高中应用文写作句型+模板---建议信
首段: 写作背景+写作目的 中间段：建议的具体内容 尾段：期望建议可行+期盼回复
首段: 写作背景+写作目的
了解到你...我很高兴关于...给你一些建议 Learning that you are..., I am glad to give you some useful suggestions on how to...
我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我正写信给你一些实用的建议。 I am glad to receive your letter. I am writing to offer you some practical advice.
你询问我关于...的建议，我将给你一些有益的建议。 You have asked me for some advice with regard to ...and I will make some conductive suggestions.
中间段：提出建议并阐述理由
去做...真的是一个很好的想法。 It would be a good idea to...
你可以考虑去做... You may consider doing...
如果我是你，我将.... Were I you, I would ...
如果你可以....,这将会更加有益的。 It would more beneficial if you could...
只有当...., 你才能... Only when...can you...
尾段：期望建议可行+期盼回复
我希望我的建议对你有很大的帮助。如果有任何我可以做的事，请让我知道。 Hopefully these suggestions will be of great benefit to you. If there is anything that I can do for you, please let me know.
我将很高兴看到你可以考虑我的建议。 I’ll be more than glad to see that you can take my suggestions into consideration.
建议信模板
Dear ________,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in________.(面临的困难) I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
At first, You may consider doing_________________. (建议一) I think it _______________.(原因一）What’s more, it would be a great idea to _______, （建议二）because_______.（原因二） In addition, if I were you, I would _____________________. （建议三）I firmly believe that__________.
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great benefit to you. If there is anything that I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours,
XX
（一）
（浙江嘉兴·一模）假定你是李华，你校承办的国际夏令营计划开展体育嘉年华活动(SportsCarnival)，现向学生征集趣味运动项目。请你给负责人 David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提议一个项目；
2. 阐述实施方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’d like to propose organizing a water balloon fight during our Sports Carnival. It combines fun with physical activity and is refreshing for the campers to enjoy.
To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 members each. Each team starts with an equal number of water balloons. Players can only throw balloons at opponents within the designated area. Once a player is hit by a water balloon, they must exit the game. The last team with players remaining will be declared the winner.
I believe it will be a highlight of the carnival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校国际夏令营计划开展的体育嘉年华活动向负责人David提议一个趣味运动项目，并详细阐述实施方案。
【详解】词汇积累
提议：propose → suggest/recommend
实施：carry out → implement/execute
宣布：declare → announce
组成：consist of→be composed of
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 members each.
拓展句：To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, which ideally consist of 5-10 members each.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To carry it out, we will divide the participants into teams, ideally consisting of 5-10 member s each.(运用了不定式作目的状语would like to do sth.表示“想要做某事”的句型)
[高分句型2] Once a player is hit by a water balloon, they must exit the game.(运用了连词once引导的时间状语从句状语)
[高分句型3] I believe it will be a highlight of the carnival!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
（二）
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign. Congratulations!
I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many unknowns. But don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions for you. Try to get familiar with the campus and its facilities before you start. Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well. And don’t hesitate to join various clubs and activities to make new friends.
I am sure you will adapt to your new life soon by following the suggestions above.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的朋友Daniel对未来的大学生活感到紧张这事给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表达祝贺、表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
焦虑：nervousness→anxiety
很多：many→plenty of
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well.
拓展句： Besides, it is advisable that you should make a study plan to manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many unknowns. （运用了as引导原因状语从句）高中应用文写作句型 模板---建议信
首段: 写作背景+写作目的 中间段：建议的具体内容 尾段：期望建议可行+期盼回复
首段: 写作背景+写作目的
了解到你...我很高兴关于...给你一些建议 _______________________________________________________________________________________
我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我正写信给你一些实用的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________
你询问我关于...的建议，我将给你一些有益的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________
中间段：提出建议并阐述理由
去做...真的是一个很好的想法。 ________________________________________________________________________________________
你可以考虑去做... ________________________________________________________________________________________
如果我是你，我将.... ________________________________________________________________________________________
若果你可以....,这将会更加有益的。 ________________________________________________________________________________________
只有当...., 你才能... ________________________________________________________________________________________
尾段：期望建议可行+期盼回复
我希望我的建议对你有很大的帮助。如果有任何我可以做的事，请让我知道。 ________________________________________________________________________________________
我将很高兴看到你可以考虑我的建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________
建议信模板
建议信模板
Dear ________,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in________.(面临的困难) I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
At first, You may consider doing_________________. (建议一) I think it _______________.(原因一）What’s more, it would be a great idea to _______, （建议二）because_______.（原因二） In addition, if I were you, I would _____________________. （建议三）I firmly believe that__________.
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great benefit to you. If there is anything that I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours,
XX
（一）
（浙江嘉兴·一模）假定你是李华，你校承办的国际夏令营计划开展体育嘉年华活动(SportsCarnival)，现向学生征集趣味运动项目。请你给负责人 David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提议一个项目；
2. 阐述实施方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
