中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2026外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
描写动物
写作题目
请写一篇文章呼吁人们加入拯救大熊猫(the giant panda) 的行列。内容包括:
1.大熊猫是中国一种令人惊讶的动物,也是地球上最珍稀的动物之一,为世界人民所喜爱;
2.大熊猫生活在山里,以竹子为食,由于山林遭到破坏,竹子被砍伐,大熊猫寻找食物越来越困难;
3.我国已建立数个自然保护区来保护大熊猫,但需要更多的资金。
注意:1.词数不少于80个;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.惊人的,了不起的
2. v.破坏,毁掉
3. v.活下来,幸存
4. v.创立,创建
5. n.措施
6. v.寻找,寻求
答案 1.amazing 2.destroy 3.survive
4.found 5.measure 6.seek
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段: 引入话题
(1)The giant panda is (一种令人惊讶的动物)in China, and it is also (最珍稀的动物之一)on earth.
第二段:具体介绍大熊猫的情况
(2)The giant panda lives in the mountains, where it (以竹子为食).
(3)More and more forests (正遭到破坏)and most of the bamboo (正在被砍伐).
(4)It is becoming (越来越困难)for giant pandas to seek food for themselves.
(5) (为了使大熊猫生存), China (已经建立了)several nature reserves.
第三段:进行总结,呼吁人们保护大熊猫
(6)All in all, it's high time that we should (采取立即的措施)to protect giant pandas.
答案 (1)an amazing animal; one of the rarest animals (2)feeds on bamboo (3)are being destroyed; is being cut down (4)more and more difficult (5)To make giant pandas survive;has founded (6)take immediate measures
2.句式升级
(7)用not only...but also...改写句(1)
(8)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有as引导的状语从句的主从复合句
答案 (7)The giant panda is not only an amazing animal in China, but also one of the rarest animals on earth. (8)As more and more forests are being destroyed and most of the bamboo is being cut down, it is becoming more and more difficult for giant pandas to seek food for themselves.
连句成篇
写作积累
描写动物的增分词汇
动物 外貌 整体 外形 tiny极小的,微小的;huge庞大的;slim苗条的,纤细的;stocky矮壮的,敦实的
身体 部位 fluffy毛茸茸的;scaly有鳞片的;feathered有羽毛的;long-eared长耳的;big-eyed大眼睛的;long-legged长腿的;long-nosed长鼻子的;sharp-clawed爪子锋利的
颜色 colorful色彩鲜艳的;snow-white雪白的;brown-colored棕色的
动物 行为 日常 活动 move stealthily悄悄地移动;run swiftly快速地奔跑;climb skillfully熟练地攀爬
进食 graze(牛、羊等)吃草;peck啄;devour狼吞虎咽地吃;gnaw啃;咬
性格 习性 性格 gentle and docile温和温驯的;fierce and aggressive凶猛好斗的;timid and shy胆小害羞的
习性 nocturnal habits夜行习性;social animals群居动物;solitary creatures独居生物
实战演练 假设你是李华,英语课上老师要求你们用英语写一篇文章,介绍中国的珍稀保护动物——华南虎。请根据下面的表格,写一篇介绍华南虎的文章。
动物 华南虎(South China tiger)
特征 非常凶猛,雄性体重150千克左右,雌性体重120千克左右,尾部有黑斑
栖息地 中国的华南、华中和华东,但在野外已灭绝
食物 主要捕食野猪(wild boar)、水鹿(sambar)等
在野外灭 绝的原因 栖息地的减少,人类的捕杀
现有的数目 还有二百多只圈养华南虎
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写微写作
情景导入
你与朋友汤姆正在野营,突然从灌木丛中窜出一头黑熊。请写一个语段,描述你和汤姆当时恐慌的心理。
思路点拨
看到黑熊窜出来,我和汤姆瞬间僵住→我们不敢发出声音,紧张又害怕→我想找个逃跑的办法,双腿却无法动弹→最终黑熊离开,留下我们俩喘着粗气
续写语料
Ⅰ.动作描写
1. v.突然停止,呆住
2. v.凝视,盯着看
3. v.遭遇;意外地遇见
4. v.寻找,寻求
5.can't move→ 像生根了一样动弹不得
Ⅱ.心理描写
6. n.吃惊,震惊
7. (脑子)突然一片空白
答案 1.freeze 2.stare 3.encounter 4.seek
5.be rooted to the ground 6.shock 7.go blank
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.看到一只巨大的黑熊从灌木丛中窜出来,我和朋友汤姆瞬间僵住,震惊得瞪大了双眼。
Seeing a huge black bear emerging from the bushes, my friend Tom and I , our eyes wide open in shock.
归纳:“动作+表情”描写句型
分词短语作状语,主语+谓语(+宾语),独立主格结构
例句:Shouting angrily, the man waved his fist, his face red with rage.这个男人愤怒地喊着,挥舞着拳头,脸气得通红。
2.我的脑子一片空白,因为我们从来没有料到会遭遇一头黑熊。
My mind as we never expected to .
3.我们盯着这头熊,不敢发出一丝声响。
We , not daring to make a sound.
4.我的心剧烈跳动,仿佛要从胸口蹦出来。
My heart was pounding wildly, as if it were about to .
归纳:心理描写句型
主语+谓语,as if从句
例句:My nerves were stretched to breaking point, as if I were about to face a life-or-death test.我的神经紧张得快到极点了,仿佛我即将面临一场生死考验。
5.我想着找个逃跑的办法,可双腿却像生根了一样动弹不得。
I thought about , but my legs .
6.在漫长的时间之后,最终,它转身走开了, 留下我们俩喘着粗气。
After what seemed like ages, eventually, it turned and walked away, .
答案 1.froze immediately 2.went blank;encounter a black bear 3.stared at the bear 4.jump out of my chest 5.seeking a way to escape;seemed to be rooted to the ground
6.leaving us both breathing heavily
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The South China tiger is an endangered animal, whose habitat is in China, exactly speaking, in southern China, central China and eastern China.
The South China tiger is large and fierce. The male tiger can weigh about 150 kilograms and the female tiger about 120 kilograms. One of its main features is that its tail has black spots. They feed mainly on wild boars, sambars and so on. Now, there are just over 200 South China tigers in the reserve and those living in the wild have died out. The reduction of their habitats and people's hunting are the reason for their dying out.
1.重点词汇
①exactly speaking确切地说
②weigh v.有……重;重量为
③feature n.特点
④feed on 以……为食
⑤die out灭绝
⑥reduction n.减少,降低
2.亮点句型
①The South China tiger is an endangered animal, whose habitat is in China, exactly speaking, in southern China, central China and eastern China.(whose引导非限制性定语从句)华南虎是一种濒危动物,其栖息地在中国,确切地说,在华南、华中和华东。
②Now, there are just over 200 South China tigers in the reserve and those living in the wild have died out.(现在分词作后置定语)现在,保护区里只有200多只华南虎,那些生活在野外的已经灭绝了。
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