【单元考点培优】Unit 4 Problems and advice 专题14 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培沪教牛津版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教牛津版Unit 4 Problems and advice
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
1.邮件内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合原意；
2.词数在100个左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions ”的英语短文。
内容要点：1.明确表明你是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定 ”
2.优点：培养青少年的独立性 (independence)，培养青少年责任感 (develop a sense of responsibility)
3.缺点：青少年缺乏经验易出错，引发家庭矛盾。
4.优缺点只能选择一种写。
要求：1.字迹工整，段落层次清晰；
2.不必逐字逐句翻译；
3.词数80词以上。
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3．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业
伤害眼睛，不利健康
网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生
建议 适度使用智能手机
多花时间与家人、朋友交流
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Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones.
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4．请根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。
Jack的妈妈对青春期的Jack在成长中面临的诸多问题感到十分担忧。假如你是Dr. Lin，受Jack妈妈之托，请你根据思维导图内容提示给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议。
作文要求: （1）包含题干中的要点；
（2）逻辑流畅，行文完整，不少于80词；
（3）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
Dear Jack,
Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.
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Yours,
Dr. Lin
5．假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Mark向你陈述最近他沉迷电子游戏无法自拔，因此写邮件向你求助，请你给他回复一封邮件。
内容包括：
（1）说明合理使用电子产品的重要性；
（2）提出一些建议；
（3）表达你的期待。
注意:
（1）词数 80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校班级名称。
Dear, Mark,
How’s it going
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Yours,
Li Hui
6．近年来，出国留学越来越普及，并且开始出现留学低龄化现象。不少家庭在孩子的初中阶段就要面临选择。请你根据下表提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的立场、观点和选择。
Advantages ◆learn English in a native environment
◆know about western cultures
◆…
Disadvantages ◆not independent enough
◆miss family so much
◆cost a lot of money
◆…
要求：
（1）短文中必须包括表格中的相应要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数：100词左右（短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Studying Abroad, Yes or No
Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students.
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7．最近，你对学生的健康做了问卷调查，下面是调查中发现的主要问题及成因，请你根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文，并提出一些建议。
问题 成因 建议
心理健康 感到紧张 (75%) 作业太多； 没有足够时间做自己喜欢的事情。 找时间放松
…… …… ……
身体健康 眼睛近视 (65%) 不好的学习习惯； 看电视太多。 ……
变胖 (8%) …… ……
…… …… ……
要求：
(1)文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当增加细节；
(2)文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)词数70左右。
参考词汇：mental health心理健康；physical health身体健康；stressed out非常焦虑不安的；get near-sighted眼睛近视
Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health
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8．假设你的网友李华来信对你诉说，她上初三后感到压力很大，导致有时和父母吵架，向你寻求帮助。你回信给李华，提一些建议帮助她处理压力，并和父母好好相处。包括以下要点：
问题 压力 (pressure) 大；和父母争吵；
原因 1. 考试多，压力大；2. 父母期待高；
建议 1.多沟通， 学会尊重； 2. 尝试放松自己， 如…… 3.……
要求：
1. 80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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9．岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣，韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着，赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近，你班就 “Our dreams” 展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream
Jimmy 想当侦探，找出真相，防范危险。
Millie 想当舞蹈家，搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I 想当青少年辅导员，帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想，努力学习，…… (自拟一点)
参考词汇：侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
防范危险 guard against any possible danger around us
搭建东西方艺术的桥梁 build a bridge between the East and the West
注意：
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 不得出现真实姓名，校名等；省略号处作适当发挥；
3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
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10．假设你是Tom，你的中国朋友刘宇写信向你倾诉。他热爱跑步并且获得过多次比赛的大奖。长大后他想成为一名专业的跑步运动员。但是父母不支持他花大量时间练习，而是觉得他应该把所有时间用于文化学习，获得好的成绩，考上理想的高中学校。请你用英语给他回信，说一说你的看法和建议。
要点：
1. 向刘宇表示理解和支持；
2. 青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
3. 解决与父母矛盾的有效方法。
参考词汇：win big prizes, professional runner, communicate with
要求：
1. 文章须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter.
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Tom
11．《中学生英语报》开展了以“How to be a better teenager”为题的活动，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年。现在该报正在向各校学生征文。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇征文，可适当发挥。
要点如下：
◆在学校：上课认真听讲；按时完成作业；不准打耳洞；不准带手机；
◆在家里：帮助做家务；不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通；
◆在公众场所：应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐。
参考词汇：in public places在公共场所；throw rubbish 扔垃圾。
要求：
1.所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥。
2.不得出现真实的人名或校名。
3.词数不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school,
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By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!
12．智能手机让生活和学习更加便利，但是过度的使用也会给青少年带来很多问题。你校英文周刊以“Problems and Advice on Smart Phones”为题，向同学们征稿。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇英文短文投稿。
Problems Advice
眼部疲劳，影响视力； ……（请补充至少一个问题） 1.制定使用规则； 2.增加户外运动； 3.……
注意：
1.短文应包括表格中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Problems and Advice on Smart Phones
Nowadays, smart phones make life and learning easier. However, they also bring problems to teenagers.
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13．“谁言年少无烦恼，一时自有一时忧。”成长的烦恼如同影子般伴随着我们，正是有了这些烦恼，我们才成为了现在的自己。感谢这些烦恼，让我们一步步成长。请根据下面提示，用英语写一篇文章。
1．What problem did you meet
2．How did you solve it
3．What have you learned from it
注意：
1．80词左右；
2．不要出现考生本人信息。
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14．知物由学，学习对青少年有着极为重要的意义，学习一项技能可以帮助我们很多。请你结合图示信息，根据下面的写作内容和写作要求用英语写一篇短文，向校报英语专栏投稿。下面所列举的是一些生活中重要的技能，仅供参考！
Life skills: keep healthy/ work with others/ solve problems / manage time…
1.写作内容：
1)介绍一项你认为最为重要的技能；
2)说明这项技能最为重要的原因；
3)就如何提高这项技能给出建议。
2.写作要求：
1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100 左右。
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15．假定你是李华，请阅读以下信息卡，写一篇发言稿，在英文课上与同学交流，内容包括介绍手机这项发明，不同人(Jason和Anna)对青少年使用手机的看法，你对青少年用手机的看法和理由。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（2）词数100左右，开头已经给出，不算入总词数，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
The mobile phone 1. invented by Martin Cooper 2. invented in 1973 3. invented in America I think the mobile phone is very useful in our daily lives. —JasonI’m not allowed to use the mobile phone too much because my mom thinks it will get in the way of study. But isn’t it too strict —Anna
I’m glad to make a speech here. I would like to talk about the mobile phone.
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16．假设你是李华，你的英语老师Mr.Li布置课后活动， 讨论“学生与家长间的问题”。你代表你们组在班上分享讨论的结果。请根据下面表格内容提示， 完成分享稿。
What What for How to deal with
The problem with parents… (1) Lack of communicating (2) … (1) Talk with (2) Understanding (3) …
注意：
(1)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2)补充表格内容；
(3)词数：80字左右。
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Here’s the result our group talked about. The problem with parents is
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That’s all.
Thanks for listening.
17．随着科技的发展，智能手机 (smart phones)、电脑、iPad等科技发明让我们的生活发生了巨大的变化。作为生活在科技时代的学生，请你根据以下信息，谈谈你对智能手机的看法并提出你的建议。
智能手机
优点 1. 快速获取信息； 2. 能随时随地和父母、朋友保持联系； 3. 可以用手机拍照、听音乐……
缺点 花太多时间在手机上，影响学习、对健康有害……
建议 1. 多花时间和家人朋友交流； 2. 积极参加各种活动，如打乒乓球、游泳……
要求：
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，80词左右，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称。
We know there have been many inventions in the world and they have changed the way we live, work and play. Smart phones are one of them.
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18．初三学生在日常生活和学习中往往需要面对各种心理压力。为了帮助同学们缓解压力，你们英语老师决定在下周的课堂上组织一次经验交流会。请你根据以下提示，以“Ways to keep active”为题写一篇英语短文，在交流会上发言。
提示：
1.适当放松；
2.保持充足的睡眠；
3………
要求：
1.习作包含提示要点，并补充两条自己的观点；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Ways to keep active
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active.
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I hope you’ll find these tips helpful and be happy every day!
19．“中学生是否应当被允许在学校使用手机 ”，不同的同学有不同的看法，请根据下面表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
观点 赞成 反对
理由 1.打电话给家长或朋友很方便 2.搜索关于学习方面信息 3.浏览新闻，开阔视野 4.玩一会儿游戏可以放松 1.许多学生花太多时间打游戏和聊天，浪费时间 2.危害身心健康（伤害眼睛、交坏朋友）
你的观点及理由： ……
要求：1. 包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 文中不要出现真实人名、地名、校名等。
3. 词数100左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Should middle school students be allowed to use mobiles phone at school
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Should middle school students be allowed to use mobiles phone at school Different students have different opinions about it.
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20．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom发来电子邮件说下学期他将转到一所寄宿学校 (boarding school) 上学，他对此感到很焦虑。请你根据以下提示内容，用英文给Tom回一封电子邮件，针对他所焦虑的问题提出一些建议。
Tom’s worries Your advice
can not make friends in the new school 1. be friendly, smile; 2. join school clubs; 3. …
can not get along with roommates (室友) 1. follow the dormitory (宿舍) rules; 2. be considerate (考虑周到的) and not make noises; 3. …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear from you.
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I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．参考范文
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题；
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议；
第三步，书写结尾，期待得到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with sb.和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
②I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
2．例文：
Should teenagers be allowed to make their own decisions
In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions.
Allowing teenagers to make decisions can bring many benefits. Firstly, it helps cultivate their independence. When they face choices and solve problems on their own, they gradually learn to rely on themselves. Secondly, it enables them to develop a sense of responsibility. Since they make the decisions, they will be more willing to take responsibility for the consequences.
In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，探讨是否应允许青少年自主做决定；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应围绕是否支持青少年自主做决定，选择阐述优点或缺点，注意突出写作重点，不必逐字逐句翻译。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接提出是否支持“允许青少年自主做决定”的观点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。若选择支持，则从培养青少年的独立性、责任感等优点方面进行论述；若选择反对，则从青少年缺乏经验易出错、引发家庭矛盾等缺点方面进行论述；
第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点，强调其重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s own独自地
②be willing to愿意
③take responsibility for对……负责
④in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
In conclusion, giving teenagers the chance to make their own decisions is beneficial for their growth.（动名词短语作主语）
3．例文
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people.
Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life!
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害；
第二步，提出远离手机的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②as a result结果
③switch off关闭
[高分句型]
①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句)
4．例文:
Dear Jack,
Teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much. You spend too much time on computer games and phones. Besides, you hardly communicate with your family and friends. I have some advice for you. Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. In addition, more communication also works.
All in all, it is necessary for you to think about your parents’ feelings and try your best to deal with the problems. Try to share the housework with them. I hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Wishing you a happy and successful junior high school life!
Yours,
Dr. Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点需根据思维导图提示，给Jack写一封信，谈谈他遇到的问题并给出建议，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己知道对方有一些问题，谈论对方的问题并给出建议；
第二步，表达对对方的期望；
第三步，书写结尾，祝愿对方有一个开心且成功的初中生活。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about对……担忧
②spend time on sth在某事上花时间
③communicate with sb.与某人交流
[高分句型]
①I know that you have also got some problems and your parents are worried about you so much.（that引导宾语从句）
②Take part in some after-school activities so that you have less time to spend on computer games and phones. （so that引导状语从句）
5．
例文
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m sorry to hear you’re stuck in playing video games too much. It’s important to use electronics properly—spending too much time on games will make you tired, hurt your eyes, and even affect your studies and time with family. Here are some tips for you. First, set a daily time limit for gaming, like 30 minutes after finishing homework. Second, try other activities you used to love, such as playing basketball or reading books. When you feel like gaming, call a friend to hang out instead. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit soon.
Looking forward to hearing about your progress!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，李辉针对英国笔友Mark沉迷电子游戏的问题，回复邮件提供帮助；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，阐述合理使用电子产品的重要性；使用情态动词强调后果与可能性，语气亲切自然，时态运用符合逻辑，流畅连贯；
③提示：文章紧扣所有内容要点，包含“合理使用电子产品的重要性，补充了“游戏时长示例 ”等细节，内容完整，逻辑清晰，无真实信息，词数符合80-100词要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接已给问候语，对Mark沉迷游戏的情况表达关切与理解，随即点明“合理使用电子产品很重要”，并具体分析过度玩游戏的负面影响，让Mark认识到问题的严重性，为下文建议做铺垫；
第二步，分点提出改善建议。首先建议设定每日游戏时长；其次提议重拾旧爱好；最后补充应急方法，从“控制时长、转移注意力、即时干预”三个角度给出方案，全面且实用；
第三步，表达对Mark的信任，并期待听到他的进步，用积极的鼓励收尾，既传递信心，又强化Mark改变的动力。
[亮点词汇]
①be stuck in沉迷于
②use electronics properly合理使用电子产品
③time limit时间限制
④get rid of摆脱
⑤make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①It’s important to use electronics properly—spending too much time on games will make you tired, hurt your eyes, and even affect your studies and time with family.（使用“it’s + 形容词 + to do sth”句型）
②When you feel like gaming, call a friend to hang out instead.（“When”引导时间状语从句）
③I believe you can get rid of this bad habit soon. Looking forward to hearing about your progress!（使用宾语从句）
6．例文
Studying Abroad, Yes or No
Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among middle school students. There are many advantages. Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning. Students can learn English in a native environment. Besides, students can know more about western cultures. What’s more, they can learn more modern technology. But there are also some disadvantages of going abroad. For example, teenagers are not independent enough. They miss their family so much. They can’t take good care of themselves because of lacking of life experience, and they feel lonely. And most importantly, it costs a lot of money for them to study abroad.
In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出国留学的优势；
第二步，描述出国留学的劣势；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more popular 越来越受欢迎
②foreign language learning 外语学习
③native environment 母语环境
④western cultures 西方文化
⑤modern technology 现代技术
[高分句型]
①Studying abroad is more helpful to foreign language learning.（动名词短语作主语）
②In my opinion, the key to one’s future development is not where you study but how and what you study.（not...but...连接两个表语从句）
7．例文
Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems on mental and physical health.
About mental health, 75 percent of the students feel stressed out. They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax and try to make a balance between work and play.
As for physical health, 65 percent of the students don’t have good study habits and they watch TV too much, so they get near-sighted. They should do homework or read in a correct way. Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. It’s better for them to have more healthy food and do some exercise every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对调查的介绍；
第二步，针对心理和身体两方面介绍调查结果并给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stressed out 紧张的
②make a balance 保持平衡
③in a correct way 用一种正确的方式
[高分句型]
①They have too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing.（并列结构和宾语从句）
②Some students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly take exercise. （原因状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Li Hua,
In your letter, you mentioned that you had been feeling a lot of pressure since starting Grade 9, and that you often quarrelled with your parents. I am sorry to hear that, but many teenagers share similar trouble with you, so you are not alone.
Your pressure may result from many things, such as too many exams or the high expectation from both your parents and yourself. Realizing the source of pressure, you may find it easier to get rid of it. Here are my suggestions.
To begin with, as a child, you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often, which is very helpful to avoid arguments. What’s more, you had better learn to control yourself better. Don’t spend too much time playing computer games, so that your parents will be more satisfied with you instead of worrying about you. Besides, it’s a good idea for you to do some exercise, such as climbing the Baiyun Mountain at weekend. This will help you relax and forget your pressure for a while.
In my opinion, part of growing up is learning to live with pressure and trying your best to deal with it. I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and lead a happy life.
Yours,
Linda
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步：表明写作意图，分析压力的来源；
第二步：根据具体问题，给出建议；
第三步：书写结语，表达期望。
【亮点词汇】①get rid of去除
②communicate with sb与某人交流
③had better do sth.最好做某事
【高分句型】①To begin with, as a child, you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often, which is very helpful to avoid arguments. （定语从句）
②I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and lead a happy life. （宾语从句）
9．例文
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
Jimmy wants to be a detective. He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth. In addition, he hopes we can guard against any possible danger around us.
Millie would like to be a dancer. All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet. So she insists that she will build a bridge between the East and the West by dancing.
As for me, I prefer to be a youth worker, especially to help teenagers solve their stress. I’m willing to give them valuable suggestions on how to deal with teenage problems.
In order to realize our dreams, we must study hard to improve ourselves. Moreover, we should be brave enough to take on new challenges any time in our daily life. Then we can succeed in making our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并要求包含为实现梦想所采取的行动。考生需围绕这些要点展开，确保内容全面，并适当发挥以丰富文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，直接点明文章主题，即关于梦想的讨论报告；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先分别介绍Jimmy、Millie以及“我”的梦想，并简要说明各自梦想背后的意义或动机；
第三步，书写结语。强调梦想的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①solve mysteries解开谜团
②guard against预防，提防
③have a real gift for对……有天赋
[高分句型]
①He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth.（并列句）
②All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter. I really understand how you feel. It’s also normal for your parents to stop you from being a professional runner. After all, your schoolwork is really important and it is your duty to enter a good university. However, I have nothing against your training.
I think teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions. First of all, hobbies will not get in the way of schoolwork. Instead, they can make us full of courage and energy. What’s more, we are serious enough to be responsible for ourselves.
I hope you can communicate with your parents so that they can consider your feelings seriously. Besides, there is no doubt that you are supposed to balance your training and schoolwork. Only then will you solve your problems. Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，向刘宇表示理解和支持；
第二步，阐述观点：青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
第三步，谈谈如何解决与父母矛盾的有效方法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①after all毕竟
②make one’s own decisions自己做决定
③be responsible for为……负责
④communicate with sb与某人交流
[高分句型]
①I think teenagers should be allowed to make their own decisions.（宾语从句）
②I hope you can communicate with your parents so that they can consider your feelings seriously.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③Besides, there is no doubt that you are supposed to balance your training and schoolwork.（that引导的同位语从句）
④Only then will you solve your problems.（倒装句）
11．例文
How to be a better teenager
Every student wants to be a better teenager. But what can we do to be better Here are my suggestions.
At school, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time. Besides, we are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.
At home, we are supposed to help our parents with housework. Moreover, we are not supposed to talk back to our parents. It’s impolite. We are expected to communicate with them more often. Through communication, we can understand each other better.
In public places, we should offer our seats to the old. We can’t throw rubbish everywhere. What’s more, we’d better not listen to music that’s loud.
By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourselves but also make the world a better place!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，讨论如何成为优秀的青少年；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，因为是在讨论普遍适用的行为准则；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括在学校、家里和公众场所的行为规范。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并可以适当发挥，增加细节或例子来支持论点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头部分，通过提问“But what can we do to be better ”引出主题，即如何成为更好的青少年，并紧接着提出“Here are my suggestions.”来引出下文的具体建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。在学校部分，从“上课认真听讲；按时完成作业”这两个基本的学习要求出发，强调它们对于成为优秀青少年的重要性。接着，提出“不准打耳洞；不准带手机”等校规，说明这些规定有助于青少年专注于学习和保持学生形象；在家里部分，强调“帮助做家务”可以培养青少年的责任感和独立性，同时指出“不和父母顶嘴，多与父母沟通”是建立和谐家庭关系的关键；在公众场所部分通过“应该主动给老人让座；不乱扔垃圾；不听嘈杂的音乐”等行为规范，展现青少年的礼貌、环保意识和对他人的尊重；
第三步，书写结语。在结尾部分，通过“By following these suggestions, we can not only improve ourself but also make the world a better place!”这句话总结全文，强调遵循这些建议对个人成长和社会进步的积极作用，同时呼应开头，使文章结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②on time准时
③get one’s ears pierced打耳洞
[高分句型]
①We should listen to our teachers carefully in class and finish our homework on time.（and连接两个并列的谓语）
②We are not allowed to get our ears pierced or bring mobile phones to school.（or连接两个并列的不定式短语作宾语补足语）
③It’s impolite for us not to talk back to our parents.（It's+形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型）
12．例文
Problems and Advice on Smart Phones
Nowadays, smart phones make life and learning easier. However, they also bring problems to teenagers. First, looking at the screen for a long time can make our eyes tired and hurt our eyesight. Second, some students spend too much time playing games or watching videos, and they have less time to study or do other useful things.
To solve these problems, we can make some rules. For example, we can only use smart phones for one hour a day. We should also do more outdoor activities, like playing sports or going for a walk. It’s also a good idea to talk to our parents or teachers if we have trouble controlling ourselves.
If we make good use of smart phones, they can be helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍过度使用手机带来的问题；
第二步，介绍自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②go for a walk散步
③have trouble doing sth.做某事有麻烦
④make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
①First, looking at the screen for a long time can make our eyes tired and hurt our eyesight. (动名词作主语)
②It’s also a good idea to talk to our parents or teachers if we have trouble controlling ourselves. (if引导的条件状语从句)
13．例文
I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. To solve this, I started practicing every day. I listened to English songs, watched English movies, and imitated the pronunciation of native speakers. Additionally, I joined an English club at school where I could practice speaking with my classmates. Over time, my pronunciation improved significantly, and I became more confident in speaking English. This experience taught me the importance of persistence and practice.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为一般过去时；
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，描述遇到的问题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，总结学到的经验。
[亮点词汇]
additionally 此外
[高分句型]
I found it difficult to speak clearly and confidently. (不定式作真正的宾语)
14．例文
Among various life skills, problem-solving stands out as one of the most essential abilities for teenagers. It equips us to tackle challenges in studies, relationships, and daily life, shaping us into resilient individuals.
Problem-solving is vital because it fosters critical thinking and adaptability. Whether facing academic pressure or conflicts with friends, analyzing situations calmly and finding solutions helps us grow intellectually and emotionally. Moreover, this skill prepares us for an unpredictable future, where challenges will inevitably arise.
To improve problem-solving skills, start by identifying the root cause of issues instead of focusing only on symptoms. Break complex problems into smaller, manageable steps. Practice brainstorming multiple solutions and evaluating their pros and cons. Additionally, learn from failures—each mistake is a chance to refine strategies. Collaborating with others also broadens perspectives and inspires creative approaches.
By nurturing problem-solving skills early, teenagers can confidently navigate life’s uncertainties and turn obstacles into opportunities for growth.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题。文章开头直接表明解决问题的技能在青少年所需的各种生活技能中十分关键；
第二步，具体分析解决问题技能重要的原因，然后详细说明提升技能的具体做法；
第三步，书写结语。总结培养解决问题技能对青少年的积极影响，呼吁青少年重视并培养这一技能。
［亮点词汇］
①problem-solving skills 解决问题的技能
②stand out 突出；显眼
③essential 至关重要的
④tackle challenges 应对挑战
⑤academic pressure 学业压力
［高分句型］
①Problem-solving is vital because it fosters critical thinking and adaptability.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Moreover, this skill prepares us for an unpredictable future, where challenges will inevitably arise.（where引导的定语从句）
15．例文
I’m glad to make a speech here. I would like to talk about the mobile phone. The mobile phone was invented by Martin Cooper in America in 1973. It has become an important part of our daily lives.
Jason thinks the mobile phone is very useful. However, Anna isn’t allowed to use it too much as her mom believes it may affect her study.
In my opinion, mobile phones can be both helpful and harmful to teenagers. On the one hand, they help us communicate with others easily and access a lot of information. We can also use them to study, like looking up words or watching educational videos. On the other hand, if we use them too much, it may indeed have a bad influence on our studies and health. So, as long as we use mobile phones properly, they can be a great tool for us.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意适当发挥，使文章的内容更加完整，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍手机的发明以及手机在人们生活中的重要性；
第二步，简单阐述Jason和Anna对青少年使用手机的看法；
第三步，阐述自己的个人观点，详细阐述使用手机对青少年的生活、学习等方面的利和弊，表明合理使用手机，让它成为有用的工具；
第四步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
②communicate with与……交流、与……沟通
③on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Jason thinks the mobile phone is very useful.（宾语从句）
②So, as long as we use mobile phones properly, they can be a great tool for us.（条件状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Here’s the result our group talked about. The problem with parents is lack of communicating with their children. So they don’t know what their children need or want to do. In addition, they believe that children should follow their advice instead of making their own decisions. We think parents should often talk with their children in person. Parents should also understand their children’s feelings and needs. What’s more, parents should allow their children to make their own decisions. In this way, children can become more independent when they grow up.
That’s all.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“父母的问题在于与孩子缺乏沟通。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——具体问题以及应对的方法等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①lack of缺乏
②instead of代替
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①In addition, they believe that children should follow their advice instead of making their own decisions. (that引导的宾语从句）
②In this way, children can become more independent when they grow up. (when引导的时间状语从句)
17．例文：
We know there have been many inventions in the world and they have changed the way we live, work and play. Smart phones are one of them. With the development of technology, gadgets like smart phones, computers, and iPads have brought tremendous changes to our lives.
As a student living in this technological era, I find smart phones extremely useful. They allow us to access information quickly and stay connected with our parents and friends anytime, anywhere. We can also take photos, listen to music, and do many other things on our phones.
However, smart phones do have their drawbacks. Spending too much time on them can affect our studies and harm our health. It’s easy to get addicted to social media and games, which can take away our focus from important tasks.
My suggestion is to balance our phone use. We should spend more time talking to our family and friends in person. Additionally, taking part in various activities like playing table tennis, swimming, or joining clubs can help us stay healthy and active. By doing so, we can enjoy the benefits of technology without letting it control our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点包括智能手机的优点、缺点以及针对缺点的建议，考生应确保覆盖这些要点，并可以适当添加个人看法或经历来丰富文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。从“科技发展带来的变化”引出智能手机这一具体话题，并表明将要讨论其对九年级学生的影响；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。优点部分：列举智能手机快速获取信息、便于沟通联系、娱乐功能（拍照、听音乐）等优点；缺点部分：指出过度使用手机影响学习、损害健康等缺点；建议部分：提出多进行面对面交流、参与体育活动等建议，以平衡手机使用与生活其他方面。
第三步，书写结语。总结智能手机带来的利弊，并强调合理使用手机的重要性，可以表达对未来科技与生活和谐共生的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①development of 发展
②tremendous changes 巨大的变化
③live in 生活在
④have drawbacks 有缺点
⑤get addicted to 沉迷于
⑥balance our phone use 平衡手机使用
⑦various activities 各种活动
[高分句型]
It’s easy to get addicted to social media and games, which can take away our focus from important tasks. (定语从句)
18．[例文]
Ways to keep active
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share some of my ideas on how to keep active.
First, it’s important for us to learn how to relax and relieve stress. Methods like listening to music and taking a hot shower can be helpful. Second, we must develop good sleeping habits. Getting a good night’s sleep gives us energy to deal with all kinds of tasks during the day. Third, take an active part in physical exercise. Studies show that physical exercise can not only build up our body, but also make us feel happy. Consider outdoor activities such as walking, jogging, cycling and other activities that you enjoy. Lastly, don’t keep silent about your problems. Find someone you trust to talk to and you’ll certainly feel better.
I hope you’ll find these tips helpful and be happy every day!
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇讲稿。
时态：一般现在时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图，我很高兴分享一些关于如何保持活跃的想法。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍保持活跃的方法。
第三步，书写结语，我希望这些小贴士有用，并且每天都快乐。
【亮点词汇】
not only…but also… 不但……而且……
such as 例如
【高分句型】
Getting a good night’s sleep gives us energy to deal with all kinds of tasks during the day. （动名词作主语）
Studies show that physical exercise can not only build up our body, but also make us feel happy.（that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文
Should middle school students be allowed to use mobiles phone at school
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Should middle school students be allowed to use mobiles phone at school Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it’s convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news. It helps them broaden their horizons. Thirdly, they can play games to relax themselves.
However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones to play games and chat is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it’s unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.
In my opinion, students can’t use mobile phones at school. It’s bad for our health and study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中所提示的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，“中学生是否应当被允许在学校使用手机 ”这一话题，不同的同学有不同的看法 (已给出)；
第二步，详细叙述同学们赞成以及不赞成的理由；
第三步，表明自己的观点及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient 方便的
②search 搜索
③look up 查找
④look through 浏览
⑤broaden their horizons 开阔他们的眼界
[高分句型]
①First, it’s convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends. (It is+for sb.+to do sth.句型)
②They think using mobile phones to play games and chat is a waste of time. (宾语从句)
20．参考范文：
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear from you. It’s a great opportunity to make new friends and learn from different cultures in a new school. As for your worries, I have some advice for you.
To make more friends in the new school, I suggest you be friendly and open-minded. A smile or a simple “hello” can break the ice. Remember to listen to others carefully when you’re talking. Or you can join some school clubs or activities to make more friends. To get along well with your classmates and roommates, it’s also important to respect and follow the dormitory rules to create a harmonious living environment. Being considerate and not making noises will also be helpful.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点明写作主题；
第二步，阐述你的建议，从如何交到朋友，如何与宿舍室友相处等方面详细阐述；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②learn from向……学习
③get along well with与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①Remember to listen to others carefully when you’re talking.(时间状语从句)
②I hope my advice will be helpful to you.(宾语从句)
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