【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Curious minds 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（五四学制）（2024）
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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 3 Curious minds
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．My Curious Experience题目要求：
在生活中，我们总会对一些事物充满好奇 —— 也许是夜晚闪烁的星星、蚂蚁搬家的路线，或是家里电器的工作原理。请根据以下要求，写一篇60-80 词的短文，描述一次因好奇心引发的经历。
内容需包含：你好奇的事物是什么？为了探索它你做了什么？最终的结果和感受如何？
至少运用两种生动描写技巧(参考教材 P46：描述想法感受、添加感官细节、制造悬念)。
需使用本单元核心词汇(如 curious, wonder, explore, discover 等)和至少一个不定式结构(如 decide to do, want to find out)。写作提示：
可参考教材中 Wang Yiming 的故事结构(起因—经过—结果)，并运用 Dr. Hu 提到的技巧让文字更生动：
描述想法：用 “I wondered...”, “I couldn’t stop thinking...” 表达好奇心；
感官细节：记录看到的(sight)、听到的(sound)或触摸到的(touch)细节；
制造悬念：用 “奇怪的现象” 开头，如 “A strange noise woke me up...”。
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2．你是否曾因一个偶然的发现而心跳加速？或许一群蚂蚁的奇特路线，一只蝴蝶的斑斓花纹，或是一道数学题的意外解法——正是这些看似微小的“好奇心瞬间”，点亮了人类文明的星空。请围绕“好奇心”写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
▲What sparked your curiosity (e.g. a question, an observation, a challenge)
▲How did you explore or investigate it
▲What did you learn from the experience
▲Why is curiosity important in life
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3．好奇心是心灵深处的一团火焰, 点燃我们对未知的渴望。它似无形的双手, 推动我们去探索、去发现, 让平淡的生活充满惊喜与奇迹。请以“Curiosity: the key to learning”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
1. Why is curiosity important for students
2. How can curiosity help us explore the world
3. Give an example from your life or studies.
Curiosity: the key to learning
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4．好奇心往往是人们追求进步与成功的动力源泉。请以“Curiosity leads to success”为题，写一篇短文，通过讲述自己或他人的经历，阐述好奇心是如何帮助人们取得成功的。词数不少于60。
Curiosity leads to success
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5．好奇心 (curiosity) 在我们的学习和生活中起着重要的作用。请以“Curiosity”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好奇心的重要性，并举例说明好奇心是如何帮助你或他人取得进步或获得成功的。
要求：
1. 包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数：80词左右。
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6．水是我们生活中最常见的东西，也是我们生活中非常重要的东西之一，所以我们要节约用水，保护水资源。假如你们校刊的英语专栏以“家庭节约用水”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你的认识和做法。
How to Save Water at Home
The importance of water valuable(珍贵的), useful, we use it to ...
How to save water at home take a quick shower, use less water, turn off the tap ...
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: first of all 首先; then 然后; in the end 最后; used water用过的水
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful.
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Let’s try our best to save water.
7．DeepSeek的问世使人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 成为热门话题，科技的快速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，请写一篇名为“AI in Our Life”的作文，谈谈你对人工智能的看法。内容包括：
1. AI的优点：使生活更加方便、舒适；代替人类完成危险、繁重的工作……
2. AI的缺点：人们过于依赖人工智能，失去独立思考能力；增加失业风险……
3. 你的看法：……
参考词汇：advantage优点；disadvantage缺点；risk风险
要求：1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
AI in Our Life
The invention of DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society.
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8．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和Chat GPT的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
内容包括：
1. 人工智能的优点：代替人们做危险、枯燥的工作；
2. 人工智能的缺点：人们对AI过度依赖；
3. 你的看法……
注意：
1. 字数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
3. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．2025年AI一词火爆全网，假如上周你们班就“英语课堂应该使用AI技术吗 ”展开了一次讨论，请你根据下列表格提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的想法并表达你自己的观点。
支持理由 反对理由
1. 增加学习趣味性 2. 提高学习效率 3. ……（自由补充） 1. 减少交流 2. 过度依赖
要求：
1. 必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should we use AI in English Class
Last week, we discussed if we should use AI in our English class. Different students have different opinions.
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10．科学精神是每个人必备的品质。作为中学生，我们应该追求真理、勇于探索、持之以恒、学会质疑、独立思考、敢于创新。科学精神不仅是思维方式，更是一种态度。具备科学精神既有助于知识的不断更新，又对个人的全面发展有着深远的影响。
某校以“弘扬科学精神”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动。请你写一篇相关短文。
内容包括：
●the scientific spirit you have；
●an experience you had；
●your understanding of the scientific spirit.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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11．上个星期你们学校去阳光镇参观了“国际机器人展”，你对机器人有了许多了解。请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈如果有了机器人，它将对你的生活带来的变化。
内容要点：
1.假如你有一台机器人，它会在很多方面改变你的生活；
2.优点：让你有更多空闲时间去做自己喜爱的事，可以帮助你做家务，如洗衣服、做饭、打扫卫生；
3.缺点：可能会感染病毒，引起许多麻烦……最后不得不送回机器人商店；
4.但机器人会给生活带来巨大变化，带来的优势比劣势多。
注意事项：
1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town.
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12．在建设海南自贸港的背景下，英语的重要性逐渐显现并不断增强。假如你是李华，某软件公司准备开发一款适合当地居民在业余时间学习英语的APP，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
The name of the APP Happy English Learning
Contents English news, movies, songs , games
The advantages of the APP 1.make it easy to study; 2.improve listening and speaking; 3. ...
注意事项：
（1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Here is my design for the new APP.
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13．假如你们学校要开展一个科技节活动，你针对现在学生坐姿不正确和玩电脑、看电视时间过长等情况，发明了一把特殊的椅子。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，给同学们介绍一下你的发明。
发明 一把特殊的椅子
材料 由木材制成
功能 1. 椅座和椅背都有传感器。当学生没有坐直时，椅子会发出提醒； 2. 坐在椅子上超过一小时，椅子就会发出声音，提醒学生起来活动一下。
优点 ……
词数：100左右。
提示词语：sensor 传感器; the back of the chair 椅背; sit up straight 坐直。
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you.
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Thanks for your listening!
14．科技改变了我们的生活，相信每个人都深有体会。请你以“Technology Changes Our Lives”为题，根据要求用英语写一篇短文，讲述科技是如何改变我们的生活的。
内容包括：
1. 科技使日常生活更便捷：可以在网上学习，可以随时随地跟远方的朋友聊天，机器人送餐；
2. 使生活更丰富多彩（如电视或短视频等）；
3. 我们应该合理利用科技，但不能过多依赖它。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．假设你是李华，你校英文报社新增了关于项目式学习的专栏，你所在小组刚完成的项目是“设计校园智能机器人”，请你代表小组向专栏投稿，介绍你们设计的机器人，项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法，并分享你的收获。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.
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16．世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活。在英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你影响最大的发明。
提示内容：
1. What is the invention that influences your life most
2. How does it influence your life
3. What’s your feeling about it
写作要求：
1. 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
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Thanks for your attention!
17．亲爱的同学们，假如你是一名机器人发明家，你会设计具有什么特殊功能的机器人呢？又会让它来解决人们日常生活中的什么难题呢？请设计你梦想中的机器人，并参考以下问题进行描述：
1.它有哪些特殊功能（至少两个）？2.这些功能能如何帮助人们？3.你如何评价它？
参考表达方式：1. It will... 2. It can... 3. I think it is... because...
（50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My Dream Robot
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18．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Justin对中国的新四大发明（the high-speed railway，mobile payment，shared bikes，online shopping）很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，对其中的“共享单车”做简单介绍，内容包括：
（1）使用方法；（2）优势；（3）你的看法。
要求：（1）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使文章条理清晰、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
19．当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机。智能手机是重要的发明，请描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，以及对我们生活的影响。
要求：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、书写规范；
3.词数：90词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇： benefit 益处
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20．近年来，电脑成了我们生活的一个重要部分，甚至和我们的学习生活息息相关，某校英文杂志社开辟中学生专栏，请你以“The greatest invention—the computer”为题写篇短文，为该杂志社投稿。
内容包括:
1. 电脑的用途（包括：可以学习、上网查资料；可以听音乐、看电影使自己放松；可以发送邮件与别人保持联系）；
2. 倡议中学生正确使用电脑。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80（文章开头已给出；不计入总词数）；
2. 短文必须包括所给的内容, 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不许出现真实的班级和姓名。
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
One sunny afternoon, I saw black ants marching on the windowsill. “Where are they heading ” I wondered. Driven by curiosity, I decided to follow them. They stopped at a piece of bread, their tiny legs moving fast to carry crumbs. Watching their teamwork amazed me. Exploring their world made my day joyful. The ants reminded me that even the smallest creatures can teach big lessons about cooperation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己好奇的事物是什么；
第二步、介绍自己的探索行动；
第三步、介绍事情的结果和自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②a piece of一块
③made my day joyful让我的一天充满欢乐
[高分句型]
The ants reminded me that even the smallest creatures can teach big lessons about cooperation. (that引导宾语从句)
2．例文
Last month, I noticed a small plant growing sideways near my window. Why does it bend toward the sunlight This question sparked my curiosity. I placed the plant in different spots, observed it daily, and even drew sketches. My science teacher explained it was “phototropism”—plants grow toward light to survive.
Through this, I learned that curiosity turns simple observations into big discoveries. It teaches us to ask questions and seek answers patiently. Like the plant reaching for light, curiosity guides us in exploring the unknown. Keep asking “Why ”—it’s the key to unlocking amazing secrets in life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的发现是窗边的植物；
第二步，分享自己通过这株植物得到的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①teach sb to do sth教某人做某事
②the key to关键是
[高分句型]
①Through this, I learned that curiosity turns simple observations into big discoveries.（宾语从句）
3．参考范文：
Curiosity: the key to learning
Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. It drives us to ask questions, explore the unknown, and discover new ideas.
Firstly, curiosity makes learning fun. Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. Secondly, curiosity helps us overcome challenges. Thomas Edison failed many times. But his curiosity kept him trying until he succeeded. Finally, curious people never stop growing. Scientists like Marie Curie kept asking questions, leading to great discoveries.
In short, curiosity turns learning into a lifelong journey.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时” ；
③提示：材料所给的写作要点不得遗漏，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇破题，定义好奇心的概念，阐述好奇心的重要性；
第二步，结合个人经历，论证好奇心让学习变得有趣；
第三步，说明以好奇心探索世界的方式，总结全文。
【亮点词汇】①overcome challenges 克服挑战
②lead to 导致；促成
③lifelong journey 终身旅程
【高分句型】①Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. （比喻修辞；定语从句）
②Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. （宾语从句）
4．例文
Curiosity leads to success
Curiosity is like a bright light that helps us reach success. I have my own story to show how it works.
I was always curious about plants. I planted the same seeds in different places. Some places had more sunlight, and some had less. I watered them differently too. Every day, I watched these plants carefully and wrote down how they grew. After a few months, I finally knew why different plants need different places to grow.
When we’re curious, we’re not afraid to try new things. Even if there are problems, we still keep going. So, if we follow our curiosity, we can be successful.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章写作需要围绕“好奇心助力成功”展开，文章内容要涵盖观点提出、个人经历佐证及总结升华，考生应注意结合具体事例支撑观点，适当补充实验细节，注意拼写和语法正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出“好奇心如明灯助力成功”的观点，并说明将用个人经历佐证；
第二步，具体阐述事例。详细讲述自己因对植物好奇，通过控制光照、浇水条件做实验，观察记录植物生长，最终得出结论的经历；
第三步，书写结语。总结好奇心带来的积极影响，呼吁遵循好奇心以走向成功。
［亮点词汇］
①curiosity 好奇心
②seeds 种子
③sunlight 阳光
④keep going 坚持下去
⑤follow our curiosity 遵循我们的好奇心
［高分句型］
①Curiosity is like a bright light that helps us reach success.（that引导的定语从句）
②After a few months, I finally knew why different plants need different places to grow.（why引导的宾语从句）
③Even if there are problems, we still keep going.（even if引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
Curiosity
Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. It plays a vital role in both study and life, pushing us to explore and learn more.
For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. I asked my biology teacher, read books, and even did a small experiment. Finally, I learned it was due to “phototropism”. This experience not only helped me master the knowledge but also made me more interested in science.
In short, curiosity helps us make progress and achieve success. We should always keep it alive in our hearts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过比喻引入主题，强调好奇心在学习和生活中的关键作用；
第二步，用个人经历证明好奇心的实际价值，展示其如何促进学习；
第三步，总结好奇心对个人成长的作用，并呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①in short 总之
②play a role in 在……起作用
[高分句型]
①For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. (宾语从句)
②Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
6．例文
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful. We use it to do lots of things in our life. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First of all, we should take a quick shower because it uses less water. Then turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. In the end, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water. In these ways, we can save a lot of water.
Let’s try our best to save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可以适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接使用已给出的首句，说明水的珍贵性和用途；
第二步，具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法；
第三步，最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①It is important for us to save water. （it is＋adj＋to do sth句型）
②Let’s try our best to save water.（祈使句）
7．例文
AI in Our Life
The invention of DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. It has become an important part of our life.
In some ways, AI is good for us. It makes our life more convenient and comfortable. For example, we can gain knowledge on every subject from it in a few seconds. What’s more, AI can help us to do some dangerous and hard jobs. However, it also brings us some problems. Students can’t think by themselves with the help of AI and they can’t study carefully in class. Moreover, AI will take the place of humans in some jobs, increasing the risk of unemployment.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI wisely and view it as a helper to improve our life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍AI的优点；
第二步，介绍AI的缺点；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for有益于
②with the help of… 在……的帮助下
③take the place of代替
[高分句型]
①Students can’t think by themselves with the help of AI and they can’t study carefully in class.(并列句)
8．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is getting more and more popular in our daily life.
As we all know, every coin has its two sides. On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. On the other hand, with AI being widely used, a large number of workers are losing their jobs. What’s more, some people depend on AI so much that they lose their ability to think creatively and independently.
In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human beings so there is no need to worry about it too much. It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control.
The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明AI的广泛应用；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优点和缺点；
第三步，发表自己对AI的看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……的发展
②On the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
③be used to do被用来做某事
④a large number of大量，许多
⑤depend on依赖
⑥take the place of取代
⑦make the best use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control. (that省略的定语从句)
9．例文
Should we use AI in English Class Last week, we discussed if we should use AI in our English class. Different students have different opinions.
Some students support using AI. They think AI can make learning more interesting, like through interactive English-language games. It can also improve learning efficiency. For example, AI can quickly provide personalized exercise plans and instant feedback. Moreover, AI can offer diverse English learning resources, such as English-language stories and songs from all over the world.
However, others are against it. They believe AI will reduce face-to-face communication in English class. Students may also become overly dependent on AI, weakening their own thinking abilities.
In my view, AI is a useful tool. We can use it properly in English class. Let AI assist us, but not replace our own efforts and interactions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点围绕是否应在英语课使用AI展开，涵盖了支持方、反对方的观点及个人看法，内容完整，且在阐述观点时添加了具体例子作为细节，突出了核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先引出讨论的话题，即是否应该在英语课上使用AI。
第二步，分别阐述支持使用AI的学生的观点及理由，包括让学习更有趣、提高学习效率、提供多样化资源等，并辅以实例。
第三步，说明反对使用AI的学生的看法及原因，如减少面对面交流、导致学生过度依赖从而削弱自身思考能力。
第四步，表达自己的观点，认为AI是有用的工具，应在英语课上合理使用，让其辅助学习而非替代自身的努力和互动。
[亮点词汇]
①personalized 个性化的
②instant feedback 即时反馈
③overly dependent on过度依赖
[高分句型]
①They think AI can make learning more interesting, like through interactive English-language games.（宾语从句）
②Moreover, AI can offer diverse English learning resources, such as English-language stories and songs from all over the world.（Moreover表递进，such as举例，丰富了句子层次）
10．例文：
When it comes to the scientific spirit, I think I have the spirit of keeping on learning and thinking independently.
Recently in a science class, the teacher taught us to do an experiment to watch the pressure level of bottles. I had already tried that, so I considered coming up with a new way. It was so challenging that I failed several times during the process. With persistence, I finally made it and got a satisfying result. What a sense of achievement I got!
In my opinion, the scientific spirit is an attitude of exploring the world we live in. It inspires me to make breakthroughs, improve myself and make progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；
③提示：注意要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述什么是科学精神；
第二步，介绍自己经历；
第三步，介绍自己对此的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①independently独立地
②a sense of achievement成就感
[高分句型]
①It was so challenging that I failed several times during the process.（结果状语从句）
②What a sense of achievement I got!（感叹句）
11．例文
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town. If I own a robot, it’ll change my life in many ways. I’ll have more free time for my hobbies. It can help me do housework. It can wash clothes, cook food and sweep the floor. But if it catches a virus, it’ll cause much trouble. I may find breakfast in the washing machine and clean shirts in the dustbin. In the end, I may have to send it back to the robot shop. But robots will make a great difference to our life. They’ll bring more advantages than disadvantages.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文阐述机器人给生活带来的变化；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般将来时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用1段落格式，重点阐述机器人的优缺点，注意无语法和拼写错误。
12．参考范文：
Here is my design for the new APP. It is named Happy English Learning. There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. Next, let me introduce the advantages of the APP. It can make it easy for local people to learn English together. Their English listening and speaking skills can be improved as well. When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies.
I believe all of the learners can have fun learning English by using this APP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己要设计的APP名称；
第二步，具体阐述这个APP包含的内容及优点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③as well也
[高分句型]
①There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. (there be句型)
②When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13．
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our lives. I think we students can also invent something.
Today, I’m glad to be here to introduce a chair that’s good for students’ health. This kind of chair looks like an ordinary chair. It is made of wood. There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. When the student doesn’t sit up straight, the chair will remind him or her. If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won’t stop until the student stands up and leaves. The chair can help students develop a good sitting posture. At the same time, it also reminds students not to sit for too long and to exercise properly.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”表中对于椅子名称，材质，功能和优点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“发明改变生活”引出自己的发明；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“材质，功能和优点等”几个方面重点介绍所发明椅子的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“对大家认真倾听介绍”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce my invention to...向……介绍我的发明
②be good for 对……有好处
③be made of 由……制成
[高分句型]
①There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. (There be句式)
②If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. (if引导的条件状语从句)
14．基础版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
Technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with far-away friends anytime. Some robots can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can watch TV, listen to music and watch short videos. We can get a lot of fun from these activities.
In a word, as a middle school student, we should learn to use technology wisely, and not depend on it too much. 进阶版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
As we know, technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology is playing an important role in our lives. It has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with friends who live far away from us. There are some robots that can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can get a lot of pleasure by watching TV, listening to music and watching short videos.
We are middle school students. We can use technology, but we can’t rely on it too much. For example, if we spend too much time watching short videos, we might waste a lot of time. So we should learn to use technology wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节并完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用“科学技术极大地改变了我们的生活”引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍高科技对我们的影响有哪些；
第三步，建议合理利用，不能过多依赖。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②chat with和……聊天
③in a word总之
④depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.(形容词作宾语补足语)
15．
例文
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot. Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. It has sensors to avoid obstacles and a friendly voice to interact with people.
During the project, we faced several challenges. First, programming the robot to navigate smoothly was difficult. We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. Second, the robot sometimes got stuck in tight spaces. We redesigned its wheels to make it more flexible.
Through this project, I learned the importance of teamwork and persistence. We also gained valuable skills in robotics and problem-solving. It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确，包括介绍设计的机器人、项目中遇到的困难及解决办法，以及个人的收获。考生应确保这些要点都得到充分阐述，并适当添加细节以增强文章的可读性和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.”直接引出要介绍的项目主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先，介绍设计的机器人。可以描述机器人的外观、功能等特点，如它能够执行哪些任务，如何为校园生活带来便利；接着，讲述项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法。可以提及在设计、编程或测试过程中遇到的问题，以及小组是如何通过合作、查阅资料或寻求帮助来克服这些困难的；最后，分享个人的收获。可以谈谈参与这个项目对自己在技能、团队合作或问题解决能力方面的提升；
第三步，书写结语。通过分享个人的积极体验和收获，隐含地鼓励读者参与类似的项目式学习活动。
[亮点词汇]
①designed to旨在，设计用于
②avoid obstacles避开障碍物
③interact with与……互动
④faced challenges面临挑战
⑤step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. (被动语态的运用，以及“like+动名词短语”作举例说明)
②We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. (介词短语“by+动名词短语”作方式状语)
③It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product. (并列句的运用，以及“be proud of”短语的使用)
16．例文
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
Many inventions change our lives. Among them, I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy things from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens my mind. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more colourful and convenient.
Thanks for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，指明对生活影响最大的发明是什么；
第二步，介绍这个发明如何影响生活；
第三步，总结对这个发明的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①surf the Internet网上冲浪
②keep in touch with与……保持联系
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④thanks to幸亏，由于
[高分句型]
I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.（宾语从句）
17．例文
My Dream Robot
My dream robot is a home helper. It will clean the house by itself. It can also chat with people and play simple games. These functions can save people time and help them feel less lonely. I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干问题提示，从它的功能、如何帮助他人以及对它的评价三个角度介绍。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出梦想中的机器人；
第二步，介绍机器人的特殊功能以及如何帮助人们；
第三步，评价这个机器人。
[亮点词汇]
①clean the house打扫房子
②chat with sb与某人聊天
[高分句型]
①I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
18．参考范文：
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared.
I’m writing to tell you something about the shared bikes. It’s very convenient to use the shared bike if you have a smartphone. What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride pared with other vehicles, the shared bike has more advantages. You can find a bike easily. Besides, it can reduce the traffic pressure and do good to the environment as well.
I think it is a wonderful invention in China. Hope to ride a shared bike with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按要求写作，无语法错误，语句连贯，注意字母大小写和标点符号使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达目的——介绍共享单车；
第二步，具体介绍共享单车的使用方法、优势；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce the traffic pressure减少交通压力
②do good to对……有好处
③as well也
[高分句型]
①What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride it.（主语从句）
②I think it is a wonderful invention in China.（宾语从句）
19．例文
In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient.
The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中功能、便利、影响的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出智能手机的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出智能手机是重要发明；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从功能、便利、对生活的影响几方面介绍智能手机；
第三步，书写结语。强调其重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①essential必不可少的
②connect to连接
③enable使能够
④numerous众多的
[高分句型]
①The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. (as引导原因状语从句)
②I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句)
20．例文
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers. The computer is one of the greatest inventions and is becoming more and more important in our daily life.
It is widely used to search for information and gain more new knowledge. The computer can help us study and look for information. Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing. We can also make friends from all over the world and keep in touch with others through emails. But we should not use it for too long every day. Remember not to spend too much time playing computer games.
I think that using a computer is helpful. But we should use computers correctly, or it will influence our study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文，围绕电脑进行写作；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：围绕“电脑的用途”和“正确使用电脑”的建议展开，语言简洁，条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入电脑的重要性，作为伟大发明；
第二步：介绍电脑的用途，如学习、放松、沟通等；
第三步：提出正确使用电脑的建议；
第四步：总结表达观点或倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越
② look for 寻找
③ keep in touch with 与……保持联系
④ be good for 对……有好处
⑤ make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
① Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing.（动名词作主语）
② I think that using a computer is helpful. （宾语从句）
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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 3 Curious minds
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．My Curious Experience题目要求：
在生活中，我们总会对一些事物充满好奇 —— 也许是夜晚闪烁的星星、蚂蚁搬家的路线，或是家里电器的工作原理。请根据以下要求，写一篇60-80 词的短文，描述一次因好奇心引发的经历。
内容需包含：你好奇的事物是什么？为了探索它你做了什么？最终的结果和感受如何？
至少运用两种生动描写技巧(参考教材 P46：描述想法感受、添加感官细节、制造悬念)。
需使用本单元核心词汇(如 curious, wonder, explore, discover 等)和至少一个不定式结构(如 decide to do, want to find out)。写作提示：
可参考教材中 Wang Yiming 的故事结构(起因—经过—结果)，并运用 Dr. Hu 提到的技巧让文字更生动：
描述想法：用 “I wondered...”, “I couldn’t stop thinking...” 表达好奇心；
感官细节：记录看到的(sight)、听到的(sound)或触摸到的(touch)细节；
制造悬念：用 “奇怪的现象” 开头，如 “A strange noise woke me up...”。
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2．你是否曾因一个偶然的发现而心跳加速？或许一群蚂蚁的奇特路线，一只蝴蝶的斑斓花纹，或是一道数学题的意外解法——正是这些看似微小的“好奇心瞬间”，点亮了人类文明的星空。请围绕“好奇心”写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
▲What sparked your curiosity (e.g. a question, an observation, a challenge)
▲How did you explore or investigate it
▲What did you learn from the experience
▲Why is curiosity important in life
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3．好奇心是心灵深处的一团火焰, 点燃我们对未知的渴望。它似无形的双手, 推动我们去探索、去发现, 让平淡的生活充满惊喜与奇迹。请以“Curiosity: the key to learning”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
Suggested questions:
1. Why is curiosity important for students
2. How can curiosity help us explore the world
3. Give an example from your life or studies.
Curiosity: the key to learning
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4．好奇心往往是人们追求进步与成功的动力源泉。请以“Curiosity leads to success”为题，写一篇短文，通过讲述自己或他人的经历，阐述好奇心是如何帮助人们取得成功的。词数不少于60。
Curiosity leads to success
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5．好奇心 (curiosity) 在我们的学习和生活中起着重要的作用。请以“Curiosity”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈好奇心的重要性，并举例说明好奇心是如何帮助你或他人取得进步或获得成功的。
要求：
1. 包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 词数：80词左右。
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6．水是我们生活中最常见的东西，也是我们生活中非常重要的东西之一，所以我们要节约用水，保护水资源。假如你们校刊的英语专栏以“家庭节约用水”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你的认识和做法。
How to Save Water at Home
The importance of water valuable(珍贵的), useful, we use it to ...
How to save water at home take a quick shower, use less water, turn off the tap ...
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: first of all 首先; then 然后; in the end 最后; used water用过的水
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful.
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Let’s try our best to save water.
7．DeepSeek的问世使人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 成为热门话题，科技的快速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，请写一篇名为“AI in Our Life”的作文，谈谈你对人工智能的看法。内容包括：
1. AI的优点：使生活更加方便、舒适；代替人类完成危险、繁重的工作……
2. AI的缺点：人们过于依赖人工智能，失去独立思考能力；增加失业风险……
3. 你的看法：……
参考词汇：advantage优点；disadvantage缺点；risk风险
要求：1. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
AI in Our Life
The invention of DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society.
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8．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和Chat GPT的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
内容包括：
1. 人工智能的优点：代替人们做危险、枯燥的工作；
2. 人工智能的缺点：人们对AI过度依赖；
3. 你的看法……
注意：
1. 字数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
3. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．2025年AI一词火爆全网，假如上周你们班就“英语课堂应该使用AI技术吗 ”展开了一次讨论，请你根据下列表格提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的想法并表达你自己的观点。
支持理由 反对理由
1. 增加学习趣味性 2. 提高学习效率 3. ……（自由补充） 1. 减少交流 2. 过度依赖
要求：
1. 必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should we use AI in English Class
Last week, we discussed if we should use AI in our English class. Different students have different opinions.
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10．科学精神是每个人必备的品质。作为中学生，我们应该追求真理、勇于探索、持之以恒、学会质疑、独立思考、敢于创新。科学精神不仅是思维方式，更是一种态度。具备科学精神既有助于知识的不断更新，又对个人的全面发展有着深远的影响。
某校以“弘扬科学精神”为主题，在学生中开展征文活动。请你写一篇相关短文。
内容包括：
●the scientific spirit you have；
●an experience you had；
●your understanding of the scientific spirit.
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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11．上个星期你们学校去阳光镇参观了“国际机器人展”，你对机器人有了许多了解。请你根据提示写一篇短文，谈谈如果有了机器人，它将对你的生活带来的变化。
内容要点：
1.假如你有一台机器人，它会在很多方面改变你的生活；
2.优点：让你有更多空闲时间去做自己喜爱的事，可以帮助你做家务，如洗衣服、做饭、打扫卫生；
3.缺点：可能会感染病毒，引起许多麻烦……最后不得不送回机器人商店；
4.但机器人会给生活带来巨大变化，带来的优势比劣势多。
注意事项：
1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town.
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12．在建设海南自贸港的背景下，英语的重要性逐渐显现并不断增强。假如你是李华，某软件公司准备开发一款适合当地居民在业余时间学习英语的APP，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
The name of the APP Happy English Learning
Contents English news, movies, songs , games
The advantages of the APP 1.make it easy to study; 2.improve listening and speaking; 3. ...
注意事项：
（1）必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Here is my design for the new APP.
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13．假如你们学校要开展一个科技节活动，你针对现在学生坐姿不正确和玩电脑、看电视时间过长等情况，发明了一把特殊的椅子。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，给同学们介绍一下你的发明。
发明 一把特殊的椅子
材料 由木材制成
功能 1. 椅座和椅背都有传感器。当学生没有坐直时，椅子会发出提醒； 2. 坐在椅子上超过一小时，椅子就会发出声音，提醒学生起来活动一下。
优点 ……
词数：100左右。
提示词语：sensor 传感器; the back of the chair 椅背; sit up straight 坐直。
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you.
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Thanks for your listening!
14．科技改变了我们的生活，相信每个人都深有体会。请你以“Technology Changes Our Lives”为题，根据要求用英语写一篇短文，讲述科技是如何改变我们的生活的。
内容包括：
1. 科技使日常生活更便捷：可以在网上学习，可以随时随地跟远方的朋友聊天，机器人送餐；
2. 使生活更丰富多彩（如电视或短视频等）；
3. 我们应该合理利用科技，但不能过多依赖它。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．假设你是李华，你校英文报社新增了关于项目式学习的专栏，你所在小组刚完成的项目是“设计校园智能机器人”，请你代表小组向专栏投稿，介绍你们设计的机器人，项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法，并分享你的收获。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.
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16．世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活。在英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你影响最大的发明。
提示内容：
1. What is the invention that influences your life most
2. How does it influence your life
3. What’s your feeling about it
写作要求：
1. 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
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Thanks for your attention!
17．亲爱的同学们，假如你是一名机器人发明家，你会设计具有什么特殊功能的机器人呢？又会让它来解决人们日常生活中的什么难题呢？请设计你梦想中的机器人，并参考以下问题进行描述：
1.它有哪些特殊功能（至少两个）？2.这些功能能如何帮助人们？3.你如何评价它？
参考表达方式：1. It will... 2. It can... 3. I think it is... because...
（50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My Dream Robot
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18．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Justin对中国的新四大发明（the high-speed railway，mobile payment，shared bikes，online shopping）很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，对其中的“共享单车”做简单介绍，内容包括：
（1）使用方法；（2）优势；（3）你的看法。
要求：（1）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使文章条理清晰、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
19．当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机。智能手机是重要的发明，请描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，以及对我们生活的影响。
要求：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、书写规范；
3.词数：90词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇： benefit 益处
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20．近年来，电脑成了我们生活的一个重要部分，甚至和我们的学习生活息息相关，某校英文杂志社开辟中学生专栏，请你以“The greatest invention—the computer”为题写篇短文，为该杂志社投稿。
内容包括:
1. 电脑的用途（包括：可以学习、上网查资料；可以听音乐、看电影使自己放松；可以发送邮件与别人保持联系）；
2. 倡议中学生正确使用电脑。
要求:
1. 词数不少于80（文章开头已给出；不计入总词数）；
2. 短文必须包括所给的内容, 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不许出现真实的班级和姓名。
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
One sunny afternoon, I saw black ants marching on the windowsill. “Where are they heading ” I wondered. Driven by curiosity, I decided to follow them. They stopped at a piece of bread, their tiny legs moving fast to carry crumbs. Watching their teamwork amazed me. Exploring their world made my day joyful. The ants reminded me that even the smallest creatures can teach big lessons about cooperation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己好奇的事物是什么；
第二步、介绍自己的探索行动；
第三步、介绍事情的结果和自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②a piece of一块
③made my day joyful让我的一天充满欢乐
[高分句型]
The ants reminded me that even the smallest creatures can teach big lessons about cooperation. (that引导宾语从句)
2．例文
Last month, I noticed a small plant growing sideways near my window. Why does it bend toward the sunlight This question sparked my curiosity. I placed the plant in different spots, observed it daily, and even drew sketches. My science teacher explained it was “phototropism”—plants grow toward light to survive.
Through this, I learned that curiosity turns simple observations into big discoveries. It teaches us to ask questions and seek answers patiently. Like the plant reaching for light, curiosity guides us in exploring the unknown. Keep asking “Why ”—it’s the key to unlocking amazing secrets in life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的发现是窗边的植物；
第二步，分享自己通过这株植物得到的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①teach sb to do sth教某人做某事
②the key to关键是
[高分句型]
①Through this, I learned that curiosity turns simple observations into big discoveries.（宾语从句）
3．参考范文：
Curiosity: the key to learning
Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. It drives us to ask questions, explore the unknown, and discover new ideas.
Firstly, curiosity makes learning fun. Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. Secondly, curiosity helps us overcome challenges. Thomas Edison failed many times. But his curiosity kept him trying until he succeeded. Finally, curious people never stop growing. Scientists like Marie Curie kept asking questions, leading to great discoveries.
In short, curiosity turns learning into a lifelong journey.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时” ；
③提示：材料所给的写作要点不得遗漏，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇破题，定义好奇心的概念，阐述好奇心的重要性；
第二步，结合个人经历，论证好奇心让学习变得有趣；
第三步，说明以好奇心探索世界的方式，总结全文。
【亮点词汇】①overcome challenges 克服挑战
②lead to 导致；促成
③lifelong journey 终身旅程
【高分句型】①Curiosity is like a magic key that unlocks the door to knowledge. （比喻修辞；定语从句）
②Last year, I wondered why leaves change color in autumn by researching online. （宾语从句）
4．例文
Curiosity leads to success
Curiosity is like a bright light that helps us reach success. I have my own story to show how it works.
I was always curious about plants. I planted the same seeds in different places. Some places had more sunlight, and some had less. I watered them differently too. Every day, I watched these plants carefully and wrote down how they grew. After a few months, I finally knew why different plants need different places to grow.
When we’re curious, we’re not afraid to try new things. Even if there are problems, we still keep going. So, if we follow our curiosity, we can be successful.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章写作需要围绕“好奇心助力成功”展开，文章内容要涵盖观点提出、个人经历佐证及总结升华，考生应注意结合具体事例支撑观点，适当补充实验细节，注意拼写和语法正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出“好奇心如明灯助力成功”的观点，并说明将用个人经历佐证；
第二步，具体阐述事例。详细讲述自己因对植物好奇，通过控制光照、浇水条件做实验，观察记录植物生长，最终得出结论的经历；
第三步，书写结语。总结好奇心带来的积极影响，呼吁遵循好奇心以走向成功。
［亮点词汇］
①curiosity 好奇心
②seeds 种子
③sunlight 阳光
④keep going 坚持下去
⑤follow our curiosity 遵循我们的好奇心
［高分句型］
①Curiosity is like a bright light that helps us reach success.（that引导的定语从句）
②After a few months, I finally knew why different plants need different places to grow.（why引导的宾语从句）
③Even if there are problems, we still keep going.（even if引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
Curiosity
Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. It plays a vital role in both study and life, pushing us to explore and learn more.
For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. I asked my biology teacher, read books, and even did a small experiment. Finally, I learned it was due to “phototropism”. This experience not only helped me master the knowledge but also made me more interested in science.
In short, curiosity helps us make progress and achieve success. We should always keep it alive in our hearts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过比喻引入主题，强调好奇心在学习和生活中的关键作用；
第二步，用个人经历证明好奇心的实际价值，展示其如何促进学习；
第三步，总结好奇心对个人成长的作用，并呼吁行动。
[亮点词汇]
①in short 总之
②play a role in 在……起作用
[高分句型]
①For example, last term, I was curious about why plants grow towards light. (宾语从句)
②Curiosity is like a key that opens the door to knowledge. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
6．例文
How to Save Water at Home
Water is very valuable and useful. We use it to do lots of things in our life. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First of all, we should take a quick shower because it uses less water. Then turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. In the end, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water. In these ways, we can save a lot of water.
Let’s try our best to save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可以适当增加写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接使用已给出的首句，说明水的珍贵性和用途；
第二步，具体阐述一些保护水资源和节约用水的方法；
第三步，最后呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①It is important for us to save water. （it is＋adj＋to do sth句型）
②Let’s try our best to save water.（祈使句）
7．例文
AI in Our Life
The invention of DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. It has become an important part of our life.
In some ways, AI is good for us. It makes our life more convenient and comfortable. For example, we can gain knowledge on every subject from it in a few seconds. What’s more, AI can help us to do some dangerous and hard jobs. However, it also brings us some problems. Students can’t think by themselves with the help of AI and they can’t study carefully in class. Moreover, AI will take the place of humans in some jobs, increasing the risk of unemployment.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. We should use AI wisely and view it as a helper to improve our life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍AI的优点；
第二步，介绍AI的缺点；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for有益于
②with the help of… 在……的帮助下
③take the place of代替
[高分句型]
①Students can’t think by themselves with the help of AI and they can’t study carefully in class.(并列句)
8．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence is getting more and more popular in our daily life.
As we all know, every coin has its two sides. On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. On the other hand, with AI being widely used, a large number of workers are losing their jobs. What’s more, some people depend on AI so much that they lose their ability to think creatively and independently.
In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human beings so there is no need to worry about it too much. It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control.
The key is to make the best use of AI to make our life more convenient and more colorful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明AI的广泛应用；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优点和缺点；
第三步，发表自己对AI的看法，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……的发展
②On the one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
③be used to do被用来做某事
④a large number of大量，许多
⑤depend on依赖
⑥take the place of取代
⑦make the best use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, AI can be used to do dangerous, boring and tiring work so that we will live a better and happier life. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②It is a tool we invented and we are surely able to make it under control. (that省略的定语从句)
9．例文
Should we use AI in English Class Last week, we discussed if we should use AI in our English class. Different students have different opinions.
Some students support using AI. They think AI can make learning more interesting, like through interactive English-language games. It can also improve learning efficiency. For example, AI can quickly provide personalized exercise plans and instant feedback. Moreover, AI can offer diverse English learning resources, such as English-language stories and songs from all over the world.
However, others are against it. They believe AI will reduce face-to-face communication in English class. Students may also become overly dependent on AI, weakening their own thinking abilities.
In my view, AI is a useful tool. We can use it properly in English class. Let AI assist us, but not replace our own efforts and interactions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点围绕是否应在英语课使用AI展开，涵盖了支持方、反对方的观点及个人看法，内容完整，且在阐述观点时添加了具体例子作为细节，突出了核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先引出讨论的话题，即是否应该在英语课上使用AI。
第二步，分别阐述支持使用AI的学生的观点及理由，包括让学习更有趣、提高学习效率、提供多样化资源等，并辅以实例。
第三步，说明反对使用AI的学生的看法及原因，如减少面对面交流、导致学生过度依赖从而削弱自身思考能力。
第四步，表达自己的观点，认为AI是有用的工具，应在英语课上合理使用，让其辅助学习而非替代自身的努力和互动。
[亮点词汇]
①personalized 个性化的
②instant feedback 即时反馈
③overly dependent on过度依赖
[高分句型]
①They think AI can make learning more interesting, like through interactive English-language games.（宾语从句）
②Moreover, AI can offer diverse English learning resources, such as English-language stories and songs from all over the world.（Moreover表递进，such as举例，丰富了句子层次）
10．例文：
When it comes to the scientific spirit, I think I have the spirit of keeping on learning and thinking independently.
Recently in a science class, the teacher taught us to do an experiment to watch the pressure level of bottles. I had already tried that, so I considered coming up with a new way. It was so challenging that I failed several times during the process. With persistence, I finally made it and got a satisfying result. What a sense of achievement I got!
In my opinion, the scientific spirit is an attitude of exploring the world we live in. It inspires me to make breakthroughs, improve myself and make progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；
③提示：注意要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述什么是科学精神；
第二步，介绍自己经历；
第三步，介绍自己对此的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①independently独立地
②a sense of achievement成就感
[高分句型]
①It was so challenging that I failed several times during the process.（结果状语从句）
②What a sense of achievement I got!（感叹句）
11．例文
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town. If I own a robot, it’ll change my life in many ways. I’ll have more free time for my hobbies. It can help me do housework. It can wash clothes, cook food and sweep the floor. But if it catches a virus, it’ll cause much trouble. I may find breakfast in the washing machine and clean shirts in the dustbin. In the end, I may have to send it back to the robot shop. But robots will make a great difference to our life. They’ll bring more advantages than disadvantages.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文阐述机器人给生活带来的变化；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般将来时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用1段落格式，重点阐述机器人的优缺点，注意无语法和拼写错误。
12．参考范文：
Here is my design for the new APP. It is named Happy English Learning. There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. Next, let me introduce the advantages of the APP. It can make it easy for local people to learn English together. Their English listening and speaking skills can be improved as well. When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies.
I believe all of the learners can have fun learning English by using this APP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己要设计的APP名称；
第二步，具体阐述这个APP包含的内容及优点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③as well也
[高分句型]
①There are many interesting things in this APP, such as English news, movies, songs and games in English and so on. (there be句型)
②When they are tired, they can enjoy themselves by singing English songs or watching some English movies. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13．
One possible version:
Dear classmates,
I am glad to introduce my invention to you. As we all know, many great inventions have brought great changes to our lives. I think we students can also invent something.
Today, I’m glad to be here to introduce a chair that’s good for students’ health. This kind of chair looks like an ordinary chair. It is made of wood. There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. When the student doesn’t sit up straight, the chair will remind him or her. If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won’t stop until the student stands up and leaves. The chair can help students develop a good sitting posture. At the same time, it also reminds students not to sit for too long and to exercise properly.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”表中对于椅子名称，材质，功能和优点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“发明改变生活”引出自己的发明；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“材质，功能和优点等”几个方面重点介绍所发明椅子的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“对大家认真倾听介绍”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce my invention to...向……介绍我的发明
②be good for 对……有好处
③be made of 由……制成
[高分句型]
①There are two sensors in it, one in the seat and the other in the back of the chair. (There be句式)
②If he or she sits on the chair for over one hour, it will make a noise. (if引导的条件状语从句)
14．基础版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
Technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with far-away friends anytime. Some robots can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can watch TV, listen to music and watch short videos. We can get a lot of fun from these activities.
In a word, as a middle school student, we should learn to use technology wisely, and not depend on it too much. 进阶版范文
Technology Changes Our Lives
As we know, technology has greatly changed our lives. It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.
Firstly, technology is playing an important role in our lives. It has made our daily lives easier. With the help of technology, we can study online, chat with friends who live far away from us. There are some robots that can deliver food to our tables. Secondly, technology has made our lives more colourful. We can get a lot of pleasure by watching TV, listening to music and watching short videos.
We are middle school students. We can use technology, but we can’t rely on it too much. For example, if we spend too much time watching short videos, we might waste a lot of time. So we should learn to use technology wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节并完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用“科学技术极大地改变了我们的生活”引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍高科技对我们的影响有哪些；
第三步，建议合理利用，不能过多依赖。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②chat with和……聊天
③in a word总之
④depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①It makes our lives more convenient and colourful.(形容词作宾语补足语)
15．
例文
Hello everyone. I am Li Hua, and I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot. Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. It has sensors to avoid obstacles and a friendly voice to interact with people.
During the project, we faced several challenges. First, programming the robot to navigate smoothly was difficult. We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. Second, the robot sometimes got stuck in tight spaces. We redesigned its wheels to make it more flexible.
Through this project, I learned the importance of teamwork and persistence. We also gained valuable skills in robotics and problem-solving. It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确，包括介绍设计的机器人、项目中遇到的困难及解决办法，以及个人的收获。考生应确保这些要点都得到充分阐述，并适当添加细节以增强文章的可读性和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“I am delighted to share our group’s project on designing a campus smart robot.”直接引出要介绍的项目主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先，介绍设计的机器人。可以描述机器人的外观、功能等特点，如它能够执行哪些任务，如何为校园生活带来便利；接着，讲述项目进行中遇到的困难及解决办法。可以提及在设计、编程或测试过程中遇到的问题，以及小组是如何通过合作、查阅资料或寻求帮助来克服这些困难的；最后，分享个人的收获。可以谈谈参与这个项目对自己在技能、团队合作或问题解决能力方面的提升；
第三步，书写结语。通过分享个人的积极体验和收获，隐含地鼓励读者参与类似的项目式学习活动。
[亮点词汇]
①designed to旨在，设计用于
②avoid obstacles避开障碍物
③interact with与……互动
④faced challenges面临挑战
⑤step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Our robot is designed to help with tasks like cleaning, guiding visitors, and delivering small items. (被动语态的运用，以及“like+动名词短语”作举例说明)
②We solved this by testing different algorithms and improving the code step by step. (介词短语“by+动名词短语”作方式状语)
③It was a rewarding experience, and we are proud of our final product. (并列句的运用，以及“be proud of”短语的使用)
16．例文
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most.
Many inventions change our lives. Among them, I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy things from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens my mind. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more colourful and convenient.
Thanks for your attention!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，指明对生活影响最大的发明是什么；
第二步，介绍这个发明如何影响生活；
第三步，总结对这个发明的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①surf the Internet网上冲浪
②keep in touch with与……保持联系
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④thanks to幸亏，由于
[高分句型]
I think the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.（宾语从句）
17．例文
My Dream Robot
My dream robot is a home helper. It will clean the house by itself. It can also chat with people and play simple games. These functions can save people time and help them feel less lonely. I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干问题提示，从它的功能、如何帮助他人以及对它的评价三个角度介绍。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出梦想中的机器人；
第二步，介绍机器人的特殊功能以及如何帮助人们；
第三步，评价这个机器人。
[亮点词汇]
①clean the house打扫房子
②chat with sb与某人聊天
[高分句型]
①I think it is very helpful because it makes life easier and happier.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
18．参考范文：
Dear Justin,
As we all know, China is developing at high speed and many kinds of new inventions have appeared.
I’m writing to tell you something about the shared bikes. It’s very convenient to use the shared bike if you have a smartphone. What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride pared with other vehicles, the shared bike has more advantages. You can find a bike easily. Besides, it can reduce the traffic pressure and do good to the environment as well.
I think it is a wonderful invention in China. Hope to ride a shared bike with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按要求写作，无语法错误，语句连贯，注意字母大小写和标点符号使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达目的——介绍共享单车；
第二步，具体介绍共享单车的使用方法、优势；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①reduce the traffic pressure减少交通压力
②do good to对……有好处
③as well也
[高分句型]
①What you need to do is to find the nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike and ride it.（主语从句）
②I think it is a wonderful invention in China.（宾语从句）
19．例文
In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient.
The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中功能、便利、影响的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出智能手机的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出智能手机是重要发明；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从功能、便利、对生活的影响几方面介绍智能手机；
第三步，书写结语。强调其重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①essential必不可少的
②connect to连接
③enable使能够
④numerous众多的
[高分句型]
①The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. (as引导原因状语从句)
②I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句)
20．例文
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers. The computer is one of the greatest inventions and is becoming more and more important in our daily life.
It is widely used to search for information and gain more new knowledge. The computer can help us study and look for information. Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing. We can also make friends from all over the world and keep in touch with others through emails. But we should not use it for too long every day. Remember not to spend too much time playing computer games.
I think that using a computer is helpful. But we should use computers correctly, or it will influence our study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文，围绕电脑进行写作；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：围绕“电脑的用途”和“正确使用电脑”的建议展开，语言简洁，条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引入电脑的重要性，作为伟大发明；
第二步：介绍电脑的用途，如学习、放松、沟通等；
第三步：提出正确使用电脑的建议；
第四步：总结表达观点或倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越
② look for 寻找
③ keep in touch with 与……保持联系
④ be good for 对……有好处
⑤ make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
① Listening to music or watching movies on the computer is also good for relaxing.（动名词作主语）
② I think that using a computer is helpful. （宾语从句）
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