包括：
1. the importance of communicating with your parents
2. an experience you had
3. what you have learned from it
要求：
1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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11．最近你和父母针对“青少年应不应在周末与朋友外出”这一话题进行了讨论。请根据下面表格中的信息提示，以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends”为题写一篇80至100词左右的英语短文。
Your parents’ ideas Your idea
1. go over lessons 2. have a good sleep 3. help parents do housework 1. … 2. … 3. …
要求：语句通顺，表达连贯，过度自然，开头以给出；你的观点可适当发挥；开头以给出，不计入总词汇。
Should Teenagers Go Out with Friends on Weekends
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.
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12．父母是这个世界上最爱我们的人，他们对孩子的关心和爱不计回报。良好的亲子关系给予孩子成长的力量。但是有时父母与孩子缺乏沟通、不能相互理解，对孩子的成长也会产生不好的影响。请你用三段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.你如何看待孩子与父母的关系？
2.结合自己的经历，谈谈与父母的关系对你产生的影响。
3.你打算如何改善与父母的关系？
要求：词数不少于 80词；文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
3 Ways to Get on with Parents. Do something together. Listen to their ideas. Share each other’s life.
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13．父母像太阳，让孩子沐浴着阳光，但生活中不可能总是晴空万里，各种冲突会在孩子与父母之间发生，而这些在孩子的成长道路上是不可避免的。你校的“校园之声”广播电台英文栏目“Say You, Say Me”正在征稿，鼓励同学们说出自己的成长故事。请你写一篇英语短文，参加征稿。内容包括：
1.你与父母之间发生的一次印象深刻的冲突；
2.你是怎么解决冲突的；
3.你从中学到了什么。
要求：
1.词数100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.须包括所有要点提示，语法正确，语句通顺，内容连贯，可适当发挥。
请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！
Like other teenagers, I love my parents. But something awful happened between us
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14．没有规矩不能成方圆，每个家庭都会给自己的孩子制定一些“rules”。假如你是王伟，请你以“Rules in My Family”为题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇小短文分享对你家的规则的看法。
提示：
1. What kind of rules are there in your family
2. Do you agree or disagree with them Why
3. How do you think the rules should be changed
要求：1、短文须包含所给提示，并适当发挥。
2、卷面整洁，书写规范，词数80左右。
Rules in My Family
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15．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，跟三年前的自己相比较，你与你的父母在相处过程中发生了很多变化。请根据下面的提示写出一篇80词的短文。
提示：
（1）How did you get along with your parents in the past
（2）What’s the most important change How did it happen
（3）How do you feel about this change
要求：
（1）内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右。
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16．某中学生英文网站本期论坛发起的讨论话题是“面对一些抉择时，你是听从父母的安排还是自己做决定？”。假设你是李华，请你根据自己做决定的一次经历写一篇英语短文，参与讨论。
内容包括：
1.你自己做决定的一次经历；
2.你父母的态度；
3.你想对父母说的话。
要求：
1.紧扣主题，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I was so happy that I was allowed to make my own decision that day.
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17．某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：
1. 父母规矩太多，比如过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2. 你对这些问题的看法；
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的想法或者做法。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，可适当补充，以使语句通顺，条理清楚，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
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18．步入九年级后，你一定体验到了学习任务的繁重，但有张有弛的生活才会让人感到充实而快乐。你想要的生活是什么样子的呢？下面请你写一篇作文来表达你的想法。内容包括：
1.你觉得父母对你生活中的哪些安排或规定需要改变？为什么？
2.当有了更多的空闲时间，你想做什么呢？是听音乐或歌曲？还是看电影？又或者是读书？还是弹奏乐器？你的爱好带给你的感受是什么呢？
具体要求：
1.内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3.短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。
Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest.
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19．假如你是Alice，你家里的规矩很多，你的父母总是对你有很多要求，不理解你的很多做法。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文谈谈你的家规及你对你的家规的看法。
要点：1）父母不允许我晚上出去；
2）不允许我自己选择衣服，只关注我的成绩；
3）不允许我花太长时间在我的爱好上；
4）……
要求：1）参考要点内容；可适当发挥；2）语句通顺，意思连贯；3）词数 80~100。
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20．随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你和父母的相处情况，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
（1）你与父母相处存在的2个问题；
（2）提出你解决问题的办法；
（3）你的想法。
要求：
（1）文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80字；
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．参考范文
Try to Get Along Well with Our Parents
Parents are the people who love us most. They care for us and take care of us. Without doubt we should get on well with them and respect them. Here are some of my ways to get on well with my parents.
Firstly, communicate with our parents. For example, when we are in trouble or meet some sad things, we can ask our parents for help and advice. They will be happy to talk with us and help us. Secondly, spend more time with our parents. Don’t play computer games or watch TV by ourselves. Ask our parents to play with us, such as going outside together, doing some reading and so on. Thirdly, help parents with some housework. Our parents can’t work all day or do housework all evening, that’s too tiring. So we should share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.
It’s not easy to get on with parents and we should learn to understand them first. The more parents and children understand each other, the better we will get on with each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍怎样才能和父母和谐相处的建议；
第二步，书写总结，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②without doubt毫无疑问
③communicate with与……交流
[高分句型]
①For example, when we are in trouble or meet some sad things, we can ask our parents for help and advice.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The more parents and children understand each other, the better we will get on with each other.（“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构）
2．例文
How to get on well with our parents I’m Li Hua. I don’t agree with my parents sometimes. Last year, I wanted to go to a concert with my friends, but my parents thought I should focus on my studies. This led to a big argument. However, I realized that communication is key. I sat down with my parents and explained why the concert was important to me. They, in turn, shared their concerns about my studies. We reached a compromise where I could go to the concert but also had to make a study plan. So how can we get on well with our parents Here is some of my advice.
First, we should communicate openly and honestly. Share your thoughts and feelings with them. Second, we should show respect and understanding. Try to see things from their perspective.
By following these tips, we can build a stronger and more harmonious relationship.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，谈谈自己与父母之间曾经有过的矛盾；
第二步、介绍自己是怎么解决与父母之间的矛盾；
第三步、给出与父母和谐相处的建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go to a concert去听音乐会
②in turn反过来
③reach a compromise达成妥协；达成和解
④get on well with…与……相处融洽
⑤show respect表示尊重
[高分句型]
①I sat down with my parents and explained why the concert was important to me.(why引导宾语从句)
3．范文：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
I have too many rules at home. I’m not allowed to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although I am not allowed to make my own decisions and they give me too much pressure, too. I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, talk with them about my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接阐述和父母间存在的矛盾 ；
第二步，表达自己对这些问题的看法；
第三步，提出与父母保持良好关系的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
③make one’s own decision自己做决定
[高分句型]
①I think my parents don’t quite understand me.(宾语从句)
②I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.(宾语从句)
4．例文
I Learnt to Get on Well with Parents
During my adolescence, I had some problems with my parents. I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. This was the problem between us.
To solve this problem, we sat down and talked calmly. I told my parents how much I wanted to go and promised to call them when I arrived at the party and come back home on time. My parents listened to me patiently. They said they were just worried about my safety.
Now, we get on well with each other. We respect each other’s opinions. I always tell them my plans in advance, and they give me reasonable advice. From this experience, I learned that communication is the key to getting along with parents. We should understand and respect each other.
In a word, through proper communication, teenagers can avoid many conflicts with their parents and have a good relationship with them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己青春期和父母之间的一次矛盾；
第二步，介绍自己是如何化解矛盾的；
第三步，介绍现在和父母相处的情况以及自己从这次矛盾中得到的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①promise to do sth.承诺做某事
②on time准时
③be worried about担心
④in advance提前
⑤get along with sb.与某人友好相处
⑥in a word总之
[高分句型]
I remember once we had a big argument because I wanted to go to a party with my friends, but my parents thought it was too late and dangerous. (省略引导词that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
5．例文
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. You have raised me up and taken good care of me. You have also taught me how to be a good person. I am lucky to receive good education and live a happy life. I am grateful to you for all these things.
I will work hard to make you proud of me. I hope you will always be healthy and happy.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材: 这是一篇感恩父母的书信作文，旨在表达对父母的感谢和自己的决心。
②时态: 使用“现在进行时”表达当前的感激之情，“将来时”表达决心和祝愿。
③提示: 需要根据表格提供的要点，写一封感谢信，表达对父母的感激，并承诺自己的努力。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达写信的目的，感谢父母的付出和关爱。
第二步，详细列出父母对自己的贡献，包括养育、关爱和教育。
第三步，表达自己的决心和对父母的祝愿，结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①raise me up 养育我
②take care of 关心
③receive good education 接受好的教育
④live a happy life 过上快乐的生活
⑤be grateful to sb 感激某人
⑥work hard 努力工作
[高分句型]
①I hope you will always be healthy and happy.（宾语从句）
②Thanks again for everything you have done for me.（定语从句）
6．例文
How Can We Keep a Good Relationship with Our Parents
In my opinion, my parents have too many rules for me at home. They overly emphasize my grades and I often feel misunderstood by them. What’s more, I understand they do so out of love and a desire for my success. To keep a good relationship, I make sure to communicate openly with them about my feelings and challenges. I also show appreciation for their efforts by helping around the house and making an effort to improve my grades. By understanding each other better, our relationship improves over time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍跟父母的问题；
第二步，谈谈对这些问题的看法；
第三步，介绍与父母保持良好关系的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion 在我看来
②make sure 确保
③communicate openly with 开诚布公地沟通
④each other 彼此
[高分句型]
①They overly emphasize my grades and I often feel misunderstood by them.（并列句）
②I also show appreciation for their efforts by helping around the house and making an effort to improve my grades.（动名词作宾语）
7．例文：
As I grow up, the relationship between my parents and me has changed a lot. My parents have changed a lot in the past two years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t have any friends.
The biggest change is that they are much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends. I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades.
Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述你和父母过去是如何相处的；
第二步，具体阐述你和父母相处方式有什么变化并举例说明；
第三步，书写结语，表达你对这种变化的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……严格
②stay at home待在家
③get on well with sb.与某人相处得好
[高分句型]
①The biggest change is that they are much gentler than before. (that引导的表语从句)
8．例文
Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy. For example, I used to spend too much time on my mobile phone and did badly in my studies. My parents were very worried and asked me to limit my phone usage. At first, I was very resistant and didn’t want to listen to them. But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. We reached an agreement that I would only use my phone for a certain amount of time each day.
From this experience, I learned the importance of communication. We should always communicate with our parents and understand each other’s feelings and needs.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍与父母的问题是什么；
第二步，介绍自己是如何处理自己与父母之间的问题的；
第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②reach an agreement达成协议
③do badly in在……方面表现不佳
④communicate with sb和某人沟通
[高分句型]
①But later, I realized that they were just worried about my future. (that引导宾语从句)
②So I talked with them and explained the reasons why I used my phone so much. (why引导定语从句)
9．例文
Understanding
It is very important to understand each other in our family.
Last year, my mother always pushed me to study hard. Even on weekends, I had to have different kinds of after-school activities. As a result, I felt very stressed out and I even failed my exam. I didn’t want to take so many classes but I didn’t want to let my mother down. So I decided to have a conversation with my mother. I told her that I knew she wanted me to be successful but so many classes made me under too much pressure. My mother understood me and allowed me relax on weekends. After that, I felt happier and made progress. My mother and I were both happy.
So understanding can help us get on well with each other.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：本文是介绍自己和妈妈之间关于理解的故事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己和妈妈之间关于理解的故事；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②as a result结果
③decide to do sth.决定做某事
④get on well with和某人和谐相处
[高分句型]
I told her that I knew she wanted me to be successful but so many classes made me under too much pressure. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文：
Communicating with parents is very important in our daily life. When I face a problem, I will share my thoughts and feelings with my parents, and they will always help me find a solution to the problem. I still remember one experience last year.
When I met my new English teacher, I was upset. She spoke so quickly that I couldn’t follow her well. I was worried and didn’t know what to do. My parents communicated with me about my problem and advised me to ask the teacher for help bravely. My teacher made a careful plan for me with patience. Later, I began to talk with my classmates in English. I also read English books outside class. Now, I have improved a lot.
I like to communicate with my parents and I often learn a lot from them. It’s necessary to communicate with our parents in our daily life. This will help us a lot.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历，考生应注意在叙述自己过去经历时，用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题，吸引读者兴趣；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，讲述一次你与父母沟通的经历；
第三步，书写结语。叙述自己从这次经历中的收获和心得。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb.与某人交流
②ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
③talk with sb.与某人交谈
[高分句型]
①When I face a problem, I will share my thoughts and feelings with my parents, and they will always help me find a solution to the problem. (when引导时间状语从句)
②It’s necessary to communicate with our parents in our daily life. (it作形式主语)
11．例文
Should Teenagers Go Out with Friends on Weekends Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. They should go over their lessons. And they could have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on weekends.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to go out with friends for fun on weekends, so we can relax more. And we can also share ideas with each other. What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍父母的看法；
第三步，介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home 待在家
②go over 仔细检查
③in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
①My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends.（宾语从句）
②What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.（动词不定式作目的状语）
12．例文
I think the relationship between children and parents is very important. It can affect how we feel and also help form our personalities. My parents and I have a good relationship. They always support me and listen to me. This makes me happy and brave. It helps me a lot in my life.
To make my relationship with my parents better, I will do these things. I’ll do more things with them like taking a walk. I’ll listen to their ideas carefully and share my life with them. I want them to know me more.
In a word, a good relationship with parents is necessary. I hope I can have a better relationship with them and our family will be more happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己对孩子与父母之间的关系的看法；
第二步，谈谈与父母的关系对自己产生的影响以及打算如何改善与父母的关系；
第三步，书写结束语，表达良好的亲子关系是必要的。
[亮点词汇]
①form our personalities 塑造我们的个性
②support 支持
③taking a walk 散步
④share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①To make my relationship with my parents better, I will do these things. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②I hope I can have a better relationship with them and our family will be more happy.（省略that宾语从句）
13．例文
Like other teenagers, I love my parents. But something awful happened between us a month ago. That day, I asked my parents for money to buy a pair of expensive shoes, because some of my classmates wore such shoes. But to my surprise, my parents disagreed. In their opinion, teenagers should not be allowed to spend too much money on clothes or shoes. I felt so mad that I shouted at them. I entered my bedroom angrily and cried out.
After calming down, I realized my mistake. Then I expressed my regret and apologized to my parents. They hugged me and said they loved me. They wanted me not only to pay much attention to my study, but also to hold correct values.
From this experience, I learned that we children should respect our parents. When they disagree with us, we should listen to their explanations patiently instead of losing our temper.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文要求讲述自己在成长过程中与父母的一次冲突，考生应注意在叙述冲突时，用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，写出冲突是什么；
第二步，具体阐述如何解决冲突的；
第三步，书写结语。叙述自己从这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
②apologize to sb.向某人道歉
③pay attention to关注
④instead of 而不是
[高分句型]
①That day, I asked my parents for money to buy a pair of expensive shoes, because some of my classmates wore such shoes.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I felt so mad that I shouted at them.（结果状语从句）
③When they disagree with us, we should listen to their explanations patiently instead of losing our temper.（when引导时间状语从句）
14．例文：
Rules in My Family
My parents are very strict. And I have so many family rules.
For example, I can’t go out with my friends at school nights. On weekends, I have to go home before nine p.m. It’s strict, but I think it’s necessary. And I must finish my homework on time. I can’t play computer games. I have to wash clothes by myself. I have to get up at six o’clock every morning. And I have to be in bed by ten o’clock.
Thanks to these rules, I can live healthily. But I think being in bed by ten o’clock is unfair! Students need nine hours’ sleep!
And I think playing some computer games is not bad. So I think the family rules can make some changes.
【解析】 [总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍自己的家规，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述学习和生活上的家庭规则；
第二步：阐述自己对规则的感受和看法。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②by oneself独自
③get up起床
[高分句型]
①It’s strict, but I think it’s necessary.（but表示转折）
②And I think playing some computer games is not bad.（宾语从句）
15．例文：
My Parents Have Changed Me
I didn’t get along well with my parents in the past. I used to spend much time playing computer games. At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Because of playing computer and staying up late, I was ill in hospital. Under the education of my parents, my life has completely changed in the past three years.
Now, I like sports and study hard. I hope to get into a better high school. They’re proud of me. I deeply feel the love of my parents. I feel very proud and happy, too.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去是怎样和父母相处的；
第二步，介绍现在相处的变化；
第三步，介绍自己对于这个变化的感受
[亮点词汇]
①get along well with sb. 和某人相处得好
②spend time doing 花费时间做某事
③be interested in 对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it.（and连接并列结构）
16．例文
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I was so happy that I was allowed to make my own decision that day.
I still remember when I started junior high school, my parents wanted me to take after-school classes on weekends. But I wanted to play football because I liked it very much. We had different opinions, but in the end, my parents agreed to let me play football. In order to balance my schoolwork and play football, I made plans and followed them strictly. As a result, I got good scores on my exams and I am developing well in P.E.
I’d like to thank my parents for trusting me. And I want to say something to them. As a teenager, I need more chances to learn to manage my own life. Believe in me, and then I will gradually become more and more independent.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，对被允许自己做决定感到高兴；
第二步，介绍自己做决定的经历，以及父母对此的态度；
第三步，谈谈自己想对父母说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth. 被允许做某事
②in the end 最后
③in order to 为了
④make plans 制定计划
[高分句型]
①But I wanted to play football because I liked it very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Believe in me, and then I will gradually become more and more independent.（祈使句+and+陈述句）
17．例文：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many strict rules at home. I’m neither allowed to go out with my friends at night nor make my own decisions. What’s more, my parents pay too much attention to my exam results. Whenever I fail in my exams, they’ll be angry with me. So I think they don’t understand me at all.
However, although they give me too much pressure, I understand they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends about my problems, because I know “a problem shared is a problem halved”.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家规；
第二步，介绍自己对这些问题的看法；
第三步，介绍与父母保持良好关系的做法。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①However, although they give me too much pressure, I understand they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（although引导让步状语从句）
②In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them.（动词不定式作目的状语）
18．例文
Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest. When I stop to watch TV and listen to music, my mother always says that I should study hard or I won’t go to a good high school. What’s worse, she doesn’t allow me to attend my friends’ parties because she thinks nothing is more important than study. I’m filled with much pressure. I should have my own time to relax so that I can be full of energy to work hard. I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me.
I hope I can have more time to do something I like.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍父母对你生活中的安排或规定需要改变及原因；
第二步，具体介绍自己空闲时间想做的事情；
第三步，表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①be filled with充满
②be good for有益于……
[高分句型]
①I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. (定语从句)
②Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me. (倒装句)
19．
There are many rules in my family. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my clothes, either. Instead, they only pay attention to my grades. I think they don’t understand me at all.
However, I try my best to understand them. I know behind the family rules lies their love to me. In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I decide to listen to them patiently. Besides, I will share my happiness and problems with them.
In a word, expressing myself and showing my love to them can make us know each other better.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的家规的看法，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细阐述你的家规；
第二步，具体阐述你对家规的看法以及你的做法；
第三步，总结全文，向父母表达你对他们的爱可以让你们更理解对方。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
②either也
③instead相反，反而
④pay attention to关注
⑤not...at all一点也不
⑥try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I know behind the family rules lies their love to me. （省略that的宾语从句，倒装句）
②In a word, expressing myself and showing my love to them can make us know each other better.（动名词作主语）
20．例文
In daily life, I sometimes have problems with my parents. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my marks and give me too much pressure. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Because I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to get on well with parents, I think we should study hard and try to talk with them more. Here are my suggestions. First, we and our parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us. Third, try to think about our parents more, therefore we will find that we can understand them.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥、突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己与父母存在的问题；
第二步，介绍该如何处理与父母之间的问题。
[亮点词汇]
① allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
② pay attention to 注意
③ too much 太多
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
⑤ get on well with sb. 与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I think my parents don’t quite understand me.（宾语从句）
② Second, try to talk to our parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to us.（祈使句+or+陈述句）
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