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Module 5 Museums
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．校报英语版征文，题目“Follow and Grow（家规促成长）”。你写一篇文章投稿，包括以下内容：
（1）家规：我不被允许玩电脑游戏；我不能熬夜到很晚stay up too late；我不被允许扎耳洞get my ears pierced或者戴耳环wear earrings；我必须每天读书，坚持锻炼身体keep doing exercise等；
（2）对你的影响：曾经以为太严格了used to think, be strict with；现在理解了，只有这样我才能健康成长；
（3）如何回报你的父母。未来我要做一个能让父母为我骄傲的孩子be proud of me。
注意：（1）写作时不要抄题；（2）词数100左右；（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（4）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Follow and Grow
A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too (国有国法，家有家规). Rules can help everyone in the family get on well with each other, and make our family happier. Surely, there are also some rules in my family.
First,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是八年级的学生李华，这学期你们班即将来一位加拿大交换生David，他想向你了解一下班级的班规，请根据以下提示内容，写一封不少于40词的邮件，向他介绍一下班规。
要点：（1）不能上学迟到；
（2）不能在走廊跑；
（3）不能在上课时吃东西；
（4）必须按时完成作业；
（5）必须尊重他人。
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，要点齐全。
Dear David,
Welcome to our school. Let me introduce the class rules to you.
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Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．没有规矩，不成方圆。规则有助于我们进步，帮助我们成长！假如你是 Lingling，用英语介绍一下你的班规吧。请列出至少4条班规并说明你对这些规则的看法。
提示词： school uniform 校服
注意：
1.文中不得透露真实个人信息；
2.词数不少于60词，可适当发挥；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Class Rules
My name is Lingling. I’m now in Class 4, Grade 7. Let me tell you some of my class rules.
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4．假如你是李华，被学校评为“文明风尚好少年（Civilized Teenager）”，请你根据以下提示，向同学们介绍你自己和你的文明行为。
内容：
1. 你的爱好和特长；
2. 你的健康生活方式（如饮食、运动、出行）；
3. 你在校遵守的文明规则；
4. 你喜欢的动物。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. I’m really glad to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．无规矩不成方圆，每个学校都有自己的校规。假如你是李华，请根据下面要点和要求，用英语介绍一下你们学校的校规，不少于40词。
要点：
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
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6．俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇短文。
写作提示：
（1）家里有哪些家规；
（2）对家规的感受；
（3）对父母的建议。
写作要求：
（1）内容包含所给提示信息，可适当拓展；
（2）语句连贯，书写规范，词数80左右。
提示词：housework 家务；will be punished 将被惩罚
My Family Rules
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7．孟子言“无规矩，不成方圆。”规矩，是一种准则，更是一种分寸，是每一个人一生的必修课。请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“No Rules, No Standards (标准)”为题，用英文写一篇短文。
参考词汇：share housework with parents, keep quiet in public, hand in homework on time, not run in the hallways, not use mobile phones while crossing the road or riding, ...
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息，姓名、校名和地名等；
4. 词数：不少于70词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
No Rules, No Standards
As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “No rules, no standards”. Here I want to talk about the rules in our lives.
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8．假设你是某国际学校足球社团的负责人李华，最近收到刚加入足球社团的同学Jack的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复他的邮件，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I’m excited to join the school football club. Could you tell me something about it How often and when do we practise What rules do we need to follow I think it is important for me to know about them. I’m looking forward to your reply. Thanks a lot. Yours, Jack
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、班级和校名等个人信息；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Everything goes well with me. Welcome to our football club!
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．同学们，你们所在的学校和班级为了让同学们更好地学习和生活制定了一些规则，你们的班级是不是也制定了一些规矩呢？请你以“My Class Rules”为题，根据下面的提示和要求用英语写一篇小短文来介绍一下你们的班规。
提示：
1. What are your class rules (at least 3 rules)
2. Do you like them Why
要求：
1.短文必须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 词数60—80左右。
My Class Rules
We have some rules in our class.
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10．随着生活质量的提高，人们对于幸福生活有了更高的要求。学校举行了以“How to Live a Happy Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛活动。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享：
1. How do you spend your school day
2. What rules do you have to follow
3. What do you usually do in your free time (exercise, eating, shopping...)
要求：
1.词数不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
Hello, everyone! Today I’m very glad to tell you something about how to live a happy life.
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Let’s try our best to live a happy life! Thank you for listening!
11．假设你是李华，你的外国朋友David计划来长沙旅游。长沙是一座历史悠久的城市，以其丰富的美食文化而闻名。你曾经游历过长沙众多景点，对当地的特色美食也很了解。请根据以下表格提示，结合表中信息给David写一封信，详细介绍长沙的特色并分享你的个人体验。
Location central Hunan
History over 3,000 years
Weather hot and humid in summer, cold in winter
Places of interest Yuelu Mountain, the Orange Isle ...
Food Stinky Tofu, Changsha Rice Noodles...
Feelings ...
要求：
1.语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实，且有适当拓展；
2.80词左右 (文章的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m very glad to hear that you are going to travel to Changsha.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．亲爱的同学们，美好的暑假已经结束了。在假期里，你一定游览过不少有趣的地方。学校正在开展以“一个值得游览的地方”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，向大家介绍一个你曾经去过并且值得推荐的地方。内容需包括：
1. What is this place and where is it
2. What did you do there
3. Why do you introduce this place (可从food/people/weather/transportation (交通) /places of interest等中任选3个方面)
要求：1. 参考以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息；
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数)
Good morning, everyone! I have been to many interesting places, but I think everybody should pay a visit to
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Thanks for listening.
13．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友玛丽（Mary）听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语给玛丽写一封回信，向她介绍一下中国的黄山（Mount Huangshan）。
提示：
1. 黄山的基本情况介绍；
2. 黄山的特色风景。
要求：
1. 不得出现真实的校名和人名；
2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
14．“这么近，那么美，周末到河北！”已经成为河北文旅的宣传口号。美国友好学校交流团来河北游学，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向他们介绍一下河北。
提示：
1. Where is Hebei
2. Where can they go for a visit What can people do there
3. What local food can they enjoy
参考词汇：Chengde Mountain Resort (承德避暑山庄), Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao, ski resorts (滑雪场) in Zhangjiakou
要求：
1.文章须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.不得涉及真实的人名；
3.词数：70词左右（已给出的开头不计入总词数）。
Hello everyone. It’s my great honor to introduce my hometown—Hebei to you all!
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15．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，学校为响应南京市政府“保护非物质文化遗产 (Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage)”的号召，计划举办一场“家乡文化传承主题日 (Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival)”的活动。作为志愿者，你需要向Peter写一封信介绍以下内容：
1.家乡南京的景点及历史文化；
2.活动中的民间艺术体验。
注意：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥，书写规范；
2.词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
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16．旅游能让人放松心情，增长见识，暑假在即，有很多同学想去故宫旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下故宫。
内容提示：
1. 北京故宫 (the Palace Museum) 坐落于中国北京的中心，占地面积72万平方米，是世界最受欢迎的旅游地之一。
2. 它历史悠久，里面有很多的古建筑物和艺术珍品。
3. 每年都有很多人来此地参观，都被故宫深深震撼了。
注意：
1. 表达中必须包含所给的要点并适当拓展；
2. 词数70左右；
3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名和校名。
The Palace Museum
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17．假如你是李明，一名志愿者导游。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇导游词，向外国游客简单介绍一下北海公园。
提示：
1.位于北京市中心，很安静甚至能够听到鸟歌唱的声音；
2.公园以湖、桥和山上的古建筑而出名；
3.湖占据公园大部分面积，在山顶能看到北京的名胜；
4.可在公园划船和野餐，但不允许在湖里游泳。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.不得使用真实的姓名和校名。
3.词数：80词左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Welcome to Beijing! Today I’m glad to introduce Beihai Park to you.
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Thanks for your time!
18．“这么近，那么美，周末到河北”，这句话吸引了外国游客到河北游玩。请你根据表格中的提示，用英文写一篇短文介绍你的家乡，让更多的外国朋友了解河北。
My hometown—Hebei
Location in the north of China
Seasons and weather four seasons with different weather
Landscapes (风景) mountains, rivers, beaches
Foods huoshao…
Places of interest Xibaipo…
注意：（1）短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
（2）词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
My hometown—Hebei
So close, so beautiful—take a trip to Hebei this weekend!
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There are so many places of interest waiting for you. Welcome to my hometown!
19．假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Joey计划暑假来你的家乡澄城旅游，想要提前了解相关信息。请你结合下列表格提示，用英语写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡。
Location (位置): in the southeast of Weinan City, Shaanxi Province My Beautiful Hometown Chengcheng Places of interest: The Liangzhou Qin-Han Palace Ruins (良周秦汉宫遗址); ancient city ruins…
Natural scenery (风光): many rivers and parks Famous food: cherries (樱桃); sanfanbing…
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于60词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Joey,
How’s everything going I’m glad you plan to visit my hometown this summer!
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
20．你曾去哪个城市游玩过？那里一定给你留下了难以忘怀的记忆吧？请你以“My Favorite City—________”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一座城市。
内容包括：
●the number of times visiting this city
●the reasons for liking this city
●the famous places and characteristics (特征) of this city
●your wishes
要求：
1. 在题目的横线上填写你最喜欢的城市名称，文章必须包括以上提示内容；
2. 文章中不得出现真实的人名和校名等信息；
3. 词数80左右。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Follow and Grow
A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too. Rules can help everyone in the family get on well with each other, and make our family happier. Surely, there are also some rules in my family.
First, I am not allowed to play computer games, as my parents think they will take too much of my study time. I can’t stay up too late either, because enough sleep is important for my health. Besides, getting my ears pierced or wearing earrings is not permitted for me. On the other hand, I have to read books every day and keep doing exercise regularly. At the same time, I must eat fruit and vegetables every day.
I used to think these rules were too strict with me and even felt upset sometimes. But now I fully understand my parents’ love behind the rules. Only by following them can I grow up healthily, both in body and mind.
To repay my parents, I will study hard and develop good habits. In the future, I want to become a child that my parents can be proud of, making them feel all their efforts are worthwhile.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己家的家规；
第二步，介绍这些家规对自己的影响；
第三步，介绍自己将如何回报父母。
[亮点词汇]
①be permitted被允许
②at the same time同时
③grow up成长
④repay回报
[高分句型]
①First, I am not allowed to play computer games, as my parents think they will take too much of my study time.（as引导原因状语从句；省略引导词that的宾语从句）
②Only by following them can I grow up healthily, both in body and mind.（倒装句）
③In the future, I want to become a child that my parents can be proud of, making them feel all their efforts are worthwhile.（that引导定语从句）
2．例文
Dear David,
Welcome to our school. Let me introduce the class rules to you.
First, you can’t be late for school. Second, you can’t run in the hallways. Third, you can’t eat in class. Also, you must finish your homework on time. Finally, you must respect others. If you follow these rules, everything will be fine.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题——介绍班规；
第二步，具体阐述班规内容；
第三步，表明对David到来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be late for迟到
②on time按时
③respect尊重
[高分句型]
①If you follow these rules, everything will be fine.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
My Class Rules
My name is Lingling. I’m now in Class 4, Grade 7. Let me tell you some of my class rules.
First, we can’t be late for school. We must be on time or our class teacher will be angry. Second, we have to finish our homework on time. Third, we can’t fight with our classmates. Fourth, we must wear the school uniform on weekdays. And we must clean our classroom every day to keep it clean.
These rules are important because they can help us learn better and be better students. We should follow them.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作需要围绕“班级规则”展开，写作要点已给出，考生应注意条理清晰地列举规则，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。先介绍自己的姓名、班级，再引出“介绍班级规则”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述规则。按顺序列举班级的核心规则，包括不迟到、按时完成作业、不与同学打架、工作日穿校服、每日打扫教室等，并补充迟到的后果；
第三步，书写结语。说明这些规则的重要性，呼吁大家遵守规则。
［亮点词汇］
①be late for school 上学迟到
②on time 按时
③school uniform 校服
④on weekdays 工作日
⑤keep...clean 保持……干净
［高分句型］
These rules are important because they can help us learn better and be better students.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4．例文
Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. I’m really glad to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up. At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us. I like dogs very much. Dogs are our friends, so I hope everyone can protect them.
This is me. Let us all behave ourselves and be civilized teenagers.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇自我介绍类应用文；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时需包含题干要求的4个要点（爱好特长、健康生活、文明规则、喜爱动物），可适当发挥，增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头呼应题目，承接已给出的首句；
第二步：分别从四个方面来介绍自己的文明行为；
第三步：结尾总结，表达希望与同学共勉的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
① play the guitar弹吉他
② go jogging慢跑
③ not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④ give up放弃
⑤ on time准时
[高分句型]
① At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy.（原因状语从句）
② Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.（让步状语从句+宾语从句）
③ Dogs are our friends, so I hope everyone can protect them.（并列句+宾语从句）
5．例文：
There are many rules in our school. Here are some of them.
First, we can’t bring food into the teaching building. Second, we mustn’t litter anywhere. We should throw the rubbish into the dustbin. Third, we mustn’t run in the hallways. It’s dangerous. Fourth, we must be polite to our teachers. Besides, we have to wear school uniforms at school.
These rules are important for us. They can help us study well and live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用说明文，用于介绍校规；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已通过图片内容给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中展示的校规要点，需清晰、简洁且完整地阐述，适当组织语言，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；
第二步，根据图片提示具体阐述规则内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①many rules许多规则
②throw...into...把……扔进……
③be important for对……重要
[高分句型]
①These rules are important for us. They can help us study well and live a healthy life.（and连接两个并列的谓语部分“study well”和“live a healthy life”）
6．范文：
My Family Rules
My family has several rules to help me grow healthily. I must get home on time and finish my homework before using my phone. I am not allowed to play video games on school nights. I also need to help with housework, such as doing the dishes and taking out the rubbish. If I break the rules, I will be punished.
The rules are strict, but they make me organized and responsible. I suggest my parents listen to my ideas, allow flexible time on weekends, and do more activities with me.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍自己的家规；
第二步，介绍自己对这些家规的感受；
第三步，提出自己对父母的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① on time 按时
② be not allowed to do sth. 不被允许做某事
③ help with housework 帮助做家务
④ such as 例如
⑤ take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
[高分句型]
If I break the rules, I will be punished.（if引导条件状语从句）
7．例文：
No Rules, No Standards
As an ancient Chinese saying goes, “No rules, no standards”. Here I want to talk about the rules in our lives.
There are many kinds of rules, such as public rules, school rules, family rules and traffic rules. Public rules help us behave politely in public places. For example, we should keep quiet in public to avoid disturbing others. School rules are important for our study and safety. We must hand in homework on time and not run in the hallways. Family rules make our family harmonious. We should actively share housework with our parents to show our responsibility within the family. Besides, traffic rules are also essential. We mustn’t use mobile phones while we are crossing the road or riding a bike to ensure our safety.
In conclusion, rules are necessary for a better life. We should follow them to make our lives more orderly and safer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍我们生活中的规则；
第二步，描述规则的具体内容；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①kinds of各种各样的
②such as例如
③for example例如
[高分句型]
We mustn’t use mobile phones while we are crossing the road or riding a bike to ensure our safety.（while引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Jack,
Everything goes well with me. Welcome to our football club!
We usually practise twice a week, on Wednesday and Friday afternoons from 4:00 to 5:30. There are a few rules that we need to follow. Please wear sports clothes and football shoes. Also, remember to bring a water bottle. It’s important to arrive on time and listen to the coach. Most importantly, always be friendly and help each other.
If you have any more questions, just ask me. I’m sure you will have a great time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、二人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以问候开启，对Jack加入足球社团表示欢迎；
第二步，介绍社团训练安排 (频率、时间) 和需遵守的规则 (着装、物品、守时、听从教练、友好互助)；
第三步，表示愿意解答更多问题，期待Jack在社团度过愉快时光。
[亮点词汇]
①arrive on time 准时到达
②help each other 互相帮助
[高分句型]
①There are a few rules that we need to follow. (that引导的定语从句)
②If you have any more questions, just ask me. (if引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文：
My Class Rules
We have some rules in our class. First, we must come to school on time. Second, we need to be quiet and listen carefully in class. Third, we have to finish our homework every day.
I like these rules because they help us study better. Being on time teaches us to be responsible. Listening carefully makes our lessons more useful. Finishing homework helps us learn and remember things well.
Following these rules makes our class a good place to learn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍至少三条班规；
第二步，讲述自己喜欢或不喜欢这些班规，并说明理由；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① on time 按时，准时
② need to do 需要做某事
③ have to do 不得不做某事
④ help sb. do 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I like these rules because they help us study better. (because引导原因状语从句)
② Being on time teaches us to be responsible. Listening carefully makes our lessons more useful. Finishing homework helps us learn and remember things well. (动名词短语作主语)
10．例文
Hello, everyone! Today I’m very glad to tell you something about how to live a happy life.
First, let me tell you about my school day. I always start my day by reading English for half an hour. During classes, I listen carefully. After school, I finish my homework first and then play basketball with my friends. That makes me relaxed. Second, there are some important rules in my life. For example, I must go to bed before 10:00 p.m. every day. These rules help me keep healthy. To keep fit, I exercise every day. I jog for 20 minutes in the morning and play badminton on weekends. Also, I have good eating habits. I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. And I drink milk and water instead of sugary drinks. I often buy things online because it’s convenient.
Let’s try our best to live a happy life! Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据内容提示进行写作，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题——如何过幸福的生活；
第二步，具体阐述自己学校的生活、日常遵守的规则和业余时间的活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②instead of 代替
③convenient 便利的
[高分句型]
I often buy things online because it’s convenient. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11．例文
Dear David,
I’m very glad to hear that you are going to travel to Changsha. Changsha, located in central Hunan, is a city with a history of over 3,000 years. It is hot and humid in summer, while it’s cold in winter.
There are many places of interest in Changsha. Yuelu Mountain is a beautiful place with fresh air and amazing scenery. The Orange Isle is also a must-visit spot, especially at night when it’s beautifully lit up. When it comes to food, Changsha has a lot to offer. Stinky Tofu may smell strong, but it tastes really delicious. Changsha Rice Noodles are also a local specialty that you shouldn’t miss.
I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in Changsha. If you need any help, just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格提示信息介绍长沙，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对朋友的欢迎，简要介绍长沙的地理位置、历史和天气；
第二步，具体介绍长沙的景点与美食和个人感受；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 景点
②When it comes to... 当提到……
③specialty 特色美食
[高分句型]
①Changsha Rice Noodles are also a local specialty that you shouldn’t miss. (that引导定语从句)
②I hope you’ll have a wonderful time in Changsha. (that省略的宾语从句)
③If you need any help, just let me know. (if引导条件状语从句)
12．参考范文
Good morning, everyone! I have been to many interesting places, but I think everybody should pay a visit to West Lake. It is located in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province.
Last summer, I went there with my family. We took a boat tour on the lake and enjoyed the beautiful scenery—green lotus leaves and pink lotus flowers all around. We also walked around the lake and visited famous spots like Broken Bridge and Leifeng Pagoda.
I recommend West Lake for three reasons. First, the scenery there is really wonderful, especially in summer. Second, the people there are friendly—local vendors warmly introduced the history of West Lake to us. Third, the transportation is convenient. You can take a bus or subway to get there easily.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍推荐的地方是什么以及在哪里；
第二步、介绍自己在那里从事的活动；
第三步、介绍推荐的理由并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pay a visit to去参观
②take a boat tour乘船游览
③introduce sth. to sb.向某人介绍某物
[高分句型]
I have been to many interesting places, but I think everybody should pay a visit to West Lake.(省略that的宾语从句)
13．例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It is located in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pine trees and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the view looks so beautiful that you can’t wait to visit it again. You will feel it is all worth it. It’s really a nice place to visit.
I’m sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“信息提示”介绍黄山的基本情况和特色风景。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候语，并引出黄山是最著名的山脉之一；
第二步，介绍黄山的基本情况；
第三步，介绍黄山的特色风景。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一
②locate in位于
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the view looks so beautiful that you can’t wait to visit it again.（时间状语从句和结果状语从句）
②It’s really a nice place to visit.（不定式作定语）
14．例文
Hello everyone. It’s my great honor to introduce my hometown—Hebei to you all! Hebei is to the north of the Yellow River and to the east of the Taihang Mountains. It has a population of about 74 million. Its capital city is Shijiazhuang. There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Chengde Mountain Resort, Zhaozhou Bridge, beaches in Qinhuangdao and ski resorts in Zhangjiakou.
You can visit the places where the ancient emperors have been. Besides, relaxing on the beaches is also a good choice. Of course you can also enjoy skiing here. There are also many kinds of delicious local foods in my hometown such as meat pie and smoked meat. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here.
So near! So beautiful! Welcome to Hebei on weekends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意围绕提示展开，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，寒暄并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍河北的地理位置、景点、人们可以做的事以及美食；
第三步，书写结语，表达欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②of course当然
③enjoy doing享受某事
④many kinds of许多种类的
[高分句型]
①You can visit the places where the ancient emperors have been.（定语从句）
②I’m sure you will have a wonderful time travelling here.（宾语从句）
15．例文
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going Recently our school is planning to hold a “Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival” to respond to the government’s call “Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage”.
I am more than glad to tell you something about it. Nanjing is my hometown which is famous for many places of interest. For example, you can have a good view of the whole city on the top of Zijin Mountain. Nanjing is also famous for Nanjing Ming City Wall, the Nanjing Presidential Palace.
During the festival, you can experience paper cutting and try to use the paper to make some works of art as gifts. You can also learn to make the Nanjing salted duck, and have a chance to taste it. By the way, I will show you around our hometown then.
Hope to see you soon in our hometown!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“景点及历史文化”和“民间艺术体验”两个要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，保证书信的格式正确。注意开头称呼、问候语、简要引出话题、结尾落款；
第二步，具体介绍写作重点。从紫金山和明城墙等名胜古迹到剪纸和盐水鸭等民间艺术及美食几个方面重点介绍南京的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望尽快见到对方”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②places of interest名胜古迹
③for example例如
④have a good view of sth有很好的视野
⑤works of art艺术作品
[高分句型]
①Recently our school is planning to hold a “Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival” to respond to the government’s call “Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage”.（不定式作目的状语）
②Nanjing is my hometown which is famous for many places of interest.（which引导的定语从句）
16．例文：
The Palace Museum
Have you been to the Palace Museum If not, let me introduce the famous place to you.
It lies in the middle of Beijing of China with an area of 720,000 square meters. It is one of the most popular tourist places in the world. There are many ancient buildings and art treasures in it. Many people from all over the world pay a visit to it every year. They are all deeply shocked by the beauty of the Palace Museum.
If you get there, I am sure you will have a good e and have fun there.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，引出主题，要介绍故宫；
第二步，具体介绍故宫的一些情况，包括占地面积、历史悠久以及受欢迎程度等；
第三步，最后建议并欢迎对方来故宫参观。
【亮点词汇】① in the middle of在……中间
② an area of面积为
③ pay a visit to参观
【高分句型】① If you get there, I am sure you will have a good time.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② It is one of the most popular tourist places in the world.（“one of the+最高级+复数名词”结构）
17．One possible version:
Welcome to Beijing! Today I’m glad to introduce Beihai Park to you.
It is in the city centre of Beijing. And it is so quiet that you can even hear the birds singing. It is famous for its lake, bridges and ancient buildings on the hill. The lake takes up over half of the park area. You can go boating in the lake and enjoy the beautiful scenery. It is not allowed to swim in it. If you go to the top of the hill, you will also see the sights of Beijing.
It’s a good place to have a picnic and please remember to take away the rubbish.
Thanks for your time!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行写作，不要遗漏要点，可适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍北海公园，包含提示所给出的要点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而闻名
②take up占用
③go boating划船
[高分句型]
①If you go to the top of the hill, you will also see the sights of Beijing.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文：
My hometown—Hebei
So close, so beautiful—take a trip to Hebei this weekend!
Hebei is located in the north of China. It has four seasons, and each season has its own special weather. The nature here is amazing. There are tall mountains, clear rivers, and even some nice beaches by the sea. When you’re hungry, don’t miss trying huoshao, a tasty local snack that everyone loves. It’s crispy outside and soft inside, with a delicious filling. If you’re interested in history, Xibaipo is a place you must go.
There are so many places of interest waiting for you. Welcome to my hometown!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括河北的地理位置、四季天气、风景、食物和名胜古迹，考生需确保这些要点均被涵盖，并可适当发挥以增加文章的丰富性。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。即邀请大家周末到河北游玩；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。简要介绍河北的地理位置、自然景观、特色美食和名胜古迹；
第三步：书写结语。再次欢迎外国游客到河北游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in位于……
②be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①When you’re hungry, don’t miss trying huoshao, a tasty local snack that everyone loves. (when引导时间状语从句，that引导定语从句)
②If you’re interested in history, Xibaipo is a place you must go. (if引导条件状语从句)
19．参考范文：
Dear Joey,
How’s everything going I’m glad you plan to visit my hometown this summer! Let me tell you about it.
Chengcheng lies in the southeast of Weinan City, Shaanxi Province. It’s beautiful with many rivers and parks. It’s perfect for you to enjoy nature and take relaxing walks. The Liangzhou Qin-Han Palace Ruins are really worth visiting, where you can learn about the history of Qin and Han dynasties. Besides, there are some ancient city ruins that show the old times. Don’t miss our local treats: sweet cherries and sanfanbing, a fried snack with sugar filling. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.
I’m sure you’ll have a great time here. I can’t wait to show you around!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含表格所列要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇问候，表达对Joey计划来访的喜悦，引出对家乡的介绍；
第二步，介绍家乡澄城的位置、自然风光、历史景点及特色美食；
第三步，表达对Joey来访的期待，愿为其导游。
[亮点词汇]
①show sb. around 带某人四处看看
②be worth doing sth. 值得做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you’ll have a great time here. (宾语从句)
②If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. (if引导的条件状语从句)
20．One possible version:
My Favorite City— Beijing
Beijing is my favorite city, and I have visited it three times. As the capital of China, it is famous for its long history, great culture and modern city views.
The Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and Tian’anmen Square are must-see places. These places are full of ancient buildings. There are interesting stories behind these buildings. I was surprised at them. The city also has delicious food. For example, I enjoyed Peking duck very much.
I love Beijing because it mixes tradition and modern things well. Every visit brings me new surprises. I hope to explore more of this wonderful city in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕北京展开，涵盖了北京的地位、特色、必游景点、美食以及个人对北京的喜爱原因等，内容完整，突出了北京传统与现代交融的特点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述写作意图，旨在表达对北京的喜爱，引出北京这一主题，并说明自己曾游览过三次；
第二步，详细介绍北京的基本信息，包括其作为中国首都的地位、闻名之处；列举必游景点及其特色；提及北京的美食；
第三步，总结自己喜爱北京的原因，说明每次游览都有新惊喜，并表达未来想进一步探索这座城市的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而闻名
②must-see必看的
③mix…well将……很好地融合
[高分句型]
①As the capital of China, it is famous for its long history, great culture and modern city views. (as作方式状语)
②I love Beijing because it mixes tradition and modern things well. (because引导原因状语从句)
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